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Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

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Sabhi aasani se khatam ho chuke the. Or vanraj bas dur se hi khada hoke dekh raha tha ki ab akhir ye surya Bapis kaise banega. Use kuch samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki kya kiya jaaye. Bahi charo taraf lagi aag bhi abhi tak jal rahi thi. Vo bhi shant hone ka naam nhi le rahe thi. Fir bhi usne himmat karke aage badhne ka faisla liya.




Vo dheeme dheeme kadmo se aage bada or usne thodi dur se hi surya ka naam pukara






Vanraj- surya.




Ye aawaj sunke rider ne peechhe mud ke dekha.





Or usne gour se vanraj ko dekha or tezi se uske pass gya. Bahi is tarah usko apne pass aata dekhke vanraj ke hath pair kamp gye. Use laga kahi ye uska bhi kaam tamaam na karde.





Rider uske ek dum karib aake ruka or uski khushbu sunghne laga. Actually vo bas buraai ko sunghata hai. Or agar kisi ke andar se thodi bhi buraai ki smell aagyi to vo gya kaam se.




Or is waqt vanraj kisi murti ki tarah ek dum seedha khada hua tha. Or rider uske andar ki buraai ko sunghne ki kosis kar raha tha.





Main2- tum ek achhe insan ho bas thodi der ke liye behal gye the. Or galat raste per chale gye the. Lekin ab mujhe tumhare andar se buraai ki thodi si bhi smell nhi aarahi hai iska matlab tum ab safe ho.






Ye sunke vanraj ki saas me saas aai.





Vanraj- mujhe surya se baat karni hai.







Main2- subah aana abhi mujhe apne sikaar dhundne hai.



Ye kehkar usne seeti bajai or uski bike apne aap start hoke uske pass aagyi. Or vo uspe baitha.






Main2- ye aag mere jaate hi shant hu ho jayegi or fir tum bhi ja sakte ho yaha se. Or seedhe ghar hi jana





Vanraj- ha ghar hi jaunga.





Ye kehkar rider ne apni bike ko aage badhaya or full speed se aag ko paar karte hue nikal gya baha se. Or rider ke aag ko paar karte hi aag se bana hua pura pinjara apne aap hi khatam ho gya or charo taraf ka mahool fir se pehle jaisa ho gya. Halaki mousam garmi kaafi bad gyi thi. Isiliye vanraj ne jaldi hi baha se nikalne ka faisla kiya or ghar ke liye seedhi doud laga di.




Kuch hi Minto me vo pahuch gya surya ke ghar. Or jab baha pahuch kar usne ghar ki haalat dekhi to apna sir pakad liya. Kyuki pure ghar ki band buri tarah baj chuki thi. Ghar ki deeware kaali pad gyi thi. Aag ki bajah se.





Vanraj- ye kya haal ho gya ghar ka.





Harry- sir ab kya kar sakte hai. Jo hona tha so ho gya. Baise surya sir kaha hai.






Vanraj- vo surya nhi hai. Balki uske andar ka khukhara shaitaan hai. Jisko jaha buraai dikhegi vo apna sikaar usko bana lega. Or is waqt bhi vo bahi karne gya hai.







Harry- ha sir maine dekha baha jungle me kya hua. Vakai me pal bhar me sabko khatam kar diya. Or ek hisaab se ye achha hi hua. Kyuki aise shaitano ke liye. Unka aisa rup hi theek hai.






Vanraj- ha ye baat to hai. Or uska ye rup dekhke meri tension kaafi had tak khatam ho gyi hai. Or ab mujhe pura viswas ho gya hai ki black heart or uski gang ka safaya hone se koi nhi rok sakta hai.






Harry- ha sahi kaha. Khair abhi subah hone me waqt hai to bataiye kya karne ka irada hai.






Vanraj- koi kamra salamat bacha ho to bata do me bahi so jaunga.





Harry- theek hai sir uper wale kamro me se koi ek le leejiye vo sab theek hai.





Vanraj- thanks Harry




Ye bolke vanraj uper gya or ekkamre me jaake so gya.






Bahi me apni bike per pure sehar ke chakkar kat raha tha lekin mujhe burai ko gandh kahi per bhi nhi aai. Sayad mere bare me sabhi ko pata chal gya tha or sabhi apne apne bilo me chhip gaye honge. Isliye suraj ke nikalne tak me yaha baha ghumta raha. Or jaise hi suraj nikle meri bike apne aap ruk gyi or me bike se neeche. Me jameen per leta or puri tarah se normal ho gya. Mere body me jo aag lagi hui thi vo apne aap bujh gyi. Or ab me surya wale besh me Bapis aagya tha.





Thodi der tak me vaise hi jameen per leta raha or yaad karne laga ki kal kya kya hua. Lekin mujhe sab kuch thoda thoda hi yaad tha. Baaki puri ghatna yaad nhj aarahi thi.




Meri sanse jor jor se chal rahi thi jinhen me control kar raha tha.





Tabhi achanak se mujhe ek bahut hi tez horn sunai diya to maine apni mundi ko ghuma kar dekha to ek truck seedha mere hi uper chada ja raha tha. Use dekhte hi meri aankhe chad gyi. Or me furti se side ko ludak gya. Or truck apni speed se mere baju se nikal gya. Or maine chain ki saas li.




Khair thodi der lete rehne ke baad me khada hua apne kapde saaf kiye. Jo kai jagah se jal gye the. Fir bhi theek the. Uske baad maine dekha ki mai. Akhir hu kaha. Ab mobile mere pass tha nhi or milestone bhi nhi laga hua tha. Isliye ab kisi se puchhna tha mujhe.



Lekin aaspass koi nhi tha. Isliye apni bike ko uthaya or jis disha me meri bike padi hui thi uski opposite disha me maine jana shuru kar diya. Or thodi hi aage gya tha me ki mujhe ek aadmi dikha jo paidal hi road per tehal raha tha. Maine uske baju me apni bike ko roka.





Main- are bhai jara suno to.




Meri aawaj sunke vo mere pass aaya





U- ha bhai kya hua.





Main- darashal mujhe mumbai jana hai. Konsa rasta hai baha ka or yaha se kitni duri per haj







U- bhai aap mumbaj wale road per hi ho. Yaha se mumbaj karib 150 km dur hai.





Main- isi taraf jana hai.





U- ha bhaisaab. Isi taraf jaiye pahuch jayenge aap mumbai.






Main- dhanyavad bhai.






U- baise bhai aapki bike badi mast hai. Kaha se li hai ye or konsi company ki hai.






Main- bhai ye bike mere bhai ne banai hai. Khud apne hatho se. Ye kisi company ki nhi haj.








U- aisi bike banwane me kitna kharcha aajayega.






Main- jyda nhi 2-3 lakh me aisi bike van jayegi.





U- ohh ye to bahut mehngi hai.





Ye sunkar mujhe samajh me aaya ki maine thoda jyada hi casual bol diya






Main- ha bhai mehngi to haj. Khair chalo me nikalta hu. Thanks.






U- ok bhai.




Ye kehkar maine bike ko aage badhaya apni full speed se. Mujhe jald se jald ghar pahunchana tha.






Or aisa hi hua ek ghante me main mumbai me ghus gya tha. Or ab kamse kam aadha ghanta or lagega ghar tak pahunchane me.




Or hua bhi aisa hi me 1:30 ghante ke pure safar ke baad ghar pahuch hi gya. Or jan baha ki haalat dekhi to mere hosh hi udd gye. Kyuki ghar ki haalat vakai me kharab ho gyi thi. Or ghar me repairing ka kaam jori shoro se chal raha tha.




Or bahi mujhe bahar ki side vanraj ek jagah baitha hua dikha subah ki chai peete hue or news paper padte hue.





Main- kaise ho miyan.





Ye aawaj sunke usne meri taraf dekha or ek hi jhatke me khada ho gya or meri taraf aaya or mere gale mila.




Vanraj- kaha gye the






Main- pata nhi jaha vo le gya chala gya me. Baise kya hua raat ko. Kuch galat salat to nhi kar diya maine.






Vanraj- bhai kurta faad ke rumaal kardiya aapne.






Main- achha aisa kya kar diya.





Vanraj- jyada kuch nhi. Bas vikraal kaya or uske kuch sathiyo ka kaam tamaam kardiya aapne. Vo bhi aise jaise vo koi machar ho. Jitni aasani se insan macharro ko maarte hai baise hi aapne un sabhi ko mara hai.







Ye sunke mujhe vakai me jhatka laga.




Main- what vikraal kaya khatam.





Vanraj- ha bhai. Maja hi aagya.unko tadapta hua dekhke. Or agar ye rider isi speed se chalta raha to kuch hi dino me black heart khud tumhare saamne hoga ladne ke liye kyuki uske pass log hi nhi bachenge aage bhejne ke liye.







Main- vakai me.






Vanraj- baise aajkal mujhse bahut kuch chhipane lage ho tum. Mujhe bataya kyu hi iske baare me.






Main- actually me khud pehle dekhna chahta tha ki kya hota hai kaise hota hai. Hota bhi hai ya nhi. Isiliye nhi bataya tha.






Vanraj- baise ye sab hua kab tha.






Main- kal raat ko hi. Uske baad subah maine sabko ghar bhej diya tha or raat me ye sab ho gya.






Vanraj- sahi hai. Baise kya lagta hai.ab black heart kya karega jab use iske baare me pata chalega.







Main- kuch keh pana muskil hai. Isliye filhaal hame saabdhan rehne ki jarurat hai. Baaki dekhte hai kya karta hai vo.

















To be continue……………………….
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Toh filhal ke liye toh sab shant hua. Par kitne time ke liye dekhte hai. Par iss rider wale mein roop mein ek drawback yeh dikha ke Rider jab wapas Surya banta hai toh uske kuch bhi yaad nhi rehta ke Rider ne kya kya kiya hai.

Kya yeh drawback permanent hai ya temporary.
 

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Sabhi aasani se khatam ho chuke the. Or vanraj bas dur se hi khada hoke dekh raha tha ki ab akhir ye surya Bapis kaise banega. Use kuch samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki kya kiya jaaye. Bahi charo taraf lagi aag bhi abhi tak jal rahi thi. Vo bhi shant hone ka naam nhi le rahe thi. Fir bhi usne himmat karke aage badhne ka faisla liya.




Vo dheeme dheeme kadmo se aage bada or usne thodi dur se hi surya ka naam pukara






Vanraj- surya.




Ye aawaj sunke rider ne peechhe mud ke dekha.





Or usne gour se vanraj ko dekha or tezi se uske pass gya. Bahi is tarah usko apne pass aata dekhke vanraj ke hath pair kamp gye. Use laga kahi ye uska bhi kaam tamaam na karde.





Rider uske ek dum karib aake ruka or uski khushbu sunghne laga. Actually vo bas buraai ko sunghata hai. Or agar kisi ke andar se thodi bhi buraai ki smell aagyi to vo gya kaam se.




Or is waqt vanraj kisi murti ki tarah ek dum seedha khada hua tha. Or rider uske andar ki buraai ko sunghne ki kosis kar raha tha.





Main2- tum ek achhe insan ho bas thodi der ke liye behal gye the. Or galat raste per chale gye the. Lekin ab mujhe tumhare andar se buraai ki thodi si bhi smell nhi aarahi hai iska matlab tum ab safe ho.






Ye sunke vanraj ki saas me saas aai.





Vanraj- mujhe surya se baat karni hai.







Main2- subah aana abhi mujhe apne sikaar dhundne hai.



Ye kehkar usne seeti bajai or uski bike apne aap start hoke uske pass aagyi. Or vo uspe baitha.






Main2- ye aag mere jaate hi shant hu ho jayegi or fir tum bhi ja sakte ho yaha se. Or seedhe ghar hi jana





Vanraj- ha ghar hi jaunga.





Ye kehkar rider ne apni bike ko aage badhaya or full speed se aag ko paar karte hue nikal gya baha se. Or rider ke aag ko paar karte hi aag se bana hua pura pinjara apne aap hi khatam ho gya or charo taraf ka mahool fir se pehle jaisa ho gya. Halaki mousam garmi kaafi bad gyi thi. Isiliye vanraj ne jaldi hi baha se nikalne ka faisla kiya or ghar ke liye seedhi doud laga di.




Kuch hi Minto me vo pahuch gya surya ke ghar. Or jab baha pahuch kar usne ghar ki haalat dekhi to apna sir pakad liya. Kyuki pure ghar ki band buri tarah baj chuki thi. Ghar ki deeware kaali pad gyi thi. Aag ki bajah se.





Vanraj- ye kya haal ho gya ghar ka.





Harry- sir ab kya kar sakte hai. Jo hona tha so ho gya. Baise surya sir kaha hai.






Vanraj- vo surya nhi hai. Balki uske andar ka khukhara shaitaan hai. Jisko jaha buraai dikhegi vo apna sikaar usko bana lega. Or is waqt bhi vo bahi karne gya hai.







Harry- ha sir maine dekha baha jungle me kya hua. Vakai me pal bhar me sabko khatam kar diya. Or ek hisaab se ye achha hi hua. Kyuki aise shaitano ke liye. Unka aisa rup hi theek hai.






Vanraj- ha ye baat to hai. Or uska ye rup dekhke meri tension kaafi had tak khatam ho gyi hai. Or ab mujhe pura viswas ho gya hai ki black heart or uski gang ka safaya hone se koi nhi rok sakta hai.






Harry- ha sahi kaha. Khair abhi subah hone me waqt hai to bataiye kya karne ka irada hai.






Vanraj- koi kamra salamat bacha ho to bata do me bahi so jaunga.





Harry- theek hai sir uper wale kamro me se koi ek le leejiye vo sab theek hai.





Vanraj- thanks Harry




Ye bolke vanraj uper gya or ekkamre me jaake so gya.






Bahi me apni bike per pure sehar ke chakkar kat raha tha lekin mujhe burai ko gandh kahi per bhi nhi aai. Sayad mere bare me sabhi ko pata chal gya tha or sabhi apne apne bilo me chhip gaye honge. Isliye suraj ke nikalne tak me yaha baha ghumta raha. Or jaise hi suraj nikle meri bike apne aap ruk gyi or me bike se neeche. Me jameen per leta or puri tarah se normal ho gya. Mere body me jo aag lagi hui thi vo apne aap bujh gyi. Or ab me surya wale besh me Bapis aagya tha.





Thodi der tak me vaise hi jameen per leta raha or yaad karne laga ki kal kya kya hua. Lekin mujhe sab kuch thoda thoda hi yaad tha. Baaki puri ghatna yaad nhj aarahi thi.




Meri sanse jor jor se chal rahi thi jinhen me control kar raha tha.





Tabhi achanak se mujhe ek bahut hi tez horn sunai diya to maine apni mundi ko ghuma kar dekha to ek truck seedha mere hi uper chada ja raha tha. Use dekhte hi meri aankhe chad gyi. Or me furti se side ko ludak gya. Or truck apni speed se mere baju se nikal gya. Or maine chain ki saas li.




Khair thodi der lete rehne ke baad me khada hua apne kapde saaf kiye. Jo kai jagah se jal gye the. Fir bhi theek the. Uske baad maine dekha ki mai. Akhir hu kaha. Ab mobile mere pass tha nhi or milestone bhi nhi laga hua tha. Isliye ab kisi se puchhna tha mujhe.



Lekin aaspass koi nhi tha. Isliye apni bike ko uthaya or jis disha me meri bike padi hui thi uski opposite disha me maine jana shuru kar diya. Or thodi hi aage gya tha me ki mujhe ek aadmi dikha jo paidal hi road per tehal raha tha. Maine uske baju me apni bike ko roka.





Main- are bhai jara suno to.




Meri aawaj sunke vo mere pass aaya





U- ha bhai kya hua.





Main- darashal mujhe mumbai jana hai. Konsa rasta hai baha ka or yaha se kitni duri per haj







U- bhai aap mumbaj wale road per hi ho. Yaha se mumbaj karib 150 km dur hai.





Main- isi taraf jana hai.





U- ha bhaisaab. Isi taraf jaiye pahuch jayenge aap mumbai.






Main- dhanyavad bhai.






U- baise bhai aapki bike badi mast hai. Kaha se li hai ye or konsi company ki hai.






Main- bhai ye bike mere bhai ne banai hai. Khud apne hatho se. Ye kisi company ki nhi haj.








U- aisi bike banwane me kitna kharcha aajayega.






Main- jyda nhi 2-3 lakh me aisi bike van jayegi.





U- ohh ye to bahut mehngi hai.





Ye sunkar mujhe samajh me aaya ki maine thoda jyada hi casual bol diya






Main- ha bhai mehngi to haj. Khair chalo me nikalta hu. Thanks.






U- ok bhai.




Ye kehkar maine bike ko aage badhaya apni full speed se. Mujhe jald se jald ghar pahunchana tha.






Or aisa hi hua ek ghante me main mumbai me ghus gya tha. Or ab kamse kam aadha ghanta or lagega ghar tak pahunchane me.




Or hua bhi aisa hi me 1:30 ghante ke pure safar ke baad ghar pahuch hi gya. Or jan baha ki haalat dekhi to mere hosh hi udd gye. Kyuki ghar ki haalat vakai me kharab ho gyi thi. Or ghar me repairing ka kaam jori shoro se chal raha tha.




Or bahi mujhe bahar ki side vanraj ek jagah baitha hua dikha subah ki chai peete hue or news paper padte hue.





Main- kaise ho miyan.





Ye aawaj sunke usne meri taraf dekha or ek hi jhatke me khada ho gya or meri taraf aaya or mere gale mila.




Vanraj- kaha gye the






Main- pata nhi jaha vo le gya chala gya me. Baise kya hua raat ko. Kuch galat salat to nhi kar diya maine.






Vanraj- bhai kurta faad ke rumaal kardiya aapne.






Main- achha aisa kya kar diya.





Vanraj- jyada kuch nhi. Bas vikraal kaya or uske kuch sathiyo ka kaam tamaam kardiya aapne. Vo bhi aise jaise vo koi machar ho. Jitni aasani se insan macharro ko maarte hai baise hi aapne un sabhi ko mara hai.







Ye sunke mujhe vakai me jhatka laga.




Main- what vikraal kaya khatam.





Vanraj- ha bhai. Maja hi aagya.unko tadapta hua dekhke. Or agar ye rider isi speed se chalta raha to kuch hi dino me black heart khud tumhare saamne hoga ladne ke liye kyuki uske pass log hi nhi bachenge aage bhejne ke liye.







Main- vakai me.






Vanraj- baise aajkal mujhse bahut kuch chhipane lage ho tum. Mujhe bataya kyu hi iske baare me.






Main- actually me khud pehle dekhna chahta tha ki kya hota hai kaise hota hai. Hota bhi hai ya nhi. Isiliye nhi bataya tha.






Vanraj- baise ye sab hua kab tha.






Main- kal raat ko hi. Uske baad subah maine sabko ghar bhej diya tha or raat me ye sab ho gya.






Vanraj- sahi hai. Baise kya lagta hai.ab black heart kya karega jab use iske baare me pata chalega.







Main- kuch keh pana muskil hai. Isliye filhaal hame saabdhan rehne ki jarurat hai. Baaki dekhte hai kya karta hai vo.

















To be continue……………………….
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Bahi dusri taraf ghar per mahol theek thak tha bas amar ka dill yaha per nhi lag raha tha kyuki uska dill to already kisi or ke pass chala gya tha.



Or yahi hal nidhi ka bhi tha. Jo is waqt bister per ulti leti hui thi or amar ke khayalo me khoi hui thi. Or halke halke muskura rahi thi. Usne iswaqt ek short skirt pehni hui thi jo uski jangho tak hi seemit thi. Or uske aise letne ki bajah se thoda or uper ko ho gya tha. Or uper ek t shirt. Bahi uske kamre ka darwaja khula hua tha. Or baha per koi chhip kar nidhi ke pichhwade ko taad raha tha. Or soch raha tha ki kab ye meri banegi. Kab me iske badan ka raspan kar paunga.





Kaafi der tak vo baha khada raha. Or jab usne dekha ki nidhi bister se uth rahi hai to vo baha se chup chap nikal gya or nidhi ko bhanak bhi nhi lagi ki koi use aise dekh raha tha.




Bahi use pata tha ki nidhi ka chakkar ab kisi or se chalne laga hai. Isliye use kaafi insecurity ho rahi thi ki nidhi usse hamesha ke liye dur ho jayegi. Or yahi soch soch ke uski rato ki neend udi hui thi. Use kuch aisa plan chahiye tha jisse ye dono ek dusre se alag ho jaaye or nidhi kisi tarah uski jholi me aajaye. Or isiliye vo abhi tak khamosh hai.



Lekin ye kab tak aisa rehta hai ye dekhne wali baat hai.







Bahi sabhi bache gaav me ghumne nikale hue the sham ka samay tha. Or ghumte hue vo log gaav se bahar ek jheel ke pass pahuch gye. Or bahi apna jamawda laga liya. Samar or varsha sabse thode alag baith gye hatho me hath dalke. Or avi ashk or amar ek sath baith gye. Bahi amar thoda gupchup tha or ashk hamesha ki tarah bad bad kar rahi thi beech beech me or avi uski khichai.






Ashk- kya hua bhai aap itne shant kyu ho. Bhabhi ki jyada yaad aarahi hai kya.





Amar- ha yaar mera to bilkul bhi man nhi lag raha hai yaha per.





Avi- bhai aap kaho to kal milne chale mumbai.ya aap akele hi chale jaao.





Ashk- baise me mana to nhi karna chahti lekin bhai agar papa ko pata chala to bahut dant bhi pad sakti hai. Isliye jo bhi faisla le soch samjh ke lena.





Amar- i know isiliye to nhi ja raha hu me baha per.






Avi- baise me aapki madad kar sakta hu. Raat me chhip kar jaane me or Bapis aane me.





Ye sunke donk ne hairangi se avi ko dekha.







Amar- kaise.






Avi- robo ki madad se aap chupchap ja sakte hai or aa bbi sakte hai.





Ye sunke amar or ashk ne ek dusre ko aise dekha jaise soch rahe ho ki ye idea unhe kyu nhi aaya.





Ashk- are ha yaar ye idea mujhe kyu nhi aaya.





Avi- kyuki tu duffer hai.





Ashk- achha bada aaya. Chal maan liya ki robo bhai ko le jayega lekin Harry ka kya. Uske bina to ghar me patta bhi nhi ghus sakta fir robo bhai ko le jayega or use pata nhi chalega aisa possible hi nhi hai. Or usko pata chala matlab saaf hai ki papa ko pata chal gya. Or fir band bajna tay hai.







Avi- baise Harry ko ham samjha kar apni side kar lenge. Or usse kahenge ki papa ko kuch na vataye. To vo maan jayega. Vo apna dude haj.samajh jayega.







Amar- to ek kaam kar abhi bula usko or mujhe bhej do. Raat hone se pehle to me mil ke sabhi jaunga. Abhi 2-3 ghante hai andhera hone me.






Ashk- ha ye idea theek hai. Aisa hi kar bula usko.





Avi- ok jo hukum.



Ye kehkar abhi ne apne mobile se robo ko active kiya or use apne pass bulaya





Robo is waqt mumbai base me hi tha. Jaise hi use command mila vo udd gya avi ke pass aane ke liye.





Or karib 15 min. Me vo avi logo ke saamne khada tha. Bahi Samar or varsha ka dhyan gya usper to vo bhi aagye baha per. Unhe laga kuch hua hoga.





Samar- kya hua ye yaha kaise.





Avi- maine bulaya hai bhai.





Samar- kyu.





Ashk- vo kya hai hamare bade bhaiyya ko bhabhi ki bahut yaad aarahi hai to ye unko milane ye jayega or vapis le aayega. Puri safety ke sath.





Ye sunke sabhi ke chehre per smile aagyi.




Uske baad amar ne nidhi ko call kiya or ek restaurant me milne bulaya 15 min. Me jo unke ghar ke pass hi tha. Or jab nidhi ko pata chala ki amar bahi per usse milne aaraha hai to vo kushi se pagal ho gyi or jaldi se ready hone nikal gyi. Halaki ready hone ke liye 15 min. Bahut hi kam hai. Lekin usne thoda sa touchup kiya badiya si dress pehni or nikal gyi ghar se.




Bahi avi ne sab samjha diya robo ko or vo bhi samajh gya or usne amar ko kaske pakda or dono udd gye full speed se or theek 15 min. Me usi restaurant ke pass hi ek sunsaan jagah per land ho gye. Baha se amar ne usko Bapis base per bhej diya or 2 ghante baad yahi milne ka bol diya. Usne command accept kiya or base me chala gya.



Bahi amar ne khud ko theek kiya baal bagera set kiye hath se hi or kapde theek kiye or pahuch gya restaurant jaha per use nidhi ek seat per baithi hui dikh gyi to vo uske pass gya.





Amar- hii madam.




Ye sunke nidhi ne peechhe dekha or amar ko baha dekh ke kush ho gyi or jor se chipak gyi usse. Dono kaafi betaab the ek dusre ke liye






Amar- public place hai nidhi control.



Ye sunke dono alag hue or bahi baith gye. Waiter ko 2 coffee ka order diya or lag gye dono apni gappo me.






Nidhi- achanak yaha kaise. Or bataya bhi nhi kab aaye yaha.





Amar- abhi aaya tha khaas tumse milne sabse chhipke. Agar chachu ya papa ko pata chala to pakka band bajegi ghar per.






Nidhi- achha to fir kyu aaye yaha.





Amar- kya kare ghar per bilkul bhi man nhi lag raha tha. Har samay tumhari hi yaad aarahi thi. Isiliye aana pada.





Nidhi- sach kahu to mera bhi yahi haal hai. Na clg me man lag raha hai na ghar per. Nas har pal yahi sochati hu ki jaldi se hamari shadi ho jaaye or me aapke sath rehne lagu.






Amar- me bhi yahi sochata hu. Lekin kya kare abhi shadi ki age bhi nhi hai hamari or itni jaldi shadi karni bhi nhi hai. Or ghar wale hasenge alag agar unko maine bola to sab khichai karenge meri.






Nidhi- ha lekin is dill ka kya kare.





Amar- khair chhodo or sunao






Nidhi- kya sunau.





Amar- kuch bhi.




Dono ki romantic gapshap shuru hui or chalti hi rahi. Kab 2 ghante nikal gye pata hi nhi chala. Akhir me amar ka call baja to usne attend kiya jo robo ka tha.




Robo- sir 2:30 ghante ho chuke hai andhera bhi ho gya hai. I think ab hame chalna chahiye.





Amar- ok bas 10 min. Me aaya.



Amar- ab chalta hu. Verna sab gadbad ho jayegi.






Nidhi- jana jaruri hai. Mat jaao





Amar- man to nahi hai lekin jana padega. Ab aata rahunga milne isi tarah.






Nidhi- to fir theek hai. Ab kab aaoge.






Amar- aata hu 3-4 din me. Roj roj nhi aasakta






Nidhi- I understand. Ok chalo me aapko chhod deti hu. Baise aaye kaise the






Amar- jadu se. Or baise hi chala jaunga.



Ye kehkar or mouka dekhke amar ne ek halki si kiss nidhi ko kar li. Or isse nidhi ek dum se hairan or sharma gyi. Uske baad amar ne bill diya or nidhi ko bye bolke nikal gya baha se. Nidhi ne bhi usi byy kiya or fir se vo thodi mayus ho gyi lekin ab kushi jyada thi or mayusi kam. Or usi kushi ke sath vo bhi apne ghar chali gyi. Jaha fir se us teesre bande ne use dekha or vo thoda soch me pad gya ki ye kaha gyi thi or iske chehre per ye smile kaisi.





Bahi amar usi sunsaan jagah per pahucha or baha se robo use uda le gya usi jheel ke pass jaha se usne amar ko pick kiya tha. Jaha sabhi uska wait kar rahe the.






Uske baad robo Bapis mumbai aagya bahi Harry ko sab pata tha ki aaj kya or kaise hua hai. Lekin usne ye bat surya ko nhi batai. Batane ki jarurat bhi nhi lagi use.



Or baaki ke bache kushi kushi apne ghar chale gye tehalte hue.









Bahi dusri taraf takshak puri tarah hairan tha vikraal or kaya ki mout se. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki unki mout akhir hui kaise. Kyuki use abhi tak nahi pata tha ki surya ab kya ban chuka hai.




Or ab takshak ghanta raha tha ki ye khabar vo black heart ko kaise de. Lekin batana bhi jaruri tha.
Isliye usne black heart se contact kiya





B.H- bolo takshak koi kush khabar.





Takshak- nhi ek buri khabar jarur hai.





B.H- kya?






Takshak- vikraal or kaya ab nhi rahe un dono ka ant ho chuka hai. Lekin ye kaise or kisne kiya mujhe pata nhi chala hai.





Ye sunke black heart ek dum se khada ho gya or jor se bola.





B.H- kya bak rahe ho takshak. Kab hua ye.







Takshak- aaj hi raat ko. Unko maine surya se nipatne bheja tha. Lekin vo Bapis hi nhi aaye. Mere ek khabri ne bataya ki kisi aag wale danav ne un sabhi ka khatma kar diya. Jab vo vanraj se lad rahe the. Vo achanak hi aaya or achanak hi gayab ho gya.





Ye sunte hi black heart ka chehra ek dum se peela pad gya. Or use apne pita ki baat yaad aai ki vo jiske baare me keh rahe the vo yahi hai rider. Black heart jaanta tha rider ke baare me or uski shaktiyo ke baare me bhi.







B.H- kya sach me usme aag wala danav hi kaha tha.





Takshak- ha. Lekin aap itne pareshan kyu lag rahe hai. Kya hua. Koi chinta ki baat hai kya.







B.H- ha takshak bahut badi chinta ki baat hai. Kyuki agar bakai me baisa danav hai to samajh lo hamme se koi bhi ab surakshit nhi hai kahi per bhi.








Takshak- aisa kya hai us danav me. Hai kon vo.






B.H- vo rider hai ghost rider. Mere pita ke dwara banaya gya ek danav. Jo apan jaise buri shaktiyon or burai ka sikaar karta hai. Use na aag jala sakti hai na hi paani bujha sakta hai. Uske uper kisi bhi shakti ka jyada asar nhi hota hai. Or mere pita ne usko aazad kardiya. Taaki vo hame rok sake ya hamara khatma kar sake.







Ye sunke takshak ko bhi paseena aane laga.




Takshak- ab kya kare ham aap hi bataye.






B.H- mujhe sochne ka thoda time chahiye hai. Me koi na koi hal nikala hi lunga iski. Tab tak tum apne bill me hi chhile rehna. Kyuki vo dur se hi buraai ko sungh leta hai. Or agar use tumhari gandh aagyi to fir tumhara bachna impossible ho jayega. Isliye chhipe raho.






Takshak- theek hai maharaj. Me chhipa hi rahunga. Lekin aap jaldi hi iska koi hal khojiye. Verna aapka sapna fir se sapna hi reh jayega.





B.H- ha me janta hu.




Uske baad dono ka connection cut gya or takshak ne apne aap ko chhipane ke sare intjaam karna shuru kar diya. Bahi Black heart apni socho me dub gya. Vo sochne laga ki ise kaise roka jaaye.








Baaki dekhte hai ab kya hota hai inka.















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Toh Amar Nidhi ne apna quality time spend kiya. Jiske liye dono hi bekarar the. Aur yeh Nidhi ke upar kisne buri najar rakhi hui hai jo uske hi ghar mein hai. Isse toh Nidhi khatre mein hai. Amar ko Harry ko bolke uski safety ka dhyaan rakhna chahiye.

Aur idher Black Heart ko bhi rider ke baare mein pata chal gaya hai jisse uske paseene chutt gaye hai. Par woh jarur rider se nipatne ka raasta khoj hi lega.

Dekhte hai woh kya raasta nikalta hai.


Mera ek question hai kya Avi aur Ashk ke beech incest hogaa. Yaa unke life mein bhi koi aayega. Jaise Samar aur Amar ke life mein Varsha aur Nidhi aayi.
 

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Bahi dusri taraf ghar per mahol theek thak tha bas amar ka dill yaha per nhi lag raha tha kyuki uska dill to already kisi or ke pass chala gya tha.



Or yahi hal nidhi ka bhi tha. Jo is waqt bister per ulti leti hui thi or amar ke khayalo me khoi hui thi. Or halke halke muskura rahi thi. Usne iswaqt ek short skirt pehni hui thi jo uski jangho tak hi seemit thi. Or uske aise letne ki bajah se thoda or uper ko ho gya tha. Or uper ek t shirt. Bahi uske kamre ka darwaja khula hua tha. Or baha per koi chhip kar nidhi ke pichhwade ko taad raha tha. Or soch raha tha ki kab ye meri banegi. Kab me iske badan ka raspan kar paunga.





Kaafi der tak vo baha khada raha. Or jab usne dekha ki nidhi bister se uth rahi hai to vo baha se chup chap nikal gya or nidhi ko bhanak bhi nhi lagi ki koi use aise dekh raha tha.




Bahi use pata tha ki nidhi ka chakkar ab kisi or se chalne laga hai. Isliye use kaafi insecurity ho rahi thi ki nidhi usse hamesha ke liye dur ho jayegi. Or yahi soch soch ke uski rato ki neend udi hui thi. Use kuch aisa plan chahiye tha jisse ye dono ek dusre se alag ho jaaye or nidhi kisi tarah uski jholi me aajaye. Or isiliye vo abhi tak khamosh hai.



Lekin ye kab tak aisa rehta hai ye dekhne wali baat hai.







Bahi sabhi bache gaav me ghumne nikale hue the sham ka samay tha. Or ghumte hue vo log gaav se bahar ek jheel ke pass pahuch gye. Or bahi apna jamawda laga liya. Samar or varsha sabse thode alag baith gye hatho me hath dalke. Or avi ashk or amar ek sath baith gye. Bahi amar thoda gupchup tha or ashk hamesha ki tarah bad bad kar rahi thi beech beech me or avi uski khichai.






Ashk- kya hua bhai aap itne shant kyu ho. Bhabhi ki jyada yaad aarahi hai kya.





Amar- ha yaar mera to bilkul bhi man nhi lag raha hai yaha per.





Avi- bhai aap kaho to kal milne chale mumbai.ya aap akele hi chale jaao.





Ashk- baise me mana to nhi karna chahti lekin bhai agar papa ko pata chala to bahut dant bhi pad sakti hai. Isliye jo bhi faisla le soch samjh ke lena.





Amar- i know isiliye to nhi ja raha hu me baha per.






Avi- baise me aapki madad kar sakta hu. Raat me chhip kar jaane me or Bapis aane me.





Ye sunke donk ne hairangi se avi ko dekha.







Amar- kaise.






Avi- robo ki madad se aap chupchap ja sakte hai or aa bbi sakte hai.





Ye sunke amar or ashk ne ek dusre ko aise dekha jaise soch rahe ho ki ye idea unhe kyu nhi aaya.





Ashk- are ha yaar ye idea mujhe kyu nhi aaya.





Avi- kyuki tu duffer hai.





Ashk- achha bada aaya. Chal maan liya ki robo bhai ko le jayega lekin Harry ka kya. Uske bina to ghar me patta bhi nhi ghus sakta fir robo bhai ko le jayega or use pata nhi chalega aisa possible hi nhi hai. Or usko pata chala matlab saaf hai ki papa ko pata chal gya. Or fir band bajna tay hai.







Avi- baise Harry ko ham samjha kar apni side kar lenge. Or usse kahenge ki papa ko kuch na vataye. To vo maan jayega. Vo apna dude haj.samajh jayega.







Amar- to ek kaam kar abhi bula usko or mujhe bhej do. Raat hone se pehle to me mil ke sabhi jaunga. Abhi 2-3 ghante hai andhera hone me.






Ashk- ha ye idea theek hai. Aisa hi kar bula usko.





Avi- ok jo hukum.



Ye kehkar abhi ne apne mobile se robo ko active kiya or use apne pass bulaya





Robo is waqt mumbai base me hi tha. Jaise hi use command mila vo udd gya avi ke pass aane ke liye.





Or karib 15 min. Me vo avi logo ke saamne khada tha. Bahi Samar or varsha ka dhyan gya usper to vo bhi aagye baha per. Unhe laga kuch hua hoga.





Samar- kya hua ye yaha kaise.





Avi- maine bulaya hai bhai.





Samar- kyu.





Ashk- vo kya hai hamare bade bhaiyya ko bhabhi ki bahut yaad aarahi hai to ye unko milane ye jayega or vapis le aayega. Puri safety ke sath.





Ye sunke sabhi ke chehre per smile aagyi.




Uske baad amar ne nidhi ko call kiya or ek restaurant me milne bulaya 15 min. Me jo unke ghar ke pass hi tha. Or jab nidhi ko pata chala ki amar bahi per usse milne aaraha hai to vo kushi se pagal ho gyi or jaldi se ready hone nikal gyi. Halaki ready hone ke liye 15 min. Bahut hi kam hai. Lekin usne thoda sa touchup kiya badiya si dress pehni or nikal gyi ghar se.




Bahi avi ne sab samjha diya robo ko or vo bhi samajh gya or usne amar ko kaske pakda or dono udd gye full speed se or theek 15 min. Me usi restaurant ke pass hi ek sunsaan jagah per land ho gye. Baha se amar ne usko Bapis base per bhej diya or 2 ghante baad yahi milne ka bol diya. Usne command accept kiya or base me chala gya.



Bahi amar ne khud ko theek kiya baal bagera set kiye hath se hi or kapde theek kiye or pahuch gya restaurant jaha per use nidhi ek seat per baithi hui dikh gyi to vo uske pass gya.





Amar- hii madam.




Ye sunke nidhi ne peechhe dekha or amar ko baha dekh ke kush ho gyi or jor se chipak gyi usse. Dono kaafi betaab the ek dusre ke liye






Amar- public place hai nidhi control.



Ye sunke dono alag hue or bahi baith gye. Waiter ko 2 coffee ka order diya or lag gye dono apni gappo me.






Nidhi- achanak yaha kaise. Or bataya bhi nhi kab aaye yaha.





Amar- abhi aaya tha khaas tumse milne sabse chhipke. Agar chachu ya papa ko pata chala to pakka band bajegi ghar per.






Nidhi- achha to fir kyu aaye yaha.





Amar- kya kare ghar per bilkul bhi man nhi lag raha tha. Har samay tumhari hi yaad aarahi thi. Isiliye aana pada.





Nidhi- sach kahu to mera bhi yahi haal hai. Na clg me man lag raha hai na ghar per. Nas har pal yahi sochati hu ki jaldi se hamari shadi ho jaaye or me aapke sath rehne lagu.






Amar- me bhi yahi sochata hu. Lekin kya kare abhi shadi ki age bhi nhi hai hamari or itni jaldi shadi karni bhi nhi hai. Or ghar wale hasenge alag agar unko maine bola to sab khichai karenge meri.






Nidhi- ha lekin is dill ka kya kare.





Amar- khair chhodo or sunao






Nidhi- kya sunau.





Amar- kuch bhi.




Dono ki romantic gapshap shuru hui or chalti hi rahi. Kab 2 ghante nikal gye pata hi nhi chala. Akhir me amar ka call baja to usne attend kiya jo robo ka tha.




Robo- sir 2:30 ghante ho chuke hai andhera bhi ho gya hai. I think ab hame chalna chahiye.





Amar- ok bas 10 min. Me aaya.



Amar- ab chalta hu. Verna sab gadbad ho jayegi.






Nidhi- jana jaruri hai. Mat jaao





Amar- man to nahi hai lekin jana padega. Ab aata rahunga milne isi tarah.






Nidhi- to fir theek hai. Ab kab aaoge.






Amar- aata hu 3-4 din me. Roj roj nhi aasakta






Nidhi- I understand. Ok chalo me aapko chhod deti hu. Baise aaye kaise the






Amar- jadu se. Or baise hi chala jaunga.



Ye kehkar or mouka dekhke amar ne ek halki si kiss nidhi ko kar li. Or isse nidhi ek dum se hairan or sharma gyi. Uske baad amar ne bill diya or nidhi ko bye bolke nikal gya baha se. Nidhi ne bhi usi byy kiya or fir se vo thodi mayus ho gyi lekin ab kushi jyada thi or mayusi kam. Or usi kushi ke sath vo bhi apne ghar chali gyi. Jaha fir se us teesre bande ne use dekha or vo thoda soch me pad gya ki ye kaha gyi thi or iske chehre per ye smile kaisi.





Bahi amar usi sunsaan jagah per pahucha or baha se robo use uda le gya usi jheel ke pass jaha se usne amar ko pick kiya tha. Jaha sabhi uska wait kar rahe the.






Uske baad robo Bapis mumbai aagya bahi Harry ko sab pata tha ki aaj kya or kaise hua hai. Lekin usne ye bat surya ko nhi batai. Batane ki jarurat bhi nhi lagi use.



Or baaki ke bache kushi kushi apne ghar chale gye tehalte hue.









Bahi dusri taraf takshak puri tarah hairan tha vikraal or kaya ki mout se. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki unki mout akhir hui kaise. Kyuki use abhi tak nahi pata tha ki surya ab kya ban chuka hai.




Or ab takshak ghanta raha tha ki ye khabar vo black heart ko kaise de. Lekin batana bhi jaruri tha.
Isliye usne black heart se contact kiya





B.H- bolo takshak koi kush khabar.





Takshak- nhi ek buri khabar jarur hai.





B.H- kya?






Takshak- vikraal or kaya ab nhi rahe un dono ka ant ho chuka hai. Lekin ye kaise or kisne kiya mujhe pata nhi chala hai.





Ye sunke black heart ek dum se khada ho gya or jor se bola.





B.H- kya bak rahe ho takshak. Kab hua ye.







Takshak- aaj hi raat ko. Unko maine surya se nipatne bheja tha. Lekin vo Bapis hi nhi aaye. Mere ek khabri ne bataya ki kisi aag wale danav ne un sabhi ka khatma kar diya. Jab vo vanraj se lad rahe the. Vo achanak hi aaya or achanak hi gayab ho gya.





Ye sunte hi black heart ka chehra ek dum se peela pad gya. Or use apne pita ki baat yaad aai ki vo jiske baare me keh rahe the vo yahi hai rider. Black heart jaanta tha rider ke baare me or uski shaktiyo ke baare me bhi.







B.H- kya sach me usme aag wala danav hi kaha tha.





Takshak- ha. Lekin aap itne pareshan kyu lag rahe hai. Kya hua. Koi chinta ki baat hai kya.







B.H- ha takshak bahut badi chinta ki baat hai. Kyuki agar bakai me baisa danav hai to samajh lo hamme se koi bhi ab surakshit nhi hai kahi per bhi.








Takshak- aisa kya hai us danav me. Hai kon vo.






B.H- vo rider hai ghost rider. Mere pita ke dwara banaya gya ek danav. Jo apan jaise buri shaktiyon or burai ka sikaar karta hai. Use na aag jala sakti hai na hi paani bujha sakta hai. Uske uper kisi bhi shakti ka jyada asar nhi hota hai. Or mere pita ne usko aazad kardiya. Taaki vo hame rok sake ya hamara khatma kar sake.







Ye sunke takshak ko bhi paseena aane laga.




Takshak- ab kya kare ham aap hi bataye.






B.H- mujhe sochne ka thoda time chahiye hai. Me koi na koi hal nikala hi lunga iski. Tab tak tum apne bill me hi chhile rehna. Kyuki vo dur se hi buraai ko sungh leta hai. Or agar use tumhari gandh aagyi to fir tumhara bachna impossible ho jayega. Isliye chhipe raho.






Takshak- theek hai maharaj. Me chhipa hi rahunga. Lekin aap jaldi hi iska koi hal khojiye. Verna aapka sapna fir se sapna hi reh jayega.





B.H- ha me janta hu.




Uske baad dono ka connection cut gya or takshak ne apne aap ko chhipane ke sare intjaam karna shuru kar diya. Bahi Black heart apni socho me dub gya. Vo sochne laga ki ise kaise roka jaaye.








Baaki dekhte hai ab kya hota hai inka.















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Sabhi aasani se khatam ho chuke the. Or vanraj bas dur se hi khada hoke dekh raha tha ki ab akhir ye surya Bapis kaise banega. Use kuch samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki kya kiya jaaye. Bahi charo taraf lagi aag bhi abhi tak jal rahi thi. Vo bhi shant hone ka naam nhi le rahe thi. Fir bhi usne himmat karke aage badhne ka faisla liya.




Vo dheeme dheeme kadmo se aage bada or usne thodi dur se hi surya ka naam pukara






Vanraj- surya.




Ye aawaj sunke rider ne peechhe mud ke dekha.





Or usne gour se vanraj ko dekha or tezi se uske pass gya. Bahi is tarah usko apne pass aata dekhke vanraj ke hath pair kamp gye. Use laga kahi ye uska bhi kaam tamaam na karde.





Rider uske ek dum karib aake ruka or uski khushbu sunghne laga. Actually vo bas buraai ko sunghata hai. Or agar kisi ke andar se thodi bhi buraai ki smell aagyi to vo gya kaam se.




Or is waqt vanraj kisi murti ki tarah ek dum seedha khada hua tha. Or rider uske andar ki buraai ko sunghne ki kosis kar raha tha.





Main2- tum ek achhe insan ho bas thodi der ke liye behal gye the. Or galat raste per chale gye the. Lekin ab mujhe tumhare andar se buraai ki thodi si bhi smell nhi aarahi hai iska matlab tum ab safe ho.






Ye sunke vanraj ki saas me saas aai.





Vanraj- mujhe surya se baat karni hai.







Main2- subah aana abhi mujhe apne sikaar dhundne hai.



Ye kehkar usne seeti bajai or uski bike apne aap start hoke uske pass aagyi. Or vo uspe baitha.






Main2- ye aag mere jaate hi shant hu ho jayegi or fir tum bhi ja sakte ho yaha se. Or seedhe ghar hi jana





Vanraj- ha ghar hi jaunga.





Ye kehkar rider ne apni bike ko aage badhaya or full speed se aag ko paar karte hue nikal gya baha se. Or rider ke aag ko paar karte hi aag se bana hua pura pinjara apne aap hi khatam ho gya or charo taraf ka mahool fir se pehle jaisa ho gya. Halaki mousam garmi kaafi bad gyi thi. Isiliye vanraj ne jaldi hi baha se nikalne ka faisla kiya or ghar ke liye seedhi doud laga di.




Kuch hi Minto me vo pahuch gya surya ke ghar. Or jab baha pahuch kar usne ghar ki haalat dekhi to apna sir pakad liya. Kyuki pure ghar ki band buri tarah baj chuki thi. Ghar ki deeware kaali pad gyi thi. Aag ki bajah se.





Vanraj- ye kya haal ho gya ghar ka.





Harry- sir ab kya kar sakte hai. Jo hona tha so ho gya. Baise surya sir kaha hai.






Vanraj- vo surya nhi hai. Balki uske andar ka khukhara shaitaan hai. Jisko jaha buraai dikhegi vo apna sikaar usko bana lega. Or is waqt bhi vo bahi karne gya hai.







Harry- ha sir maine dekha baha jungle me kya hua. Vakai me pal bhar me sabko khatam kar diya. Or ek hisaab se ye achha hi hua. Kyuki aise shaitano ke liye. Unka aisa rup hi theek hai.






Vanraj- ha ye baat to hai. Or uska ye rup dekhke meri tension kaafi had tak khatam ho gyi hai. Or ab mujhe pura viswas ho gya hai ki black heart or uski gang ka safaya hone se koi nhi rok sakta hai.






Harry- ha sahi kaha. Khair abhi subah hone me waqt hai to bataiye kya karne ka irada hai.






Vanraj- koi kamra salamat bacha ho to bata do me bahi so jaunga.





Harry- theek hai sir uper wale kamro me se koi ek le leejiye vo sab theek hai.





Vanraj- thanks Harry




Ye bolke vanraj uper gya or ekkamre me jaake so gya.






Bahi me apni bike per pure sehar ke chakkar kat raha tha lekin mujhe burai ko gandh kahi per bhi nhi aai. Sayad mere bare me sabhi ko pata chal gya tha or sabhi apne apne bilo me chhip gaye honge. Isliye suraj ke nikalne tak me yaha baha ghumta raha. Or jaise hi suraj nikle meri bike apne aap ruk gyi or me bike se neeche. Me jameen per leta or puri tarah se normal ho gya. Mere body me jo aag lagi hui thi vo apne aap bujh gyi. Or ab me surya wale besh me Bapis aagya tha.





Thodi der tak me vaise hi jameen per leta raha or yaad karne laga ki kal kya kya hua. Lekin mujhe sab kuch thoda thoda hi yaad tha. Baaki puri ghatna yaad nhj aarahi thi.




Meri sanse jor jor se chal rahi thi jinhen me control kar raha tha.





Tabhi achanak se mujhe ek bahut hi tez horn sunai diya to maine apni mundi ko ghuma kar dekha to ek truck seedha mere hi uper chada ja raha tha. Use dekhte hi meri aankhe chad gyi. Or me furti se side ko ludak gya. Or truck apni speed se mere baju se nikal gya. Or maine chain ki saas li.




Khair thodi der lete rehne ke baad me khada hua apne kapde saaf kiye. Jo kai jagah se jal gye the. Fir bhi theek the. Uske baad maine dekha ki mai. Akhir hu kaha. Ab mobile mere pass tha nhi or milestone bhi nhi laga hua tha. Isliye ab kisi se puchhna tha mujhe.



Lekin aaspass koi nhi tha. Isliye apni bike ko uthaya or jis disha me meri bike padi hui thi uski opposite disha me maine jana shuru kar diya. Or thodi hi aage gya tha me ki mujhe ek aadmi dikha jo paidal hi road per tehal raha tha. Maine uske baju me apni bike ko roka.





Main- are bhai jara suno to.




Meri aawaj sunke vo mere pass aaya





U- ha bhai kya hua.





Main- darashal mujhe mumbai jana hai. Konsa rasta hai baha ka or yaha se kitni duri per haj







U- bhai aap mumbaj wale road per hi ho. Yaha se mumbaj karib 150 km dur hai.





Main- isi taraf jana hai.





U- ha bhaisaab. Isi taraf jaiye pahuch jayenge aap mumbai.






Main- dhanyavad bhai.






U- baise bhai aapki bike badi mast hai. Kaha se li hai ye or konsi company ki hai.






Main- bhai ye bike mere bhai ne banai hai. Khud apne hatho se. Ye kisi company ki nhi haj.








U- aisi bike banwane me kitna kharcha aajayega.






Main- jyda nhi 2-3 lakh me aisi bike van jayegi.





U- ohh ye to bahut mehngi hai.





Ye sunkar mujhe samajh me aaya ki maine thoda jyada hi casual bol diya






Main- ha bhai mehngi to haj. Khair chalo me nikalta hu. Thanks.






U- ok bhai.




Ye kehkar maine bike ko aage badhaya apni full speed se. Mujhe jald se jald ghar pahunchana tha.






Or aisa hi hua ek ghante me main mumbai me ghus gya tha. Or ab kamse kam aadha ghanta or lagega ghar tak pahunchane me.




Or hua bhi aisa hi me 1:30 ghante ke pure safar ke baad ghar pahuch hi gya. Or jan baha ki haalat dekhi to mere hosh hi udd gye. Kyuki ghar ki haalat vakai me kharab ho gyi thi. Or ghar me repairing ka kaam jori shoro se chal raha tha.




Or bahi mujhe bahar ki side vanraj ek jagah baitha hua dikha subah ki chai peete hue or news paper padte hue.





Main- kaise ho miyan.





Ye aawaj sunke usne meri taraf dekha or ek hi jhatke me khada ho gya or meri taraf aaya or mere gale mila.




Vanraj- kaha gye the






Main- pata nhi jaha vo le gya chala gya me. Baise kya hua raat ko. Kuch galat salat to nhi kar diya maine.






Vanraj- bhai kurta faad ke rumaal kardiya aapne.






Main- achha aisa kya kar diya.





Vanraj- jyada kuch nhi. Bas vikraal kaya or uske kuch sathiyo ka kaam tamaam kardiya aapne. Vo bhi aise jaise vo koi machar ho. Jitni aasani se insan macharro ko maarte hai baise hi aapne un sabhi ko mara hai.







Ye sunke mujhe vakai me jhatka laga.




Main- what vikraal kaya khatam.





Vanraj- ha bhai. Maja hi aagya.unko tadapta hua dekhke. Or agar ye rider isi speed se chalta raha to kuch hi dino me black heart khud tumhare saamne hoga ladne ke liye kyuki uske pass log hi nhi bachenge aage bhejne ke liye.







Main- vakai me.






Vanraj- baise aajkal mujhse bahut kuch chhipane lage ho tum. Mujhe bataya kyu hi iske baare me.






Main- actually me khud pehle dekhna chahta tha ki kya hota hai kaise hota hai. Hota bhi hai ya nhi. Isiliye nhi bataya tha.






Vanraj- baise ye sab hua kab tha.






Main- kal raat ko hi. Uske baad subah maine sabko ghar bhej diya tha or raat me ye sab ho gya.






Vanraj- sahi hai. Baise kya lagta hai.ab black heart kya karega jab use iske baare me pata chalega.







Main- kuch keh pana muskil hai. Isliye filhaal hame saabdhan rehne ki jarurat hai. Baaki dekhte hai kya karta hai vo.

















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Bahi dusri taraf ghar per mahol theek thak tha bas amar ka dill yaha per nhi lag raha tha kyuki uska dill to already kisi or ke pass chala gya tha.



Or yahi hal nidhi ka bhi tha. Jo is waqt bister per ulti leti hui thi or amar ke khayalo me khoi hui thi. Or halke halke muskura rahi thi. Usne iswaqt ek short skirt pehni hui thi jo uski jangho tak hi seemit thi. Or uske aise letne ki bajah se thoda or uper ko ho gya tha. Or uper ek t shirt. Bahi uske kamre ka darwaja khula hua tha. Or baha per koi chhip kar nidhi ke pichhwade ko taad raha tha. Or soch raha tha ki kab ye meri banegi. Kab me iske badan ka raspan kar paunga.





Kaafi der tak vo baha khada raha. Or jab usne dekha ki nidhi bister se uth rahi hai to vo baha se chup chap nikal gya or nidhi ko bhanak bhi nhi lagi ki koi use aise dekh raha tha.




Bahi use pata tha ki nidhi ka chakkar ab kisi or se chalne laga hai. Isliye use kaafi insecurity ho rahi thi ki nidhi usse hamesha ke liye dur ho jayegi. Or yahi soch soch ke uski rato ki neend udi hui thi. Use kuch aisa plan chahiye tha jisse ye dono ek dusre se alag ho jaaye or nidhi kisi tarah uski jholi me aajaye. Or isiliye vo abhi tak khamosh hai.



Lekin ye kab tak aisa rehta hai ye dekhne wali baat hai.







Bahi sabhi bache gaav me ghumne nikale hue the sham ka samay tha. Or ghumte hue vo log gaav se bahar ek jheel ke pass pahuch gye. Or bahi apna jamawda laga liya. Samar or varsha sabse thode alag baith gye hatho me hath dalke. Or avi ashk or amar ek sath baith gye. Bahi amar thoda gupchup tha or ashk hamesha ki tarah bad bad kar rahi thi beech beech me or avi uski khichai.






Ashk- kya hua bhai aap itne shant kyu ho. Bhabhi ki jyada yaad aarahi hai kya.





Amar- ha yaar mera to bilkul bhi man nhi lag raha hai yaha per.





Avi- bhai aap kaho to kal milne chale mumbai.ya aap akele hi chale jaao.





Ashk- baise me mana to nhi karna chahti lekin bhai agar papa ko pata chala to bahut dant bhi pad sakti hai. Isliye jo bhi faisla le soch samjh ke lena.





Amar- i know isiliye to nhi ja raha hu me baha per.






Avi- baise me aapki madad kar sakta hu. Raat me chhip kar jaane me or Bapis aane me.





Ye sunke donk ne hairangi se avi ko dekha.







Amar- kaise.






Avi- robo ki madad se aap chupchap ja sakte hai or aa bbi sakte hai.





Ye sunke amar or ashk ne ek dusre ko aise dekha jaise soch rahe ho ki ye idea unhe kyu nhi aaya.





Ashk- are ha yaar ye idea mujhe kyu nhi aaya.





Avi- kyuki tu duffer hai.





Ashk- achha bada aaya. Chal maan liya ki robo bhai ko le jayega lekin Harry ka kya. Uske bina to ghar me patta bhi nhi ghus sakta fir robo bhai ko le jayega or use pata nhi chalega aisa possible hi nhi hai. Or usko pata chala matlab saaf hai ki papa ko pata chal gya. Or fir band bajna tay hai.







Avi- baise Harry ko ham samjha kar apni side kar lenge. Or usse kahenge ki papa ko kuch na vataye. To vo maan jayega. Vo apna dude haj.samajh jayega.







Amar- to ek kaam kar abhi bula usko or mujhe bhej do. Raat hone se pehle to me mil ke sabhi jaunga. Abhi 2-3 ghante hai andhera hone me.






Ashk- ha ye idea theek hai. Aisa hi kar bula usko.





Avi- ok jo hukum.



Ye kehkar abhi ne apne mobile se robo ko active kiya or use apne pass bulaya





Robo is waqt mumbai base me hi tha. Jaise hi use command mila vo udd gya avi ke pass aane ke liye.





Or karib 15 min. Me vo avi logo ke saamne khada tha. Bahi Samar or varsha ka dhyan gya usper to vo bhi aagye baha per. Unhe laga kuch hua hoga.





Samar- kya hua ye yaha kaise.





Avi- maine bulaya hai bhai.





Samar- kyu.





Ashk- vo kya hai hamare bade bhaiyya ko bhabhi ki bahut yaad aarahi hai to ye unko milane ye jayega or vapis le aayega. Puri safety ke sath.





Ye sunke sabhi ke chehre per smile aagyi.




Uske baad amar ne nidhi ko call kiya or ek restaurant me milne bulaya 15 min. Me jo unke ghar ke pass hi tha. Or jab nidhi ko pata chala ki amar bahi per usse milne aaraha hai to vo kushi se pagal ho gyi or jaldi se ready hone nikal gyi. Halaki ready hone ke liye 15 min. Bahut hi kam hai. Lekin usne thoda sa touchup kiya badiya si dress pehni or nikal gyi ghar se.




Bahi avi ne sab samjha diya robo ko or vo bhi samajh gya or usne amar ko kaske pakda or dono udd gye full speed se or theek 15 min. Me usi restaurant ke pass hi ek sunsaan jagah per land ho gye. Baha se amar ne usko Bapis base per bhej diya or 2 ghante baad yahi milne ka bol diya. Usne command accept kiya or base me chala gya.



Bahi amar ne khud ko theek kiya baal bagera set kiye hath se hi or kapde theek kiye or pahuch gya restaurant jaha per use nidhi ek seat per baithi hui dikh gyi to vo uske pass gya.





Amar- hii madam.




Ye sunke nidhi ne peechhe dekha or amar ko baha dekh ke kush ho gyi or jor se chipak gyi usse. Dono kaafi betaab the ek dusre ke liye






Amar- public place hai nidhi control.



Ye sunke dono alag hue or bahi baith gye. Waiter ko 2 coffee ka order diya or lag gye dono apni gappo me.






Nidhi- achanak yaha kaise. Or bataya bhi nhi kab aaye yaha.





Amar- abhi aaya tha khaas tumse milne sabse chhipke. Agar chachu ya papa ko pata chala to pakka band bajegi ghar per.






Nidhi- achha to fir kyu aaye yaha.





Amar- kya kare ghar per bilkul bhi man nhi lag raha tha. Har samay tumhari hi yaad aarahi thi. Isiliye aana pada.





Nidhi- sach kahu to mera bhi yahi haal hai. Na clg me man lag raha hai na ghar per. Nas har pal yahi sochati hu ki jaldi se hamari shadi ho jaaye or me aapke sath rehne lagu.






Amar- me bhi yahi sochata hu. Lekin kya kare abhi shadi ki age bhi nhi hai hamari or itni jaldi shadi karni bhi nhi hai. Or ghar wale hasenge alag agar unko maine bola to sab khichai karenge meri.






Nidhi- ha lekin is dill ka kya kare.





Amar- khair chhodo or sunao






Nidhi- kya sunau.





Amar- kuch bhi.




Dono ki romantic gapshap shuru hui or chalti hi rahi. Kab 2 ghante nikal gye pata hi nhi chala. Akhir me amar ka call baja to usne attend kiya jo robo ka tha.




Robo- sir 2:30 ghante ho chuke hai andhera bhi ho gya hai. I think ab hame chalna chahiye.





Amar- ok bas 10 min. Me aaya.



Amar- ab chalta hu. Verna sab gadbad ho jayegi.






Nidhi- jana jaruri hai. Mat jaao





Amar- man to nahi hai lekin jana padega. Ab aata rahunga milne isi tarah.






Nidhi- to fir theek hai. Ab kab aaoge.






Amar- aata hu 3-4 din me. Roj roj nhi aasakta






Nidhi- I understand. Ok chalo me aapko chhod deti hu. Baise aaye kaise the






Amar- jadu se. Or baise hi chala jaunga.



Ye kehkar or mouka dekhke amar ne ek halki si kiss nidhi ko kar li. Or isse nidhi ek dum se hairan or sharma gyi. Uske baad amar ne bill diya or nidhi ko bye bolke nikal gya baha se. Nidhi ne bhi usi byy kiya or fir se vo thodi mayus ho gyi lekin ab kushi jyada thi or mayusi kam. Or usi kushi ke sath vo bhi apne ghar chali gyi. Jaha fir se us teesre bande ne use dekha or vo thoda soch me pad gya ki ye kaha gyi thi or iske chehre per ye smile kaisi.





Bahi amar usi sunsaan jagah per pahucha or baha se robo use uda le gya usi jheel ke pass jaha se usne amar ko pick kiya tha. Jaha sabhi uska wait kar rahe the.






Uske baad robo Bapis mumbai aagya bahi Harry ko sab pata tha ki aaj kya or kaise hua hai. Lekin usne ye bat surya ko nhi batai. Batane ki jarurat bhi nhi lagi use.



Or baaki ke bache kushi kushi apne ghar chale gye tehalte hue.









Bahi dusri taraf takshak puri tarah hairan tha vikraal or kaya ki mout se. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki unki mout akhir hui kaise. Kyuki use abhi tak nahi pata tha ki surya ab kya ban chuka hai.




Or ab takshak ghanta raha tha ki ye khabar vo black heart ko kaise de. Lekin batana bhi jaruri tha.
Isliye usne black heart se contact kiya





B.H- bolo takshak koi kush khabar.





Takshak- nhi ek buri khabar jarur hai.





B.H- kya?






Takshak- vikraal or kaya ab nhi rahe un dono ka ant ho chuka hai. Lekin ye kaise or kisne kiya mujhe pata nhi chala hai.





Ye sunke black heart ek dum se khada ho gya or jor se bola.





B.H- kya bak rahe ho takshak. Kab hua ye.







Takshak- aaj hi raat ko. Unko maine surya se nipatne bheja tha. Lekin vo Bapis hi nhi aaye. Mere ek khabri ne bataya ki kisi aag wale danav ne un sabhi ka khatma kar diya. Jab vo vanraj se lad rahe the. Vo achanak hi aaya or achanak hi gayab ho gya.





Ye sunte hi black heart ka chehra ek dum se peela pad gya. Or use apne pita ki baat yaad aai ki vo jiske baare me keh rahe the vo yahi hai rider. Black heart jaanta tha rider ke baare me or uski shaktiyo ke baare me bhi.







B.H- kya sach me usme aag wala danav hi kaha tha.





Takshak- ha. Lekin aap itne pareshan kyu lag rahe hai. Kya hua. Koi chinta ki baat hai kya.







B.H- ha takshak bahut badi chinta ki baat hai. Kyuki agar bakai me baisa danav hai to samajh lo hamme se koi bhi ab surakshit nhi hai kahi per bhi.








Takshak- aisa kya hai us danav me. Hai kon vo.






B.H- vo rider hai ghost rider. Mere pita ke dwara banaya gya ek danav. Jo apan jaise buri shaktiyon or burai ka sikaar karta hai. Use na aag jala sakti hai na hi paani bujha sakta hai. Uske uper kisi bhi shakti ka jyada asar nhi hota hai. Or mere pita ne usko aazad kardiya. Taaki vo hame rok sake ya hamara khatma kar sake.







Ye sunke takshak ko bhi paseena aane laga.




Takshak- ab kya kare ham aap hi bataye.






B.H- mujhe sochne ka thoda time chahiye hai. Me koi na koi hal nikala hi lunga iski. Tab tak tum apne bill me hi chhile rehna. Kyuki vo dur se hi buraai ko sungh leta hai. Or agar use tumhari gandh aagyi to fir tumhara bachna impossible ho jayega. Isliye chhipe raho.






Takshak- theek hai maharaj. Me chhipa hi rahunga. Lekin aap jaldi hi iska koi hal khojiye. Verna aapka sapna fir se sapna hi reh jayega.





B.H- ha me janta hu.




Uske baad dono ka connection cut gya or takshak ne apne aap ko chhipane ke sare intjaam karna shuru kar diya. Bahi Black heart apni socho me dub gya. Vo sochne laga ki ise kaise roka jaaye.








Baaki dekhte hai ab kya hota hai inka.















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Gjb to black heart ko pta chl hi gya ki aakhir ghost rider aazad ho gya h bss uske host ke baare me use koi jankari nhi h abhi pr itni jankari se hi uski hwa tight ho gyi h aur takshak ko under ground bhi kr diya usne..jb pta chlega ki uska host surya h aur ghost rider aur bhi powerfull ho gya h to usko heart attack na aajaye😂😂black heart ko to may ne na bhi aaye pr takshak ko jarur aajyega😝😝😝...
Wahi dono nye navele premi jode judai me tadap rhe h aur uski tadap ko km krne me avi ke idea ne help kr di kuchh..pr ye bnda aakhir h kon jo nidhi ke peeche hath dho kr pda h...nidhi ke ghr me rhta h isse itna to h ki wo koi rishtedar ya fir family friends ke priwar se ho skta h..ab dekhte h kon h wo...aur kya kaand krta h nidhi ko paane ke liye..so waiting for next update brother...👏👏👏🗡
 

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mana ki vikraal kaya & party ko unke anjaam tak pahuncha diya, lekin buri khabar ye ki iske chalte ghar tut fut gaya :sigh2:
well... galat aur burayi ke raah par chalne wale jitne the sab ko shayad bhanak lag gayi ho rider ke baare mein.... ab wo log itne bewakuf to hai nahi saamne aaye aur free mein rider shikar ban jaaye, isliye shayad kahi dubak ke baithe honge....
subah ka nazar kuch alag hi tha..... jaha apne asli roop mein aane ke baad Saurya ko pichli raat ke baare mein thik se yaad nahi wohi hosh mein aane ke baad ye bhi pata nahi laga pa raha tha ki wo hai kaha..... btw behoshi se hosh aane ke baad akshar aisa hi hota hai... bhala ho us aadmi ka jisne Saurya ko Mumbai jaane raasta bata diya.....
Waise ghar aake aur bhi zyada hairan pareshan ho gaya tha wo... ki kya hua tha kal raat...
Vikraal kaya & party ki maut ki khabar sunke aur bhi hairan ho gaya tha Saurya... chalo koi na vanraj ne saare doubt clear kar diye...
ab baari black heart ki..... jald hi ushe bhi saza milegi... wo bhi khaufnaak tarike se...
Saurya ka ye rider roop dekh ghost Rider ki yaad aaye.... Writer sahab shayad ghost rider se inspired hai...... isliye Saurya ke rider wale roop ke jariye ye dikhane ki koshish kar rahe ki kabhi kabhi burayi itni badh jaati hai ki jiske chalte Saurya jaise lead kirdaar ko aise roop lene padte hai.... coz Saurya original roop se zyada is rider ke roop mein jab saza deta hai to baaki bache bure logo ke mann mein bhi khauf baith jaata hai... Rider ka tandav dekh ab bure log kuch saitani harkatein karne pehle Sau baar sochenge ki rider na aa jaaye, unke karmo ka dardnaak saza dene...
Hmmm.... rider jab vanraj sungh raha tha ki kahi usme to burayi nahi, tab vanraj itna dar gaya tha ki apne jagah se hil tak nahi pa raha tha...
Khair update kaafi dilchasp tha aur sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:

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So amar aur nidhi ka pyar pure parwan pe hai...
Ab dono ko hi ko bhi ye zindagi khoobsurat lagne lagegi, Har sapna sach lagne lagega , Har manzil badalne lagegi , Hawa ka rukh bhi badalne lagega , Rangon pe nazar padhne lagegi aur ab to dono ko laal rang bhi prati zyada akarshit honge. . Har pal, har waqt, hamesha, ek duje ka naam dono ke hoton pe aata aayega...amar, nidhi....
Lekin,.... lekin,... lekin..... aise pyar karna bhi itna ashan aur ho, ye bhi kabhi ho sakta hai kya,... kyunki nidhi ke ghar pe hi ek aisa saksh, koi ek aisa insaan hai jo in dono ke Pyaar ko jald hi grahan lagane wala hai apne mansubo ko kamyab karne ke khatir..... wo insaan apne hawas ke chalte, nidhi ko paane ke liye kuch aisa to jarur karega jisse nidhi aur amar ke pyar darar aa jaaye....
Har pal nazar rakh raha hai nidhi par ki wo kya kar rahi hai...
well wohi dusri taraf dono ek duje se milne ke liye atur... robo ki madad se akhirikar phir se mil hi gaye... ek pyar bhara shama bhi bana us restaurant mein, par har suruwat ka ek ant hota hai isliye phir se milne ka pyar bhara wada kar amar aur nidhi dono apne apne raah par chal pare....
Wohi ghar aane ke baad bhi jo khushi abhi tak nidhi ke chehre pe chaayi huyi thi usko dekh us insaan ko shaq hone laga nidhi par..... lekin hai koun?
dusri taraf vikraal, kaya ki maut khabar sun jitna hairan hua black heart, usse bhi zyada hairan aur khaufzada ho gaya wo jab ushe pata chala ki rider laut aaya hai, wo bhali bhaanti jaanta hai ki rider ko rok pana ab muskil hi nahi lag bhag namumkin hai.... isliye usne takshak ko kisi safe jagah chupne ke liye kaha.. kyunki wo nahi chaahta tha ki rider takshak ko bhi shikar bana le, waise pehle kayi nuksan pahuncha chuka hai black heart ka rider ne..

Update kaafi dilchasp aur dilchasp tha, sath hi kayi mayno mein romantic bhi...
Well let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 
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