Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

[Jaguaar]

UPDATE - 79













Kaafi der tak me sochta raha ki kya karu dev ki baat maanu ya rehne du. Ek baar ko to mujhe doubt bhi hua ki kahi me kisi or se baat to nhi kar raha tha. Lekin fir mera doubt apne aap chala bhi gya. Kyuki dev ke mamle me koi risk ho hi nhi sakta hai. Uski jaankari kisi ko bhi nhi hai mere aalawa. Na hell king ki na kisi or ko. Isliye shak karna bebuniyaad hai.




Isliye me turant hi apne kamre se bahar aaya or gya vanraj ke kamre me.





Vanraj ne darwaja khola.





Vanraj- kya hua.





Main- hame vapis jana hoga. Ham yaha kuch bhi nhi kar sakte hai. Or agar hamne timeline me ched chhad ki to bahut badi gadbad ho sakti hai.






Vanraj- lekin achanak kya hua. Or tumhe ye sab kaise pata






Main- mera ek shubh chintak hai usne mujhe ye jaankari di hai. Or uski baato per yakeen na karna bahut badi bebakafu hogi. Isliye jaisa usne kaha hai hame Bapis jana hoga






Vanraj- theek hai chale jayenge lekin fir vikraal or black heart ka kya karenge apan.







Main- black herat jinda hoke rahega or hame uska saamna bhi karna hi padega aaj nhi to kal. Lekin aisa hoga jarur. Ham usse bhag nhi sakte hai. Or abhi jyada sawal mat karo me sayad jawab nhi de paunga. Isliye jaisa ho raha hai hone dete hai.





Vanraj- ok.




Uske baad ham dono Bapis se apne usi jagah ke liye nikal gya jaha se ham aaye the. Or baha jaake firse hamne time travel kiya. Or Bapis apni timeline me pahuch gye.





Ham jaise hi bahar nikale bahar chhaya hamara wait kar rahi thi. Or usne fir se hamper hamla kar diya. Or is baar hamse uska hamla takra gya or ham dono hi bikhar se gye. Bahut jor se laga ye jhatka.







Chhaya- surya tumne kya kiya hai baha jaake mujhe batao. Verna abki baar dono ko jaan se maar dungi vo bhi bina kisi chetavani ke.





Vanraj- are kuch nhi kiya hai jaise gye the baise hi Bapis aagye hai. Or jara tum hi socho agar hamne baha kuch kiya hota to tum yaha iss waqt hamara wait nhi kar rahi hoti balki kisi kabr me dafan hoti. Kyuki tumhe jinda to nhi chodte ham dono.





Ye sunke chhaya me thoda vichar kiya or usne vikraal se contact kiya or use pata chala ki sab theek hai. Or ye sunke use yakeen ho gya ki bakai me in logo ne kuch nhi kiya hai.






Chhaya- achha faisla liya tum dono ne jo baha jaake kuch nhi kiya. Baise bhi bahut kam jindagi bachi hai tum dono ki. Isliye achha yahi hoga ki apani family ke sath jyada se jyada time spend karo. Or hame rokne ke upaay sochna band kar do. Abhi tumne dekhi nhi hai hamari shaktiya.






Main- ha pata hai or yahi baat me bhi tumse kehna chahunga ki aainda mere pariwar ko mere khilaaf istemaal kiya to tera ye sir tere dhad se alag karke football khelunga usse. Himmat hai to mere se aamne saamne lado. Fir bhale me haar jaau ya kuch bhi ho. Lekin family ko beech me laai to anjaam aisa hoga ki duniya me kabhi dobara janm lene se pehle 100000 baar sochogi ki lu ya na lu. Abhi tum bhi nhi jaanti ho mujhe.







Chhaya- ohhh me to dar gyi.



Ye kehkar vo hasne lagi.





Main khada hua.




Main- ek kaam karte hai aao 2-2 hath kar lete hai.





Chhaya- achha theek hai to. Aajao. Or agar mar jaao tum to mujhse mat kehna fir.






Main- nhi kahunga.







Ye kehkar usne bina koi warning keujhoer hamla kiya. Me turnt hi side ko ho gya. Maine apna suitup kiya or apni energy ko ekathha kiya or ek tez jhatka mara uske thobde per or bakai me tagda tha jhatka uske anjar panjar sab dheele ho gye. Or iska fayeda maine uthaya or time ko slow kiya. Or fir uske thobde ko jo foda hai maine. Uski body react hi nahi kar pa rahi thi usse pehle hi mere punches usko lag rahe the. Or fir time normal hua or use itna tez dard hua ki uski cheekh dur dur tak sunai di hogi logo ko.








Main- maja aaya Mrs chaya vikraal. Utho or saamna karo mera.





Ye kehkar me uske pass gya. To usne apni maya failana shuru kar diya usne apne anek ruk bana liye. Jo mere charo taraf faile hue the.




Chhaya- dum to hai tumhare andar. Ab dekhna hai dimaag kitna hai. Dhundo mujhe.





Maine apne charo tafar dekha to har taraf chhaya hi chhaya thi. Uper se aaj chand bhi nhi nikala tha. Sayad badalo me chhipa hua tha. Isliye samajh me hi nhi aaraha tha ki konsi asli hai konsi nakli. Uske karib 25 rup baha moujud the.





Maine apni speed ko full kiya or time ko firse slow kiya. Or ek ek ke thobde per punch maarna shuru kiya. Jitni nakli thi unke aarpaar mera hath nikal raha tha. Lekin jo asli thi usko ye punch bahut jor se lagne wale the.




Ek ek karke maine sabhi ko mara or 24 ko kuch nhi hua. Lekin 25be ko jo punch laga uska sara concertrate tut gya or uske sare ruk ek ek karke gayab ho gaye. Maine apni sword nikali or uske dill me ghusa di. Bina kisi deri ke. Meri swrod uske dill ko cheerte hue aarpaar nikal gyi.





Or uski cheekhe puri fizaao me fail gyi. Use viswas nhi ho raha tha ki ye kaise or kyu hua. Meri talvar uske dill me kaise ghus gyi. Jabki baha per achhe se achhe hathiyar bhi nhi ghus paate hai.





Chhaya em dum hairan thi. Or vo kuch samajh paati usse pehle hi vo pathar ban gyi or tukdo me bikhar gyi.





Maine apni talvar ko saaf kiya or use dekha to usme meri energy beh rahi thi sayad isiliye ye isko bhedne me kaamyaab rahi. Chalo jo bhi hua ho ek musibat to khatam hui.





Vanraj- kya baat hai maja agaya.




Main- mujhe bhi thodi frustration to kam hui.





Vanraj- ha lekin ab nikale yaha se Verna fir koi nai musibat aa sakti hai yaha per.




Main- sahi kaha.





Uske baad ham baha se mumbai ke liye vapis chale gaye. Kaafi thak gye the ham donk hi. Vanraj ka ghar to tut fut gya tha. Isliye ham dono mere hi ghar gye or jaate hi ek ek kamre me ghus gye or so gye.






Bahi dusri taraf vikraal ko jab chhaya ke marne ka pata chala to vo bahut hi tez se chillaya. Or uske sath kaya bhi. Kyuki bina kisi chetavani ke uski aadhi shaktiya chali gyi thi chhaya ke sath. Ye dono usi ka hissa thi. Or is hisaab se agar kaya or or maar diya jaaye to sayad vikraal khud ba khud mar jaaye.ya itna kamjor ho jaaye ki use koi bhi maar sake.





Lekin ye baat sirf vikraal or chaya hi jaante the surya ko ye baat filhaal nhj pata tha.




Bahi black heart ko jinda karne ki process apne charam per thi. Or kuch ghanto me puri bhi ho jaane wali thi.



Uska sari ek percent bhi nhi sada tha jabki kai varshon se vo vaise hi pada hua tha.




Ye baat hell king ko bhi pata chal chuki thi ki black heart jinda hone wala hai. Isliye unhone apne kuch khaas aadmiyo ko bheja vikraal ke pass taaki use rok sake or us pathar ko hasil kar sake.







Ye log total 4 the or baha sirf vikraal or kaya.






Unhone bina kisi warning ke in dono per hamla kar diya. Or hamla ladai takatvar bhi tha. Lekin ye dono bhi kam nhi the.





Or is hamle se vikraal ka gussa satven aasaman per pahuch gya tha.



Jaise hi vo khada hua uske body per yodhaao wali poshak aagyi or uske hatho me ek sword or yahi same kaya ke sath bhi hua vo bhi puri tarah se ready ho gyi yudh ke liye.





Yhaa ye char bhi ready the.




Vikraal- hat jaao mere raste se Verna sabhi ko khak bana dunga.





H1- tumhe maare bina ham nhi rukne wale black heart kisi bhi tarah jinda nahi ho sakta hamare rehte.






Vikraal- to fir tum sabko marna hoga kyuki black heart to jinda hoke rahega





Ye kehkar vikraal ne apne talvar se energy ko release kiya lekin vo ready the. Unhone uske hamle ko hawa me hi rok diya. Bahi kaya ne bakio ki taraf doud laga di. Uska saamna karne ke liye 2 log aage aaye or inme talvar ka mukabla hone laga. Kaya akeli hi dono per bhari pad rahi thi. Talvar bazi me usko hara pana na mumkin sa lag raha tha. Isi beech kaya ne ek ke body per ek bahut hi bada cut kar diya ye dekhke dusre ne thoda jor se apni power ka war kaya per kiya or kaya ne apni talvar ko aage kar diya or vo energy usi talvar me sama gyi. Or iska fayeda utha kar kaya ne ek dum se us bande ki mundi alag kar di or baaki sabhi keval dekhte hi rahe.




Baaki vikraal or un dono me powers ka mukabla ho raha tha udd udd kar dono ek dusre per hamla kar rahe the. Lekin natiza kuch bhi nhi nikal raha tha.





Tab vikraal ne apni powers ka istemaal bada diya or ek tez roshni nikli uski body se. Or pal bhar me dono ka ant ho gya. Is roshni ka tod filhaal kisi ke pass nhi tha. Yahi roshni vikraal ne prithvi per bhi chhodi thi jisme sabhi log jal kar khak ho gye the.



Bahi sirf ek bacha hua tha. Or kaya ki talvar uski garden per thi. Uski halat baise hi kharab ho rakhi thi.



Aise me vikraal uske pass aaya.




Vikraal- Jake bol do apne raja se ki uske din ab bhar gye hai uska kaal jald hi uske darwaje per dastak dene wala hai. Isliye hame rokne me samay barbaad na kare or apne chhupne ki vyavastha karke rakhe.




Us guard ne mundi hilai or vo pal bhar me baha se gayab ho gya or seedha pahuch hell king ke pass or use pura sandesh sunaya jise sunke uska para bhi chadne laga lekin tabhi uske dimaag me ek tarkeeb aai jis bajah se uske chehre per smile aagyi. Or use pura vishwas tha ki ye tarkeeb kaise bhi fail nhi hone wali.






Baaki next update me jaaniye ki akhir he konsi tarkeeb hai. Or hell king kya karta hai. Or surya or vanraj ab kya karte hai inhe rokne ke liye.



Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.















To be continue………………………..

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Toh Vikral ki shaktiyan toh aadhi hui chaya ke marne se. Aur ab aadhi shakti bachi hai uski dusri biwi kaya.

Aur idher hell king ne kya soch liya jiske wajah se uske chehre mein hasi aagayi.

Dekhte hai kya karta hai woh. Aur Surya Vanraj bhi kya karte hai.

 

[Luffy]

UPDATE - 79













Kaafi der tak me sochta raha ki kya karu dev ki baat maanu ya rehne du. Ek baar ko to mujhe doubt bhi hua ki kahi me kisi or se baat to nhi kar raha tha. Lekin fir mera doubt apne aap chala bhi gya. Kyuki dev ke mamle me koi risk ho hi nhi sakta hai. Uski jaankari kisi ko bhi nhi hai mere aalawa. Na hell king ki na kisi or ko. Isliye shak karna bebuniyaad hai.




Isliye me turant hi apne kamre se bahar aaya or gya vanraj ke kamre me.





Vanraj ne darwaja khola.





Vanraj- kya hua.





Main- hame vapis jana hoga. Ham yaha kuch bhi nhi kar sakte hai. Or agar hamne timeline me ched chhad ki to bahut badi gadbad ho sakti hai.






Vanraj- lekin achanak kya hua. Or tumhe ye sab kaise pata






Main- mera ek shubh chintak hai usne mujhe ye jaankari di hai. Or uski baato per yakeen na karna bahut badi bebakafu hogi. Isliye jaisa usne kaha hai hame Bapis jana hoga






Vanraj- theek hai chale jayenge lekin fir vikraal or black heart ka kya karenge apan.







Main- black herat jinda hoke rahega or hame uska saamna bhi karna hi padega aaj nhi to kal. Lekin aisa hoga jarur. Ham usse bhag nhi sakte hai. Or abhi jyada sawal mat karo me sayad jawab nhi de paunga. Isliye jaisa ho raha hai hone dete hai.





Vanraj- ok.




Uske baad ham dono Bapis se apne usi jagah ke liye nikal gya jaha se ham aaye the. Or baha jaake firse hamne time travel kiya. Or Bapis apni timeline me pahuch gye.





Ham jaise hi bahar nikale bahar chhaya hamara wait kar rahi thi. Or usne fir se hamper hamla kar diya. Or is baar hamse uska hamla takra gya or ham dono hi bikhar se gye. Bahut jor se laga ye jhatka.







Chhaya- surya tumne kya kiya hai baha jaake mujhe batao. Verna abki baar dono ko jaan se maar dungi vo bhi bina kisi chetavani ke.





Vanraj- are kuch nhi kiya hai jaise gye the baise hi Bapis aagye hai. Or jara tum hi socho agar hamne baha kuch kiya hota to tum yaha iss waqt hamara wait nhi kar rahi hoti balki kisi kabr me dafan hoti. Kyuki tumhe jinda to nhi chodte ham dono.





Ye sunke chhaya me thoda vichar kiya or usne vikraal se contact kiya or use pata chala ki sab theek hai. Or ye sunke use yakeen ho gya ki bakai me in logo ne kuch nhi kiya hai.






Chhaya- achha faisla liya tum dono ne jo baha jaake kuch nhi kiya. Baise bhi bahut kam jindagi bachi hai tum dono ki. Isliye achha yahi hoga ki apani family ke sath jyada se jyada time spend karo. Or hame rokne ke upaay sochna band kar do. Abhi tumne dekhi nhi hai hamari shaktiya.






Main- ha pata hai or yahi baat me bhi tumse kehna chahunga ki aainda mere pariwar ko mere khilaaf istemaal kiya to tera ye sir tere dhad se alag karke football khelunga usse. Himmat hai to mere se aamne saamne lado. Fir bhale me haar jaau ya kuch bhi ho. Lekin family ko beech me laai to anjaam aisa hoga ki duniya me kabhi dobara janm lene se pehle 100000 baar sochogi ki lu ya na lu. Abhi tum bhi nhi jaanti ho mujhe.







Chhaya- ohhh me to dar gyi.



Ye kehkar vo hasne lagi.





Main khada hua.




Main- ek kaam karte hai aao 2-2 hath kar lete hai.





Chhaya- achha theek hai to. Aajao. Or agar mar jaao tum to mujhse mat kehna fir.






Main- nhi kahunga.







Ye kehkar usne bina koi warning keujhoer hamla kiya. Me turnt hi side ko ho gya. Maine apna suitup kiya or apni energy ko ekathha kiya or ek tez jhatka mara uske thobde per or bakai me tagda tha jhatka uske anjar panjar sab dheele ho gye. Or iska fayeda maine uthaya or time ko slow kiya. Or fir uske thobde ko jo foda hai maine. Uski body react hi nahi kar pa rahi thi usse pehle hi mere punches usko lag rahe the. Or fir time normal hua or use itna tez dard hua ki uski cheekh dur dur tak sunai di hogi logo ko.








Main- maja aaya Mrs chaya vikraal. Utho or saamna karo mera.





Ye kehkar me uske pass gya. To usne apni maya failana shuru kar diya usne apne anek ruk bana liye. Jo mere charo taraf faile hue the.




Chhaya- dum to hai tumhare andar. Ab dekhna hai dimaag kitna hai. Dhundo mujhe.





Maine apne charo tafar dekha to har taraf chhaya hi chhaya thi. Uper se aaj chand bhi nhi nikala tha. Sayad badalo me chhipa hua tha. Isliye samajh me hi nhi aaraha tha ki konsi asli hai konsi nakli. Uske karib 25 rup baha moujud the.





Maine apni speed ko full kiya or time ko firse slow kiya. Or ek ek ke thobde per punch maarna shuru kiya. Jitni nakli thi unke aarpaar mera hath nikal raha tha. Lekin jo asli thi usko ye punch bahut jor se lagne wale the.




Ek ek karke maine sabhi ko mara or 24 ko kuch nhi hua. Lekin 25be ko jo punch laga uska sara concertrate tut gya or uske sare ruk ek ek karke gayab ho gaye. Maine apni sword nikali or uske dill me ghusa di. Bina kisi deri ke. Meri swrod uske dill ko cheerte hue aarpaar nikal gyi.





Or uski cheekhe puri fizaao me fail gyi. Use viswas nhi ho raha tha ki ye kaise or kyu hua. Meri talvar uske dill me kaise ghus gyi. Jabki baha per achhe se achhe hathiyar bhi nhi ghus paate hai.





Chhaya em dum hairan thi. Or vo kuch samajh paati usse pehle hi vo pathar ban gyi or tukdo me bikhar gyi.





Maine apni talvar ko saaf kiya or use dekha to usme meri energy beh rahi thi sayad isiliye ye isko bhedne me kaamyaab rahi. Chalo jo bhi hua ho ek musibat to khatam hui.





Vanraj- kya baat hai maja agaya.




Main- mujhe bhi thodi frustration to kam hui.





Vanraj- ha lekin ab nikale yaha se Verna fir koi nai musibat aa sakti hai yaha per.




Main- sahi kaha.





Uske baad ham baha se mumbai ke liye vapis chale gaye. Kaafi thak gye the ham donk hi. Vanraj ka ghar to tut fut gya tha. Isliye ham dono mere hi ghar gye or jaate hi ek ek kamre me ghus gye or so gye.






Bahi dusri taraf vikraal ko jab chhaya ke marne ka pata chala to vo bahut hi tez se chillaya. Or uske sath kaya bhi. Kyuki bina kisi chetavani ke uski aadhi shaktiya chali gyi thi chhaya ke sath. Ye dono usi ka hissa thi. Or is hisaab se agar kaya or or maar diya jaaye to sayad vikraal khud ba khud mar jaaye.ya itna kamjor ho jaaye ki use koi bhi maar sake.





Lekin ye baat sirf vikraal or chaya hi jaante the surya ko ye baat filhaal nhj pata tha.




Bahi black heart ko jinda karne ki process apne charam per thi. Or kuch ghanto me puri bhi ho jaane wali thi.



Uska sari ek percent bhi nhi sada tha jabki kai varshon se vo vaise hi pada hua tha.




Ye baat hell king ko bhi pata chal chuki thi ki black heart jinda hone wala hai. Isliye unhone apne kuch khaas aadmiyo ko bheja vikraal ke pass taaki use rok sake or us pathar ko hasil kar sake.







Ye log total 4 the or baha sirf vikraal or kaya.






Unhone bina kisi warning ke in dono per hamla kar diya. Or hamla ladai takatvar bhi tha. Lekin ye dono bhi kam nhi the.





Or is hamle se vikraal ka gussa satven aasaman per pahuch gya tha.



Jaise hi vo khada hua uske body per yodhaao wali poshak aagyi or uske hatho me ek sword or yahi same kaya ke sath bhi hua vo bhi puri tarah se ready ho gyi yudh ke liye.





Yhaa ye char bhi ready the.




Vikraal- hat jaao mere raste se Verna sabhi ko khak bana dunga.





H1- tumhe maare bina ham nhi rukne wale black heart kisi bhi tarah jinda nahi ho sakta hamare rehte.






Vikraal- to fir tum sabko marna hoga kyuki black heart to jinda hoke rahega





Ye kehkar vikraal ne apne talvar se energy ko release kiya lekin vo ready the. Unhone uske hamle ko hawa me hi rok diya. Bahi kaya ne bakio ki taraf doud laga di. Uska saamna karne ke liye 2 log aage aaye or inme talvar ka mukabla hone laga. Kaya akeli hi dono per bhari pad rahi thi. Talvar bazi me usko hara pana na mumkin sa lag raha tha. Isi beech kaya ne ek ke body per ek bahut hi bada cut kar diya ye dekhke dusre ne thoda jor se apni power ka war kaya per kiya or kaya ne apni talvar ko aage kar diya or vo energy usi talvar me sama gyi. Or iska fayeda utha kar kaya ne ek dum se us bande ki mundi alag kar di or baaki sabhi keval dekhte hi rahe.




Baaki vikraal or un dono me powers ka mukabla ho raha tha udd udd kar dono ek dusre per hamla kar rahe the. Lekin natiza kuch bhi nhi nikal raha tha.





Tab vikraal ne apni powers ka istemaal bada diya or ek tez roshni nikli uski body se. Or pal bhar me dono ka ant ho gya. Is roshni ka tod filhaal kisi ke pass nhi tha. Yahi roshni vikraal ne prithvi per bhi chhodi thi jisme sabhi log jal kar khak ho gye the.



Bahi sirf ek bacha hua tha. Or kaya ki talvar uski garden per thi. Uski halat baise hi kharab ho rakhi thi.



Aise me vikraal uske pass aaya.




Vikraal- Jake bol do apne raja se ki uske din ab bhar gye hai uska kaal jald hi uske darwaje per dastak dene wala hai. Isliye hame rokne me samay barbaad na kare or apne chhupne ki vyavastha karke rakhe.




Us guard ne mundi hilai or vo pal bhar me baha se gayab ho gya or seedha pahuch hell king ke pass or use pura sandesh sunaya jise sunke uska para bhi chadne laga lekin tabhi uske dimaag me ek tarkeeb aai jis bajah se uske chehre per smile aagyi. Or use pura vishwas tha ki ye tarkeeb kaise bhi fail nhi hone wali.






Baaki next update me jaaniye ki akhir he konsi tarkeeb hai. Or hell king kya karta hai. Or surya or vanraj ab kya karte hai inhe rokne ke liye.



Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.















To be continue………………………..

Fabulous update

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Hell king surya ki help lega aur fight bi honi h dev bhai kibentry wao ane wale updates bahut bahut jayda awesome hone wale h

 

[Rudrathakur]

Lgta h hell king ab firse khud hi surya ke paas aayega uski madad lene aur usko madad dene bhi.. Kyuki ab surya hi h jo vikral ko khtm kr skta h sayd ne black heart ko bhi rok skta h ...kyuki bina powers ke hi ab tk usne vikraal ki halat khrab kr di thi to agr ab use powers ke sath sath hathiyaar bhi mil jaate h to wo sone pr suhaga ho jaayega..dekhte h kya bakai me hell king surya ke paas aata h ya koi aur idea h uske paas waise sbse best option surya hi h.
Wahi surya ko dev ne past ke sath chhed chhad krne se rok diya aur use iske parinaam bhi smjha diye..
Aur present me chhaya ko marke vikraal ki halat aur shaktiya waise hi dheeli kr di h. Dekhte h iske pta surya ko kb tk lgta h ki usne jo kaand kiya uska prinaam kya hua. H ..to jaannne ke liye intzaar h brother kya hota h aage🗡

 

[mashish]

UPDATE - 78














Ham log plane me baithe hue the lekin ek dusre se baat bhi nhi kar rahe the. Balki apni apni socho me gum the. Mere dimaag me kai tarah ke khayal aaraye the. Lekin sab be matlab ke the. Or yahi haal vanraj ka bhi tha.







Bahi dusri tarah vikraal hame lagataar dekh raha tha. Use bhi pata chal gya tha ki ham kya soch rahe hai or kaha ja rahe hai. Isliye vo hame rokne ke liye counter plan bana raha tha.






Abhi ham apnianjil se kaafi dur the. Tabhi achanak se mousam me kaafi badlaav hone laga. Hamare plane ko bijli ke jhatke lagne lage.





Main- kya ho raha hai Harry.





Harry- sir achanak se mousam kharab ho gya hai ghabrane ki baat nhi hai.






Main- badiya hai. Jaldi chalo.




Harry- ok sir.





Abhi maine itna hi bola tha ki pata nhi kya hua. Hamare plane se kuch takraya. Or uske takrate hi plane me bahut hi bada dhamaka ho gya. Hame kuch bhi samajh me nhi aaya ki kya hua kaise hua. Or ab haalat ye thi ki ham jameen per girte hue ja rahe the kisi par kate pakchhi ki tarah. Or ham dono hi hosh me nahi the hamari aankhe band thi. Or itni unchai se girne ke baad hamare hath pair na tute ye to sambhav hi nhi tha. Bhale hi ham mare na lekin nuksaan to kaafi hone wala tha.





Or yahi sab sochate hue ham dono jameen per dhadaam se gire. Or girte hi ham dono ko hosh aagya or hosh ke sath hame hua bhayankar dard ka aabhash. Itna ki mar hi jaate to badiya rehta. Or dard kuch jyada hi tha isliye ham fir se behosh ho gye.





Ham kaha the kaha nhi kuch pata nhi tha hame.








Bahi dusri taraf vikraal ne black heart ko jinda karne ka process raat me hi shuru kar diya tha. Uski body ko recover karke uske mathe per paras pathar ko rakh diya tha or usse black heart ko jinda karne ka aavahan bhi kar diya tha. Or vo pathar apne kaam me bhi lag chuka tha. Vikraal or kaya dono hi is sari process me bahi moujud the. Or chhaya ko vikraal ne surya or vanraj ko rokne ke liye bheja tha. Or unke plan ko udane me iska hi hath tha.




Or ye abhi bhi unke aas pass hi bani hui thi. Taaki kisi tarah inko rok ke rakh sake.







Kaafi der baad meri aankh khuli. Body ka sara dard ab gayab ho chuka tha. Or jaise hi mujhe yaad aaya ki mera plane blast ho chuka hai. Me ek dum se uth gya. Or charo taraf dekhne laga. Charo taraf andhera laga hua tha. Lekin mere night vision lences se mujhe sab dikh raha tha. Tabhi meri najar vanraj per padi jo mujhse thodi duri per pada hua tha behosh. Me uth ke uske pass gya. Or use aawaj lagane laga. Use hilane dulane laga. Mere pass ek chhoti paani ki bottle thi jisme se maine uske uper thoda paani chidka or paani girte hi vo bhi hadbada kar uth gya. Uske uthte hi maine paani piya or thoda sa use diya.




Usne bhi pani piya




Vanraj- ham kaha hai.





Main- pata nhi.




Vanraj- hua kya tha.





Main- blast Plane me.





Vanraj- ye pakka vikraal ka hi kaam hoga.





Main- ho sakta hai.






Vanraj- ab kya kare.






Main- pehle to kisi safe jagah chalte hai fir sochenge ki kya kare.






Vanraj mera sahara leke khada hua. Uske baad maine Harry se contact karne ki kosis ki lekin nhi hua. Fir hamne aas pass ke area ko achhe se dekha. Charo taraf khet hi the or doudne ke liye bahut hi achha maidaan bhi tha.





Maine vanraj ki taraf dekha or usne meri taraf or hamne aankho hi aankho me ishara kar liya or doud laga di. Hamne doud lagai circle me. Ham time travel karne ki kosis karne lage. Hamari speed apne charam per thi. Tabhi hamare raste me kai tarah ke blast hone lage jisse rasta ubad khabad hone laga. Hame pata hi nhi chal pa raha tha ki hamla ho kaha se raha hai. Or rasta kharab ho jaane ki bajah se hamne apna dayera bada liya lekin speed kam nhi hone di.






Bahi chhaya ne jab ye dekha to usne kai jagah per hamla start kar diya. Taaki ham doud na paaye.




Lekin ham kahi na kahi se apna rasta banate ja rahe the. Ye dekhke vo pareshan ho ne lagi or usne abki baar hamla kiya vanraj ke uper. Lekin hamari speed bahut tez thi jis bajah se uska nishana sahi se nahi lag raha tha. Na mere uper na vanraj ke uper. Ye dekhke ham dono hi muskura rahe the.




Tab chaya ne thoda dimaag lagaya or usne hamla hamare raste me thode aage karna start kiya taaki hamari or uski timing mil sake. Vo har baar nakamyaab ho rahi thi. Or isi beech hamara portal khul gya or ham dono hi usme ghus gye. Or time barrier ko todte hue ham ja pahuche 1 din pehle. Jab sab normal tha or vikraal bhi nhi jaga tha.




Vanraj- ab kya karna hai.





Main- hame pathar ko chhipana padega. Taaki jab tum ghar aao pathar lene to tumhare hath nakli pathar lage.






Vanraj- aisa possible nhi hai. Kyuki pathar ab active hai to ham use kahi bhi chhipa le mujhe uski exact location mil hi jayegi or vikraal ko bhi. Isliye use chhipane se kuch fayeda nhi hone wala.







Main- ha yar me to bhul hi gya tha. To ab kya kiya jaaye.







Vanraj- hame vikraal ko mujhtak pahuchne se pehle hi rokna hai. Taaki vo mere ghar tak pahuche hi na or na hi mujhe blackmail kar sake.







Main- ye badiya hai. Vo kal aaya tha haina.






Vanraj- ha. Sham ke 4 baje ke karib.






Main- to ab kal sham tak ham kya karenge.




Vanraj- intjar.




Ye kehkar ham baha se seedhe mumbai ke liye nikal gye doud laga ke. Hajaron km ka safar tha jo hamne kuch hi min. Me pura kar liya. Or ham is waqt mumbai me the.



Hamne ek chhoti si lodge me 2 kamre liye or unme hi chhip kar baith gye. Uske baad maine apne mobile me thodi cctv ki hacking ki or vanraj ke ghar ke aaspaas jitne bhi cctv the unhe search kiya. To mujhe ek cctv mil gya. Jisse vanraj ka ghar to nhi dikh raha tha lekin vo gali jarur dikh rahi thi. Or agar koi vanraj ke ghar jata hai to hame aaram se pata chal jaane wala tha.





Ab thi planing ki baari. Or me samajh gya tha ki inko harana itna aasan nhi hai. Isliye mujhe dev ki ya hell king ki madad ki jarurat padne wali thi.




Isliye sabse pehle maine dev se contact kiya.





Main- hii dev.





Dev- or kaisa lag raha hai dusri baar past me aake.





Main- tension ho rahi hai. Baaki sab theek hai.





Dev- to ab kya karne ka socha hai.






Main- kuch sujh hi to nhi raha hai ki kya or kaise kiya jaaye. Koi rasta ho to bata do.








Dev- baise tumhe thodi future ki jhalak dikha deta hu. Tum kuch bhi karlo paras pathar vikraal ke hath lag ke rahega. Or agar tum dono ne abhi use rokne ki kosis ki to dono hi past me maare jaoge. Ye tay hai. Tum apni reality ko badalna chahte ho lekin hoga bahi jo likha hua hai. Isliye meri mano to Bapis chale jaao or black heart ke Bapis aane ka intjar karo.








Main- agar black heart aagya to use bhi to main nhi rok sakta na. Aise hi vo bhi mujhe bhari padega tab kya karunga me.





Dev- sirf lado or kuch nhi. Baki ka kaam kismat kar degi.






Main- kam se kam chhaya kaya ko to maar hi sakte hai or kyu na me paras pathar ka istemaal karke teeno ko maar du. Abhi to vo mere ghar per hi hai.








Dev- aisa tum kar sakte ho. Lekin ek baat tumhe pata hi hai ki jo vikraal yaha aaya tha vo keval ek parchhai bhar tha. To use maar bhi doge tab bhi kuch nhi badlega. Ulta vikraal jyada tabahi macha dega. Or ho sakta hai kai log usme maare jaaye.








Main- to kya me aise hi haar manlu. Or paras pathar ko me bol dunga ki asli wale vikraal ko maar do to vo jaha bhi hoga use dhund ke vo maar dega.







Dev- agar tumne aisa kiya to multiverse me tehalka mach jayega. Or kai alag timeline paida ho jayegi jiska parinam bahut hu bhayanak hoga ham sabke liye. Vikraal ko marna hai lekin abhi nhi. Uska time abhi nhi aaya hai.






Ye sunke mera dimaag ghum gya ki ab karu to kya karu.






Main- tum majak nhi kar rahe ho na.






Dev- nhi surya me sach keh raha hu. Me sab jaante hue tumhe aisa kaam nhi karne de sakta jisse samast brahmaand me musibaton ka bhandara lag jaaye.





Main- To fir tumne mujhse ye time travel karne se pehle mujhse kyu nhi kaha kuch bhi.







Dev- kyuki yaha tumhe aana tha. Or ab vapis jaana hai. Kuch bhi change kiye bina.






Main- theek hai me yaha se vapis chala jaunga lekin khali hath nhi. Mujhe tumse kuch chahiye hai. Jisse me in sabhi ka khatma kar saku. Koi weapon ya kuch or. Ye sabhi aasani se marne walo me se nhi hai. Me inse din bhar lad sakta hu lekin inko maar nhi sakta hu. Isliye mujhe kuch aisa chahiye jisse in sabhi ka khatma hota jaaye. Or black heart ko chot pe chot lagti jaaye.








Dev- iske liye tumhe hell king se sampark karna padega. Vo jo bhi deal tumse karna chahe kar lo. Kyuki bahi ek aise hai jo tumhe kuch aisa de sakte hai jisse tum sabhi per bhari padoge.







Main- unhone mujhse vada kiya hai ki bina kisi deal ke vo mera sath denge. To fir deal karne ki kya jarurat hai.







Dev- ha mujhe pata hai lekin tum unse yahi kehna jo maine tumse kaha hai. Kehna unko ki jo aap kahoge me sab karne ko ready hu. Bas mujhe in sabhi ko harane ke liye powers chahiye hai. Baaki unke uper chhod do.







Main- pakka na. Kahi fasba mat dena.






Dev- viswas rakho mujhper tumhe kuch bhi nhi hone dunga me.






Main- ok. To ab ham Bapis jaaye.






Dev- ha tumhari ab baha jyada jarurat hai. Kyuki tumhara pariwar akela hai. Or chhaya or kaya kaafi khatarnaak hai.







Main- samajh gya.




Ye kehkar hamara sampark tut gya. Or me bahi baith gya.















To be continue……………………….

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Kaafi der tak me sochta raha ki kya karu dev ki baat maanu ya rehne du. Ek baar ko to mujhe doubt bhi hua ki kahi me kisi or se baat to nhi kar raha tha. Lekin fir mera doubt apne aap chala bhi gya. Kyuki dev ke mamle me koi risk ho hi nhi sakta hai. Uski jaankari kisi ko bhi nhi hai mere aalawa. Na hell king ki na kisi or ko. Isliye shak karna bebuniyaad hai.




Isliye me turant hi apne kamre se bahar aaya or gya vanraj ke kamre me.





Vanraj ne darwaja khola.





Vanraj- kya hua.





Main- hame vapis jana hoga. Ham yaha kuch bhi nhi kar sakte hai. Or agar hamne timeline me ched chhad ki to bahut badi gadbad ho sakti hai.






Vanraj- lekin achanak kya hua. Or tumhe ye sab kaise pata






Main- mera ek shubh chintak hai usne mujhe ye jaankari di hai. Or uski baato per yakeen na karna bahut badi bebakafu hogi. Isliye jaisa usne kaha hai hame Bapis jana hoga






Vanraj- theek hai chale jayenge lekin fir vikraal or black heart ka kya karenge apan.







Main- black herat jinda hoke rahega or hame uska saamna bhi karna hi padega aaj nhi to kal. Lekin aisa hoga jarur. Ham usse bhag nhi sakte hai. Or abhi jyada sawal mat karo me sayad jawab nhi de paunga. Isliye jaisa ho raha hai hone dete hai.





Vanraj- ok.




Uske baad ham dono Bapis se apne usi jagah ke liye nikal gya jaha se ham aaye the. Or baha jaake firse hamne time travel kiya. Or Bapis apni timeline me pahuch gye.





Ham jaise hi bahar nikale bahar chhaya hamara wait kar rahi thi. Or usne fir se hamper hamla kar diya. Or is baar hamse uska hamla takra gya or ham dono hi bikhar se gye. Bahut jor se laga ye jhatka.







Chhaya- surya tumne kya kiya hai baha jaake mujhe batao. Verna abki baar dono ko jaan se maar dungi vo bhi bina kisi chetavani ke.





Vanraj- are kuch nhi kiya hai jaise gye the baise hi Bapis aagye hai. Or jara tum hi socho agar hamne baha kuch kiya hota to tum yaha iss waqt hamara wait nhi kar rahi hoti balki kisi kabr me dafan hoti. Kyuki tumhe jinda to nhi chodte ham dono.





Ye sunke chhaya me thoda vichar kiya or usne vikraal se contact kiya or use pata chala ki sab theek hai. Or ye sunke use yakeen ho gya ki bakai me in logo ne kuch nhi kiya hai.






Chhaya- achha faisla liya tum dono ne jo baha jaake kuch nhi kiya. Baise bhi bahut kam jindagi bachi hai tum dono ki. Isliye achha yahi hoga ki apani family ke sath jyada se jyada time spend karo. Or hame rokne ke upaay sochna band kar do. Abhi tumne dekhi nhi hai hamari shaktiya.






Main- ha pata hai or yahi baat me bhi tumse kehna chahunga ki aainda mere pariwar ko mere khilaaf istemaal kiya to tera ye sir tere dhad se alag karke football khelunga usse. Himmat hai to mere se aamne saamne lado. Fir bhale me haar jaau ya kuch bhi ho. Lekin family ko beech me laai to anjaam aisa hoga ki duniya me kabhi dobara janm lene se pehle 100000 baar sochogi ki lu ya na lu. Abhi tum bhi nhi jaanti ho mujhe.







Chhaya- ohhh me to dar gyi.



Ye kehkar vo hasne lagi.





Main khada hua.




Main- ek kaam karte hai aao 2-2 hath kar lete hai.





Chhaya- achha theek hai to. Aajao. Or agar mar jaao tum to mujhse mat kehna fir.






Main- nhi kahunga.







Ye kehkar usne bina koi warning keujhoer hamla kiya. Me turnt hi side ko ho gya. Maine apna suitup kiya or apni energy ko ekathha kiya or ek tez jhatka mara uske thobde per or bakai me tagda tha jhatka uske anjar panjar sab dheele ho gye. Or iska fayeda maine uthaya or time ko slow kiya. Or fir uske thobde ko jo foda hai maine. Uski body react hi nahi kar pa rahi thi usse pehle hi mere punches usko lag rahe the. Or fir time normal hua or use itna tez dard hua ki uski cheekh dur dur tak sunai di hogi logo ko.








Main- maja aaya Mrs chaya vikraal. Utho or saamna karo mera.





Ye kehkar me uske pass gya. To usne apni maya failana shuru kar diya usne apne anek ruk bana liye. Jo mere charo taraf faile hue the.




Chhaya- dum to hai tumhare andar. Ab dekhna hai dimaag kitna hai. Dhundo mujhe.





Maine apne charo tafar dekha to har taraf chhaya hi chhaya thi. Uper se aaj chand bhi nhi nikala tha. Sayad badalo me chhipa hua tha. Isliye samajh me hi nhi aaraha tha ki konsi asli hai konsi nakli. Uske karib 25 rup baha moujud the.





Maine apni speed ko full kiya or time ko firse slow kiya. Or ek ek ke thobde per punch maarna shuru kiya. Jitni nakli thi unke aarpaar mera hath nikal raha tha. Lekin jo asli thi usko ye punch bahut jor se lagne wale the.




Ek ek karke maine sabhi ko mara or 24 ko kuch nhi hua. Lekin 25be ko jo punch laga uska sara concertrate tut gya or uske sare ruk ek ek karke gayab ho gaye. Maine apni sword nikali or uske dill me ghusa di. Bina kisi deri ke. Meri swrod uske dill ko cheerte hue aarpaar nikal gyi.





Or uski cheekhe puri fizaao me fail gyi. Use viswas nhi ho raha tha ki ye kaise or kyu hua. Meri talvar uske dill me kaise ghus gyi. Jabki baha per achhe se achhe hathiyar bhi nhi ghus paate hai.





Chhaya em dum hairan thi. Or vo kuch samajh paati usse pehle hi vo pathar ban gyi or tukdo me bikhar gyi.





Maine apni talvar ko saaf kiya or use dekha to usme meri energy beh rahi thi sayad isiliye ye isko bhedne me kaamyaab rahi. Chalo jo bhi hua ho ek musibat to khatam hui.





Vanraj- kya baat hai maja agaya.




Main- mujhe bhi thodi frustration to kam hui.





Vanraj- ha lekin ab nikale yaha se Verna fir koi nai musibat aa sakti hai yaha per.




Main- sahi kaha.





Uske baad ham baha se mumbai ke liye vapis chale gaye. Kaafi thak gye the ham donk hi. Vanraj ka ghar to tut fut gya tha. Isliye ham dono mere hi ghar gye or jaate hi ek ek kamre me ghus gye or so gye.






Bahi dusri taraf vikraal ko jab chhaya ke marne ka pata chala to vo bahut hi tez se chillaya. Or uske sath kaya bhi. Kyuki bina kisi chetavani ke uski aadhi shaktiya chali gyi thi chhaya ke sath. Ye dono usi ka hissa thi. Or is hisaab se agar kaya or or maar diya jaaye to sayad vikraal khud ba khud mar jaaye.ya itna kamjor ho jaaye ki use koi bhi maar sake.





Lekin ye baat sirf vikraal or chaya hi jaante the surya ko ye baat filhaal nhj pata tha.




Bahi black heart ko jinda karne ki process apne charam per thi. Or kuch ghanto me puri bhi ho jaane wali thi.



Uska sari ek percent bhi nhi sada tha jabki kai varshon se vo vaise hi pada hua tha.




Ye baat hell king ko bhi pata chal chuki thi ki black heart jinda hone wala hai. Isliye unhone apne kuch khaas aadmiyo ko bheja vikraal ke pass taaki use rok sake or us pathar ko hasil kar sake.







Ye log total 4 the or baha sirf vikraal or kaya.






Unhone bina kisi warning ke in dono per hamla kar diya. Or hamla ladai takatvar bhi tha. Lekin ye dono bhi kam nhi the.





Or is hamle se vikraal ka gussa satven aasaman per pahuch gya tha.



Jaise hi vo khada hua uske body per yodhaao wali poshak aagyi or uske hatho me ek sword or yahi same kaya ke sath bhi hua vo bhi puri tarah se ready ho gyi yudh ke liye.





Yhaa ye char bhi ready the.




Vikraal- hat jaao mere raste se Verna sabhi ko khak bana dunga.





H1- tumhe maare bina ham nhi rukne wale black heart kisi bhi tarah jinda nahi ho sakta hamare rehte.






Vikraal- to fir tum sabko marna hoga kyuki black heart to jinda hoke rahega





Ye kehkar vikraal ne apne talvar se energy ko release kiya lekin vo ready the. Unhone uske hamle ko hawa me hi rok diya. Bahi kaya ne bakio ki taraf doud laga di. Uska saamna karne ke liye 2 log aage aaye or inme talvar ka mukabla hone laga. Kaya akeli hi dono per bhari pad rahi thi. Talvar bazi me usko hara pana na mumkin sa lag raha tha. Isi beech kaya ne ek ke body per ek bahut hi bada cut kar diya ye dekhke dusre ne thoda jor se apni power ka war kaya per kiya or kaya ne apni talvar ko aage kar diya or vo energy usi talvar me sama gyi. Or iska fayeda utha kar kaya ne ek dum se us bande ki mundi alag kar di or baaki sabhi keval dekhte hi rahe.




Baaki vikraal or un dono me powers ka mukabla ho raha tha udd udd kar dono ek dusre per hamla kar rahe the. Lekin natiza kuch bhi nhi nikal raha tha.





Tab vikraal ne apni powers ka istemaal bada diya or ek tez roshni nikli uski body se. Or pal bhar me dono ka ant ho gya. Is roshni ka tod filhaal kisi ke pass nhi tha. Yahi roshni vikraal ne prithvi per bhi chhodi thi jisme sabhi log jal kar khak ho gye the.



Bahi sirf ek bacha hua tha. Or kaya ki talvar uski garden per thi. Uski halat baise hi kharab ho rakhi thi.



Aise me vikraal uske pass aaya.




Vikraal- Jake bol do apne raja se ki uske din ab bhar gye hai uska kaal jald hi uske darwaje per dastak dene wala hai. Isliye hame rokne me samay barbaad na kare or apne chhupne ki vyavastha karke rakhe.




Us guard ne mundi hilai or vo pal bhar me baha se gayab ho gya or seedha pahuch hell king ke pass or use pura sandesh sunaya jise sunke uska para bhi chadne laga lekin tabhi uske dimaag me ek tarkeeb aai jis bajah se uske chehre per smile aagyi. Or use pura vishwas tha ki ye tarkeeb kaise bhi fail nhi hone wali.






Baaki next update me jaaniye ki akhir he konsi tarkeeb hai. Or hell king kya karta hai. Or surya or vanraj ab kya karte hai inhe rokne ke liye.



Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.















To be continue………………………..

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[krish1152]

Nice update

 

[Reza]

Superb Update Bro...
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[mashish]

Waiting for next

 

[Anky@123]

Behtreen update bhai