Fantasy SUPREME GOD

[Naik]

Update 6:



Miss Qin kehti hai ki mai bahuth bimar thi isliye maine kabhi teaching jey bare mey nahi socha hai lekin veer ney meri bimari ko thik hai aur mujhe cure kar diya isliye aap sab veer ki har baat suniye kyunki woh genius aur bahuth talented alchemist hai.



Phir sabhi class sunte hai aur jab class khatam hothi hai toh Siyaun kehti hai ki aaj class aap bahuth ache sey samjaya hai woh ingredients key bare mey puchiti hai jo rare sey milte hain veer kehta hai mujhe itna pata nahi hai lekin kal mai Mountain Pirk par jakar maloom karke aata hoon.



phir siyaun rasta roki thi hai aur puchiti hai kya aap sache mey mountain PIRK jaane wale hai. Haan par tum meri aur itna ajeeb sey kyun dekh rahi kya tum bhi mountain PIRK jana chathi ho mere saath. Veer sey yeh sunkar siyaun bahuth khush hojati hai aur kehti ki kal mai apke saath chalungi yeh kehkar woh jaane lagti hai lekin kehtha hai ki kya tumey nahi pata hai wahan par kitna katra har beast rehte hai lekin woh kuch sunti nahi hai aur woh chali jaati hai. Veer dhire sey kehta hai sundar hai.



Miss Qin yeh sunkar kya sundar hai toh veer kehta hai yeh school kitna sundar lekin Miss Qin pata chal jata woh siyaun ki baat kar raha tha isliye usse naraz hokar jane lagti hai lekin veer uska raasta rok leta hai aur kehtha mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai humari shaadi key baremey.



Yahan par Jindong aur Dongfang chalte baat karte hai aur jin dong kehta hai ki veer ek useless stress itna kaise change hogaya hai. Dongfang kehta hum usse mardena hai yeh aage jakar humko nuksaan pahunch jayega isliye usko marne key liye yeh log plan banate hai.



Wapas veer key pass:



Miss Qin yeh sunkar sharma jati hai aur kehti hai ki mai abhi tak humare shaadi key bare mey kuch socha nahi hai. Veer kehta tumey abb shaadi key bare mey sochne ki jaroorat nahi hai dekho tum abb cure ho chuki ho aur ab bimari sey bhi tumey koi khatra nahi hai tumey apne future par focuse mujhse shaadi karne key bare mey sochna nahi hai kyunki mai ek stress hoon aur tum ek talented ho iss tarah mai tumare liye sahi nahi hoon yeh shaadi tumey cancel kardena chahiye.



Yeh sunkar miss Qin bhadak jati hai aur gusse mey kehti hai ki tum humare shaadi ko cancel karna chatey ho, yeh kehkar gusse mey chali jati hai.



Raat waqt: Veer apne kamre mey baith kar cultivate karta hai lekin woh 5th level par ja nahi sakta haiu kyunki uski yeh body TUYC bhi slow aur mai cultivate bhi nahi ho pa raha hoon bahuth slow ho rahi hai. Tabhi veer ko kuch yaad atha hai aur JOSING school ko yaad karta hai jisse uski cultivation mey madat kar sakta hai level5 mey pahuchne ki au rwoh bait jata hai JOSING ko yaad karta aur uske samne uska dragon scroll usme JOSING key power ko absorb karne lagta hai aur thodi der baad woh level5 par pahunch jata hai, yeh sab isliye kar raha hai kyunki woh aaj raat ko mountain PIRK par jane wala hai aur wahan mountain beast rehte hai aur unse fight karne key liye usko level par pahunch na hai .



Thodi der baad woh kisiko bina baatye ghar ke deewar sey khud jata hai taki woh siyaun ko bhi isse door rakhe lekin tabhi siyaun wahar par uska raste mey wait karti hai aur phir uske piche chali jati hai . Jab woh mountain prik mey enter hojate hai tabhi 4 log unka picha karta hai.



Unmey sey ek aadmi kehta



1st person: Boss joh ladki veer key saath joh ladki hai woh MUYAUNJING ki grand daughter siyaun hai aur veer ko marte waqt agar humne usko kuch kiya toh siyaun key grandfather humko chodenge nahi hai.



2nd person: Hum siyaun ko yahan mare denge aur un dono ki bodies ko pieces mey karke beast ko daldenge sabhi ko yahi lagega ki mountain beast une attack kiya aur mar diya hai.



3rd person: Veer ko marna itna easy nahi hai kyunki usne joh school mey kiya hai uss humey thoda sawadani barth ni hai.



Boss: Humey zyada sochne ney ki zaroorar nahi hai kyunki veer mere khayal sey level 3 par hoga auy siyaun level 2 par hogi toh humey zyada sochne ki zaroorat nahi hai.



Yeh sab log aage badetey unka picha karte hue.



Siyaun kehti hai aapne jo pills and ingredients ko bataya hai woh sare maine apne grand father ko bataya hai woh yeh sab sunkar bahuth shock hojate aur woh aapse milna chatey hai.



Tabhi mountain beast un dono key saamne aajate hai aur veer kehta hai ki tum mere piche hi raho. Sare beast veer par attack karte hai aur veer iske liye tayyar tha aur jaise beast attack karta veer ney apne handpower sey sab marne lagte hai sabhi beast mar jate hai jo kuch zinda tey woh yeh sab dekhkar baag jate hai. Siyaun jaldi sey veer key pass athi aur ouchti hai kya tum thik ho. Veer piche maat paltna humare pich kuch log hain.



3rd person: Dekha veer ko marna itna easy nahi hai tabhi unka boss kehta hai ki jaise veer thak jata hai hum uspar attack girta hai.



Veer siyaun sey kehta hai ki hum natak karenge ki hum thak chuke hai. Veer natak karne lagta hai ki woh sach mey thak chuka hai jaise veer niche girta hai siyaun usse uthathi hum thoda yahan rest karenge tabhi pich sey unka boss kehta hai ki thak chuke ho rest lena chathey ho hum tuemy poora rest karendenge aur tum ek useless stress ho tumne apna future ka energy save karne mey bhul gaya aur sari enegry beast marne mey use kardiya abb tumey hum markar poora rest dedenge. Woh aadmi veer par attack karne aage atha hai aur apni chaku nikal kar attack karta hai veer ney usko attack dodge kiya usi chaku uss chin kar uska hi gala kaat diya yeh sab dekhakr woh log hairan hojate hai ki aur unka aadmi marta dekh kar woh sab thoda darne lagte hai .



Veer unse kehte hai mujhe pehle se pata hai tum log mujhe marne key liye nikal ho aur abb mujh bata do ki tum log kisine bheja aur kya tum marne key liye



Kya tum mujhe marne key liye yahan aye ho. Yeh sab sunkar unka boss kehta aakhir tum aapne aap ko samajte kya ho abb tum marne key liye Tayyar ho jao aur tabhi unka ek aadmi unke boss key piche khade ho apni power usko transfer karta hai abb boss jb uske aadmi key 20% power usko agaya hai aur kehta hai ki tumey humse kaun bachtha hai marne key liye Tayyar ho jao kehkar uski aur daud ne lagta hai veer bhi khilaf daud ney lagta hai aur apne technique sey usko paraylitic karta lekin us par uss technique ka koi asar nahi hota hai unka phir unka boss ek punch marta jiss who piche chala jata hai. Veer sochne lagta hai ki iss par kuch asar nahi hua yeh abb physical aur techinique mey zyada strong hogaya hai.

Wahi par door sey ek mountain par dono teachers JINDONG aur KONGFANG iss fight dekh the hai tabhi Jindong kehta jaise veer fight mey thak jata hai mai jakar usko mardunga. Kongfang kehta ki tum veer ko kabhi bhi kam matna sochna pehle woh ek useless stress hai ab woh poora change hogaya hai ek month key andar who itna sab kuch change kardiya hai.



Phir unka boss veer par attack karta hai lekin veer uska har ek attack dodge karta hai aur phir apni power sey sprit sword sey us par attack karta hai jiss unka boss kafi injure hojata hai niche girta hai woh uske pass jakar usko puchtha hai tum batao kisne bheja tumey who dar sab kuch batane wala hai lekin tabhi piche sey usspar chaku sey attack hota hai aur wahi mar jata hai tabhi wahan par dono teacher aajate hai KONGFANG kehta hai mai tumare iss behaviour aur changes sey shock ho gaya hoon.

Tabhi siyaun kehti hai ki toh aap dono tey teacher veer ko marna chatey ho aur aap agar aisa dobara kiya mai jakar siddha principal ko report karungi aur tum bach nahi payoge.

Kongfang haste hue kehte hai tum jake hum dono key bareme report karogi principal sey lekin use pehle tumey yahan sey bachkar nikal na hoga itna kehkar woh veer par attack kar deta hai tabhi veer bhi attack karta hai lekin veer piche chal jata hai kyunki kongfang veer zyada takhat wala hai aur who Heavenly Earth Realm key 7th level par hai. Kongfang apne drangon scroll ka use karke veer ghayal kar deta hai yeh dekhkar veer ko gussa atha hai aur sochne lagte hai isne mujh par abhi WAYUNG martial arts ka use kiya lekin tabhi kongfang veer abhi tak nahi mara hua dekha kar aur gussa hojata hai aur phir sey woh WAYUNG martial arts use kar Giant Box banata hai aur veer par attack karta hai lekin veer apni power sa user karke ek sword aur shield banal leta hai uss sword sey box par attack karta aur shield ko use karta hai lekin woh power zyada hone key wajase nich gir jata hai.

Yeh dekhkar kongfang kehta hai ki veer abb mar chuka tabhi siyaun usko kehti ahi maine nahi sochtha ki aap itne bure insan ho tumko pata hai maine veer ko kyun mara kyunki do elders ney sprit stones diya taki veer ko maro aur mai principal kehdunga ki veer siyaun ko kuch herbs dene key baremey liye mountain PIRK mey jaate wahan veer tumse batameezi karta isse dekhkar JINDONG tumey bachne aajat hai lekin veer ney usko bhi mardiya yeh kehkar who JINDONG ek attack mey maar deta hai aur who mar jata tabhi veer uth jata hai kehne lag tha ki maine kabhi nahi socha ki tum itne niche gire hua insan ho yeh dekhar woh shock ki tum kaise bachgaye phir attack karne key liye ready hota hai lekin woh attck nahi kar pata hai kyunki usne apni sare energy use karliya WAYUNG martial arts par.

Yeh kehkar KONGFANG kehta hai abhi toh maine chod deta hoon lekin baad chodunga nahi kehkar jaane lagta tabhi veer sprit sword uss par attack karta ha jisse woh ghayal hojata hai jisse KONGFANG ko gussa ajata hai jisse who abb apni poori energy use kar leta hai aur veer par attack karta hai lekin veer EARTH Sprit Sword use karke usko poora ghayal kar deta yeh dekhkar KONGFANG mujhe pata mai aaj marne wala hoon lekin mere saath tumey bhi leke marunga kyunki who death energy release kar deta hai aur ek blast hoata KONGFANG mar jata uss energy sey veer ko takliff hoti hai aur injure ho jata hai.

Siyaun aakar veer ko haath deti lekin khada nahi ho pata hai veer kehta hai ki usse sans lene takliff hoti hai.

Bahot behtareen shaandar update
Kongfong ka kaam tamam huwa lekin saath veer bhi Kafi injured h
Dekhte h kia hota h veer k saath

 

[Naik]

Update 7:


Siyaun veer ko leke ek ghufa mey leke jaati hai aur usko kehti hai tumey kuch nahi hoga.

V: Dongfang sey ladai mey maine apni Qi energy ka loss hogaya agar mujhe zinda rehna hai toh pehle mujhe apne aap ko cure karna hai aur uske baad apni QI energy ko badana hai isliye who yeh kehkar wahan par baite jata aur cultivate karna shuru karta hai phir apna dragon scroll use kar sake apne body key andar ka sare death energy ko bahar nikal deta hai .

Siyaun yeh dekhkar hairan ho jati ki yeh itni jaldi kaise apne aapko heal bhi karliya aur cultivate bhi karliya hai.

Thodi der baad veer khada ho jata hai aur kehta hum abhi nikal na hai lekin tabhi siyaun usko ek kitab deti hai aur kehti hai ki mujhe yeh kitab dong fang key pass mili hai.

Veer iss kitab ko dekh tha hai aur kehta hai ki yeh toh ek Asian script martial art book zaroor iss kitab ko upayog karke usne martial arts sikha hai.

Phir veer uss kitab ko read karna shuru karta hai thodi der mey usse sare arts ko practice bhi karna shuru karta hai aur apne usko absorb kar leta hai.

Wahan sey log ghufa key bahar aajate hai tabhi wahan Mufyang aajata hai uske saath ek aadmi ko leke aatha hai.

Mufyang kehta hai ki tum Dongfang ko bhi hardiya hai koi baat mai tumey abhi bhi ek mauka deta hoon ki tum jakar humare elders niche jhukar unse maafi mango mai tumey kuch nahi karunga.

Veer kehta hai maine pehle bhi bola tha aur abhhi bhi bol raha hoon ki mai maafi nahi mangunga.

Mufyang kehta tumey marne ney key liye joh aadmi bhej tey unko mar diya lekin abb tum humse bachkar kahan jaoge kehkar veer par attack karne key liye apne killers ko kehta hai aur sabhi killers hawa mey uddkar ek transformation banate hai aur un dono par attack karte hai veer pehle sey ready tha aur aage aakar apna counter attack karta hai veer ki power zyada strong thi iss wajse who killers sare mare jate hai aur transformation break hojata MOING wohi aadmi Mufyang key saath ayya tha aur kehta hai ek useless stress bhi strong hogaya hai aur veer gusse mey jor sey ek kick marta mufyang ko woh door girta hai yeh dekhkar woh aadmi kehta hai yeh toh ab 7th level par pahunch gaya hai .

Siyaun yeh sunkar shock hojati hai sochthi ki yeh itne jaldi kaise pahunch gaye.

Phir woh dono milkar veer par attack karte hai lekin veer unke har attack ko dodge karte hue done par attack karta hai.

Veer dekhne lagta hai ki ab der hogayi hai mujhe yahan sey nikal na hai isliye woh un dono par ek saath double attack karta hai jisse dono ghayal hojate aur kehta hai mai tumey yahan nahi marunga kynki tum sab MU family sey belog karte ho.

Doston veer ke aage woh dono har jaate hai kyunki dono ek garbage hai bass herbs sey apna cultivation ko badaya hai.

Wahan sey woh dono nikal jate hain aur 3 days key ek city mey dikhai dete hain aur un dono key kapde gande hojate hai.

Siyaun kehti hai ki b aapki wajah sey hua apki medicine ki wajah sey hum dono ko uss jungle mey 3 din gujarna padtha hai.

Veer kehta hai ki abb humare pass bahuth sare medicine hai jisse hum bechkar bahuth sare paise kam sakte hai aur apne naaye kapde ley lenge.

Siyaun kehti aap apke sare medicine yahan bech sakte hai kehkar woh dono CINTAYUN Pavalion par attey hai.

Wahan yeh dekhar hum pills aur medicine ko yahan bech denge.

Woh dono andar jane lagte tabhi wahan do guards jo rakhwale hain who kehte tum log andar nahi ja sakte hai yahan par beggars aana mana hai .

Yeh sunkar siyaun ko gussa atha hai aur kehti hai tumari himmat kaise hui ki humey beggars kehne ki kya tum jante hoi ss city ko mere grandfather ney banaya hain.

Iss city ko siyaun key grandfather ney develop kiya hai tabhi wahan ek ghadi aati hain usmey sey ek aadmi uthratha hai kehta tum dono hat jao.

Siyaun kehti ki hai hum yahan sey nahi jayenge.

Tabhi LANYU uss aadmi ka naam hai kehta yahan tum log beggars hai tabhi ghadi key andar ek aur aadmi baita rehta hai jiska naam SAYU hai puchtha hai LANYU aakhir tum aise kyun khade ho

Lanyu kehtha hai ki raste par do beggars khade jane nahi de rahe hai.

Woh kehtha hai ki un dono ko yahan sey bhaga do yah maar do.

Phir LANYU siyaun par attack karta hai lekin tabhi veer aage uske punch dodge karta hai aur usse piche push kar deta hai.

SAYU ghadi sey uthar kar kehta mujhe nahi pata ki yahan beggars mey bhi it power hoti hai yeh sunkar veer ko gussa atha hai aur kehta hai ki hum beggars nahi hai aur humey tumse koi jhagda nahi karna hai.

Sayun ek punch marta hai veer bhi apna counter mey ek punch marta hai jisse ek energy release hoti hai.

Yeh dekhkar Lanyu sochne lagta hai ki SAYU ek genius aur aaj tak maine kabhi dekha ki SAYU ka punch ko rok bhi sakta hai aur us par attack bhi kar sakta hai.

SAYU ko gussa atha hai aur attack karne wala hota hai tabhi ek aadmi aatha hai aur kehtha hai ki rukjao tum dono.

Jab aisi halat bani hogi tow koyi bhi beggars hi samjhega
Dekhte h ab kon aa gaya dono ko rukne k liye bola h
Behtareen shaandar update

 

[Smith_15]

Update 8

 

[Dark.King]

Nice Update

 

[Emre]

Story achi hai pr ek bar review kr Liya kro post krne ke baad phir jha lgey spelling mistake aur incomplete sentence hai usko edit krdo...to padhne ka mja badh Jayega readers ka....thanks...

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update

 

[Shahrukh]

Nice and fantastic update bhai keep posting

 

[Aadi bhai]

Bhai ji update kha h 2 din ho gye koi update nhi de rhe aap sab kusal mangal to h na bhai

 

[Smith_15]

Update 7

 

[asad1986]

Update 8:


Aage:

Tabhi wahan par ek aadmi aata hai jiska naam Uncle U hai aur woh siyaun key uncle hai aur siyaun unke pass jake kehti uncle mai siyaun hoon.

Uncle U kehte hai aakhir tumare kapde itne gande kyun hogaye aur yeh ban aliya hai apne aapko aap agar tum mujhe nahi batha thi toh mai tumey kaise pehchan pata.

Sa Yu kehta sir aap ek genius ho aur aap 100 sye mey ek ho aapke aas pass aise kaise log rehtey yeh aapko dekhna padega.

Tabhi wahan Siyaun key grandfather aatey aur kehte hai tum galath ho Sa Yu yeh koi beggar nahi hai yeh master Veer aur Siyaun ko toh tum jaante ho aur kehte hai ki siyaun maine kabhi nahi socha tha iss baar outsider student kaun hoga lekin tum ho mujhe nahi pata maaf kijiye master veer itna kehte hai tabhi veer kehta arre aapko maafi mange ney ki koi zaroorat nahi hai itna.

Iss building ki andar har saal 1st year key students apna alchemist knowledge increase karne key liye yahna aate hai aur practice karte hai.

Phir woh dono andar chale jate hai aur yahan par siyaun key grandfather Sa Yu sey puchtey kaise tumare father aur grandfather unki health kaise hai aur tum ab Heavenly Earth Realm 7th level par pahunch key ho tariff karte hai yeh Veer sune leta hai.

Tumare bhai bhi ab tak Quarter level tak achieve ho chuka hoga tum dono bahuth talented ho.

Sa Yu kehne lagta hai aapka shukriya ki aapne mujhe itna sab kuch sikhaya hai aur rahi baat hai mere grandfather ki who abhi monk key area mey rehne lage aur abhi buddhe hogaye, mere bhai abhi last month hi Quarter level ko cross kiya hai.

Siyaun key grandfather kehte tumare grandfather bahuth shorkiyan rakhne wale hai.

Phir andar chale jate hai aur siyaun aur veer ko dono ko refining room dikha dete hai aur chale jate hai.

Siyaun kehte hai ki master aapke pass toh bahuth sare medicine phir kya karoge isska, veer kehtha hai ki mujhe yeh medicine banke auction mey house sell karna aur paise kamana hai.

Phir refining room key andar pavilion mey enter hote hai jahan bada sa room rehta aur wahan par refining karne sare ingredients aur bahuth sare vastu rehte hai phir veer medicine bana shuru karta aur sare ingredients, herbs ko ek saath dalkar banane lagta hai.

Yeh dekhkar siyaun thoda shock hojati hai kyunki doston koi bhi meidicine ya pill banane key liye ek saath nahi dalte ek ek karke dalte hai siyuan puchti hai yeh kiske liye bana rahe ho veer kehta hai ek insaan key liye bana raha hoon.

Idhar Siyaun key uncle Lan Yu aur Sa Yu ko poora pavilion dikhna shuru kar dete aur chalte chalte refining room key pass pahunch jate hai, Lan yu kehta hai ki koi andar practice kar raha hai tabhi uncle U kehte siyaun har saal yahan aakar apna practice karke cultivation ko increase kar leti.

Sa Yu jab andar dekhar kehta hai ki par yahan toh koi ladka hai tabhi who sab log milkar uss door ko open karte hai aur wahan dekhtey.

Siyaun kehti Uncle U teacher apne kuch medicine bana rahe hai aap unko disturb nahi kar sakte hai abhi.

Lan Yu aisa kaunsa medicine bana rahe hai ki usko disturb nahi karna hai aur outsider ko yahan par aana mana hai phir iss room mey apna practice aur cultivation nahi kar sakte hai.

Siyaun kehti hai ki master Freezing pills bana rahe hai aur yahan par aane ki toh grandfather ney mujhe permission di hai aap hote hai kaun mujhe puchne wale.

Yeh sunkar Lan Yu gussa atha lekin woh kuch nahi kar sakta hai. Uncle U kehte hai beta Freezing pills aisa nahi banata hai aur uska procedure bhi galath hai tabhi Lan Yu kehta hai ki mujhe laga yeh kuch pagal pills bana raha hai ya humey bewakoof samaj raha hai itna kehkar woh veer par attack karta aur attack hone wala tha ki veer wahan sey gayab ho jata hai jaise yeh dekhtha ki kahan gaya tabhi veer side mey sey aake uska haath pakad usko bolta ki tumey itna bhi nahi pata aur apna kaam kar raha usko disturb nahi karna hai Lan Yu bolta ki tum useless pill bana rahe ho yeh sunkar veer usko ek power punch marta hai aur door phenk deta hai tabhi uncle U jakar usko check karte hai kehte hai iski body sare bones break hogaye aur internal injuries bahuth zyada hai.

Yeh sunkar Sa Yu ko bahuth gussa aata hai aur woh kehta hai tum apne aapko kya samaj tey ho kya tum humare layak samaj tey ho itna kehkar woh par attack karne lagta lekin tabhi Siyaunker grandfather aakar Sa Yu key punch rok lete hai yeh dekhkar woh kehta aap useless stress key liya itna kar rahe ho woh sirf 19 years ka hai.

Siyaun kehti hai ki Sa Yu duniya bahuth badi hai aur tumney kya dekha hai, tum jaante kya ho master key baremey joh aisa bol rahe ho. Thik hai toh mai bhi dekhna chatha hoon aakir kya pills bana rahe ho.

Siyaun phir jakar refining pound sey pills ko nikal thi aur dekhkar kehti hai yeh sachmey refining pills hai. Sa Yu yeh refining pills nahi ho sakte hai aur yeh nakli pills hai. Tabhi Siyaun Grandfather kehte Master Veer yeh pills nakli hai yeh asli check karne key baad hi pata chalega na. Veer kehta hai agar yeh asli nikle toh mujhe kya milega mer toh nuksaan hoga.

Sa Yu kehta thik hai aaj humare Pavalion auction hoga wahan 6th level wala ek aadmi iss pill ko refine karega iss pill joh auction may paise ayenge woh sab aapke aur mai aapko iske 3 gunah zyada paise dunga aur agar yeh nakli toh. Siyaun kehti mai poore city jakar sabko boldungi ki mai rubbist hoon.

Maaf karna siyaun mai yeh nahi chatha lekin siyaun kuch nahi sunti hai master ko lekar wahan sey chali jati hai.