Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

[Rudrathakur]

Gjb to surya ko ghost rider ki powers mili h...ye kmaal ka ghost rider bnega jiske paas super speed bhi h..sath me technology bhi aur jo amanviya shaktiya use chahiye thi wo ghost rider ki powers ke roop me use mil gyi h....ab dekhte h ye combination kya dhamaka machata h black heart aur uske sathiyo me...wahi black heart ne hell king ki aatma ko bandi bna liya ...pr kya ye sach me hi hell king tha ya uski koi maya itni aasani se hell king ka ye hasr hazam nhi ho rha..maybe uske paas koi to plan kiya hoga hi apne aap ko surakshit rkhne ka. ..ab dekhte h kya hota h kyuki jung ka sankhnaad black heart ne bja bhi diya aur uski sena sbhi jagaho pr uski pataka felane ke liye kooch kr chuki h..wahi dekhte h prathivi pr kya hota h...jo ye keeda black heart ne vikraal ko diya lgta h ye bahut tgdi tabahi machayega..so waiting for next brother🗡🗡

 

[Reza]

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[Rahul0087@]

Sorry bhai log aaj update aane ke chances thode kam hi hai. Kal bahut busy tha jisme likhne ka time hi nhi mila. And aaj bhi bahar jana hai kaam se isliye ho sakta hai aaj bhi na aaye update. Baaki aa bhi sakta hai agar jaldi free ho gya to likhunga baaki vada nhi karta me. I hope aap log thoda adjust kar lenge.





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[mashish]

UPDATE - 80














Hell king ne kuch socha tha. Isliye vo turant hi baha se gayab ho gya. Uske sabhi sathi baha ki suraksha me lag gye. Unko bhi pata tha ki king jarur kisi khaas kaam se gye hai kahi.






Bahi is waqt main badiya se apni neend le raha tha.




Ki achanak se me ek andheri sunsaan jagah per tha jo ek xforum tha. Baha se 4 raste gye the. Maine pehle thoda socha or mujhe samajh me aagya ki me yaha kyu hu






Main- kaha ho aap





Ye kehte hi mere pichhe se aawaj aai.





H.king- yahi hu tumhare pichhe.





Main pechhe muda or mere saamne hell king khade the.






Main- kahiye mujhe yaha kyu bulaya hai aapne.






H.king- jaise tumhe kuch pata hi nhi haj. Jaante ho na kya chal raha hai. Or aage kya hone wala hai.






Main- ha main janta hu. Or isme kahi na kahi meri bhi galti hai. Me bhi raksha kar paya us pathar ki.







H.king- nhi surya tumne in sabko jitna roka hai utna to sayad me bhi nhi rok pata. Balki sirf tumhari bajah se ham itne dino se surakshit the. Lekin ab nhi hai. Or me janta hu ki aisa hona hi tha kisi na kisi din.







Main- badiya hai. To ab aage kya karne ka irada hai. Baise aap to itne powerfull hai. Aap insabko kyu nhi maar rahe ho. Ye vikraal or uske sathiyo ko. Khatam kardo aadhi tension to mitegi







H.king- idea achha hai lekin me ye nhi kar sakta. Mere andar ab vo baat nhi rahi hai. Or aisa hone ke peechhe black heart ka hi hath hai. Usne meri power of sources ko mita diya tha pichhli fight me. Jis bajah se ab utna takatvar nhi hu jitna pehle tha. Or hell se bahar nikalte hi meri powers seemit ho jaati hai. Isliye unka mukabla me hell ke bahar to nhi kar sakta hu.








Main- ohh to ye baat hai. Tabhi me sochu ki aapne abhi tak kuch kiya kyu nhi. Kyuki black heart ke jinda hone ke baad sabse jyada khatra to aapko hi hone wala hai.







H.king- ha lekin ye baat uske dusre sathiyo ko nhi pata hai. Verna abhi tak vo sabhi milke mujhe kabka khatam kar dete. Ye baat sirf black heart hi jaanta tha. Jise maine apni saari shaktiyo se mita diya tha.






Main- theek hai. To ab aap bataiye ki kya karna hai or kaise karna hai. Kyuki ab khatra kai guna bad gya hai. Or aise me main unke saamne jyada der nhi tik sakta hu. Ye baat aap bhi jaante hai. Me bhag sakta hu. Hatho se hajaro ki mundi alag kar sakta hu. Lekin jab mundi alag hone per bhi vo na mare to me kya hi karu.








H.king- isiliye to aaya hu me yaha per. Mere pass tumhare liye offer hai. Tum itne shaktishali ho jaoge ki black heart bhi tumhare saamne jyada der nhi tik payega. Lekin is powers ke kuch side effect bhi hai.







Main- kaise side effect.






H.king- is power ko control karna bahut hi muskil hai. Or jab jab ye power active hogi tum surya nhi rahoge balki kuch or hi ban jaoge.







Main- what. Agar me apne hosh me hi nhi rahunga to kaise kaam chalega jara socho agar us saks ne kisi aise ko maar diya jisko nhi maarna tha fir.








H.king- aisa nhi hoga. Kyuki ye power keval burai ko hi mitati hai. Agar tumhare aaspass burai rahegi to ye apne aap hi active ho jayegi. Or tum puri tarah se badal jaoge or ek rider ban jaoge. GHOST RIDER.

Bas uske baad jab tak un sabhi burai ka khatma vo nhi karega tab tak tum baise hi bane rahoge. Or jaise hi tumhare aaspass se burai hategi tum normal ban jaoge.








Main- ye bahut hi khatarnaak lag raha hai mujhe. Kya mujhe hamesha ke liye use jhelna padega.






H.king- ha filhaal to yhi ek rasta hai jiski madad se tum in sabhi ka khatma kar sakte ho.






Main- ek baat or batao. Jab black heart tumhare udhar hamla karega tab aap kya karoge. Kyuki me to prithvi per hi rahunga.






H.king- vo tum mujhper chhod do. Me apne logo ko kisi na kisi tarah bacha hi lunga. Baaki tum keval yaha ka morcha sambhalo. Kyuki ek baar agar black heart ne yaha per apna saamrajya jama liya to fir pure brahmaand me tabahi mach jayegi or koi bhi kahi bhi surakshit nhi rahega. Fir chahe vo hell me ho ya kahi or. Isliye usko yaha apne pair jamane se tumhe rokna hoga. Or ye powers usme tumhara pura sath degi. Ab ye faisla tumhe karna hai ki tum ise accept karte ho ya nhi.







Main- aapko iske badle koi deal bhi karni hai kya mujhse.






H.king- nhi. Maine tumse vada kiya tha ki meri jarurat padne per me madad karunga to yahi hai meri madad.





Main- baise ye power ka aapne abhi tak istemaal kyu nhi kiya kabhi.







H.king- maine pehle bhi kiya hai iska istemaal. Lekin dusro currypt karke unhen badle me ye power maine di hai. Or ab unke contract khatam ho gye hai. Isliye ye ab aise hi padi hui hai. Ye meri hi creation hai. Or jaha tak me soch raha hu. Tumhari or rider ki powers milke kuch kamaal hi hoga.








Main- me aapki baat ko maan leta hu. Lekin meri ek condition hai.






H.king- kya.





Main- ye power mujhe hamesha ke liye nhi chahiye hai. Isliye black heart ke marte hi mujhe isse chhutkara chahiyen. Kyuki bure loge ke liye main baise hi kaafi hu. Ha lekin future me kabhi iski dobara jarurat padegi to me ise fir se accept kar lunga. Lekin seemit samay ke liye. Permanent isko me nahj rakhne wala. Agar ye ho sakta hai to aap mujhe ye powers de sakte hai. Verna me aise hi theek hu.








H.king- theek hai surya me tumse ye shaktiyan vapis le lunga kyuki hamare beech koi contract nhi ho raha hai isliye aisa hona sambhav bhi ho jayega. Lekin ye tum per nirbhar karega. Agar tum chahoge to aisa ho jayega or nhi chahoge to aisa nhi hoga.






Main- done.






Uske baad hell king ne mere mathe per apna hath rakha or achanak se meri neend khul gyi. Me abhi bhi apne bister per hi tha. Maine time dekha to 6 baj gaye the. Or meri neend bhi udd gyi thi. Mujhe apne andar garmi si mehsus hone lagi thi. Isliye me jaldi se utha or bathroom me ghus gya. Jaha maine badiya shower liya jisse andar ki garmi shant ho gyi. Uske baad maine apne aap ko aaine me dekha to mujhe kuch khaas fark nhi laga jaise kuch hua hi nhi ho. Baaki pata nhi.





Main ready hua or neeche aaya jaha almost sabhi jaag chuke the. Neeche varsha or uski maa bhi moujud thi. Or sath me charo bache bhi.





Varsha- uncle papa kaha hai.




Main- yahi kisi kamre me so rahe honge. Sath me hi aaye the ham dono.




Ye sunke varsha ne sabhi kamro ka darwaja khatkhataya or ek me se vanraj bahar bhi nikal aaya jise dekhke vo kush ho gyi or turant hi gale lag gyi.





Vanraj- me theek hu chinta mat karo. Tumhari maa kaha hai.




Varsha- yahi haj.




Ye kehke dono alag hue or hall me aagye. Jaha varsha ki maa bhi vanraj se mili.





Ashk- papa hua kya tha. Puri mumbai kabad ho gyi hai. Hamara clg bhi ab nhi raha hai.







Main- beta musibat aachuki hai or ab aasani se jayegi nhi. Isliye mera manna hai ki tum sabhi Bapis gaao chale jaao jab tak sab theek nhi hota hai. Kyuki yaha khatra badta hi ja raha hai.





Ye sunke sabse bada jhatka amar ko laga kyuki vo ab nidhi se nhi mil payega. Use koi bahana bhi nhi mil raha tha batane ke liye. Or bahi teeno uski halat bhi samajh rahe the.





Main- amar koi problem hai kya.






Amar- nhi chachu. Sab theek haj. Bas mujhe tension ho rahi hai ki ab hamari padai ka kya hoga.






Main- beta padai to kahi se bhi ki ja sakti hai. Online classes ki vyavastha kar dega clg tum sabki. Isliye padai ki tension lo hi mat.






Avi- papa hame bhi madad karni hai aapki. Is ladai me. Ham aise hath per hath rakhe nhi baithe reh sakte hai.






Main- achha. To ye karo ki ghar ki raksha karo. Kyuki ab me ghar filhaal nhi aane wala hu. Jab tak ye sab khatam nhi ho jata hai. Isliye ghar ki dekh rekh tum sabhi ko karni hai rony or bhai ke sath milke.






Un sabhi ka man to nhi tha lekin mere bar baar samjhane per vo maan gye. Or maine unke sath varsha or uski maa ko bhej diya. Car se hi. Kyuki flights saari delay chal rahi thi or mera jet to blast ho gya tha. Jiska mujhe kaafi dukh tha. Halaki company se naya mil jayega insurance ki madad se lekin usme waqt lagega. Vanraj bhi mere faisale se kush tha. Use bhi ab jyada chinta nhi rahegi in dono ki.





Baaki dekhte hai kya hota hai sab aage.














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[mashish]

UPDATE - 81














Amar ne nidhi ko call karke sab bata diya tha. Or ye sunke use bhi bahut bura lag raha tha. Use bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki vo kya kahe kya kare. Kaise vo amar ke pass reh sake. Lekin filhaal use koi rasta nhi mila sivaay ek ke ki vo bhi udaypur chali jaaye or bahi ruke. Lekin vo aise ghar se nhi ja sakti thi. Uske pita usko nahi jaane dete or ye baat vo bhi jaanti thi. Isliye usne filhaal ke liye ye sab sochna chhod diya. Or is judaai ko swikaar kar liya.









Bahi subah ki pehli kiran nikalte hi black heart ki aankhe khul gyi. Uska chehra pura safed pada hua tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise uski body me blood hai hi nhi. Or hoga bhi kaha se. Vo pehle se hi murda tha.





Bahi uske jaagte hi vikraal or kaya dono hi apne ghutno per baith gye or apne raja ko naman karne lage.







B.H- kaha hu main. Or ye konsa saal hai.






Vikraal- mere malik aap karib 100 varshon se soye hue the. Or ye ek Anjaan jagah hai jaha kaal ne aapko chhipa diya tha taaki aapka sarir salamat rahe or aapko firse neend se jagaya ja sake.







Ye sunte hi use yaad aaya ki kya hua tha or kyu vo so gya tha ya mar gya tha.

Or yaad aate hi uski anakhe puri tarah se laal ho gyi. Or uski aankho se turant hi ek laal roshni nikli jo ek bahut bade pahad se take gyi or dekhte hi dekhte vo pahad tukdo me tabdeel ho gya.






B.H- pitaji ab kya karoge kaise rokogi mujhe. Aapki jitni manmani karni thi aapne kar li. Ab mera samay aagya hai. Or aapka dafan hone ka.




Ye kehkar vi hasne laga or uske sath vikraal or kaya bhi.






B.H- kaal kaha hai vikraal.







Vikraal- malik vo ab nhi raha. Prithvi ke ek keede ne usko maar diya hai. Or itne dino se bahi ek tha jo aapko jinda nhi hone de raha tha. Usne is paras pathar ko chhipa rakha tha.








B.H- kya prithvi ka ek chhote se keeda ne tumhe or kaal ko pareshan kar rakha tha. Kuch aisa bolo jo hajam ho mujhe. Ya fir sach me tum log kamjor ho gye ho.






Vikraal- ha malik ham aapke bina bakai me kamjor hi ho gye hai. Hamare andar jaan to thi lekin takat bilkul bhi nhi thi. Ham bas ji rahe the is ummid men ki aap kabhi na kabhi vapis jarur aayenge







B.H- chinta mat karo ab me aagya hu. Ab sab theek ho jayega. Kaal ka badla bhi lenge ham. Puri prithvi ki iski keemat chukanj padegi. Lekin sabse pehle hame hell king ko thikane lagana hoga isse pehle vo mere khilaaf fir se koi chal chale unko rokna hoga or hamare sare sathi kaha per hai. Or mohini vo kaha hai.







Vikraal- un sabhi ko hell king ne bandhi bana rakha hai. Vo bhi aapke loutne ka intjar kar rahe hai. Us qaid me unki powers tak kaam nhi kar rahi hai. Or mohini ab nahi rahi hai. Usko bhi usi prithvi ke keede me maar diya hai isi pathar ki madad se.



Ye sunte hi black heart ka gussa or bad gya or usne apna pair jor se jameen per patak diya. Or aisa karte hi baha ki puri jameen me bhari kampann hone laga. Kai jagah per bahut badi badi daraar khul gyi. Or usi ek darar mese ek bahut hi chhota keeda bahar nikla.
Or black heart ne use apne hatho me le liya. Or apne aap ko shant karne ke baad bola.




B.H-theek hai sabse pehle hame aone sathio ko chudana hai fir us prithvi wale se niptenge.





Vikraal- maaf karna malik lekin me or kaya baha nhi ja sakte hai hamne agar baha pair bhi rakha to ham bhi khak ho jayenge.






B.H- oohh ha me bhul gye tha. Theek hai tum dono prithvi jaao or mere swagat ki taiyariyan karo. Or is ko apne sath le jaao. Tab tak me hell se nipat ke aata hun




Usne vo keeda vikraal ke hath me rakha




Vikraal- jo hukum.





Ye kehkar black heart baha se gayab ho gya or uske jaate hi vikraal or kaya bhi baha se prithvi chale gye.








Black heart hell ke darwaje per pahucha apna signature kala wala lumba kot pehne hue or jaise hi use baha ke pehredaro ne dekha usper hamla kar diya. Lekin vo hamla ustak pahuchta usse pehle hi ek energy ne us pure darwaje ke hi chithde uda diye jiski chapet me vo do pehredaar bhi aagye. Or udte hue andar ja gire.






Uske baad black heart ne apni janm bhumi per apne kadam rakhe. Is waqt vo pathar uske pass hi tha. Or ye energy usi se nikli thi. Vo apni shaktiyo ka istemaal bilkul bhi nhi kar raha tha sirf pathar ko aadesh de raha tha or vo apna kaam karte ja raha tha.






Vo andar aaya or jitne bhi logo ne use dekha unme bhagdad mach gyi. Sabhi apni apni jaan bacha kar baha se bhagne lage. Yaha baha. Or black heart ko ye dekhkar kaafi maja aaraha tha isliye usne unke gharo me baisi hi energy chhodna start kar diya. Or ek ek karke sabhi gharo me bhayankar blast hone lage jiski bajah se kaafi log marne lage.




Tabhi uski najar ek bache per padi jo bahut hi tez ro raha tha or uski maa uske baaju me hi Mari padi thi.



Vo uske pass gya uske sir per hath fera pyar se use thoda chup karaya or koi kuch samajhta usse hi pehle vo bacha bahi per puri tarah se sad gya. Uska sarir ek hi jhatke me aisa hogya jaise lakdi me dimak lagne ke baad vo sad jaati hai or uski dhul jharne lagti hai. Baise hi us bache ki puri body ek hi jhatke me sad gyi or rakh banke bahi per gir gyi. Ye dekhke bakio ki ruh kamp gyi.





Or abhi vo or aage jata usse pehle hi usper hamla hua jo kisi or ne nahi balki hell king ne kiya tha.





B.H- kaise hai pitaji. Marne ke liye ready ho aap.





H.king- bhul me mat raho black. Bhulo mat pehle bhi tumhe tumhari manjil tak pahucha chuka hu main.





B.H- ha janta hu ki dhoke se kaise aapne mujhe qaid kiya tha. Lekin ab meri soul aazad hai or ab aapke qaid hone ki baari hai.







H.king- kosis karke dekh lo sayad kaam ban jaaye. Or yaha ke Masum logo ko maarna band kardo Verna ye pathar bhi tumhe nhi bacha payega mujhse.






B.H- ohhh me to dar gya. Pitaji kripa kar mujhe mat maariyega.



Ye Kehke vo hasne laga or baha moujud baaki sabhi apne dant peesne lage.






Bahi hell king ko bhi gussa aagya or unhone apni saahi chhadi se usper hamla kar diya. Lekin usper iska koi asar nhi hua.





B.H- kya pitaji bhul gye jab tak mere pass ye pathar hai aapki kisi bhi shakti ka mujhper koi asar nhi hone wala.








H.king- ha pata hai. Lekin koi haj jisse tumhe ye pathar bhi nhi bacha payega.







B.H- achha kon hai vo jara batana.







H.king- hai koi jald hi tumhari mulakaat hogi usse. Tab khud pata chal jayega.





Ye sunke vo thoda soch me pad gya.






B.H- jab saamne aayega tab usko bhi dekh lenge. Filhaal aapki baari hai.


Ye kehkar usne apne hatho ko aage kiya or unse jabardast energy nikli jo seedhi jaake king ko lagne lagi. Lekin king bhi ready tha usne apni chhadi se uski powers ko rok liya


Or dono ke beech ek bheesan yudh hona laga. Jisme haar to king ki hi ho rahi thi. Dono ek dusre per bhari pad rahe the. Lekin jyada bhari black heart hi tha. Black heart unke karib gya or unko garden se pakad liya king ne apni chhadi aage ki to usne use apne hatho me pakad liya or unke hathon se chhen liya or apni pakad ko unki garden per majbut karne laga. Lekin ye sadne wala jadu unper kaam nhi kar raha tha. Isliye usne unki chhadi ka istemaal unhi per kiya or vo dur ja gire.




Uske baad vo sambhal pate usse pehle hi usne pathar se unki soul ko qaid karne ko keh diya. Or aisa kehte hi unka sharir bejaan sa dharti per gir pada. Uske baad vo unke body ke pass gya or use sada diya apni powers se. Bahi king ke log ye najara dekhte hi reh gye. Unhe samajh me nhi aaya ki ye kaise or kya ho gya.





B.H- abse yaha ka raja me hu. Or agar kisi ne meri baat manne se inkaar kiya to uska anjaam isse bhi bhayanak hoga.





Ye sunte hi baha per moujud sare log uske saamne jhuk gye. Or use pranaam karne lage.





Or sabko aise dekhke vo apni hasi hasne laga.





Fir usne ek khas ko ishare se apne pass bulaya. Or vo darte hue uske pass aaya.





B.H- jaao or mere sare sathiyo ko aazad kardo or unse kaho ki maine sabko darbaar me bulaya hai.






Ye sunke vo bhagta hua gya or black heart ke jitne samarthak the sabko usne aazad kar diya. Or sabko sandesha bhi suna diya. Jise sunke sabhi black heart ke darshan ke liye darbaar me doudte hue jaane lage. Or raste me jo bhi guard unhe milte vo un sabko maarne lage. Itne saalo ka gussa jo andar bhara hua tha vo sab nikalne lage. Or apni aazadi ka jashn manane lage. Un sabhi ne jail ke pass moujud har ek guard ko maar dala or kuch ne to unka khoon bhi pi liya itne saalo ki jo pyas thi saari un sabhi ne bujha li.





Aise hi sabhi pahuch gye darbaar me.





Baha unhone black heart ko king ki chair per baitha dekha or sabhi ne jhuk kar use pranam kiya.





Takshak- maharaj aapko sahi salamat dekhke kitni kushi ho rahi hai me bata nhi sakta hu.







B.H- hame bhi takshak ab tum sab aazad ho. Or jo karna hai kar sakte ho. Aadhe log prithvi per jaao or baha vikraal ke sath milke tehalka macha do. Sabko pata hona chahiye ki ham vapis aagye hai. Or baaki ke aadhe sabhi chhoti moti riyasato me jaao or hamara fermaan sunao ki ya to mit jaao ya mil jaao. Baaki aap sabhi jante hi hai ki kaise karna hai ye sab.






Ye sunke sabhi ne apni mundi ha me hilaai or sabhi ke chehre ki khushi hi bata rahi thi ki aaj ye sabhi kitne kush hai. Or black heart ka frrmaan sunte hi sabhi apne apne rasto per nikal gye.



Aadhe prithvi per to baaki space me baaki jagho per.






Baaki next update me dekhiye ki ab sab jagah kya hota hai. Or surya ki shaktiya kaise sabko rokti hai. Kya hota hai aage janne ke liye sath bane rahe.
















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Gjb to surya ko ghost rider ki powers mili h...ye kmaal ka ghost rider bnega jiske paas super speed bhi h..sath me technology bhi aur jo amanviya shaktiya use chahiye thi wo ghost rider ki powers ke roop me use mil gyi h....ab dekhte h ye combination kya dhamaka machata h black heart aur uske sathiyo me...wahi black heart ne hell king ki aatma ko bandi bna liya ...pr kya ye sach me hi hell king tha ya uski koi maya itni aasani se hell king ka ye hasr hazam nhi ho rha..maybe uske paas koi to plan kiya hoga hi apne aap ko surakshit rkhne ka. ..ab dekhte h kya hota h kyuki jung ka sankhnaad black heart ne bja bhi diya aur uski sena sbhi jagaho pr uski pataka felane ke liye kooch kr chuki h..wahi dekhte h prathivi pr kya hota h...jo ye keeda black heart ne vikraal ko diya lgta h ye bahut tgdi tabahi machayega..so waiting for next brother🗡🗡

Ha bhai surya ki khwahish to puri ho gyi or ab sahi maino me sabki band bajne wali hai. Or rahi baat hell king ki to kya pata sayad sach me qaid ho gye ho ya fir baha se bachke nikal gye ho. Who lnows. Baaki dekhte hai kya pata chalta hai inke ware me.. and rahi baat us keede ki to ha aage uska bhi role aayega or vo kya dhamaka karta hai ye janne ke liye sath bane rahe..









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