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Thriller Sting of the Scorpion (Sequel to Dark Seduction) - Completed

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I think Armaan ko jo bachpan mein uski so called,sauteli maa ne torture kiya, uska asar uski mentality par pada hoga, shayad isiliye wo sabhi mahilaon ke prati...
Armaan ye kaise bhul gaya ki use janam dene wali bhi aurat hi thi . Apne maa ki dardnaak maut aur unki peeda ko kaise bhul sakta hai.
 

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Armaan ye kaise bhul gaya ki use janam dene wali bhi aurat hi thi . Apne maa ki dardnaak maut aur unki peeda ko kaise bhul sakta hai.
Psychology says ki jab ek bachhe ko excessive violence dekhne ko milta hai to uske mann par uska waisa hi prabhav pad jaata hai, aur yahaan to Armaan ko dekhna nahi sehna pada tha..

(Not defending him, shayad Dark Seduction mein use sabse zyada gaali maine hi di thi :D.)...
 
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Psychology says ki jab ek bachhe ko excessive violence dekhne ko milta hai to uske mann par uska waisa hi prabhav pad jaata hai, aur yahaan to Armaan ko dekhna nahi sehna pada tha..

(Not defending him, shayad Dark Seduction mein use sabse zyada gaali maine hi di thi :D.)...
" Meeta series " me to maine chaaro dosto ko jee bhar bhar ke kosha tha.
Actually Armaan schizophrenia se pidit tha.. shuruaat me hi koi AIIMS le gaya hota to jaldi hi thik ho gaya hota.... aur sabse badi baat, uske tino dost bhi ho waise hi the. Mere jaisa dost hota to aisa wo kabhi nahi banta :D
 
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" Meeta series " me to maine chaaro dosto ko jee bhar bhar ke kosha tha.
Actually Armaan schizophrenia se pidit tha.. shuruaat me hi koi AIIMS le gaya hota to jaldi hi thik ho gaya hota.... aur sabse badi baat, uske tino dost bhi ho waise hi the. Mere jaisa dost hota to aisa wo kabhi nahi banta :D
Neil par sangat ka asar pada tha, jitna ki main samajh paaya tha, us kahani mein. Aditi se to behad pyaar karta hi tha wo. Jo vyakti apni biwi se pyaar karta ho, at least wo baakiyon se kuchh behtar hi hota hai. Parantu, jo usne Naina ke saath kiya, wo sach mein raakshasi vyavhar tha.

Aarav, ye bhi dosti – yaari mein maara gaya. Doston ki kahi har baat, sahi nahi hoti, wo samajh nahi paaya.

Reyansh to tha hi G**** + C*****, achha kiya tha Meera ne uske saath.

Rahi baat Armaan ki, to hum dekh hi chuke hain ki use sirf pyaar ki zarurat thi badalne ke liye. Jaise hi Pankh ke roop mein wo mila, uska kaayakalp hi ho gaya.
 
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Neil par sangat ka asar pada tha, jitna ki main samajh paaya tha, us kahani mein. Aditi se to behad pyaar karta hi tha wo. Jo vyakti apni biwi se pyaar karta ho, at least wo baakiyon se kuchh behtar hi hota hai. Parantu, jo usne Naina ke saath kiya, wo sach mein raakshasi vyavhar tha.

Aarav, ye bhi dosti – yaari mein maara gaya. Doston ki kahi har baat, sahi nahi hoti, wo samajh nahi paaya.

Reyansh to tha hi G**** + C*****, achha kiya tha Meera ne uske saath.

Rahi baat Armaan ki, to hum dekh hi chuke hain ki use sirf pyaar ki zarurat thi badalne ke liye. Jaise hi Pankh ke roop mein wo mila, uska kaayakalp hi ho gaya.
Neil apni bibi se nahi balki apne baccho se pyar karta tha.... yaad kijiye jab use apni patni aur usme kisi ek ko jiwan daan dene ki baat kahi thi meera ne.... usne khud apni patni ki hatya ki thi.
Sabhi ke sabhi villain no 1 the.....thoda bahut " Meera series " me koi achha laga to wo Armaan tha....due to save to Meera.
 
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Woh dard aur peeda dene waali bhi aurat hi thi :cmouth:
Dard aur peeda bhugatne wali bhi aurat hi thi jo Armaan ki maa thi.
Kya kabhi Armaan ne mahsus kiya ki jab uski maa ko jala kar maar diya gaya tha to wo kin kashton se gujar rahi hogi.
Armaan ne apni maa ko jal kar marte hue dekha hai... kya use maa ke dard ka ahsaas nahi hua ! Yadi use ahsaas tha to fir kyun wahi dard aurato ko de raha hai ?
Agar karna hi tha to ek baar me hi ladkion ko maar deta.... kabhi paao me.. kabhi haathon pe... kabhi aankho me... kabhi daanton ko.....ye kya tha? Aise hi logon ko to mental disease patients kaha jata hai.
 

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Dard aur peeda bhugatne wali bhi aurat hi thi jo Armaan ki maa thi.
Kya kabhi Armaan ne mahsus kiya ki jab uski maa ko jala kar maar diya gaya tha to wo kin kashton se gujar rahi hogi.
Armaan ne apni maa ko jal kar marte hue dekha hai... kya use maa ke dard ka ahsaas nahi hua ! Yadi use ahsaas tha to fir kyun wahi dard aurato ko de raha hai ?
Agar karna hi tha to ek baar me hi ladkion ko maar deta.... kabhi paao me.. kabhi haathon pe... kabhi aankho me... kabhi daanton ko.....ye kya tha? Aise hi logon ko to mental disease patients kaha jata hai.

Jab uski maa ko maara gaya, Armaan paalne mein tha. Use kuch yaad nahi tha. Woh apni sauteli maa ko hi apni sagi maa maan raha tha, lekin Armaan jaise jaise bada hua us aurat ne apne asli rang dikhane shuru kiye aur Armaan ko torture karna shuru kiya.

Mentally deranged hai Armaan is mein koi doubt nahi hai. In fact a game of chess me bhi woh Pankhudi se doori banaye rakh raha tha, us se shaadi nahi kar raha tha, kyunki use darr tha ki kahin woh apni pehli biwi ki tarah pagalpan mein Pankhudi ko bhi hurt na kar de.
 

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Ye poora update kaafi emotional kar gaya, especially Ragini ki maut... Kuchh samay se lag hi raha tha ki Ragini shayad pakdi jaa sakti hai, aur uske baad uska kya anjaam hona tha, ye kehne ki zaroorat hi nahi... Nishant jaise praani se aur ummeed bhi kya ki jaa sakti hai? Halanki, Armaan ki shakal nahi dekhi thi Ragini ne kabhi aur isi wajah se ab bhi Nishant ke haath mein koyi saboot nahi hai, parantu ek bohot bada advantage Armaan je haathon se nikal chuka hai... Naa kewal Ragini ki maut huyi balki saath hi Nishant ke phone ke roop mein jo laabh Armaan utha raha tha, ab wo bhi uske haath se nikal chuka hai... Yaani ki ab, Nishant kya kuchh karne waala hai, iski khabar Armaan ko lagegi hi nahi... Situation is going to be more intense in coming updates!

Armaan ne Pankh ko safe house mein pahuncha diya hai aur jab tak Pankh us ghar ke andar hai, use koyi khatra nahi hone waala, par kya Pankh Armaan ke kahe mutaabik wahaan andar hi kaid reh paayegi? I think ki zaroor kuchh na kuchh gadbad hone waali hai Pankh ke haathon, jiski wajah se wo kahin us ghar se baahar naa aa jaaye... Beharhal, Pankhuri ko Priya ki diary ke zariye kaafi kuchh pata chal hi gaya hai Armaan ke ateet ke baare mein, parantu saari kahani to Armaan hi use bata sakta hai, I guess, that scene is close too...

Armaan ne apni biwi ke saath kya kiya, ye sach mein ek jhatka tha! Kyonki English version mein (Of Dark Seduction), Armaan ki Patni kisi beemari ya shayad accident ki wajah se khud hi mar gayi thi, parantu yahaan lagta hai ki Armaan ne Priya ki maut ka gussa apni biwi par nikaala tha, use raakshasi tareekon se torture karke... Jo video Armaan ne dikhayi thi Pankh ko, wo bhi uski Patni ki hi thi, ye bhi definitely ek hairaan karne waali baat thi... Shayad ab tak to mar chuki hogi wo, right!? I think Armaan ki is kahani ko jaankar kahin Pankh us se hi naa darne lage, I don't know whether it's possible or not, par Pankh jaisi nischhal aur saaf dil ki ladki, beshak aisa sach jaankar ghabra hi jaayegi...

Nishant ab kaafi hadh tak kahani ko samajh hi chuka hoga... Pankh ki tasveer, aur fir Ragini ka kehna ki Armaan ye sab kisi ladki ko bachane ke liye kar raha tha... Ab seedhe taur par Nishant ka target Pankhuri ko khojna hi hoga, parantu jab tak Pankh khud koyo galti nahi karti, Nishant ke haath us tak nahi pahunch sakte... Shadab, shayad ye ek turup ka ikka saabit hoga Nishant ke liye, abhi tak kaafi tezz aur chaalak laga hai ye shakhs, yadi kisi tareeke se Armaan ise raaste se hata de, to Nishant ek aasan shikaar ban jaayega...

Btw. Rohit ko boarding school se nikaalakar safe jagah pahuncha diya hai Armaan ne... Armaan ki kuchh sides dekhkar us se beintehaa nafrat hone lagti hai aur tabhi wo kuchh aisa kar deta hai ki us se behtar insaan koyi nahi, aisa lagne lagta hai... Search for Amairah ka climax aur ye story, kahin na kahin, saabit karti hain ki har bure insaan ko achhe insaan mein tabdeel kiya jaa sakta hai, yadi unhe sahi dhang se sambhala jaaye, aur unhe samjha jaaye... Rahi baat Nishant jaise praaniyon ki, to wo insaan kehlane ke laayak hai hi nahi, jaisa Armaan ne kaha, just to prove a point he killed an 18 year old girl brutally, uske character ka is se zyada aur kya pramaan ho sakta hai?

Khair, ab Ragini ke dwara Nishant ke drugs mein ki gayi milawat ka asar dekhna baaki hai, uske alawa to ab Armaan aur Nishant ki jung andhere mein hi hone waali hai, kyonki dono hi ek – doosre ke agle kadam se anjaan honge...

The update was quite beautiful on the emotional side... The portrayal of Priya's diary was absolutely stunning, the words you chose, were perfect to describe the mentality and feelings of a child...

Outstanding Update & Waiting For Next...
 

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Ye poora update kaafi emotional kar gaya, especially Ragini ki maut... Kuchh samay se lag hi raha tha ki Ragini shayad pakdi jaa sakti hai, aur uske baad uska kya anjaam hona tha, ye kehne ki zaroorat hi nahi... Nishant jaise praani se aur ummeed bhi kya ki jaa sakti hai? Halanki, Armaan ki shakal nahi dekhi thi Ragini ne kabhi aur isi wajah se ab bhi Nishant ke haath mein koyi saboot nahi hai, parantu ek bohot bada advantage Armaan je haathon se nikal chuka hai... Naa kewal Ragini ki maut huyi balki saath hi Nishant ke phone ke roop mein jo laabh Armaan utha raha tha, ab wo bhi uske haath se nikal chuka hai... Yaani ki ab, Nishant kya kuchh karne waala hai, iski khabar Armaan ko lagegi hi nahi... Situation is going to be more intense in coming updates!

Armaan ne Pankh ko safe house mein pahuncha diya hai aur jab tak Pankh us ghar ke andar hai, use koyi khatra nahi hone waala, par kya Pankh Armaan ke kahe mutaabik wahaan andar hi kaid reh paayegi? I think ki zaroor kuchh na kuchh gadbad hone waali hai Pankh ke haathon, jiski wajah se wo kahin us ghar se baahar naa aa jaaye... Beharhal, Pankhuri ko Priya ki diary ke zariye kaafi kuchh pata chal hi gaya hai Armaan ke ateet ke baare mein, parantu saari kahani to Armaan hi use bata sakta hai, I guess, that scene is close too...

Armaan ne apni biwi ke saath kya kiya, ye sach mein ek jhatka tha! Kyonki English version mein (Of Dark Seduction), Armaan ki Patni kisi beemari ya shayad accident ki wajah se khud hi mar gayi thi, parantu yahaan lagta hai ki Armaan ne Priya ki maut ka gussa apni biwi par nikaala tha, use raakshasi tareekon se torture karke... Jo video Armaan ne dikhayi thi Pankh ko, wo bhi uski Patni ki hi thi, ye bhi definitely ek hairaan karne waali baat thi... Shayad ab tak to mar chuki hogi wo, right!? I think Armaan ki is kahani ko jaankar kahin Pankh us se hi naa darne lage, I don't know whether it's possible or not, par Pankh jaisi nischhal aur saaf dil ki ladki, beshak aisa sach jaankar ghabra hi jaayegi...

Nishant ab kaafi hadh tak kahani ko samajh hi chuka hoga... Pankh ki tasveer, aur fir Ragini ka kehna ki Armaan ye sab kisi ladki ko bachane ke liye kar raha tha... Ab seedhe taur par Nishant ka target Pankhuri ko khojna hi hoga, parantu jab tak Pankh khud koyo galti nahi karti, Nishant ke haath us tak nahi pahunch sakte... Shadab, shayad ye ek turup ka ikka saabit hoga Nishant ke liye, abhi tak kaafi tezz aur chaalak laga hai ye shakhs, yadi kisi tareeke se Armaan ise raaste se hata de, to Nishant ek aasan shikaar ban jaayega...

Btw. Rohit ko boarding school se nikaalakar safe jagah pahuncha diya hai Armaan ne... Armaan ki kuchh sides dekhkar us se beintehaa nafrat hone lagti hai aur tabhi wo kuchh aisa kar deta hai ki us se behtar insaan koyi nahi, aisa lagne lagta hai... Search for Amairah ka climax aur ye story, kahin na kahin, saabit karti hain ki har bure insaan ko achhe insaan mein tabdeel kiya jaa sakta hai, yadi unhe sahi dhang se sambhala jaaye, aur unhe samjha jaaye... Rahi baat Nishant jaise praaniyon ki, to wo insaan kehlane ke laayak hai hi nahi, jaisa Armaan ne kaha, just to prove a point he killed an 18 year old girl brutally, uske character ka is se zyada aur kya pramaan ho sakta hai?

Khair, ab Ragini ke dwara Nishant ke drugs mein ki gayi milawat ka asar dekhna baaki hai, uske alawa to ab Armaan aur Nishant ki jung andhere mein hi hone waali hai, kyonki dono hi ek – doosre ke agle kadam se anjaan honge...

The update was quite beautiful on the emotional side... The portrayal of Priya's diary was absolutely stunning, the words you chose, were perfect to describe the mentality and feelings of a child...

Outstanding Update & Waiting For Next...

:thanks: for your detailed reply .

Ragini ka mujhe bhi bura laga. In fact Armaan ka us gift box ke contents ko dekh kar behosh hona, yeh likhne se pehle maine bahot socha. Ki kya Armaan jaisa insaan jo khud bahot cruel and violent hai, kya use itna gehra sadma lag sakta hai? Phir socha ki haan, Ragini jaisi innocent character ki aisi halat dekh kar kisi ko bhi sadma lag sakta hai, chahiye woh Armaan jaisa kamina hi kyu na ho.

Nishant ka aisa karne ke peeche ek maksad tha. Woh maksad alge update mein reveal hoga.

Shadab raaste ka kaata hai. :approve: Dekhte hai Armaan uske saath kya karta hai. :D
 
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