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xp se xf tak...... maine ek baat kayi baar kayi kahaniyo pe notice ki hai, xp ke waqt bhi aur Aaj bhi.... ki agar lead characters zyada famous ho jaaye to unko create karne wale khud kahanikaar hi apne hi kirdaaro se jalne lagte hai.... ki aise kaise ye ye kirdaar mujhse zyada ho sakta hai.....
to writes tab ek chaal ki tahat lead characters band bajane lag jaate hai story pe...... koi koi writes to kirdaaro ka patta hi saaf Kar dete hai stories se hi..
so Rahul0087@ sahab par gayi kaleje ko thandak... dil ko sukun aur Mann mutabik khushi
Main puchti hu ki akhir aisi bhi kya dil lagi us BH se ki ushe itna powerful ke sath sath smart bhi bana diya....dekho ye kya kiya usne saurya ke sath...
Wo to achha hua dev tha madad ke liye...
Well lagta hai writer sahab kuch karne rahe itni jald ab kyun na khaufnaak Revos se us black heart ki aisi taisi Kar du...
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Story plot ki flow ke hisab update link by link pesh karna.. Sach mein amazing yaar.. Pichle bhag aur abhi aaye bhag mein koi alag anchaahi her pher nahi.... yahi to kahani ki shadgi ko banaye rakhti hai... jis tarah se aapne prastut kiya hai varnan aur baatcheet ke hisson ko wo sach mein ummda aur uttam hai... (even action scenes bhi)
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Brilliant update awesome writing skills
Well meri koi dushmani nhi hai surya se. R maine usper koi khunnas nahi nikali hai. Bas story ke hisaab se hi situation aa rahi hai. Agar B.h kisi bhi mamle me surya se kam dikhega to aap log hi bologe ki aise dushman se to dushman na hona hi behtar hai. Khair aap fikr na kare. Surya kadi kadi se muskil ko paar karne me saksham hai. Ab ye kaise hoga ye janne ke liye padte rahiye story ko dekhte rahiya kya or kaise hota hai aage.Keep supporting.........
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Ha bhai dev ke aane ki aashanka to hai. Ab dekhte hai vo kaise or kab tak aayega. Or surya isko kab tak sambhalta hai. Or kaise. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.
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Thanks bhailog apna sath aise hi banaye rakhe. Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Aaj dekhiye kya karta hai surya b.h ko rokne ke liye. Or usme kaha tak safal hota hai.
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To ye tarika tha ghost rider ko thikane lgane ka black heart ke paas....usns waps ghost rider ko us na-murad contract ki help se waps hell bhej diya kya ghost rider ab waps surya ko mil paayega jisse wo black heart ko maar ske ya koi aur rashta niklega B.H ko maarne ka...paras patthar bhi to nhi h surya ke paas ab...to ab dekhte h ki wo kya krta h aur kaise...wo dekhne layak hoga pr usse phle B.H prithivi ko shamshaan me tabdeel jarur kr dega uske kahe anusar hell bna dega agr jaldi hi use rokne ka koi upaaY nhi mila to...filhal uske chamcho ko to surya ne vanraj ke sath mil kr khatam kr diya dev ke dwara mili madad ke karan...ab dekhte h dev is mamle me kya help krta h surya ki..kyuki ek bhayanak khatra to us keede ke roop me prithivi pr hi h pta nhi kya kohraam machayega wo aane wale waqt me pta chl jayega..wahi jo dusra aasman se aane wala khatra hai wo kis roop me aane wala ye bhi aane wala waqt hi btayega pr pr itna tay h ki bahut tabahi hone wali h aane wale waqt me...so waiting for the next brother🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡
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Ha bhai b.h ne apni chaal chal di hai or ab surya ki bari hai. Ab dekhna dilchasp hoga ki surya kaha tak b.h ko rokne me kaamyab hoga or kya vakai me vo b.h ko hara payega janne ke liye sath bane rahe.
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UPDATE - 99
B.H baha se ja chuka tha apne in hole ko chhod ke. Bahi me or vanraj bas apna sir pakde baithe hue the hame samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ab kya kare kaise kare. In holes ko band karne ka koi tarika najar nhi aaraha tha. Lekin hame kosis to karni hi padegi. Isi soch ke sath ham mumbai wale base me pahuche.
Main- Harry kuch bhi karo lekin in holes ko band karne ka tarika dhundo ASAP.
Harry- sir me already usi kaam me laga hua hu. Lekin sach kahu to mujhe jara bhi idea nhi hai ki isko kaise band kiya ja sakta hai. Lekin sir ek baat jarur pata chali hai. Ye hole hamare soryamandal ke 9 grah tak pahunchane ka rasta hai. Har ek grah per jaane ke liye ek rasta. Or jab ye ek line me aajayenge tab ham vo karishma dekhenge jo aajtak kisi ne nahi dekha hoga.
Vanraj- kaisa karishma
Harry- sir ham yahi se pure 9 grahon ko dekh payenge ki baha per kya hai kyu hai kon hai. Sab kuch. Or vo log hame dekh payenge.
Main- dekho ye dekhna dikhana kisi kaam nhi aayega I m sure in rasto se uski aarmy yaha aayegi or sab kuch pal bhar me tabah kar degi. Na hi apni aarmy ya apne weapon kuch bhi kaam nhi aayega.
Vanraj- sahi kaha tumne. Is prithvj ka surya hamesha ke liye ast ho jayega. Agar ham us hole me koi missile chhode to kya hoga.
Harry- ye hoga ki vo missile kisi dusre grah per ja kar giregi or agar baha jeevan hoga to usko khatam kar degi. Lekin In holes ka kuch nhi hoga. Is liye aisa kuch bhi karna bekaar hai.
Main- ye baat PM tak bhi pahunch di hai na. Verna vo kuch utt patang karne lage.
Harry- ha sir unko bata diya hai.
Abhi ham baat hi kar rahe the ki peechhe se hame avi ki aawaj aai.
Maine peechhe mudke dekha to avi or rony dono hi aaye hue the. Or is waqt mujhe madad ki bahut jarurat padne wali thi. Or mera bhai sahi samay per aaya tha. Bahi bade bhai ghar ki suraksha ko dekh rahe the.
Main- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.
Avi- dad i m sorry. Lekin me ghar me baitha nhi reh sakta hu. Isliye aapki jitni ho sake madad karne chala aaya. Ab pls aap mujhe vapis jaane ko mat kehna me nhi jaane wala kyuki.
Ye sunke mujhe hasi aarahi thi. Kyuki baise bhi me avi ko bulane hi wala tha. Vo kaafi madad kar sakta hai hamari.
Main- theek hai. Ab ye batao ki in holes ko kaise band kare. Hamari to palle kuch pad hi nhi raha hai. Tum hi koi idea lagao. Hamare pass keval kal tak ka samay hai.
Avi- baise dad me soch raha tha ki agar ham prithvi ko nahi bacha sakte to kam se kam yaha ke logo ko jarur bacha sakte hai.
Ye sunke hamne hairani se avi ko dekha.
Main- kaise.
Avi- dad ye hole ek rasta hai to ham kisi plane se yaha ke logo ko in rasto se kisi dusre planet per pahucha sakte hai. Isse behtar hamare liye kuch nhi hoga ki ye hole yaha bane hue hai. Verna space tak pahuchne me hi kai mahine nikal jaate hai or fir kisi grah tak jana hoto kai saal nikal jaate hai aise chutkiyo me. Pata bhi nhi chalta hai. Lekin I'm holes ki madad se ham kuch sec. Me dusre planet per pahuch sakte hai. Bina kisi khatre ke.
Ye sunke mera matha thanka or mujhe avi ki baat sahi bhi lagi ki ham aisa kar sakte hai.
Main- baat to sahi hai. Lekin isme bhi kuch problems hai. Jaise ki prithvj jaisa dusra grah milna bahut mushkil kaam hai. Or usme kai saalo ka waqt lag sakta hai jo hamare pass hai nhi. Dusri baat ye opration aise ek din me kaise bhi sambhav nhi hai. Kyuki hamare pass itne equipment nhi hai. Jo ham karib 9 Billion people ko kisi dusri jagah shift kar sake. Unke liye khana peena oxygen in sabka intjam karne me hi saalo lag jayenge. Ye sab kehne sunne me achha lagta hai lekin jab ise haqikat me karna hota hai tab hazar tarah ki musibaten aati hai. Or sabse imp sabhi countries iske liye razi ho jo ki sambhav nhi hai. Isliye is plan ko yahi band kardo. Or ye socho ki aisi noubat hi na aaye hamare jeevan me. Mahadev se prarthna karo ki is black heart ko ham jad se khatam kar de or hamari prithvi pehle jaise khatre se khali ho jaaye.
Ye sunke avi or vanraj dono ne hi ha me sir hilaya kyuki meri baat kahi na kahi sahi bhi hai.
Main- Harry yaad hai B.h ne kisi dusri musibat ke baare me bataya tha.
Harry- ha sir yaad hai mujhe.
Main- to pata karo ye kis musibat ki baat kar raha tha. Jo isse bhi jyada khatarnaak ho sakti hai. Or dekho ki kahi kuch gadbad to nhi chal rahi hai. Achhe se check karo. Or avi tum in holes lee concentrate karo. Inko band karna hai. Ya inka rasta badalna hai. Ye sab ek hi line me aane wale hai.
Avi- ok dad me karta hu.
Ye kehkar avi or harry dono hi apne apne kamo me lag gye.
Main- Robo.
Ye sunte hi Robo mere pass aaya.
Main- tum in holes ke andar jaao or inko band karne ka koi rasta dhundo achhe se check karo ki ye kaise open hue hai. Or ha bhatak mat jana vapis bhi aana hai yaha per tumhe.
Robo- samajh gya sir.
Ye kehkar Robo baha se udd gya.
Or jo sabse pass wala hole tha usme ghus gya. Or dekhne laga ki ye kya or kyu hai. Or isko kaise band kiya ja sakta hai.
Ab mujhe dev se contact karna tha kyuki ab bahi hai jo meri madad kar sakta tha.
Isliye me ek kamre me gya or apni anakhe band karke baith gya.
Or jaldi hi mera contact ho gya dev se.
Main- tumhe pata hai na yaha kya kand ho raha hai.
Dev- bahut achhe se pata hai.
Main- to ab batao ki me kya karu. Ye hole ko kaise band karu. Ya fir ye batao ki ye B.h kaha milega to aaj hi iska kissa khatam kar deta hu me.
Dev- relex yaar.
Main- tum mujhe relex rehne ko keh rahe ho. Yaha puri prithvi hi khatam hone ki kagaar per aagyi hai.
Dev- isi liye kehta hu thoda shant raho or thande dimaag ka istemaal karo. Tum bhi jaante ho ye baat ki tumhara dimaag isse behtar result de sakta hai.
Main- me janta hu. Lekin agar ye koi super duper human hota to ab tak me uski khatiya khadi kar deta lekin bhuto ka saamna kaise karu. Isiliye mujhe itni tension ho rahi hai. Baaki me puri tarah shant hi hu. Isliye ab baaki charcha chhodo or koi upaay batao.
Uske baad usne mujhe ek baat batai jise sunke meri tension ek dum se dur ho gyi mujhe samajh me nhi aaya ki kya aisa sach me sambhav hai. Lekin dev ne puri seriously mujhse kaha to mujhe manna hi pada. Usne jo baat batai vo vakai me mera tension 90% tak khatam kar deni wali thi.
Main- agar vakai me aisa hai to fir theek. Lekin filhaal me kya karu. Aise khali bhi to nhi baitha reh sakta na me.
Dev- i know. Lekin filhaal koi or rasta nhi hai.
Main- ek or baat ye b.h ne or konse khatre ke baare me kaha tha.
Dev- ek keeda hai uska paltu. Bahut hi khatarnaak hai. Pal bhar me pure grah ke logo ko kha sakta hai vo.
Main- what.
Dev- ji ha or ye jaha tak hai uska final plan hoga. Agar vo kisi tarah harne laga to vo uska istemaal karke sabko khatam kar dega or koi use sayad hi rok paaye.
Main- baise usne abhi to use nhi chhoda hai na.
Dev- nhi filhaal vo keeda shant hi hai. Or apne malik ke hukum ke intjar mai hai. Jaise hi use order milega vo apna kaam karne lag jayega.
Main- use maarne ka koi tarika
Dev- use maarne ki try bhi mat karna veena kand pakka ho jayega. Or aisa hi hogam jiske samne bhi vo aayega sab use marenge or uska aakar badta hi jayega.or uske rup bhi. Vo ek se do do se char hota jayega. Isliye use maarne ka tarika keval aag hi hai. Bas or koi tarika usper kaam nhi karta hai.
Main- theek hai dekhte hai. Me to yahi kahunga ki uski noubat hi na aapane to badiya. Verna sabki aisi band bajegi ki zindagi bhar uski gunj sunaai degi kaano me.
Dev- sahi kaha. Chalo ab aaram karo kal bahut kaam hai karne ko.
Main- theek hai. Lekin ek baat batao ye hole se karne kya wala hai. Actually me hone kya wala hai iski agar thodi jaankari mil jaati to thodi prepration kar leta me.
Dev- mere khayal se tum na hi jaano to achha hai kyuki agar tumne ye sab suna to tumhari tension or bad jayegi.
Main- aisa kya karne wala hai vo. Ab to mujhe janna hi hoga.
Dev- theek hai to suno. Vo jyada kuch nhi karega bas sare grahon ki chaal badalne wala hai. Jaise hi sabhi ek line me aayenge. Vo prithvi ko suraj se hamesha ke liye dur kar dega. Abhi jaha prithvi shukra ke pass hai bahi iske baad vo plotu ke pass pahuch jayegi. Jaha pahuchne ke baad insano ka rehna to lagbhag na mumkin ho jayega aise me vo unhe offer dega apne sath milne ka uski gulami swikaar karne ka or jo log uski baat manenge vo unko baha per rehne layak bana dega unka transform karke. Or ek baar agar prithvi apni jagah se hili to pure space me servnash fail jayega. Pura space hi khatam ho jayega. Or ye baat use samajh me nhi aarahi hai na hi aane wali hai. Isliye vo apne sath sabka binash baise bhi karke hi jayega. Isliye agar tum log jaate to bhi vo marega jaldi hi or jeete to bhi vo marega. Bas antar itna hoga ki tumhari jeet me samast space ki jeet hogi or tumhara space ek maha vinash se bach jayega. Lekin agar haare to tumhara space bhi khatam hi samjho. Ab jo bhi karo soch samajh kar karo. Baaki sab mahadev per chhod do.
Ye sab sunke mera gala sukh gya tha. Mujhe sach me belive nhi ho raha tha ki ye b.h itna jyada khatarnaak or pagal ho sakta hai.
Khair dekhte hai ab kya hoga
To be continue………………………...
B.H baha se ja chuka tha apne in hole ko chhod ke. Bahi me or vanraj bas apna sir pakde baithe hue the hame samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ab kya kare kaise kare. In holes ko band karne ka koi tarika najar nhi aaraha tha. Lekin hame kosis to karni hi padegi. Isi soch ke sath ham mumbai wale base me pahuche.
Main- Harry kuch bhi karo lekin in holes ko band karne ka tarika dhundo ASAP.
Harry- sir me already usi kaam me laga hua hu. Lekin sach kahu to mujhe jara bhi idea nhi hai ki isko kaise band kiya ja sakta hai. Lekin sir ek baat jarur pata chali hai. Ye hole hamare soryamandal ke 9 grah tak pahunchane ka rasta hai. Har ek grah per jaane ke liye ek rasta. Or jab ye ek line me aajayenge tab ham vo karishma dekhenge jo aajtak kisi ne nahi dekha hoga.
Vanraj- kaisa karishma
Harry- sir ham yahi se pure 9 grahon ko dekh payenge ki baha per kya hai kyu hai kon hai. Sab kuch. Or vo log hame dekh payenge.
Main- dekho ye dekhna dikhana kisi kaam nhi aayega I m sure in rasto se uski aarmy yaha aayegi or sab kuch pal bhar me tabah kar degi. Na hi apni aarmy ya apne weapon kuch bhi kaam nhi aayega.
Vanraj- sahi kaha tumne. Is prithvj ka surya hamesha ke liye ast ho jayega. Agar ham us hole me koi missile chhode to kya hoga.
Harry- ye hoga ki vo missile kisi dusre grah per ja kar giregi or agar baha jeevan hoga to usko khatam kar degi. Lekin In holes ka kuch nhi hoga. Is liye aisa kuch bhi karna bekaar hai.
Main- ye baat PM tak bhi pahunch di hai na. Verna vo kuch utt patang karne lage.
Harry- ha sir unko bata diya hai.
Abhi ham baat hi kar rahe the ki peechhe se hame avi ki aawaj aai.
Maine peechhe mudke dekha to avi or rony dono hi aaye hue the. Or is waqt mujhe madad ki bahut jarurat padne wali thi. Or mera bhai sahi samay per aaya tha. Bahi bade bhai ghar ki suraksha ko dekh rahe the.
Main- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.
Avi- dad i m sorry. Lekin me ghar me baitha nhi reh sakta hu. Isliye aapki jitni ho sake madad karne chala aaya. Ab pls aap mujhe vapis jaane ko mat kehna me nhi jaane wala kyuki.
Ye sunke mujhe hasi aarahi thi. Kyuki baise bhi me avi ko bulane hi wala tha. Vo kaafi madad kar sakta hai hamari.
Main- theek hai. Ab ye batao ki in holes ko kaise band kare. Hamari to palle kuch pad hi nhi raha hai. Tum hi koi idea lagao. Hamare pass keval kal tak ka samay hai.
Avi- baise dad me soch raha tha ki agar ham prithvi ko nahi bacha sakte to kam se kam yaha ke logo ko jarur bacha sakte hai.
Ye sunke hamne hairani se avi ko dekha.
Main- kaise.
Avi- dad ye hole ek rasta hai to ham kisi plane se yaha ke logo ko in rasto se kisi dusre planet per pahucha sakte hai. Isse behtar hamare liye kuch nhi hoga ki ye hole yaha bane hue hai. Verna space tak pahuchne me hi kai mahine nikal jaate hai or fir kisi grah tak jana hoto kai saal nikal jaate hai aise chutkiyo me. Pata bhi nhi chalta hai. Lekin I'm holes ki madad se ham kuch sec. Me dusre planet per pahuch sakte hai. Bina kisi khatre ke.
Ye sunke mera matha thanka or mujhe avi ki baat sahi bhi lagi ki ham aisa kar sakte hai.
Main- baat to sahi hai. Lekin isme bhi kuch problems hai. Jaise ki prithvj jaisa dusra grah milna bahut mushkil kaam hai. Or usme kai saalo ka waqt lag sakta hai jo hamare pass hai nhi. Dusri baat ye opration aise ek din me kaise bhi sambhav nhi hai. Kyuki hamare pass itne equipment nhi hai. Jo ham karib 9 Billion people ko kisi dusri jagah shift kar sake. Unke liye khana peena oxygen in sabka intjam karne me hi saalo lag jayenge. Ye sab kehne sunne me achha lagta hai lekin jab ise haqikat me karna hota hai tab hazar tarah ki musibaten aati hai. Or sabse imp sabhi countries iske liye razi ho jo ki sambhav nhi hai. Isliye is plan ko yahi band kardo. Or ye socho ki aisi noubat hi na aaye hamare jeevan me. Mahadev se prarthna karo ki is black heart ko ham jad se khatam kar de or hamari prithvi pehle jaise khatre se khali ho jaaye.
Ye sunke avi or vanraj dono ne hi ha me sir hilaya kyuki meri baat kahi na kahi sahi bhi hai.
Main- Harry yaad hai B.h ne kisi dusri musibat ke baare me bataya tha.
Harry- ha sir yaad hai mujhe.
Main- to pata karo ye kis musibat ki baat kar raha tha. Jo isse bhi jyada khatarnaak ho sakti hai. Or dekho ki kahi kuch gadbad to nhi chal rahi hai. Achhe se check karo. Or avi tum in holes lee concentrate karo. Inko band karna hai. Ya inka rasta badalna hai. Ye sab ek hi line me aane wale hai.
Avi- ok dad me karta hu.
Ye kehkar avi or harry dono hi apne apne kamo me lag gye.
Main- Robo.
Ye sunte hi Robo mere pass aaya.
Main- tum in holes ke andar jaao or inko band karne ka koi rasta dhundo achhe se check karo ki ye kaise open hue hai. Or ha bhatak mat jana vapis bhi aana hai yaha per tumhe.
Robo- samajh gya sir.
Ye kehkar Robo baha se udd gya.
Or jo sabse pass wala hole tha usme ghus gya. Or dekhne laga ki ye kya or kyu hai. Or isko kaise band kiya ja sakta hai.
Ab mujhe dev se contact karna tha kyuki ab bahi hai jo meri madad kar sakta tha.
Isliye me ek kamre me gya or apni anakhe band karke baith gya.
Or jaldi hi mera contact ho gya dev se.
Main- tumhe pata hai na yaha kya kand ho raha hai.
Dev- bahut achhe se pata hai.
Main- to ab batao ki me kya karu. Ye hole ko kaise band karu. Ya fir ye batao ki ye B.h kaha milega to aaj hi iska kissa khatam kar deta hu me.
Dev- relex yaar.
Main- tum mujhe relex rehne ko keh rahe ho. Yaha puri prithvi hi khatam hone ki kagaar per aagyi hai.
Dev- isi liye kehta hu thoda shant raho or thande dimaag ka istemaal karo. Tum bhi jaante ho ye baat ki tumhara dimaag isse behtar result de sakta hai.
Main- me janta hu. Lekin agar ye koi super duper human hota to ab tak me uski khatiya khadi kar deta lekin bhuto ka saamna kaise karu. Isiliye mujhe itni tension ho rahi hai. Baaki me puri tarah shant hi hu. Isliye ab baaki charcha chhodo or koi upaay batao.
Uske baad usne mujhe ek baat batai jise sunke meri tension ek dum se dur ho gyi mujhe samajh me nhi aaya ki kya aisa sach me sambhav hai. Lekin dev ne puri seriously mujhse kaha to mujhe manna hi pada. Usne jo baat batai vo vakai me mera tension 90% tak khatam kar deni wali thi.
Main- agar vakai me aisa hai to fir theek. Lekin filhaal me kya karu. Aise khali bhi to nhi baitha reh sakta na me.
Dev- i know. Lekin filhaal koi or rasta nhi hai.
Main- ek or baat ye b.h ne or konse khatre ke baare me kaha tha.
Dev- ek keeda hai uska paltu. Bahut hi khatarnaak hai. Pal bhar me pure grah ke logo ko kha sakta hai vo.
Main- what.
Dev- ji ha or ye jaha tak hai uska final plan hoga. Agar vo kisi tarah harne laga to vo uska istemaal karke sabko khatam kar dega or koi use sayad hi rok paaye.
Main- baise usne abhi to use nhi chhoda hai na.
Dev- nhi filhaal vo keeda shant hi hai. Or apne malik ke hukum ke intjar mai hai. Jaise hi use order milega vo apna kaam karne lag jayega.
Main- use maarne ka koi tarika
Dev- use maarne ki try bhi mat karna veena kand pakka ho jayega. Or aisa hi hogam jiske samne bhi vo aayega sab use marenge or uska aakar badta hi jayega.or uske rup bhi. Vo ek se do do se char hota jayega. Isliye use maarne ka tarika keval aag hi hai. Bas or koi tarika usper kaam nhi karta hai.
Main- theek hai dekhte hai. Me to yahi kahunga ki uski noubat hi na aapane to badiya. Verna sabki aisi band bajegi ki zindagi bhar uski gunj sunaai degi kaano me.
Dev- sahi kaha. Chalo ab aaram karo kal bahut kaam hai karne ko.
Main- theek hai. Lekin ek baat batao ye hole se karne kya wala hai. Actually me hone kya wala hai iski agar thodi jaankari mil jaati to thodi prepration kar leta me.
Dev- mere khayal se tum na hi jaano to achha hai kyuki agar tumne ye sab suna to tumhari tension or bad jayegi.
Main- aisa kya karne wala hai vo. Ab to mujhe janna hi hoga.
Dev- theek hai to suno. Vo jyada kuch nhi karega bas sare grahon ki chaal badalne wala hai. Jaise hi sabhi ek line me aayenge. Vo prithvi ko suraj se hamesha ke liye dur kar dega. Abhi jaha prithvi shukra ke pass hai bahi iske baad vo plotu ke pass pahuch jayegi. Jaha pahuchne ke baad insano ka rehna to lagbhag na mumkin ho jayega aise me vo unhe offer dega apne sath milne ka uski gulami swikaar karne ka or jo log uski baat manenge vo unko baha per rehne layak bana dega unka transform karke. Or ek baar agar prithvi apni jagah se hili to pure space me servnash fail jayega. Pura space hi khatam ho jayega. Or ye baat use samajh me nhi aarahi hai na hi aane wali hai. Isliye vo apne sath sabka binash baise bhi karke hi jayega. Isliye agar tum log jaate to bhi vo marega jaldi hi or jeete to bhi vo marega. Bas antar itna hoga ki tumhari jeet me samast space ki jeet hogi or tumhara space ek maha vinash se bach jayega. Lekin agar haare to tumhara space bhi khatam hi samjho. Ab jo bhi karo soch samajh kar karo. Baaki sab mahadev per chhod do.
Ye sab sunke mera gala sukh gya tha. Mujhe sach me belive nhi ho raha tha ki ye b.h itna jyada khatarnaak or pagal ho sakta hai.
Khair dekhte hai ab kya hoga
To be continue………………………...
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Dev se baat karne ke baad khaskar last wali uski baate sunne ke baad mera mind puri tarah se hill gya tha. Ab mujhe samajh me aaraha tha ki kyu dev ne mujhe ye sab janne se mana kiya tha. Lekin isse ye jarur hua ki ab me puri tarah se ready tha use harane ke liye. Kyuki agar me haara to pura space khatam or agar vo hara to sirf vo hi khatam hoga. Or mujhe yahi chahiye tha. Mujhe kuch bhi karke usko usi jahannum ki aag me vapis bhejana hai jaha se vo aaya tha. Or is tarah se bhejna hai ki vo dobara yaha aane ka soche bhi nhi. Fir chahe isme meri bhi jaan kyu na chali jaaye. Lekin usko me ab nhi chhodne wala tha.
Tabhi kamre ka darwaja khatkhataya kisi ne. To maine jaake darwaja khola to samne rony or vanraj khade the. Maine dono ko andar liya.
Rony- kya socha hai koi rasta mila.
Main- nhi yaar ise rokne ka sayad hi koi tarika ho. Mujhe nahi lagata avi ko bhi kuch milega. Hame bas ab ek hi kaam karna hai
Vanraj- or vo kya hai.
Main- hame tayyar rehna haj ladne ke liye. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye hame use khatam karna hai.use agar zinda chhoda to samajh jana ki puri prithvi hi nhi balki hamara samast brahmaand hi khatam ho jayega.
Rony- what
Main- ha filhaal itna hi kaafi hai. Isliye isi baat ko dhyan me rakhe uska saamna karna hai hame. Baaki jo hona hoga dekha jayega.
Vanraj- sahi hai agar marna likha hoga. To koi nhi rok payega marne se. Or agar jeena likha hoga to koi maar nhi sakta. Isliye is baare me soch ke baise bhi koi fayeda nhi haj.
Rony- kya baat kahi hai. Maja aagya. Sahi hai.
Inhi sab baato me kab raat ke 2 baj gye pata bhi nhi chala.
Neend to baise bhi nhi aane wali thi kisi ko. Isliye sab bas subah hone ka hi intjar kar rahe the.
Avi or harry apne kamo me lage hue the. Avi ka bhi dimaag kharab ho gya tha un hole ko dekh dekh ke. Use bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha un holes ke peechhe ka science. Bahi Robo bhi un holes ko achhe se scan karke aagya tha or usne apni powers se unko band karne ka bhi try kar liya tha. Or to or usne holes ki direction bhi badalne ka try kiya lekin vo safal nhi hua.
Isiliye vo vapis aagya base per. Or usne sari detail hame batai or hame pata tha ki kuch nhi hua hoga isliye sabne normal hi behave kiya.
Ab to bas subah ka hi intjar tha.
Bahi vo saare hole ek dusre ke kaafi karib pahuch gye the. Or aane wale kuch ghanto me vo ek dusre se mil jayenge.
Pure world ki najre unhi holes per jami hui thi. Sabhi log apna kaam Dhanda chhodke unhi ko dekh rahe the.
Main- avi ye sare holes kis jagah milne wale hai iska pata laga sakte ho.
Avi- already laga liya hai. Dad inka center yahi mumbai ke bahar wala hole hi hai. Sare holes yahi ikathhe honge. Isliye hame kahi jaane ki jarurat nhi hai.
Main- achhi baat hai.
Maine turant hi Chouhan ko call kiya.
Chouhan- kaha ho tum or ye sab kya chal raha hai yaar
Main- bahut badi tension hai filhaal aapko me samjha nhi sakta hu. Filhaal aapko ek bahut bada kaam karna hai.
Chouhan- ha bolo.
Main- mumbai or uske aaspaas ke sabhi ilako ko khali karwana hai vo bhi subah hone ke pehle pehle.
Chouhan- what. Are u out of your mind.
Main- no sir me pure hosh me keh raha hu. Ye jo holes hai inka centre yahi mumbai wala hole hi hai. Or inke judne per kya hoga pata nhi. Agar alien vagera aayenge to sabse pehle mumbai me hi hamla karenge isliye hame logo ko safe rakhne ke liye ye karna hi padega. Fir chahe jaise bhi ho.
Ye sunke Chouhan ka bhi dimaag ghum gya.
Chouhan- tum sach keh rahe ho.
Main- ha sir. Jitni jaldi ho sake ye kaam start ho jana chahiye train plane buses car jo bhi mile bahar nikalne ka bolo sabko or sabka intjam karwao. Or sabse imp. Agar sari bheed ek sath bahar nikalegi to bhayankar traffic jam hoga to usko suljhane ke liye bhayankar police lagegi.
Chouhan- abhi 3 baj rahe hai 1 ghante me ye process start karwane ki kosis karunga me. Pm se direct baat karta hu me. Or tumhe update deta hu.
Main- ok karo or mujhe batao.
Uske baad Chouhan ne PM ko direct call kiya or unhe sari situation samjhai jise sunke unke bhi hosh udd gye. Khair situation ko dekhte hue unhone puri ki puri aarmy ko laga diya logo ko safely bahar bhejane ke liye.
Halaki ye kaam itna aasan nhi hai. Logo me alag hi bhagdad mach gyi thi. Lekin police or aarmy ki bajah se kaafi situation control me thi. Mumbai me moujud sari traino ko logo ki seva me laga diya tha.
Karib 1.50cr logo ko kuch ghanto me kisi safe jagah per le jana bacho ka khel to kaise bhi nhi hai. Or yahi ho raha tha baha per. Sabko aaj apni apni nani yaad aarahi thi.
Khair subah hone tak 90% log mumbai or uske aaspaas ke ilako se nikaal liye gye the. Jo ki bahut hi achhi baat thi. Or holes ke milne me bhi abhi samay tha. May be dopehar tak ya sham tak ka samay lag sakta tha. Isliye hamare pass samay tha filhaal. Or ham uska bharpur upyog kar rahe the.
Bahi per jaise jaise vo hole ek dusre se pass aate ja rahe the vaise hi aasman me ghana andhera chhaya ja raha tha. Or jor daar bijli kadakne lagi thi. Kahi kahi to barish bhi hone lagi thi.
Or mumbai ke bhi kai ilako me bhari barish hone lagi thi. Or mousam to aisa ho gya tha jaise kai mahinon se dhup nikli hi na ho. Kyuki barish ke sath thand bhi badti ja rahi thi. Or aisi vaisi nhi kadake ki thand padne lagi thi.
Ye haal puri earth per bana hua tha.
Ham bhi logo ki madad karne me lage hue the. Jitni ho sake. Bahi avi or harry lage hue the hole per or baki jagho per najar jamaye hue. Vo pal pal ki update hame dete ja rahe the.
Khair kisi tarah dopehar tak hamne mumbai or uske aaspass ke sare ilake khali karwa diya. Ab mumbai me keval chidiya hi bachi hui thi insan hame chhodke ek bhi nhi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise dunia me ham akhiri bache hue hai. Pura sehar khali.
Tabhi mujhe yaad aaya ki ek baar maine aisa sapna bhi dekha tha jaha pure sehar me me akela hi ghum raha hu.
(NOTE - ye sapna sayad mujhe second story me aaya tha. Ya isi story me mujhe yaad nhi hai. )
Vanraj- ab kya karna hai surya. Sehar bhi khali ho gya hai.
Rony- itnjar hi karenge or kya.
Main- sahi kaha. Ab bas wait and watch bala khel bacha hua hai. Dekhte hai inke milne per kya hoga.
Tabhi hamare pechhe karib 20 jan aaye. Ye insan to nhi the itna confirm tha. Kyuki insano jaise keval ye dikh hi rahe the. Baaki inka rang ek dum safed tha. Aankhe laal
Main- kon ho tum log.
A1- tum sabki mout. Bhale hi tumne sabko yaha se bhaga diya hai. Lekin rahenge to vo isi desh me hi or ye desh hi nhi ye puri earth hi ab khatam hone ki kagaar per hai. Jisme koi bhi nhi bachne wala. Tum bhi nhi.
Main- ohh to tum logo ko pata hai ki isse kya hone wala hai. Fir bhi aisa kar rahe ho tum log.
Ye sunke vo hasne lage
A1- kyuki ham yahi chahte hai. Or aisa ham kyu chahte hai ye tum jaldi hi jaan jaoge. Filhaal tum logo ke pass ek akhiri sandesh leke aaye hai ham B.H ka.
Rony- kya sandesh hai sunao.
A1- yahi ki tum sabke pass last mouka hai. Tum sabi B.H ki saran me aajao jisse tum sabki or tumhare parivar ki bhi jaan bach jayegi. Or B.H ne khaas kaha hai ki surya tumhe vo puri earth ki kamana soup dega tum yaha ke raja hoge. Or badle me tumhe bas B.H ki pooja karni hai or sabhi se katwani hai. Or har mahine 10 logo ko uske pass bhejna hai jinme 5 mard or 5 aurate samil hogi. Itna kar loge to ye prithvi sahi salamat rahegi or kisi ko kuch nuksan nhi hoga.
Ye sunte hi meri or rony ki takvare ek sath mayan me se nikal aai.
Jise dekhke vo thode pechhe ko ho gye.
Main- tum abhi tak sirf isiliye jinda khade ho kyuki tum ek dut ho. Verna tumhare sir ka footwall banake abhi ham khel rahe hote. Or jakar kehdo apne use B.H se ki ham already yaha ke raja hai. Or hamare jeete ji tum yaha ke ek insan ko bhi nuksan nhi pahucha paoge. Or suno usse kehna ki aaj chahe kuch bhi kyu na ho jaye vo hamare samne na hi aaye to achha hai uske liye. Kyuki aaj uska last din hai is pure sansar me. Fir chahe vo amar hoke hi hamare samne kyu na aaye. Lekin aaj uska zinda bachne ka koi upaay nhi hai. Isliye ye meri last warning hai usko ki chalajaaye yaha se or Bapis apni bhaddi sakal leke yaha Bapis na aaye. Uski jaan me baks dunga. Lekin agar vo yaha se nhi gya or yaha usne kuch bhi galat karne ka prayas kiya to usko marne se swayam mahadev bhi nhi bacha payenge. Ye surya ka vada hai.
Ye kehkar hamne unhe ghura. Or jaise hi unki aankhe hamse mili vo samajh gye ki agar jyada der yaha ruke to pakka kand ho jayega. Isliye palak jhapkate hi vo sabhi yaha se gayab ho gye.
Or ham bahi khade sochte rahe ki ab kya kare
Baaki dekhte hai next update me ki kya hota hai.
To be continue……………………….
Dev se baat karne ke baad khaskar last wali uski baate sunne ke baad mera mind puri tarah se hill gya tha. Ab mujhe samajh me aaraha tha ki kyu dev ne mujhe ye sab janne se mana kiya tha. Lekin isse ye jarur hua ki ab me puri tarah se ready tha use harane ke liye. Kyuki agar me haara to pura space khatam or agar vo hara to sirf vo hi khatam hoga. Or mujhe yahi chahiye tha. Mujhe kuch bhi karke usko usi jahannum ki aag me vapis bhejana hai jaha se vo aaya tha. Or is tarah se bhejna hai ki vo dobara yaha aane ka soche bhi nhi. Fir chahe isme meri bhi jaan kyu na chali jaaye. Lekin usko me ab nhi chhodne wala tha.
Tabhi kamre ka darwaja khatkhataya kisi ne. To maine jaake darwaja khola to samne rony or vanraj khade the. Maine dono ko andar liya.
Rony- kya socha hai koi rasta mila.
Main- nhi yaar ise rokne ka sayad hi koi tarika ho. Mujhe nahi lagata avi ko bhi kuch milega. Hame bas ab ek hi kaam karna hai
Vanraj- or vo kya hai.
Main- hame tayyar rehna haj ladne ke liye. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye hame use khatam karna hai.use agar zinda chhoda to samajh jana ki puri prithvi hi nhi balki hamara samast brahmaand hi khatam ho jayega.
Rony- what
Main- ha filhaal itna hi kaafi hai. Isliye isi baat ko dhyan me rakhe uska saamna karna hai hame. Baaki jo hona hoga dekha jayega.
Vanraj- sahi hai agar marna likha hoga. To koi nhi rok payega marne se. Or agar jeena likha hoga to koi maar nhi sakta. Isliye is baare me soch ke baise bhi koi fayeda nhi haj.
Rony- kya baat kahi hai. Maja aagya. Sahi hai.
Inhi sab baato me kab raat ke 2 baj gye pata bhi nhi chala.
Neend to baise bhi nhi aane wali thi kisi ko. Isliye sab bas subah hone ka hi intjar kar rahe the.
Avi or harry apne kamo me lage hue the. Avi ka bhi dimaag kharab ho gya tha un hole ko dekh dekh ke. Use bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha un holes ke peechhe ka science. Bahi Robo bhi un holes ko achhe se scan karke aagya tha or usne apni powers se unko band karne ka bhi try kar liya tha. Or to or usne holes ki direction bhi badalne ka try kiya lekin vo safal nhi hua.
Isiliye vo vapis aagya base per. Or usne sari detail hame batai or hame pata tha ki kuch nhi hua hoga isliye sabne normal hi behave kiya.
Ab to bas subah ka hi intjar tha.
Bahi vo saare hole ek dusre ke kaafi karib pahuch gye the. Or aane wale kuch ghanto me vo ek dusre se mil jayenge.
Pure world ki najre unhi holes per jami hui thi. Sabhi log apna kaam Dhanda chhodke unhi ko dekh rahe the.
Main- avi ye sare holes kis jagah milne wale hai iska pata laga sakte ho.
Avi- already laga liya hai. Dad inka center yahi mumbai ke bahar wala hole hi hai. Sare holes yahi ikathhe honge. Isliye hame kahi jaane ki jarurat nhi hai.
Main- achhi baat hai.
Maine turant hi Chouhan ko call kiya.
Chouhan- kaha ho tum or ye sab kya chal raha hai yaar
Main- bahut badi tension hai filhaal aapko me samjha nhi sakta hu. Filhaal aapko ek bahut bada kaam karna hai.
Chouhan- ha bolo.
Main- mumbai or uske aaspaas ke sabhi ilako ko khali karwana hai vo bhi subah hone ke pehle pehle.
Chouhan- what. Are u out of your mind.
Main- no sir me pure hosh me keh raha hu. Ye jo holes hai inka centre yahi mumbai wala hole hi hai. Or inke judne per kya hoga pata nhi. Agar alien vagera aayenge to sabse pehle mumbai me hi hamla karenge isliye hame logo ko safe rakhne ke liye ye karna hi padega. Fir chahe jaise bhi ho.
Ye sunke Chouhan ka bhi dimaag ghum gya.
Chouhan- tum sach keh rahe ho.
Main- ha sir. Jitni jaldi ho sake ye kaam start ho jana chahiye train plane buses car jo bhi mile bahar nikalne ka bolo sabko or sabka intjam karwao. Or sabse imp. Agar sari bheed ek sath bahar nikalegi to bhayankar traffic jam hoga to usko suljhane ke liye bhayankar police lagegi.
Chouhan- abhi 3 baj rahe hai 1 ghante me ye process start karwane ki kosis karunga me. Pm se direct baat karta hu me. Or tumhe update deta hu.
Main- ok karo or mujhe batao.
Uske baad Chouhan ne PM ko direct call kiya or unhe sari situation samjhai jise sunke unke bhi hosh udd gye. Khair situation ko dekhte hue unhone puri ki puri aarmy ko laga diya logo ko safely bahar bhejane ke liye.
Halaki ye kaam itna aasan nhi hai. Logo me alag hi bhagdad mach gyi thi. Lekin police or aarmy ki bajah se kaafi situation control me thi. Mumbai me moujud sari traino ko logo ki seva me laga diya tha.
Karib 1.50cr logo ko kuch ghanto me kisi safe jagah per le jana bacho ka khel to kaise bhi nhi hai. Or yahi ho raha tha baha per. Sabko aaj apni apni nani yaad aarahi thi.
Khair subah hone tak 90% log mumbai or uske aaspaas ke ilako se nikaal liye gye the. Jo ki bahut hi achhi baat thi. Or holes ke milne me bhi abhi samay tha. May be dopehar tak ya sham tak ka samay lag sakta tha. Isliye hamare pass samay tha filhaal. Or ham uska bharpur upyog kar rahe the.
Bahi per jaise jaise vo hole ek dusre se pass aate ja rahe the vaise hi aasman me ghana andhera chhaya ja raha tha. Or jor daar bijli kadakne lagi thi. Kahi kahi to barish bhi hone lagi thi.
Or mumbai ke bhi kai ilako me bhari barish hone lagi thi. Or mousam to aisa ho gya tha jaise kai mahinon se dhup nikli hi na ho. Kyuki barish ke sath thand bhi badti ja rahi thi. Or aisi vaisi nhi kadake ki thand padne lagi thi.
Ye haal puri earth per bana hua tha.
Ham bhi logo ki madad karne me lage hue the. Jitni ho sake. Bahi avi or harry lage hue the hole per or baki jagho per najar jamaye hue. Vo pal pal ki update hame dete ja rahe the.
Khair kisi tarah dopehar tak hamne mumbai or uske aaspass ke sare ilake khali karwa diya. Ab mumbai me keval chidiya hi bachi hui thi insan hame chhodke ek bhi nhi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise dunia me ham akhiri bache hue hai. Pura sehar khali.
Tabhi mujhe yaad aaya ki ek baar maine aisa sapna bhi dekha tha jaha pure sehar me me akela hi ghum raha hu.
(NOTE - ye sapna sayad mujhe second story me aaya tha. Ya isi story me mujhe yaad nhi hai. )
Vanraj- ab kya karna hai surya. Sehar bhi khali ho gya hai.
Rony- itnjar hi karenge or kya.
Main- sahi kaha. Ab bas wait and watch bala khel bacha hua hai. Dekhte hai inke milne per kya hoga.
Tabhi hamare pechhe karib 20 jan aaye. Ye insan to nhi the itna confirm tha. Kyuki insano jaise keval ye dikh hi rahe the. Baaki inka rang ek dum safed tha. Aankhe laal
Main- kon ho tum log.
A1- tum sabki mout. Bhale hi tumne sabko yaha se bhaga diya hai. Lekin rahenge to vo isi desh me hi or ye desh hi nhi ye puri earth hi ab khatam hone ki kagaar per hai. Jisme koi bhi nhi bachne wala. Tum bhi nhi.
Main- ohh to tum logo ko pata hai ki isse kya hone wala hai. Fir bhi aisa kar rahe ho tum log.
Ye sunke vo hasne lage
A1- kyuki ham yahi chahte hai. Or aisa ham kyu chahte hai ye tum jaldi hi jaan jaoge. Filhaal tum logo ke pass ek akhiri sandesh leke aaye hai ham B.H ka.
Rony- kya sandesh hai sunao.
A1- yahi ki tum sabke pass last mouka hai. Tum sabi B.H ki saran me aajao jisse tum sabki or tumhare parivar ki bhi jaan bach jayegi. Or B.H ne khaas kaha hai ki surya tumhe vo puri earth ki kamana soup dega tum yaha ke raja hoge. Or badle me tumhe bas B.H ki pooja karni hai or sabhi se katwani hai. Or har mahine 10 logo ko uske pass bhejna hai jinme 5 mard or 5 aurate samil hogi. Itna kar loge to ye prithvi sahi salamat rahegi or kisi ko kuch nuksan nhi hoga.
Ye sunte hi meri or rony ki takvare ek sath mayan me se nikal aai.
Jise dekhke vo thode pechhe ko ho gye.
Main- tum abhi tak sirf isiliye jinda khade ho kyuki tum ek dut ho. Verna tumhare sir ka footwall banake abhi ham khel rahe hote. Or jakar kehdo apne use B.H se ki ham already yaha ke raja hai. Or hamare jeete ji tum yaha ke ek insan ko bhi nuksan nhi pahucha paoge. Or suno usse kehna ki aaj chahe kuch bhi kyu na ho jaye vo hamare samne na hi aaye to achha hai uske liye. Kyuki aaj uska last din hai is pure sansar me. Fir chahe vo amar hoke hi hamare samne kyu na aaye. Lekin aaj uska zinda bachne ka koi upaay nhi hai. Isliye ye meri last warning hai usko ki chalajaaye yaha se or Bapis apni bhaddi sakal leke yaha Bapis na aaye. Uski jaan me baks dunga. Lekin agar vo yaha se nhi gya or yaha usne kuch bhi galat karne ka prayas kiya to usko marne se swayam mahadev bhi nhi bacha payenge. Ye surya ka vada hai.
Ye kehkar hamne unhe ghura. Or jaise hi unki aankhe hamse mili vo samajh gye ki agar jyada der yaha ruke to pakka kand ho jayega. Isliye palak jhapkate hi vo sabhi yaha se gayab ho gye.
Or ham bahi khade sochte rahe ki ab kya kare
Baaki dekhte hai next update me ki kya hota hai.
To be continue……………………….
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Yeh Dev ne aisa kyaa bola surya ko jisse woh puri tarah tension free hogyaaa. Aur yeh keeda toh sach meim bahog khatarnaak hai par maarne ka tarika bhi hai aag.
Aur yeh Black Heart pura pagal hai. Prithvi ke saath khud ki maut ka intezaam bhi kar raha hai. Dekhte hai ab Surya kyaa karta hai
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Toh Surya ne shehar ko khaali karwa diya hai. Aur woh doot bhi Surya ko warn karke chale gaye.
Dekhte hai ab Surya and team karti hai.
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