Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

[Rahul0087@]

Superb Updatee


Toh jeetu toh bahot bada harami nikla. Amar ne isko zinda chorke bahot galat kiyaa isko zindaa gaar dena chahiye thaa. Kitna gira hua insaan hai. Aur iss giree hue insaan ko takshak jaise MC ka saath milaa. Jisse jeetu jaisa jaanwar bhi power wala bann gaya.

Aur iss power ka istemaal karke kitni ladkiyon ki zindagi tabah kardi. Isko toh jaan se maar dena chahiye. Aur jisne isko power di uss takshak ko toh aisi maut dena ki uski rooh kaanp jaaye.

Dekhte hai ab yeh Jeetu iss power se aur kya kya karta hai. Par iss power se Nidhi ke upar khatra aagaya. Ab woh hypnotise hoke uske saath hosakti hai.

Amar ko jeetu pe nazar rakhne ke liye harry ko bolna chahiye thaa. Aur nidhi ki safety ke liye bhi.

Dekhte hai ab Surya aur Amar isse kaise deal karte hai.

Superb Updatee

Toh kamina jeetu apne dost ke paas chala gaya jarur woh kamina waha rehke hi kuch na kuch kaand karega. Kyoki dost ki sangati se hi insaan ki pehchan hoti hai. Agar dost achhe ho insaan ke karm bhi achhe hote hai aur agar bure ho karm bhi bure hote hai. ( Har case mein aisa ho jaruri nhi. )


Toh Amar ne Nidhi ke parents ko impress kardiyaa. Aur nidhi ke papa ne rishte ke liye manjoori bhi de di. Yeh achha hua. Isse inke beech aur koi naa aapayega.

Aur Payal ne Jeetu ki sachai bata ke aur achha kiya. Jisse ab woh uss kamina se saavdhaan rahenge. Aur uski kisi bhi baato pe vishwaas karne se pehel 10 baar sochenge.

Ha bhai kameenapan kuch jyada hi dikha diya hai jeetu ne or ab usko saza milna jaruri bhi ho gya hai. Lekin kya aisa ho payega. Kya amar and party jeetu ko hara payegi ya khud haar jayegi kya hoga janne ke liye sath bane rahe.






Keep supporting..............

Zabardast update

Fantastic update

Thanks bhai aona sath u hi banaye rakhe. Or updates padte rahe. Aaj ke update me dekhiye kya hoga jab jeetu or amar ka aaman saamna hoga kon kisper bhari padega janne ke liye sath bane rahe.






Keep supporting.........

 

[Rahul0087@]

UPDATE - 93













Jaise taise subah hui is waqt jeetu so raha tha or lagta nhi tha ki uski neend aaj jaldi khulne wali thi. Uske chehre per ek kushi chhai hui thi kyuki kal raat use vo mila jiski kalpana bhi usne nhi ki thi kabhi.




Bahi amar bhi gaav me tha or nidhi apne ghar per. Sab sahi se chal raha tha or aage bad raha tha.





Bahi black heart bhi apni sadhna me leen tha or surya ke aaram ke din chal rahe the. Halaki use sab khabar thi ki amar ki life me kya chal raha hai or kal yaha mumbai me kya hua hai. Kyuki Harry surya ke bina permission ke kuch bhi nhi karta hai. Surya ko puri jaankari hoti hai hai ki uske bache kab kya kar rahe hai or harry se kis prakaar ki madad lete hai.



Khair amar to bhul gya tha lekin surya ne Harry subah uthate hi Harry ko jeetu per najar rakhne ko bol diya tha kyuki surya jaanta tha ki jeetu itni aasani se sudharne walo mese nhi hai. Lekin kash surya ne raat me hi usper najar rakhne ko bol diya hota Harry ko. To kamse kam raat me hi uska kaam tamam ho jata. Lekin der aaye saber aaye. Abhi bhi jyada der nhi hui hai. Or abhi bhi mouka hai. Jeetu jaisa ladka power ke nashe me kuch na kuch galti to karega hi or jaise hi kuch galat karega Harry ko pata chal jayega or harry ko pata chala matlab surya ko pata chala. Or fir jeetu ko khair nhi.







Khair amar ne ashk avi or Samar ko bhi bataya ki kal kya hua tha or kisne kiya tha. Jise sunke sabhi ka para ek dum high ho gya tha. Lekin amar ke samjhane per vo log shant ho gye. Or mamle ko samajh bhi gye ki kyu amar ne usko kuch nhi kiya. Verna uske liye to amar akela hi kaafi tha.




Khair jaise taise sham hui or jeetu is waqt udaypur me tha jaisa usse takshak ne kaha tha. Vo apne samay per baha pahuch gya tha. Or takshak ka hi intjar kar raha tha. Or uska intjar bhi jaldi hi khatam ho gya. Kyuki takshak uske pass aagya tha.






Jeetu- ab batao kya karna hai mujhe.






Takshak- bataunga lekin pehle mujhe ye batao ki kisse puchh ke kal raat tumne vo sab kiya.







Jeetu- maine kya kiya.






Takshak- mujhse hoshiyari karne ki kosis bhi mat karna. Kyuki meri najar sab jagah hoti hai or mujhe achhe se pata hai kal raat tumne kya kiya hai.







Jeetu- ohh un ladkiyo ki baat kar rahe ho. Vo to bas apni powers ki testing kar raha tha me or kuch nhi.








Takshak- ha pata hai mujhe power ki testing kar rahe the ki apni hawas mita rahe the.







Jeetu- to usme aap itna hyper kyu ho rahe hai.








Takshak- tujhe abhi kuch nhi pata hai. Sehar me ek khukhar darinda ghum raha hai jo ham jaisi buri shaktiyon ko sungh kar unka khatma kar deta hai. Or agar use teri gandh aajati to kal raat hi tera kaam tamam ho jata fir ho jata tera badla pura.








Ye sunke jeetu thoda hairan hua.






Jeetu- aisa konsa darinda hai jisse aapki bhi fati padi hai.







Takshak- chinta mat kar tera saamna bhi usse jald hi ho jayega.
Fir tumhe bhi pata chal hi jayega ki vo kon hai or kya hai. Or kyu meri usse itni fat rahi hai.







Jeetu- theek hai abse nhi karunga aisa kuch bhi






Takshak- badiya hai. Yahi behtar hai tumhare liye. Ab chalo mere sath tumhare sikaar ke pass.






Jeetu- chalo me bahut exited hu.





Ye kehkar takshak ne jeetu ka hath pakada or agle hi sec vo log usi jheel ke pass jhadiye me pahuch gye.





Jeetu- ye kaha le aaye mujhe.






Takshak- ahhh ye dekho tumhara sikar tumhare saamne hai. Vo raha amar or uske bhai bahen. Tu agar chahe to uski bahen ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta hai meri taraf se chhut hai. Mujhe bas mera badla chahiye or isse tera badla bhi pura hoga.





Ye sunke jeetu ne Gour se ashk ko dekha or vo usi pal nidhi ko bhul gya. Uske muh se maar tapakne lagi.








Jeetu- ma kasam kya kadak maal hai. Isper to hajar nidhi kurban hai.







Ye sunke takshak hasne laga.




Takshak- tera kuch nahi ho sakta.
Chal shuru ho ja. Maar daal sabko. Baaki me yahi rahunga. Taaki agar tujhe madad ki jarurat pade to me kar saku.






Jeetu- theek hai.







Bahi Harry ye sab dekh raha tha. Or vo samajh gya tha ki kuch na kuch gadbad to jarur hai. Kyuki usne jeetu ke sath wale ki powers ko dekha isliye usne turant hi mujhe vo saari info di. Or me sunte hi bhaga gaav ke liye.







Bahi jeetu ek dum se amar ke saamne aagya.





Jeetu- kyu re bahut hoshiyar samajhta hai khud ko. Tujhe me nhi chhodne wala saale tune mere or nidhi ke beech duriya bana di.






Ye sunke amar or baaki sab ne peeche mud ke dekha.



Or jaise hi amar ne jeetu ko dekha uske hosh udd gye. Kyuki usne expect nhi kiya tha ki jeetu yaha tak pahuch jayega.





Amar- tu yaha kaise.







Jeetu- aagya me tujhe dhundte dhundte. Aaj tu nhi bachega.







Amar- marna hai kya. Bhag ja yahan se. Vo nidhi ka bhai hai tu isliye abhi tak apne pairo per khada hai verna vo haalat karta teri ki agle 7 janam tak langda paida hota tu. Or itna sab hone ke baad bhi teri akal thikane per nhi aai jo yaha tak chala aaya.








Jeetu- meri akal thikane per hi hai. Or achha hua jo me yaha aagya ab nidhi ke sath teri bahen ko bhi me apna banaunga. Vakai me kya kamal ki cheez hai.






Itna bolna tha ki use ek jordaar kick lagi jisse uska thoda santulan bigad gya lekin vo gira nhi. Ye kick thi amar ki.






Jeetu- dum nhi laga rahe ho tum. Thoda or jor lagao.





Ye kehkar jeetu ek dum adig amar ke saamne khada ho gya.




Bahi amar ne ek jordaar punch mara unke seene me dil ke just uper.




Or is punch ko jeetu sayad hi kabhi bhul paaye. Kyuki agar usne powers nhi hoti to is punch se uska raam naam satya ho hi jata. Lekin uski powers ne uski jaan bacha ki lekin use girne se nhi bacha paya. Bahi jeetu ko bahut jor se laga ye punch. Jisse vo ek dum se bokhla sa gya. Use yakeen nhi hua ki amar me itni takat hai. Or use is baat per yakeen ho gya ki ye koi aam insan to nhi hai matlab takshak sahi keh raha tha.




Bahi use kya pata ki amar to normal hi hai. Ye jo power uske hatho me hai ye use virasat me mili hai apne purkho se.







Amar- ab aaya maja. Beta bhale hi tu strong ho bahut lekin ek baat yaad rakhna ki ye hath bhi kam nhi hai.






Jeetu- bakai me bahut dum hai I'm hatho me.





Ye kehkar jeetu khada hua.



Or usne achanak se apni aankho se lazor nikalna shuru kar diya. Bahi amar ne furti dikhate hue apni position badli or uski lazor se bach gya. Bahi avi Samar ashk or varsha bhi yaha baha ho gye kyuki lazor un per bhi nishana laga rahi thi.





Bahi lazor ke jameen se takrane se neeche ki ghaas or ped vagera jal gye the.





Bahi is waqt jeetu ki najar dusro per thi isliye usne jeetu ke peeche jaake jump maarke apne ghutne ki maar uski peeth per maari jisse vo jhuk gya.





Bahi uski anakho se lazor nikalna band ho gya. Isi mouke ka fayeda utha kar Samar ne ek jordaar kick uski naak per maari jisse vo ulti gulati khate hue jameen per pasar gya.




Ye mouka dekhke amar me uski garden ko daboch liya apne hatho me. Or jor se daba diya. Amar ne apna pura dabav uski peeth per banaya hua tha jisse vo uth nhi pa raha tha. Uske keval hath hi khule hue the. Jinka vo pura jor laga raha tha. Uthne ke liye. To Samar ne uske hatho ko pakad kar daba liya. Ab vo keval tadap hi raha tha. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki vo kya kare kaise is qaid se aazad ho.






Yaha jeetu me saaf kami dikh rahi thi technique ki. Bhale hi insan ke pass power ho. Lekin agar uske pass un power ko istemaal karne ki technique nhi hai to vo koi jung nhi jeet sakta. Bahi amar or Samar bachpan se hi self defence ki training lete aarahe hai. Unhe pata hai ki kisko kaise kabu karna hai.







Bahi dur se me bhi ye najara dekh raha tha or kush ho raha tha ki kaise bacho ne usko kabu kar liya.







Amar- bol haramjade. Maja aaya.






Jeetu- maja to aaya lekin jyada nhi.




Ye kehkar jeetu ne apna pura jor laga diya or ek dum se khada ho gya. Bahi is jor se amar or Samar dono hi alag alag disha me udte hue dur ja gire.





Jeetu- ab maja aaya kamino.






Ye kehkar vo sabse pehle amar ke pass gya speed se. Or usne amar ko utha liya or jor se jameen per patak diya. Bahi tab tak Samar or avi dono hi jeetu ke pass aaye or usper hamla karne lage lekin abki baar vo apni speed ka pura istemaal kar raha tha. Jis bajah se avi or Samar ke har baar khali ja rahe the.





Bahi takshak ye sab dekhke bahut kush ho raha tha. Use apna plan anjaam tak pahuchta hua najar aaraha tha. Lekin use ye nhi pata tha ki uska baap uske aas pass hi moujud hai.








Abki baar bazi puri tarah se palat gyi thi. Kyuki jeetu akela hi teeno per bhari pad raha tha. Or iska kaaran keval itna tha ki jeetu apni super power ka istemaal kar raha tha. Bahi ye teeno apni normal power ka istemaal kar rahe the.






Jeetu ne teeno ki hi haalat tight kar rakhi thi. Lekin the to sabhi surya ke hi bache. Or is bajah se jeetu unhe jeet nhi pa raha tha. Kyuki girte hi vo fir se khade ho rahe the. Or is bajah se jeetu kaafi frustrate ho raha tha.




Bahi avi samajh gya tha ki ye aise control me nhi aayega isliye usne apne mobile me kuch kiya or lete lete hi wait karne laga.





Tabhi sabhi ko najar aasmaan me gyi jaha se kuch udta hua jameen per aa raha tha. Use dekhke aisa lag raha tha jaise vo koi ulka pind ho. Kyuki uski speed bahut tez thi.





Bahi avi ke chehre per smile aai or vo jaldi se khada hua. Or jeetu ki taraf bhaga apni speed se




Bahi vo udti hui cheez avi se takarai lekin isse avi ko kuch fark nhi pada. Balki avi ke charo taraf usne ek kavach ka aakar le liya. Like iron man. Avi abhi bhi douda hua hi ja raha tha.or isi beech avi puri tarah se iron man ban gya tha.




Bahi ye najar baha moujud sabhi ne dekha or dekhte hi jeetu ko chhodke sabhi ke chehre per hasi aagyi. Or sabne apna matha peet liya. Kyuki vo aaj real me iron man dekh rahe the. Or avi ke dimaag ki daad de rahe the. Ashk ne jordaar seeti bajai avi ke liye.



Bahi jeetu ek dum se hairan tha. Use laga kahi Tony stark sach me to yaha nhi aagya. Vo thoda hairan pareshan sa bahi per khada raha. Or isi beeche use ek jabardast punch laga jiski bajah se vo udta hua dur ja girne laga. Tabhi avi ne apne hatho se power generate ki or jeetu ke uper use chhodna start kar diya.





Bhale hi jeetu ka sarir bajr jaisa kathor ho lekin arc reactor ki power ka jabardast prahar laga use. Jisse uske sarir per kai jagah jalne ke nishan aagye.





Bahi dur se jab maine ye seen dekha to mere bhi hosh udd gye or mere chehre per bhi hasi aagyi.



Or takshak ne jab ye dekha to uska haal bhi jeetu jaisa hi tha. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye aakhir hai kya. Ye kis tarah ki power hai.







Khair aage dekhte hai avi or kya kya kaarname karta hai.

















To be continue………………………..

 

[Rahul0087@]

UPDATE - 94













avi- khada ho kameene. Tujhe batata hu aaj ki ham akhir me cheez kya hai.







Ye sunke jeetu jo thoda jhakmi hua tha dheere dheere khada hua. Uske ghaav nhi bhare the. Na hi bharne wale the. Kyuki uske pass ye power thi hi nhi.







Jeetu khada hua or apne aap dekha. Use khud ke ghav dikhe jisse usko gussa aane lagi.


Or usne jordaar lazor avi per chhodi.



Bahi avi ready tha iske liye. Vo hawa me udd gya or jor se uske muh per punch mara or vo sambhalta usse pehle hi usne uske thobde per kai baar kiye. Or apna panja pura jhalke uske thobde per rakh diya or jor se apni power ka jhatka uske thobde per diya. Ye jhatka use bahut jor se laga uska pura thobda isme sulag gya. Or vo dard me tadapane laga. Or jameen per apna chehra pakad kar let gya. Bahi avi ne agla baar kiya uske main part per. Jaha bhi use tagda jhatka laga.




Aisa lag raha tha jaise jeetu ki powers uska sath chhodne lagi hai. Kyuki use ab bahut dard ho raha tha. Uska sarir kamjor sa padta ja raha tha.







Takshak bhi ye sab dekh raha tha or vo samajh gya tha ki ye jyada der tak nhi tikega isliye ab usne saamne jaane ka Faisla kiya. Bahar jaane se pehle use sabhi jagah dekha jab use dur dur tak koi dikhai nhi diya to vo bahar aaya.





Or vo chupke se ashk ke peechhe gya or use daboch liya




Takshak- ruk jaao chhod do use. Verna iska kaam tamam karne me mujhe jara bhi der nhi lagegi.





Ye aawaj sunte hi sabhi ne oechhe mud ke dekha or sabhi ki aankhe fati ki fati reh gyi. Kyuki takshak is waqt aadhe insan or aadhe naag ke rup me tha. Usne ashk ko garden se pakad rakha tha.or uska rup bakai me bahut bada or vishal tha.






amar- ab ye kya nai musibat hai. Sala ye ho kya raha hai. Ye lounda apni aankho se lazor nikaal raha hai. Or ye tuchhadhari naag








Samar- dekh ashk se dur hatja. Verna itne tukde karunga ki agle are janam tere unko batorne me hi nikal jayenge. Dur hat.






Ye Lalkaar aisi thi ki koi kamjor hota to mut deta. Kuch had tak to takshak bhi hill gya lekin usne jaldi hi khud ko sambhala








Takshak- bache ye ruabb idhar nahi kaam aayega. Mere aadmi ko chhod do me isko chhod dunga.






Samar- hamne use pakada hi nhi to chhodenge kya. Vo dala hai neeche ise utha or nikal le yaha se. Verna sach me aaj tera aakhiri din hoga. Tu janta nhi tune kitni badi galti ki hai ashk per hath dalke. Uske papa ko jaanta hai na.







Takshak- ha janta hu surya ko. Or usne jitna hamara nuksan kiya hai uske badle ye chhota sa tohfa kaafi hoga uski bharpai ke liye.







Itni der me jeetu thoda normal ho gya tha.



Or is mouke ka fayeda usne uthaya or pechhe se avi per lazor chhod di. Lazor ka asar avi ke suit per bahut hi kam ho raha tha. Vibranium se jo bana tha uska suit. Lekin iska impact ise jarur mehsus hua kyuki vo aage ko thoda pressure se chala gya or jameen per let gya. Bahi jeetu ne lazor ko band nhi kiya or chhodta hi raha avi per.





Bahi ye sab dekh ke ashk ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha. Uski anakho ke saamne uske bhaiyo ki halat patli ho rahi ho vo kaise dekh sakti hai ye sab.




In sab me varsha per kisi ka dhyan hi nhi gya. Kyuki vo pehle hi ghar chali gyi thi amar ke papa ko bulane ke liye. Kyuki vo samajh gyi thi ki yaha mamla bigadne wala hai. Kyuki jeetu lazor chhod raha tha aankho se.



Or vo is waqt ghar pahuch hi gyi thi. Or use bahar hi veer ki car dikh gyi jisme baithke vo office se ghar aaya tha or car se nikal hi raha tha.







Varsha- uncle pls jaldi chaliye mere. Sath.





Bahi veer ne jab varsha ki aisi haalat dekhi to vo hairan ho gya.




Veer- shant ho jaao or batao kya hua tum itna haff kyu rahi ho. Baaki sab kaha hai.






Varsha- uncle jheel ke kinare kisi anjaan shakti ne hamla kiya hai. Ek ladka aaya hai amar se ladne jo apni aankho se lazor chhod raha hai. Vo normal nhi hai. Isse pehle kuch galat ho jaaye pls chaliye.





Ye sunke veer ka matha ghum gya. Usne varsha ko bahi rukne ko kaha or use andar bhej diya. Bahi amar tez raftar se doudta hua jheel ke pass jaane laga.




Abhi jheel ke pass pahuchne hi wala tha ki maine veer ko raste me hi rok liya




Or mujhe dekhke veer ki jaan me jaan aai.





Veer- hai vo jheel kinare kya ho raha hai.






Main- aao dikhata hu.




Main bhai ko leke usi jagah aaya jaha se me ab tak sab dekh raha tha.




Main- vo dekhiye bache kaise baha duri se unka mukabla kar rahe hai.






Bhai- tu pagal hai kya unki madad karne kyu nhi gya tu.






Main- bhai me yaha isiliye to ruka hua hu. Taaki waqt padne per unki madad kar saku. Lekin bache itni bahaduri or akalmandi se unhe sambhal rahe hai ki baha jaane ka man hi nhi kar raha hai. Or dusri baat unko aiso se nipatne ka abhyas karna chahiye kya pata kab iski noubat sajaye. Ye samajh lo unki traning chal rahi hai.







Bhai- achha. Baise ye ladka hai kon. Or ye aadha naag kon hai.





Main- ye ladka aapki hone wali bahu ka aashiq hai. Or iska pata nhi sayad black heart ka koi samarthak hoga.







Ye sunke bhai choukee




Bhai- kya kaha tune. Meri bahu.






Main- ha bhai amar ki gf ka aashiq hai. Kal iski band bajai amar ne aaj ye uska badla lene aagya powers ke sath. Or i m sure ye powers use is aadhe naag ne hi di hongi.







Bhai- badiya hai. Baise ab kya karne ka irada hai ashk ko pakad liya hai usne.






Main- bahi me dekhna chahta hu ki is situation ko kaise ye log handle karte hai.








Bhai- ok dekhte hai.










Ashk ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha. Use samajh nhi aaraha tha ki kya kare or kaise kare. Takshak ka hath uske muh ke ekdum pass tha isliye usne usne hath me jor se kaat liya. Or is achanak kaatne se takshak ki cheekh nikal gyi or uski pakad bhi dheeli hogyi ashk per or isi ka fayeda utha kar ashk takshak ke changul se aazad ho gyi. Or ek pathar usne uthaya or nishana laga kar use fel diya. Or vo pathar super speed se jeetu ki aankh me ghus gya. Or me sach kahunga uski ek aankh kaam se chali gyi. Or jeetu is dard me tadapane laga. Bahi teeno ne is mouke ka fayeda uthaya. Avi udd ke gya takshak ke pass to baaki dono ne jeetu ko pakad liya. Or Samar ne apni ungli se uski dusri aankh bhi fod daali. Jisse jeetu dard me tilbila gya. Use itna dard ho raha tha jiski koi seema nhi tha.







Bahi dusri taraf avi udta hua takshak ki taraf gya bahi beech beech me takshak apni puchh se ji ki kaafi lumbi thi avi ko maarne ki kosis kar raha tha lekin avi kaafi fast tha or uske har ek war se bach ke vo us tak pahuch hi gya or apne dono hatho ko aage karke ek sath usper energy ko chhoda or iska tagda jhatka laga usko. Or vo flat jameen per let gya. Bahi avi ne apne arm se ek sword banai or jor se uske pet per gira jisse us sword ne uske 2 tukde kar diye.






Lekin iska asar jyada nhi hua kyuki ab takshak apne insani rup me aagya tha. Or uske hatho me bhi ek sword thi.






Takshak- kya baat hai tin ke dibbe. Ab dikha kitna dum hai.





Ye kehkar usne uchhal kar avi per hamla kiya lekin avi ne hawa me hi use ek kick masti or vo is prahaar se dur ja gira.



Uske girte hi avi hawa me hi punch ki position leke tezi se neeche uske thobde ki taraf gya.



Bahi takshak samajh gya ki ab kya hone wala hai isliye vi jaldi se move kar gya or avi ka punch uski jagah jameen me dhas gya.



Avi jaldi se khada hua or usne ek chhoti si missile takshak ke uper nishana laga kar chhod di. Takshak kuch samajhta usse pehle hi vo missile usse takta gyi or ek tez dhamaka sabhi ke kaano me gunja.



Charo taraf dhua or aag dikhne lagi.





Avi isme thoda carefree hogya tabhi achanak se use ek jordaar kick lagi or vo udta hua thodi dur girne hi wala tha ki usne beech hawa me udna shuru kar diya or full speed se udta hua gya or ek or jhatka mara energy ka. Jisse vo thodi dur ja gira.





Bahi dusri taraf jeetu ka kaam to almost tamam hi hi gya tha. Uski dono aankhe foot chuki thi. Or vo dard me behosh ho chuka tha. Bahi baaki ke teeno log bas in dono ki fight dekh rahe the. Unhe samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki akhir ye fight jeet kon raha hai or is naag ka kaise ant hoga.






Bahi takshak ka bhi dimaag kharab ho raha tha kyuki usper ye bacha bhari pad raha hai. Na hi use jeetne de raha tha balki ulta usi ki band baja raha tha.





Isliye usne apni power ka istemaal karne ka socha or usne apni talvar ko hath me pakda or apne hatho ko joda. Bahi avi or baaki dekhne lage ki ye kya kar raha hai.





Bahi takshak ne kuch mantra pade or apna muh khola. Or uske muh kholte hi uske muh se kuch nikalne laga kuch dhua type or charo taraf failne laga.


Or itna Ghana failne laga ki khud ke hath bhi na dikhe kisi dusre ko dekhne ki baat to chhod hi do.










Ab dekhte hai is dhuye me kya karta hai takshak or surya or veer kab tak aise dekhte hai is fight ko.


Or avi or baaki kaise is takshak ko harate hai.

















To be continue………………………..

 

[Vk248517]

UPDATE - 93













Jaise taise subah hui is waqt jeetu so raha tha or lagta nhi tha ki uski neend aaj jaldi khulne wali thi. Uske chehre per ek kushi chhai hui thi kyuki kal raat use vo mila jiski kalpana bhi usne nhi ki thi kabhi.




Bahi amar bhi gaav me tha or nidhi apne ghar per. Sab sahi se chal raha tha or aage bad raha tha.





Bahi black heart bhi apni sadhna me leen tha or surya ke aaram ke din chal rahe the. Halaki use sab khabar thi ki amar ki life me kya chal raha hai or kal yaha mumbai me kya hua hai. Kyuki Harry surya ke bina permission ke kuch bhi nhi karta hai. Surya ko puri jaankari hoti hai hai ki uske bache kab kya kar rahe hai or harry se kis prakaar ki madad lete hai.



Khair amar to bhul gya tha lekin surya ne Harry subah uthate hi Harry ko jeetu per najar rakhne ko bol diya tha kyuki surya jaanta tha ki jeetu itni aasani se sudharne walo mese nhi hai. Lekin kash surya ne raat me hi usper najar rakhne ko bol diya hota Harry ko. To kamse kam raat me hi uska kaam tamam ho jata. Lekin der aaye saber aaye. Abhi bhi jyada der nhi hui hai. Or abhi bhi mouka hai. Jeetu jaisa ladka power ke nashe me kuch na kuch galti to karega hi or jaise hi kuch galat karega Harry ko pata chal jayega or harry ko pata chala matlab surya ko pata chala. Or fir jeetu ko khair nhi.







Khair amar ne ashk avi or Samar ko bhi bataya ki kal kya hua tha or kisne kiya tha. Jise sunke sabhi ka para ek dum high ho gya tha. Lekin amar ke samjhane per vo log shant ho gye. Or mamle ko samajh bhi gye ki kyu amar ne usko kuch nhi kiya. Verna uske liye to amar akela hi kaafi tha.




Khair jaise taise sham hui or jeetu is waqt udaypur me tha jaisa usse takshak ne kaha tha. Vo apne samay per baha pahuch gya tha. Or takshak ka hi intjar kar raha tha. Or uska intjar bhi jaldi hi khatam ho gya. Kyuki takshak uske pass aagya tha.






Jeetu- ab batao kya karna hai mujhe.






Takshak- bataunga lekin pehle mujhe ye batao ki kisse puchh ke kal raat tumne vo sab kiya.







Jeetu- maine kya kiya.






Takshak- mujhse hoshiyari karne ki kosis bhi mat karna. Kyuki meri najar sab jagah hoti hai or mujhe achhe se pata hai kal raat tumne kya kiya hai.







Jeetu- ohh un ladkiyo ki baat kar rahe ho. Vo to bas apni powers ki testing kar raha tha me or kuch nhi.








Takshak- ha pata hai mujhe power ki testing kar rahe the ki apni hawas mita rahe the.







Jeetu- to usme aap itna hyper kyu ho rahe hai.








Takshak- tujhe abhi kuch nhi pata hai. Sehar me ek khukhar darinda ghum raha hai jo ham jaisi buri shaktiyon ko sungh kar unka khatma kar deta hai. Or agar use teri gandh aajati to kal raat hi tera kaam tamam ho jata fir ho jata tera badla pura.








Ye sunke jeetu thoda hairan hua.






Jeetu- aisa konsa darinda hai jisse aapki bhi fati padi hai.







Takshak- chinta mat kar tera saamna bhi usse jald hi ho jayega.
Fir tumhe bhi pata chal hi jayega ki vo kon hai or kya hai. Or kyu meri usse itni fat rahi hai.







Jeetu- theek hai abse nhi karunga aisa kuch bhi






Takshak- badiya hai. Yahi behtar hai tumhare liye. Ab chalo mere sath tumhare sikaar ke pass.






Jeetu- chalo me bahut exited hu.





Ye kehkar takshak ne jeetu ka hath pakada or agle hi sec vo log usi jheel ke pass jhadiye me pahuch gye.





Jeetu- ye kaha le aaye mujhe.






Takshak- ahhh ye dekho tumhara sikar tumhare saamne hai. Vo raha amar or uske bhai bahen. Tu agar chahe to uski bahen ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta hai meri taraf se chhut hai. Mujhe bas mera badla chahiye or isse tera badla bhi pura hoga.





Ye sunke jeetu ne Gour se ashk ko dekha or vo usi pal nidhi ko bhul gya. Uske muh se maar tapakne lagi.








Jeetu- ma kasam kya kadak maal hai. Isper to hajar nidhi kurban hai.







Ye sunke takshak hasne laga.




Takshak- tera kuch nahi ho sakta.
Chal shuru ho ja. Maar daal sabko. Baaki me yahi rahunga. Taaki agar tujhe madad ki jarurat pade to me kar saku.






Jeetu- theek hai.







Bahi Harry ye sab dekh raha tha. Or vo samajh gya tha ki kuch na kuch gadbad to jarur hai. Kyuki usne jeetu ke sath wale ki powers ko dekha isliye usne turant hi mujhe vo saari info di. Or me sunte hi bhaga gaav ke liye.







Bahi jeetu ek dum se amar ke saamne aagya.





Jeetu- kyu re bahut hoshiyar samajhta hai khud ko. Tujhe me nhi chhodne wala saale tune mere or nidhi ke beech duriya bana di.






Ye sunke amar or baaki sab ne peeche mud ke dekha.



Or jaise hi amar ne jeetu ko dekha uske hosh udd gye. Kyuki usne expect nhi kiya tha ki jeetu yaha tak pahuch jayega.





Amar- tu yaha kaise.







Jeetu- aagya me tujhe dhundte dhundte. Aaj tu nhi bachega.







Amar- marna hai kya. Bhag ja yahan se. Vo nidhi ka bhai hai tu isliye abhi tak apne pairo per khada hai verna vo haalat karta teri ki agle 7 janam tak langda paida hota tu. Or itna sab hone ke baad bhi teri akal thikane per nhi aai jo yaha tak chala aaya.








Jeetu- meri akal thikane per hi hai. Or achha hua jo me yaha aagya ab nidhi ke sath teri bahen ko bhi me apna banaunga. Vakai me kya kamal ki cheez hai.






Itna bolna tha ki use ek jordaar kick lagi jisse uska thoda santulan bigad gya lekin vo gira nhi. Ye kick thi amar ki.






Jeetu- dum nhi laga rahe ho tum. Thoda or jor lagao.





Ye kehkar jeetu ek dum adig amar ke saamne khada ho gya.




Bahi amar ne ek jordaar punch mara unke seene me dil ke just uper.




Or is punch ko jeetu sayad hi kabhi bhul paaye. Kyuki agar usne powers nhi hoti to is punch se uska raam naam satya ho hi jata. Lekin uski powers ne uski jaan bacha ki lekin use girne se nhi bacha paya. Bahi jeetu ko bahut jor se laga ye punch. Jisse vo ek dum se bokhla sa gya. Use yakeen nhi hua ki amar me itni takat hai. Or use is baat per yakeen ho gya ki ye koi aam insan to nhi hai matlab takshak sahi keh raha tha.




Bahi use kya pata ki amar to normal hi hai. Ye jo power uske hatho me hai ye use virasat me mili hai apne purkho se.







Amar- ab aaya maja. Beta bhale hi tu strong ho bahut lekin ek baat yaad rakhna ki ye hath bhi kam nhi hai.






Jeetu- bakai me bahut dum hai I'm hatho me.





Ye kehkar jeetu khada hua.



Or usne achanak se apni aankho se lazor nikalna shuru kar diya. Bahi amar ne furti dikhate hue apni position badli or uski lazor se bach gya. Bahi avi Samar ashk or varsha bhi yaha baha ho gye kyuki lazor un per bhi nishana laga rahi thi.





Bahi lazor ke jameen se takrane se neeche ki ghaas or ped vagera jal gye the.





Bahi is waqt jeetu ki najar dusro per thi isliye usne jeetu ke peeche jaake jump maarke apne ghutne ki maar uski peeth per maari jisse vo jhuk gya.





Bahi uski anakho se lazor nikalna band ho gya. Isi mouke ka fayeda utha kar Samar ne ek jordaar kick uski naak per maari jisse vo ulti gulati khate hue jameen per pasar gya.




Ye mouka dekhke amar me uski garden ko daboch liya apne hatho me. Or jor se daba diya. Amar ne apna pura dabav uski peeth per banaya hua tha jisse vo uth nhi pa raha tha. Uske keval hath hi khule hue the. Jinka vo pura jor laga raha tha. Uthne ke liye. To Samar ne uske hatho ko pakad kar daba liya. Ab vo keval tadap hi raha tha. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki vo kya kare kaise is qaid se aazad ho.






Yaha jeetu me saaf kami dikh rahi thi technique ki. Bhale hi insan ke pass power ho. Lekin agar uske pass un power ko istemaal karne ki technique nhi hai to vo koi jung nhi jeet sakta. Bahi amar or Samar bachpan se hi self defence ki training lete aarahe hai. Unhe pata hai ki kisko kaise kabu karna hai.







Bahi dur se me bhi ye najara dekh raha tha or kush ho raha tha ki kaise bacho ne usko kabu kar liya.







Amar- bol haramjade. Maja aaya.






Jeetu- maja to aaya lekin jyada nhi.




Ye kehkar jeetu ne apna pura jor laga diya or ek dum se khada ho gya. Bahi is jor se amar or Samar dono hi alag alag disha me udte hue dur ja gire.





Jeetu- ab maja aaya kamino.






Ye kehkar vo sabse pehle amar ke pass gya speed se. Or usne amar ko utha liya or jor se jameen per patak diya. Bahi tab tak Samar or avi dono hi jeetu ke pass aaye or usper hamla karne lage lekin abki baar vo apni speed ka pura istemaal kar raha tha. Jis bajah se avi or Samar ke har baar khali ja rahe the.





Bahi takshak ye sab dekhke bahut kush ho raha tha. Use apna plan anjaam tak pahuchta hua najar aaraha tha. Lekin use ye nhi pata tha ki uska baap uske aas pass hi moujud hai.








Abki baar bazi puri tarah se palat gyi thi. Kyuki jeetu akela hi teeno per bhari pad raha tha. Or iska kaaran keval itna tha ki jeetu apni super power ka istemaal kar raha tha. Bahi ye teeno apni normal power ka istemaal kar rahe the.






Jeetu ne teeno ki hi haalat tight kar rakhi thi. Lekin the to sabhi surya ke hi bache. Or is bajah se jeetu unhe jeet nhi pa raha tha. Kyuki girte hi vo fir se khade ho rahe the. Or is bajah se jeetu kaafi frustrate ho raha tha.




Bahi avi samajh gya tha ki ye aise control me nhi aayega isliye usne apne mobile me kuch kiya or lete lete hi wait karne laga.





Tabhi sabhi ko najar aasmaan me gyi jaha se kuch udta hua jameen per aa raha tha. Use dekhke aisa lag raha tha jaise vo koi ulka pind ho. Kyuki uski speed bahut tez thi.





Bahi avi ke chehre per smile aai or vo jaldi se khada hua. Or jeetu ki taraf bhaga apni speed se




Bahi vo udti hui cheez avi se takarai lekin isse avi ko kuch fark nhi pada. Balki avi ke charo taraf usne ek kavach ka aakar le liya. Like iron man. Avi abhi bhi douda hua hi ja raha tha.or isi beech avi puri tarah se iron man ban gya tha.




Bahi ye najar baha moujud sabhi ne dekha or dekhte hi jeetu ko chhodke sabhi ke chehre per hasi aagyi. Or sabne apna matha peet liya. Kyuki vo aaj real me iron man dekh rahe the. Or avi ke dimaag ki daad de rahe the. Ashk ne jordaar seeti bajai avi ke liye.



Bahi jeetu ek dum se hairan tha. Use laga kahi Tony stark sach me to yaha nhi aagya. Vo thoda hairan pareshan sa bahi per khada raha. Or isi beeche use ek jabardast punch laga jiski bajah se vo udta hua dur ja girne laga. Tabhi avi ne apne hatho se power generate ki or jeetu ke uper use chhodna start kar diya.





Bhale hi jeetu ka sarir bajr jaisa kathor ho lekin arc reactor ki power ka jabardast prahar laga use. Jisse uske sarir per kai jagah jalne ke nishan aagye.





Bahi dur se jab maine ye seen dekha to mere bhi hosh udd gye or mere chehre per bhi hasi aagyi.



Or takshak ne jab ye dekha to uska haal bhi jeetu jaisa hi tha. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye aakhir hai kya. Ye kis tarah ki power hai.







Khair aage dekhte hai avi or kya kya kaarname karta hai.

















To be continue………………………..

Supper dupper hit bro

 

[mashish]

UPDATE - 93













Jaise taise subah hui is waqt jeetu so raha tha or lagta nhi tha ki uski neend aaj jaldi khulne wali thi. Uske chehre per ek kushi chhai hui thi kyuki kal raat use vo mila jiski kalpana bhi usne nhi ki thi kabhi.




Bahi amar bhi gaav me tha or nidhi apne ghar per. Sab sahi se chal raha tha or aage bad raha tha.





Bahi black heart bhi apni sadhna me leen tha or surya ke aaram ke din chal rahe the. Halaki use sab khabar thi ki amar ki life me kya chal raha hai or kal yaha mumbai me kya hua hai. Kyuki Harry surya ke bina permission ke kuch bhi nhi karta hai. Surya ko puri jaankari hoti hai hai ki uske bache kab kya kar rahe hai or harry se kis prakaar ki madad lete hai.



Khair amar to bhul gya tha lekin surya ne Harry subah uthate hi Harry ko jeetu per najar rakhne ko bol diya tha kyuki surya jaanta tha ki jeetu itni aasani se sudharne walo mese nhi hai. Lekin kash surya ne raat me hi usper najar rakhne ko bol diya hota Harry ko. To kamse kam raat me hi uska kaam tamam ho jata. Lekin der aaye saber aaye. Abhi bhi jyada der nhi hui hai. Or abhi bhi mouka hai. Jeetu jaisa ladka power ke nashe me kuch na kuch galti to karega hi or jaise hi kuch galat karega Harry ko pata chal jayega or harry ko pata chala matlab surya ko pata chala. Or fir jeetu ko khair nhi.







Khair amar ne ashk avi or Samar ko bhi bataya ki kal kya hua tha or kisne kiya tha. Jise sunke sabhi ka para ek dum high ho gya tha. Lekin amar ke samjhane per vo log shant ho gye. Or mamle ko samajh bhi gye ki kyu amar ne usko kuch nhi kiya. Verna uske liye to amar akela hi kaafi tha.




Khair jaise taise sham hui or jeetu is waqt udaypur me tha jaisa usse takshak ne kaha tha. Vo apne samay per baha pahuch gya tha. Or takshak ka hi intjar kar raha tha. Or uska intjar bhi jaldi hi khatam ho gya. Kyuki takshak uske pass aagya tha.






Jeetu- ab batao kya karna hai mujhe.






Takshak- bataunga lekin pehle mujhe ye batao ki kisse puchh ke kal raat tumne vo sab kiya.







Jeetu- maine kya kiya.






Takshak- mujhse hoshiyari karne ki kosis bhi mat karna. Kyuki meri najar sab jagah hoti hai or mujhe achhe se pata hai kal raat tumne kya kiya hai.







Jeetu- ohh un ladkiyo ki baat kar rahe ho. Vo to bas apni powers ki testing kar raha tha me or kuch nhi.








Takshak- ha pata hai mujhe power ki testing kar rahe the ki apni hawas mita rahe the.







Jeetu- to usme aap itna hyper kyu ho rahe hai.








Takshak- tujhe abhi kuch nhi pata hai. Sehar me ek khukhar darinda ghum raha hai jo ham jaisi buri shaktiyon ko sungh kar unka khatma kar deta hai. Or agar use teri gandh aajati to kal raat hi tera kaam tamam ho jata fir ho jata tera badla pura.








Ye sunke jeetu thoda hairan hua.






Jeetu- aisa konsa darinda hai jisse aapki bhi fati padi hai.







Takshak- chinta mat kar tera saamna bhi usse jald hi ho jayega.
Fir tumhe bhi pata chal hi jayega ki vo kon hai or kya hai. Or kyu meri usse itni fat rahi hai.







Jeetu- theek hai abse nhi karunga aisa kuch bhi






Takshak- badiya hai. Yahi behtar hai tumhare liye. Ab chalo mere sath tumhare sikaar ke pass.






Jeetu- chalo me bahut exited hu.





Ye kehkar takshak ne jeetu ka hath pakada or agle hi sec vo log usi jheel ke pass jhadiye me pahuch gye.





Jeetu- ye kaha le aaye mujhe.






Takshak- ahhh ye dekho tumhara sikar tumhare saamne hai. Vo raha amar or uske bhai bahen. Tu agar chahe to uski bahen ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta hai meri taraf se chhut hai. Mujhe bas mera badla chahiye or isse tera badla bhi pura hoga.





Ye sunke jeetu ne Gour se ashk ko dekha or vo usi pal nidhi ko bhul gya. Uske muh se maar tapakne lagi.








Jeetu- ma kasam kya kadak maal hai. Isper to hajar nidhi kurban hai.







Ye sunke takshak hasne laga.




Takshak- tera kuch nahi ho sakta.
Chal shuru ho ja. Maar daal sabko. Baaki me yahi rahunga. Taaki agar tujhe madad ki jarurat pade to me kar saku.






Jeetu- theek hai.







Bahi Harry ye sab dekh raha tha. Or vo samajh gya tha ki kuch na kuch gadbad to jarur hai. Kyuki usne jeetu ke sath wale ki powers ko dekha isliye usne turant hi mujhe vo saari info di. Or me sunte hi bhaga gaav ke liye.







Bahi jeetu ek dum se amar ke saamne aagya.





Jeetu- kyu re bahut hoshiyar samajhta hai khud ko. Tujhe me nhi chhodne wala saale tune mere or nidhi ke beech duriya bana di.






Ye sunke amar or baaki sab ne peeche mud ke dekha.



Or jaise hi amar ne jeetu ko dekha uske hosh udd gye. Kyuki usne expect nhi kiya tha ki jeetu yaha tak pahuch jayega.





Amar- tu yaha kaise.







Jeetu- aagya me tujhe dhundte dhundte. Aaj tu nhi bachega.







Amar- marna hai kya. Bhag ja yahan se. Vo nidhi ka bhai hai tu isliye abhi tak apne pairo per khada hai verna vo haalat karta teri ki agle 7 janam tak langda paida hota tu. Or itna sab hone ke baad bhi teri akal thikane per nhi aai jo yaha tak chala aaya.








Jeetu- meri akal thikane per hi hai. Or achha hua jo me yaha aagya ab nidhi ke sath teri bahen ko bhi me apna banaunga. Vakai me kya kamal ki cheez hai.






Itna bolna tha ki use ek jordaar kick lagi jisse uska thoda santulan bigad gya lekin vo gira nhi. Ye kick thi amar ki.






Jeetu- dum nhi laga rahe ho tum. Thoda or jor lagao.





Ye kehkar jeetu ek dum adig amar ke saamne khada ho gya.




Bahi amar ne ek jordaar punch mara unke seene me dil ke just uper.




Or is punch ko jeetu sayad hi kabhi bhul paaye. Kyuki agar usne powers nhi hoti to is punch se uska raam naam satya ho hi jata. Lekin uski powers ne uski jaan bacha ki lekin use girne se nhi bacha paya. Bahi jeetu ko bahut jor se laga ye punch. Jisse vo ek dum se bokhla sa gya. Use yakeen nhi hua ki amar me itni takat hai. Or use is baat per yakeen ho gya ki ye koi aam insan to nhi hai matlab takshak sahi keh raha tha.




Bahi use kya pata ki amar to normal hi hai. Ye jo power uske hatho me hai ye use virasat me mili hai apne purkho se.







Amar- ab aaya maja. Beta bhale hi tu strong ho bahut lekin ek baat yaad rakhna ki ye hath bhi kam nhi hai.






Jeetu- bakai me bahut dum hai I'm hatho me.





Ye kehkar jeetu khada hua.



Or usne achanak se apni aankho se lazor nikalna shuru kar diya. Bahi amar ne furti dikhate hue apni position badli or uski lazor se bach gya. Bahi avi Samar ashk or varsha bhi yaha baha ho gye kyuki lazor un per bhi nishana laga rahi thi.





Bahi lazor ke jameen se takrane se neeche ki ghaas or ped vagera jal gye the.





Bahi is waqt jeetu ki najar dusro per thi isliye usne jeetu ke peeche jaake jump maarke apne ghutne ki maar uski peeth per maari jisse vo jhuk gya.





Bahi uski anakho se lazor nikalna band ho gya. Isi mouke ka fayeda utha kar Samar ne ek jordaar kick uski naak per maari jisse vo ulti gulati khate hue jameen per pasar gya.




Ye mouka dekhke amar me uski garden ko daboch liya apne hatho me. Or jor se daba diya. Amar ne apna pura dabav uski peeth per banaya hua tha jisse vo uth nhi pa raha tha. Uske keval hath hi khule hue the. Jinka vo pura jor laga raha tha. Uthne ke liye. To Samar ne uske hatho ko pakad kar daba liya. Ab vo keval tadap hi raha tha. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki vo kya kare kaise is qaid se aazad ho.






Yaha jeetu me saaf kami dikh rahi thi technique ki. Bhale hi insan ke pass power ho. Lekin agar uske pass un power ko istemaal karne ki technique nhi hai to vo koi jung nhi jeet sakta. Bahi amar or Samar bachpan se hi self defence ki training lete aarahe hai. Unhe pata hai ki kisko kaise kabu karna hai.







Bahi dur se me bhi ye najara dekh raha tha or kush ho raha tha ki kaise bacho ne usko kabu kar liya.







Amar- bol haramjade. Maja aaya.






Jeetu- maja to aaya lekin jyada nhi.




Ye kehkar jeetu ne apna pura jor laga diya or ek dum se khada ho gya. Bahi is jor se amar or Samar dono hi alag alag disha me udte hue dur ja gire.





Jeetu- ab maja aaya kamino.






Ye kehkar vo sabse pehle amar ke pass gya speed se. Or usne amar ko utha liya or jor se jameen per patak diya. Bahi tab tak Samar or avi dono hi jeetu ke pass aaye or usper hamla karne lage lekin abki baar vo apni speed ka pura istemaal kar raha tha. Jis bajah se avi or Samar ke har baar khali ja rahe the.





Bahi takshak ye sab dekhke bahut kush ho raha tha. Use apna plan anjaam tak pahuchta hua najar aaraha tha. Lekin use ye nhi pata tha ki uska baap uske aas pass hi moujud hai.








Abki baar bazi puri tarah se palat gyi thi. Kyuki jeetu akela hi teeno per bhari pad raha tha. Or iska kaaran keval itna tha ki jeetu apni super power ka istemaal kar raha tha. Bahi ye teeno apni normal power ka istemaal kar rahe the.






Jeetu ne teeno ki hi haalat tight kar rakhi thi. Lekin the to sabhi surya ke hi bache. Or is bajah se jeetu unhe jeet nhi pa raha tha. Kyuki girte hi vo fir se khade ho rahe the. Or is bajah se jeetu kaafi frustrate ho raha tha.




Bahi avi samajh gya tha ki ye aise control me nhi aayega isliye usne apne mobile me kuch kiya or lete lete hi wait karne laga.





Tabhi sabhi ko najar aasmaan me gyi jaha se kuch udta hua jameen per aa raha tha. Use dekhke aisa lag raha tha jaise vo koi ulka pind ho. Kyuki uski speed bahut tez thi.





Bahi avi ke chehre per smile aai or vo jaldi se khada hua. Or jeetu ki taraf bhaga apni speed se




Bahi vo udti hui cheez avi se takarai lekin isse avi ko kuch fark nhi pada. Balki avi ke charo taraf usne ek kavach ka aakar le liya. Like iron man. Avi abhi bhi douda hua hi ja raha tha.or isi beech avi puri tarah se iron man ban gya tha.




Bahi ye najar baha moujud sabhi ne dekha or dekhte hi jeetu ko chhodke sabhi ke chehre per hasi aagyi. Or sabne apna matha peet liya. Kyuki vo aaj real me iron man dekh rahe the. Or avi ke dimaag ki daad de rahe the. Ashk ne jordaar seeti bajai avi ke liye.



Bahi jeetu ek dum se hairan tha. Use laga kahi Tony stark sach me to yaha nhi aagya. Vo thoda hairan pareshan sa bahi per khada raha. Or isi beeche use ek jabardast punch laga jiski bajah se vo udta hua dur ja girne laga. Tabhi avi ne apne hatho se power generate ki or jeetu ke uper use chhodna start kar diya.





Bhale hi jeetu ka sarir bajr jaisa kathor ho lekin arc reactor ki power ka jabardast prahar laga use. Jisse uske sarir per kai jagah jalne ke nishan aagye.





Bahi dur se jab maine ye seen dekha to mere bhi hosh udd gye or mere chehre per bhi hasi aagyi.



Or takshak ne jab ye dekha to uska haal bhi jeetu jaisa hi tha. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye aakhir hai kya. Ye kis tarah ki power hai.







Khair aage dekhte hai avi or kya kya kaarname karta hai.

















To be continue………………………..

superb update

 

[mashish]

UPDATE - 94













avi- khada ho kameene. Tujhe batata hu aaj ki ham akhir me cheez kya hai.







Ye sunke jeetu jo thoda jhakmi hua tha dheere dheere khada hua. Uske ghaav nhi bhare the. Na hi bharne wale the. Kyuki uske pass ye power thi hi nhi.







Jeetu khada hua or apne aap dekha. Use khud ke ghav dikhe jisse usko gussa aane lagi.


Or usne jordaar lazor avi per chhodi.



Bahi avi ready tha iske liye. Vo hawa me udd gya or jor se uske muh per punch mara or vo sambhalta usse pehle hi usne uske thobde per kai baar kiye. Or apna panja pura jhalke uske thobde per rakh diya or jor se apni power ka jhatka uske thobde per diya. Ye jhatka use bahut jor se laga uska pura thobda isme sulag gya. Or vo dard me tadapane laga. Or jameen per apna chehra pakad kar let gya. Bahi avi ne agla baar kiya uske main part per. Jaha bhi use tagda jhatka laga.




Aisa lag raha tha jaise jeetu ki powers uska sath chhodne lagi hai. Kyuki use ab bahut dard ho raha tha. Uska sarir kamjor sa padta ja raha tha.







Takshak bhi ye sab dekh raha tha or vo samajh gya tha ki ye jyada der tak nhi tikega isliye ab usne saamne jaane ka Faisla kiya. Bahar jaane se pehle use sabhi jagah dekha jab use dur dur tak koi dikhai nhi diya to vo bahar aaya.





Or vo chupke se ashk ke peechhe gya or use daboch liya




Takshak- ruk jaao chhod do use. Verna iska kaam tamam karne me mujhe jara bhi der nhi lagegi.





Ye aawaj sunte hi sabhi ne oechhe mud ke dekha or sabhi ki aankhe fati ki fati reh gyi. Kyuki takshak is waqt aadhe insan or aadhe naag ke rup me tha. Usne ashk ko garden se pakad rakha tha.or uska rup bakai me bahut bada or vishal tha.






amar- ab ye kya nai musibat hai. Sala ye ho kya raha hai. Ye lounda apni aankho se lazor nikaal raha hai. Or ye tuchhadhari naag








Samar- dekh ashk se dur hatja. Verna itne tukde karunga ki agle are janam tere unko batorne me hi nikal jayenge. Dur hat.






Ye Lalkaar aisi thi ki koi kamjor hota to mut deta. Kuch had tak to takshak bhi hill gya lekin usne jaldi hi khud ko sambhala








Takshak- bache ye ruabb idhar nahi kaam aayega. Mere aadmi ko chhod do me isko chhod dunga.






Samar- hamne use pakada hi nhi to chhodenge kya. Vo dala hai neeche ise utha or nikal le yaha se. Verna sach me aaj tera aakhiri din hoga. Tu janta nhi tune kitni badi galti ki hai ashk per hath dalke. Uske papa ko jaanta hai na.







Takshak- ha janta hu surya ko. Or usne jitna hamara nuksan kiya hai uske badle ye chhota sa tohfa kaafi hoga uski bharpai ke liye.







Itni der me jeetu thoda normal ho gya tha.



Or is mouke ka fayeda usne uthaya or pechhe se avi per lazor chhod di. Lazor ka asar avi ke suit per bahut hi kam ho raha tha. Vibranium se jo bana tha uska suit. Lekin iska impact ise jarur mehsus hua kyuki vo aage ko thoda pressure se chala gya or jameen per let gya. Bahi jeetu ne lazor ko band nhi kiya or chhodta hi raha avi per.





Bahi ye sab dekh ke ashk ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha. Uski anakho ke saamne uske bhaiyo ki halat patli ho rahi ho vo kaise dekh sakti hai ye sab.




In sab me varsha per kisi ka dhyan hi nhi gya. Kyuki vo pehle hi ghar chali gyi thi amar ke papa ko bulane ke liye. Kyuki vo samajh gyi thi ki yaha mamla bigadne wala hai. Kyuki jeetu lazor chhod raha tha aankho se.



Or vo is waqt ghar pahuch hi gyi thi. Or use bahar hi veer ki car dikh gyi jisme baithke vo office se ghar aaya tha or car se nikal hi raha tha.







Varsha- uncle pls jaldi chaliye mere. Sath.





Bahi veer ne jab varsha ki aisi haalat dekhi to vo hairan ho gya.




Veer- shant ho jaao or batao kya hua tum itna haff kyu rahi ho. Baaki sab kaha hai.






Varsha- uncle jheel ke kinare kisi anjaan shakti ne hamla kiya hai. Ek ladka aaya hai amar se ladne jo apni aankho se lazor chhod raha hai. Vo normal nhi hai. Isse pehle kuch galat ho jaaye pls chaliye.





Ye sunke veer ka matha ghum gya. Usne varsha ko bahi rukne ko kaha or use andar bhej diya. Bahi amar tez raftar se doudta hua jheel ke pass jaane laga.




Abhi jheel ke pass pahuchne hi wala tha ki maine veer ko raste me hi rok liya




Or mujhe dekhke veer ki jaan me jaan aai.





Veer- hai vo jheel kinare kya ho raha hai.






Main- aao dikhata hu.




Main bhai ko leke usi jagah aaya jaha se me ab tak sab dekh raha tha.




Main- vo dekhiye bache kaise baha duri se unka mukabla kar rahe hai.






Bhai- tu pagal hai kya unki madad karne kyu nhi gya tu.






Main- bhai me yaha isiliye to ruka hua hu. Taaki waqt padne per unki madad kar saku. Lekin bache itni bahaduri or akalmandi se unhe sambhal rahe hai ki baha jaane ka man hi nhi kar raha hai. Or dusri baat unko aiso se nipatne ka abhyas karna chahiye kya pata kab iski noubat sajaye. Ye samajh lo unki traning chal rahi hai.







Bhai- achha. Baise ye ladka hai kon. Or ye aadha naag kon hai.





Main- ye ladka aapki hone wali bahu ka aashiq hai. Or iska pata nhi sayad black heart ka koi samarthak hoga.







Ye sunke bhai choukee




Bhai- kya kaha tune. Meri bahu.






Main- ha bhai amar ki gf ka aashiq hai. Kal iski band bajai amar ne aaj ye uska badla lene aagya powers ke sath. Or i m sure ye powers use is aadhe naag ne hi di hongi.







Bhai- badiya hai. Baise ab kya karne ka irada hai ashk ko pakad liya hai usne.






Main- bahi me dekhna chahta hu ki is situation ko kaise ye log handle karte hai.








Bhai- ok dekhte hai.










Ashk ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha. Use samajh nhi aaraha tha ki kya kare or kaise kare. Takshak ka hath uske muh ke ekdum pass tha isliye usne usne hath me jor se kaat liya. Or is achanak kaatne se takshak ki cheekh nikal gyi or uski pakad bhi dheeli hogyi ashk per or isi ka fayeda utha kar ashk takshak ke changul se aazad ho gyi. Or ek pathar usne uthaya or nishana laga kar use fel diya. Or vo pathar super speed se jeetu ki aankh me ghus gya. Or me sach kahunga uski ek aankh kaam se chali gyi. Or jeetu is dard me tadapane laga. Bahi teeno ne is mouke ka fayeda uthaya. Avi udd ke gya takshak ke pass to baaki dono ne jeetu ko pakad liya. Or Samar ne apni ungli se uski dusri aankh bhi fod daali. Jisse jeetu dard me tilbila gya. Use itna dard ho raha tha jiski koi seema nhi tha.







Bahi dusri taraf avi udta hua takshak ki taraf gya bahi beech beech me takshak apni puchh se ji ki kaafi lumbi thi avi ko maarne ki kosis kar raha tha lekin avi kaafi fast tha or uske har ek war se bach ke vo us tak pahuch hi gya or apne dono hatho ko aage karke ek sath usper energy ko chhoda or iska tagda jhatka laga usko. Or vo flat jameen per let gya. Bahi avi ne apne arm se ek sword banai or jor se uske pet per gira jisse us sword ne uske 2 tukde kar diye.






Lekin iska asar jyada nhi hua kyuki ab takshak apne insani rup me aagya tha. Or uske hatho me bhi ek sword thi.






Takshak- kya baat hai tin ke dibbe. Ab dikha kitna dum hai.





Ye kehkar usne uchhal kar avi per hamla kiya lekin avi ne hawa me hi use ek kick masti or vo is prahaar se dur ja gira.



Uske girte hi avi hawa me hi punch ki position leke tezi se neeche uske thobde ki taraf gya.



Bahi takshak samajh gya ki ab kya hone wala hai isliye vi jaldi se move kar gya or avi ka punch uski jagah jameen me dhas gya.



Avi jaldi se khada hua or usne ek chhoti si missile takshak ke uper nishana laga kar chhod di. Takshak kuch samajhta usse pehle hi vo missile usse takta gyi or ek tez dhamaka sabhi ke kaano me gunja.



Charo taraf dhua or aag dikhne lagi.





Avi isme thoda carefree hogya tabhi achanak se use ek jordaar kick lagi or vo udta hua thodi dur girne hi wala tha ki usne beech hawa me udna shuru kar diya or full speed se udta hua gya or ek or jhatka mara energy ka. Jisse vo thodi dur ja gira.





Bahi dusri taraf jeetu ka kaam to almost tamam hi hi gya tha. Uski dono aankhe foot chuki thi. Or vo dard me behosh ho chuka tha. Bahi baaki ke teeno log bas in dono ki fight dekh rahe the. Unhe samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki akhir ye fight jeet kon raha hai or is naag ka kaise ant hoga.






Bahi takshak ka bhi dimaag kharab ho raha tha kyuki usper ye bacha bhari pad raha hai. Na hi use jeetne de raha tha balki ulta usi ki band baja raha tha.





Isliye usne apni power ka istemaal karne ka socha or usne apni talvar ko hath me pakda or apne hatho ko joda. Bahi avi or baaki dekhne lage ki ye kya kar raha hai.





Bahi takshak ne kuch mantra pade or apna muh khola. Or uske muh kholte hi uske muh se kuch nikalne laga kuch dhua type or charo taraf failne laga.


Or itna Ghana failne laga ki khud ke hath bhi na dikhe kisi dusre ko dekhne ki baat to chhod hi do.










Ab dekhte hai is dhuye me kya karta hai takshak or surya or veer kab tak aise dekhte hai is fight ko.


Or avi or baaki kaise is takshak ko harate hai.

















To be continue………………………..

super action update

 

[Jaguaar]

UPDATE - 93













Jaise taise subah hui is waqt jeetu so raha tha or lagta nhi tha ki uski neend aaj jaldi khulne wali thi. Uske chehre per ek kushi chhai hui thi kyuki kal raat use vo mila jiski kalpana bhi usne nhi ki thi kabhi.




Bahi amar bhi gaav me tha or nidhi apne ghar per. Sab sahi se chal raha tha or aage bad raha tha.





Bahi black heart bhi apni sadhna me leen tha or surya ke aaram ke din chal rahe the. Halaki use sab khabar thi ki amar ki life me kya chal raha hai or kal yaha mumbai me kya hua hai. Kyuki Harry surya ke bina permission ke kuch bhi nhi karta hai. Surya ko puri jaankari hoti hai hai ki uske bache kab kya kar rahe hai or harry se kis prakaar ki madad lete hai.



Khair amar to bhul gya tha lekin surya ne Harry subah uthate hi Harry ko jeetu per najar rakhne ko bol diya tha kyuki surya jaanta tha ki jeetu itni aasani se sudharne walo mese nhi hai. Lekin kash surya ne raat me hi usper najar rakhne ko bol diya hota Harry ko. To kamse kam raat me hi uska kaam tamam ho jata. Lekin der aaye saber aaye. Abhi bhi jyada der nhi hui hai. Or abhi bhi mouka hai. Jeetu jaisa ladka power ke nashe me kuch na kuch galti to karega hi or jaise hi kuch galat karega Harry ko pata chal jayega or harry ko pata chala matlab surya ko pata chala. Or fir jeetu ko khair nhi.







Khair amar ne ashk avi or Samar ko bhi bataya ki kal kya hua tha or kisne kiya tha. Jise sunke sabhi ka para ek dum high ho gya tha. Lekin amar ke samjhane per vo log shant ho gye. Or mamle ko samajh bhi gye ki kyu amar ne usko kuch nhi kiya. Verna uske liye to amar akela hi kaafi tha.




Khair jaise taise sham hui or jeetu is waqt udaypur me tha jaisa usse takshak ne kaha tha. Vo apne samay per baha pahuch gya tha. Or takshak ka hi intjar kar raha tha. Or uska intjar bhi jaldi hi khatam ho gya. Kyuki takshak uske pass aagya tha.






Jeetu- ab batao kya karna hai mujhe.






Takshak- bataunga lekin pehle mujhe ye batao ki kisse puchh ke kal raat tumne vo sab kiya.







Jeetu- maine kya kiya.






Takshak- mujhse hoshiyari karne ki kosis bhi mat karna. Kyuki meri najar sab jagah hoti hai or mujhe achhe se pata hai kal raat tumne kya kiya hai.







Jeetu- ohh un ladkiyo ki baat kar rahe ho. Vo to bas apni powers ki testing kar raha tha me or kuch nhi.








Takshak- ha pata hai mujhe power ki testing kar rahe the ki apni hawas mita rahe the.







Jeetu- to usme aap itna hyper kyu ho rahe hai.








Takshak- tujhe abhi kuch nhi pata hai. Sehar me ek khukhar darinda ghum raha hai jo ham jaisi buri shaktiyon ko sungh kar unka khatma kar deta hai. Or agar use teri gandh aajati to kal raat hi tera kaam tamam ho jata fir ho jata tera badla pura.








Ye sunke jeetu thoda hairan hua.






Jeetu- aisa konsa darinda hai jisse aapki bhi fati padi hai.







Takshak- chinta mat kar tera saamna bhi usse jald hi ho jayega.
Fir tumhe bhi pata chal hi jayega ki vo kon hai or kya hai. Or kyu meri usse itni fat rahi hai.







Jeetu- theek hai abse nhi karunga aisa kuch bhi






Takshak- badiya hai. Yahi behtar hai tumhare liye. Ab chalo mere sath tumhare sikaar ke pass.






Jeetu- chalo me bahut exited hu.





Ye kehkar takshak ne jeetu ka hath pakada or agle hi sec vo log usi jheel ke pass jhadiye me pahuch gye.





Jeetu- ye kaha le aaye mujhe.






Takshak- ahhh ye dekho tumhara sikar tumhare saamne hai. Vo raha amar or uske bhai bahen. Tu agar chahe to uski bahen ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta hai meri taraf se chhut hai. Mujhe bas mera badla chahiye or isse tera badla bhi pura hoga.





Ye sunke jeetu ne Gour se ashk ko dekha or vo usi pal nidhi ko bhul gya. Uske muh se maar tapakne lagi.








Jeetu- ma kasam kya kadak maal hai. Isper to hajar nidhi kurban hai.







Ye sunke takshak hasne laga.




Takshak- tera kuch nahi ho sakta.
Chal shuru ho ja. Maar daal sabko. Baaki me yahi rahunga. Taaki agar tujhe madad ki jarurat pade to me kar saku.






Jeetu- theek hai.







Bahi Harry ye sab dekh raha tha. Or vo samajh gya tha ki kuch na kuch gadbad to jarur hai. Kyuki usne jeetu ke sath wale ki powers ko dekha isliye usne turant hi mujhe vo saari info di. Or me sunte hi bhaga gaav ke liye.







Bahi jeetu ek dum se amar ke saamne aagya.





Jeetu- kyu re bahut hoshiyar samajhta hai khud ko. Tujhe me nhi chhodne wala saale tune mere or nidhi ke beech duriya bana di.






Ye sunke amar or baaki sab ne peeche mud ke dekha.



Or jaise hi amar ne jeetu ko dekha uske hosh udd gye. Kyuki usne expect nhi kiya tha ki jeetu yaha tak pahuch jayega.





Amar- tu yaha kaise.







Jeetu- aagya me tujhe dhundte dhundte. Aaj tu nhi bachega.







Amar- marna hai kya. Bhag ja yahan se. Vo nidhi ka bhai hai tu isliye abhi tak apne pairo per khada hai verna vo haalat karta teri ki agle 7 janam tak langda paida hota tu. Or itna sab hone ke baad bhi teri akal thikane per nhi aai jo yaha tak chala aaya.








Jeetu- meri akal thikane per hi hai. Or achha hua jo me yaha aagya ab nidhi ke sath teri bahen ko bhi me apna banaunga. Vakai me kya kamal ki cheez hai.






Itna bolna tha ki use ek jordaar kick lagi jisse uska thoda santulan bigad gya lekin vo gira nhi. Ye kick thi amar ki.






Jeetu- dum nhi laga rahe ho tum. Thoda or jor lagao.





Ye kehkar jeetu ek dum adig amar ke saamne khada ho gya.




Bahi amar ne ek jordaar punch mara unke seene me dil ke just uper.




Or is punch ko jeetu sayad hi kabhi bhul paaye. Kyuki agar usne powers nhi hoti to is punch se uska raam naam satya ho hi jata. Lekin uski powers ne uski jaan bacha ki lekin use girne se nhi bacha paya. Bahi jeetu ko bahut jor se laga ye punch. Jisse vo ek dum se bokhla sa gya. Use yakeen nhi hua ki amar me itni takat hai. Or use is baat per yakeen ho gya ki ye koi aam insan to nhi hai matlab takshak sahi keh raha tha.




Bahi use kya pata ki amar to normal hi hai. Ye jo power uske hatho me hai ye use virasat me mili hai apne purkho se.







Amar- ab aaya maja. Beta bhale hi tu strong ho bahut lekin ek baat yaad rakhna ki ye hath bhi kam nhi hai.






Jeetu- bakai me bahut dum hai I'm hatho me.





Ye kehkar jeetu khada hua.



Or usne achanak se apni aankho se lazor nikalna shuru kar diya. Bahi amar ne furti dikhate hue apni position badli or uski lazor se bach gya. Bahi avi Samar ashk or varsha bhi yaha baha ho gye kyuki lazor un per bhi nishana laga rahi thi.





Bahi lazor ke jameen se takrane se neeche ki ghaas or ped vagera jal gye the.





Bahi is waqt jeetu ki najar dusro per thi isliye usne jeetu ke peeche jaake jump maarke apne ghutne ki maar uski peeth per maari jisse vo jhuk gya.





Bahi uski anakho se lazor nikalna band ho gya. Isi mouke ka fayeda utha kar Samar ne ek jordaar kick uski naak per maari jisse vo ulti gulati khate hue jameen per pasar gya.




Ye mouka dekhke amar me uski garden ko daboch liya apne hatho me. Or jor se daba diya. Amar ne apna pura dabav uski peeth per banaya hua tha jisse vo uth nhi pa raha tha. Uske keval hath hi khule hue the. Jinka vo pura jor laga raha tha. Uthne ke liye. To Samar ne uske hatho ko pakad kar daba liya. Ab vo keval tadap hi raha tha. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki vo kya kare kaise is qaid se aazad ho.






Yaha jeetu me saaf kami dikh rahi thi technique ki. Bhale hi insan ke pass power ho. Lekin agar uske pass un power ko istemaal karne ki technique nhi hai to vo koi jung nhi jeet sakta. Bahi amar or Samar bachpan se hi self defence ki training lete aarahe hai. Unhe pata hai ki kisko kaise kabu karna hai.







Bahi dur se me bhi ye najara dekh raha tha or kush ho raha tha ki kaise bacho ne usko kabu kar liya.







Amar- bol haramjade. Maja aaya.






Jeetu- maja to aaya lekin jyada nhi.




Ye kehkar jeetu ne apna pura jor laga diya or ek dum se khada ho gya. Bahi is jor se amar or Samar dono hi alag alag disha me udte hue dur ja gire.





Jeetu- ab maja aaya kamino.






Ye kehkar vo sabse pehle amar ke pass gya speed se. Or usne amar ko utha liya or jor se jameen per patak diya. Bahi tab tak Samar or avi dono hi jeetu ke pass aaye or usper hamla karne lage lekin abki baar vo apni speed ka pura istemaal kar raha tha. Jis bajah se avi or Samar ke har baar khali ja rahe the.





Bahi takshak ye sab dekhke bahut kush ho raha tha. Use apna plan anjaam tak pahuchta hua najar aaraha tha. Lekin use ye nhi pata tha ki uska baap uske aas pass hi moujud hai.








Abki baar bazi puri tarah se palat gyi thi. Kyuki jeetu akela hi teeno per bhari pad raha tha. Or iska kaaran keval itna tha ki jeetu apni super power ka istemaal kar raha tha. Bahi ye teeno apni normal power ka istemaal kar rahe the.






Jeetu ne teeno ki hi haalat tight kar rakhi thi. Lekin the to sabhi surya ke hi bache. Or is bajah se jeetu unhe jeet nhi pa raha tha. Kyuki girte hi vo fir se khade ho rahe the. Or is bajah se jeetu kaafi frustrate ho raha tha.




Bahi avi samajh gya tha ki ye aise control me nhi aayega isliye usne apne mobile me kuch kiya or lete lete hi wait karne laga.





Tabhi sabhi ko najar aasmaan me gyi jaha se kuch udta hua jameen per aa raha tha. Use dekhke aisa lag raha tha jaise vo koi ulka pind ho. Kyuki uski speed bahut tez thi.





Bahi avi ke chehre per smile aai or vo jaldi se khada hua. Or jeetu ki taraf bhaga apni speed se




Bahi vo udti hui cheez avi se takarai lekin isse avi ko kuch fark nhi pada. Balki avi ke charo taraf usne ek kavach ka aakar le liya. Like iron man. Avi abhi bhi douda hua hi ja raha tha.or isi beech avi puri tarah se iron man ban gya tha.




Bahi ye najar baha moujud sabhi ne dekha or dekhte hi jeetu ko chhodke sabhi ke chehre per hasi aagyi. Or sabne apna matha peet liya. Kyuki vo aaj real me iron man dekh rahe the. Or avi ke dimaag ki daad de rahe the. Ashk ne jordaar seeti bajai avi ke liye.



Bahi jeetu ek dum se hairan tha. Use laga kahi Tony stark sach me to yaha nhi aagya. Vo thoda hairan pareshan sa bahi per khada raha. Or isi beeche use ek jabardast punch laga jiski bajah se vo udta hua dur ja girne laga. Tabhi avi ne apne hatho se power generate ki or jeetu ke uper use chhodna start kar diya.





Bhale hi jeetu ka sarir bajr jaisa kathor ho lekin arc reactor ki power ka jabardast prahar laga use. Jisse uske sarir per kai jagah jalne ke nishan aagye.





Bahi dur se jab maine ye seen dekha to mere bhi hosh udd gye or mere chehre per bhi hasi aagyi.



Or takshak ne jab ye dekha to uska haal bhi jeetu jaisa hi tha. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye aakhir hai kya. Ye kis tarah ki power hai.







Khair aage dekhte hai avi or kya kya kaarname karta hai.

















To be continue………………………..

Awesome Updatee

Toh Surya ko sab pehle se hi pata tha. Uske bachhe kyaa kar rahe hai kaise kar rahe hai. Aur usne Harry ko bhi Jeetu ke upar najar rakhne ko boldiya. Jiske wajah se ab Jeetu Surya ke saamne hai. Aur takshak usko toh iska aihsaas bhi nhi hai ke uski maut uske paas hi khadi hai. Par shayad takshak ka anth abhi nhi hoga. Aur shayad jeetu ka bhi.

Idher bachho ne badiya fight ki. But jeetu ki super powers unpar thodi bhari padh gayi.

Aur idher Avi ke dimaag ne usse sidha Iron man hi bana diya. Dekhte hai ab yeh iron man kya kya karta hai jeetu ke saath.

 

[Jaguaar]

UPDATE - 94













avi- khada ho kameene. Tujhe batata hu aaj ki ham akhir me cheez kya hai.







Ye sunke jeetu jo thoda jhakmi hua tha dheere dheere khada hua. Uske ghaav nhi bhare the. Na hi bharne wale the. Kyuki uske pass ye power thi hi nhi.







Jeetu khada hua or apne aap dekha. Use khud ke ghav dikhe jisse usko gussa aane lagi.


Or usne jordaar lazor avi per chhodi.



Bahi avi ready tha iske liye. Vo hawa me udd gya or jor se uske muh per punch mara or vo sambhalta usse pehle hi usne uske thobde per kai baar kiye. Or apna panja pura jhalke uske thobde per rakh diya or jor se apni power ka jhatka uske thobde per diya. Ye jhatka use bahut jor se laga uska pura thobda isme sulag gya. Or vo dard me tadapane laga. Or jameen per apna chehra pakad kar let gya. Bahi avi ne agla baar kiya uske main part per. Jaha bhi use tagda jhatka laga.




Aisa lag raha tha jaise jeetu ki powers uska sath chhodne lagi hai. Kyuki use ab bahut dard ho raha tha. Uska sarir kamjor sa padta ja raha tha.







Takshak bhi ye sab dekh raha tha or vo samajh gya tha ki ye jyada der tak nhi tikega isliye ab usne saamne jaane ka Faisla kiya. Bahar jaane se pehle use sabhi jagah dekha jab use dur dur tak koi dikhai nhi diya to vo bahar aaya.





Or vo chupke se ashk ke peechhe gya or use daboch liya




Takshak- ruk jaao chhod do use. Verna iska kaam tamam karne me mujhe jara bhi der nhi lagegi.





Ye aawaj sunte hi sabhi ne oechhe mud ke dekha or sabhi ki aankhe fati ki fati reh gyi. Kyuki takshak is waqt aadhe insan or aadhe naag ke rup me tha. Usne ashk ko garden se pakad rakha tha.or uska rup bakai me bahut bada or vishal tha.






amar- ab ye kya nai musibat hai. Sala ye ho kya raha hai. Ye lounda apni aankho se lazor nikaal raha hai. Or ye tuchhadhari naag








Samar- dekh ashk se dur hatja. Verna itne tukde karunga ki agle are janam tere unko batorne me hi nikal jayenge. Dur hat.






Ye Lalkaar aisi thi ki koi kamjor hota to mut deta. Kuch had tak to takshak bhi hill gya lekin usne jaldi hi khud ko sambhala








Takshak- bache ye ruabb idhar nahi kaam aayega. Mere aadmi ko chhod do me isko chhod dunga.






Samar- hamne use pakada hi nhi to chhodenge kya. Vo dala hai neeche ise utha or nikal le yaha se. Verna sach me aaj tera aakhiri din hoga. Tu janta nhi tune kitni badi galti ki hai ashk per hath dalke. Uske papa ko jaanta hai na.







Takshak- ha janta hu surya ko. Or usne jitna hamara nuksan kiya hai uske badle ye chhota sa tohfa kaafi hoga uski bharpai ke liye.







Itni der me jeetu thoda normal ho gya tha.



Or is mouke ka fayeda usne uthaya or pechhe se avi per lazor chhod di. Lazor ka asar avi ke suit per bahut hi kam ho raha tha. Vibranium se jo bana tha uska suit. Lekin iska impact ise jarur mehsus hua kyuki vo aage ko thoda pressure se chala gya or jameen per let gya. Bahi jeetu ne lazor ko band nhi kiya or chhodta hi raha avi per.





Bahi ye sab dekh ke ashk ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha. Uski anakho ke saamne uske bhaiyo ki halat patli ho rahi ho vo kaise dekh sakti hai ye sab.




In sab me varsha per kisi ka dhyan hi nhi gya. Kyuki vo pehle hi ghar chali gyi thi amar ke papa ko bulane ke liye. Kyuki vo samajh gyi thi ki yaha mamla bigadne wala hai. Kyuki jeetu lazor chhod raha tha aankho se.



Or vo is waqt ghar pahuch hi gyi thi. Or use bahar hi veer ki car dikh gyi jisme baithke vo office se ghar aaya tha or car se nikal hi raha tha.







Varsha- uncle pls jaldi chaliye mere. Sath.





Bahi veer ne jab varsha ki aisi haalat dekhi to vo hairan ho gya.




Veer- shant ho jaao or batao kya hua tum itna haff kyu rahi ho. Baaki sab kaha hai.






Varsha- uncle jheel ke kinare kisi anjaan shakti ne hamla kiya hai. Ek ladka aaya hai amar se ladne jo apni aankho se lazor chhod raha hai. Vo normal nhi hai. Isse pehle kuch galat ho jaaye pls chaliye.





Ye sunke veer ka matha ghum gya. Usne varsha ko bahi rukne ko kaha or use andar bhej diya. Bahi amar tez raftar se doudta hua jheel ke pass jaane laga.




Abhi jheel ke pass pahuchne hi wala tha ki maine veer ko raste me hi rok liya




Or mujhe dekhke veer ki jaan me jaan aai.





Veer- hai vo jheel kinare kya ho raha hai.






Main- aao dikhata hu.




Main bhai ko leke usi jagah aaya jaha se me ab tak sab dekh raha tha.




Main- vo dekhiye bache kaise baha duri se unka mukabla kar rahe hai.






Bhai- tu pagal hai kya unki madad karne kyu nhi gya tu.






Main- bhai me yaha isiliye to ruka hua hu. Taaki waqt padne per unki madad kar saku. Lekin bache itni bahaduri or akalmandi se unhe sambhal rahe hai ki baha jaane ka man hi nhi kar raha hai. Or dusri baat unko aiso se nipatne ka abhyas karna chahiye kya pata kab iski noubat sajaye. Ye samajh lo unki traning chal rahi hai.







Bhai- achha. Baise ye ladka hai kon. Or ye aadha naag kon hai.





Main- ye ladka aapki hone wali bahu ka aashiq hai. Or iska pata nhi sayad black heart ka koi samarthak hoga.







Ye sunke bhai choukee




Bhai- kya kaha tune. Meri bahu.






Main- ha bhai amar ki gf ka aashiq hai. Kal iski band bajai amar ne aaj ye uska badla lene aagya powers ke sath. Or i m sure ye powers use is aadhe naag ne hi di hongi.







Bhai- badiya hai. Baise ab kya karne ka irada hai ashk ko pakad liya hai usne.






Main- bahi me dekhna chahta hu ki is situation ko kaise ye log handle karte hai.








Bhai- ok dekhte hai.










Ashk ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha. Use samajh nhi aaraha tha ki kya kare or kaise kare. Takshak ka hath uske muh ke ekdum pass tha isliye usne usne hath me jor se kaat liya. Or is achanak kaatne se takshak ki cheekh nikal gyi or uski pakad bhi dheeli hogyi ashk per or isi ka fayeda utha kar ashk takshak ke changul se aazad ho gyi. Or ek pathar usne uthaya or nishana laga kar use fel diya. Or vo pathar super speed se jeetu ki aankh me ghus gya. Or me sach kahunga uski ek aankh kaam se chali gyi. Or jeetu is dard me tadapane laga. Bahi teeno ne is mouke ka fayeda uthaya. Avi udd ke gya takshak ke pass to baaki dono ne jeetu ko pakad liya. Or Samar ne apni ungli se uski dusri aankh bhi fod daali. Jisse jeetu dard me tilbila gya. Use itna dard ho raha tha jiski koi seema nhi tha.







Bahi dusri taraf avi udta hua takshak ki taraf gya bahi beech beech me takshak apni puchh se ji ki kaafi lumbi thi avi ko maarne ki kosis kar raha tha lekin avi kaafi fast tha or uske har ek war se bach ke vo us tak pahuch hi gya or apne dono hatho ko aage karke ek sath usper energy ko chhoda or iska tagda jhatka laga usko. Or vo flat jameen per let gya. Bahi avi ne apne arm se ek sword banai or jor se uske pet per gira jisse us sword ne uske 2 tukde kar diye.






Lekin iska asar jyada nhi hua kyuki ab takshak apne insani rup me aagya tha. Or uske hatho me bhi ek sword thi.






Takshak- kya baat hai tin ke dibbe. Ab dikha kitna dum hai.





Ye kehkar usne uchhal kar avi per hamla kiya lekin avi ne hawa me hi use ek kick masti or vo is prahaar se dur ja gira.



Uske girte hi avi hawa me hi punch ki position leke tezi se neeche uske thobde ki taraf gya.



Bahi takshak samajh gya ki ab kya hone wala hai isliye vi jaldi se move kar gya or avi ka punch uski jagah jameen me dhas gya.



Avi jaldi se khada hua or usne ek chhoti si missile takshak ke uper nishana laga kar chhod di. Takshak kuch samajhta usse pehle hi vo missile usse takta gyi or ek tez dhamaka sabhi ke kaano me gunja.



Charo taraf dhua or aag dikhne lagi.





Avi isme thoda carefree hogya tabhi achanak se use ek jordaar kick lagi or vo udta hua thodi dur girne hi wala tha ki usne beech hawa me udna shuru kar diya or full speed se udta hua gya or ek or jhatka mara energy ka. Jisse vo thodi dur ja gira.





Bahi dusri taraf jeetu ka kaam to almost tamam hi hi gya tha. Uski dono aankhe foot chuki thi. Or vo dard me behosh ho chuka tha. Bahi baaki ke teeno log bas in dono ki fight dekh rahe the. Unhe samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki akhir ye fight jeet kon raha hai or is naag ka kaise ant hoga.






Bahi takshak ka bhi dimaag kharab ho raha tha kyuki usper ye bacha bhari pad raha hai. Na hi use jeetne de raha tha balki ulta usi ki band baja raha tha.





Isliye usne apni power ka istemaal karne ka socha or usne apni talvar ko hath me pakda or apne hatho ko joda. Bahi avi or baaki dekhne lage ki ye kya kar raha hai.





Bahi takshak ne kuch mantra pade or apna muh khola. Or uske muh kholte hi uske muh se kuch nikalne laga kuch dhua type or charo taraf failne laga.


Or itna Ghana failne laga ki khud ke hath bhi na dikhe kisi dusre ko dekhne ki baat to chhod hi do.










Ab dekhte hai is dhuye me kya karta hai takshak or surya or veer kab tak aise dekhte hai is fight ko.


Or avi or baaki kaise is takshak ko harate hai.

















To be continue………………………..

Awesome Updatee

Toh jeetu ka kaam tamam kardiya bachho ne milke. Jeetu ka sabse bada hatiyaar uski aankhe jisse woh hypnotise karta tha lazer chorta tha ussi ko humesha ke liye barbaad kardiya. Chalo isse ladkiyan ab safe hai. Unki izzat ko aur koi khatra nhi.

Idher Takshak aur Avi ki fight mein Avi ne takshak ki band hi baja di. Par jaise harbaar hota hai jab haarte hai toh chhal karte hai ab wahi kar raha hai Takshak. Apni mayavi shaktiyon ka istemaal karraha hai.

Dekhte hai Avi inse kaise nipatta hai. Aur Surya Takshak ka kya karta hai.

 

[Rudrathakur]

Bahut khub to aaj aakhir kaar avi samar aur amar ko bhi bharpur mauka mil hi gya khud ko sabit krne aur apne purvajo ke nakshe kadam pr chalte hue dust logo ka nash krne ka..aur samne bhi koi normal nhi super natural power se yukt dushman se samna hua h in sabhi ka pr iske bavjood bahut bahaduri se lade h ye sabhi...wahi amar samar normal hhi bina shaktiyo ke bakai bahut powerful h normal dushman to unke samne kuchh bhi nhi h...ye sabit kr diya unhone shaktiyo se bhare deepu ki halat bigad kr wahi dusri aur Avi sahi me technology aur deemag ke mamle tony stark hi h...usne uske sare inventions ko real duniya me bhi bna liya ek real iron man and vision also...bss vision ke paas yaha mind stone nhi h..wo ek high tech robot h pr h kmaal ka aur vibranium se bna waise hi avi ka suit bhi h iron man ke paas vibrani suite hi nhi tha bss wrna wo aur bhi dhansu ho jata movie me..pr yaha avi ke paas h wo suite aur takshak ki hwa tight kr di usne un sab ki bahaduri aur sujhbujh ko dekh kr na surya abhi tk beech me aaya h na veer ko aane diya. Ab jb takshak sidhe sidhe kuchh nhi bigad paa rha h avi ka to usne apni jadui shaktiyo ke dwara dhua utpann krke chhip ke war krne ki yojna bnai h kyuki wo ek saanp h to usko is dhuae se itni dikkt nhi hogi wohi saanpo ki sabhi khasiyat jo h usme aur uppr se shaktiyan bhi h...wahi dekhte h ab avi kaise muqabla krta h uska..
Uske alawa in sab se phle amar se nidhi ke ghr wale bhi impress ho chuke h aur jb in dono ka mnn krega shadi ka tb sab bde milkar ye decide bhi kr lenge tb tk mje se jiye dono...so waiting for next update brother...🗡

 

[Anky@123]

Behad khubsurat update bhai