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Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

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Bahi vikraal chhip kar dekh raha tha. Or jaise hi usne dekha ki main kaya ke pass pahuch gya hu. Use samajhme nahi aaya ki ab vo kaya ko kaise bachaye. Or agar kaya khatam hui to uska bachna fir impossible ho jayega. Isliye ab uske pass samne aane ke aalawa koi or rasta hi nhi bacha tha.









Bahi vanraj ne mere ishare ko samjha or ek side ko khada ho gya. Bahi kaya ka muh ab meri taraf tha.




Or mujhe yaha per bahut saari buraai ki gandh aarahi thi. Like bahut saari. Jisse me samajh gya tha ki ye yaha akeli nhi hai.








Main2- apne saare sathiyo ko bhi bula lo. Jo yaha baha chhipe hue hai.






Kaya- unki jarurat nhi padegi tumhare liye me akeli hi kaafi hu. Nas itna bata do marne se pehle ki tum akhir ho kon.







Main2- jaankar kya kar logi. Baise bhi ab marne wali ho tum.







Ye kehkar main super fast speed se uske ek dum karib pahunch gya or apne hatho se uski garden ko pakad kar use utha diya.





Bahi vo is hamle se sambhal hi nhi paai. Or meri aag ki lapto ki tapan use bahut tez mehsus hone lagi. Or mere gala dabate rakhne se use saas lene me bhi kaafi takleef hone lagi.






Bahi ye najar dekh ke vikraal achanak se pragat ho gya. Or usne ek bhari energy ka prahaar mujhper kiya jisse me kaya ko chhodta hua dur jaake gira. Halaki maidan kaafi bada tha.




Ek sec. Ke liye meri puri aag bujh gyi jise dekhke vikraal ke chehre per muskaan aagyi. Lekin agle hi pal uski muskaan gayab ho gyi. Kyuki meri aag fir se jalne lagi thi.




Or ye dekhke uske mathe per fir se silvate pad gyi.





Mujhe laga tha ki ye fir se na bhag jaaye isliye mujhe ek idea sujha.





Maine apni talvar hath me pakdi or usme bhi bhari lapte nikal rahi thi. Uske baad maine super speed se pure ground ka ek chakkar lagaya. Talvar ko jameen me laga kar. Jisse pure ground ke charo taraf aag lag gayi.




Halaki aag halki si thi.




Lekin jaise hi maine aag ko ishara kiya. Uska size badta gya. Or itna uncha ho gya ki kisi ka bhi usko paar karke jana impossible hai. Bahi maine apne dono hatho ko aasmaan me uper kiya or jod diya. Or aisa karte hi vo aag uper hi uper ek dusre se jud gyi. Or ab ham ek aag ke kamre me qaid ho gye the. Matlab me nhi kaya or vikraal or usne char sathi. Jo abhi bhi mere saamne nhi aaye the. Us aag ne ek pinjre ka aakar le liya tha jisme ek bhi chhed nhi tha.





Ye dekhke vikraal kaya or vanraj teeno ke hi hosh udd gye. Or ye dekhke vikraal ne kaya ka hath pakada or baha se gayab ho gya. Lekin agle hi pal vo vapis se apni usi jagah per pragat ho gya.








Main2- kosis bhi mat karna ab bhagne ki. Kyuki is agni ko paar karke koi bhi nhi ja sakta hai. Kamse kam jinda to nhi. Ha marne ke baad jarur ise paar kar jaoge yamraaj ke pass pahuchne ke liye.






Ye kehkar maine ek bhayanak hasi hasi.







Kaya- ye hai kya cheez.







Vikraal- ye rider hai. Ham jaise bhuto ko nipatane wala rider. Or ye creation hai hell king ki. Jisne apne marne se pehle hamare marne ka intjam kar diya tha. Kisi khaas ko ye shaktiyan deke ya tu kahe ki usko aazad karke.









Kaya- lekin ye khaas insan kon hai.






Vikraal- surya.






Ye sunte hi kaaya ke hairangi ki koi seema nhi rahi. Bahi ye baat vanraj ne bhi suni or use bhi yakeen nhi hua ki surya or ghost rider kaise. Akhir kab kaha kya hua ki ye aisa ban gya. Or isne mujhe bataya kyu nhi kuch.









Ab baari thi aamne saamne wale yudh ki. Kyuki ab bhag to koi sakta nhi tha yaha se. Isliye sabhi ne ladne ka faisla kiya. Bahi vanraj ek jagah baith gya or ye ladai ka aanand lene laga.






Is waqt vikraal or kaya dono ke hatho me takvare thi. Or dono hi apni apni kala me mahir the. Bahi vo charo ki shaktiya bhi alag alag thi. Jinka istemaal ab vo sabhi karne wale the.








Bahi mere bhi dono hathon me apni takvare thi jinme already aag lagi hui thi. Mera chehra per khatarnaak aag lagi hui thi jiski lapte aisi udd rahi thi jaise mere baal ho. Mere chehre per ek katil hasi thi. Jiska matlaab saaf tha ki aaj yaha in sab ki kabr khudne wali hai. Or meri pyaas bujhne wali hai. Kyuki kai varsho se me bhula or pyasa tha. Maine kisi bhi buri soul ko nhi khaya tha abhi tak. Isliye ye sikaar mere liye kaafi khaas the.






Bahi ye baat vikraal achhe se jaanta tha ki aaj yaha se use koi chamatkaar hi bacha sakta hai. Lekin usne bhi ye faisla kar liya tha ki vo kayro ki tarah nhi balki bahaduro ki tarah lad kar marega.








Bahi vikraal or kaya ne ek sath meri taraf doud laga di. Bahi maine jaise hi apna pair aage badhaya me hil bhi nhi pata kyuki uncharo mese ek ne mere dono pairon ko jakad rakha tha. Vo mitti me mila hua tha. Or usne mere dono pairo ko pakad rakha tha. Me hil bhi nhi pa raha tha. Bahi vikraal or kaay jaise hi mere karib pahuche unhone ek sath chhalang mari or aonj talvaro ka prahaar kiya mere uper. Lekin mere hath is waqt free the to maine apni dono talvaro se unke praharo ko roka.







Or apni talvaro ko kuch is tarah se ghumaya ki unke hath ki position change ho gyi or unki takvar neeche pahuch gyi or isi mouke ka fayeda utha kar maine dono ke chehro per ek ek punch jad diya jisse donk thodi dur ja gire. Or isi mouke ka fayeda utha kar maine apni donk talvaro ko mere pairo ke lass jameen me gaad diya. Jo seedhi is bhut ke seene me jaake lagi or un takvaro ki aag ne use bahi per jala kar bhasm kar diya. Or mere pair ab aazad the. Or in 6 mese ek ka kaam khatam ho chuka tha. Charo taraf lagi aag apni charam seema per thi. Or itni tez garmi sabhi ko kag rahi thi ki thandi raat me sabhi paseene me tar ho gye the. Sirf mujhe chhodke.








Bahi maine apni ek talvar ko kaya ki taraf feka seedha jo seedhi uske seene me ghupne wali thi. Lekin ain samay per vikraal ne use dhakka deke neeche gira diya or uski jaan bach gyi. Bahi meri deli hui talvaar Bapis se mere pass aagyi bina sikaar kiye.





Tabhi un teeno mese 2 bhut mere pass aaye or mere dono hatho ko unhone pakad liya jinme se ek ke pass paani ko power thi. Or vo uska istemaal karke mere andar lagi aag ko bujhane laga lekin uska koi asar mere uper nhi ho raha tha.




Fir maine apni mundi ko ghuma ke uski anakho me dekha vo abhi bhi dhue ke shape me hi tha lekin uska chehra fir bhi dikh raha tha. Or usne meri aankho me dekha us jwala ne use andar tak hila diya jo usne meri aankho me dekhi. Or uske agle hi pal maine apna muh khola or usme se bhayankar aag nikli jo seedhi uske muh me jaake lagi or maine aag chhodna jaari rakha jab tak uska tanduri nhi ban gya. Or ye dekhke dusre wale ne mujhe chhod diya or baha se bhagne laga to maine maine uski garden pakad li or use bhi usi aag me jhok diya or dono apne papo ko yaad karte hue jor jor se chillane lage. Unhe samajh me nahi aaraha tha ki vo jal kaise rahe hai. Jabki unka to koi sharir bhi nhi hai.









Or thodi hi der me unki rakh mere hatho me thi.



Or ab bas 3 log hi bache hue the. Jinme ek bhut or tha jo itna dar gya tha ki mere saamne aane ki himmat hi nhi ho rahi thi uski.








Bahi ye sab dekhke kaya ke hath pair kampane lage the. Or vikraal ka dill joro se dhadkane laga tha.






Kaya- vikraal ab kya kare. Ye janvar se kaise bache. Kuch tigdam lagao kuch karo.








Vikraal- isper kisi bhi shakti ka koi asar nhi hone wala hai.





Kaya- to fir theek hai ise aage se uljhao me peechhe se uski mundi alag karti hu







Vikraal- ok






Ye kehkar vikraal meri taraf bhaga or hamare beeche talvar bazi ka ek or mukabla shuru ho gya.





Bahi kaya meri najro se bachte hue mere pichhe ko jaane lagi.




Or ye sab vanraj dekh raha tha or has raha tha. Or jor jor se cheer kar raha tha is fight ko. Or beech beech me taliya baja raha tha. Use itna maja aaj se pehle kabhi nhi aaya tha. Ye sab dekhke use aisa lag raha tha jaise vo koi sapna dekh raha ho.









Bahi vikraal mujhper kai war kar raha tha lekin uske saare baar fail ho rahe the



Bahi kaya achanak se ek jump leke mere kandhe per aagyi or apni talvar se meri mundi ko ek hi jhatke me alag kar diya.




Or aisa karte hi meri aag shant ho gyi or meri khopdi ek side ko gir gyi. Or ye najara dekh ke vikraal or kaya khush ho gye bahi vanraj puri tarah se shocked ki ye kya ho gya.





Bahi dono ne abhi tak apni kushi manana start bhi nhi kiya tha ki meri aag fir se jalne lagi or meri mundi fir se jud gyi. Or ye dekhke kaya or vikraal ek dum se peeche ko ho gye.




Bahi abki baar maine achanak se vikraal ko ek tagda punch mara jisse vo thoda dur ja gira. Or maine agle hi pal kaya ko uski garden se pakad kar utha diya. Or jor se apna muh kholkar chillaya. Ye chillana sun ke uski ruh bhi kamp gyi. Or agle hi pal uski soul meri muh me ghusne lagi. Vo bas tadapti hi rahi or bahi vikraal bas ye najara dekhta hi reh gya. Or kuch hi der me uska bejaan pathar jaisa sharir jameen per pada tha jiske andar se soul nikalte hi vo turant hi sad gya or dekhte hi dekhte rakh me badal gya.






Bahi ye dekhte hi vikraal ko or tagda jhatka laga kyuki uski baaki ki powers bhi kaya ke sath gayab ho gyi thi.






Or ye sab dekhke vikraal ko bahut gussa aaya. Ab uske pass ek hi power bachi hui thi.




Vo usi gusse ke sath khada hua. Or apni aankho se khatarnaak lazor nili or us lazor ka seedha nishana tha main. Lazor mujhse takraai uski power wakai me bahut jyada thi. Or us lazor se keval utna hua ki mera suit pighalne laga baaki or kuch bhi nhi ho raha tha mujhe.





To maine kya kiya aage badhna shuru kiya. Uski lazor ko cheerte hue me uski taraf badne laga. Vo bhi tezi se.





Or me uske ekdum karib pahunch gya. Or ek hi jhatke me uski garden ko daboch liya. Or apni aag ki lapto ko uske chehre per chhoda.




Or is tapan se uski lazor nikalna band ho gya. Or maine uske chehre ko dekha or usne aapni najre neechi kar li.






Main2- kya hua vikraal nikal gyi saari hawa. Ab samay aagya hai. Apne saare paapo ko yaad karne ka. Meri aankho me dekh vikraal.



Ye maine thoda jor se bola or sunte hi uski or meri najar takarai. Usne direct meri aankho me dekha or dekhta hi reh gya.



Use meri aankho me apne kiye gye har ek gunaah dikhne lage.ek ek karke vo sab dikh use jo usne Aaj Tak kiya hai. Kitno ko mara hai kitno ko pareshan kiya hai.




Or yahi sab dekhte dekhte hi uska kaam kab tamaam ho gya use pata hi nhi chala. Akhir me vo pura pathar ka ban gya uski aankhe bahi jam gyi. Or akhir me vo pathar bani murti tukdo me tut kar bikhar gyi. Or vikraal ka kaam yahi khatam ho gya.




Or fir maine bahi khade khade apni mundi ko ghumaya or tedi najar se side me dekha jaha vo last bacha hua bhut khada hua tha. Or vo kuch karta usse pehle hi mere muh se nikli jwala ne uska bhi kaam tamam kar diya.
















To be continue………………………
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Toh aakhir kaar Ghost Rider ka first war khatam hua. Jisme usne Vikral ayr Kaya ko kya bhayank maut di hai. Padh ke maza aagaya.

Ab lag raha hai koi hai jo unlogo ki takkar ka hai. Ab bacha hai sirf woh takshak jiske paas shayad woh keeda hai.

Dekhte hai woh istemaal karta hai yaa nhi. Aur uski maut kitni bhayank hogi.



Ha bhai keede ka role bhi jaldi hi aayega. Baaki rahi baat takshak ki to uska no. Lagne me filhaal time hai. Or ye kab hota hai or kaise hota hai janne ke liye sath bane rahe. Or dekhiye ab aage black heart or takshak kya karte hai surya se nipatne ke liye.







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Fantastic update
Zabardast update


Thanks bhai apna sath aise hi banaye rakhe. Or aaj dekhiye ab kya karte hai black heart ke samarthak kaise surya ko rokenge kaise khud ko uski tapan se bachate hai janne ke liye sath bane rahe.




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Mast shaandar update aakir me vikral aur kaya ka kaam tamaam ho gaya hai ab agla no kiska hai

Jald hi pata chalega bhai ki agla no. Kiska lagta hai. Or kaise lagta hai.

Amezing update Rahul, Ghost rider ka fight scene se bahut kuch match ho rha h ...

Ha bhai usi se inspire hai ye role. Baaki dekhte hai or aage kya kya karta hai ye rider.

nice update
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
super duper hit
super action update
superbb update bro
behatrin update bro
lazwab update bro
to vikral ka kam ab khtm hua


Thanks bhai log apna sath aise hi banaye rakhe. Aaj ke update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Aaj dekhiye kya hota hai ab aage kya karega black heart iske baare me jaankar




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Sunder update rahul bhai wakayi surya ki new pwer power dhekne mai maja ayega

Ha bhai maja to aayega hi or aage or bhi maja aayega bas apna sath aise hi banaye rakhe.

Zabardast update
Awesome update
Behad shaandaar zaberdast lajawab update bhai
Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
Behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
Waiting for next update


Thanks bhai log apna sath aise hi banaye rakhe. Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Aaj dekhiye kya hota hai aage surya kya kya naye kand karta hai or black heart kaise use rokta hai janne ke liye sath bane rahe.






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are wah kya baat hai back to back teen update.....
waise sach mein har mod aur pehlu ke sath kahani aur bhi interesting hoti jaa rahi hai...

aapki dwara likhe gaye har shabd hawaon mein bhi ek nasha bikhed de... ki padhte waqt thoda sa ye nasha yun readers pe bhi chaa jaaye ....Haan.. ishi wajah se to har update padhne mein aaye readers ko maza...Aap jis tarah likhte hai har mod aur pehlu ko dhyan mein rakhte huye, readers ko baithe bithaye kirdaaro ke bhaavnao ko gehrayi se mehsoos aur ehsaas karne ke liye majbur kar de .. ... Update ka har ek shadb jaise pehli barish ki bunde ki tarah hai..... padhte waqt lage ki kirdaar jaise ankhon ke samne bhumika nibha rahe ho.... Sach mein jis tarah se realistic roop mein bhumika nibha rahe hai kirdaar, readers ko majboor kar de unke sath judne ke liye... yahin to aapki lekhni ka jaadu hai....

Well waise aapki yahin toh khoobi hain ki har ek mudde ko darshate hai aap.. I mean to say.. sirf romance, fantasy ya action tak hi lake update ko pesh nahi karte balki Har us thrill aur suspense ko bhi include karte hain jisse kahani flow lajawab bani rahti hai .. aur update ke ant mein jis tarah se kabhi thrill & suspense ko, to kabhi kuch emotions ko , to kabhi khushnuma ehsaas, to kabhi fantasy se judi kuch baato ko jaise touch dete hai woh sach bemisaal hai...
Yahan Kayi fantasy based stories read ki hai sab ek se badhkar ek hai... lekin ye kahani unsab se hatakar hai... Agar kayi saal baad bhi koi reader aake aapki ye kahani padhe yehi kahenge ki "wah kahani ho to aisi" .... aapki ye kahani jo ek bahot hi arthpurn sikh de jaaye aur aise bhi mod hai sakth se sakth reader ko bhi bhavuk aur to kabhi romanchit kar jaaye..
sukriya aapko... is sandaar kahani ko likhke humare samne pesh karne ke liye.. aur jis udasya se aapne is kahani likh rahe hai usme aap sarthak hote jaa rahe hai....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apne manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye..

naye post kiye gaye Update sach mein bahot hi dilchasp aur dilkash tha..

Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill writer sahab :yourock: :yourock:


Thanks dear apna sath aise hi banaye rakhe. Or story se releted koi bhi suggestions sujhaav ho to jarur bataye. Baaki aaj ke update me dekhiye kya hota hai aage kaise surya in sabka khatma karta hai janne ke liye sath bane rahe.





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Kya baat h ghost rider bne surya ne bhi apna shikar krna shuru kr diya aur sbse phle shikaar bne vikraal aur kaya aur unke sathi. Mjaa avi gyo...wahi takshak bcha h prathavi pr us keede ke sath dekhte h uska kaam kb tk tamam kr pata h surya ya usse phle takshak bahut tabahi machane wala h...
Wahi dusri taraf space me black heart ki sena ne tabahi mcha di h un sbko kaise khtm kiya jaayega aur black heart kb prathavi pr aata h uska intzaar h...behtrin updates brother😍😍😍🗡🗡🗡🗡👏👏👏👏👏



Ha bhai abbi bahut kuch hai jo hone wala hai. Or rahi baat space me faile black heart ke logo ki to unki tension aap mat lo. Kyuki black heart khud unhe mout ke muh me bhejega. Bas dekhte jaiye kaise or kya hota hai.




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Sabhi aasani se khatam ho chuke the. Or vanraj bas dur se hi khada hoke dekh raha tha ki ab akhir ye surya Bapis kaise banega. Use kuch samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki kya kiya jaaye. Bahi charo taraf lagi aag bhi abhi tak jal rahi thi. Vo bhi shant hone ka naam nhi le rahe thi. Fir bhi usne himmat karke aage badhne ka faisla liya.




Vo dheeme dheeme kadmo se aage bada or usne thodi dur se hi surya ka naam pukara






Vanraj- surya.




Ye aawaj sunke rider ne peechhe mud ke dekha.





Or usne gour se vanraj ko dekha or tezi se uske pass gya. Bahi is tarah usko apne pass aata dekhke vanraj ke hath pair kamp gye. Use laga kahi ye uska bhi kaam tamaam na karde.





Rider uske ek dum karib aake ruka or uski khushbu sunghne laga. Actually vo bas buraai ko sunghata hai. Or agar kisi ke andar se thodi bhi buraai ki smell aagyi to vo gya kaam se.




Or is waqt vanraj kisi murti ki tarah ek dum seedha khada hua tha. Or rider uske andar ki buraai ko sunghne ki kosis kar raha tha.





Main2- tum ek achhe insan ho bas thodi der ke liye behal gye the. Or galat raste per chale gye the. Lekin ab mujhe tumhare andar se buraai ki thodi si bhi smell nhi aarahi hai iska matlab tum ab safe ho.






Ye sunke vanraj ki saas me saas aai.





Vanraj- mujhe surya se baat karni hai.







Main2- subah aana abhi mujhe apne sikaar dhundne hai.



Ye kehkar usne seeti bajai or uski bike apne aap start hoke uske pass aagyi. Or vo uspe baitha.






Main2- ye aag mere jaate hi shant hu ho jayegi or fir tum bhi ja sakte ho yaha se. Or seedhe ghar hi jana





Vanraj- ha ghar hi jaunga.





Ye kehkar rider ne apni bike ko aage badhaya or full speed se aag ko paar karte hue nikal gya baha se. Or rider ke aag ko paar karte hi aag se bana hua pura pinjara apne aap hi khatam ho gya or charo taraf ka mahool fir se pehle jaisa ho gya. Halaki mousam garmi kaafi bad gyi thi. Isiliye vanraj ne jaldi hi baha se nikalne ka faisla kiya or ghar ke liye seedhi doud laga di.




Kuch hi Minto me vo pahuch gya surya ke ghar. Or jab baha pahuch kar usne ghar ki haalat dekhi to apna sir pakad liya. Kyuki pure ghar ki band buri tarah baj chuki thi. Ghar ki deeware kaali pad gyi thi. Aag ki bajah se.





Vanraj- ye kya haal ho gya ghar ka.





Harry- sir ab kya kar sakte hai. Jo hona tha so ho gya. Baise surya sir kaha hai.






Vanraj- vo surya nhi hai. Balki uske andar ka khukhara shaitaan hai. Jisko jaha buraai dikhegi vo apna sikaar usko bana lega. Or is waqt bhi vo bahi karne gya hai.







Harry- ha sir maine dekha baha jungle me kya hua. Vakai me pal bhar me sabko khatam kar diya. Or ek hisaab se ye achha hi hua. Kyuki aise shaitano ke liye. Unka aisa rup hi theek hai.






Vanraj- ha ye baat to hai. Or uska ye rup dekhke meri tension kaafi had tak khatam ho gyi hai. Or ab mujhe pura viswas ho gya hai ki black heart or uski gang ka safaya hone se koi nhi rok sakta hai.






Harry- ha sahi kaha. Khair abhi subah hone me waqt hai to bataiye kya karne ka irada hai.






Vanraj- koi kamra salamat bacha ho to bata do me bahi so jaunga.





Harry- theek hai sir uper wale kamro me se koi ek le leejiye vo sab theek hai.





Vanraj- thanks Harry




Ye bolke vanraj uper gya or ekkamre me jaake so gya.






Bahi me apni bike per pure sehar ke chakkar kat raha tha lekin mujhe burai ko gandh kahi per bhi nhi aai. Sayad mere bare me sabhi ko pata chal gya tha or sabhi apne apne bilo me chhip gaye honge. Isliye suraj ke nikalne tak me yaha baha ghumta raha. Or jaise hi suraj nikle meri bike apne aap ruk gyi or me bike se neeche. Me jameen per leta or puri tarah se normal ho gya. Mere body me jo aag lagi hui thi vo apne aap bujh gyi. Or ab me surya wale besh me Bapis aagya tha.





Thodi der tak me vaise hi jameen per leta raha or yaad karne laga ki kal kya kya hua. Lekin mujhe sab kuch thoda thoda hi yaad tha. Baaki puri ghatna yaad nhj aarahi thi.




Meri sanse jor jor se chal rahi thi jinhen me control kar raha tha.





Tabhi achanak se mujhe ek bahut hi tez horn sunai diya to maine apni mundi ko ghuma kar dekha to ek truck seedha mere hi uper chada ja raha tha. Use dekhte hi meri aankhe chad gyi. Or me furti se side ko ludak gya. Or truck apni speed se mere baju se nikal gya. Or maine chain ki saas li.




Khair thodi der lete rehne ke baad me khada hua apne kapde saaf kiye. Jo kai jagah se jal gye the. Fir bhi theek the. Uske baad maine dekha ki mai. Akhir hu kaha. Ab mobile mere pass tha nhi or milestone bhi nhi laga hua tha. Isliye ab kisi se puchhna tha mujhe.



Lekin aaspass koi nhi tha. Isliye apni bike ko uthaya or jis disha me meri bike padi hui thi uski opposite disha me maine jana shuru kar diya. Or thodi hi aage gya tha me ki mujhe ek aadmi dikha jo paidal hi road per tehal raha tha. Maine uske baju me apni bike ko roka.





Main- are bhai jara suno to.




Meri aawaj sunke vo mere pass aaya





U- ha bhai kya hua.





Main- darashal mujhe mumbai jana hai. Konsa rasta hai baha ka or yaha se kitni duri per haj







U- bhai aap mumbaj wale road per hi ho. Yaha se mumbaj karib 150 km dur hai.





Main- isi taraf jana hai.





U- ha bhaisaab. Isi taraf jaiye pahuch jayenge aap mumbai.






Main- dhanyavad bhai.






U- baise bhai aapki bike badi mast hai. Kaha se li hai ye or konsi company ki hai.






Main- bhai ye bike mere bhai ne banai hai. Khud apne hatho se. Ye kisi company ki nhi haj.








U- aisi bike banwane me kitna kharcha aajayega.






Main- jyda nhi 2-3 lakh me aisi bike van jayegi.





U- ohh ye to bahut mehngi hai.





Ye sunkar mujhe samajh me aaya ki maine thoda jyada hi casual bol diya






Main- ha bhai mehngi to haj. Khair chalo me nikalta hu. Thanks.






U- ok bhai.




Ye kehkar maine bike ko aage badhaya apni full speed se. Mujhe jald se jald ghar pahunchana tha.






Or aisa hi hua ek ghante me main mumbai me ghus gya tha. Or ab kamse kam aadha ghanta or lagega ghar tak pahunchane me.




Or hua bhi aisa hi me 1:30 ghante ke pure safar ke baad ghar pahuch hi gya. Or jan baha ki haalat dekhi to mere hosh hi udd gye. Kyuki ghar ki haalat vakai me kharab ho gyi thi. Or ghar me repairing ka kaam jori shoro se chal raha tha.




Or bahi mujhe bahar ki side vanraj ek jagah baitha hua dikha subah ki chai peete hue or news paper padte hue.





Main- kaise ho miyan.





Ye aawaj sunke usne meri taraf dekha or ek hi jhatke me khada ho gya or meri taraf aaya or mere gale mila.




Vanraj- kaha gye the






Main- pata nhi jaha vo le gya chala gya me. Baise kya hua raat ko. Kuch galat salat to nhi kar diya maine.






Vanraj- bhai kurta faad ke rumaal kardiya aapne.






Main- achha aisa kya kar diya.





Vanraj- jyada kuch nhi. Bas vikraal kaya or uske kuch sathiyo ka kaam tamaam kardiya aapne. Vo bhi aise jaise vo koi machar ho. Jitni aasani se insan macharro ko maarte hai baise hi aapne un sabhi ko mara hai.







Ye sunke mujhe vakai me jhatka laga.




Main- what vikraal kaya khatam.





Vanraj- ha bhai. Maja hi aagya.unko tadapta hua dekhke. Or agar ye rider isi speed se chalta raha to kuch hi dino me black heart khud tumhare saamne hoga ladne ke liye kyuki uske pass log hi nhi bachenge aage bhejne ke liye.







Main- vakai me.






Vanraj- baise aajkal mujhse bahut kuch chhipane lage ho tum. Mujhe bataya kyu hi iske baare me.






Main- actually me khud pehle dekhna chahta tha ki kya hota hai kaise hota hai. Hota bhi hai ya nhi. Isiliye nhi bataya tha.






Vanraj- baise ye sab hua kab tha.






Main- kal raat ko hi. Uske baad subah maine sabko ghar bhej diya tha or raat me ye sab ho gya.






Vanraj- sahi hai. Baise kya lagta hai.ab black heart kya karega jab use iske baare me pata chalega.







Main- kuch keh pana muskil hai. Isliye filhaal hame saabdhan rehne ki jarurat hai. Baaki dekhte hai kya karta hai vo.
















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Bahi dusri taraf ghar per mahol theek thak tha bas amar ka dill yaha per nhi lag raha tha kyuki uska dill to already kisi or ke pass chala gya tha.



Or yahi hal nidhi ka bhi tha. Jo is waqt bister per ulti leti hui thi or amar ke khayalo me khoi hui thi. Or halke halke muskura rahi thi. Usne iswaqt ek short skirt pehni hui thi jo uski jangho tak hi seemit thi. Or uske aise letne ki bajah se thoda or uper ko ho gya tha. Or uper ek t shirt. Bahi uske kamre ka darwaja khula hua tha. Or baha per koi chhip kar nidhi ke pichhwade ko taad raha tha. Or soch raha tha ki kab ye meri banegi. Kab me iske badan ka raspan kar paunga.





Kaafi der tak vo baha khada raha. Or jab usne dekha ki nidhi bister se uth rahi hai to vo baha se chup chap nikal gya or nidhi ko bhanak bhi nhi lagi ki koi use aise dekh raha tha.




Bahi use pata tha ki nidhi ka chakkar ab kisi or se chalne laga hai. Isliye use kaafi insecurity ho rahi thi ki nidhi usse hamesha ke liye dur ho jayegi. Or yahi soch soch ke uski rato ki neend udi hui thi. Use kuch aisa plan chahiye tha jisse ye dono ek dusre se alag ho jaaye or nidhi kisi tarah uski jholi me aajaye. Or isiliye vo abhi tak khamosh hai.



Lekin ye kab tak aisa rehta hai ye dekhne wali baat hai.







Bahi sabhi bache gaav me ghumne nikale hue the sham ka samay tha. Or ghumte hue vo log gaav se bahar ek jheel ke pass pahuch gye. Or bahi apna jamawda laga liya. Samar or varsha sabse thode alag baith gye hatho me hath dalke. Or avi ashk or amar ek sath baith gye. Bahi amar thoda gupchup tha or ashk hamesha ki tarah bad bad kar rahi thi beech beech me or avi uski khichai.






Ashk- kya hua bhai aap itne shant kyu ho. Bhabhi ki jyada yaad aarahi hai kya.





Amar- ha yaar mera to bilkul bhi man nhi lag raha hai yaha per.





Avi- bhai aap kaho to kal milne chale mumbai.ya aap akele hi chale jaao.





Ashk- baise me mana to nhi karna chahti lekin bhai agar papa ko pata chala to bahut dant bhi pad sakti hai. Isliye jo bhi faisla le soch samjh ke lena.





Amar- i know isiliye to nhi ja raha hu me baha per.






Avi- baise me aapki madad kar sakta hu. Raat me chhip kar jaane me or Bapis aane me.





Ye sunke donk ne hairangi se avi ko dekha.







Amar- kaise.






Avi- robo ki madad se aap chupchap ja sakte hai or aa bbi sakte hai.





Ye sunke amar or ashk ne ek dusre ko aise dekha jaise soch rahe ho ki ye idea unhe kyu nhi aaya.





Ashk- are ha yaar ye idea mujhe kyu nhi aaya.





Avi- kyuki tu duffer hai.





Ashk- achha bada aaya. Chal maan liya ki robo bhai ko le jayega lekin Harry ka kya. Uske bina to ghar me patta bhi nhi ghus sakta fir robo bhai ko le jayega or use pata nhi chalega aisa possible hi nhi hai. Or usko pata chala matlab saaf hai ki papa ko pata chal gya. Or fir band bajna tay hai.







Avi- baise Harry ko ham samjha kar apni side kar lenge. Or usse kahenge ki papa ko kuch na vataye. To vo maan jayega. Vo apna dude haj.samajh jayega.







Amar- to ek kaam kar abhi bula usko or mujhe bhej do. Raat hone se pehle to me mil ke sabhi jaunga. Abhi 2-3 ghante hai andhera hone me.






Ashk- ha ye idea theek hai. Aisa hi kar bula usko.





Avi- ok jo hukum.



Ye kehkar abhi ne apne mobile se robo ko active kiya or use apne pass bulaya





Robo is waqt mumbai base me hi tha. Jaise hi use command mila vo udd gya avi ke pass aane ke liye.





Or karib 15 min. Me vo avi logo ke saamne khada tha. Bahi Samar or varsha ka dhyan gya usper to vo bhi aagye baha per. Unhe laga kuch hua hoga.





Samar- kya hua ye yaha kaise.





Avi- maine bulaya hai bhai.





Samar- kyu.





Ashk- vo kya hai hamare bade bhaiyya ko bhabhi ki bahut yaad aarahi hai to ye unko milane ye jayega or vapis le aayega. Puri safety ke sath.





Ye sunke sabhi ke chehre per smile aagyi.




Uske baad amar ne nidhi ko call kiya or ek restaurant me milne bulaya 15 min. Me jo unke ghar ke pass hi tha. Or jab nidhi ko pata chala ki amar bahi per usse milne aaraha hai to vo kushi se pagal ho gyi or jaldi se ready hone nikal gyi. Halaki ready hone ke liye 15 min. Bahut hi kam hai. Lekin usne thoda sa touchup kiya badiya si dress pehni or nikal gyi ghar se.




Bahi avi ne sab samjha diya robo ko or vo bhi samajh gya or usne amar ko kaske pakda or dono udd gye full speed se or theek 15 min. Me usi restaurant ke pass hi ek sunsaan jagah per land ho gye. Baha se amar ne usko Bapis base per bhej diya or 2 ghante baad yahi milne ka bol diya. Usne command accept kiya or base me chala gya.



Bahi amar ne khud ko theek kiya baal bagera set kiye hath se hi or kapde theek kiye or pahuch gya restaurant jaha per use nidhi ek seat per baithi hui dikh gyi to vo uske pass gya.





Amar- hii madam.




Ye sunke nidhi ne peechhe dekha or amar ko baha dekh ke kush ho gyi or jor se chipak gyi usse. Dono kaafi betaab the ek dusre ke liye






Amar- public place hai nidhi control.



Ye sunke dono alag hue or bahi baith gye. Waiter ko 2 coffee ka order diya or lag gye dono apni gappo me.






Nidhi- achanak yaha kaise. Or bataya bhi nhi kab aaye yaha.





Amar- abhi aaya tha khaas tumse milne sabse chhipke. Agar chachu ya papa ko pata chala to pakka band bajegi ghar per.






Nidhi- achha to fir kyu aaye yaha.





Amar- kya kare ghar per bilkul bhi man nhi lag raha tha. Har samay tumhari hi yaad aarahi thi. Isiliye aana pada.





Nidhi- sach kahu to mera bhi yahi haal hai. Na clg me man lag raha hai na ghar per. Nas har pal yahi sochati hu ki jaldi se hamari shadi ho jaaye or me aapke sath rehne lagu.






Amar- me bhi yahi sochata hu. Lekin kya kare abhi shadi ki age bhi nhi hai hamari or itni jaldi shadi karni bhi nhi hai. Or ghar wale hasenge alag agar unko maine bola to sab khichai karenge meri.






Nidhi- ha lekin is dill ka kya kare.





Amar- khair chhodo or sunao






Nidhi- kya sunau.





Amar- kuch bhi.




Dono ki romantic gapshap shuru hui or chalti hi rahi. Kab 2 ghante nikal gye pata hi nhi chala. Akhir me amar ka call baja to usne attend kiya jo robo ka tha.




Robo- sir 2:30 ghante ho chuke hai andhera bhi ho gya hai. I think ab hame chalna chahiye.





Amar- ok bas 10 min. Me aaya.



Amar- ab chalta hu. Verna sab gadbad ho jayegi.






Nidhi- jana jaruri hai. Mat jaao





Amar- man to nahi hai lekin jana padega. Ab aata rahunga milne isi tarah.






Nidhi- to fir theek hai. Ab kab aaoge.






Amar- aata hu 3-4 din me. Roj roj nhi aasakta






Nidhi- I understand. Ok chalo me aapko chhod deti hu. Baise aaye kaise the






Amar- jadu se. Or baise hi chala jaunga.



Ye kehkar or mouka dekhke amar ne ek halki si kiss nidhi ko kar li. Or isse nidhi ek dum se hairan or sharma gyi. Uske baad amar ne bill diya or nidhi ko bye bolke nikal gya baha se. Nidhi ne bhi usi byy kiya or fir se vo thodi mayus ho gyi lekin ab kushi jyada thi or mayusi kam. Or usi kushi ke sath vo bhi apne ghar chali gyi. Jaha fir se us teesre bande ne use dekha or vo thoda soch me pad gya ki ye kaha gyi thi or iske chehre per ye smile kaisi.





Bahi amar usi sunsaan jagah per pahucha or baha se robo use uda le gya usi jheel ke pass jaha se usne amar ko pick kiya tha. Jaha sabhi uska wait kar rahe the.






Uske baad robo Bapis mumbai aagya bahi Harry ko sab pata tha ki aaj kya or kaise hua hai. Lekin usne ye bat surya ko nhi batai. Batane ki jarurat bhi nhi lagi use.



Or baaki ke bache kushi kushi apne ghar chale gye tehalte hue.









Bahi dusri taraf takshak puri tarah hairan tha vikraal or kaya ki mout se. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki unki mout akhir hui kaise. Kyuki use abhi tak nahi pata tha ki surya ab kya ban chuka hai.




Or ab takshak ghanta raha tha ki ye khabar vo black heart ko kaise de. Lekin batana bhi jaruri tha.
Isliye usne black heart se contact kiya





B.H- bolo takshak koi kush khabar.





Takshak- nhi ek buri khabar jarur hai.





B.H- kya?






Takshak- vikraal or kaya ab nhi rahe un dono ka ant ho chuka hai. Lekin ye kaise or kisne kiya mujhe pata nhi chala hai.





Ye sunke black heart ek dum se khada ho gya or jor se bola.





B.H- kya bak rahe ho takshak. Kab hua ye.







Takshak- aaj hi raat ko. Unko maine surya se nipatne bheja tha. Lekin vo Bapis hi nhi aaye. Mere ek khabri ne bataya ki kisi aag wale danav ne un sabhi ka khatma kar diya. Jab vo vanraj se lad rahe the. Vo achanak hi aaya or achanak hi gayab ho gya.





Ye sunte hi black heart ka chehra ek dum se peela pad gya. Or use apne pita ki baat yaad aai ki vo jiske baare me keh rahe the vo yahi hai rider. Black heart jaanta tha rider ke baare me or uski shaktiyo ke baare me bhi.







B.H- kya sach me usme aag wala danav hi kaha tha.





Takshak- ha. Lekin aap itne pareshan kyu lag rahe hai. Kya hua. Koi chinta ki baat hai kya.







B.H- ha takshak bahut badi chinta ki baat hai. Kyuki agar bakai me baisa danav hai to samajh lo hamme se koi bhi ab surakshit nhi hai kahi per bhi.








Takshak- aisa kya hai us danav me. Hai kon vo.






B.H- vo rider hai ghost rider. Mere pita ke dwara banaya gya ek danav. Jo apan jaise buri shaktiyon or burai ka sikaar karta hai. Use na aag jala sakti hai na hi paani bujha sakta hai. Uske uper kisi bhi shakti ka jyada asar nhi hota hai. Or mere pita ne usko aazad kardiya. Taaki vo hame rok sake ya hamara khatma kar sake.







Ye sunke takshak ko bhi paseena aane laga.




Takshak- ab kya kare ham aap hi bataye.






B.H- mujhe sochne ka thoda time chahiye hai. Me koi na koi hal nikala hi lunga iski. Tab tak tum apne bill me hi chhile rehna. Kyuki vo dur se hi buraai ko sungh leta hai. Or agar use tumhari gandh aagyi to fir tumhara bachna impossible ho jayega. Isliye chhipe raho.






Takshak- theek hai maharaj. Me chhipa hi rahunga. Lekin aap jaldi hi iska koi hal khojiye. Verna aapka sapna fir se sapna hi reh jayega.





B.H- ha me janta hu.




Uske baad dono ka connection cut gya or takshak ne apne aap ko chhipane ke sare intjaam karna shuru kar diya. Bahi Black heart apni socho me dub gya. Vo sochne laga ki ise kaise roka jaaye.








Baaki dekhte hai ab kya hota hai inka.














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