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Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

Sandeep singh nirwan

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Rider or B.h aamne saamne khade hue the.bahi B.h man hi man muskura raha tha kyuki use pura bharosa tha ki uska idea kaam jarur karega. Bahi rider soch raha tha ki jarur daal me kuch kala hai. Ye yaha is tarah aaya hai matlab saaf hai kuch soch samajh kar hi aaya hoga.





Dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe the. Tabhi rider ne pehla haml kiya or apni sword ko seedha feka B.h ki taraf. Or B.h kuch samajhta usse pehle hi vo uske seene me ghus gyi. Puri sword aag me dehak rahi thi. Or uske andar basi hui aatmaye us aag me jalne lagi thi. Vo chilla rahi thi.






Lekin agle hi pal B.h baha se gayab ho gya. Or rider ko sword bahi neeche gir gyi.






Ye dekhke rider puri tarah hairan tha. Ki ye kya ho gya. Or kaise. Ye bach kaise gya.




Tabhi rider ke pechhe se aawaj aai.






B.h- tumhare ye hathkande mujh per kaam nhi karne wale.






Main2- kyu tu buraai ka prateek hai. Or me buraai ka khatma karne wala fir kaise tu bacha.







Ye sunke B.h ne apni jeb se ek contract nikala.




B.H- ye yaad hai tujhe.



Ye kehkar usne us contract ko khol liya.





Ye dekhke rider soch me pad gya.






B.H- kaho to pad ke batau. Kya likha hai isme.




Ye ek contract tha jo hell king ne rider ko banate samay banaya tha. Or isme saaf saaf likha tha ki jiske pass ye contract rahega rider usko kabhi bhi nuksaan nhi pahucha payega. Or agar contract wala chahe to rider ko hamesha ke liye vapis bhi bhej sakta hai. Lekin isme ek or baat likhi hai ki contract wala rider ko control nhi kar sakta hai. Matlab vo rider ka istemaal apne fayede ke liye nhi kar sakta hai.




Or us book me yahi likha hua tha. Or B.h sadhna me baithke isi contract ko dhund raha tha jo use mil gya or vo yaha aagya.









B.H- ab bol kutte kya karu me tera Bapis bhej di tujhe. Hamesha ke liye. Jaha se aaya hai tu. Jahannum ki aag me.








Main2- achha hai tabhi me sochu ki tujh jaisa darpok yaha kaise aagya or khudse mujhe bula raha hai. Koi nhi udd le hawa me. Lekin ek baat yaad rakhna ki mera bhi time aayega.vo bhi jald hi. Tab tujhe ye contract bhi mujhse nhi bacha payega.






B.h- achha lekin agar tu yaha rahega hi nhi to kaise meri band bajayega.




Ye kehkar B.h ne us contract ko padna start kiya apni full voice me.


Or jaise hi last line padke shant hua baise hi rider ki aag achanak se shant padne lagi.



Or ye dekhke rider ek dum hairan reh gya. Rider ab dheere dheere surya me badalne laga tha.




Or aise hi dekhte hi dekhte rider puri tarah se surya me badal gya bahi surya ke andar se ek bada sa aag ka gola nikla or dur aasmaan me udd gya.




Or surya bahi behosh hone gir gya. Or ye sab dekhte hi B.h jor jor se hasne laga.





B.h- bada aaya mujhe maarne wala ab sad apni usi jahannum ki aag me. Or abujhe rokne wala koi nhi hai. Ab me amar hu.




Or jor jor se hasne lagam uski aawaj charo dishao me failne lagi.




Uske baad B.h ne apni sabhi buri shaktiyon ko aadesh diya charo taraf hahakaar machane ka. Or aisa bolte hi uske andar se 4 personality nikli jo dekhne me hi kaafi khatarnaak thi. Or charo dishao me fail gyi.




Or jaate hi apne apne kamo me lag gye. Logo ko darana unhe maarna sab kuch.





Bahi B.h ab vapis hell me nhi gya. Kyuki use prithvi pasand aayi thi. Ab vo yahi rehne wala tha. Kyuki na to use ab koi rokne wala tha na hi maarne wala.






Bahi surya ko karib 1 ghante baad hosh aaya



Maine apni haalat ko dekha or me hairan tha ki me yaha kya kar raha hu.me to bister me so raha tha.



Maine aaspass dekha to me is waqt usi jheel ke pass tha. Jise dekhke me or confuse ho gya.




Fir mujhe laga kahi me sapna to nhi dekh raha hu jaise hell king mujhe sapno me bulata tha. Isliye maine charo taraf aawaj lagai hell king ko lekin mujhe koi reply nhi mila.





Abhi me vaise hi baitha hua tha ki mere kaano me dev ki aawaj padi. To maine charo taraf dekha lekin mujhe vo dikhai nhi diya.





Dev- surya bahut badi gadbad ho gyi hai.





Main- kya hua. Or me yaha kaise aagya.






Dev- B.h aaya tha or usne tumse rider ki shaktiya cheen li hai. Or ab tum pehle jaise ban gye hi. Keval surya. Or isi ke sath B.h pehle se jyada takatvar bhi ho gya hai or usne apne chamcho ko sabhi prithvi per bhej diya hai halla machane ke liye.





Ye sunte hi mujhe laga tagda jhatka aisa laga jaise me koi bura sapna dekh raha hu.






Main- what. Lekin ye hua kaise.





Uske baad dev ne mujhe bataya ki kya hua kaise hua. Or sari baate sunne ke baad me to hairan hi reh gya. Mujhe samajh me nhi aaraha fha ki me kya karu kaise use roku.







Main- ab kya karu me. Kaise use roku. Rider tha tab tak me inki band baja sakta tha lekin ab to ye mere hatho me hi nhi aayenge.






Dev- ha me janta hu. Lekin tum fikr mat karo me hu tumhari help ke liye.






Main- kya help karoge meri. Ye bhi bata do.







Dev- mayus kyu ho rahe ho yaar.






Main- sach kahu na to me pak gya hu ye kaam karte karte. Ab vo maja nahi aaraha hai jo pehle aata tha. Ab to mujhe retire hona hai.







Dev- kya baat hai retire hoke kya karoge or.






Main- radha ko leke kahi dur pahadiyon me bas jaunga usko me bilkul bhi time nhi de pata hu. Ab apni puri life uske sath hi bitani hai.








Dev- or fir aise dushmano se kon ladega.





Main- nai peedi hai na. Maine unka jalwa dekha hai. Mujhe pura bharosa hai ki vo is jimmedari ko aasani se sambhal sakte hai.






Dev- ha baise ye baat to hai.






Main- bahi to.






Dev- theek hai. Is kaam ke Baad tum jo chaho kar lena. Lekin filhaal to tumhe inse nipatna hi padega. Kyuki or koi nhi hai jo ye kaam kar payega.







Main- ha to karunga hi. Ab batao kya karna hai or kaise karna hai.






Dev- theek hai suno. Tumhari sword hai na. Use apne dono hatho me pakado or 3 baar om namah shivaya bolo. Aisa karte hi tumhari sword normal nahi rahegi. Or tum usse B.h ko chhod ke uske baaki ke sabhi sathiyo ka nash kar paoge.







Main- or B.h ka kya hoga fir use kaise khatam karunga me







Dev- uska jab samay aayega tab me bata dunga filhaal sehro me faile aatank ko khatam karo. Chun chun kar niptaao ek ek ko. Or vanraj ko bhi le jaao sath.







Main- achha pakka aisa bolne se kaam hoga.






Dev- viswas rakho mahadev jarur apni kripa karenge tum per. Pure shraddha viswas or prem se bolna mahadev ka dhyan laga ke. Kaam jarur hoga.







Main- theek hai me kar lunga baise lagta hai tumhari help ki jarurat jald hi padegi.








Dev- jab padegi tab me tumhare samne hounga. Chinta mat karo. Filhaal ye karo or subah hone se pehle sabka Nash kardo. Baaki ka kaam baad me dekhenge.








Main- ok. Tum kehto ho to karta hu me. Chalo baad me baat karta hu me.





Ye kehkar line cut gyi hamari.




Or ab me bahi per baitha raha thodi der or sochne laga ki kya karu kaise karu.








Ab dekhte hai kya karta hai surya kya dev ne jo kaha hai vo sach hoga. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.
















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Me bahi per baitha hua tha. Or usi me subah ke char baj gye the.




Tabhi maine socha ab jo hoga dekha jayega filhaal bahi karta hu jo dev ne kaha hai.





Maine bahi per apni paalthi mari or apne dono hathon ko jod ke baith gya. Or meditation karne laga. Kyuki sabse pehle man shant karna jyada jaruri tha.




Thodi der dhyan me baithne se man ek dum shant ho gya.



Uske baad maine apni sword apne hatho me uthai sabse pehle usko pranaam kiya uske baad maine use apne dono hatho se pakda or apni aankho ko band kiya or mahadev ka dhyan lagaya.





Or jab mere man me mahadev ki chhabi aane lagi to maine Om Namah Shivaya ka jaap kiya


3 baar jaisa dev ne kaha tha.







Or jaise hi mera teesri baar jaap purn hua. Aasaman me jor ki bijali kadki jisse mera dhyan tut gya or meri aankhe khul gyi.







Or achha hi hua jo aankhe khul gyi kyuki ye najara me sayad hi kabhi dekh pata.







Aasaman se seedhi bijli meri talvar per gir rahi thi. Vo bhi lagatar. Meri talvar lagatar chamak rahi thi. Or us bijli ka asar mujhper kuch bhi nhi ho raha tha.




Karib 2 min. Tak lagatar bijli girti rahi sword per. Or achanak se gayab ho gyi fir.




Bijli ke gayab hone ke baad. Meri taralvar alag hi chamak rahi thi. Usme se bhayankar bijli ka prabaah beh raha tha. Or mere dekhte hi dekhte vo prabaah band ho gya tha. Jise dekh ke me thoda chouka lekin fir maine socha ki jab iska upyog hoga tab iski chamak Bapis aajayegi. Or yahi sochke maine ghar ki taraf doud laga di.





Me ghar pahucha seedha apne kamre me. Baha de maine airpod lagaya apne kaan me Harry ko active kiya.






Harry- sir kaha gye the aap.






Main- gya tha kahi. Tum ye batao filhaal kaha kaha tehalka macha hua hai. Or vanraj ko bhi un jagho ke bare me inform kar do.





Ye sunke Harry ne sabhi jagho ko check karna start kiya. Ab vo tha AI system. Isliye use bhut to bilkul bhi nhi dikhe bas log yaha baha bhagate hue dikhe or pareshan hote hue. Ab vo kyu pareshan the ye use nhi dikh raha tha. Kyuki vo logo ke saamne aa hi nahi rahe the.





Harry- sir halat kharab hai or ye ek jagah ka nhi balki bahut jagho per yahi haal hai.






Main- pata hai. Naam batao






Harry- sir is waqt uday pur me bhi yahi haal hai aap shuruwat bahi se keejiye.





Ye sunte hi main doud gya. Uday pur ke liye. Super fast speed se.



Harry mujhe guide kar raha tha ki kaha jana hai






Udaypur me kai ilako me haalat kharab ho rakhi thi. Ghar jal rahe the. Log mare hue raste me pade hue the.




Maine apne lences ki setting ko thermal me change kiya. Or talvar ko apne hatho me pakda or aankho ko band karke mahadev se madad mangi or aankhe kholke aage badta gya. Saamne ek unchi building thi me seedha speed me uske uper chad gha bahar se hi. Or chhat per pahucha. Or charo taraf dekhne laga.








Charo taraf baise to sannata tha lekin jaha per vo sabhi the baha per shanti nhi thi. Or mujhe bahi jana tha.




Tabhi thoda chamatkar sa hua mujhe kuch dikhne laga. Ek bhut jo apne hatho se bhayankar aag nikaal kar ek ghar ko jala raha tha.




Ye dekhke mujhe aaya gussa or maine building se seedhi chhalang lagai or speed me uski taraf gya.




5-6 galiyon se hota hua me us gali me pahucha jaha vo khada hua tha.




Vo apne aag lagane me mast tha. Or me full speed se uski taraf badta hua ja raha tha. Maine apni talvar ki nok ko aage kiya or usko faadta hua me usko speed se hi paar kar gya.




Or ruk kar jab maine mud kar dekha to uske 2 tukde bahi jameen per pade hue. Matlab saaf tha ye bhayankar kaam kar rahi hai.




Or uske khatam hote hi aag ka badhna kam ho gya.





Or fir me baha se agli destination ki taraf gya







Bahi mumbai me vanraj bhi apni powers ka bharpur upyog kar raha tha. Or jaha bhi aag lagi thi vo use bujhane me puri madad kar raha tha. Baaki bhut bhi use kaafi pareshan kar rahe the. Isliye vo apni dekhne ki power ka bharpur istemal kar raha tha. Lekin vo mar nhi rahe the jis bajah se vo bahut hi frustrate ho raha tha.




Bahi me ek ke baad ek jagah ja kar un bhuton ka kaam niptate ja raha tha. Ye talvar vakai me khaas ho gyi thi aaj. Pehle bhi khaas thi lekin aaj double khaas ho gyi thi.






2-3 ghanto me maine sabhi ko dhund dhund ke khatam kar diya. Ab sab jagah pehle jaisi shanti chha gyi thi or uper se ujala bhi ho gya tha. Jis bajah se vo vaise bhi ab sayad hi bahar aaye.







Bahi jab black heart ne ye sab dekha to uska to fuse hi udd gya. Ki surya jaisa normal insan in bhuto ko kaise maar raha hai. Aisi kya power hai uske pass. Jabki rider ki power to usne chheen li hai usse.




Ab use surya ko or parakhna tha ki ye akhir or kya kya kar sakta hai.





Isliye usne apne ek khaas aarmy ko bulava bheja taaki inka kaam hi tamam karwa de.


Or usse bhi pehle usne pure aasman me kaale badlo ko chha diya. Ye badal itne ghane the ki almost andhera hi ho gya tha samast prithvi per. Sabko laga jaise surya grahan lag gya ho. Lekin aisa tha nhi.





bahi me is waqt vanraj ke sath tha. Jise maine jab bataya ki rider ab nhi aayega tab uska bhi dimaag kharab ho gya. Use bhi samajh nhu aaya ki ab kya kare. Or Ab B.h ko kaise rokennge.





Tabhi hamne dekha ki aasman me andhera chha gya hai puri tarah se.




Vanraj- aaj grahan tha kya





Main- pata nhi.





Vanraj- to fir ye Sab kya hai.






Main- pata nahj sayad usi B.h ka hi koi kand hoga ye andhere me vo jyada takatvar rehte hai isiliye.







Vanraj- possible hai. Ab hame kya karna hai. Mera to dimaag kaam karna hi band kar chuka hai.







Main- ladna hai.






Harry- sir mumbai ke outside kuch ajeeb si halchal mach rahi hai aasman me. Aapko baha jana chahiye.






Main- aisa kya ho raha hau baha.







Harry- hole ban raha hai baha per. Apne aap.






Ye sunke ham dono hi shock ho gye.



Or hamne us jagah ke liye doud laga di.






Ham baha pahuche to hole ban chuka tha. Hame pehle laga ki ye sayad black hole hoga jo apne andar sab kuch kheech lega. Lekin hamari galat fehmi jaldi hi dur ho gyi. Kyuki ye hole bahar kheechne wala nhi tha balki ya bahar nikalne wala tha.




Bahi hame ye bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye open kaise ho raha hai. Tabhi Harry ne hame bataya ki aise hi hole kai jagaho per ban rahe hai.




Bahi B.h is waqt apni ankho ko band karke baitha hua tha or uski power se ye hole creat ho rahe the.





Ye hole dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise hamare chhate me bade bade chhed ho gye ho.





Aise kul milakar 8 chhed bane pure aasman me. Lekin filhaal unme se kuch bhi bahar nhi aaraha tha. Bas vo chhed ban hi rahe the or apna aakar le rahe the. Jo size me itne bade the ki puri mumbai sama jaaye is hole me.





Hamari kuch bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye hole akhir bane kaise hai or inse hoga kya.



Bahi saari duniya inhe dekh rahi thi or vo bhi hamari hi tarah hairan the. Kai logo ne to alien hamle ki chetavni tak de di. Unhe laga isme se alien niklenge or unper hamla karenge. Lekin unme se filhaal kuch nhi nikal raha tha.









Tabhi aasman se hame ek aawaj aai. Or hamne uper ki taraf dekha.





B.h- surya bas ab kal tak jitni kushiya manani hai mana lo. Kyuki kal ye prithvi puri tarah se hell me badal jayegi. Or koi use nhi rok payega. Ye hole dekh rahe ho. Ye jaise hi ek line me aajayenge vaise hi tumhari barbadi shuru ho jayegi. Or in hole se bhi jyada khatarnaak cheez maine already yaha per chhod rakhi hai. Or uska jalwa bhi jaldi hi tumhe sunne ko milega.



Ye kehkar vo jor se hasne laga. Or uski gunj se pura aasman hi hill gya. Bahi mujhe or vanraj ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha.






B.h- is gusse ko sambhal kar rakho. Kyuki iski bahut jarurat padegi aange bas dekhte jaao kya hota hai. Or bacha sakte ho to bacha lo apni pyari prithvi ko. Ya fir aakhiri baar dekh lo apni is prithvj ko. Kyuki kal se iska ek naya naam padne wala hai HELL……










ab dekhte hai kya hota hai aage or kya karega black heart or surya use kaise rokega
















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Waiting bhai
Intizar h bhai update ka
Waiting bhai next update ka
Ok dost
Intjaar rahega aapka
Awesome update dost
Khubsurat update dost
Koyi na bro always waiting for you
And dont say sorry to you readers...





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Fabulous update bhai
Ok bro waiting
Rahul bhai aapki saari stories padi hai bhot he mast hai thamk u for ur talent


Thanks bhai. Bas yahi aasha karunga ki ye stories aise hi aap sabhi ka manoranjan karti rahe. Or aap sabhi aise hi apna sath banaye rakhe.


Hell banana chahta h BH prithvi ko
Hmmm
Matlb fight last zone mai aagayii htoo good

Ha bhai bas kuch updates me story end ho jayegi. Or dekhiye ab kya hoga.


Waiting for next update
amazing update
superb update
Fantastic update bhai
khubsurat update bhai



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Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
behatrin update bro
superbb jabardast update bro
Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai



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