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[Mohammadrafi]

Update 11

Kavya jab lakdi haatane ki liye use chhuti hai to uske niche se ek chuha bhag kar nikal ta hai aur kavya dar ke mare chilla kar kas kar rocky ke gale lag jati hai ……
Ye sab kuch itni haadbadahat aur jald bazi me hua tha ki kavya aur rocky dono ko hi kuch samaj me nahi aya ….

Par jab rocky koapne sine par halka dabav mehsus hua to uske lund ne foran hi ek zatka khaya aur tan kar khada ho gaya …rocky ko abhi bhi viswas nahi ho raha tha. Ki kavya uske gale lagi hui hai ……

यू ना अदाएं दिखाया करो , ……
दिल पर तीर इतने ना चलाया करो ….
यू ही करते रहे आबाद हमारे दिल को तो …..

हमे डर है कही दम तोड न दे तेरी बाहो में ……..

Kuch pal bad jab kavya ko ahesas hota hai to wo fauran piche hath jati hai aur apna muhh pher leti hai aur idhe udhar dekhne lagti hai …….
Rocky abh tak besudh sa putle ki bhati khada hoata hai …..
Kuch der bad jab wo hosh me ata hai to dkh ta haikavya waha nahi hai…..wo idhar udhar dekh ta hai to kavya bahar khadi hui dikhai deti hai …..

Is pal ke bad dono hi bat karne se katra rahe the par phir rocky ab thoda badal sa gaya tha to wo bat karna suru kaarta hai aur agge jalane ke bare me baat karta hai…..

Kavya usse puchti hai ke uske pas kya saman hai…..rocky apne pas jo samn tha wo kavya ko dikhkata hai…..par usme kuch bhi aisa nhai tha jisse agge jaliye ja sake …….
Wo saman kuch is tarah se tha ….pocket torch ,ek chota redio, ek mob phone jis me filhal koi network nahi tha ,pocke aur taurach ki extra bettries ..
Kavya idhe udher dekhti hai to use apne bag par metal ka zip najar ata hai to wo rocky ko wo nikal ne ke liye bolti hai …….

Rocky metal ki zip ko locket se nikal kar use deta hai tab kavya use kuch sukhe patte aur choti teheniya lane ko bolti hai …..

Rocky jab wo lakar rakh deta hai to kavy kuch patte utah tti hai aur matel ki zip ko batrries par rakh kar use patto se dhak deti hai kuch samay bad patto me se dhua nikal ta hai tab kavya use patto ke dher par rakh kar phookmarti hai jis se agge jal jati hai , ye dekh kar rocky heran reh jata hai……. Aur is tarah hasin andheri rat me dono ka pehla camp fire experience suru ho jata hai …..

ये राते ये मौसम नदीका किनारा…..
ये चंचल हवा……..
कहा दो दिलोने के मिल कर कभी हम ना होंगे जुदा………


Rocky ko samj nahi aa raha tha ki age jali kaise to wo kavya se puch ta hai …..kavya javab me batati hai jab battries ke dono chor yani positve or nagetive ko kisi metal se connect kiya jaye to wo gam ho jate hai aur isi garmi ka fayda uhakar kavya ne ye agge jalayi thi …….

Kavya puchti hai ki tumne ye school me ye nahi padha tha to rocky na me sir hila deta hai …. Dono idher udher ki bate karne ke bad ye tay karte hai ki kuch din wo yahi rukenge jab tak kavya ka dard thik nahi ho jata kyuki ye jagah unke lye safe bhi thi aur faydemand thi kyuki nadi passs me hone ki wajah se kavya ko kafi asani thi ……

Agli subah kavya rocky ke uthne se pehle hi nadi kinare chali jati hai aur nahakar wapis aa jati hai ….rocky subah dri se uth kar nadi kinare jata hai aur machliya dekh kar uska ji lalcha jata hai aur wo tai karta hai ki kisi tarah ajj wo machli pakdega…….

Wo kinare par baith kar sochta hai o use movi ka scene yad aa jata hai….wo fauran ek ladi ka danda tod kar lata hai aur usse machliyo ko marne ka prayas karta hai…..
Bahot dair pani me hath pair aur danda marne ke baad bhi wo ek machli nahi mar pata hai ……

Kavya ke pass bhi kuch kam to tha nahi to wo bhi baith kar ye khel dekh kar maze le rahi thi …….
Akhir kar rocky thak kar kinare par baith jata hai to kavya waha ati hai aur usse kehti hai ki machliya nahi mar sakte o nadi kinare pade pathhar ke ass pass dekho sayad umhe kuch kekde ya koi aur jiv mil jaye …..

Rocky kuch der baad kinare pade pattharo ko utha kar dekh ne lagta hai to kuch der bad usko 4 5 kekde mil jate hai ….. wo khus ho jata hai aur kavya se sawal karta hai ki tumhe ye sb kaise malum hai to kavya batati hai ki wo wild life show dekhti thi jisme jisme jungle me rehne aur survival ke bare me bataya jata hai ……tarkibe sikhyi jati hai ……..

Rocky apni t sirt utar kar kekdo ko usme jama karne lagta hai …tab kavya ki najar uski body par padi hai …body ka shape kuch jyada khas to nahi tha magar thik thak dikh rahi thi ….
Rocky kavya ko tairna sikhane ke bare me bolta hai par kavya bat ko tal deti hai ……

Dono kekdo ko lekar zopdi ka pass aa jate hai par unke samne dikkat ye thi ki kekdo ko pakaya kaise jaye …kyuki unke pass koi aisa bartan nahi tha jisme wo khana paaka sake ……
Rocky zopdi me ass pass idher udher dekhta hai to ek tuta hua mitti ka bartan dikhai deta hai..
Wo use utha kar kavya ke pass lake rakh deta hai ….
Kavya bartan kodekh ti hai to use lagta hai ki khana pakaya ja sakta hai to wo rocky ko pani bharne ke liye bol deti hai …
3 patharo ko apass me najdik rakh kar ek dehati chulha bana leti hai aur us par bartan rakh deti hai ..
Wo kekde ka soup banane ka faisla karti hai kyu ki itne kam kekdo me aur kuch pakana na mumkin tha so wo kekdo ko kutdeti hai barrtan me aur pani dall kar soup bana leti hai…..
Au khane ka to koi saman tha nahi to kuch der thanda ho jane ke baad kapde se chaan kar bottle me bhar kar thoda thoda karke pee jate hai…swad to kuch badhiya tha nahi par dono ko kuch khane ko mila tha uskika santosh hua …

Dusri aur 2 ladkiya kisi tarah bachte bachate seher se thodi dur aa chuki thi dono bahot hi dari hui lag rahi thi ,bhookh aur pyass se dono ki halat kharab ho chali thi dono hi khana dhundh ne ke liye ek store ke pas chip kar khade rehte hai aur idhar udhar dekh kar store ke ander jane ka faisla karte hai ….dono dare dare se sander jaaati hai aur khane ka saman dhundh ne lagjati hai ….
Kuch hi lamho me dono ke hath me jo bhi ata hai wo le kar bahar nikal ne lagti hai tabbhi darwaze par ek zombii unki taraf badhratha jo unhone ander aate waqt nahi dekha tha aur eo unke pihe piche darwaze thak aa cuka tha wo do no darr jati hai kyuki wo ab fas chuk thi wo bahar nahi jaa sakti thi jab wo zombii unki or age badh e hi wala tha ki tbahi ……

Shannnnnnn… karti hui ek goli us zombi ke sir ke arr parr nikal jati hai aur wo wahi gir jatahai
Dono ye dekh kar chauk jati hai aur ek dusreki aur dekhne lagti hai ……

Samne ek ladki hath me banduk liye khadi thi aur dono ko apni aur ane ka ishara kar rahi thi …..
Kuch pal me dono ko hosh ata hai aur wo dono us ladki ki aur badhti hai ……..
Dono usko thanks bolti hai aur uaka nam puchti hai …..
Wo ladki apna nam kiran batati hai….aur dono ko apne sath ape ka bol kar chalne lagti hai ……
Kuch pal bad wo ek chote se police station ke pass pahoch jatai hai …dono ko kiran batati hai ki wo ek police officer hai aur fill hall wo hi yaha par mojud hai ….
Wo apni hath me rakhi badi bandook ko tbale par rakh deti hai aur dono ko baih ne ke liye bolti hai ….
Doko ko baitha kar wo dono se bat karne lagati sur kiran kuch sawal the jo dono ko puchti hai ……
Kuch der bad kiran ki bat sunkara dono ko yakin nahi ho raha tha par jo batie kiran ne batayi thi wo sach thi ….

Kiran ko redio par mile sandeso ke mutabik wo jaha par the waha bhi bomb giraye jane wale the to wo waha se nikal jane ki taiyari me hi thi kiran ko ye dono ladkiya mil jati hai…..

Kiran dono ladkiyo ko bhi apne sath chalne ko bolti hai aur dono ladkiya man jati hai …..

Kiran ek beg me apna samn bharti hai jisme jyada tar banook ki goliya thi …wo dono ko ek police wala danda deti hai aur sikhai hai ki sidha sir par war karna hai …… aur tino nikaljate hai apni anjaan manzil ki aur……..

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Update 11

Kavya jab lakdi haatane ki liye use chhuti hai to uske niche se ek chuha bhag kar nikal ta hai aur kavya dar ke mare chilla kar kas kar rocky ke gale lag jati hai ……
Ye sab kuch itni haadbadahat aur jald bazi me hua tha ki kavya aur rocky dono ko hi kuch samaj me nahi aya ….

Par jab rocky koapne sine par halka dabav mehsus hua to uske lund ne foran hi ek zatka khaya aur tan kar khada ho gaya …rocky ko abhi bhi viswas nahi ho raha tha. Ki kavya uske gale lagi hui hai ……

यू ना अदाएं दिखाया करो , ……
दिल पर तीर इतने ना चलाया करो ….
यू ही करते रहे आबाद हमारे दिल को तो …..

हमे डर है कही दम तोड न दे तेरी बाहो में ……..

Kuch pal bad jab kavya ko ahesas hota hai to wo fauran piche hath jati hai aur apna muhh pher leti hai aur idhe udhar dekhne lagti hai …….
Rocky abh tak besudh sa putle ki bhati khada hoata hai …..
Kuch der bad jab wo hosh me ata hai to dkh ta haikavya waha nahi hai…..wo idhar udhar dekh ta hai to kavya bahar khadi hui dikhai deti hai …..

Is pal ke bad dono hi bat karne se katra rahe the par phir rocky ab thoda badal sa gaya tha to wo bat karna suru kaarta hai aur agge jalane ke bare me baat karta hai…..

Kavya usse puchti hai ke uske pas kya saman hai…..rocky apne pas jo samn tha wo kavya ko dikhkata hai…..par usme kuch bhi aisa nhai tha jisse agge jaliye ja sake …….
Wo saman kuch is tarah se tha ….pocket torch ,ek chota redio, ek mob phone jis me filhal koi network nahi tha ,pocke aur taurach ki extra bettries ..
Kavya idhe udher dekhti hai to use apne bag par metal ka zip najar ata hai to wo rocky ko wo nikal ne ke liye bolti hai …….

Rocky metal ki zip ko locket se nikal kar use deta hai tab kavya use kuch sukhe patte aur choti teheniya lane ko bolti hai …..

Rocky jab wo lakar rakh deta hai to kavy kuch patte utah tti hai aur matel ki zip ko batrries par rakh kar use patto se dhak deti hai kuch samay bad patto me se dhua nikal ta hai tab kavya use patto ke dher par rakh kar phookmarti hai jis se agge jal jati hai , ye dekh kar rocky heran reh jata hai……. Aur is tarah hasin andheri rat me dono ka pehla camp fire experience suru ho jata hai …..

ये राते ये मौसम नदीका किनारा…..
ये चंचल हवा……..
कहा दो दिलोने के मिल कर कभी हम ना होंगे जुदा………


Rocky ko samj nahi aa raha tha ki age jali kaise to wo kavya se puch ta hai …..kavya javab me batati hai jab battries ke dono chor yani positve or nagetive ko kisi metal se connect kiya jaye to wo gam ho jate hai aur isi garmi ka fayda uhakar kavya ne ye agge jalayi thi …….

Kavya puchti hai ki tumne ye school me ye nahi padha tha to rocky na me sir hila deta hai …. Dono idher udher ki bate karne ke bad ye tay karte hai ki kuch din wo yahi rukenge jab tak kavya ka dard thik nahi ho jata kyuki ye jagah unke lye safe bhi thi aur faydemand thi kyuki nadi passs me hone ki wajah se kavya ko kafi asani thi ……

Agli subah kavya rocky ke uthne se pehle hi nadi kinare chali jati hai aur nahakar wapis aa jati hai ….rocky subah dri se uth kar nadi kinare jata hai aur machliya dekh kar uska ji lalcha jata hai aur wo tai karta hai ki kisi tarah ajj wo machli pakdega…….

Wo kinare par baith kar sochta hai o use movi ka scene yad aa jata hai….wo fauran ek ladi ka danda tod kar lata hai aur usse machliyo ko marne ka prayas karta hai…..
Bahot dair pani me hath pair aur danda marne ke baad bhi wo ek machli nahi mar pata hai ……

Kavya ke pass bhi kuch kam to tha nahi to wo bhi baith kar ye khel dekh kar maze le rahi thi …….
Akhir kar rocky thak kar kinare par baith jata hai to kavya waha ati hai aur usse kehti hai ki machliya nahi mar sakte o nadi kinare pade pathhar ke ass pass dekho sayad umhe kuch kekde ya koi aur jiv mil jaye …..

Rocky kuch der baad kinare pade pattharo ko utha kar dekh ne lagta hai to kuch der bad usko 4 5 kekde mil jate hai ….. wo khus ho jata hai aur kavya se sawal karta hai ki tumhe ye sb kaise malum hai to kavya batati hai ki wo wild life show dekhti thi jisme jisme jungle me rehne aur survival ke bare me bataya jata hai ……tarkibe sikhyi jati hai ……..

Rocky apni t sirt utar kar kekdo ko usme jama karne lagta hai …tab kavya ki najar uski body par padi hai …body ka shape kuch jyada khas to nahi tha magar thik thak dikh rahi thi ….
Rocky kavya ko tairna sikhane ke bare me bolta hai par kavya bat ko tal deti hai ……

Dono kekdo ko lekar zopdi ka pass aa jate hai par unke samne dikkat ye thi ki kekdo ko pakaya kaise jaye …kyuki unke pass koi aisa bartan nahi tha jisme wo khana paaka sake ……
Rocky zopdi me ass pass idher udher dekhta hai to ek tuta hua mitti ka bartan dikhai deta hai..
Wo use utha kar kavya ke pass lake rakh deta hai ….
Kavya bartan kodekh ti hai to use lagta hai ki khana pakaya ja sakta hai to wo rocky ko pani bharne ke liye bol deti hai …
3 patharo ko apass me najdik rakh kar ek dehati chulha bana leti hai aur us par bartan rakh deti hai ..
Wo kekde ka soup banane ka faisla karti hai kyu ki itne kam kekdo me aur kuch pakana na mumkin tha so wo kekdo ko kutdeti hai barrtan me aur pani dall kar soup bana leti hai…..
Au khane ka to koi saman tha nahi to kuch der thanda ho jane ke baad kapde se chaan kar bottle me bhar kar thoda thoda karke pee jate hai…swad to kuch badhiya tha nahi par dono ko kuch khane ko mila tha uskika santosh hua …

Dusri aur 2 ladkiya kisi tarah bachte bachate seher se thodi dur aa chuki thi dono bahot hi dari hui lag rahi thi ,bhookh aur pyass se dono ki halat kharab ho chali thi dono hi khana dhundh ne ke liye ek store ke pas chip kar khade rehte hai aur idhar udhar dekh kar store ke ander jane ka faisla karte hai ….dono dare dare se sander jaaati hai aur khane ka saman dhundh ne lagjati hai ….
Kuch hi lamho me dono ke hath me jo bhi ata hai wo le kar bahar nikal ne lagti hai tabbhi darwaze par ek zombii unki taraf badhratha jo unhone ander aate waqt nahi dekha tha aur eo unke pihe piche darwaze thak aa cuka tha wo do no darr jati hai kyuki wo ab fas chuk thi wo bahar nahi jaa sakti thi jab wo zombii unki or age badh e hi wala tha ki tbahi ……

Shannnnnnn… karti hui ek goli us zombi ke sir ke arr parr nikal jati hai aur wo wahi gir jatahai
Dono ye dekh kar chauk jati hai aur ek dusreki aur dekhne lagti hai ……

Samne ek ladki hath me banduk liye khadi thi aur dono ko apni aur ane ka ishara kar rahi thi …..
Kuch pal me dono ko hosh ata hai aur wo dono us ladki ki aur badhti hai ……..
Dono usko thanks bolti hai aur uaka nam puchti hai …..
Wo ladki apna nam kiran batati hai….aur dono ko apne sath ape ka bol kar chalne lagti hai ……
Kuch pal bad wo ek chote se police station ke pass pahoch jatai hai …dono ko kiran batati hai ki wo ek police officer hai aur fill hall wo hi yaha par mojud hai ….
Wo apni hath me rakhi badi bandook ko tbale par rakh deti hai aur dono ko baih ne ke liye bolti hai ….
Doko ko baitha kar wo dono se bat karne lagati sur kiran kuch sawal the jo dono ko puchti hai ……
Kuch der bad kiran ki bat sunkara dono ko yakin nahi ho raha tha par jo batie kiran ne batayi thi wo sach thi ….

Kiran ko redio par mile sandeso ke mutabik wo jaha par the waha bhi bomb giraye jane wale the to wo waha se nikal jane ki taiyari me hi thi kiran ko ye dono ladkiya mil jati hai…..

Kiran dono ladkiyo ko bhi apne sath chalne ko bolti hai aur dono ladkiya man jati hai …..

Kiran ek beg me apna samn bharti hai jisme jyada tar banook ki goliya thi …wo dono ko ek police wala danda deti hai aur sikhai hai ki sidha sir par war karna hai …… aur tino nikaljate hai apni anjaan manzil ki aur……..

fantastic update bhai

 

[Smith_15]

Awesome fantastic wow amazing

Rafi bhai 11 Update mein aapne (Update 2 ko do baar repeat kiya hai.
Update 12 Please

 

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