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Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

Naina

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Bahi 2 din baad nidhi ke mobile per ek anjan no. Se msg aaya jisme kuch photos thi.


Or jaise hi nidhi ne un photos ko dekha uske hosh udd gye. Kyuki unme amar kisi or ke sath apattijanak halat me tha. Yani ki nude. Or dono mast the apne kaamo me. Or kuch baate bhi record hui usme jisme amar us ladki se shadi ka wada kar raha tha. Aawaj amar ki hi thi ye nidhi ko turant hi pata chal gya kyuki uski aawaj vo neend me bhi pehchan sakti hai.





Bahi ye sab dekhne ke baad use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki vo kaise react Kare.




Or kismat se tabhi nidhi ki khaas saheli payal usse milne uske ghar aai. Or jab usne nidhi ki haalat dekhi to vo bhi puri tarah se confuse ho gyi ki ise kya ho gya.



Bahi usne kai baar use aawaj lagai lekin usne ek bhi baar nhi suna. To vo uske baaju me baithi or jaise hi uski najar un photos or videos per gyi uske bhi hosh udd gye kyuki amar ko vo bhi pehchanti thi. Or uska aisa rup dekhke use bhi samajh me nhi aaya ki ab vo kya kare or kya kahe nidhi se.





Lekin use kuch to kehna hi tha. Isliye usne jor se nidhi ko hilaya. Or aise ek dum hilane se vo hosh me aao or jaise hi usne payal ko apne bagal me baithe dekha vo jor se usse lipat gyi or rone lagi. Bahi payal ki aankho me bhi aasu the.



Or nidhi ko is waqt sambhalna mushkil hota ja raha tha uske liye.





Nidhi- payal ye dekhna kya hai. Amar mujhe dhoka de raha hai. Ab me kya karu.






Payal- ha maine abhi dekhi ye photos. Mujhe bilkul bhi yakeen nhi hai ki isme thodi si bhi sachai ho sakti hai. Me bhi usse mili hu. Mujhe vo aisa ladka bilkul bhi nhi laga hai. Or tune hi to kaha tha ki usne aajtak tumhare sath aisi vaisi koi harkat nhi ki hai. Fir vo kaise tumhe dhoka de sakta hai. Jara socho.







Nidhi- to fir in photos ka me kya karu. Inme jo dikh raha hai use bhi to nakara nhi ja sakta hai na.






Payal- dekh aajkal photoshop se aisi nakli tasveere kisi ki bhi banai ja sakti hai. Or mujhe to ye baise bhi nakli hi lag rahi hai. Or iska pata hame amar se hi lag sakta hai. Tu usse baat kar. Me ek sec me pehchan lungi ki vo jhut bol raha hai ya sach.






Ye sunke nidhi ka rona thoda kam hua or use bhi doubt aaya ki kahi na kahi payal ka kehna sahi hai. Isliye usne turant hi amar ko call kiya.



Amar jo ki is waqt baitha hua tha. Jab usne call dekha to turant hi attend kiya or apne kamre me jaake baith gya.




Amar- hii.




Baha se use nidhi ke sisakne ki aawaj aai. Jise sunte hi amar ka mood ek dum sw badal gya.






Amar- kya hua to kyu rahi ho. Kal aaraha hu na milne.





Baha se nidhi bolna bahut kuch chah rahi thi lekin bol nhi pa rahi thi.





Or yaha amar ko samajh me aagya ki mamla kuch or hai.




Amar- kya hua kisi ne kuch kaha kya naam batao uska.





Kaafi der tak sirf amar hi bolta raha or puchhta raha lekin baha se nidhi ka koi jawab nhi aaraha tha. Isliye use or jyada tension ho rahi thi.




Bahi payal bhi ye sab dekh or sun rahi thi or nidhi ko bol rahi thi ki kuch to bol lekin nidhi kuch nhi bol pa rahi thi. Isliye usne usse phone le liya.





Payal- hi amar payal here.





Amar- ohh hii payal. Kya hua nidhi ko vo kuch bol kyu nhi rahi hai.





Payal- actually uske mobile per kisi anjaan no. Se kuch photos or videos aaye hai jisme tum kisi or ke sath ho. Or ye sab dekhke use bahut bada jhatka laga hai isliye vo kuch bol nhi pa rahi hai. Pls tum yaha aajao






Ye sunke amar ke to pairon tale jameen hi khisak gyi. Bhala uski kisi or ke sath kaisi photo ho sakti hai. Or kisne aisa majak kiya hai.






Amar- what kisne or kya bheja hai. Uska no. Or vo photos bhejo mujhe. Me abhi pata lagata hi uska.






Payal- vo tum baad me laga lena. Filhaal nidhi ko sambhalna jyada jaruri hai. Isliye tum abhi ke abhi yaha aajao.





Amar- abhi aaya me usi restaurant me milo nidhi se kehna or tum bhi aajana uske sath.





Payal- ha theek hai. Baise kitna time lagega tumko aane me






Amar- 15-20 min. Me pahuchta hu me.






Ye sunke payal ko jhatka laga.





Payal- tum to gaav me ho na. Fir itni jaldi kaise aaoge.






Amar- vo me aake batata hu ki kaise aaunga. Filhaal tum log pahucho baha.




Ye kehkar amar ne call cut kiya or robo ko ghar ki chhat per bulaya




Or jaldi se chhat per chala gya.thodi hi der me robo baha per tha. Uske baad turant hi amar baha se nikal gya. Or full speed se robo use usi restaurant ke pass le aaya. Jaha land hote hi amar jaldi se restaurant me gya. Jaha abhi tak vo dono nhi aai thi. Isliye usne wait karne ka faisla kiya. Or unhe phone bhi kiya.






Amar- me restaurant me hu kaha hi tum dono.





Payal- bs 5 min me pahuch rahe hai






Uske baad amar unka wait karta raha or thodi hi der me vo dono baha aagye. Payal nidhi ko le aai or amar ke saamne wale table per baitha diya. Or khud bhi baith gyi vo baha per.




Amar- ab batao kya bheja hai or kisne bheja hai.




Ye sunke payal ne nidhi ka mobile amar ko de diya or jab usne vo photos dekhi to amar puri tarah hairan reh gya. Vo puri tarah shocked tha ki ye kaise sambhav hai. Tabhi use kuch dikha or amar ke chehre per ek muskaan aagyi.






Amar- nidhi ye photos puri tarah se fake hai. Inme itni si bhi sachai nhi hai. Or me ye proof kar sakta hu abhi.





Ye sunte hi nidhi ne apna sir uthaya or ummid se amar ki taraf dekha. Jaise keh rahi ho ki aisa hi ho.




Payal- kaise sabit karoge ki ye tum nhi koi or hai.





Amar- ek min.




Uske baad amar ne nidhi ki gallery check ki or use ek photo dikhi jo nidhi or uski sath ki photo thi.




Amar- ye dekho mera chehra is photo se liya gya hai. In photos me edit karne ke liye. Dekho chehre ke expression bilkul ek jaise hai.




Ye sunke nidhi or payal ne hi dono photos ko dhyan se dekha or dono hi ek dum hairan thi ki amar sahi keh raha hai.




Payal- lekin hai to tumhara hi chehra tum aise expression to kabhi bhi de sakte ho. Koi or solid sabut do.





Amar- ok dusra sabut hai ye body. Meri body per ek bada sa birth mark hai. Jo iski body me nhi hai. Dekho dhyan se. Or dusri baat meri body itni fair bhi nhi hai. Balki dark hai. Or sabse imp meri body isse behtar hai. Mere biceps or chest dekho us nakli photo me.




Uske baad amar ne apni shirt ke kuch button khole or apne seene per bana birth mark dikhaya. Jo bakai me kaafi bada tha. Or aasani se chhip bhi nhi sakta hai. Or jab payal or nidhi ne amar ka real chest dekha to dono ek hi jhatke me samajh gyi ki ye photo amar ki nhi haj. Kyuki ek to amar ke chest ka size bhi bada tha or dusra kaafi dark tha. Ek dum ajay devgan jaise. Jabki us photo me vo banda kaafi fair tha. Or uske seene per birth mark bhi nhi tha.






Amar- or sabse bada sabut me apni maa or bahen dono ko kasam khake kehta hu ki meri zindagi me aane wali tum pehli or aakhiri ladki ho. Na tumse pehle koi tha na hi tumhare aane ke baad koi hai. Or agar ab bhi yakeen nhi hai to chalo aaj hi tumse me shadi karne ko ready hu.






Itna sunna tha ki nidhi jhat se apni jagah se uthi or amar ke gale lag gyi jor se. Vo ab bhi ro rahi thi. Lekin is baar ye aasu me thoda paschataap or kushi thi. Paschataap is baat ka ki usne amar per shak kiya bahi kushi is baat ki amar ne use dhoka nhi diya hai.





Nidhi- i m sorry amar maine tumper shak kiya. maine jab ye dekha to meri haalat ek dum se badal gyi mujhe samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki kya karu kaise karu.






Amar- koi baat nhi nidhi tumhara haq banta haj or tumhari jagah agar me bhi hota to me bhi sayad aise hi tut jata. Khair chhodo ab jo hua so hua.





Ye sunke nidhi ek dum se alag hui.




Nidhi- nhi use nhi chhodna hai mujhe jannat hai ki akhir aisi harkat ki kisne hai. Or kyu. Uska pata lagao abhi.





Payal- ha uski to band bajani hai achhe se.






Amar- baise ye baat to hai. Usko agar sahi salamat chhod diya to fir se vo aisi hi koi harkat karega. Isliye use saza to deni hi hogi.




Ye kehkar amar ne Harry se contact kiya.





Harry- hello sir boliye kya seva karun aapki.






Amar- ye no. Ka pata lagao ki kiska hai or ise kon chala raha tha or kaha se or kis mobile se saari detail batao mujhe.





Amar ne Harry ko no. Diya.




Payal- lekin no. To band aaraha hai fir kaise pata chalega.





Amar- jadu se. Bas dekhti jaao.







Baaki dekhiye ab kya hota hai kaise hota hai. Or kya uska raaj khulega jisne ye kiya hai. Kya hota hai aage janne ke liye sath bane rahe.

















To be continue………………………..
Kuch ek log hote hai aise... jo dusro ki khushiya nahi dekh sakte, aise logo ki soch aisi hai ki agar unhe na mila to baakiyo ko nahi milna chahiye... ye nidhi ke ghar rehne wala tharki insaan bhi ushi prajati se belong karta hai... amar aur nidhi ke bich pyar dekh iske sine mein jaise saap hi lotne lage... yahan tak ki aisi gandi planning ke tahat ke aisa ghatiya harqat karne ki koshish ki jisse nidhi aur amar alag ho jaaye.... lekin wo bhool gaya ki un dono ka pyar sach aur viswash se paripurn hai jaha shaq ki koi gunjaiyash hi nahi......
Waise is update mein ek dilchasp, mahattvapoorn aur arthpurn topic ko darshane ki koshish ki gayi hai ki agar payal jaisi dost ho to jivan safal hai, khub kam aise dost hote hai jo niswarth roop se aapki dosti nibhaye, fikar jataye aur jindagi ke har ek mod pe sath de...
Btw lagta hai wo nidhi ke ghar pe rehne wala us tharki aisi ki taisi hone wali hai...
Kahani ka naam aur kahani dono mein shatik taal mel hai... Well.. waise aapki yahin toh khoobi hain ki har ek mudde ko darshate hai aap.. I mean to say.. sirf romance, fantasy ya drama tak hi lake update ko pesh nahi karte balki Har us thrill aur suspense aur family related baaton ko bhi include karte hain jisse kahani flow lajawab bani rahti hai .. aur update ke ant mein jis tarah se kabhi thodi suspense ko, to kabhi kuch emotions ko , to kabhi khushnuma ehsaas ko, to kabhi family values ko leke ko final touch dete hai woh sach bemisaal hai...
Update sach mein bahot hi dilchasp aur dilkash tha..
aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apne manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye..

Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill writer sahab :applause: :applause:
 

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Kuch ek log hote hai aise... jo dusro ki khushiya nahi dekh sakte, aise logo ki soch aisi hai ki agar unhe na mila to baakiyo ko nahi milna chahiye... ye nidhi ke ghar rehne wala tharki insaan bhi ushi prajati se belong karta hai... amar aur nidhi ke bich pyar dekh iske sine mein jaise saap hi lotne lage... yahan tak ki aisi gandi planning ke tahat ke aisa ghatiya harqat karne ki koshish ki jisse nidhi aur amar alag ho jaaye.... lekin wo bhool gaya ki un dono ka pyar sach aur viswash se paripurn hai jaha shaq ki koi gunjaiyash hi nahi......
Waise is update mein ek dilchasp, mahattvapoorn aur arthpurn topic ko darshane ki koshish ki gayi hai ki agar payal jaisi dost ho to jivan safal hai, khub kam aise dost hote hai jo niswarth roop se aapki dosti nibhaye, fikar jataye aur jindagi ke har ek mod pe sath de...
Btw lagta hai wo nidhi ke ghar pe rehne wala us tharki aisi ki taisi hone wali hai...
Kahani ka naam aur kahani dono mein shatik taal mel hai... Well.. waise aapki yahin toh khoobi hain ki har ek mudde ko darshate hai aap.. I mean to say.. sirf romance, fantasy ya drama tak hi lake update ko pesh nahi karte balki Har us thrill aur suspense aur family related baaton ko bhi include karte hain jisse kahani flow lajawab bani rahti hai .. aur update ke ant mein jis tarah se kabhi thodi suspense ko, to kabhi kuch emotions ko , to kabhi khushnuma ehsaas ko, to kabhi family values ko leke ko final touch dete hai woh sach bemisaal hai...
Update sach mein bahot hi dilchasp aur dilkash tha..
aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apne manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye..

Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill writer sahab :applause: :applause:
Review abhi tak nahi Aya
 

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Jaisa ki naam se hi pta chl rha tha kuchh kuchh ki takshak koi naag hi hoga aur asal me wo nikla bhi naag hi aur naago ke paas rakshaso aur bhut preto se alg hi shaktiyaan hoti h to isi karan takshak jail me kaid hone ke karan bahar sampark bna pa rha tha agr wo aisa nhi kr pata to kbhi bhi black heart jinda hi na ho pata...wahi agr takshak raajgaddi ka bafadar h to agr black heart ko takshak ke planet ki rajgaddi se hta diya jaye to takshak bhi uska sath chhod dega ya ab tk wo corrupt ho chuka hoga..agr aisa h to uska marna bhi nischit hi h waise baccho pr attack krne ke baad to surya waise bhi nhi chhodne wala usko...ab dekhna ye h ki wo kya krta h aakhir jheel tk to pahuch hi gya h wo...👏👏👏🗡

Wahi us hawasi bnde ne apni ghinoni chal chl kr nidhi aur amar ke beech galatfahmi ki koshish to ki pr payal ke karan wo safal nhi ho paya agr payal us waqt nidhi ke paas nhi hoti to pkka ye galatfehmi bahut badhne wali thi...khair amar ne aakar wo galatfehmi dur bhi kr di aur harry ko uska pta lgane ke kaam pr lga bhi diya ab wo bnda jyada waqt tk chhip nhi paayega aur jb samne aayega to nidhi to shock se hi gir jayegi...chliye dekhte h kya hota h aage...so waiting brother for ur next update...aur haan support ki chinta mat kijiye hm jitne bhi log h wo sab aapke support me last tk aur aane wale jitne bhi projects honge sbme rhenge bss aap beech me haar maan kr sath mt chhodiyega..thank u ki itne kam support ke baad bhi aap tike hue ho wrna bahut se log to support milne ke baad bhi aadhi story ya kuchh updates ke baad hi rafu chakkar ho jaate h..so be along hm sab tumhare sath h...aur main to definitely hu hi😁😁💪👍🗡🗡
 

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Fantastic update bhai
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Thanks bhai log apna sath aise hi banaye rakhne ke liye. Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Aaj dekhiye amar or nidhi kaise us insaan tak pahuchte hai jisne unki zindagi lagbhag ujaad hi di thi. Kya hota hai aage janne ke liye sath bane rahe.




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Jaisa ki naam se hi pta chl rha tha kuchh kuchh ki takshak koi naag hi hoga aur asal me wo nikla bhi naag hi aur naago ke paas rakshaso aur bhut preto se alg hi shaktiyaan hoti h to isi karan takshak jail me kaid hone ke karan bahar sampark bna pa rha tha agr wo aisa nhi kr pata to kbhi bhi black heart jinda hi na ho pata...wahi agr takshak raajgaddi ka bafadar h to agr black heart ko takshak ke planet ki rajgaddi se hta diya jaye to takshak bhi uska sath chhod dega ya ab tk wo corrupt ho chuka hoga..agr aisa h to uska marna bhi nischit hi h waise baccho pr attack krne ke baad to surya waise bhi nhi chhodne wala usko...ab dekhna ye h ki wo kya krta h aakhir jheel tk to pahuch hi gya h wo...👏👏👏🗡

Wahi us hawasi bnde ne apni ghinoni chal chl kr nidhi aur amar ke beech galatfahmi ki koshish to ki pr payal ke karan wo safal nhi ho paya agr payal us waqt nidhi ke paas nhi hoti to pkka ye galatfehmi bahut badhne wali thi...khair amar ne aakar wo galatfehmi dur bhi kr di aur harry ko uska pta lgane ke kaam pr lga bhi diya ab wo bnda jyada waqt tk chhip nhi paayega aur jb samne aayega to nidhi to shock se hi gir jayegi...chliye dekhte h kya hota h aage...so waiting brother for ur next update...aur haan support ki chinta mat kijiye hm jitne bhi log h wo sab aapke support me last tk aur aane wale jitne bhi projects honge sbme rhenge bss aap beech me haar maan kr sath mt chhodiyega..thank u ki itne kam support ke baad bhi aap tike hue ho wrna bahut se log to support milne ke baad bhi aadhi story ya kuchh updates ke baad hi rafu chakkar ho jaate h..so be along hm sab tumhare sath h...aur main to definitely hu hi😁😁💪👍🗡🗡


Ha bhai dushman filhaal apne aap ko thoda hoshiyar samajh raha hai fir chahe vo takshak ho ya fir vo unknown insan dono hi dushman alag alag paristhitiyon me apne hero or uski family ke aade aarahe. Hai. Lekin vo sayad jaante nhi hai ki vo dheere dheere apni mout ki taraf hi bad rahe hai.baaki dekhte hai ab kya hota hai. Kaise apne hero log inse deal karte hai or kaise inhe sabak sikhate hai. And aapne sath dene ki baat kahi bas yahi kaafi hai.





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Kuch ek log hote hai aise... jo dusro ki khushiya nahi dekh sakte, aise logo ki soch aisi hai ki agar unhe na mila to baakiyo ko nahi milna chahiye... ye nidhi ke ghar rehne wala tharki insaan bhi ushi prajati se belong karta hai... amar aur nidhi ke bich pyar dekh iske sine mein jaise saap hi lotne lage... yahan tak ki aisi gandi planning ke tahat ke aisa ghatiya harqat karne ki koshish ki jisse nidhi aur amar alag ho jaaye.... lekin wo bhool gaya ki un dono ka pyar sach aur viswash se paripurn hai jaha shaq ki koi gunjaiyash hi nahi......
Waise is update mein ek dilchasp, mahattvapoorn aur arthpurn topic ko darshane ki koshish ki gayi hai ki agar payal jaisi dost ho to jivan safal hai, khub kam aise dost hote hai jo niswarth roop se aapki dosti nibhaye, fikar jataye aur jindagi ke har ek mod pe sath de...
Btw lagta hai wo nidhi ke ghar pe rehne wala us tharki aisi ki taisi hone wali hai...
Kahani ka naam aur kahani dono mein shatik taal mel hai... Well.. waise aapki yahin toh khoobi hain ki har ek mudde ko darshate hai aap.. I mean to say.. sirf romance, fantasy ya drama tak hi lake update ko pesh nahi karte balki Har us thrill aur suspense aur family related baaton ko bhi include karte hain jisse kahani flow lajawab bani rahti hai .. aur update ke ant mein jis tarah se kabhi thodi suspense ko, to kabhi kuch emotions ko , to kabhi khushnuma ehsaas ko, to kabhi family values ko leke ko final touch dete hai woh sach bemisaal hai...
Update sach mein bahot hi dilchasp aur dilkash tha..
aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apne manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye..

Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill writer sahab :applause: :applause:


Aapka kehna sahi hai is unknown jaise log har jagah mil hi jaate hai. Lekin ek baad hai jo aise kaam karte hai unka anjaam bhi bhayanak hi hota hai. Ab inka anjaam kaisa hota hai ye janne ke liye sath bane rahe. Or dekhte rahiye kya hota hai aage.

And black heart and takshak ko surya kaise deal karta hai ye bhi janne layak hoga. Bas sath bane rahe.








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Kaatil rahul bhai yaar apka har update he lajawab hota h aur next ab toh surya ko new power bi mil gayi h awesome bro fight solid hone wali h
Bole to jhakaas update padhne ko milenge

Ha bhai fight seen bhi jald hi aayenge or jaandar hi karne ki kosis karunga me. Baaki dekhte hai kya hota hai aage.



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wo kehte hai na.... maarne walo ko har baar mauka milta hai lekin bachane walo har baar nasib ki jarurat hoti hai... lijiye... is black heart ko bhi wo mauka, wo raah bhi mil gaya... ye bure logo ko hi har ek cheej itni jaldi kyun mil jaati hai, wohi jaaha achhe logo ko apni mehnat se kamani padti hai... well ye BH to saadhna karne lag gaya jiske chalte ushe wo powers mil jaaye, jiske jariye rider ko haani pahuncha sakta hai..... are rider ko koi bata do yaar ki ye black heart ushe maarne ki planning ke tahat saadhna mein leen hai.... Phir rider aake saadhna ka to pata nahi lekin haan is black heart ka jivan Leela jarur samapt kar dega..... takshak bahot dara hua hai rider ka wo khatarnak aur khaufnaak karname aur roop dekh..... waise kuch gyani log hote hai jo dekh aur sun ke samajh jaate hai ki aage se aisa nahi karna chahiye, warna khud ki sehat ke liye hanikarak hai, wohi dusri taraf kuch aise bhi murkh hote hai jo apne murkhta ke chalte musibat khud gale bandh lete hai, musibat aise murkh logo ke paas nahi balki khud aise log apne bewakufi ke chalte musibat ke paas jaate hai.... Saurya ke bachho ko haani pahunch ne ke baare mein soch raha hai...... lagta hai iske din bhar gaye hai aur shayad paap ka ghada bhi... .
Waise gaur talab baat ye hai ki takshak ne agar bura karne koshish kare to Saurya uska kya haal karega....

Update sach mein dilchasp aur dilkash tha
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:

Ha takshak jo bhi karega apne karmo ke hisaab se hi karega or use apne anjaam tak pahuchane ka kaam surya kar hi dega. Baaki dekhte hai kya hota hai aage.




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Nice update
Awesome update
Zabardast update
Nicely going bro
Very nice bhai...egar to know who is that pic guy...pls update ASAP .
superbb update bro
lazwab update bro


Thanks bhai log apna sath aise hi banaye rakhe. Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko
Aaj dekhiye ki akhir kon hai vo insan jo nidhi ko tease karta hai. Or akhir uska haal kya hota hai janne ke liye sath bane rahe.




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Ek tarfa update tha bhai ...
Aur mera sabhi silent readers se request hai ki agar update accha laga to uski tarif kerne me koi harz nahi hai aur kuch kami lage to wo bhi bata hi do .isey writer ko bhi accha lagta hai aur wo pure dil se likhta hai , Agar kisi ne Rahul ki baki stories na padi ho to jarur pad ke dekho. He is amezing writer... And so regular


Thanks bhai aapne itna socha mere liye. Bahut bahut dhanyavad. And ummid hai ki mere or aapke is msg se sabhi silent reader comments karna shuru kar de. Baaki dkehiye aaj ke update me ki kya hota hai aage.




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Aisa kuch nahi chahiye jisse story line bigad jaaye. Aapne jo aur jaisa socha hai wahi likhe.
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Toh Black Heart ko Rider ko harane ka ek raasta mil gaya hai jiske liye usse kuch shaktiyan chahiye aur uske liye woh Saadhna mein baith gaya. Dekhte hai kab tak ke liye yeh saadnaleen rehta hai.


Aur idher Takshak ne bhi rider ka aatank dekhliya jisse uski buri tarah fatt gayi hai. Aur uss bewakoof ne Surya pe humla karna chaha hai aur uske liye usne Surya ke bachho pe attack karne ka socha hai.

Dekhte hai Takshak kya karta hai. Aur phir Surya Takshak ka kya karta hai.
Jabardast Update

Toh ab saala woh unknown insaan ka band bajegaa. Usne socha computer se edit karke Amar aur Nidhi ko alag kardega. Par woh bhul gaya jaha sachha pyaar aur vishwaas hota waha yeh saare jhoot aur fareb kaam nhi aate.

Aur iss harqat se Amar aur Nidhi ka pyaar aur majboot hogyaa. Aur isme Payal jaisi sachhi aur achhi dost ka mahatva bhi pata chala. Ke agar jeevan mein koi sachha aur achha dost ho toh tum kisi bhi musibat se ladh sakte ho aur usse jeet sakte ho.

Dekhte hai ab uss Unknown bande ka Amar kya karta hai. Kyoki usne Nidhi ko rulaya hai toh Amar usko khoon ke aansu rulayega.


Sahi kaha bhai aapne jaha sachha pyar hota hai baha ye fareb kaam nhi karta hai. Or yahi Sacha prem hai jisne nidhi or amar ke beech galatfehmi ko badne nahi diya. Baaki dekhiye aaj ke update me ki kya hota hai us bande ka akhir hai kon vo insan or amar kya karta hai uska haal janne ke liye sath bane rahe.







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Thanks bhai log aapka support badne laga hai or mujhe ummid hai ki ye aise hi or badta jayega. Aise hi apna sath banaye rakhe.




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