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[ashish_1982_in]

UPDATE 3


DATE 21/02/2020
PLACE HOSPITAL
PASHIONYLTKOHOSH ANE KE BAD WO KUCH GHANTE U HI PADA RAHA USKE SARIR ME KAFI KAMJORI MEHSUS HO RAHI THI USEBAHOT BHUKH OR PYAS BHI LAGI HUI THI
USNE SOCHA KI KOI NA KOI USKO DEKHNE KE LIYE AYEGA PAR AISA NAHI HUA ITNE SAMAY ME NAHI KOI USE DEKHNE AYA NA HI KOI USKI DAWAI WAGERA DENE KE LIYE AYA

PAISHONT DHIREDHIRE APNEBED PR UTHTA HAI ORSOCHTA HAI KE BAHAR JAKE DEKHA JAIYE KI MAJRA KYA HAI

WO APNE SARIR PAR LAGE SARE WIRE TUBES WAGAIRA KO HATA DETA HAI ....
OR DHIRE DHIRE CHALKE BAHAR ATA HAI ...
WO DARWAZAKHOLKE BAHAR KI OR DEKHTA HAI PAR PURI LOBBY ME SANNATA FAILA HUA HOTA HAI ......
WO SOCHTA BAI KE YE LOBBY ITNY KHALI. KYUN HAI OR WO DHIRE DHIRE PURI OBBY ME GHOMTA HAI PR USKO KOI DIKHAI NAHI DETA


EK AJIB SA DAR USKE DIMAG ME BAITHNE LAGA THA PAR WO FIR BHI HIMt JUTATE HUE AGE BADHTA HAI OR STIRS KE PAS PAHUCH KE DEKHTA HAI TO USE LOBYY KE DUSRI OR SABKUCH BIKHRA HUA PADA DIKHTA HAI ...

WO YEDEKH KE HAIRAN HO JATA HAI OR SOCHTA HAI KI KIDHAR JAYA JAIE .......

OR KUCH DER YU HI KHADE REHNE KE BAD WO NICHE JANE KA FAISLA KARTA HAI ORWO DHIRE DHIRE STAIRS SE NICHE UTARTA HAI OR NICHE KE HISSE ME PAHOCHTA HAI JAHA RESEPTION TABLE RAKHAHUA HOTA HAI .....
WO USKE PAS JAKAR DEKHTA HAI TO WAHA BHI SAB KuCH BIKHRA HUA HOTA HAI OR WAHA PAR BHI PURA SANNATA FAILA HUA HOTA HAI


SIWAYE LIGHT KE CRIKKKK.....CRIKKKKKK......CRICK..........AWAZ KEUSE OR KOI AWAZ NAHI SUNAI DE Rhi thi

WO SOCH ME PAD JATA HAI KI AKHIRHUA KYA HAI JO USE KOI DIKHAI NAHI PADRAHA HAI ....

USE HOSPITAL KA MAIN GATE KHUL DIKHTA HAI OR WO USSE BAHARJATA HAUA DEKHATA HAI TO WAHA USE AMBULENCE KHdi huindikhti hai wo pas ja kar dekhta hai to use koi bhi dikhai nahi padta or wo dhidire dhire hoapital ke mainvate kior badhta hai ....

Wo jaise hi age badhta jata hai usko kuch awaze sunai padni suru ho jati hai or wo awaz ki or age badhta hai or jaise hi uski najar samne ke drshiya par padti hai uski ankhe hi nahi uski gand bhi fat jati hai use dekh kar....


DATE 01/02/2020
PLACE ANTARCTIC POLE

ANTARCTIC RIGION KE POLE KE PAS EK BADA SA JAHAJ BARF KE KKNARE LANGAR DALE HUA KHADA HAI

SCIENTIST KI EK TEAM ANTARCTIC CIRCLR KR POLE PR KUCH RESERCH KAR RAHE HAI ?.......

KUCH SCIENTIST BADE SEMACHIN LEKER BAEF ME KUCH DHUNDHNE KI KOSIS KARTE HUE AGEBADHRAHE HAI
TO WAHI DUSRI OR TENT ME KUCH SCIENTIST COMPUTER PAR KUCH CALCULATIONS KAR RAHE HAI

WAHA VSE DURI PAR US SHIP ME BADI BADI MACHINE LAGI HUI HAI JONSARA DETA PROCESS KARKE RESULT DIKHA RAHA HAI

UNSE KUCH HI DURI PAR OR EK TEAM K7CH MACHIN KI MADA SE BARK KI GAHRAI ME KUCH DHUNDH TEJARA HAI
Or tabhi ek team ko kuch signls milte hai or fauran hi wo dusri team mo khbar detehai or sab ke sab waha lage tent ke pas ekathe ho jate hai ...

Or sabki najre samne rakhe machin kiscreen pr jam jati hai
Wahi ship me rKhe sabhi divice bhinis signal ke input milte kam pr lag jate hai or ek alag hi awaz me signal dsne lagte hI ........

Or tent ke pas khade sabhi scientists screen pr jo dikhtahai use dekh kar babo khus ho jate hai or ek dusre ko congratulats karte hai
Team ka captain bhi sabhi ko dhanyawad deta hai or sabke kam ki tarif karta hai .....

Or kuch derbad sabhi ship par lot jate hai
Or child beer ke sath garma garm gosht la luft uthate aj ke kam me mili sfalta ka jashna mante hai ....
Or so jate hai ......

Agle din sabh scientis drilling ki badi si machin leker kal ki khoji hui jagah pr jate hI or bark ko khodne lagte hai
Takriban 15 se 20 feet. Ke gehrai me khodne ke baad unhe kuch nazar ata hai or wo sab machin ko hatake sawdhani se uschis ko apne hatho se bi nikalne lagte hai ....
Kafi mehant or thajawat bhare kam ke bad akhir kar wo unhe bahar niklne me kamiyab hote hai or ye pure kam me unhe takriban 20 ghante ke aspas ka samy lagta hai kyuki barf me khudai karna koi asan kam to hai nahi .......

Sabhi scientist us speciment ko achi tarah se bandh kar ek barf gadi me rakh kar ship pr le jatehai
Wo specimen kya hai wo abtak kisi ko nahi dikh raha tha kyuki usparabhi bhi kafi barf thi
Or barf ko pighlaye bina use nikal matlab specimen ko nuksan pahouchna tha to wo use yu hi jama hua hi apni leb me leke jane wale the ....
Isliye use specimen ko ship prlaya jata hai or freezer temp pr set kare hui cold store me rakhdiya jata hai ....
Or ship apne destination ke liye nikal jata hai
Ander majud sabhi scientist bahut khus the kyuki unko kai hazar sal purana specimen hath lagata tha jo unke lie bahotbadi kamiyabi thi
Par....

Unko nahi pata ki wo kitni badi galti karne ja rahai hai....

Very nice update bhai Lekin spelling ka thoda dhyan rakhe aur capital letters ke jagah small letters istemal kare

 

[Junaid devil😈]

Awesome Update bro
Keep Posting

 

[Mohammadrafi]

Any one can help me with index plese

 

[Mohammadrafi]

Very nice update bhai Lekin spelling ka thoda dhyan rakhe aur capital letters ke jagah small letters istemal kare

THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMWWNT AND REPLY
I WILL TRY MY BEST

 

[Mohammadrafi]

Update 4
Date 21/02/2020
Place bombay se kahi dur
Sonal or aruhi dono hi bach bach kar idher udhar dekh kar chake ja rahehai
Dono mese koi bhi bat nahi karraha hai ....aurr dono ke hi chehre par dur hai ...
Aur dur kyu na ho kyuki mahul hi kuch aisa ban chuka tha ki har koi dur jai agar aisemaholme unko rakhdiya jaye
Dono ke hi hatho me apne bachave ke liye dande or rod pakde hue thi .......
DONO KE PAS HI KHANE KAKUCH SMAN MOJUD THA PAR WO WAHA SE KAHI DUR JANE KI SOCH RHI THI PAR BY ROAD WO JA NAHI SAKTI THI KYU KI ROAD SABHI BLOCK THE

DHIRE DHIRE TIME BADHTA JA RAHA THA OR DONO HI KAHI RUKNE KE LIYE JAGAH DHUNDH RAHI HAI........

Date 21/02/2020
Place hospital campus in bombay

Jo patshoint ki ham bat karrahai hai uska nam hai rocky.
To aiye jan lete hai uske bare me
Name .....rocky
Age 27
Hight 5.9ijch
Weight 60 kg
Dikhne me kuch khas nahi hai
Nahi ki asi personality hai jis se koi us par dhyan dai
Education lAdka jaise taise colleg passout hai passing marks ke sath
Lower middle calss family sebelong karta hai .....
Mom ded chota mota kam karte hai compny mai or ghar ka kharcha chalta hai mushkil sai
OR IS TARAH WO APNI JINDGI GUJAR RAHA THA
............

WO JAB BAHAR AYA TO COMPOUNWALL KE BAHAR KA SCENE DEKH KAR USKI GAND FAT GAI .........

AKHIR KYA THA AISA JO USNE DEKH LIYA .............

DEKHTA HAI USIKI NAJRO SAI ........

TAKRIBAN 50 SE 60 LOG IDHAR UDHAR GHUM RAHE THE
PAR NAHI KOI KISI SE BAT KA RAHA THA OR NAHI KOI KUC BOL RAHA THA SABI SIRF EK PRAKAR KI AWAZ NIKAL AHE HE .....OR SAB IDHE SE UDHAR GHUM RAHE THE ..........

KISI KA HATH KISI KA PAIR UTA HUA THA PAR UNHE USKI KOI PADI NAHI THI OR NAHI KISI PRAKAR KA DARD THA KISI KA CHEHRA PURI TARAH BIGDA HUA THA OR SABHI KE KAPDO PR SIRF KHUN HI KHUN THA....
WO DIKHNE HI BAHOT DARWNE LAG RAHE THE
OR SABHI EK DARAWNI AWAZ NIKAL RAHE THE .........

SCENE HI KUCH AESA THA KI UNHE SABDO ME BAYAN KARNA NAMMKIN THA ......
ROCKY KI O DEKH KAR HI GAND FAT CHUKI THI ......

USE KUCH SAMAJ NAHI AARAHA THA KI MAJRA KYA HA ......

PAR WO ITNA SAMAJ CHUKA THA KE KE HALAT KUCH THIK NAHI HAI IS LIYE WO TURANT WAHA SE BHAG NE KE LIYE SOCHTA HAI ......
AUR HOSPITAL SE BAHAR JANE KA RASTA DHUNDHTA HAI
........

OR USKO EK UCHI JAGAH DIKH JATI HAI JAHASE KUD KAR WO BAHAR JA SAKTA HAI .......

WO PEHLE TO IDHER UDHER ACHI TARAH DEKHTA HAI OR JANCHT A HAI KI WAHA KOI HA YA NAHI ........

OR USE JAB SNTUSTI MIL JATI AI TO WO KKUD KAR BAHAR NIKAL TA HAI AGE KI OR......

USKA NASIB KAHE YA LUCK YA JO BHI KEHLO JAB SE ROCKY NIKLA HUA THA USE KOI BHI MILA NAHI NAHI KOI USE DIKHAI DIYA THA

YE BAHOT HI TAJJUB KI BAT THI KYU KI BOMBAY JAISE SAHAER MAI APKO BHID NA MILE WO HO HI NAHI SAKTA KYU KI WAHA APKADAM KADAM PR LOGO SE TAKRA JATE HAI

JAISE JAISE WO AGE BADHTA JATAHAI WO BEKHABAR THA KI WO KITNE BADE KHATE KI OR AGE BADH RAHA HAI ......
WO KUCH DER AGE BADH KAR JAB STOR KE PAS PAHOCHTA HAI TO USE KUCH PANI KI BOLLE OR SANCS ANDER DIKHAI PADTA HAI OR WO SOCHTA HAI KI PYAS BHI KAFI LAGI HUI THI OR BHUKH SE TO JAN BEHAL THI USKI OR WO ANDER JANE KI SOCHTA HAI ........

PAR WO BEKHABAR THA KI 2 ANKHE KAFI DER SE USKO HI DEKHE JA RHI HAI.........

 

[Mohammadrafi]

UPDATE 5

DATE 21/02/2020
PLACE SOME WHER IN MUMBAI

JASE HI ROCKY STOR KE ANDER JANE KE LIYE AGE BADHTA HAI AUR ANDER JANEKE DARWAJE KO CUTA HAI TABHI ......

EK HATH USKO PKAD KE JOR SE KHICHTA HAI OR USE STORE SE DUR LE JATA HAI WO SAKH USE APNE SATH KHICH KAR DUSRI OR LE JATA HAI OR EK SIDE ME KONE ME DONO KHADE HO JATE HAI ......
US SAKHS KA CHEHRA DEKH KAR ROCKY KE HOSH UD JATE HAI KYUKI......
ITNI SUNDER LADKI AJTAK USNE SIRF FILMO ME DEKHI THI YA YU KAHE KI YE UN HEROINS KO BHI SIDE ME RAKHDE ESI KHAUBSURAT THI ....
ROCKY KI TO PALKE BHI JAPAK NA BHUL GAI THI OR WO APNI BHUKH OR PYAS BHI BHUL GAYA THA OR JAISE WO PHIR SE BEHOSHI ME CHALA GAYA THA OR WO LADKI USE KUCH BOL RAHI THI WO BHI USE SUNAI NAHI DE RAHA THA
KYUKI AJ PEHLI BAR ASI KISI KHUBSURAT LADKI NE USKA HATH PAKDA THA USKA HEAR 120 KI SPEED SE DHADAK RHA THA
YE SAB HONA TO LAZMI THA KYUKI AJ PEHLIBAR JO AISA HUA THA
ROCKY SABKUCH BHUL HI CHUKA THA USE TAB HOSH AYA JAB US LADKI E PAKAD KAR USE HILAYA ....
ABHI TO YE PEHLA ZATKA THA JO USNE MEHSUS KIYA THA ABHI TO OR ZATKE USKO LAGNE WALE THE OR WO BHI BADE WALE..........
ABHI TO USNE LADKI KO PURA DEKHA BHI NAHI THA YE TO SIRF SURUAT THI ....
LADKI KE HILANE PAR WO HOSH ME ATA HAI .....
LADKI; KYA TUM THIK HO? KAHI PAR KISI NE KATA HAI? YA KAHI PAR KISI KE NAKHUN LAGE HAI ?
ROCKY;?????KYA
LADKI: BEHRE HO KYA
ROCKY: NAHI
LADKI: TO JO PUCHA HAI USKA JAWAB DO .
ROCKY: NA ME SAR HILA DETA HAI
USE KUCH BHI SAMAJ ME NAHI ATA KI KYA CHAL RAHA HAI
LADKI: ACHI BAT HA WARNA.......
ROCKY: HUH/?
LADKIUSKE KAPDE DEKH KAR ) TUM HOSPITAL ME ADMIT THE ? KYU?

ROCKY: USKE TO MUH SE SABD HI NAHI NIKAL RAHE THE WOTO SIRF SKE CHERE KO GHUR RAHA THAAA

LADKI: BOLO BHI

ROCKY: AAAAACCCIDENT
BAS ITNA HI BOL PATA HAI

LADKI : THIK HAI .KYA TUMHE PATA HAI YAHA KYA HO RAHA HAI ?
ROCKY? NA ME SAR HILA DETA HAI
LADKI : EK BIMARI FAIL RAHI HAI
JISKE CHALTE LOG PAGAL HO JAE HAI OR DUSRE KO KATNE KO DAUDTE HAI AUR AUSKA MNS KHATE HAI
OR MARE HUE PHIR SE JINDA HO JATE HAI OR CHALNE LAGTE HAI ....
ROCKY KITO GAND HI FAT JATI HAI YE SUNKE OR USE WO HOSPITAL KA SCENE YAD AA JATA HAI.....
TABHI ROCKY KE PET SE AWAZ ATI HAI GUDDD DGUUUUDDDDD
LADKI USE DEKHTI HAI
OR BOLTI HAI BHUKH LAGI HAI KYA ?
ROCKY HA ME SIR HILA DETA HAI ....
LADKI: AAO MERE SATH OR IDHER UDHAR BAHATKNA MAT
ROCKY HA ME SIR HILLA DETA HAI
OR JAB LADKI PALATTI HAI TO USKE BAL DKH KAR ROCKY KO PHIR SE ZATKA LAGTA HAI
USKE KALE LAMBE BALO ME KUCH SUNHRE RUNG SE RUNGE GAYE THE OR WO BAHOT HI KHUBSURAT LAGTE HAI
OR LAD KI JAB CHALTI HAI TAB WO LAHRATE HUE BAHOT HI KHUB SURAT DIKH RAHE HOTE HAI JISE DEKH ROCKY WAHI JAM JATA HAI ........

JAB USKI NAJAR THODI NICHE JUKHTI HAI TO USKA HEART DHBAKNA CHUK JATA HAI KYUKI CHALNE SE LADKI KI BADI GAND AISE THIRAKTI HAI KE ROCKY KA LUND EK ZATKE KE SATH KHADA HO JATA HAI .....

LADKI PICHE MUD KAR DEKHTI HAI OR ROCKY KO APNI GAND KO GHURTA PA KAR USE GUSE ME DEKHTI HAI OCKY FAURN HI APNI NAJAR HATA LETA HAI .....
AUR USKE PICHE CHALNE LAGTA HAI......


DATE ;09/02/2020
PLACE : NEAR INDIA CHINA BORDER SE 150 KM DUR IN CHINA
CHINA. KE EK HIDEEN LABPLACE ME EK FREZZING BODY RAKHI HUE THI OR USKE ASPAS 4 5 SCIENTIST KHADE THE
OR WO SAB US BODY PE JAME BARF KO PIGHLANE KAFAISLA KARE HAI ...

AP SAHI SOCH RAHEI HAI YE WAHI SPECIMEN HAI JO INHONE ANTARCTIC POL PAR DHUNDHA THA ...USKE BAD USE CHINA KE BANDA PAR LAYA GAY AUR USKE. BAD USKO EK KAHS TARAH KI LEB ME LAYA GAYA AUR USE RAKHA GAYA THA EK LAB ME IN SAB ME UNHE 9 DIN NIKAL CHUKE THE .........

SABHI SCINETIST US BODY KO DEKHNE KE LIYE OR USPE RESECH KARNE KE LIYE UTSAHIT THE....
DHIRE DHIRE BODY PAR RAHI BARFPIGHLAI JATI HAI OR AB BODY SAF SAF DEKHI JA SAKTI HAI ..AUR YR BODY KO DEKH KAR SABKO EK BADA ZATKA LAGTA HAI KYU KI.......

JO DEAD BODY PADI THI WO SPECIES HOMOERECUS THI .......
( HOMO ERECTUS EK SPSIES HAI JO MANUSYO KE ADI PURVAJ MANE JATE HAI
)
SABHI SCIENTIST PURI TARAH HERAT ME PAD GAYE THE KYU KI YE PEHLI BAR THA JAB KOI SPECIMMEN PRAPT HUA HO .
AJTAK JO BHI MILA THA WO SIRF HADI YO KA DHANCHA THA YA TO PHR HADIYOKE TUKDE HI MILE THE ....

YE PEHLI BAR THA JAB KOI MARA HUA YA TO SAHI SABUT MILA HO SABHI KO BAHUT HI JYADA HIRANI HUI PAR SABHI BAHOT KHUSH BHI THE KI WO PEHLI TEAM HAI JO YE DEKH RAHI HAI OR RESERCH KAR PA RAHI HAI KYU KI YE EK TOP SECRET PROJECT THA JISKE BARE ME KAFI KAM LOGO KO MALUM THA ......

KUCH SAMAY BAD SABHI TEAM MEMBER SUIT PEHEN KAR BODY PAR EXPERIMENT KARNE LAG JATE HAI ...

TABHI EK SCIENTIST SE GALTI HO JATI HAI .........

 

[Mohammadrafi]

UPDATE 6
DATE ;09/02/2020
PLACE NEAR INDOCHINA BORDER HIDEEN LEB

SABHI SCIENTIST KI TEAM SPECIMAN PAR EXPERIMENT KAR RAHE THE TABHI EK SCINTIST KE DWARA GALTI SE SPESIMEN KE NAKHUN SE SEMPALLETE SAMAY USKI BODY PAR HALKA SA CHED LAGJATA HAI OR USKI CHAMDI PAR HALKI SI HAROCH LAG JATI HAI .....

WO TURANT HI KISI KO BATAYE BAGER BAHAR NIKAL JATA HAI OR FORAN HI APNA GHAV KA TRETMANT KARTA HAI OR AISE HI WO BAHAR NIKAL JATA HAI ............
UNKI SIFT KA APNA AJJ KA KAM PURA HO GAYA THA TO SAB APNE APNE QUARTER ME CHALE JATE HAI OR SO JATE HAI

Agle din subah us vagyanik ki taibyat kuch thik nahi lag arahi thi use kafi pasina ho raha tha or sath hi sath ubkiya bhi aa rahi thi
Wo apna check up karvata hai or dawai le kar kam karne ke liye lab me chale jata hai ........
Dopeher ke bad jab wo kam kar raha hota hai tab achanak hi wo gir jata hai or beheosh ho jata hai uske sath kam kar rahe dusre sathi uske pas ate hai or use dekhne lagte hai......
Or tabhi wo achanak se uth ke bath jata hai or uske as pas rahe apne team ke logo ko katne lagta hai.........
Sabhi us se dar ke waha se bahar bhag ne lagte hai or wo unke piche jane lagta hai or jo bhi milta hai use katne lagta hai .........

Jab wo gate ke pas pahochte hai to security guard usko rokne ki kosis karte hai par wo unko bhi katne lagta hai ......

tabhi ek security wala use goli marta hai par wo goli lagne ke bawajood chalta rahta hai or usko atne lagta hai .........

thodi hi der me waha khoon hi khoon fail jata hai aur kuch ghanto bad jis jis ko usne kata tha wo bhi thik usiki tarah ban jate hai or dusro ko katne lagta hai ......


date 10/02/2020
place ; baijing

baijing ke ek under ground hall me filhal ek metting chal rahi thi jo kafi top secret lagrahi thi

wahha par miitry ke sabhi officers maojud the or sabke sab kisi gambhir mudde par charcha kar rahe the ........

unki charcha ka mudda or kuch ahi par wo fail rahi bimari tha or sab ko yahi sawal diya gaya tha ki us bimari ko failne se kaise roka jaye .......

sab apni apni ray dete hai or kafi charcha or behesh hotti hai or akhir me ye nirnay liya jata hai ki pure area ko quarntine kiya jaye or jitne bhi bimar hai unko mar diya jaye .....

ye kam militry ko soupne ka nirnay liya jata hai ......
fouran hi adesh jari kiye jate hai or militry ki 2 bataliyen pure areaa ko seal karne ke kam me lag jati hai ......
hawa me copper udte dikhai pad rahe the or wo sabhi sainiko ko niche utar rahe the .....
army fauran hi apna kam chalu kar deti hai ...par tab tak bahot der ho chuki hoti hai kyuki kuch bimar admi wo area se baahar chale gaye hote hai jabtak army aa kar morcha sambhalti hai ..........
isi wajah se 1 hi din me ye bimari adhe se jyada china me pahuch jati hai .......
is ghatna ko fauran hi rokneke liye natinal emergency ghosit kardiya jata hai or fauran hi ek sp team banaiye jati hai jo is bimari par sansodhan karne ke liye bola jata hai......

wo log fauran hi ek bimar admi ko pakadkar mangwate hai us par khojbin karne ke liye ........
pure china me national emergency lagu ho jati hai .......aur logo ko gharo ke bahar nikalne se mana kar diya jata hai ......

date; 10/02/2020
place; china nepal border
china nepal border se ek admi nepal me ghusta hai aur us ke kuch hi ghante bad pure nepal me hahakar mach jata hai

kyu ki wo nepal ghuspaith karne wala admi apne sath bimari le kar aya tha aur dekh te hi dekhte ye bimari pure nepal me fail jati hai or sth hi sath us ke as padose ke desh bhi bimari k chapet me aa jate hai .....

date 15/02/2020
china me bimari phele hue 4 din ho chuke the aur in kuch hi dino me bahot kuch badal gya tha ye bimari dekhte hi dekhte puri duniya me fail gayi thi ........
sayadhi koi desh aisa bacha ho jaha ye bimari na phaily ho ......
sabhi deso ki sarakar ne emergency ghosit karnese lekar army ko kaman sopne tak ke sabhi upay ajmaye hue the par koi bhi desh is bimari ko rokpane me ab tak safal nahi hua tha .....

 

[Naik]

Kahani tow badi hi hat k suru ki h aapne or bahot achcha likh rehe ho aap bas thoda spelling per tawjjo de tow or behter ho sakta h
Dekhte h yeh mara mari ka koyi desh tod nikal pata h ya fir yeh aise hi failta rahega
Badhiya shaandaar

 

[Mohammadrafi]

Thank you for your comment
Problem lies that i write through eng or direct in hindi but hinglish is bit difficult for me to write ...
But i try my best to correct it

Kahani tow badi hi hat k suru ki h aapne or bahot achcha likh rehe ho aap bas thoda spelling per tawjjo de tow or behter ho sakta h
Dekhte h yeh mara mari ka koyi desh tod nikal pata h ya fir yeh aise hi failta rahega
Badhiya shaandaar