Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

[Naik]

UPDATE - 97













Rider or B.h aamne saamne khade hue the.bahi B.h man hi man muskura raha tha kyuki use pura bharosa tha ki uska idea kaam jarur karega. Bahi rider soch raha tha ki jarur daal me kuch kala hai. Ye yaha is tarah aaya hai matlab saaf hai kuch soch samajh kar hi aaya hoga.





Dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe the. Tabhi rider ne pehla haml kiya or apni sword ko seedha feka B.h ki taraf. Or B.h kuch samajhta usse pehle hi vo uske seene me ghus gyi. Puri sword aag me dehak rahi thi. Or uske andar basi hui aatmaye us aag me jalne lagi thi. Vo chilla rahi thi.






Lekin agle hi pal B.h baha se gayab ho gya. Or rider ko sword bahi neeche gir gyi.






Ye dekhke rider puri tarah hairan tha. Ki ye kya ho gya. Or kaise. Ye bach kaise gya.




Tabhi rider ke pechhe se aawaj aai.






B.h- tumhare ye hathkande mujh per kaam nhi karne wale.






Main2- kyu tu buraai ka prateek hai. Or me buraai ka khatma karne wala fir kaise tu bacha.







Ye sunke B.h ne apni jeb se ek contract nikala.




B.H- ye yaad hai tujhe.



Ye kehkar usne us contract ko khol liya.





Ye dekhke rider soch me pad gya.






B.H- kaho to pad ke batau. Kya likha hai isme.




Ye ek contract tha jo hell king ne rider ko banate samay banaya tha. Or isme saaf saaf likha tha ki jiske pass ye contract rahega rider usko kabhi bhi nuksaan nhi pahucha payega. Or agar contract wala chahe to rider ko hamesha ke liye vapis bhi bhej sakta hai. Lekin isme ek or baat likhi hai ki contract wala rider ko control nhi kar sakta hai. Matlab vo rider ka istemaal apne fayede ke liye nhi kar sakta hai.




Or us book me yahi likha hua tha. Or B.h sadhna me baithke isi contract ko dhund raha tha jo use mil gya or vo yaha aagya.









B.H- ab bol kutte kya karu me tera Bapis bhej di tujhe. Hamesha ke liye. Jaha se aaya hai tu. Jahannum ki aag me.








Main2- achha hai tabhi me sochu ki tujh jaisa darpok yaha kaise aagya or khudse mujhe bula raha hai. Koi nhi udd le hawa me. Lekin ek baat yaad rakhna ki mera bhi time aayega.vo bhi jald hi. Tab tujhe ye contract bhi mujhse nhi bacha payega.






B.h- achha lekin agar tu yaha rahega hi nhi to kaise meri band bajayega.




Ye kehkar B.h ne us contract ko padna start kiya apni full voice me.


Or jaise hi last line padke shant hua baise hi rider ki aag achanak se shant padne lagi.



Or ye dekhke rider ek dum hairan reh gya. Rider ab dheere dheere surya me badalne laga tha.




Or aise hi dekhte hi dekhte rider puri tarah se surya me badal gya bahi surya ke andar se ek bada sa aag ka gola nikla or dur aasmaan me udd gya.




Or surya bahi behosh hone gir gya. Or ye sab dekhte hi B.h jor jor se hasne laga.





B.h- bada aaya mujhe maarne wala ab sad apni usi jahannum ki aag me. Or abujhe rokne wala koi nhi hai. Ab me amar hu.




Or jor jor se hasne lagam uski aawaj charo dishao me failne lagi.




Uske baad B.h ne apni sabhi buri shaktiyon ko aadesh diya charo taraf hahakaar machane ka. Or aisa bolte hi uske andar se 4 personality nikli jo dekhne me hi kaafi khatarnaak thi. Or charo dishao me fail gyi.




Or jaate hi apne apne kamo me lag gye. Logo ko darana unhe maarna sab kuch.





Bahi B.h ab vapis hell me nhi gya. Kyuki use prithvi pasand aayi thi. Ab vo yahi rehne wala tha. Kyuki na to use ab koi rokne wala tha na hi maarne wala.






Bahi surya ko karib 1 ghante baad hosh aaya



Maine apni haalat ko dekha or me hairan tha ki me yaha kya kar raha hu.me to bister me so raha tha.



Maine aaspass dekha to me is waqt usi jheel ke pass tha. Jise dekhke me or confuse ho gya.




Fir mujhe laga kahi me sapna to nhi dekh raha hu jaise hell king mujhe sapno me bulata tha. Isliye maine charo taraf aawaj lagai hell king ko lekin mujhe koi reply nhi mila.





Abhi me vaise hi baitha hua tha ki mere kaano me dev ki aawaj padi. To maine charo taraf dekha lekin mujhe vo dikhai nhi diya.





Dev- surya bahut badi gadbad ho gyi hai.





Main- kya hua. Or me yaha kaise aagya.






Dev- B.h aaya tha or usne tumse rider ki shaktiya cheen li hai. Or ab tum pehle jaise ban gye hi. Keval surya. Or isi ke sath B.h pehle se jyada takatvar bhi ho gya hai or usne apne chamcho ko sabhi prithvi per bhej diya hai halla machane ke liye.





Ye sunte hi mujhe laga tagda jhatka aisa laga jaise me koi bura sapna dekh raha hu.






Main- what. Lekin ye hua kaise.





Uske baad dev ne mujhe bataya ki kya hua kaise hua. Or sari baate sunne ke baad me to hairan hi reh gya. Mujhe samajh me nhi aaraha fha ki me kya karu kaise use roku.







Main- ab kya karu me. Kaise use roku. Rider tha tab tak me inki band baja sakta tha lekin ab to ye mere hatho me hi nhi aayenge.






Dev- ha me janta hu. Lekin tum fikr mat karo me hu tumhari help ke liye.






Main- kya help karoge meri. Ye bhi bata do.







Dev- mayus kyu ho rahe ho yaar.






Main- sach kahu na to me pak gya hu ye kaam karte karte. Ab vo maja nahi aaraha hai jo pehle aata tha. Ab to mujhe retire hona hai.







Dev- kya baat hai retire hoke kya karoge or.






Main- radha ko leke kahi dur pahadiyon me bas jaunga usko me bilkul bhi time nhi de pata hu. Ab apni puri life uske sath hi bitani hai.








Dev- or fir aise dushmano se kon ladega.





Main- nai peedi hai na. Maine unka jalwa dekha hai. Mujhe pura bharosa hai ki vo is jimmedari ko aasani se sambhal sakte hai.






Dev- ha baise ye baat to hai.






Main- bahi to.






Dev- theek hai. Is kaam ke Baad tum jo chaho kar lena. Lekin filhaal to tumhe inse nipatna hi padega. Kyuki or koi nhi hai jo ye kaam kar payega.







Main- ha to karunga hi. Ab batao kya karna hai or kaise karna hai.






Dev- theek hai suno. Tumhari sword hai na. Use apne dono hatho me pakado or 3 baar om namah shivaya bolo. Aisa karte hi tumhari sword normal nahi rahegi. Or tum usse B.h ko chhod ke uske baaki ke sabhi sathiyo ka nash kar paoge.







Main- or B.h ka kya hoga fir use kaise khatam karunga me







Dev- uska jab samay aayega tab me bata dunga filhaal sehro me faile aatank ko khatam karo. Chun chun kar niptaao ek ek ko. Or vanraj ko bhi le jaao sath.







Main- achha pakka aisa bolne se kaam hoga.






Dev- viswas rakho mahadev jarur apni kripa karenge tum per. Pure shraddha viswas or prem se bolna mahadev ka dhyan laga ke. Kaam jarur hoga.







Main- theek hai me kar lunga baise lagta hai tumhari help ki jarurat jald hi padegi.








Dev- jab padegi tab me tumhare samne hounga. Chinta mat karo. Filhaal ye karo or subah hone se pehle sabka Nash kardo. Baaki ka kaam baad me dekhenge.








Main- ok. Tum kehto ho to karta hu me. Chalo baad me baat karta hu me.





Ye kehkar line cut gyi hamari.




Or ab me bahi per baitha raha thodi der or sochne laga ki kya karu kaise karu.








Ab dekhte hai kya karta hai surya kya dev ne jo kaha hai vo sach hoga. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.
















To be continue………………………...

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[Naik]

UPDATE - 98















Me bahi per baitha hua tha. Or usi me subah ke char baj gye the.




Tabhi maine socha ab jo hoga dekha jayega filhaal bahi karta hu jo dev ne kaha hai.





Maine bahi per apni paalthi mari or apne dono hathon ko jod ke baith gya. Or meditation karne laga. Kyuki sabse pehle man shant karna jyada jaruri tha.




Thodi der dhyan me baithne se man ek dum shant ho gya.



Uske baad maine apni sword apne hatho me uthai sabse pehle usko pranaam kiya uske baad maine use apne dono hatho se pakda or apni aankho ko band kiya or mahadev ka dhyan lagaya.





Or jab mere man me mahadev ki chhabi aane lagi to maine Om Namah Shivaya ka jaap kiya


3 baar jaisa dev ne kaha tha.







Or jaise hi mera teesri baar jaap purn hua. Aasaman me jor ki bijali kadki jisse mera dhyan tut gya or meri aankhe khul gyi.







Or achha hi hua jo aankhe khul gyi kyuki ye najara me sayad hi kabhi dekh pata.







Aasaman se seedhi bijli meri talvar per gir rahi thi. Vo bhi lagatar. Meri talvar lagatar chamak rahi thi. Or us bijli ka asar mujhper kuch bhi nhi ho raha tha.




Karib 2 min. Tak lagatar bijli girti rahi sword per. Or achanak se gayab ho gyi fir.




Bijli ke gayab hone ke baad. Meri taralvar alag hi chamak rahi thi. Usme se bhayankar bijli ka prabaah beh raha tha. Or mere dekhte hi dekhte vo prabaah band ho gya tha. Jise dekh ke me thoda chouka lekin fir maine socha ki jab iska upyog hoga tab iski chamak Bapis aajayegi. Or yahi sochke maine ghar ki taraf doud laga di.





Me ghar pahucha seedha apne kamre me. Baha de maine airpod lagaya apne kaan me Harry ko active kiya.






Harry- sir kaha gye the aap.






Main- gya tha kahi. Tum ye batao filhaal kaha kaha tehalka macha hua hai. Or vanraj ko bhi un jagho ke bare me inform kar do.





Ye sunke Harry ne sabhi jagho ko check karna start kiya. Ab vo tha AI system. Isliye use bhut to bilkul bhi nhi dikhe bas log yaha baha bhagate hue dikhe or pareshan hote hue. Ab vo kyu pareshan the ye use nhi dikh raha tha. Kyuki vo logo ke saamne aa hi nahi rahe the.





Harry- sir halat kharab hai or ye ek jagah ka nhi balki bahut jagho per yahi haal hai.






Main- pata hai. Naam batao






Harry- sir is waqt uday pur me bhi yahi haal hai aap shuruwat bahi se keejiye.





Ye sunte hi main doud gya. Uday pur ke liye. Super fast speed se.



Harry mujhe guide kar raha tha ki kaha jana hai






Udaypur me kai ilako me haalat kharab ho rakhi thi. Ghar jal rahe the. Log mare hue raste me pade hue the.




Maine apne lences ki setting ko thermal me change kiya. Or talvar ko apne hatho me pakda or aankho ko band karke mahadev se madad mangi or aankhe kholke aage badta gya. Saamne ek unchi building thi me seedha speed me uske uper chad gha bahar se hi. Or chhat per pahucha. Or charo taraf dekhne laga.








Charo taraf baise to sannata tha lekin jaha per vo sabhi the baha per shanti nhi thi. Or mujhe bahi jana tha.




Tabhi thoda chamatkar sa hua mujhe kuch dikhne laga. Ek bhut jo apne hatho se bhayankar aag nikaal kar ek ghar ko jala raha tha.




Ye dekhke mujhe aaya gussa or maine building se seedhi chhalang lagai or speed me uski taraf gya.




5-6 galiyon se hota hua me us gali me pahucha jaha vo khada hua tha.




Vo apne aag lagane me mast tha. Or me full speed se uski taraf badta hua ja raha tha. Maine apni talvar ki nok ko aage kiya or usko faadta hua me usko speed se hi paar kar gya.




Or ruk kar jab maine mud kar dekha to uske 2 tukde bahi jameen per pade hue. Matlab saaf tha ye bhayankar kaam kar rahi hai.




Or uske khatam hote hi aag ka badhna kam ho gya.





Or fir me baha se agli destination ki taraf gya







Bahi mumbai me vanraj bhi apni powers ka bharpur upyog kar raha tha. Or jaha bhi aag lagi thi vo use bujhane me puri madad kar raha tha. Baaki bhut bhi use kaafi pareshan kar rahe the. Isliye vo apni dekhne ki power ka bharpur istemal kar raha tha. Lekin vo mar nhi rahe the jis bajah se vo bahut hi frustrate ho raha tha.




Bahi me ek ke baad ek jagah ja kar un bhuton ka kaam niptate ja raha tha. Ye talvar vakai me khaas ho gyi thi aaj. Pehle bhi khaas thi lekin aaj double khaas ho gyi thi.






2-3 ghanto me maine sabhi ko dhund dhund ke khatam kar diya. Ab sab jagah pehle jaisi shanti chha gyi thi or uper se ujala bhi ho gya tha. Jis bajah se vo vaise bhi ab sayad hi bahar aaye.







Bahi jab black heart ne ye sab dekha to uska to fuse hi udd gya. Ki surya jaisa normal insan in bhuto ko kaise maar raha hai. Aisi kya power hai uske pass. Jabki rider ki power to usne chheen li hai usse.




Ab use surya ko or parakhna tha ki ye akhir or kya kya kar sakta hai.





Isliye usne apne ek khaas aarmy ko bulava bheja taaki inka kaam hi tamam karwa de.


Or usse bhi pehle usne pure aasman me kaale badlo ko chha diya. Ye badal itne ghane the ki almost andhera hi ho gya tha samast prithvi per. Sabko laga jaise surya grahan lag gya ho. Lekin aisa tha nhi.





bahi me is waqt vanraj ke sath tha. Jise maine jab bataya ki rider ab nhi aayega tab uska bhi dimaag kharab ho gya. Use bhi samajh nhu aaya ki ab kya kare. Or Ab B.h ko kaise rokennge.





Tabhi hamne dekha ki aasman me andhera chha gya hai puri tarah se.




Vanraj- aaj grahan tha kya





Main- pata nhi.





Vanraj- to fir ye Sab kya hai.






Main- pata nahj sayad usi B.h ka hi koi kand hoga ye andhere me vo jyada takatvar rehte hai isiliye.







Vanraj- possible hai. Ab hame kya karna hai. Mera to dimaag kaam karna hi band kar chuka hai.







Main- ladna hai.






Harry- sir mumbai ke outside kuch ajeeb si halchal mach rahi hai aasman me. Aapko baha jana chahiye.






Main- aisa kya ho raha hau baha.







Harry- hole ban raha hai baha per. Apne aap.






Ye sunke ham dono hi shock ho gye.



Or hamne us jagah ke liye doud laga di.






Ham baha pahuche to hole ban chuka tha. Hame pehle laga ki ye sayad black hole hoga jo apne andar sab kuch kheech lega. Lekin hamari galat fehmi jaldi hi dur ho gyi. Kyuki ye hole bahar kheechne wala nhi tha balki ya bahar nikalne wala tha.




Bahi hame ye bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye open kaise ho raha hai. Tabhi Harry ne hame bataya ki aise hi hole kai jagaho per ban rahe hai.




Bahi B.h is waqt apni ankho ko band karke baitha hua tha or uski power se ye hole creat ho rahe the.





Ye hole dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise hamare chhate me bade bade chhed ho gye ho.





Aise kul milakar 8 chhed bane pure aasman me. Lekin filhaal unme se kuch bhi bahar nhi aaraha tha. Bas vo chhed ban hi rahe the or apna aakar le rahe the. Jo size me itne bade the ki puri mumbai sama jaaye is hole me.





Hamari kuch bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye hole akhir bane kaise hai or inse hoga kya.



Bahi saari duniya inhe dekh rahi thi or vo bhi hamari hi tarah hairan the. Kai logo ne to alien hamle ki chetavni tak de di. Unhe laga isme se alien niklenge or unper hamla karenge. Lekin unme se filhaal kuch nhi nikal raha tha.









Tabhi aasman se hame ek aawaj aai. Or hamne uper ki taraf dekha.





B.h- surya bas ab kal tak jitni kushiya manani hai mana lo. Kyuki kal ye prithvi puri tarah se hell me badal jayegi. Or koi use nhi rok payega. Ye hole dekh rahe ho. Ye jaise hi ek line me aajayenge vaise hi tumhari barbadi shuru ho jayegi. Or in hole se bhi jyada khatarnaak cheez maine already yaha per chhod rakhi hai. Or uska jalwa bhi jaldi hi tumhe sunne ko milega.



Ye kehkar vo jor se hasne laga. Or uski gunj se pura aasman hi hill gya. Bahi mujhe or vanraj ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha.






B.h- is gusse ko sambhal kar rakho. Kyuki iski bahut jarurat padegi aange bas dekhte jaao kya hota hai. Or bacha sakte ho to bacha lo apni pyari prithvi ko. Ya fir aakhiri baar dekh lo apni is prithvj ko. Kyuki kal se iska ek naya naam padne wala hai HELL……










ab dekhte hai kya hota hai aage or kya karega black heart or surya use kaise rokega
















To be continue……………………….

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[Naina]

xp se xf tak...... maine ek baat kayi baar kayi kahaniyo pe notice ki hai, xp ke waqt bhi aur Aaj bhi.... ki agar lead characters zyada famous ho jaaye to unko create karne wale khud kahanikaar hi apne hi kirdaaro se jalne lagte hai.... ki aise kaise ye ye kirdaar mujhse zyada ho sakta hai.....
to writes tab ek chaal ki tahat lead characters band bajane lag jaate hai story pe...... koi koi writes to kirdaaro ka patta hi saaf Kar dete hai stories se hi..
so Rahul0087@ sahab par gayi kaleje ko thandak... dil ko sukun aur Mann mutabik khushi
Main puchti hu ki akhir aisi bhi kya dil lagi us BH se ki ushe itna powerful ke sath sath smart bhi bana diya.... dekho ye kya kiya usne saurya ke sath...
Wo to achha hua dev tha madad ke liye...
Well lagta hai writer sahab kuch karne rahe itni jald ab kyun na khaufnaak Revos se us black heart ki aisi taisi Kar du...
.........................
Story plot ki flow ke hisab update link by link pesh karna.. Sach mein amazing yaar.. Pichle bhag aur abhi aaye bhag mein koi alag anchaahi her pher nahi.... yahi to kahani ki shadgi ko banaye rakhti hai... jis tarah se aapne prastut kiya hai varnan aur baatcheet ke hisson ko wo sach mein ummda aur uttam hai... (even action scenes bhi)

Well let's see what happens next
Brilliant update awesome writing skills

 

[Akil]

Kya rider waapas aayega?
Aur ab kya Dev is story mein direct enter karne ja raha hai ya phir se woh Surya ke zari'e hi BH ke naam ke aage Late lagwayega

 

[ragish7357]

UPDATE - 98















Me bahi per baitha hua tha. Or usi me subah ke char baj gye the.




Tabhi maine socha ab jo hoga dekha jayega filhaal bahi karta hu jo dev ne kaha hai.





Maine bahi per apni paalthi mari or apne dono hathon ko jod ke baith gya. Or meditation karne laga. Kyuki sabse pehle man shant karna jyada jaruri tha.




Thodi der dhyan me baithne se man ek dum shant ho gya.



Uske baad maine apni sword apne hatho me uthai sabse pehle usko pranaam kiya uske baad maine use apne dono hatho se pakda or apni aankho ko band kiya or mahadev ka dhyan lagaya.





Or jab mere man me mahadev ki chhabi aane lagi to maine Om Namah Shivaya ka jaap kiya


3 baar jaisa dev ne kaha tha.







Or jaise hi mera teesri baar jaap purn hua. Aasaman me jor ki bijali kadki jisse mera dhyan tut gya or meri aankhe khul gyi.







Or achha hi hua jo aankhe khul gyi kyuki ye najara me sayad hi kabhi dekh pata.







Aasaman se seedhi bijli meri talvar per gir rahi thi. Vo bhi lagatar. Meri talvar lagatar chamak rahi thi. Or us bijli ka asar mujhper kuch bhi nhi ho raha tha.




Karib 2 min. Tak lagatar bijli girti rahi sword per. Or achanak se gayab ho gyi fir.




Bijli ke gayab hone ke baad. Meri taralvar alag hi chamak rahi thi. Usme se bhayankar bijli ka prabaah beh raha tha. Or mere dekhte hi dekhte vo prabaah band ho gya tha. Jise dekh ke me thoda chouka lekin fir maine socha ki jab iska upyog hoga tab iski chamak Bapis aajayegi. Or yahi sochke maine ghar ki taraf doud laga di.





Me ghar pahucha seedha apne kamre me. Baha de maine airpod lagaya apne kaan me Harry ko active kiya.






Harry- sir kaha gye the aap.






Main- gya tha kahi. Tum ye batao filhaal kaha kaha tehalka macha hua hai. Or vanraj ko bhi un jagho ke bare me inform kar do.





Ye sunke Harry ne sabhi jagho ko check karna start kiya. Ab vo tha AI system. Isliye use bhut to bilkul bhi nhi dikhe bas log yaha baha bhagate hue dikhe or pareshan hote hue. Ab vo kyu pareshan the ye use nhi dikh raha tha. Kyuki vo logo ke saamne aa hi nahi rahe the.





Harry- sir halat kharab hai or ye ek jagah ka nhi balki bahut jagho per yahi haal hai.






Main- pata hai. Naam batao






Harry- sir is waqt uday pur me bhi yahi haal hai aap shuruwat bahi se keejiye.





Ye sunte hi main doud gya. Uday pur ke liye. Super fast speed se.



Harry mujhe guide kar raha tha ki kaha jana hai






Udaypur me kai ilako me haalat kharab ho rakhi thi. Ghar jal rahe the. Log mare hue raste me pade hue the.




Maine apne lences ki setting ko thermal me change kiya. Or talvar ko apne hatho me pakda or aankho ko band karke mahadev se madad mangi or aankhe kholke aage badta gya. Saamne ek unchi building thi me seedha speed me uske uper chad gha bahar se hi. Or chhat per pahucha. Or charo taraf dekhne laga.








Charo taraf baise to sannata tha lekin jaha per vo sabhi the baha per shanti nhi thi. Or mujhe bahi jana tha.




Tabhi thoda chamatkar sa hua mujhe kuch dikhne laga. Ek bhut jo apne hatho se bhayankar aag nikaal kar ek ghar ko jala raha tha.




Ye dekhke mujhe aaya gussa or maine building se seedhi chhalang lagai or speed me uski taraf gya.




5-6 galiyon se hota hua me us gali me pahucha jaha vo khada hua tha.




Vo apne aag lagane me mast tha. Or me full speed se uski taraf badta hua ja raha tha. Maine apni talvar ki nok ko aage kiya or usko faadta hua me usko speed se hi paar kar gya.




Or ruk kar jab maine mud kar dekha to uske 2 tukde bahi jameen per pade hue. Matlab saaf tha ye bhayankar kaam kar rahi hai.




Or uske khatam hote hi aag ka badhna kam ho gya.





Or fir me baha se agli destination ki taraf gya







Bahi mumbai me vanraj bhi apni powers ka bharpur upyog kar raha tha. Or jaha bhi aag lagi thi vo use bujhane me puri madad kar raha tha. Baaki bhut bhi use kaafi pareshan kar rahe the. Isliye vo apni dekhne ki power ka bharpur istemal kar raha tha. Lekin vo mar nhi rahe the jis bajah se vo bahut hi frustrate ho raha tha.




Bahi me ek ke baad ek jagah ja kar un bhuton ka kaam niptate ja raha tha. Ye talvar vakai me khaas ho gyi thi aaj. Pehle bhi khaas thi lekin aaj double khaas ho gyi thi.






2-3 ghanto me maine sabhi ko dhund dhund ke khatam kar diya. Ab sab jagah pehle jaisi shanti chha gyi thi or uper se ujala bhi ho gya tha. Jis bajah se vo vaise bhi ab sayad hi bahar aaye.







Bahi jab black heart ne ye sab dekha to uska to fuse hi udd gya. Ki surya jaisa normal insan in bhuto ko kaise maar raha hai. Aisi kya power hai uske pass. Jabki rider ki power to usne chheen li hai usse.




Ab use surya ko or parakhna tha ki ye akhir or kya kya kar sakta hai.





Isliye usne apne ek khaas aarmy ko bulava bheja taaki inka kaam hi tamam karwa de.


Or usse bhi pehle usne pure aasman me kaale badlo ko chha diya. Ye badal itne ghane the ki almost andhera hi ho gya tha samast prithvi per. Sabko laga jaise surya grahan lag gya ho. Lekin aisa tha nhi.





bahi me is waqt vanraj ke sath tha. Jise maine jab bataya ki rider ab nhi aayega tab uska bhi dimaag kharab ho gya. Use bhi samajh nhu aaya ki ab kya kare. Or Ab B.h ko kaise rokennge.





Tabhi hamne dekha ki aasman me andhera chha gya hai puri tarah se.




Vanraj- aaj grahan tha kya





Main- pata nhi.





Vanraj- to fir ye Sab kya hai.






Main- pata nahj sayad usi B.h ka hi koi kand hoga ye andhere me vo jyada takatvar rehte hai isiliye.







Vanraj- possible hai. Ab hame kya karna hai. Mera to dimaag kaam karna hi band kar chuka hai.







Main- ladna hai.






Harry- sir mumbai ke outside kuch ajeeb si halchal mach rahi hai aasman me. Aapko baha jana chahiye.






Main- aisa kya ho raha hau baha.







Harry- hole ban raha hai baha per. Apne aap.






Ye sunke ham dono hi shock ho gye.



Or hamne us jagah ke liye doud laga di.






Ham baha pahuche to hole ban chuka tha. Hame pehle laga ki ye sayad black hole hoga jo apne andar sab kuch kheech lega. Lekin hamari galat fehmi jaldi hi dur ho gyi. Kyuki ye hole bahar kheechne wala nhi tha balki ya bahar nikalne wala tha.




Bahi hame ye bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye open kaise ho raha hai. Tabhi Harry ne hame bataya ki aise hi hole kai jagaho per ban rahe hai.




Bahi B.h is waqt apni ankho ko band karke baitha hua tha or uski power se ye hole creat ho rahe the.





Ye hole dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise hamare chhate me bade bade chhed ho gye ho.





Aise kul milakar 8 chhed bane pure aasman me. Lekin filhaal unme se kuch bhi bahar nhi aaraha tha. Bas vo chhed ban hi rahe the or apna aakar le rahe the. Jo size me itne bade the ki puri mumbai sama jaaye is hole me.





Hamari kuch bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye hole akhir bane kaise hai or inse hoga kya.



Bahi saari duniya inhe dekh rahi thi or vo bhi hamari hi tarah hairan the. Kai logo ne to alien hamle ki chetavni tak de di. Unhe laga isme se alien niklenge or unper hamla karenge. Lekin unme se filhaal kuch nhi nikal raha tha.









Tabhi aasman se hame ek aawaj aai. Or hamne uper ki taraf dekha.





B.h- surya bas ab kal tak jitni kushiya manani hai mana lo. Kyuki kal ye prithvi puri tarah se hell me badal jayegi. Or koi use nhi rok payega. Ye hole dekh rahe ho. Ye jaise hi ek line me aajayenge vaise hi tumhari barbadi shuru ho jayegi. Or in hole se bhi jyada khatarnaak cheez maine already yaha per chhod rakhi hai. Or uska jalwa bhi jaldi hi tumhe sunne ko milega.



Ye kehkar vo jor se hasne laga. Or uski gunj se pura aasman hi hill gya. Bahi mujhe or vanraj ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha.






B.h- is gusse ko sambhal kar rakho. Kyuki iski bahut jarurat padegi aange bas dekhte jaao kya hota hai. Or bacha sakte ho to bacha lo apni pyari prithvi ko. Ya fir aakhiri baar dekh lo apni is prithvj ko. Kyuki kal se iska ek naya naam padne wala hai HELL……










ab dekhte hai kya hota hai aage or kya karega black heart or surya use kaise rokega
















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Rider or B.h aamne saamne khade hue the.bahi B.h man hi man muskura raha tha kyuki use pura bharosa tha ki uska idea kaam jarur karega. Bahi rider soch raha tha ki jarur daal me kuch kala hai. Ye yaha is tarah aaya hai matlab saaf hai kuch soch samajh kar hi aaya hoga.





Dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe the. Tabhi rider ne pehla haml kiya or apni sword ko seedha feka B.h ki taraf. Or B.h kuch samajhta usse pehle hi vo uske seene me ghus gyi. Puri sword aag me dehak rahi thi. Or uske andar basi hui aatmaye us aag me jalne lagi thi. Vo chilla rahi thi.






Lekin agle hi pal B.h baha se gayab ho gya. Or rider ko sword bahi neeche gir gyi.






Ye dekhke rider puri tarah hairan tha. Ki ye kya ho gya. Or kaise. Ye bach kaise gya.




Tabhi rider ke pechhe se aawaj aai.






B.h- tumhare ye hathkande mujh per kaam nhi karne wale.






Main2- kyu tu buraai ka prateek hai. Or me buraai ka khatma karne wala fir kaise tu bacha.







Ye sunke B.h ne apni jeb se ek contract nikala.




B.H- ye yaad hai tujhe.



Ye kehkar usne us contract ko khol liya.





Ye dekhke rider soch me pad gya.






B.H- kaho to pad ke batau. Kya likha hai isme.




Ye ek contract tha jo hell king ne rider ko banate samay banaya tha. Or isme saaf saaf likha tha ki jiske pass ye contract rahega rider usko kabhi bhi nuksaan nhi pahucha payega. Or agar contract wala chahe to rider ko hamesha ke liye vapis bhi bhej sakta hai. Lekin isme ek or baat likhi hai ki contract wala rider ko control nhi kar sakta hai. Matlab vo rider ka istemaal apne fayede ke liye nhi kar sakta hai.




Or us book me yahi likha hua tha. Or B.h sadhna me baithke isi contract ko dhund raha tha jo use mil gya or vo yaha aagya.









B.H- ab bol kutte kya karu me tera Bapis bhej di tujhe. Hamesha ke liye. Jaha se aaya hai tu. Jahannum ki aag me.








Main2- achha hai tabhi me sochu ki tujh jaisa darpok yaha kaise aagya or khudse mujhe bula raha hai. Koi nhi udd le hawa me. Lekin ek baat yaad rakhna ki mera bhi time aayega.vo bhi jald hi. Tab tujhe ye contract bhi mujhse nhi bacha payega.






B.h- achha lekin agar tu yaha rahega hi nhi to kaise meri band bajayega.




Ye kehkar B.h ne us contract ko padna start kiya apni full voice me.


Or jaise hi last line padke shant hua baise hi rider ki aag achanak se shant padne lagi.



Or ye dekhke rider ek dum hairan reh gya. Rider ab dheere dheere surya me badalne laga tha.




Or aise hi dekhte hi dekhte rider puri tarah se surya me badal gya bahi surya ke andar se ek bada sa aag ka gola nikla or dur aasmaan me udd gya.




Or surya bahi behosh hone gir gya. Or ye sab dekhte hi B.h jor jor se hasne laga.





B.h- bada aaya mujhe maarne wala ab sad apni usi jahannum ki aag me. Or abujhe rokne wala koi nhi hai. Ab me amar hu.




Or jor jor se hasne lagam uski aawaj charo dishao me failne lagi.




Uske baad B.h ne apni sabhi buri shaktiyon ko aadesh diya charo taraf hahakaar machane ka. Or aisa bolte hi uske andar se 4 personality nikli jo dekhne me hi kaafi khatarnaak thi. Or charo dishao me fail gyi.




Or jaate hi apne apne kamo me lag gye. Logo ko darana unhe maarna sab kuch.





Bahi B.h ab vapis hell me nhi gya. Kyuki use prithvi pasand aayi thi. Ab vo yahi rehne wala tha. Kyuki na to use ab koi rokne wala tha na hi maarne wala.






Bahi surya ko karib 1 ghante baad hosh aaya



Maine apni haalat ko dekha or me hairan tha ki me yaha kya kar raha hu.me to bister me so raha tha.



Maine aaspass dekha to me is waqt usi jheel ke pass tha. Jise dekhke me or confuse ho gya.




Fir mujhe laga kahi me sapna to nhi dekh raha hu jaise hell king mujhe sapno me bulata tha. Isliye maine charo taraf aawaj lagai hell king ko lekin mujhe koi reply nhi mila.





Abhi me vaise hi baitha hua tha ki mere kaano me dev ki aawaj padi. To maine charo taraf dekha lekin mujhe vo dikhai nhi diya.





Dev- surya bahut badi gadbad ho gyi hai.





Main- kya hua. Or me yaha kaise aagya.






Dev- B.h aaya tha or usne tumse rider ki shaktiya cheen li hai. Or ab tum pehle jaise ban gye hi. Keval surya. Or isi ke sath B.h pehle se jyada takatvar bhi ho gya hai or usne apne chamcho ko sabhi prithvi per bhej diya hai halla machane ke liye.





Ye sunte hi mujhe laga tagda jhatka aisa laga jaise me koi bura sapna dekh raha hu.






Main- what. Lekin ye hua kaise.





Uske baad dev ne mujhe bataya ki kya hua kaise hua. Or sari baate sunne ke baad me to hairan hi reh gya. Mujhe samajh me nhi aaraha fha ki me kya karu kaise use roku.







Main- ab kya karu me. Kaise use roku. Rider tha tab tak me inki band baja sakta tha lekin ab to ye mere hatho me hi nhi aayenge.






Dev- ha me janta hu. Lekin tum fikr mat karo me hu tumhari help ke liye.






Main- kya help karoge meri. Ye bhi bata do.







Dev- mayus kyu ho rahe ho yaar.






Main- sach kahu na to me pak gya hu ye kaam karte karte. Ab vo maja nahi aaraha hai jo pehle aata tha. Ab to mujhe retire hona hai.







Dev- kya baat hai retire hoke kya karoge or.






Main- radha ko leke kahi dur pahadiyon me bas jaunga usko me bilkul bhi time nhi de pata hu. Ab apni puri life uske sath hi bitani hai.








Dev- or fir aise dushmano se kon ladega.





Main- nai peedi hai na. Maine unka jalwa dekha hai. Mujhe pura bharosa hai ki vo is jimmedari ko aasani se sambhal sakte hai.






Dev- ha baise ye baat to hai.






Main- bahi to.






Dev- theek hai. Is kaam ke Baad tum jo chaho kar lena. Lekin filhaal to tumhe inse nipatna hi padega. Kyuki or koi nhi hai jo ye kaam kar payega.







Main- ha to karunga hi. Ab batao kya karna hai or kaise karna hai.






Dev- theek hai suno. Tumhari sword hai na. Use apne dono hatho me pakado or 3 baar om namah shivaya bolo. Aisa karte hi tumhari sword normal nahi rahegi. Or tum usse B.h ko chhod ke uske baaki ke sabhi sathiyo ka nash kar paoge.







Main- or B.h ka kya hoga fir use kaise khatam karunga me







Dev- uska jab samay aayega tab me bata dunga filhaal sehro me faile aatank ko khatam karo. Chun chun kar niptaao ek ek ko. Or vanraj ko bhi le jaao sath.







Main- achha pakka aisa bolne se kaam hoga.






Dev- viswas rakho mahadev jarur apni kripa karenge tum per. Pure shraddha viswas or prem se bolna mahadev ka dhyan laga ke. Kaam jarur hoga.







Main- theek hai me kar lunga baise lagta hai tumhari help ki jarurat jald hi padegi.








Dev- jab padegi tab me tumhare samne hounga. Chinta mat karo. Filhaal ye karo or subah hone se pehle sabka Nash kardo. Baaki ka kaam baad me dekhenge.








Main- ok. Tum kehto ho to karta hu me. Chalo baad me baat karta hu me.





Ye kehkar line cut gyi hamari.




Or ab me bahi per baitha raha thodi der or sochne laga ki kya karu kaise karu.








Ab dekhte hai kya karta hai surya kya dev ne jo kaha hai vo sach hoga. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.
















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Jaise taise subah hui is waqt jeetu so raha tha or lagta nhi tha ki uski neend aaj jaldi khulne wali thi. Uske chehre per ek kushi chhai hui thi kyuki kal raat use vo mila jiski kalpana bhi usne nhi ki thi kabhi.




Bahi amar bhi gaav me tha or nidhi apne ghar per. Sab sahi se chal raha tha or aage bad raha tha.





Bahi black heart bhi apni sadhna me leen tha or surya ke aaram ke din chal rahe the. Halaki use sab khabar thi ki amar ki life me kya chal raha hai or kal yaha mumbai me kya hua hai. Kyuki Harry surya ke bina permission ke kuch bhi nhi karta hai. Surya ko puri jaankari hoti hai hai ki uske bache kab kya kar rahe hai or harry se kis prakaar ki madad lete hai.



Khair amar to bhul gya tha lekin surya ne Harry subah uthate hi Harry ko jeetu per najar rakhne ko bol diya tha kyuki surya jaanta tha ki jeetu itni aasani se sudharne walo mese nhi hai. Lekin kash surya ne raat me hi usper najar rakhne ko bol diya hota Harry ko. To kamse kam raat me hi uska kaam tamam ho jata. Lekin der aaye saber aaye. Abhi bhi jyada der nhi hui hai. Or abhi bhi mouka hai. Jeetu jaisa ladka power ke nashe me kuch na kuch galti to karega hi or jaise hi kuch galat karega Harry ko pata chal jayega or harry ko pata chala matlab surya ko pata chala. Or fir jeetu ko khair nhi.







Khair amar ne ashk avi or Samar ko bhi bataya ki kal kya hua tha or kisne kiya tha. Jise sunke sabhi ka para ek dum high ho gya tha. Lekin amar ke samjhane per vo log shant ho gye. Or mamle ko samajh bhi gye ki kyu amar ne usko kuch nhi kiya. Verna uske liye to amar akela hi kaafi tha.




Khair jaise taise sham hui or jeetu is waqt udaypur me tha jaisa usse takshak ne kaha tha. Vo apne samay per baha pahuch gya tha. Or takshak ka hi intjar kar raha tha. Or uska intjar bhi jaldi hi khatam ho gya. Kyuki takshak uske pass aagya tha.






Jeetu- ab batao kya karna hai mujhe.






Takshak- bataunga lekin pehle mujhe ye batao ki kisse puchh ke kal raat tumne vo sab kiya.







Jeetu- maine kya kiya.






Takshak- mujhse hoshiyari karne ki kosis bhi mat karna. Kyuki meri najar sab jagah hoti hai or mujhe achhe se pata hai kal raat tumne kya kiya hai.







Jeetu- ohh un ladkiyo ki baat kar rahe ho. Vo to bas apni powers ki testing kar raha tha me or kuch nhi.








Takshak- ha pata hai mujhe power ki testing kar rahe the ki apni hawas mita rahe the.







Jeetu- to usme aap itna hyper kyu ho rahe hai.








Takshak- tujhe abhi kuch nhi pata hai. Sehar me ek khukhar darinda ghum raha hai jo ham jaisi buri shaktiyon ko sungh kar unka khatma kar deta hai. Or agar use teri gandh aajati to kal raat hi tera kaam tamam ho jata fir ho jata tera badla pura.








Ye sunke jeetu thoda hairan hua.






Jeetu- aisa konsa darinda hai jisse aapki bhi fati padi hai.







Takshak- chinta mat kar tera saamna bhi usse jald hi ho jayega.
Fir tumhe bhi pata chal hi jayega ki vo kon hai or kya hai. Or kyu meri usse itni fat rahi hai.







Jeetu- theek hai abse nhi karunga aisa kuch bhi






Takshak- badiya hai. Yahi behtar hai tumhare liye. Ab chalo mere sath tumhare sikaar ke pass.






Jeetu- chalo me bahut exited hu.





Ye kehkar takshak ne jeetu ka hath pakada or agle hi sec vo log usi jheel ke pass jhadiye me pahuch gye.





Jeetu- ye kaha le aaye mujhe.






Takshak- ahhh ye dekho tumhara sikar tumhare saamne hai. Vo raha amar or uske bhai bahen. Tu agar chahe to uski bahen ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta hai meri taraf se chhut hai. Mujhe bas mera badla chahiye or isse tera badla bhi pura hoga.





Ye sunke jeetu ne Gour se ashk ko dekha or vo usi pal nidhi ko bhul gya. Uske muh se maar tapakne lagi.








Jeetu- ma kasam kya kadak maal hai. Isper to hajar nidhi kurban hai.







Ye sunke takshak hasne laga.




Takshak- tera kuch nahi ho sakta.
Chal shuru ho ja. Maar daal sabko. Baaki me yahi rahunga. Taaki agar tujhe madad ki jarurat pade to me kar saku.






Jeetu- theek hai.







Bahi Harry ye sab dekh raha tha. Or vo samajh gya tha ki kuch na kuch gadbad to jarur hai. Kyuki usne jeetu ke sath wale ki powers ko dekha isliye usne turant hi mujhe vo saari info di. Or me sunte hi bhaga gaav ke liye.







Bahi jeetu ek dum se amar ke saamne aagya.





Jeetu- kyu re bahut hoshiyar samajhta hai khud ko. Tujhe me nhi chhodne wala saale tune mere or nidhi ke beech duriya bana di.






Ye sunke amar or baaki sab ne peeche mud ke dekha.



Or jaise hi amar ne jeetu ko dekha uske hosh udd gye. Kyuki usne expect nhi kiya tha ki jeetu yaha tak pahuch jayega.





Amar- tu yaha kaise.







Jeetu- aagya me tujhe dhundte dhundte. Aaj tu nhi bachega.







Amar- marna hai kya. Bhag ja yahan se. Vo nidhi ka bhai hai tu isliye abhi tak apne pairo per khada hai verna vo haalat karta teri ki agle 7 janam tak langda paida hota tu. Or itna sab hone ke baad bhi teri akal thikane per nhi aai jo yaha tak chala aaya.








Jeetu- meri akal thikane per hi hai. Or achha hua jo me yaha aagya ab nidhi ke sath teri bahen ko bhi me apna banaunga. Vakai me kya kamal ki cheez hai.






Itna bolna tha ki use ek jordaar kick lagi jisse uska thoda santulan bigad gya lekin vo gira nhi. Ye kick thi amar ki.






Jeetu- dum nhi laga rahe ho tum. Thoda or jor lagao.





Ye kehkar jeetu ek dum adig amar ke saamne khada ho gya.




Bahi amar ne ek jordaar punch mara unke seene me dil ke just uper.




Or is punch ko jeetu sayad hi kabhi bhul paaye. Kyuki agar usne powers nhi hoti to is punch se uska raam naam satya ho hi jata. Lekin uski powers ne uski jaan bacha ki lekin use girne se nhi bacha paya. Bahi jeetu ko bahut jor se laga ye punch. Jisse vo ek dum se bokhla sa gya. Use yakeen nhi hua ki amar me itni takat hai. Or use is baat per yakeen ho gya ki ye koi aam insan to nhi hai matlab takshak sahi keh raha tha.




Bahi use kya pata ki amar to normal hi hai. Ye jo power uske hatho me hai ye use virasat me mili hai apne purkho se.







Amar- ab aaya maja. Beta bhale hi tu strong ho bahut lekin ek baat yaad rakhna ki ye hath bhi kam nhi hai.






Jeetu- bakai me bahut dum hai I'm hatho me.





Ye kehkar jeetu khada hua.



Or usne achanak se apni aankho se lazor nikalna shuru kar diya. Bahi amar ne furti dikhate hue apni position badli or uski lazor se bach gya. Bahi avi Samar ashk or varsha bhi yaha baha ho gye kyuki lazor un per bhi nishana laga rahi thi.





Bahi lazor ke jameen se takrane se neeche ki ghaas or ped vagera jal gye the.





Bahi is waqt jeetu ki najar dusro per thi isliye usne jeetu ke peeche jaake jump maarke apne ghutne ki maar uski peeth per maari jisse vo jhuk gya.





Bahi uski anakho se lazor nikalna band ho gya. Isi mouke ka fayeda utha kar Samar ne ek jordaar kick uski naak per maari jisse vo ulti gulati khate hue jameen per pasar gya.




Ye mouka dekhke amar me uski garden ko daboch liya apne hatho me. Or jor se daba diya. Amar ne apna pura dabav uski peeth per banaya hua tha jisse vo uth nhi pa raha tha. Uske keval hath hi khule hue the. Jinka vo pura jor laga raha tha. Uthne ke liye. To Samar ne uske hatho ko pakad kar daba liya. Ab vo keval tadap hi raha tha. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki vo kya kare kaise is qaid se aazad ho.






Yaha jeetu me saaf kami dikh rahi thi technique ki. Bhale hi insan ke pass power ho. Lekin agar uske pass un power ko istemaal karne ki technique nhi hai to vo koi jung nhi jeet sakta. Bahi amar or Samar bachpan se hi self defence ki training lete aarahe hai. Unhe pata hai ki kisko kaise kabu karna hai.







Bahi dur se me bhi ye najara dekh raha tha or kush ho raha tha ki kaise bacho ne usko kabu kar liya.







Amar- bol haramjade. Maja aaya.






Jeetu- maja to aaya lekin jyada nhi.




Ye kehkar jeetu ne apna pura jor laga diya or ek dum se khada ho gya. Bahi is jor se amar or Samar dono hi alag alag disha me udte hue dur ja gire.





Jeetu- ab maja aaya kamino.






Ye kehkar vo sabse pehle amar ke pass gya speed se. Or usne amar ko utha liya or jor se jameen per patak diya. Bahi tab tak Samar or avi dono hi jeetu ke pass aaye or usper hamla karne lage lekin abki baar vo apni speed ka pura istemaal kar raha tha. Jis bajah se avi or Samar ke har baar khali ja rahe the.





Bahi takshak ye sab dekhke bahut kush ho raha tha. Use apna plan anjaam tak pahuchta hua najar aaraha tha. Lekin use ye nhi pata tha ki uska baap uske aas pass hi moujud hai.








Abki baar bazi puri tarah se palat gyi thi. Kyuki jeetu akela hi teeno per bhari pad raha tha. Or iska kaaran keval itna tha ki jeetu apni super power ka istemaal kar raha tha. Bahi ye teeno apni normal power ka istemaal kar rahe the.






Jeetu ne teeno ki hi haalat tight kar rakhi thi. Lekin the to sabhi surya ke hi bache. Or is bajah se jeetu unhe jeet nhi pa raha tha. Kyuki girte hi vo fir se khade ho rahe the. Or is bajah se jeetu kaafi frustrate ho raha tha.




Bahi avi samajh gya tha ki ye aise control me nhi aayega isliye usne apne mobile me kuch kiya or lete lete hi wait karne laga.





Tabhi sabhi ko najar aasmaan me gyi jaha se kuch udta hua jameen per aa raha tha. Use dekhke aisa lag raha tha jaise vo koi ulka pind ho. Kyuki uski speed bahut tez thi.





Bahi avi ke chehre per smile aai or vo jaldi se khada hua. Or jeetu ki taraf bhaga apni speed se




Bahi vo udti hui cheez avi se takarai lekin isse avi ko kuch fark nhi pada. Balki avi ke charo taraf usne ek kavach ka aakar le liya. Like iron man. Avi abhi bhi douda hua hi ja raha tha.or isi beech avi puri tarah se iron man ban gya tha.




Bahi ye najar baha moujud sabhi ne dekha or dekhte hi jeetu ko chhodke sabhi ke chehre per hasi aagyi. Or sabne apna matha peet liya. Kyuki vo aaj real me iron man dekh rahe the. Or avi ke dimaag ki daad de rahe the. Ashk ne jordaar seeti bajai avi ke liye.



Bahi jeetu ek dum se hairan tha. Use laga kahi Tony stark sach me to yaha nhi aagya. Vo thoda hairan pareshan sa bahi per khada raha. Or isi beeche use ek jabardast punch laga jiski bajah se vo udta hua dur ja girne laga. Tabhi avi ne apne hatho se power generate ki or jeetu ke uper use chhodna start kar diya.





Bhale hi jeetu ka sarir bajr jaisa kathor ho lekin arc reactor ki power ka jabardast prahar laga use. Jisse uske sarir per kai jagah jalne ke nishan aagye.





Bahi dur se jab maine ye seen dekha to mere bhi hosh udd gye or mere chehre per bhi hasi aagyi.



Or takshak ne jab ye dekha to uska haal bhi jeetu jaisa hi tha. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye aakhir hai kya. Ye kis tarah ki power hai.







Khair aage dekhte hai avi or kya kya kaarname karta hai.

















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UPDATE - 94













avi- khada ho kameene. Tujhe batata hu aaj ki ham akhir me cheez kya hai.







Ye sunke jeetu jo thoda jhakmi hua tha dheere dheere khada hua. Uske ghaav nhi bhare the. Na hi bharne wale the. Kyuki uske pass ye power thi hi nhi.







Jeetu khada hua or apne aap dekha. Use khud ke ghav dikhe jisse usko gussa aane lagi.


Or usne jordaar lazor avi per chhodi.



Bahi avi ready tha iske liye. Vo hawa me udd gya or jor se uske muh per punch mara or vo sambhalta usse pehle hi usne uske thobde per kai baar kiye. Or apna panja pura jhalke uske thobde per rakh diya or jor se apni power ka jhatka uske thobde per diya. Ye jhatka use bahut jor se laga uska pura thobda isme sulag gya. Or vo dard me tadapane laga. Or jameen per apna chehra pakad kar let gya. Bahi avi ne agla baar kiya uske main part per. Jaha bhi use tagda jhatka laga.




Aisa lag raha tha jaise jeetu ki powers uska sath chhodne lagi hai. Kyuki use ab bahut dard ho raha tha. Uska sarir kamjor sa padta ja raha tha.







Takshak bhi ye sab dekh raha tha or vo samajh gya tha ki ye jyada der tak nhi tikega isliye ab usne saamne jaane ka Faisla kiya. Bahar jaane se pehle use sabhi jagah dekha jab use dur dur tak koi dikhai nhi diya to vo bahar aaya.





Or vo chupke se ashk ke peechhe gya or use daboch liya




Takshak- ruk jaao chhod do use. Verna iska kaam tamam karne me mujhe jara bhi der nhi lagegi.





Ye aawaj sunte hi sabhi ne oechhe mud ke dekha or sabhi ki aankhe fati ki fati reh gyi. Kyuki takshak is waqt aadhe insan or aadhe naag ke rup me tha. Usne ashk ko garden se pakad rakha tha.or uska rup bakai me bahut bada or vishal tha.






amar- ab ye kya nai musibat hai. Sala ye ho kya raha hai. Ye lounda apni aankho se lazor nikaal raha hai. Or ye tuchhadhari naag








Samar- dekh ashk se dur hatja. Verna itne tukde karunga ki agle are janam tere unko batorne me hi nikal jayenge. Dur hat.






Ye Lalkaar aisi thi ki koi kamjor hota to mut deta. Kuch had tak to takshak bhi hill gya lekin usne jaldi hi khud ko sambhala








Takshak- bache ye ruabb idhar nahi kaam aayega. Mere aadmi ko chhod do me isko chhod dunga.






Samar- hamne use pakada hi nhi to chhodenge kya. Vo dala hai neeche ise utha or nikal le yaha se. Verna sach me aaj tera aakhiri din hoga. Tu janta nhi tune kitni badi galti ki hai ashk per hath dalke. Uske papa ko jaanta hai na.







Takshak- ha janta hu surya ko. Or usne jitna hamara nuksan kiya hai uske badle ye chhota sa tohfa kaafi hoga uski bharpai ke liye.







Itni der me jeetu thoda normal ho gya tha.



Or is mouke ka fayeda usne uthaya or pechhe se avi per lazor chhod di. Lazor ka asar avi ke suit per bahut hi kam ho raha tha. Vibranium se jo bana tha uska suit. Lekin iska impact ise jarur mehsus hua kyuki vo aage ko thoda pressure se chala gya or jameen per let gya. Bahi jeetu ne lazor ko band nhi kiya or chhodta hi raha avi per.





Bahi ye sab dekh ke ashk ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha. Uski anakho ke saamne uske bhaiyo ki halat patli ho rahi ho vo kaise dekh sakti hai ye sab.




In sab me varsha per kisi ka dhyan hi nhi gya. Kyuki vo pehle hi ghar chali gyi thi amar ke papa ko bulane ke liye. Kyuki vo samajh gyi thi ki yaha mamla bigadne wala hai. Kyuki jeetu lazor chhod raha tha aankho se.



Or vo is waqt ghar pahuch hi gyi thi. Or use bahar hi veer ki car dikh gyi jisme baithke vo office se ghar aaya tha or car se nikal hi raha tha.







Varsha- uncle pls jaldi chaliye mere. Sath.





Bahi veer ne jab varsha ki aisi haalat dekhi to vo hairan ho gya.




Veer- shant ho jaao or batao kya hua tum itna haff kyu rahi ho. Baaki sab kaha hai.






Varsha- uncle jheel ke kinare kisi anjaan shakti ne hamla kiya hai. Ek ladka aaya hai amar se ladne jo apni aankho se lazor chhod raha hai. Vo normal nhi hai. Isse pehle kuch galat ho jaaye pls chaliye.





Ye sunke veer ka matha ghum gya. Usne varsha ko bahi rukne ko kaha or use andar bhej diya. Bahi amar tez raftar se doudta hua jheel ke pass jaane laga.




Abhi jheel ke pass pahuchne hi wala tha ki maine veer ko raste me hi rok liya




Or mujhe dekhke veer ki jaan me jaan aai.





Veer- hai vo jheel kinare kya ho raha hai.






Main- aao dikhata hu.




Main bhai ko leke usi jagah aaya jaha se me ab tak sab dekh raha tha.




Main- vo dekhiye bache kaise baha duri se unka mukabla kar rahe hai.






Bhai- tu pagal hai kya unki madad karne kyu nhi gya tu.






Main- bhai me yaha isiliye to ruka hua hu. Taaki waqt padne per unki madad kar saku. Lekin bache itni bahaduri or akalmandi se unhe sambhal rahe hai ki baha jaane ka man hi nhi kar raha hai. Or dusri baat unko aiso se nipatne ka abhyas karna chahiye kya pata kab iski noubat sajaye. Ye samajh lo unki traning chal rahi hai.







Bhai- achha. Baise ye ladka hai kon. Or ye aadha naag kon hai.





Main- ye ladka aapki hone wali bahu ka aashiq hai. Or iska pata nhi sayad black heart ka koi samarthak hoga.







Ye sunke bhai choukee




Bhai- kya kaha tune. Meri bahu.






Main- ha bhai amar ki gf ka aashiq hai. Kal iski band bajai amar ne aaj ye uska badla lene aagya powers ke sath. Or i m sure ye powers use is aadhe naag ne hi di hongi.







Bhai- badiya hai. Baise ab kya karne ka irada hai ashk ko pakad liya hai usne.






Main- bahi me dekhna chahta hu ki is situation ko kaise ye log handle karte hai.








Bhai- ok dekhte hai.










Ashk ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha. Use samajh nhi aaraha tha ki kya kare or kaise kare. Takshak ka hath uske muh ke ekdum pass tha isliye usne usne hath me jor se kaat liya. Or is achanak kaatne se takshak ki cheekh nikal gyi or uski pakad bhi dheeli hogyi ashk per or isi ka fayeda utha kar ashk takshak ke changul se aazad ho gyi. Or ek pathar usne uthaya or nishana laga kar use fel diya. Or vo pathar super speed se jeetu ki aankh me ghus gya. Or me sach kahunga uski ek aankh kaam se chali gyi. Or jeetu is dard me tadapane laga. Bahi teeno ne is mouke ka fayeda uthaya. Avi udd ke gya takshak ke pass to baaki dono ne jeetu ko pakad liya. Or Samar ne apni ungli se uski dusri aankh bhi fod daali. Jisse jeetu dard me tilbila gya. Use itna dard ho raha tha jiski koi seema nhi tha.







Bahi dusri taraf avi udta hua takshak ki taraf gya bahi beech beech me takshak apni puchh se ji ki kaafi lumbi thi avi ko maarne ki kosis kar raha tha lekin avi kaafi fast tha or uske har ek war se bach ke vo us tak pahuch hi gya or apne dono hatho ko aage karke ek sath usper energy ko chhoda or iska tagda jhatka laga usko. Or vo flat jameen per let gya. Bahi avi ne apne arm se ek sword banai or jor se uske pet per gira jisse us sword ne uske 2 tukde kar diye.






Lekin iska asar jyada nhi hua kyuki ab takshak apne insani rup me aagya tha. Or uske hatho me bhi ek sword thi.






Takshak- kya baat hai tin ke dibbe. Ab dikha kitna dum hai.





Ye kehkar usne uchhal kar avi per hamla kiya lekin avi ne hawa me hi use ek kick masti or vo is prahaar se dur ja gira.



Uske girte hi avi hawa me hi punch ki position leke tezi se neeche uske thobde ki taraf gya.



Bahi takshak samajh gya ki ab kya hone wala hai isliye vi jaldi se move kar gya or avi ka punch uski jagah jameen me dhas gya.



Avi jaldi se khada hua or usne ek chhoti si missile takshak ke uper nishana laga kar chhod di. Takshak kuch samajhta usse pehle hi vo missile usse takta gyi or ek tez dhamaka sabhi ke kaano me gunja.



Charo taraf dhua or aag dikhne lagi.





Avi isme thoda carefree hogya tabhi achanak se use ek jordaar kick lagi or vo udta hua thodi dur girne hi wala tha ki usne beech hawa me udna shuru kar diya or full speed se udta hua gya or ek or jhatka mara energy ka. Jisse vo thodi dur ja gira.





Bahi dusri taraf jeetu ka kaam to almost tamam hi hi gya tha. Uski dono aankhe foot chuki thi. Or vo dard me behosh ho chuka tha. Bahi baaki ke teeno log bas in dono ki fight dekh rahe the. Unhe samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki akhir ye fight jeet kon raha hai or is naag ka kaise ant hoga.






Bahi takshak ka bhi dimaag kharab ho raha tha kyuki usper ye bacha bhari pad raha hai. Na hi use jeetne de raha tha balki ulta usi ki band baja raha tha.





Isliye usne apni power ka istemaal karne ka socha or usne apni talvar ko hath me pakda or apne hatho ko joda. Bahi avi or baaki dekhne lage ki ye kya kar raha hai.





Bahi takshak ne kuch mantra pade or apna muh khola. Or uske muh kholte hi uske muh se kuch nikalne laga kuch dhua type or charo taraf failne laga.


Or itna Ghana failne laga ki khud ke hath bhi na dikhe kisi dusre ko dekhne ki baat to chhod hi do.










Ab dekhte hai is dhuye me kya karta hai takshak or surya or veer kab tak aise dekhte hai is fight ko.


Or avi or baaki kaise is takshak ko harate hai.

















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[SameerK]

UPDATE - 95














us dhuye ki bajah se sabko dikhna lagbhag band hi ho gya tha.




Samar- ye kya kar raha hai ye kuch dikhai hi nhi de raha hai.






Ashk- lagta hai ye mayabi ki koi chaal hai dhuye ka aad me hamla karega ye. Avi sambhal kar rehna.






Avi- ok.




Avi apne suit ke andar tha. Or use sab dikh raha tha thoda thoda hi sahi. Use dhua hi dikh raha tha. Lekin uska AI system takshak ko detect kar raha tha. Vo jaha bhi move karta use vo dikh raha tha jaate hue.





Avi- tu to bada darpok nikla yaar. Ab chhip kar war karega tu. Saale ja apni mummy ke anchal me chhip ja or aainda yaha aana bhi mat.







Takshak- beta pyar or jung me sab kuch jayaz hota hai ye baat aaj me tumhe sikh dunga.





Ye baat khatam hui or avi ko ek jor ka jhatka laga. Or vo udta hua thodi dur ja gira.




Girte hi avi fir se khada hua. Or usne charo taraf use dekhna start kiya. Lekin ab vo use nhi dikh raha tha. Avi use detect nhi kar pa raha tha.







Bhai- i think ab hame chalna chahiye kahi ye mayabi kuch anhoni na kar de.






Main- theek hai bhai bacho ko itni traning kafi hai. Lekin aap yahi rahiye. Kyuki abhi aapke saamne ek tufaan aane wala hai. Isliye aap mujhse dur hi rahe.





Bhai- kaisa tufaan.





Main- abhi pata chal jayega. Bas dekhte jaiye.





Andhera bhi ho gya tha uper se dhua isliye takshak kisi ko bhi nhi dikh raha tha.




Or maine bhi apne kadam aage badhaye unki taraf.




Or jaise jaise me unke pass pahuch raha tha meri jalan badti ja rahi thi. Or iska matlab saaf tha ki rider aane wala hai bahar. Or yahi mujhe chahiye tha.




Jaise hi me dhuye ki andar ghusa mera rup puri tarah se ek dum badal gya. Or me rider me tabdeel ho gya.





Uske baad rider ne apna muh khola or saas ko andar kheechna start kiya. Or aisa karte hi sara dhua rider muh me ghusne laga aas pass jitna bhi dhua tha vo sara rider me andar ghus gya.




Or dhuye ke hat te hi sabko takshak dikhne laga jo is waqt avi per peeche se hamla karne hi wala tha.



Lekin usne ab tak rider ko nhi dekha tha. Or jab usne one dhuye ko gayab hote dekha to vo puri tarah se hairan reh gya.




Bahi avi or baaki sabne bhi ye karishma dekha. Or fir sabki najar takshak per gyi. Avi ki bhi.



To avi ne foran hi palat kar takshak ka hath pakada or dusre hath se use garden se utha diya or jor se jameen per patak diya.






Main2- bacho dur hath jaao usse ye mera sikaar hai.





Ye aawaj sunke sabhi ka dhyan rider per gya. Or use dekhte hi sabhi sabhi ke char kadam peeche ko hath gye. Bahi dur se veer ne jab ye najara dekha to uske bhi hosh udd gye. Kyuki use pata tha ki ye surya hi hai. Lekin use ye nhi pata tha ki ye surya aisa kaise ho gya or kyu.







Bahi jab takshak ne rider ko dekha to uski bhi sitti pitti gul ho gyi. Use samajh me nahi aaya ki ye yaha kaise aagya.




Bahi veer ko laga ki kahi bache rider per hamla na kar de isliye vo bhi baha aaya or usne sabse pehle Samar amar or ashk ko ik side chalne ko kaha vo jabardasti unhe baha se le gya. Ab keval avi hi baha bacha hua tha.




Rider ne apni najar takshak per lagai or aage badhna start kiya.



Bahi takshak ne pechhe ki taraf khisakna.




Bahi avi bhi ye sab dekhke side ko ho gya. Vo bhi dekhna chahta tha ki akhir hota kya hai.





Avi ke side hote hi rider ek hi jhatke me takshak ke pass pahuch gya.





Main2- teri mout ab aachuki hai dekh meri aankho me.





Ye sunte hi takshak ki aankhe seedhi ja mili rider ki aankho se. Or uski anakho me dekhte hi uski cheekhe nikalne lagi. Or use dikhne laga ki aaj tak usne kya kya kiya hai kis kis ko pareshan kiya hai kis kis ko mara hai sab kuch. Khaskar jabse vo black heart ki sangat me aaya tab se.






Thodi hi der me takshak ki haalat aisi ho gyi jaise kisi jale bhune kabab ki haalat hoti hai. Uska pura chehra or pura sarir bhun gya rider ki agni me. Or uske pran pakheru bhi udd gye isi me.




Uska sikaar karne ke baad rider gya jeetu ki taraf jo abhi bhi behosh hi pada hua tha.



Bahi jab sabne us takshak ki haalat dekhi to dekhte hi reh gye unhe samajh me hi nhi aaya ki ye kya hua kaise hua or kyu hua. Vo sabhi hairan the ki akhir ye hai kya cheez jisne bina kuch kiye hi iski band baja di.






Khair rider ne jeetu ko hawa me uthaya or apna muh khol kar uski soul ko chus liya. Or uske bejaan sarir ko bahi chhod diya. Jo neeche girte hi pal bhar me sad gya.




Or is tarah dono ka hi kaam tamam ho gya. Vo bhi itni aasani se jitna kisi ne socha bhi nhi tha.





Uske baad rider ne sab jagah dekha or sunghne laga lekin use kahi se bhi buraai ki gandh nhi aai. To haar kar use vapis jana pada. Or uske Bapis jaane ka matlab hai surya ka Bapis aana.





Or baha moujud charo bacho or veer sabhi ne ye najara dekha ki kaise rider Bapis se surya me badla. Or jab unke saamne surya aaya to unki hairangi ka koi thikana hi nhi tha. Vi sabhi hairan pareshan sa ek tak surya ko hi dekh rahe the.



Or main is waqt jameen per peeth ke bal leta hua tha or apni saaso ko control karne ki kosis kar raha tha.






Tabhi bhai mere pass aaye.




Bhai- ye sab kya tha. Tu aisa kaise badal gya mujhe batayega





Main- bhai ye sab hell king ka diya gya tohfa hai. Aise danavo se nipatne ke liye. Or isi ki madad se vikraal uske sathi or bhi kai jano ko me thikane laga chuka hu. Vo bhi bahut hi aasani se. Mere us rup ke aage kisi ki ek nhi chalti hai. Aapne dekha hi hoga kya hua abhi.








Bhai- lekin aisa kabse hai tu. Or tune hame bataya kyu nhi.






Main- bhai yaha aane ka mouka hi nhi mil raha tha. Aapko to pata hai me mumbai me hi reh raha hu. Itne dino se. Isiliye bata nhi paya. Socha tha bata dunga jab mouka milega or aaj mouka mil gya to bata diya.







Ashk- mujhe to dar lagne laga tha vo akhir tha kya.






Main- pata nhi lekin hoga koi black heart ka samarthak hi. Chhodo ab uski charcha. Baise amar aaj kal bahut baate chhipane lage ho tum hamse.





Ye sunte hi amar ne apni mundi neeche kar li.





Amar- sorry chachu. Vo mujhe pata nhi tha ki mamla itna bad jayega or ye aisi powers leke yaha ladne aajayega. Mujhe laga normal insan hai isko to ham sambhal hi sakte hai. Or aap sabhi bhi kitne hi kaamo me busy rehte hai isliye aapko disturb nhi karna chahte the.





Bhai- achha ab to ye bade ho gye hai surya apne liye ladkiya bhi dhund ki hai in logo ne. Apni to ab inhen koi jarurat hi nhi hai.






Avi- baise bade papa ham dono ne aisa nhi kiya hai. Isliye hame inse dur hi rakhe.



Ye kehkar avi ek side ko ho gya or uske sath ashk bhi.






Main- ha baise ye baat to hai lekin dekhte hai kab tak tum dono akele rehte hai






Ashk- ham nahi dhundne wale aap hi dhund lena hamare liye.






Main- dekhte hai. Baise avi ye suit kab banaya bataya bhi nhi tumne.






Avi- dad ye suit aise hi kisi mouke ke liye banaya tha usi robo ke sath. Or dekho aaj kaam aagya na.






Main- baise ek baat kahu. I m really proud of you all. Kya bahaduri se lade hai aaj aap sabhi. Maja hi aagya dekhke.






Ashk- baise aap aaye kab the dad.






Main- me to fight shuru hone se pehle hi aagya tha jaise hi jeetu yaha pahucha tha uske peeche me bhi aagya tha. Or tabhi se dekh raha hu yaha kya kya hua hai.







Samar- varsha kaha hai in sab me usper to dhyan hi nhi gya mera.




Ye sunte hi charo varsha ko dekhne lage.





Bhai- ghabrao mat vo ghar per hai. Vo ye sab shuru hote hi ghar per mujhe bulane aagyi thi. Kyuki use laga yaha mamla kaafi bigad sakta hai. Kyuki jeetu lazor chhod raha tha.






Main- usne vakai samajhdari se kaam liya inlogo ki tarah nhi ki khud hi ulajh pade.





Bhai- ha Verna hame pata hi nhi chalta ki yaha akhir kya chal raha hai. Or bhagwan na kare agar kisi ko kuch ho jata to.






Main- khair aisi noubat aane hi nhi wali thi. Kyuki me to tha hi yaha per. Me to bas dekh raha tha ki kab tak ye log inko sambhalte hai. Khair ab niklo ghar per. Me jata hu vapis mumbai.






Bhai- khana kha ke jaana chal ghar sabse mil bhi lena. Kitno dino se kisi ne shakal bhi nhi dekhi hai teri.




Sabhi ne bola to me bhi unke sath ghar ke liye nikal gya.








Ab dekhte hai kya hota hai aage.

















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Excellent update bhai