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[111ramjain]

Nice update

 

[B@rty2468]

Update 1:
Toh kahani shuru hoti hai ek gaun jahan par ek school key andar teacher students ko pad raha tha tabhi ek student chawk phek kar mara tha hai aur who khaayalon mey tha usko jab hosh aatha hai sochene lagtha hai aakhir mujhe kisiney bachaya hai .



Flashback:

Ek chota sa bacha apni cultivation kar raha tha lekinwoh apna cultivation thik nahi kar pa raha tha tabhi ek aadmi aake usko khetha hai ki tum ek kamzor insaan ho aur aaj tak tum apni cultivation thik nahi kar pa rahe ho tum kabhi bhi life ek powerful cultivator nahi ban payoge. Isko baad Veer kafi sad ek jagah baita tha tabhi kuch bache aake uska mazak uda tey hai ki tum kabhi bhi powerful cultivator nahi ban payoge apne family key liye tum ek kala dabha ho. Usko gussa atha hai aur who marne key liye aage badtha hai lekin who sare bache milkar usko marne lagtey hai.

Old flalshback:

Jis jagah par abhi sab log haye wahan 10000 years pehle Veer naam key king rule karta tha uske pass ek powerful dragon scroll tha jisse woh famous, powerful aur sabse strong tha. Veer ek acha insan bhi tha uske pass itne power hon key baad woh kabhi kisiko haani nahi pahunchtha lekin jahan achai wahan par burai bhi rehti hai aur isliye Veer key pass joh dragon scroll tha woh bahuth powerful tha har koi usko hasil karna chatha taki woh sabse powerful ban sake aur sab par raj kar sake aur evil forces key saath yudh hota tha aur veer jeet jatha tha lekin yudh. Ek bada sa yudh chal tha jahan sare evil forces ney milkar veer ko har diya aur uski body ko destroy kar diya lekin woh use dragon scroll ki waja se uski SOUL ek khandar mey chali jathi hai.

Flashback ends.

Present.

Jab teacher ko hosh aatha hai tab jake veer ki soul uske body chali jathi hai aur phir veer ko patha chal jata hai ki uski soul iss body ko chuna hai aur veer acharya hotha ki mai school mai kaise agaya tab jab woh sab kuc aapne samne dekh tha tab usko yaar ki kaise veer ki soul us teacher ki body mey chali gayi uske baad.

Note: Aage sey teacher ka naam veer hoga aur humara main hero hai.

Phir veer ko khayal aatha ki sab log iss teacher ko Marjane key liye chod dete hai kyunki woh ek loser tha without cultivator insan tha. Uske baad Veer johuske table par students key scrool uske arrange karne mey laga rehta hai tabhi un students mey ek veer ko disturb karne key liye chawk phek kar marta hai lekin veer unke har chawk dodge kar leta hai yeh dekh kar sabhi students chwonk jate hai. Veer ko gussa aatha hai aur students gussa karta hai lekin koi uski ek baat nahi sunta hai who gusse table par aapne haath marta hai aur woh table kahi sare pieces mey break hojata hai yeh dekh kar sabhi students shock ho jate aur sab sahi sey baite ney lagte hai.

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[Naik]

Update 12:


Veer siyaun sey milne Sandal Pavalion chala jata hai aur puchtha hai ki kaise chal rahi hai tumari pills refining training tabhi siyaun khadi hojati hai aur gusse mey kehti hai ki aapne mujhe dhoka diya hai mujhe sab pata chal gaya aapke aur Miss Qin key relation key baremey sab kuch pata chal gaya hai (isse hum maloom padtha hai ki siyaun master veer chaney lagti hai) aab usse sunkar uska dil bahuth dukhi hojata hai aur kehthi hai ki aap aisa kaise kar sakte hai phir who kehti hai ki mai aapse pyaar karti hoon aur aapse shaadi karna chathi hoon aur I love you kehti hai.

Veer kehtha hai ki siyaun tum abhi young ho tum mujhse achi talented Alchemist banogi aur apni family king banogi aur usse ache sey sambalogi tabhi siyaun veer ka dono ko pakad kar kehti hai thik hai jab mai 19 years ho jaungi tab aapse mai shaadi karungi ( isse yeh pata chala hai ki siyaun sach mey veer ko lekar serious hai), aapko aage key update dekhna hoga ki kya veer Miss Qin ko chodkar Siyaun sey shaadi karega.

Siyaun jane lagti hai veer kehta hai kahan ja rahi ho aur tumara cultivation ka kya hoga siyaun kehti hai mujhe cultivation koi zaroorat nahi hai aur rahi baat mere opponent ki agar uske pass BEAST star hai tabhi mai usse har dungi.


Tournament day:

After 7 days battle arena mey sabhi students and teachers zama hojate hai.

Tabhi wahan par teacher DIAO key saath uske students bhi aajate hai wahan par aur phir veer key entry hoti hai uske students key saath aur Miss Qin bhi entry hoti hai. DIAO kehne lagta hai aapne Miss Qin key help liya hai aapne students ko train karne key liye kyunki tum aapne aap khud train nahi kar sakte aur suna hai bahuth hard training ki hai lekin abhi bhi kehta hoon apni izzat ka kyun kachara kar rahe ho haar maan jao abhi aur iss arena ko hum abhi khatam kar denge. Veer kehta abhi battle shuru nahi hua hai aur abhi sey khatam karne key liye kahe rahe ho toh mai kya sochoon ki aap mujhse ya mere students sey dar gaye ho, yeh sunkar ko DIAO ko gussa atha hai lekin tabhi principal enter hote hai dono ko kehte hai shaant hojao aur shuru karte hai competition.

Pehle round hai Alchemist toh aap dono key taraf kaun kaun represent kar raha hai, DIAO aapne student ko aage send karta hai aur veer siyaun ko aage represent karta hai.

Dono battle stage par aajte hai prinicipal kehta hai aap dono key pass 1 ghanta ka samay hai jisse aap dono ko pills banana hai joh 100% pure ho aur 2nd stage aur 3rd stage wale ko bhi uska use ho aur aap dono kuch essence diye jayenge usiko use karke aapko banana hai aur isko hum aapne army key do jawans key upar check karenge kehkar shuru karte hai dono aapne refining tank key pass chale jate hai phir dono pills banana shuru karte hai DIAO student uss pills ko jaldi banana shuru karti phir uske pass joh BEAST power sey thoda aur strong wala pill refine karti hai 40 mins mey pill Tayyar hojati hai idhar Siyaun pehle 10 min kuch nahi karti hai sirf essence ko dekhti hai tabhi usse veer ki baat yaad athi hai ki jo bhi essence ho ya herbs ho uska basic future usko Khusboo dekho phir tumey sochna hai ki isse hum kitna powerful bana sakte hai aur refine kar sakte hai phir Siyaun pill ko refine aur banana shuru karti hai abb dusra basic rule hai ki usse tank mey thodi der ache sey mix kardo aur taki woh powerful aura ko release karta hai tab apne pass jo bhi herbs ko mix karo toh uski resistance power badjati hai phir siyaun aisa karti hai aur uske pass abhibas 3 min tey principal puchtey kya hua siyaun tum kuch kar kyun nahi ho who kehti mujhe kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi hai tumare pass sirf 3 min hai siyaun kehti hai thik hai sirf ek min hai aur uske baad bell ring hota hai dono tank sey door aajate hai .

Phir do jawans ko bulaya jata hai aur kehte hai aap dono ko in do ko consume karna aur aapna level increase karna hai .

Pehla wala DIAO key student ka pill us karti hai woh 100% pure hoti hai lekin stage ko break nahi karti par 2nd level clear hota hai 3rd stage key starting par aakar rukh jata hai. Yeh dekhkar DIAO khush hojata hai lekin uski student bhi khush hojati par agar mai aur ache sey practice karti toh aur acha pill ko refine kar pati hoon lekin kya hua siyaun toh itna bhi nahi kar sakti hai.

Phir Dusre wala siyaun ki pill ko consume karta hai aur cultivation key liye baite jata hai phir kuch seconds key baad 100% pure nikalti hai aur woh 2nd & 3rd stage ko clear karta hai yeh dekhkar wahan sabhi shock hojate hai DIAO ki student yeh nahi ho sakta hai mere pass BEAST star lekin phir bhi kaise tabhi woh sochti hai ki siyaun 2nd stage of alchemist ban gayi hai.

Teacher DIAO ko bahuth gussa aata hai lekin wahan sab rahne key wajase woh kuch nahi karta hai. Sabhi students siyaun key liye claps marte hai aur khush hojate hai.

2nd round:

2nd round hai weapon refining hai.

Dono key teams sey students stage par khade hojate hai veer key taraf sey KOIMIN aur DIAO key taraf sey KOYUHUN aata hai aap dono key 1.5 hours yani dedh ghanta hai aur aap logon ko ek ache weapon ko refine karna joh pattar laga uspar attack karna hai .

Dono aapna kaam shuru karta hai KOIYUHUN bahuth jaldi sey weapon key ache sey banata hai aur uska refine karne lagta aur phir carving bhi karta hai abb uske baad woh ek spear ko banatha hai oki sharp ti.

KOIMIN bahuth slow sey kar raha tha kyunki uske pitaji ki uss ek baat yaad athi hai ki beta ek ache weapon ko agar tum jaldi banoge toh uski power zyada nahi hogi usse time dekar slow sey bano. Phir woh joh artifacts ko use karke usse slow sey banata hai jaise spear ready hoti hai uspar carvings karta hai woh bhi slow karta hai yeh dekhkar teacher DIAO kehte hai tumara student kitna slow hai tumari tarah hai kya woh time key andar bana payega mai kehta hoon abhi bhi haar maan jao aur yahan sey aisae chale jao kisiko kuch pata nahi chalega veer kehta bhi competition baki hai aap jaldi maat kijiye DIAO hasne lagta hai wahan sey chala jata hai.

Koimin 1.25 mins leta hai aur aapna spear ready karta hai phir principal kehte hai ki iss bar dono spear ko ek hi baar mey same pattar par attack karenge phir dono spear ko lete hai aur dono ek hi baar mey pattar par attack karenge wahan sab dekhkar hairan hojate hai ki KOIYUHUN ki spear zyada andar tak nahi jati hai lekin KOIMIN ki spear andar jakar bahar aati hai yeh dekhkar principal abb aapko pata chal gaya hai ki kaun hai winner yahan DIAO bahuth gussa hota hai yeh nahi ho sakta hai principal ney kaha tumne aapne saamne dekha hai KOIHUYUN phir apna spear nikalta hai aur KOIMIN bhi nikalta hai lekin tabhi KOIHUYUN uspar attack karta hai ki KOIMIN aapna spear ko aage defend karta hai jaise uska spear lagta hai woh break hojata hai yeh sab dekhkar shock hojate ki KOIMIN ki spear bahuth strong hai, yeh dekhkar woh kehta hai ki mai tum jaise useless kaise har gaya mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha hai woh aapna toota hua spear ko phir pattar par attack karta hai lekin woh phir sey utna hi andar jata hai phir woh aur andar dalne ki koshish karta hai tabhi principal kehta hai tumey galath kiya hai KOIMIN par attack karke tumey punishment milti hai ki agle 3 mahine tak tumey academy sey rusticate kiya gaya hai. Teacher DIAO tumey aapne students ko sikhna chahiye ki kaise behave kar sab key saath aur tumare students kuch sikh bhi rahe ya nahi teacher DIAO sharminda hokar mujhe maaf kijiye

Flashback :

Veer kehta hai ki tum bahuth ache sey weapon banate ho mai tumey ek carving sikhatooh iska upyog karna tum yeh bahuth slow sey karna hai tab sare carvings ko ek saath merge karna hai weapon par yeh bahuth strong hogi ki 6th level ka aadmi par attack karoge toh bahuth internal injuries hoga usko aur pattar ko do piece mey break kardegi.

Flashback ends.

Yeh sab dekhkar principal andar sey khush hojate hai aur sochne lathe hai sach mey veer ek genius hai aur ache sey train kiya hai, phir principal 3rd round key baar mey kehte hai aur kya yeh ladki iss round ko jeet payega aisa kyun sochtey hai principal mohan key baare mey aapko aage pata chalega.

ismey ek change hai kehkar Mohan key saath MOHAI nahi fight balki senior III class key student DAYUN fight karega yeh sunkar sab hairan hogaye yeh kaise ho sakta hai yeh toh ek tharfa battle hojayega aise last min mey changes kaise ho gaya hai MOHAN DAYUN nai har sakte hai.

Mohan fight karne sey pehle veer sey kehta hai ki Master aapne kaha tha ki agar mai iss competition ki jeetunga toh aap mujhe aapna brother baneyenge na veer kehta hai ki iss baat ko hum tumare jeetena key baad baat karenge, phir mohan stage bahuth confident sey chala jata hai yeh dekhkar lagta mohan ko abb dar nahi lagta hai

Dono fighters battle stage par aajate hai principal kehte hai iss battle tum koi bhi weapon ko use kar sakte ho kitna bhi time le sakte ho itna kehkar battle ko shuru kar sakte ho

Idhar miss Qin kehti veer DAYUN ek acha fighter hai aur woh bachpan sey train hota hai aur 16 years mey hi woh heavenly earth realm key 6th level par pahunch gaya hai lekin veer kehta hai ki hum match dekhtey hai aur mohan mujhe apna guru banane key liye yeh round ko jitna hoga.

Mohan DAYUN par attack karne baag tha DAYUN usse fire ball sey attack karta hai aur mohan ko lagta hai niche gir jata hai lekin mohan jaldi sey recover hojata hai aur competition sey pehle tub baite aakar aata hai yeh dekhkar DAYUN hairan hojata hai aur mohan khada hota DAYUN yeh dekhkar RED KILL ATTACK karta hai aur mohan ko lagta hai mohan phir sey ghayal hojata hai yeh dekhkar miss Qin kehti hai ki veer mohan bale jaldi sey heal hojata hai lekin iss attacks key wajase usko pain zyada hoga aur phir uske pass energy kam hogi jisse woh attack nahi kar payega veer yeh sunkar nirash hota hai lekin mohan ko agar mera disable bana hai toh competition ko jeetana hai phir mohan khade hokar apne sword ka use karta hai ek martial technique ko use karke hawa mey udtha hai aur apne do clones banata hai aur DAYUN par attack karta hai DAYUN DONO clones key attack ko dodge karta lekin saamne dekhta hai toh mohan gayab hojata hai tabhi DAYUN piche ko turn karta hai lekin mohan uspar attack karta hai aur usse injure karta hai yeh dekh kar sab hairan hote pichle 4 saal sey koi bhi competitor DAYUN ko injure nahi kar paya aur itni der tak nihi tikh paya hai mujhe lagta hai ki DAYUN ko tough fight hoti hai.

DAYUN kehta hai ki itni powerful sword tumare pass rehne ka koi fayda nahi tum iske suitable nahi ho kehkar apni sword ko leta hai aur kehta hai kya sirf tum hi powerful sword bana sakte ho yeh kehkar apne sword sey arrows ko release karta hai aur dekhtey kya tumari sword iss arrows ko rok sakti hai aur back to back arrows attack karta hai mohan un arrows ko apne sword sey break karta hai lekin tabhi DAYUN aapne sword ko mohan key andar ghusa deta hai jisse woh bahuth ghayal hojata hai aur niche girjata hai yeh dekhkar Miss Qin kehti hai ki mohan injure ho chuka uss pain ho raha hai yeh dekhkar principal abb DAYUN ko winner ghosit karna chatey hai lekin tabhi mohan khada hojata hai aur recover hojata hai aur aapne mooh sey khoon ko tukhtha hai yeh dekhkar DAYUN ko bahuth gussa atha hai acha tum abhi bhi hare nahi ho chalo iss bar mai tumare dono haath kaatdunga toh apni sword kaise use karoge yeh kehkar woh mohan key taraf baag tha mohan phir veer ney joh KILLING INTENT TECHNIQUE ko sikhaya usse yaad karta hai jisse Darwaja do pieces mey hogaya tha uss technique ko DAYUN par attack karta hai joh woh sword abb ek heavenly earth realm mey convert hogayi hai DAYUN uss attack ko rokhne ki koshish karta hai lekin nahi kar sakta hai bahuth zyada injure hojata hai aur niche baite jata hai phir mohan DAYUN key pass aake kya tum mujhse abb ladna chaoge DAYUN kehta hai nahi mai tumse abb nahi ladunga yeh sunkar sab hairan hojate hai ki mohan ney senior ko hara diya hai aur DAYUN iss liye nahi lad sakta hai kyunki iss attack key wajase uske haath aur pair dono bhi paralayse hogaye hai.

Yeh sab sunkar principal mohan iss round ko Vijeta announce karte hai mohan veer key pass aakar master veer kya aap mujhe aapne disable key taur par swikar karte hai please karke who ghunte key baal niche baite jata hai veer kehta hai haan mai tumey sweekar karta hoon aur disable nahi balki as tumey mai apna brother banata hoon.

Phir Principal veer congrats kehte hai tumey academy mey teach kar sakte ho aur tumari class ko upgrade bhi kiya jata hai primary sey senior key taur par tabhi DIAO aakar kehta hai veer tum congrats kehta hoon tumare students ney mere students ko hara diya sach mey tum ek talented teacher aur tumari class advance intermediate senior class kiya jata ek offer hai ki mujhe nahi lagta hai tum itne chote sey class ko deserve karte mai tum Advance High class ka mentor banata hoon aur tumare class ko bhi advance high class mey promote karte hai kya tumey yeh pasand hai.

Veer k students n tow Kamal ker dia sabko hara dia Mohan n sabko heran ker dia DAYUN ko hara ker kisi n soch bhi nahi hoga ki aisa ho Jayega badhiya shaandar
DIAO ko bhi bajboor ker dia congratulate kerne per
Shaandar lajawab update bhai

 

[Naik]

Update 13:



Veer bolta hai ki tum kehna kya chatey ho teacher DIAO kehte hai ki master Veer is tournament mey tumare students ney mere students ko hara diya hai tum mujhse battle karo aur agar tum mujhe hara diya toh tumey directly advance high-class mentor mey promote kardiya jayega yeh sunkar principal kehte hai tum kya keh rahe ho tumey pata bhi hai aur humari academy mey aisa koi bhi rule nahi hai teacher DIAO respect dete hue kehta hai principal sir humne aaj dekh liya hai ki veer ek talented teacher hai aur low class ko suit nahi karte hai who kitne ache sey aapne students ko training diya hai aur humne sab dekha hai ki yahan kaise lower class ek senior class students ko hara diya hai yeh sunkar principal soch mey pad jate hai aur phir fight key liye permission dete hai yeh sunkar veer battle arena key stage par aajata hai

Battle starts:

Teacher DIAO veer par attack karta hai veer thoda natak karte hue piche jana lagta hai phir mohan ko apni sword mangatha hai yeh dekhkar DIAO sochne lagta hai ki ki veer bahuth darta hai isliye pehle sey sword ki Tayyari Karli hai phir DIAO attack karta hai aur veer defend karna shuru karta hai dodge har attack ko yeh dekhkar DIAO ko gussa atha hai woh phir aapna family ka powerful attack ka formation karta hue perform karta hai tabhi wahan sey ek aadmi jane lagta hai lekin yeh attack dekhkar woh aakhir DIAO iss attack kyun form kar raha hai kya woh veer marna chatha hai phir (guys yahi hai DIAO ka ki woh veer sey revenge lena chatha hai kyunki usne competition har gaya hai isliye woh veer ko marna chatha hai ) yeh dekhkar principal teacher DIAO sey kehte hai ki iss battle ko rok do lekin DIAO kuch nahi suntan phir yeh dekhkar principal DIAO par attack karne key liye jane lagte lekin woh piche gir jate hai kyunki DIAO surrounding ek owerful aura release karta hai iss formation key wajase principal DIAO kareeb nahi ja pate hai phir uss formation key andar ek dragon bahar aata hai yeh dekhkar veer wahi khada rehta hai phir aapne sword sey hawa mey uddkar ek technique ko formation karta aur kahi sare clones ko form karta hai aur uss dragon par attack karta hai ek saath.

Iss attack key karan woh formation break hojata aur dragon mara jata hai phir veer aapne sword ko DIAO key andar ghussa deta jisse DIAO bahuth ghayal hojate hai jisse yeh battle khatam hojati hai aur sabhi veer ki tariff karte hai phir veer ko aur uski class ko promote karte Miss Qin aur students sab veer key pass ajate hai phir Miss Qin veer gale lagte hai yeh dekhkar Siyaun jealousy hoti hai phir mohan kehta hai aaj humne double achievement kiya iss Khushi hum sabhi party karenge chale jate hai.

Wahi yeh aadmi yeh dekhkar wahan sey chala jata hai aur sochne lagta hai iske baremey sochna hai chale jata tabhi wahan par Sa Yu aajata joh woh sab yahan pehle sey aaya tha aur competition aur battle ko dekh raha tha phir Lan Yu aakar Sa Yu sey kehta hai ki veer aapse bhi niche hai Sa Yu kehne lagta hai veer ney DIAO key powerful attack ko hara diya hai woh bhi ek hi war mey mujhe lagta hai veer koi technique use kiya iss wajase woh jeet gaya hai haan lekin woh mujh sey thoda kam hi hai aur aage kehta hai siyaun abhi thodi sey door jaldi mai siyaun ko secret phase par leke aur uske kareeb ho jaunga tabhi wahan par ek guard bhag kar aakar kehta hai brother SHOWMIL aaye hai aapse milne kahan hai yeh sunkar woh khush hojate hai aur puchtey hai guard kehta hai ki woh La-LING party club mey hai jahan par veer key students aur sab gaye hai.

Sa Yu aapne brother puchtey hai aap kaise hai aur yahan aane ka karan kya hai phir SHOWMIL kehta hai ki mujhe abhi kuch din pehle MOUNTAIN DEW ek energy ko sense kiya hai jo ki uss aadmi ka level heavenly earth realm key 5th level par uske pass jo power hai 10th level key aadmi key brabar hai tumey kuch bhi karke woh aadmi kaun hai yeh pechana hai aur tumare mushkil bhi hoga agar woh 10th level par pahunch gaya toh Sa Yu yeh sunkar hairan hojata hai aur kehne lagat hai ki agar 5th level par woh 10th level power rakh tha hai toh jab 10th level par jayega toh kitna powerful hoga ( Guys aapko baat doon ki yahan par yeh dono veer key baremey baat kar rahe hai kyunki kuch din pehle uss mountain par gaya tha kuch herbs collect karne key liye par inn dono ko pata nahi hai woh energy veer key body sey release hui hai jab se veer uss kitab key andar ko jo arts aur technique ko practice kar raha hai tab sey woh strong aur powerful hogaya hai) tabhi wahan niche floor par kuch awaaj aati hai veer key group sey joh brother SHOWMIL ko disturb karti hai aur kehta hai jakar dekho yeh itna shor kyun kar rahe hai tabhi wahan ek aadmi aata hai jiska naam KUDIL hai woh brother SHOWmil key brother hai wahan key dono guards uss dekhkar usko salute karte hai aur kudil ko kehte hai ki jakar dekho yeh itna shor kyun kar rahe hai.

Jab who niche aata hai toh dekh tha hai ki mohan ney bahuth sari wine pi hai aur khoob shor kar raha hai aur haste hue awaaj nikal raha tha yeh dekhkar KUDIL un logoon sey kehta hai ki aap log thoda dhire sey baat kijiye aur baat kijiye lekin koi bhi uski baat ko unsuna kar dete aur phir sey wine pitey hai yeh dekhkar KUDIL ko gussa aatha hai Sa Yu unki group key sab logon key baremey usko bata tha hai sab ache family sey belong karte hai aur powerful bhi hai isse mujhe kya farak padega aur itna kehkar unke pass jakar baite jata table par Rakha hua wine glass ko pine lagta hai yeh sab dekhkar kaun ho tum aur yahan kyun baite ho kehkar mohan usko puch tha hai woh kehtha hai ki mujhe yahan khali dikhi aur glass mey wine tha toh mere liye hoga isliye aakar maine mohan ko kuch kehne wala tha ki veer usko shaant karta hai aur kehta hai ki yeh ek respectful aadmi hai aapne wine pi koi baat iss wine ki kimat hai 1K low grade crystal coins hai joh aap dey kar ja sakte hai yeh sunkar woh kehta hai ek glass wine ki kimat itna zyada hai veer kehta hai pehle toh aap humse kuch pucha nahi hai aur sidhar aakar humare yahan par baite kar wine pi liya hai aur dusri baat humko bol rahe ho ki tumare liye humne wine ka glass full kiya hai isliye hai 1K coins de kar tum yahan sey ja sakte ho.

Yeh sunkar KUDIL ko gussa atha hai aur veer par attack karne wala tha tabhi Miss Qin ney usko aapne ICE power sey ek pillar usko freeze kar deti hai tabhi wahan par SHOWMIL aata hai aur kehta hai sorry mera brother bachpan sey aisa hai uske wajase mai aapse maaf kardunga aap usko chod de. Veer kehta hai thik hai hum usse chod denge par uske baja tumey hum 1K coins dena hai kyunki usne humara wine piya hai yeh sunkar SHOWMIL ko gussa atha hai par woh usko coins de deta hai jiss pakar veer bahuth khush hota hai.

Bahot badhiya shaandar update

 

[Naik]

Update 14:

Paise key milne key baad veer Miss Qin sey kehta hai k chod de phir miss Qin usse unfreeze karti hai aur usse woh lekar chale jate.

Veer koimin sey kehta hai ki mujhe tumare papa key liye ek pill banani hai uske liye mujhe wide spread grass chahiye toh koi mujhe bata sakte hai ki who kahan milegi yeh sunkar siyaun ghabra jati hai jiss veer dekh leta hai aur usse pata chalta hai ki siyaun ko uska pata hai phir woh siyaun sey puchta hai tummy pata hai na ki woh kahan milta hai, siyaun kehti hai haan mujhe pata lekin mai aapko nahi batungi kyunki woh ek bahuth khatarnak jagah jahan koi bhi wapas nahi aaya wahan sey jakar, tabhi mohan nashi key haalth mey bata ta hai ki mujhe pata hai aur mai aapko nahi bataunga ki woh WIND FILL MOUNTAIN mey paya tha hai phir aur mai aapko nahi batunga yeh sab sunkar wahan sab hasne lagte hai.

Siyaun yeh sab sunkar mohan ko gusse bewakof mai tumara mooh todungi. Veer sabko wahan sey kehta hai ki chalo abb bahuth raat hogayi hai sabsone key liye chali jao kehkar woh wahan sey jane lagta hai siyaun Miss Qin sey kehti hai ki mujhe pata hai master veer wahan zaroor jayenge aur woh bhi akele woh jagah bahuth khatarnak hai aur abhi wahan sey koi wapas nahi ayya hai aap master key saath jayiye unki protection key liye Miss Qin manjati hai par kehti hai ki tumey bahuth pata hai master veer key bare mey yeh sunkar woh mann mey sochti hai ki mai bhi unse pyaar karti hoon aur unki fikar hai.

Idhar Sa Yu aapne brother sey kehta hai ki humare liye yeh bahuth acha mauka hai ki veer ko tadapa tadapa marne key liye aapne mujhe kyun rokha hai SHOWMAI kehta hai chup kar bewakoof kya tum mujhe bewakoof samajte ho humare sacred ney kaha agar koi mujhe genius lakar de for sex key liye toh mai usse 3rd rank ki KOYUNSANG pill dunga yeh sunkar Sa Yu hairan hojata hai aur puchta hai sach mey haan bewakoof maine aaj uss ladki ko dekha hai jiskan Miss Qin hain na aur usne KUDIL par attack kiya hain na ICE breaker sey joki bahuth pure hai aur kisi key pass aisa nahi hai agar hum usse humare sacred key pass ley jayenge toh bahuth kaam hoga humare bhi sacred ka bhi.

Sa Yu kehta uski shaadi Veer sey hone wali hai aur aaj kal bahuth strong powerful bana raha hai jo bhi incident hua usse sab kuch bata diya hai, kya who ladki maan jayegi humare sacred key pass aane key liye uski tension tum mujh par chod do.

Veer chalte chalte sochne lagta hai mujhe kaise bhi uss grass ko lekar aana hai pill banakr KOIMIN key father k thik karna hai jinsey unki father ki speed aur cultivation ache sey aur improve hogi.

Miss Qin bhaag kar aakar veer sey puchti hai ki tum kitne din hogaye aapne ghar nahi gaye ho kyun tabhi veer kehta humare 2nd elder mujse nafrath karte hai aur MUYANG ko jo meridians destroy hogaye iske jimmedar woh mujhe bol rahe hai isliye main ahi jana chatha wahan par aapne father sey milne ek baar jakar aao, veer maan jatha hai aur chala jata hai aapne ghar aapne father sey milne aur siyaun kehti ki mujhe pata chala hai ki MU family aapne key ghar key pass security ko zyada kar diya hai aisa kya hua hai veer sochne lagta hai kuch toh zaroor hua hai aur chala jata hai aapne.

Veer aapne ghar key pass pahunch jata hai aur dekhta hai ghar key bahar guards ko tainath kar diya hai phir veer ghar key andar jane lagta hai ki tabhi do guards aakar usko kehte hai ki tum andar nahi ja sakte ho aur uska raste rokh dete hai yeh dekhkar veer ko gussa atha hai par kyun 2nd elder ney kaha kisiko bhi andar na jane de veer unn dono key piche push karke jane lagta hai phir bahuth sare guards veer ko gher lete hai abb veer uney sab guards mar kar andar jane lagta hai aur aapne fathe r key room key bahar usko 2nd elder rok lete hai tumey pata nahi hai ki koi bhi andar ja nah sakta hai tabhi veer aapne pocket sey ek badge nikal kar dikhatha hai aur kehta hai ki mai abb academy ka advance high class mentor hoon aur iss badge key wajase mai kahi bhi ja sakta hoon aur koi mujhe rokega nahi yeh dekhkar 2nd elder hairan hojate hai aur tumari father ki tabiyath kharab hai isliye maine jimedari liya hai kisiko andar nahi aane ki guards rokhne liy kehta hai veer ko gussa atha hai ek hi war mey usne sare guards ko injure karta hai mere raste mey maat aayie aur mujhe kisi ki excuse nahi chahiye tabhi veer key uncle kehte yeh tum kaise baat kar rahe ho tabhi grandfather uss chup rehne key liye kehte aur veer andar jane lagta hai aapne father ko dekh tha hai unke father 15 days sey behosh tey hai tabhi wahan ek ladka bhaag aakar kehta hai mai aapke father ka dekh bal kar raha hoon veer kya hua hai puchta hai.

Ladka kehta hai ki aapke father ki health pehle thodi thodi kharab hone lagi ti baad mey bahuth zyada bigad chuki hai jiska fayada utha kar aapke family key grandfather ney MU family ka kaaman aapne haath ley liya hai dhire dhire control karna shuru kiya hai aur itne din atk ek bhi doctor ko bhej nahi hai aapke family head ko check karne key liye.

Veer yeh sab sunkar usko gussa atha hai aur woh jane lagta hai tabhi ladka puchta hai ki aap kahan ja rahe ho aur kya karne wale ho veer aajse tum dekh bal karo aur kisiko bhi andar aane nahi doge mai jaldi aata hoon kehkar wahan sey chala jata hai.

Veer SANDAL PAVALION chala jata hai aur siyaun key grandfather sey milta hai aur ek deal karta hai uss deal key badle mey aapko mujhe SUSING pill banakar dena hai yeh sunkar woh hairan hojate hai tumey pata hai ki tum kya keh rahe ho iske banane key liye bahuth mehengi wale herbs chahiye aur kitna tough process aur toh aur isko ek correct alchemist bana sakte hai, veer kehta hai aap socho iss deal sey SANDAL PAVALION ka kitna fayada hoga naam bhi hoga.

Phir refining room key Veer, siyaun key grandfather aur siyaun teeno wahan par maojood hote hai siyaun iss pills ko kaise bana tey hai yeh sikhne key liye aapne grandfather pass athi aur sikh thi hai aur jana hai phir thodi der key baad uske grandfather pot key LINSING grass ko dalte hai yeh dekhkar siyaun aapne grandfather sey kehti hai ki aapne iss grass ko abhi nahi dalna tha aapne jaldi kar diya tabhi veer aapne DRAGON SCROLL ko use karke uss pill refine karna shuru karta hai woh haste hue kehte hai mai bass veer key orders ko follow kar raha hoon pill toh wohi bana raha hai isliye tumey koi bhi fikar karne key koi zaroorat nahi hai thodi der baad pills ready hojate hai phir unko thank you kehta hai ki aapne jo mujhe yeh pills banakar diya hai kehkar jane lagta hai ki grandfather usko rok lete hai iss pills ko banana mey tumne bahuth hard work kiya hai mujhe iss pill ka result dekhna hai ki kaise cure karti hai mai bhi tumare saath aaunga.

Idhar MU family key head key room key pass MU family key grandfather ko andar jane sey rok diya jata hai aur koshish karte hai lekin woh guard unne andar jane nahi deta hai master veer ney order diya hai ki koi bhi andar ja nahi sakte hai yeh sunkar 2nd elder ko gussa atha hai bewakoof jisse tum master keh rahe ho woh ek useless stress hai tumey mere orders ko follow karna hai tabhi piche sey Veer siyaun key grandfather key saath andar aane lagta hai 2nd elder unko dekh kar respect key saath aayie un greet karte hai aur andar aane key liye kehte hai mujhe pata chala ki MU family key health 15 days sey kharab hai isliye mai dekhne aur aapko abb koi bhi chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi hai kyunki maine aur veer ney milkar ek pill bana hai jisss MU family key head recover hojayenge itna veer unne jane key liye kehta hai lekin MU family key 2nd head kafi pareshan ho jate hai agar MU family key head recover hogaye toh wapas family ko control karne lagenge aur power unke haath mey wapas ajayega aur unka face sad hojata hai yeh dekh kar veer kehta hai mujhe siyaun key grandfather key pill upar confident hai father immediately recover hojayenge jaise woh usse consume karte hai tabhi MU family key grandfather kehte hai ki mujhe kisi par bhoarosa nahi hai who abhi tak itne der sey kya karen hai abhi tak nahi ayye hai mere bete key saath kya kar rahe hai jab tak MU family key head thik nahi ho jate hai mai yahan sey nahi hilunga tabhi room ka Darwaja khulta hai aur MU family key head bahar aate hai.

Veer k father k saath is n kuch kia hoga tabhi tow woh nahi Chahta ki theek ho jaye
Baherhal dekhte h veer ki banayi pill se theek ho pate h ya nahi
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Update 15

 

[asad1986]

Update 15:

Mu Family key 2nd head Veer key aur MU family key head ko aapne pairon par khade hokar dekhkar bahuth pareshan ho jate aur woh sochte hai ki aakir uss poison ka asar itna jaldi kaise khatam ho sakte hai uss pill ka asar itna jaldi hona yeh kaise ho sakta hai aur 2nd head ko bolte hai ki tumey koi bhi pareshan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai aur toh aur MU family key matters toh bilkul bhi nahi hai abb tumari yahan koi bhi zaroorat nahi hai toh tum yahan sey chale jao tabhi 2nd head kuch bolna chatha hai lekin bich mey hi unney bolne sey pehle hi chale jane key liye bolte hai.

Thodi der key baad Veer aur uske father dono ek kamre baite dikhtey hai aur tabhi uske father uske father usse puchtey hai ki aakhir tumne siyaun key grandfather ko kaise mana liya aur woh pill ko tumne kaise bana liya hai aur woh itni jaldi sey kaise maan gaye tumari baat kya baat bola hai tumne veer kehta hai yeh humari dono key bich hui ek deal hai toh aap ko iss baat key baremey sochne ki zaroorat nahi hai, veer aaj kal tum ek mysterious person bante ja rahe ho.

Tabhi ek aadmi bhaag tha hua aatha hai auur kehta hai 1st elder aur 2ndhead ka banda puttane sey woh DIAO family mey join hogaye aur iss wajse humari city 40% alchemist and refiner city chod kar chlae gaye hai jisse humare city ko bahuth sara nuksaan hogaya hai sab log pareshan hai hum kuch karna hai yeh sab suney key baad tooranth hi city mey jane lagte hai tabhi sab log kuch na kuch kar rahe hai tabhi head jakar unnse milne lagte hai kehte hai aur puchne kya hua hai sab log baatne lagte hai aapni problems bolna shuru karte hai.

Ek aadmi kehta hai ki humare pass toh bahuth low grade key refiners hain aur alchemist toh sirf bahuth kam log hai toh hum kaise survive kar sakte hai aapko jaldi sey jaldi kuch karna hai yeh sab sunkar head kehte hai mai aapse maafi mangta hoon yeh sab meri family key wajase hua hai aur aap logonagle 3 mahine tak rent dene ki zaroorat nahi hai kehkar announce karte hai hum inn 3 mahine key andar aapne problem ka solution koi na koi dund lenge tabhi unmey sey ek aadmi kehta hai par humare city alchemist aur refiners ki bahuth zyada kami ho gayi hai unke bagar hum kuch nahi kar sakte hai tabhi wahan miss Qin aati hai aur kehti humari Qin family MU family key help aage aati hai aur kehti hai aapko humari 3rd level key alchemist aur 5 refiners dete hai jo 7th level par hai artifact refiners ko dete hai middle level key refiners har waqt MU family key saath rehnge tabhi siyaun, koimin aur mohan aate hai aur kehte hai humari family bhi aapko support karenge aur hum bhi karenege yeh sab sunkar veer Miss Qin aur uske students ko thanks kehta hai.

Mohan kehta hai jab bhi aap log future mey humare saath business karoge aapko khoob profit zyada denge aur koimin kehta hai ki mere father aur mere family aapko future mey bahuth sare refiners denge aur train bhi karenge aur mai khud aakar yahan par refining ka kaam karunga.

Veer key father tabhi ek guard ko bulatey hai aur puchtey hai aakhir inn 15 days mey hua hai joh mujhe nahi pata hai aur yeh sab humari help kyun kar rahe hai. Guard kehne lagta hai ki joh bhi school mey chala aur tournament key baremey sab kuch bataya hai aur kaise Master Veer promote ho gaye yeh sab kuch sunne key baad abb mai bhi dekhunga ki kaun mere bete ko ek stress kehte hai aur woh bhuth kuch hojate hai bete ki improvement key sune key baad.

Wahan key log kehte hai agar aisa sab log MU family ko help karenge toh hum jaldi sey recover ho jayenge aur toh aur ek top position par ajayenge yeh sab kuch master veer key wajase hua hai hum unka shukriya aada karna hai. Yeh sab sunkar head bahuth kafi khush hojate hai waha sey chale jate tabhi wahan par guards yeh sab dekhtey hain aur veer unney dekh leta hai lekin woh kisi ko kuch bata tha nahi hai.

Idhar DIAO key ghar par MU family elder aur 2nd head baite rehte hai tabhi DIAO family key kehte hai aapne sahi kiya hai yahan par aakar hum log bahith strong hogaye hai aur toh abb MU family key pass kuch bhi nahi hai isliye dekhenge kitne din tak rahenge aakir kar unne humare pas aana hoga aap logon ko chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi hai hum abb strong aur powerful hogaye hai isliye abb kuch din baad humare hi yahan raaz karenge yeh sunkar dono khush hojate hai aur wahan sey jane lagte hai tabhi woh dono guards yahan aakar sab kuch batate ki kaise baki sare families MU family key hel kar rahe hai yeh sab sunkar dono logon hairan aur pareshan hojate hai aur kehte hai ki yeh sab kaise ho sakta hai phir DIAO family key head yeh sunkar humara plan fail kaise ho sakta hai phir DIAO family key head unn kehte aap logon aur veer aur uske students key upar ek nazar rakhne key liye kehte hai aur mai sochtha hoon hum aage kya karna hai aur woh dono shaant hokar wahan sey chale jate hai.

 

[asad1986]

Doston update post kardiya hai aur aagle 2 updates Mega updates honge aur action bharpur rahega ismey isliye ek twist bhi aayega yeh update chota hai kyunki aage update bada hai isliye aur baarish key wajase likh nahi pa raha hoon bass support kijiye aur reviews dijiye.

 

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