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Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

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hawa me kabhi me use marta to kabhi vo mujhe maarta.



Tabhi vikraal ko ek badi si buiding dikhi.



Or usne ek bahut hi kameeni smile mujhe di me samajh gya ki kya hone wala hai.



Vikraal mujhe hawa se seedhe neeche ki taraf le jaane laga super fast speed se. Or usne apna pura jor lagaya or mujhe jor se building ki chhat per giraya mera force jyada tha isliye me chhat ko todta hua next floor per pahucha tabhi vikraal fir se neeche aaya achhi speed se or vo mujhe neeche ki taraf dhakelne laga or ham dono hi us building ki chhato ko todte hue jameen ki taraf jaane lage. Me neeche side tha isliye isliye mere sare anjar panjar dheele ho gye the. Bahi building me moujud log hame aise dekhke bhagne lage the or kaafi dar bhi gye the. Unhe laga jaise koi hollywood movie ki shooting chal rahi hai. Lekin ye haqikat thi.





Building karib 25 floor ki hogi or hamne puri building me ek bada sa chhed kar diya tha.





Ham jameen per pahuche me abhi bhi leta hua tha. Vikraal mere uper se khada hua or apne dono hatho se khatarnaak power generat karne laga or jab vo power mujhse takrai to charo taraf bhayankar ujala fail gya.



Mujhe mere body per uski jalan mehsus hone lagi thi. Matlab saaf tha ki mera suit isko jhel nahi pa raha hai.






Or vakai me mere suit ke chhithde ud gaye the. Mujhe kuch samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye akhir hi kya raha hai or isse me kaise bachu. Kya karu kya nhi. Tabhi mujhe pathar ki yaad aai. Or maine unse vinti ki.




Maine apne hatho ko joda or pathar se kaha.




Main- he paras pathar is dust ki powers se meri raksha kare




Mere itna bolte hi mere charo taraf ek suraksha kavach ban gya or vo itna majbut tha ki vikraal ki shaktiya use nahi bhed pa rahi thi.




Or ye dekhke vo or chid gya. Or vo mere karib aaya. Meri haalat abhi bhi kharab thi. Or vikraal ne jaise hi apni power ka istemaal band kiya baise hi vo kavach apne aap mit gya. Usne mujhe hawa me utha liya meri garden ko daba liya. Or usne mere saare jeb check kiye or use vo pathar mil gya. Jaise hi usne use pakadne ki kosis ki baise hi meri aankhe ikdum se khuli or maine ek jordaar last uske seene me maari jisse vo thodi dur ja gira. Vo puri tarah hill gya is war se. Or vo uthta usse pehle hi maine uske pass gya or uske muh per punches ki barsaat kar di. Vo bhi super fast speed se. Aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi bade engine ka turbine super fast speed se chal raha ho. Vikral puri tarah se nidhal sa hone laga tha bahi maine apne punches ko roka or use hawa me uthaya or jor se jameen per patak diya. Fir se uthaya or is war apne ghutno per patka aisa maine 6-7 waar usko apne ghutne per patka vo bhi jor se. Taaki uski haadi tut jaaye lekin jaise hi uski haadi tut jaati agle hi pal vapis se jud jaati.



Bahi usne iska fayeda uthaya or apne panje ko mere seene me ghusa diya full power se. Power kuch jyada hi thi hath me uske. Kyuki uska hath mere seene ke aarpaar nikal gya tha. Ye achha hua ki mera dill uske hatho me nhi aaya tha Verna pakka vo uska kachumbar nikaal deta. Me jinda tha lekin meri haalat kharab thi. Usne is mouke ka fayeda uthaya or meri jeb se pathar nikaal liya.





Raat ho chuki thi charo taraf andhera chaya hua tha or building ke log dur se hamari ladai ko dekh rahe the baha per police bhi aachuki thi. Unhone apni gun vikraal ke uper taan rakhi thi.





P1- usko chhodo or apne dono hatho ko uper karo Verna ham goli chalane ko majbur ho jayenge.






Vikraal- tumhari ye goliyan mera kuch nhi bigaad sakti isliye kosis bhi mat karna. Jisko apni jaan pyari hai nikal jaaye yaha se Verna lasho ke dher laga dunga me.





Ye sunte hi logo me bhagdad machane lagi kyuki vo dekh or samajh chuke the ki ye koi mamuli insan nahi hai



Bahi police ne last warning di or jab uska bhi koi asar usper nahi hua to unhone firing shuru kar di. Lekin jaisa usne kaha tha uske uper koi asar nhi hua goliyo ka. Balki mujhe kaafi goliya lag rahi thi. Lekin mere ghav abhi bhi bhar rahe the isliye me bhi normal tha.






Goliyo ki aawaj se vo kaafi pareshan ho raha tha isliye usne mujhe ek side ko fel diya. Or apne dono hatho se energy ko release kiya or aisa karte hi baha per jitne bhi log the fir chahe vo police wale ho ya normal log sab ke sab ek hi jhatke me khak ban gye. Ye seen kuch logo ne dur se dekh liya or baha se bhag gye. Unhe samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki is musibat ka saamna kaise kare.




Aisa karne ke baad vo fir se meri taraf aane laga mujhe maarne ke liye kyuki paras pathar uske hath already lag chuka tha ab bas mera khatma hi bacha tha uske liye.





Vikraal- surya ab kya karoge. Pathar mere pass hai tumhari haalat hi bata rahi hai ki tumhari kitni buri tarah se haar hui hai. Ab bas tumhara marna hi baaki hai.






Main- itni jaldi kya hai vikraal. Me itni jaldi haar manne walo me se nhi hu. Or fight abhi baaki hai mere dushman.




Ye kehke me ek dum se utha




Ye dekhke vo hansa or usne bina koi der kiye firse mujhper hamla kar diya apni powers se. In sab powers ke istemaal se ek cheez hi mere favour me hui thi jis per mera dhyan abhi gya tha. Mera arc reactor. Jo puri tarah se fully charged ho gya tha or ab bas uski powers dikhane ki hi deri thi. Isliye maine bhi bina der kiye apni powers ko khola apni speed ko Bapis liya or bijli ka ek jor ka jhatka vikraal ko mara jisse vo udta hua dur ja gira or building ke 2-3 pilers tut gye. Jisse puri ki puri building ek dum se neeche girne lagi. Ye dekhke me bahar ki taraf bhagne laga lekin bhag nahi saka kyuki mere pair puri tarah se jam gye the. Or ye kaam vikraal ka hi tha. Or aisa hote hi puri ki puri building mere uper dhadam se gir padi. Or me uske malve ke neeche dab gya. Mere hath free the isliye maine apne hatho se jitne ho sake utne pathari ko apne uper girne nhi diya lekin fir bhi kaafi mere uper the. Jinhe me ek ek karke apne uper se hatane ki kosis kar raha tha. Tabhi ek jor daar dhamaka hua jisme un patharo ke sath me bhi udta hua dur ja gira.




Bahi vikraal is waqt jor jor se has raha tha meri haalat per.




Vikraal- dekho surya tabahi ka manjar dekho.




Ye kehkar usne apni powers ka istemaal shuru kiya or mumbai ke samandar me ek bahut hi bada babandar bana diya uska size itna bada tha ki puri ki puri mumbai iski chapet me aajayegi or koi kuch nhi kar payega. Or hua bhi aisa hi. Vo babandar tezi se city ko taraf badhne laga or bahi jin logo ne ye najara dekha vo turant hi kisi na kisi safe jagah bhagne lage.




Vo babandar jaise hi city me enter hua usne apni tabahi machana shuru kar diya. Badi se badi building pal bhar me jameen me samaye ja rahi thi. Jo bhi log uski chapet me aate vo usi me fase reh jaate or gol gol ghumte rehte mumbai me baad jaise haalat hone lage the. Ghar tutne lage the.log marne lage the. Or agar ise jaldi hi roka nahi gya to ye puri ki puri city ko hi kha jayega.



Bahi mere hatho se paras pathar ja chuka tha. Meri chhati me bada hole tha jo bhar gya tha. Mera dimaag or kaan puri tarah se sunn the. Jo dheere dheere theek ho rahe the. Mere kapde almost fat chuke the. Bas thode thode hisse me hi kapde bache hue the. Meri aisi haalat thi ki raste ka bhikhari bhi sharma jaaye.



Khair maine kisi tarah khud ko sambhala or apni watch se dusra suit open kiya. Apne hatho me sword li. Or vikraal ko lalkara.





Meri aawaj sunke usne pechhe dekha or agle hi pal uski mundi jameen per padi hui thi jaise hi vo jameen per giri maine apna apna pura bajan rakha usper or uski mundi bahi fat gyi. Isi pal ka fayeda utha kar maine uske hatho se pathar Bapis le liya.


Bahi mujhe laga tha ki ye jaldi hi theek hoke fir se khada ho jayega lekin aisa kuch bhi nhi hua or ye dekhkar me kaafi hairan tha. Bahi is vikaral ke marte hi vo babandar apne aap shant ho gya. Lekin jab vo shant hua to aadhi se jyada mumbai tabah ho gyi thi. Jisko fir se banane me hi kai mahine lag jaane the. Isliye maine socha kyuna paras pathar ka istemaal karke ye sab theek karne ki kosis karu.



Or aisa sochte hi pata nahi mujhe kya hua main kuch karta ya us pathar ka istemaal karta usse pehle hi main garden se leke neeche pairo tak pura pathar ka ban gya. Mera sirf sir hi bacha hua tha. Or uske baad mere peeche se ek aurat mere saamne aai.






Mera naam chhaya hai or agar tumne iska istemaal karne ki kosis bhi ki to tumhare ghar ki sari aurate maari jayengi. Or iska me pura intjaam karke aai hu. Chahe to pata kar lo.




Maine turant hi Harry se contact kiya.




Harry- sir hamare pure ghar me bhayankar aag lagi hui hai. Or saari ledies gayab hai mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aaraha hai ki kya ho raha hai aap pls jaldi aaiye.



Ye kehte hi line kat gyi.





Chhaya- sun liya. Ab achhe bache ki tarah vo pathar mere hawale kar do.






Main- tum ho kon.






Chhaya- me chhaya hu vikraal ki hamsafar. Or jisko tumne mara hai ye meri hi banai hui ek parchhai hai vikraal ki. Na ko asli vikraal hai ye. Or isi tarah tumhare pure ghar ko khak me milane me bhi mera hi hath hai ghar ki sari ledies ko maine gayab kar diya hai.








Ye sunte hi me ek d shock tha ki kya karu me.




Main- tum mujhse ye le sakti ho lekin mujhe mera pura parivar surakshit chahiye







Chhaya- theek hai.





Ye kehkar usne ek chutki bajai or baha le ghar me sab pehle jaisa hi normal ho gya. Vo bas ek hologram jaisa tha jise chhaya ne banaya tha. Lekin itna real tha ki Harry bhi nhi samajh paya ki ye asli hai ya nakli.




Bahi turant hi harry ka call aaya or usne sabke theek hone ki news mujhe di jise sunke mujhe chain mila. Uske baad usne mere hath se vo pathar utha liya. Halaki vo chahti to pehle bhi utha sakti thi lekin aisa karne per me apne man me pathar se isko khatam karne ka leh deta or pal bhar me ye bahi khak ho jaati isliye isne pehle mujhse deal ki fir pathar mujhse liya. Or agle hi pal vo baha se gayab ho gyi or uske jaate hi me puri tarah se normal ho gya or bahi jameen per apna sir pakad kar baith gya. Kyuki aaj pehli baar mujhe itni badi haar mili thi.








Bahi dusri taraf kaya or vanraj me bhi khatarnaak ladai hui. Aaspass ke kaafi ghar un dono ne mita diye.




Lekin akhir me kaya ne vanraj ki haalat bhi down kar hi di thi. Lekin vanraj ke pass jabardast healing power thi jisse vo khudko or dusro ko bhi theek kar sakta tha. Jaise usne apni wife ko kiya tha.



Isiliye vo abhi tak bacha hua tha



Bahi yaha se chaya ke gayab hote hi baha per kaya bhi gayab ho gyi. Or me or vanraj dono hi bas dekhte reh gye. Or sochne lage ki ab kya kiya jaaye.








Bahi maine sabse pehle vanraj ke pass jaane ka faisla kiya. Or main baha se doud gya vanraj ke ghar ki taraf. Jab me baha pahucha to baha ki haalat dekhte hi samajh me aagya ki yaha kya hua hoga. Maine vanraj ko dhunda vo ek jagah bilkul shant baitha hua tha.





Main- vanraj.




Ye aawaj sunte hi usne uper dekha or mujhe dekhte hi fir se apna sir jhuka liya.





Vanraj- sorry surya mujhe maaf kar dena. Maine tumhe dhoka diya.






Main- koi baat nhi. Tumne kin halato ye kadam uthaya tha mujhe achhe se pata hai. Isliye chinta mat karo. Tumhari jagah me hota to me bhi yahi karta.







Vanraj- thanks mujhe samajhne ke liye. Baise vikraal kaha hai or vo pathar.






Main- vo jo vikraal tha vo bas uski ek perchhai bhar thi. Jisne aadhe se jyada mumbai tabah kar diya. Halaki vo mara gya hai. Lekin pathar ab hamare pass nhi hai. Or iska matlab saaf hai ki ab hamara saamna jald hi black heart se hone wala hai. Ham use rokne me nakamyab rahe.






Vanraj- shit. Saari mehnat bekaar ho gyi. Ab kya karenge ham. Jara socho jab vikraal akela ham per itna bhari pada hai to jab black heart or uske baaki ke sathi yaha aayenge tab kitni tabahi machegi.







Main- me jaanta hu. Or samajhta bhi hu ki aage kya hone wala hai. Or sach kahu to is ladai me hamare jeetne ke percentage 0.1% se bhi kam hai. Lekin fir bhi hame ladna to padega hi.









Vanraj- tumhara kehna sahi hai. Hame ladna to padega hi. Baise kyuna ham time travel karke fir se inhe rok le.







Main- ham aisa kar sakte hai. Or karna hi padega. Hame kisi tarah tumhare pathar churane se pehle hi pathar ko hasil karna hoga or fir in teeno ka ant karna hoga. Tabhi hamari jeet pakki ho sakti hai. Or ham black heart ko jinda hone se rok sakte hai.







Vanraj- to fir der kis baat ki hai.






Main- mujhe bas thoda sa doubt ho raha hai or kuch nhi.




Vanraj- kaisa doubt.





Main- kahi vikraal bhi past me na pahuch jaaye hame rokne ke liye. Kyuki agar vo baha gya to jabardast kand kar dega. Or uska natija kuch bhi nikal sakta hai.







Vanraj- hone ko to kuch bhi ho sakta hai. Lekin hame kosis to karni hi hogi fir chahe anjaam jo bhi ho.






Main- sahi kaha chalo theek hai chalte hai kahi khali jagah per.






Vanraj- ok.





Ye kehkar ham log mumbai ke airport per gye. Jaha Harry hamara jet leke ready tha or ham udne ke liye ready the.








Baaki ab dekhiye next update me ki kya hota hai aage chalke kya vakai me ye rok payenge vikraal ko ya yaha bhi inki band bajegi.



Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.
















To be continue……………………….
Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
 

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ye bhi sahi hai
superb update
super action update
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Waiting for next
Fantastic update bhai
Fabulous update
Fantastic update



Thanks bhai log apna sath aise hi banaye rakhe..


Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Aaj dekhiye kya karte hai dono surya or vanraj kya rok payenge vikraal ko dono janne ke liye sath bane rahe.






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Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
Behad shaandaar zaberdast lajawab update bhai


Thanks bhai apna sath aise hi banaye rakhe. Aaj ke update me dekhiye ki kya ye dono time travel kar paate hai ya fir se koi nai musibat se bhid jaate hai kya hota hai aage janne ke liye sath bane rahe.





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Behtrin update to ek baar firse paras patthar surya ke hatho se chla gya aur wo firse time travel krke use hasil krna chahta h...dekhte h ye daav kitna sahi baith pata h....kyuki sayd vikraal ne bhi kuchh to plan kiya hi hoga ki iss baar usse ye patthar dobara na kho jaaye...agr aisa hua to uska ant nischit h sath me black heart ke jinda hone ki ummeed bhi khtm....ab dekhna ye hoga ki surya black heart ko jinda hone se rok pata h ya fir black heart se aamna samna hokr rhega...uss waqt bahut hahakar machne wala h aur sayd Dev ki entry ka bhi waqt ho chla h...kyuki ab ye ldai srf bahubal aur deemag ki hi nhi reh gyi h....ab uske dev ki shaktiyo ki madad bhi lgne wali h kyuki ab jo dushman samne aane wale h wo bahut hi khatarnaak aur shaktishali honge jinke samna krne ke liye dev ka hona jruri hoga baaki sab surya sambhaal hi lega bss dev thodi si help krde uski....so waiting for next brother👏👏👏👏🗡


Ha bhai aapka kehna sahi hai. Powers ka khel shuru ho gya hai. Or ab sirf doudne se kaam nahi chalne wala surya ka. Use kuch khatarnaak powers ki jarurat padegi jisse vo sabka khatma kar sake. Ab ye use milti bhi hai ya nhi janne ke liye sath bane rahe.





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Nice update
Behtareen update bhai 👌
Wao again time travel
Ek baat h villian bilkul takkar ke dikhaye h maza agaya


Thanks bhai log apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye.


Aaj ke update me dekhiye ki ye dono time travel fir se kar paate hai ya nhi. Or vikraal inke is prayas ke liye kya karta hai kaise inhe rokega. Kya hota hai janne ke liye sath bane rahe.




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Awesome Update

Toh Surya aur Vikraal ki mulakaat ho hi gayi. Par Vikraal ki dusri biwi kaha hai usko kaha bheja gaya hai.

Aur Vanraj ne apni biwi ko Surya ke bachho ke paas chora. Kahi unke liye khatra naa hojaaye. Hosakta hai Chaya unpe nazar rakhe ho.
Awesome Update


Toh yeh thi Surya ki pehli haar. Jisme woh haara aur pathar bhi chala gaya aur aadhi mumbai bhi tabah hogyi.

Isbaar bada jhatka laga Surya ko. Dekhte hai Surya iss jhatke se kaise nikalta hai. Kyaa woh wapas pathar hasil kar payega. Yaa black heart jinda hojayega.

Black heart ka naam starting se hai. Woh zinda toh hoga hi. Par kya itni jaldi. Aur agar woh zinda hota hai toh kya Dev aur uski patniyan aayengi. Kyaa wapas Divyastra ek hogaa.

Yeh dekhna kaafi interesting rahega. Dekhte hai aapke dimaag mein kya chal raha hai.


Ha bhai sawal bahut sare aane wale hai. Or jawab sirf itna hi hai ki intjar kare. Baaki dev ki entry to tay hai lekin ye kab hoga ye confirm nhi hai. Bahi rahi baat divyastra ki dekhte hai kya karta hai dev. Or sabse Imp surya ab kya karega inhe rokne ke liye.






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Ham log plane me baithe hue the lekin ek dusre se baat bhi nhi kar rahe the. Balki apni apni socho me gum the. Mere dimaag me kai tarah ke khayal aaraye the. Lekin sab be matlab ke the. Or yahi haal vanraj ka bhi tha.







Bahi dusri tarah vikraal hame lagataar dekh raha tha. Use bhi pata chal gya tha ki ham kya soch rahe hai or kaha ja rahe hai. Isliye vo hame rokne ke liye counter plan bana raha tha.






Abhi ham apnianjil se kaafi dur the. Tabhi achanak se mousam me kaafi badlaav hone laga. Hamare plane ko bijli ke jhatke lagne lage.





Main- kya ho raha hai Harry.





Harry- sir achanak se mousam kharab ho gya hai ghabrane ki baat nhi hai.






Main- badiya hai. Jaldi chalo.




Harry- ok sir.





Abhi maine itna hi bola tha ki pata nhi kya hua. Hamare plane se kuch takraya. Or uske takrate hi plane me bahut hi bada dhamaka ho gya. Hame kuch bhi samajh me nhi aaya ki kya hua kaise hua. Or ab haalat ye thi ki ham jameen per girte hue ja rahe the kisi par kate pakchhi ki tarah. Or ham dono hi hosh me nahi the hamari aankhe band thi. Or itni unchai se girne ke baad hamare hath pair na tute ye to sambhav hi nhi tha. Bhale hi ham mare na lekin nuksaan to kaafi hone wala tha.





Or yahi sab sochate hue ham dono jameen per dhadaam se gire. Or girte hi ham dono ko hosh aagya or hosh ke sath hame hua bhayankar dard ka aabhash. Itna ki mar hi jaate to badiya rehta. Or dard kuch jyada hi tha isliye ham fir se behosh ho gye.





Ham kaha the kaha nhi kuch pata nhi tha hame.








Bahi dusri taraf vikraal ne black heart ko jinda karne ka process raat me hi shuru kar diya tha. Uski body ko recover karke uske mathe per paras pathar ko rakh diya tha or usse black heart ko jinda karne ka aavahan bhi kar diya tha. Or vo pathar apne kaam me bhi lag chuka tha. Vikraal or kaya dono hi is sari process me bahi moujud the. Or chhaya ko vikraal ne surya or vanraj ko rokne ke liye bheja tha. Or unke plan ko udane me iska hi hath tha.




Or ye abhi bhi unke aas pass hi bani hui thi. Taaki kisi tarah inko rok ke rakh sake.







Kaafi der baad meri aankh khuli. Body ka sara dard ab gayab ho chuka tha. Or jaise hi mujhe yaad aaya ki mera plane blast ho chuka hai. Me ek dum se uth gya. Or charo taraf dekhne laga. Charo taraf andhera laga hua tha. Lekin mere night vision lences se mujhe sab dikh raha tha. Tabhi meri najar vanraj per padi jo mujhse thodi duri per pada hua tha behosh. Me uth ke uske pass gya. Or use aawaj lagane laga. Use hilane dulane laga. Mere pass ek chhoti paani ki bottle thi jisme se maine uske uper thoda paani chidka or paani girte hi vo bhi hadbada kar uth gya. Uske uthte hi maine paani piya or thoda sa use diya.




Usne bhi pani piya




Vanraj- ham kaha hai.





Main- pata nhi.




Vanraj- hua kya tha.





Main- blast Plane me.





Vanraj- ye pakka vikraal ka hi kaam hoga.





Main- ho sakta hai.






Vanraj- ab kya kare.






Main- pehle to kisi safe jagah chalte hai fir sochenge ki kya kare.






Vanraj mera sahara leke khada hua. Uske baad maine Harry se contact karne ki kosis ki lekin nhi hua. Fir hamne aas pass ke area ko achhe se dekha. Charo taraf khet hi the or doudne ke liye bahut hi achha maidaan bhi tha.





Maine vanraj ki taraf dekha or usne meri taraf or hamne aankho hi aankho me ishara kar liya or doud laga di. Hamne doud lagai circle me. Ham time travel karne ki kosis karne lage. Hamari speed apne charam per thi. Tabhi hamare raste me kai tarah ke blast hone lage jisse rasta ubad khabad hone laga. Hame pata hi nhi chal pa raha tha ki hamla ho kaha se raha hai. Or rasta kharab ho jaane ki bajah se hamne apna dayera bada liya lekin speed kam nhi hone di.






Bahi chhaya ne jab ye dekha to usne kai jagah per hamla start kar diya. Taaki ham doud na paaye.




Lekin ham kahi na kahi se apna rasta banate ja rahe the. Ye dekhke vo pareshan ho ne lagi or usne abki baar hamla kiya vanraj ke uper. Lekin hamari speed bahut tez thi jis bajah se uska nishana sahi se nahi lag raha tha. Na mere uper na vanraj ke uper. Ye dekhke ham dono hi muskura rahe the.




Tab chaya ne thoda dimaag lagaya or usne hamla hamare raste me thode aage karna start kiya taaki hamari or uski timing mil sake. Vo har baar nakamyaab ho rahi thi. Or isi beech hamara portal khul gya or ham dono hi usme ghus gye. Or time barrier ko todte hue ham ja pahuche 1 din pehle. Jab sab normal tha or vikraal bhi nhi jaga tha.




Vanraj- ab kya karna hai.





Main- hame pathar ko chhipana padega. Taaki jab tum ghar aao pathar lene to tumhare hath nakli pathar lage.






Vanraj- aisa possible nhi hai. Kyuki pathar ab active hai to ham use kahi bhi chhipa le mujhe uski exact location mil hi jayegi or vikraal ko bhi. Isliye use chhipane se kuch fayeda nhi hone wala.







Main- ha yar me to bhul hi gya tha. To ab kya kiya jaaye.







Vanraj- hame vikraal ko mujhtak pahuchne se pehle hi rokna hai. Taaki vo mere ghar tak pahuche hi na or na hi mujhe blackmail kar sake.







Main- ye badiya hai. Vo kal aaya tha haina.






Vanraj- ha. Sham ke 4 baje ke karib.






Main- to ab kal sham tak ham kya karenge.




Vanraj- intjar.




Ye kehkar ham baha se seedhe mumbai ke liye nikal gye doud laga ke. Hajaron km ka safar tha jo hamne kuch hi min. Me pura kar liya. Or ham is waqt mumbai me the.



Hamne ek chhoti si lodge me 2 kamre liye or unme hi chhip kar baith gye. Uske baad maine apne mobile me thodi cctv ki hacking ki or vanraj ke ghar ke aaspaas jitne bhi cctv the unhe search kiya. To mujhe ek cctv mil gya. Jisse vanraj ka ghar to nhi dikh raha tha lekin vo gali jarur dikh rahi thi. Or agar koi vanraj ke ghar jata hai to hame aaram se pata chal jaane wala tha.





Ab thi planing ki baari. Or me samajh gya tha ki inko harana itna aasan nhi hai. Isliye mujhe dev ki ya hell king ki madad ki jarurat padne wali thi.




Isliye sabse pehle maine dev se contact kiya.





Main- hii dev.





Dev- or kaisa lag raha hai dusri baar past me aake.





Main- tension ho rahi hai. Baaki sab theek hai.





Dev- to ab kya karne ka socha hai.






Main- kuch sujh hi to nhi raha hai ki kya or kaise kiya jaaye. Koi rasta ho to bata do.








Dev- baise tumhe thodi future ki jhalak dikha deta hu. Tum kuch bhi karlo paras pathar vikraal ke hath lag ke rahega. Or agar tum dono ne abhi use rokne ki kosis ki to dono hi past me maare jaoge. Ye tay hai. Tum apni reality ko badalna chahte ho lekin hoga bahi jo likha hua hai. Isliye meri mano to Bapis chale jaao or black heart ke Bapis aane ka intjar karo.








Main- agar black heart aagya to use bhi to main nhi rok sakta na. Aise hi vo bhi mujhe bhari padega tab kya karunga me.





Dev- sirf lado or kuch nhi. Baki ka kaam kismat kar degi.






Main- kam se kam chhaya kaya ko to maar hi sakte hai or kyu na me paras pathar ka istemaal karke teeno ko maar du. Abhi to vo mere ghar per hi hai.








Dev- aisa tum kar sakte ho. Lekin ek baat tumhe pata hi hai ki jo vikraal yaha aaya tha vo keval ek parchhai bhar tha. To use maar bhi doge tab bhi kuch nhi badlega. Ulta vikraal jyada tabahi macha dega. Or ho sakta hai kai log usme maare jaaye.








Main- to kya me aise hi haar manlu. Or paras pathar ko me bol dunga ki asli wale vikraal ko maar do to vo jaha bhi hoga use dhund ke vo maar dega.







Dev- agar tumne aisa kiya to multiverse me tehalka mach jayega. Or kai alag timeline paida ho jayegi jiska parinam bahut hu bhayanak hoga ham sabke liye. Vikraal ko marna hai lekin abhi nhi. Uska time abhi nhi aaya hai.






Ye sunke mera dimaag ghum gya ki ab karu to kya karu.






Main- tum majak nhi kar rahe ho na.






Dev- nhi surya me sach keh raha hu. Me sab jaante hue tumhe aisa kaam nhi karne de sakta jisse samast brahmaand me musibaton ka bhandara lag jaaye.





Main- To fir tumne mujhse ye time travel karne se pehle mujhse kyu nhi kaha kuch bhi.







Dev- kyuki yaha tumhe aana tha. Or ab vapis jaana hai. Kuch bhi change kiye bina.






Main- theek hai me yaha se vapis chala jaunga lekin khali hath nhi. Mujhe tumse kuch chahiye hai. Jisse me in sabhi ka khatma kar saku. Koi weapon ya kuch or. Ye sabhi aasani se marne walo me se nhi hai. Me inse din bhar lad sakta hu lekin inko maar nhi sakta hu. Isliye mujhe kuch aisa chahiye jisse in sabhi ka khatma hota jaaye. Or black heart ko chot pe chot lagti jaaye.








Dev- iske liye tumhe hell king se sampark karna padega. Vo jo bhi deal tumse karna chahe kar lo. Kyuki bahi ek aise hai jo tumhe kuch aisa de sakte hai jisse tum sabhi per bhari padoge.







Main- unhone mujhse vada kiya hai ki bina kisi deal ke vo mera sath denge. To fir deal karne ki kya jarurat hai.







Dev- ha mujhe pata hai lekin tum unse yahi kehna jo maine tumse kaha hai. Kehna unko ki jo aap kahoge me sab karne ko ready hu. Bas mujhe in sabhi ko harane ke liye powers chahiye hai. Baaki unke uper chhod do.







Main- pakka na. Kahi fasba mat dena.






Dev- viswas rakho mujhper tumhe kuch bhi nhi hone dunga me.






Main- ok. To ab ham Bapis jaaye.






Dev- ha tumhari ab baha jyada jarurat hai. Kyuki tumhara pariwar akela hai. Or chhaya or kaya kaafi khatarnaak hai.







Main- samajh gya.




Ye kehkar hamara sampark tut gya. Or me bahi baith gya.















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Kaafi der tak me sochta raha ki kya karu dev ki baat maanu ya rehne du. Ek baar ko to mujhe doubt bhi hua ki kahi me kisi or se baat to nhi kar raha tha. Lekin fir mera doubt apne aap chala bhi gya. Kyuki dev ke mamle me koi risk ho hi nhi sakta hai. Uski jaankari kisi ko bhi nhi hai mere aalawa. Na hell king ki na kisi or ko. Isliye shak karna bebuniyaad hai.




Isliye me turant hi apne kamre se bahar aaya or gya vanraj ke kamre me.





Vanraj ne darwaja khola.





Vanraj- kya hua.





Main- hame vapis jana hoga. Ham yaha kuch bhi nhi kar sakte hai. Or agar hamne timeline me ched chhad ki to bahut badi gadbad ho sakti hai.






Vanraj- lekin achanak kya hua. Or tumhe ye sab kaise pata






Main- mera ek shubh chintak hai usne mujhe ye jaankari di hai. Or uski baato per yakeen na karna bahut badi bebakafu hogi. Isliye jaisa usne kaha hai hame Bapis jana hoga






Vanraj- theek hai chale jayenge lekin fir vikraal or black heart ka kya karenge apan.







Main- black herat jinda hoke rahega or hame uska saamna bhi karna hi padega aaj nhi to kal. Lekin aisa hoga jarur. Ham usse bhag nhi sakte hai. Or abhi jyada sawal mat karo me sayad jawab nhi de paunga. Isliye jaisa ho raha hai hone dete hai.





Vanraj- ok.




Uske baad ham dono Bapis se apne usi jagah ke liye nikal gya jaha se ham aaye the. Or baha jaake firse hamne time travel kiya. Or Bapis apni timeline me pahuch gye.





Ham jaise hi bahar nikale bahar chhaya hamara wait kar rahi thi. Or usne fir se hamper hamla kar diya. Or is baar hamse uska hamla takra gya or ham dono hi bikhar se gye. Bahut jor se laga ye jhatka.







Chhaya- surya tumne kya kiya hai baha jaake mujhe batao. Verna abki baar dono ko jaan se maar dungi vo bhi bina kisi chetavani ke.





Vanraj- are kuch nhi kiya hai jaise gye the baise hi Bapis aagye hai. Or jara tum hi socho agar hamne baha kuch kiya hota to tum yaha iss waqt hamara wait nhi kar rahi hoti balki kisi kabr me dafan hoti. Kyuki tumhe jinda to nhi chodte ham dono.





Ye sunke chhaya me thoda vichar kiya or usne vikraal se contact kiya or use pata chala ki sab theek hai. Or ye sunke use yakeen ho gya ki bakai me in logo ne kuch nhi kiya hai.






Chhaya- achha faisla liya tum dono ne jo baha jaake kuch nhi kiya. Baise bhi bahut kam jindagi bachi hai tum dono ki. Isliye achha yahi hoga ki apani family ke sath jyada se jyada time spend karo. Or hame rokne ke upaay sochna band kar do. Abhi tumne dekhi nhi hai hamari shaktiya.






Main- ha pata hai or yahi baat me bhi tumse kehna chahunga ki aainda mere pariwar ko mere khilaaf istemaal kiya to tera ye sir tere dhad se alag karke football khelunga usse. Himmat hai to mere se aamne saamne lado. Fir bhale me haar jaau ya kuch bhi ho. Lekin family ko beech me laai to anjaam aisa hoga ki duniya me kabhi dobara janm lene se pehle 100000 baar sochogi ki lu ya na lu. Abhi tum bhi nhi jaanti ho mujhe.







Chhaya- ohhh me to dar gyi.



Ye kehkar vo hasne lagi.





Main khada hua.




Main- ek kaam karte hai aao 2-2 hath kar lete hai.





Chhaya- achha theek hai to. Aajao. Or agar mar jaao tum to mujhse mat kehna fir.






Main- nhi kahunga.







Ye kehkar usne bina koi warning keujhoer hamla kiya. Me turnt hi side ko ho gya. Maine apna suitup kiya or apni energy ko ekathha kiya or ek tez jhatka mara uske thobde per or bakai me tagda tha jhatka uske anjar panjar sab dheele ho gye. Or iska fayeda maine uthaya or time ko slow kiya. Or fir uske thobde ko jo foda hai maine. Uski body react hi nahi kar pa rahi thi usse pehle hi mere punches usko lag rahe the. Or fir time normal hua or use itna tez dard hua ki uski cheekh dur dur tak sunai di hogi logo ko.








Main- maja aaya Mrs chaya vikraal. Utho or saamna karo mera.





Ye kehkar me uske pass gya. To usne apni maya failana shuru kar diya usne apne anek ruk bana liye. Jo mere charo taraf faile hue the.




Chhaya- dum to hai tumhare andar. Ab dekhna hai dimaag kitna hai. Dhundo mujhe.





Maine apne charo tafar dekha to har taraf chhaya hi chhaya thi. Uper se aaj chand bhi nhi nikala tha. Sayad badalo me chhipa hua tha. Isliye samajh me hi nhi aaraha tha ki konsi asli hai konsi nakli. Uske karib 25 rup baha moujud the.





Maine apni speed ko full kiya or time ko firse slow kiya. Or ek ek ke thobde per punch maarna shuru kiya. Jitni nakli thi unke aarpaar mera hath nikal raha tha. Lekin jo asli thi usko ye punch bahut jor se lagne wale the.




Ek ek karke maine sabhi ko mara or 24 ko kuch nhi hua. Lekin 25be ko jo punch laga uska sara concertrate tut gya or uske sare ruk ek ek karke gayab ho gaye. Maine apni sword nikali or uske dill me ghusa di. Bina kisi deri ke. Meri swrod uske dill ko cheerte hue aarpaar nikal gyi.





Or uski cheekhe puri fizaao me fail gyi. Use viswas nhi ho raha tha ki ye kaise or kyu hua. Meri talvar uske dill me kaise ghus gyi. Jabki baha per achhe se achhe hathiyar bhi nhi ghus paate hai.





Chhaya em dum hairan thi. Or vo kuch samajh paati usse pehle hi vo pathar ban gyi or tukdo me bikhar gyi.





Maine apni talvar ko saaf kiya or use dekha to usme meri energy beh rahi thi sayad isiliye ye isko bhedne me kaamyaab rahi. Chalo jo bhi hua ho ek musibat to khatam hui.





Vanraj- kya baat hai maja agaya.




Main- mujhe bhi thodi frustration to kam hui.





Vanraj- ha lekin ab nikale yaha se Verna fir koi nai musibat aa sakti hai yaha per.




Main- sahi kaha.





Uske baad ham baha se mumbai ke liye vapis chale gaye. Kaafi thak gye the ham donk hi. Vanraj ka ghar to tut fut gya tha. Isliye ham dono mere hi ghar gye or jaate hi ek ek kamre me ghus gye or so gye.






Bahi dusri taraf vikraal ko jab chhaya ke marne ka pata chala to vo bahut hi tez se chillaya. Or uske sath kaya bhi. Kyuki bina kisi chetavani ke uski aadhi shaktiya chali gyi thi chhaya ke sath. Ye dono usi ka hissa thi. Or is hisaab se agar kaya or or maar diya jaaye to sayad vikraal khud ba khud mar jaaye.ya itna kamjor ho jaaye ki use koi bhi maar sake.





Lekin ye baat sirf vikraal or chaya hi jaante the surya ko ye baat filhaal nhj pata tha.




Bahi black heart ko jinda karne ki process apne charam per thi. Or kuch ghanto me puri bhi ho jaane wali thi.



Uska sari ek percent bhi nhi sada tha jabki kai varshon se vo vaise hi pada hua tha.




Ye baat hell king ko bhi pata chal chuki thi ki black heart jinda hone wala hai. Isliye unhone apne kuch khaas aadmiyo ko bheja vikraal ke pass taaki use rok sake or us pathar ko hasil kar sake.







Ye log total 4 the or baha sirf vikraal or kaya.






Unhone bina kisi warning ke in dono per hamla kar diya. Or hamla ladai takatvar bhi tha. Lekin ye dono bhi kam nhi the.





Or is hamle se vikraal ka gussa satven aasaman per pahuch gya tha.



Jaise hi vo khada hua uske body per yodhaao wali poshak aagyi or uske hatho me ek sword or yahi same kaya ke sath bhi hua vo bhi puri tarah se ready ho gyi yudh ke liye.





Yhaa ye char bhi ready the.




Vikraal- hat jaao mere raste se Verna sabhi ko khak bana dunga.





H1- tumhe maare bina ham nhi rukne wale black heart kisi bhi tarah jinda nahi ho sakta hamare rehte.






Vikraal- to fir tum sabko marna hoga kyuki black heart to jinda hoke rahega





Ye kehkar vikraal ne apne talvar se energy ko release kiya lekin vo ready the. Unhone uske hamle ko hawa me hi rok diya. Bahi kaya ne bakio ki taraf doud laga di. Uska saamna karne ke liye 2 log aage aaye or inme talvar ka mukabla hone laga. Kaya akeli hi dono per bhari pad rahi thi. Talvar bazi me usko hara pana na mumkin sa lag raha tha. Isi beech kaya ne ek ke body per ek bahut hi bada cut kar diya ye dekhke dusre ne thoda jor se apni power ka war kaya per kiya or kaya ne apni talvar ko aage kar diya or vo energy usi talvar me sama gyi. Or iska fayeda utha kar kaya ne ek dum se us bande ki mundi alag kar di or baaki sabhi keval dekhte hi rahe.




Baaki vikraal or un dono me powers ka mukabla ho raha tha udd udd kar dono ek dusre per hamla kar rahe the. Lekin natiza kuch bhi nhi nikal raha tha.





Tab vikraal ne apni powers ka istemaal bada diya or ek tez roshni nikli uski body se. Or pal bhar me dono ka ant ho gya. Is roshni ka tod filhaal kisi ke pass nhi tha. Yahi roshni vikraal ne prithvi per bhi chhodi thi jisme sabhi log jal kar khak ho gye the.



Bahi sirf ek bacha hua tha. Or kaya ki talvar uski garden per thi. Uski halat baise hi kharab ho rakhi thi.



Aise me vikraal uske pass aaya.




Vikraal- Jake bol do apne raja se ki uske din ab bhar gye hai uska kaal jald hi uske darwaje per dastak dene wala hai. Isliye hame rokne me samay barbaad na kare or apne chhupne ki vyavastha karke rakhe.




Us guard ne mundi hilai or vo pal bhar me baha se gayab ho gya or seedha pahuch hell king ke pass or use pura sandesh sunaya jise sunke uska para bhi chadne laga lekin tabhi uske dimaag me ek tarkeeb aai jis bajah se uske chehre per smile aagyi. Or use pura vishwas tha ki ye tarkeeb kaise bhi fail nhi hone wali.






Baaki next update me jaaniye ki akhir he konsi tarkeeb hai. Or hell king kya karta hai. Or surya or vanraj ab kya karte hai inhe rokne ke liye.



Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.















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Ham log plane me baithe hue the lekin ek dusre se baat bhi nhi kar rahe the. Balki apni apni socho me gum the. Mere dimaag me kai tarah ke khayal aaraye the. Lekin sab be matlab ke the. Or yahi haal vanraj ka bhi tha.







Bahi dusri tarah vikraal hame lagataar dekh raha tha. Use bhi pata chal gya tha ki ham kya soch rahe hai or kaha ja rahe hai. Isliye vo hame rokne ke liye counter plan bana raha tha.






Abhi ham apnianjil se kaafi dur the. Tabhi achanak se mousam me kaafi badlaav hone laga. Hamare plane ko bijli ke jhatke lagne lage.





Main- kya ho raha hai Harry.





Harry- sir achanak se mousam kharab ho gya hai ghabrane ki baat nhi hai.






Main- badiya hai. Jaldi chalo.




Harry- ok sir.





Abhi maine itna hi bola tha ki pata nhi kya hua. Hamare plane se kuch takraya. Or uske takrate hi plane me bahut hi bada dhamaka ho gya. Hame kuch bhi samajh me nhi aaya ki kya hua kaise hua. Or ab haalat ye thi ki ham jameen per girte hue ja rahe the kisi par kate pakchhi ki tarah. Or ham dono hi hosh me nahi the hamari aankhe band thi. Or itni unchai se girne ke baad hamare hath pair na tute ye to sambhav hi nhi tha. Bhale hi ham mare na lekin nuksaan to kaafi hone wala tha.





Or yahi sab sochate hue ham dono jameen per dhadaam se gire. Or girte hi ham dono ko hosh aagya or hosh ke sath hame hua bhayankar dard ka aabhash. Itna ki mar hi jaate to badiya rehta. Or dard kuch jyada hi tha isliye ham fir se behosh ho gye.





Ham kaha the kaha nhi kuch pata nhi tha hame.








Bahi dusri taraf vikraal ne black heart ko jinda karne ka process raat me hi shuru kar diya tha. Uski body ko recover karke uske mathe per paras pathar ko rakh diya tha or usse black heart ko jinda karne ka aavahan bhi kar diya tha. Or vo pathar apne kaam me bhi lag chuka tha. Vikraal or kaya dono hi is sari process me bahi moujud the. Or chhaya ko vikraal ne surya or vanraj ko rokne ke liye bheja tha. Or unke plan ko udane me iska hi hath tha.




Or ye abhi bhi unke aas pass hi bani hui thi. Taaki kisi tarah inko rok ke rakh sake.







Kaafi der baad meri aankh khuli. Body ka sara dard ab gayab ho chuka tha. Or jaise hi mujhe yaad aaya ki mera plane blast ho chuka hai. Me ek dum se uth gya. Or charo taraf dekhne laga. Charo taraf andhera laga hua tha. Lekin mere night vision lences se mujhe sab dikh raha tha. Tabhi meri najar vanraj per padi jo mujhse thodi duri per pada hua tha behosh. Me uth ke uske pass gya. Or use aawaj lagane laga. Use hilane dulane laga. Mere pass ek chhoti paani ki bottle thi jisme se maine uske uper thoda paani chidka or paani girte hi vo bhi hadbada kar uth gya. Uske uthte hi maine paani piya or thoda sa use diya.




Usne bhi pani piya




Vanraj- ham kaha hai.





Main- pata nhi.




Vanraj- hua kya tha.





Main- blast Plane me.





Vanraj- ye pakka vikraal ka hi kaam hoga.





Main- ho sakta hai.






Vanraj- ab kya kare.






Main- pehle to kisi safe jagah chalte hai fir sochenge ki kya kare.






Vanraj mera sahara leke khada hua. Uske baad maine Harry se contact karne ki kosis ki lekin nhi hua. Fir hamne aas pass ke area ko achhe se dekha. Charo taraf khet hi the or doudne ke liye bahut hi achha maidaan bhi tha.





Maine vanraj ki taraf dekha or usne meri taraf or hamne aankho hi aankho me ishara kar liya or doud laga di. Hamne doud lagai circle me. Ham time travel karne ki kosis karne lage. Hamari speed apne charam per thi. Tabhi hamare raste me kai tarah ke blast hone lage jisse rasta ubad khabad hone laga. Hame pata hi nhi chal pa raha tha ki hamla ho kaha se raha hai. Or rasta kharab ho jaane ki bajah se hamne apna dayera bada liya lekin speed kam nhi hone di.






Bahi chhaya ne jab ye dekha to usne kai jagah per hamla start kar diya. Taaki ham doud na paaye.




Lekin ham kahi na kahi se apna rasta banate ja rahe the. Ye dekhke vo pareshan ho ne lagi or usne abki baar hamla kiya vanraj ke uper. Lekin hamari speed bahut tez thi jis bajah se uska nishana sahi se nahi lag raha tha. Na mere uper na vanraj ke uper. Ye dekhke ham dono hi muskura rahe the.




Tab chaya ne thoda dimaag lagaya or usne hamla hamare raste me thode aage karna start kiya taaki hamari or uski timing mil sake. Vo har baar nakamyaab ho rahi thi. Or isi beech hamara portal khul gya or ham dono hi usme ghus gye. Or time barrier ko todte hue ham ja pahuche 1 din pehle. Jab sab normal tha or vikraal bhi nhi jaga tha.




Vanraj- ab kya karna hai.





Main- hame pathar ko chhipana padega. Taaki jab tum ghar aao pathar lene to tumhare hath nakli pathar lage.






Vanraj- aisa possible nhi hai. Kyuki pathar ab active hai to ham use kahi bhi chhipa le mujhe uski exact location mil hi jayegi or vikraal ko bhi. Isliye use chhipane se kuch fayeda nhi hone wala.







Main- ha yar me to bhul hi gya tha. To ab kya kiya jaaye.







Vanraj- hame vikraal ko mujhtak pahuchne se pehle hi rokna hai. Taaki vo mere ghar tak pahuche hi na or na hi mujhe blackmail kar sake.







Main- ye badiya hai. Vo kal aaya tha haina.






Vanraj- ha. Sham ke 4 baje ke karib.






Main- to ab kal sham tak ham kya karenge.




Vanraj- intjar.




Ye kehkar ham baha se seedhe mumbai ke liye nikal gye doud laga ke. Hajaron km ka safar tha jo hamne kuch hi min. Me pura kar liya. Or ham is waqt mumbai me the.



Hamne ek chhoti si lodge me 2 kamre liye or unme hi chhip kar baith gye. Uske baad maine apne mobile me thodi cctv ki hacking ki or vanraj ke ghar ke aaspaas jitne bhi cctv the unhe search kiya. To mujhe ek cctv mil gya. Jisse vanraj ka ghar to nhi dikh raha tha lekin vo gali jarur dikh rahi thi. Or agar koi vanraj ke ghar jata hai to hame aaram se pata chal jaane wala tha.





Ab thi planing ki baari. Or me samajh gya tha ki inko harana itna aasan nhi hai. Isliye mujhe dev ki ya hell king ki madad ki jarurat padne wali thi.




Isliye sabse pehle maine dev se contact kiya.





Main- hii dev.





Dev- or kaisa lag raha hai dusri baar past me aake.





Main- tension ho rahi hai. Baaki sab theek hai.





Dev- to ab kya karne ka socha hai.






Main- kuch sujh hi to nhi raha hai ki kya or kaise kiya jaaye. Koi rasta ho to bata do.








Dev- baise tumhe thodi future ki jhalak dikha deta hu. Tum kuch bhi karlo paras pathar vikraal ke hath lag ke rahega. Or agar tum dono ne abhi use rokne ki kosis ki to dono hi past me maare jaoge. Ye tay hai. Tum apni reality ko badalna chahte ho lekin hoga bahi jo likha hua hai. Isliye meri mano to Bapis chale jaao or black heart ke Bapis aane ka intjar karo.








Main- agar black heart aagya to use bhi to main nhi rok sakta na. Aise hi vo bhi mujhe bhari padega tab kya karunga me.





Dev- sirf lado or kuch nhi. Baki ka kaam kismat kar degi.






Main- kam se kam chhaya kaya ko to maar hi sakte hai or kyu na me paras pathar ka istemaal karke teeno ko maar du. Abhi to vo mere ghar per hi hai.








Dev- aisa tum kar sakte ho. Lekin ek baat tumhe pata hi hai ki jo vikraal yaha aaya tha vo keval ek parchhai bhar tha. To use maar bhi doge tab bhi kuch nhi badlega. Ulta vikraal jyada tabahi macha dega. Or ho sakta hai kai log usme maare jaaye.








Main- to kya me aise hi haar manlu. Or paras pathar ko me bol dunga ki asli wale vikraal ko maar do to vo jaha bhi hoga use dhund ke vo maar dega.







Dev- agar tumne aisa kiya to multiverse me tehalka mach jayega. Or kai alag timeline paida ho jayegi jiska parinam bahut hu bhayanak hoga ham sabke liye. Vikraal ko marna hai lekin abhi nhi. Uska time abhi nhi aaya hai.






Ye sunke mera dimaag ghum gya ki ab karu to kya karu.






Main- tum majak nhi kar rahe ho na.






Dev- nhi surya me sach keh raha hu. Me sab jaante hue tumhe aisa kaam nhi karne de sakta jisse samast brahmaand me musibaton ka bhandara lag jaaye.





Main- To fir tumne mujhse ye time travel karne se pehle mujhse kyu nhi kaha kuch bhi.







Dev- kyuki yaha tumhe aana tha. Or ab vapis jaana hai. Kuch bhi change kiye bina.






Main- theek hai me yaha se vapis chala jaunga lekin khali hath nhi. Mujhe tumse kuch chahiye hai. Jisse me in sabhi ka khatma kar saku. Koi weapon ya kuch or. Ye sabhi aasani se marne walo me se nhi hai. Me inse din bhar lad sakta hu lekin inko maar nhi sakta hu. Isliye mujhe kuch aisa chahiye jisse in sabhi ka khatma hota jaaye. Or black heart ko chot pe chot lagti jaaye.








Dev- iske liye tumhe hell king se sampark karna padega. Vo jo bhi deal tumse karna chahe kar lo. Kyuki bahi ek aise hai jo tumhe kuch aisa de sakte hai jisse tum sabhi per bhari padoge.







Main- unhone mujhse vada kiya hai ki bina kisi deal ke vo mera sath denge. To fir deal karne ki kya jarurat hai.







Dev- ha mujhe pata hai lekin tum unse yahi kehna jo maine tumse kaha hai. Kehna unko ki jo aap kahoge me sab karne ko ready hu. Bas mujhe in sabhi ko harane ke liye powers chahiye hai. Baaki unke uper chhod do.







Main- pakka na. Kahi fasba mat dena.






Dev- viswas rakho mujhper tumhe kuch bhi nhi hone dunga me.






Main- ok. To ab ham Bapis jaaye.






Dev- ha tumhari ab baha jyada jarurat hai. Kyuki tumhara pariwar akela hai. Or chhaya or kaya kaafi khatarnaak hai.







Main- samajh gya.




Ye kehkar hamara sampark tut gya. Or me bahi baith gya.
















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Toh black heart ke zinda hone ki process suru hochuki hai. Aur ab toh dev ne bhi bol diya usko zinda hone do.

Aur idher past mein aake kuch faiyda nhi hua. Khaali haath hi wapas jaa raha hai. Toh dev ne past mein aane hi kyo diya. Kuch toh khaas tha jiske wajah se usne nhi rokaa. But woh kya thaa. Aur ab Surya wapas hell king se baat karega. Dekhte hai woh kya bolta hai.
 

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Ham log plane me baithe hue the lekin ek dusre se baat bhi nhi kar rahe the. Balki apni apni socho me gum the. Mere dimaag me kai tarah ke khayal aaraye the. Lekin sab be matlab ke the. Or yahi haal vanraj ka bhi tha.







Bahi dusri tarah vikraal hame lagataar dekh raha tha. Use bhi pata chal gya tha ki ham kya soch rahe hai or kaha ja rahe hai. Isliye vo hame rokne ke liye counter plan bana raha tha.






Abhi ham apnianjil se kaafi dur the. Tabhi achanak se mousam me kaafi badlaav hone laga. Hamare plane ko bijli ke jhatke lagne lage.





Main- kya ho raha hai Harry.





Harry- sir achanak se mousam kharab ho gya hai ghabrane ki baat nhi hai.






Main- badiya hai. Jaldi chalo.




Harry- ok sir.





Abhi maine itna hi bola tha ki pata nhi kya hua. Hamare plane se kuch takraya. Or uske takrate hi plane me bahut hi bada dhamaka ho gya. Hame kuch bhi samajh me nhi aaya ki kya hua kaise hua. Or ab haalat ye thi ki ham jameen per girte hue ja rahe the kisi par kate pakchhi ki tarah. Or ham dono hi hosh me nahi the hamari aankhe band thi. Or itni unchai se girne ke baad hamare hath pair na tute ye to sambhav hi nhi tha. Bhale hi ham mare na lekin nuksaan to kaafi hone wala tha.





Or yahi sab sochate hue ham dono jameen per dhadaam se gire. Or girte hi ham dono ko hosh aagya or hosh ke sath hame hua bhayankar dard ka aabhash. Itna ki mar hi jaate to badiya rehta. Or dard kuch jyada hi tha isliye ham fir se behosh ho gye.





Ham kaha the kaha nhi kuch pata nhi tha hame.








Bahi dusri taraf vikraal ne black heart ko jinda karne ka process raat me hi shuru kar diya tha. Uski body ko recover karke uske mathe per paras pathar ko rakh diya tha or usse black heart ko jinda karne ka aavahan bhi kar diya tha. Or vo pathar apne kaam me bhi lag chuka tha. Vikraal or kaya dono hi is sari process me bahi moujud the. Or chhaya ko vikraal ne surya or vanraj ko rokne ke liye bheja tha. Or unke plan ko udane me iska hi hath tha.




Or ye abhi bhi unke aas pass hi bani hui thi. Taaki kisi tarah inko rok ke rakh sake.







Kaafi der baad meri aankh khuli. Body ka sara dard ab gayab ho chuka tha. Or jaise hi mujhe yaad aaya ki mera plane blast ho chuka hai. Me ek dum se uth gya. Or charo taraf dekhne laga. Charo taraf andhera laga hua tha. Lekin mere night vision lences se mujhe sab dikh raha tha. Tabhi meri najar vanraj per padi jo mujhse thodi duri per pada hua tha behosh. Me uth ke uske pass gya. Or use aawaj lagane laga. Use hilane dulane laga. Mere pass ek chhoti paani ki bottle thi jisme se maine uske uper thoda paani chidka or paani girte hi vo bhi hadbada kar uth gya. Uske uthte hi maine paani piya or thoda sa use diya.




Usne bhi pani piya




Vanraj- ham kaha hai.





Main- pata nhi.




Vanraj- hua kya tha.





Main- blast Plane me.





Vanraj- ye pakka vikraal ka hi kaam hoga.





Main- ho sakta hai.






Vanraj- ab kya kare.






Main- pehle to kisi safe jagah chalte hai fir sochenge ki kya kare.






Vanraj mera sahara leke khada hua. Uske baad maine Harry se contact karne ki kosis ki lekin nhi hua. Fir hamne aas pass ke area ko achhe se dekha. Charo taraf khet hi the or doudne ke liye bahut hi achha maidaan bhi tha.





Maine vanraj ki taraf dekha or usne meri taraf or hamne aankho hi aankho me ishara kar liya or doud laga di. Hamne doud lagai circle me. Ham time travel karne ki kosis karne lage. Hamari speed apne charam per thi. Tabhi hamare raste me kai tarah ke blast hone lage jisse rasta ubad khabad hone laga. Hame pata hi nhi chal pa raha tha ki hamla ho kaha se raha hai. Or rasta kharab ho jaane ki bajah se hamne apna dayera bada liya lekin speed kam nhi hone di.






Bahi chhaya ne jab ye dekha to usne kai jagah per hamla start kar diya. Taaki ham doud na paaye.




Lekin ham kahi na kahi se apna rasta banate ja rahe the. Ye dekhke vo pareshan ho ne lagi or usne abki baar hamla kiya vanraj ke uper. Lekin hamari speed bahut tez thi jis bajah se uska nishana sahi se nahi lag raha tha. Na mere uper na vanraj ke uper. Ye dekhke ham dono hi muskura rahe the.




Tab chaya ne thoda dimaag lagaya or usne hamla hamare raste me thode aage karna start kiya taaki hamari or uski timing mil sake. Vo har baar nakamyaab ho rahi thi. Or isi beech hamara portal khul gya or ham dono hi usme ghus gye. Or time barrier ko todte hue ham ja pahuche 1 din pehle. Jab sab normal tha or vikraal bhi nhi jaga tha.




Vanraj- ab kya karna hai.





Main- hame pathar ko chhipana padega. Taaki jab tum ghar aao pathar lene to tumhare hath nakli pathar lage.






Vanraj- aisa possible nhi hai. Kyuki pathar ab active hai to ham use kahi bhi chhipa le mujhe uski exact location mil hi jayegi or vikraal ko bhi. Isliye use chhipane se kuch fayeda nhi hone wala.







Main- ha yar me to bhul hi gya tha. To ab kya kiya jaaye.







Vanraj- hame vikraal ko mujhtak pahuchne se pehle hi rokna hai. Taaki vo mere ghar tak pahuche hi na or na hi mujhe blackmail kar sake.







Main- ye badiya hai. Vo kal aaya tha haina.






Vanraj- ha. Sham ke 4 baje ke karib.






Main- to ab kal sham tak ham kya karenge.




Vanraj- intjar.




Ye kehkar ham baha se seedhe mumbai ke liye nikal gye doud laga ke. Hajaron km ka safar tha jo hamne kuch hi min. Me pura kar liya. Or ham is waqt mumbai me the.



Hamne ek chhoti si lodge me 2 kamre liye or unme hi chhip kar baith gye. Uske baad maine apne mobile me thodi cctv ki hacking ki or vanraj ke ghar ke aaspaas jitne bhi cctv the unhe search kiya. To mujhe ek cctv mil gya. Jisse vanraj ka ghar to nhi dikh raha tha lekin vo gali jarur dikh rahi thi. Or agar koi vanraj ke ghar jata hai to hame aaram se pata chal jaane wala tha.





Ab thi planing ki baari. Or me samajh gya tha ki inko harana itna aasan nhi hai. Isliye mujhe dev ki ya hell king ki madad ki jarurat padne wali thi.




Isliye sabse pehle maine dev se contact kiya.





Main- hii dev.





Dev- or kaisa lag raha hai dusri baar past me aake.





Main- tension ho rahi hai. Baaki sab theek hai.





Dev- to ab kya karne ka socha hai.






Main- kuch sujh hi to nhi raha hai ki kya or kaise kiya jaaye. Koi rasta ho to bata do.








Dev- baise tumhe thodi future ki jhalak dikha deta hu. Tum kuch bhi karlo paras pathar vikraal ke hath lag ke rahega. Or agar tum dono ne abhi use rokne ki kosis ki to dono hi past me maare jaoge. Ye tay hai. Tum apni reality ko badalna chahte ho lekin hoga bahi jo likha hua hai. Isliye meri mano to Bapis chale jaao or black heart ke Bapis aane ka intjar karo.








Main- agar black heart aagya to use bhi to main nhi rok sakta na. Aise hi vo bhi mujhe bhari padega tab kya karunga me.





Dev- sirf lado or kuch nhi. Baki ka kaam kismat kar degi.






Main- kam se kam chhaya kaya ko to maar hi sakte hai or kyu na me paras pathar ka istemaal karke teeno ko maar du. Abhi to vo mere ghar per hi hai.








Dev- aisa tum kar sakte ho. Lekin ek baat tumhe pata hi hai ki jo vikraal yaha aaya tha vo keval ek parchhai bhar tha. To use maar bhi doge tab bhi kuch nhi badlega. Ulta vikraal jyada tabahi macha dega. Or ho sakta hai kai log usme maare jaaye.








Main- to kya me aise hi haar manlu. Or paras pathar ko me bol dunga ki asli wale vikraal ko maar do to vo jaha bhi hoga use dhund ke vo maar dega.







Dev- agar tumne aisa kiya to multiverse me tehalka mach jayega. Or kai alag timeline paida ho jayegi jiska parinam bahut hu bhayanak hoga ham sabke liye. Vikraal ko marna hai lekin abhi nhi. Uska time abhi nhi aaya hai.






Ye sunke mera dimaag ghum gya ki ab karu to kya karu.






Main- tum majak nhi kar rahe ho na.






Dev- nhi surya me sach keh raha hu. Me sab jaante hue tumhe aisa kaam nhi karne de sakta jisse samast brahmaand me musibaton ka bhandara lag jaaye.





Main- To fir tumne mujhse ye time travel karne se pehle mujhse kyu nhi kaha kuch bhi.







Dev- kyuki yaha tumhe aana tha. Or ab vapis jaana hai. Kuch bhi change kiye bina.






Main- theek hai me yaha se vapis chala jaunga lekin khali hath nhi. Mujhe tumse kuch chahiye hai. Jisse me in sabhi ka khatma kar saku. Koi weapon ya kuch or. Ye sabhi aasani se marne walo me se nhi hai. Me inse din bhar lad sakta hu lekin inko maar nhi sakta hu. Isliye mujhe kuch aisa chahiye jisse in sabhi ka khatma hota jaaye. Or black heart ko chot pe chot lagti jaaye.








Dev- iske liye tumhe hell king se sampark karna padega. Vo jo bhi deal tumse karna chahe kar lo. Kyuki bahi ek aise hai jo tumhe kuch aisa de sakte hai jisse tum sabhi per bhari padoge.







Main- unhone mujhse vada kiya hai ki bina kisi deal ke vo mera sath denge. To fir deal karne ki kya jarurat hai.







Dev- ha mujhe pata hai lekin tum unse yahi kehna jo maine tumse kaha hai. Kehna unko ki jo aap kahoge me sab karne ko ready hu. Bas mujhe in sabhi ko harane ke liye powers chahiye hai. Baaki unke uper chhod do.







Main- pakka na. Kahi fasba mat dena.






Dev- viswas rakho mujhper tumhe kuch bhi nhi hone dunga me.






Main- ok. To ab ham Bapis jaaye.






Dev- ha tumhari ab baha jyada jarurat hai. Kyuki tumhara pariwar akela hai. Or chhaya or kaya kaafi khatarnaak hai.







Main- samajh gya.




Ye kehkar hamara sampark tut gya. Or me bahi baith gya.















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