Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

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Main jameen ke neeche fasa hua tha or uper chadne ki kosis kar raha tha lekin baat ban nhi pa rahi thi. Bahut kosis kar chuka tha me. Lekin nhi ja pa raha tha me uper ki taraf. Thoda bahut uper jata bhi tha to khisak kar vapis neeche aajata tha.






Main- are yaar ab kya karu kaise uper jaau. Hey mahadev koi rasta to dikhaao.






Ye bolte hiujhe dev ki baat yaad aai to maine socha ek baar try karke dekhta hi sayad kaam ban jaaye.






Maine apni aankho ko band kiya.or apne hatho ko joda. Or use yaad kiya jo uper moujud sare bhuto ka baap tha.





Pura dhyan lagaya or rider ko yaad kiya. Uski jhalak ko apni aankho me yaad kiya or use Bapis aane ka aavahan kiya usse madad ki guhaar lagai kyuki ek bahi tha jo is samay meri madad kar sakta tha.






Thodi der tak use yaad karne ke baad mere hatho me jalan hone lagi.




Ye mehsus hote hi maine or jor se uska naam pukara apne gale ki puri aawaj ke sath maine rider ko pukara.







Meri aawaj us gadde me gunj gyi or aasan ke gunjate hi mera rup ek dum se badal gya.




Or is baar kuch alag hua pehle me rider ke aate hi blank ho jata tha lekin ab mujhe sab kuch dikh raha tha or mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise abki baar me or rider ek sath driving seat per baithe hai. Or ek sath gadi chala rahe hai. Ye sab dekhke me kaafi kush or exited tha.







Main- jyada kush mat ho jana abhi uper kaise jaaye ye socho.






Main2- dekhte jaao bache.




Ye kehkar usne apne dono hatho ko jameen se touch kiya



Or aisa karte hi puri jameen kisi jwalamukhi ki tarah sulagane lagi.




Ye dekhke meri haalat kharab hone lagi. Kyuki rider ke irade mujhe theek nhi lag rahe the.






Main- ye kya karne ja rahe ho tum






Main2- bahar nikalne ka jugaad.




Ye sunkar maine neeche dekha to neeche ka pura malwa ek dum jwalamukhi jaisa dadhakne laga tha.




Or iske aage me kuch sochta ya kehta ek bhayankar dhamaka jaisa hua hamare pairo ke neeche. Or neeche se bhari pressure lagne ki bajah se ham uper ko jaane lage vo bhi super duper fast speed se. Pure gadde ko cheerte hue ham seedhe uper pahuche or neeche ka lava hame aasman me kaafi unchai tak le gya. Ham uper or hamare neeche garam lava.




Jo gadda khatam hote hi charo taraf fail gya.



Or aaspaas jo bhi moujud the us lava me jal kar khatam hogye.




Mujhe bas yahi dar tha ki kahi koi meri team wala na ho jo is lava ki chapet me aajaye. Lekin uper se maine jab neeche dekha to sabhi ki aankhe hamper hi jami hui thi. Mujhe rony avi vanraj or robo sabhi sahi salamat dikhai diye. To me tension free ho gya.






Khair aag ka force kam ho gya tha isliye me Bapis jameen ki taraf aane laga or ek jordaar superhero landing ho gyi jameen per.






Bahi rony vanraj or avi ke chehre per ek alag hi smile aagyi thi hame dekh kar.






Bahi jo bhi vampires baha per moujud the vo hame dekhte hi hamari taraf doude hamse ladne ke liye.





Or idhar unko aata hua dekhke hamare chehre per bhi smile aagyi. Or ham bhi super fast speed se unki taraf doude.



Or jaise hi hamari doud start hui time ek dum slow motion me aagya. Itna ki dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise sabhi ko ek sath stop kar diya gya ho.



Khair rider ne apni sword nikali or speed se use chalate hue aage badhne laga




Uski talvar jaha se bhi gujarati baha vampire ki mundiya kat kar alag hone ka wait karne lagi. Kyuki time abhi kaafi slow tha.







Ek hi jhatke me baha per moujud sare vampire ka kaam almost tamaam ho gya tha.




Or in sabko nipta kar jaise hi me ruka



To baha per moujud sabhi vampires ek dum khade hi reh gye
Or sabki ek hi jhatke me mundi alag hoke gir gyi or jameen per girte hi dhul me tabdeel ho gyi.




Ye seen dekh ke rony vanraj or avi kush ho gye.




Avi- kya baat hai papa ke rup me rider maja aagya. Baise inka aana rukne wala nhi hai. Isliye aap aona focus b.h per kare jo un holes me chhip kar baitha hua hai. Or un holes me ham ja nhi pa rahe hai. Isliye aap baha jaaye or usko dhyan lagane se roke kyuki prithvi apni jagah se kaafi aage aagyi hai. Almost marsh ke pass. Or jaldi hi ham usko bhi paar kar jayenge. Or vo dekhiye yaha ke ped paudhe kaise sukhane lage hai jabki paani gir raha hai lagatar fir bhi.






Ye sunkar ham sabhi ne aasman me dekha to hamari aankhe khuli ki khuli reh gyi. Kyuki hame hamare chand ki jagah per bada sa marsh dikhne laga tha.







Bahi is unhone ghatna se pure brahmaand me kuch na kuch anarth hone laga tha. Kahi jagah blast hone lage the or kai chhote mote grah to mast hi hone lage the. Bahi sabhi jagah moujud kaali or buri shaktiya jaagrit hone lagi thi. Or logo ko pareshan karne lagi thi. Unke to jaise man ka ho gya tha.






Yahi haal prithvi ka bhi tha. Charo or kaale dhue ke rup me kaali shaktiya udti hui dikhne lagi thi. Or brahmand me moujud shaktiya us hole se seedhe prithvi per aane lagi thi. Samudri me ufaan aane laga tha. Or kai sehar to aadhe se jyada dub hi gye the. Khaskar jo samudro ke kinare per base hue the unke liye to jaise pralay aagyi thi.









Same yahi haal baaki jagho per bhi tha. Surya per Grahan lag gya tha.



Jis bajah se vo shaktiya or bhi jyada shaktishali hone lagi thi. Or ab rony or team ke bas se bahar ja raha tha sara mamla.




Or rider akela kya kya sambhalega. Use is waqt bahut jor se madad ki jarurat thi.






Bahi aakash me ek or se super duper speed se ek tufaan b.h ki taraf aaraha tha. Or uske raste me jitne bhi Shaitan aarahe the vo sabhi usi tufaan me nast hote ja rahe the.




B.h is waqt apne dhyan me baitha hua tha or uska kaam almost pura hi ho gya tha to usne apni aankho ko khola.or jab usne saamne dekha to uski aankhe khuli ki khuli reh gyi.




Isse pehle vo kuch samajh pata vo tufaan use uda le gya. Or us hole me se use jameen per neeche le aaya.




Bahi sab keval dekhte hi reh gye. Or dekhte kya kuch dekh hi nhi paaye kyuki charo taraf bhyankar tufaan aagya tha jo ham sabki aankho ke saamne jaakar hi ruka.



Or jaise hi tufaan shant hua hamari aankho ke saamne b.h jameen per pada hua tha. Jo khud hila hua tha ki vo yaha kaise aagya.




Khair vo jaldi se khada hua or usne baha per moujud sare logo ko dekha.





Or fir uski najar gyi uske peeche moujud us tufaan per.





B.h- tum kon ho.






Dev- tumhara dushman hi samajhlo mujhe. Ye sab jo kar rahe ho ise abhi ke abhi band kar di Verna tumhari mout aaj koi nhi rok payega.








B.h- achha kon marega mujhe tum







Dev- me nhi vi dekho saamne tumhari mout




Ye sunte hi b.h ne saamne dekha or uski aankhe fati ki fati reh gyi. Kyuki saamne rider khada hua tha. Apne bahi purane rup me. B h ka gala puri tarah se sukh gya tha or uske muh me thook bhi nhi bacha tha jise vo andar lene ki kosis kar raha tha.






B.h- ye impossible hai. Ise to maine vapis bhej diya tha fir ye bapis kaise aagya.






Dev- ye tumhari soch thi ki tumne ise Bapis bhej diya tha. Joki sach bhi tha. Lekin tumne ek bat per Gour nhi kiya. Jo us contract me likhi hui thi. Kash use pad lete to achha hota tumhare liye.





Ye sunkar b.h kaafi confuse tha.







Dev- jyada confuse mat ho me batata hu tumhe. Us contract ki ek limit thi jo ki 1000 years ki thi. Or aaj abhi us contract ko pure 1000 years ho chuke hai. Ab ise tumhari kismat kaho ya kuch or. Lekin tumne jab rider ko vapis bheja uske agle hi din us contract ki miyaad khatam ho gyi or rider bhi vapis se aazad ho gya. Or jo hukum tumne rider ko diya tha vo bhi bekaar ho gya isiliye vo aazad ho gya or apne man ke hisaab se jaha chahe baha ja sakta hai to aagya vo yaha per tumhari band bajane.









Avi- ab nhi bachega tu jitna uchhalna tha uchhal liya tune ab tere din khatam hue.






B.h- bache ye tumhari galat fehmi hai. Kyuki bhale hi me mar jaau. Lekin ab ye brahmand bhi nhi bachega kyuki ab mujhe dhyan lagane ki bhi jarurat nhi hai. Kyuki prithvi apni raftar pakad chuki hai or ab vo apni dusri jagah per pahuche bina nahi rukne wali hai. Isliye tum log jeet kar bhi haar gye ho








Main2- bhale hi ham sabhi khatam ho jaaye lekin tumhara jo sapna hai vo me kabhi pura nhi hone dunga.





Ye kehkar rider ne doud lagai or b.h ko pakad kar us hole se dur le gya.jaha vo aaram se uska sikaar kar paaye.





Bahi dev or baaki sab bahi khade hue the.




Dev- aap logo ko ab kuch bhi karne ki jarurat nhi hai. Bas in vampire ko role rahiye baaki me dekh lunga.







Rony- tum dev ho na. Surya ne bataya tha tumhare bare me.






Dev- ha me bahi hu. Ye intro baad me pura kar lenge. Filhaal hamare pass jyda samay nhi hai.



Ye kehkar dev super fast speed se udd gya or jaha jaha vo kaale dhue ke shaitaan ud rahe the unko thikane lagane laga. Ye uske liye halwa khane jaisa kaam tha. Unko dekhne matra se unka khatma hota ja raha tha. Dev ki third eye ke prabhav se to shukracharya nhi bache fir ye to unke mukabale exist hi nhi karte hai.





10 min. Me dev puri prithvi ka chakkar lagakar Bapis un holes ke pass aagya. Or ab main kaam baaki tha. Prithvi ko Bapis uski jagah per pahuchne ka kaam jo keval dev hi kar sakta tha is kisi ke bas ki baat nhi thi ise theek karna..












Baaki dekhte hai ab kya hota hai aage. Kya dev ise vakai me theek kar payega. Ya aaj is brahmand ka vinash pakka hai. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.





























To be continue………………………..

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[Luffy]

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Sare dushmano ka safaya ho chuka tha. Lekin abhi bhi ek musibat thi jo samne khadi hui thi. Or vo thi rider ab vapis kaise jayega. Or kahi aisa to nhi ki dobara aajayega vo bhi bina bataye.







Main- kaam pura ho gya hai. Ab batao tum kya chahte ho.







Main2- tum tension mat lo me yaha nhi rukne wala. Lekin hai ek baat jarur kahunga ki jab bhi tumhe meri madad ki jarurat padegi me aajuang.







Main- achha hai baise ab kaha jaoge.






Main2- yahi rahunga kyuki bure logo ki kami nahi aane wali hai yaha. Or unka sikaar karne ke liye mujhe to yaha hona hi chahiye.








Tabhi hamare pechhe se ek aawaj aai.






H.K- iski jarurat nhi hai rider. Tum mere sath vapis chal rahe ho.





Ye sunkar hamne peechhe dekha to hell king khade hue the. Jise dekhkar ham thode shocked the ki ye kaha se aagye.





Main- aap yaha kaise aapko to qaid kiya tha na b.h ne






H.k- ha kiya to tha lekin mujhe nhi mere ek dusre rup ko. Main janta tha ki vo kya karega mere sath isliye maine khud ko pehle hi safe kar liya tha.






Main- to fir abhi tak saamne kyu nhi aye the.






H.k- me bhale hi tumhare samne nhi aaya lekin maine tumhari madad to ki hi. Verna tum nahi hara paate b.h ko.






Main- kaisi madad.





H.k- rider ko vapis bhej kar or kya. Maine hi use jahannum se bahar nikala tha or Bapis se tumhare pasa bheja tha. Ek naye contract ki madad se.




Ye sunkar me muskuraya.





Main- gajab ho aap bhi. Maan gye aapko. Khair nice to meet u.






H.k- nice to meet u too surya. Ummid hai dobara jaldi hi mulakaat hogi.






Main- mat lagaiye aisi ummid aapse dobara milne ka matlab hai fir se koi nai bhutiya musibat. Isliye ye ummid karo ki hamara milna ho hi na kabhi.






Ye sunkar vo bhi hasne lage. Or fir vo hame bye bolke gayab ho gye.



Or unke jaate hi rider bhi gayab ho gya or reh gya sirf me akela. Us sunsan jagah per.





Isliye maine khud ko sambhala or vapis se me pahucha usi jagah jaha fight chal rahi thi.





Baha pahuch kar maine sabka halchal puchha. Sab badiya the. Sara kachar apne aap hi saaf ho gya tha. Matlab sari lashe panchtatva me vileen ho gyi thi. Hole band ho gya tha or prithvi ab apne sahi kram me vapis aane lagi thi. Jitni bhi tabahi hui thi usme se keval baad ka paani Bapis gya tha baaki jo bhukamp vagera aaye the jiski bajah se jagah jagah darare khuli thi vo itni jaldi nhi bharne wali thi.





Sarakar apne kaam me Bapis se lag gyi thi. Sabhi logo ko unke ghar pahunchane me or jitna bhi nuksan hua hai uski bharpai karne me.






Bahi dev se ham mile.







Main- chalo ab ghar sabko milna hai tumse or khane ka promise yaad hai na.






Dev- ha bhai baise bhi ladai ke baad bhul bahut lagti hai. Isliye chalte hai.





Rony- race lagate hai kon pehle gaao pahuchta hai. Or dev babu udd kar nhi doud kar jana hai.






Dev- me to udunga hi lekin uper nahi tum logo ke sath neeche hi






Avi- aisa kaise chalega





Dev- chal jayega baise bhi in mahanubhavon ke sath doud pana impossible hai. Isliye me to udunga hi.






Avi- to fir me bhi udunga. Aapke sath






Main- badiya hai.




Chalo ek line me aao sare.



Sabhi ek line me khade ho gye.



Uske baad maine ginti gini




Get set go…………..




Ye bolte hi hamne doudna or udna shuru kiya.



Sabhi super fast speed se bhag rahe the ghar ki taraf. Jaha se bhi nikalte baha ek chhota sa tufaan sa aajata.




Lekin kisi ko kuch bhi nahi dikha. Sirf avi hi tha jo hamare sath nahi udd pa raha tha. Kyuki uska suit itna fast nhi tha. Lekin itna slow bhi nahi tha vo.




Jaha hame ghar pahunchane me 1-2 sec. Lage bahi avi ko kuch min.





Ham sabhi ghar ke bahar hi ruke seedhe or hamari is race me keval avi hi haar gya. Baaki ham sabhi lagbhag ek sath hi pahuche apni manjil tak.






Rony- maja aagya. Lekin avi bichara vo peechhe reh gya.





Tabhi avi ki aawaj aai.




Avi- chachu me hara nhi hu balki jeet gya hu. Kyuki ghar ke darwaje tak pahunchana tha na ki bahar wale darwaje tak.



Ye bolke vo hamare uper se udta hua ghar ke darwaje ke pass land hua or ghar ki doorbell baja di.





Ye dekhke ham sabhi shocked reh gye or ek dusre ka muh dekhne lage. Or anayaas hi hamare chehre per hasi aagyi.




Khair ham sabhi normali chal ke apne ghar ke andar gye or jab maine sabko bataya ki ye dev hai or iski madad se ham sare dushmano ko khatma karne me kaamyab rahe to sabki kushi ka thikana hi nahi raha. Sabhi ne dev ko bahut bahut dhanyavad kaha




Or fir thodi gapshap karne ke baad ham sabhi khana khane baith gye.







Vanraj- baise ek cheez ke baare me mujhe puchhna hai.





Main- kya





Vanraj- udhar ladai ke dauran mujhe ek vampire ne kata tha lekin uske kaatne ke baad mujhe to kuch nhi hua lekin us vampire ki haalat badal gyi thi.vo behosh ho pada hua tha or uska rang bhi normal ho gya.






Ye sunke maine chouka.




Main- kya sach me.





Vanraj- ha us waqt to maine dhyan nhi diya lekin abhi mujhe janna hai uske bare me.






Dev- actually vanraj tumhare andar vikraal ki powers hai isiliye tumper un vampire ka koi asar nhi hua. Kyuki vikraal khud ek power tarah ka vampire tha or in sabhi se jyada power full. Isliye tumhare khoon me kuch aisa hai jiski bajah se vo vampire vapis se insan ban gya. Or ye baat to tum bhi jante hi ho ki tum kisi bhi insan ko vapis se swasth karne me saksham ho fir chahe use kaisi bhi beemari kyu na ho. Or usi ki bajah se tumhara khoon chakhte hi vo vampire theek ho gya or Bapis se insan ban gya.





Ye sunke hame bakai me bahut kushi hui kyuki aage agar kabhi bhi aisi koi situation aati hai to vanraj ki madad se ham unhe theek kar sakte hai.



Uske baad avi bola.



Avi- baise dev chachu aap apni story bataiye na ki aapko ye sab powers kaha se or kaise mili hai. Hame janna hai. Jab uper aasman me hamne aapka rup dekha or vo third eye to sach me me to hill gya tha. Kitni power hai aapke pass aapne kaise earth ko utha liya tha apne kandho per.






Ye sunke sabhi ka muh khula ka khula hi reh gya.






Dad- kya sach me





Avi- ha dadu vo seen aap dekhte na to dekhte hi reh jaate.





Dad- fir to bhai mujhe bhi janna hai batao na beta





Ye sunke sabhi ne dev se uski story janne ki zid ki.






Dev- theek hai batata hu. Baise maine ek story likhi hai apni life per aap use pad sakte hai usme har ek detail ka zikr hai. Ki kaise or kyu mere pass ye shaktiya hai.






Ashk- padne me vo maja nhi aayega jo sunne me aayega aao hi bataiye na







Ye sunke dev hasa.






Dev- theek hai to suniye.




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Iske baad dev ne unhen apni puri life journey ko bataya jisme kai ghante aise hi nikal gye or jab sabne suna ki swayam mahadev ke or param bhakt persuram ji ki darshanon ka laabh bhi prapt hua hai dev ko to sabhi ke aacharya ki koi seema hi nhi rahi. Or to or ye to sisya hai bhagwan persuram ke.






Sabhi ka sir apne aap hi dev ke samne jhuk gya.



Jise dev ne uthaya or un sabko aisa karne se mana kiya



Sari life story janne ke avi and party akele hi dev ke sath gappo me jut gyi. Jaha avi ne itne sawal puchhe ki dev unka jawab dete dete pareshan ho gya. Multiverse se releted or sare grahon se releted. Isi brahamand me earth jaisa dusra grah konsa hai vagera vagera.




Dev ek gyan ka samundar tha jisse avi jyada se jyada gyan bator lena chahta tha or dev bhi bina kisi jhijhak ke use sab bata raha tha. Sayad kuch soch kar hi.




Aise hi kab samay beet gya pata hi nahi chala.



Uske baad dev ki Bidaai ka samay aaya to mom ne use jaldi hi apne pure parivar ke sath aana ka nimantran diya. Jise usne swikaar bhi kiya bina kisi deri ke





Fir usne sabse bida li or vo palak jhapkate hi baha se adrishya ho gya. Or apni manjil per pahuch gya.







Bahi dev ke jaane ke kuch dino baad tak sab kuch normal hi gya tha zindagi Bapis patri per aane lagi thi. Sabhi in sab hadso ko bhul kar aage badhne lage the.






Aise hi ek mahina nikal gya.




Fir ek din maine dad se mere or radha ke chhuti per jaane ki baat kahi jise sunkar sabhi kush the. Or sabhi ka man tha kahi bahar jaane ka lekin me akele radha ke sath time bitana chahta tha.




Main- dad me or radha manali ja rahe hai baha apna jo ghar hai ham bahi rukenge kuch dino tak. Baaki aap sabhi logo ko kaha jana hai aap sabhi jaiye. Bahut samay ho gya radha ke sath kahi bahar nhi gya hu or usko utna samay bhi nahi de paya hu isliye pls hame jaane deejiye.





Ye sunkar sabhi hasne lage.




Dad- beta ham sabhi majak kar rahe hai hame nahi banna hai kabab me haddi tum dono jaao or khub enjoy karo ham yahi theek hai. Baaki me to veer or rony ko bhi kahi bahar bhejane wala hu bahuo ke sath. Sabhi alag alag jagho per jayenge isliye veer or rony apni apni jagah dhund lo or pehli fursat me nikal lo. Samajh gye na.





Ye sunke un dono ne bhi apni mundi hilaai. Or vo bhi kush ho gye.




Uske baad next day me or radha nikal gye bahi usi din veer or rony bhi chale gye. Bahi veer gya Switzerland or rony gya. Singapore





Or bahi junior party Bapis apne clg jaane lagi or unki life bhi normal hone lagi. Amar nidhi Samar or varsha in charo ki love story me badiya se chalne lagi thi. Dono ki shadi to tay hi thi isiliye apni life ke sare tensions ko bhula kar vo bas enjoy hi kar rahe the. Lekin avi or ashk abhi bhi single hi the. Ab pata nhi inke partner kab inki life me aate hai. Or kaise aate hai.






Bahi radha or me baithe hue the manali me haseen sham ka aanand lete hue





Main- maine kuch decide kiya hai radha abse me in sab me nahi padne wala hu. Apne kaam or ghar per hi focus rahunga.






Radha- or agar koi nai musibat aai fir






Main- bache sambhal lenge. Ab unka samay aagya hai. Halaki me unko guide karta rahunga but maidan me nhi jaunga. Jab tak bahut hi jyada jaruri na ho.






Radha- jaisa aapko theek lage. Lekin ek baat me keh deti hu. Me apna ghar chhodke kahi or rehne nahi jaane wali. Mujhe sabke sath hi rehne me maja aata hai. Isliye rehna to aapko bahi gaao. Me hi padega.







Main- main janta hu or maine to uske baare me socha bhi nhi hai isliye tum tension na lo. Ham sab sath me hi rahenge





Radha- hamesha.




Ye kehke dono ne ek dusre ka hath pakada or ek chhota sa kiss kiya or dhalte hue suraj ke dekhne me kho gye dono hi.










(Or dosto isi ke sath surya ki trilogy ka yahi per ant hota hai. Iske maine teen hi part soche the jo maine pure kar diye hai. Or agar ab aage story likhunga to usme avi and party lead hero rahegi or surya ka keval beech beech me cameo hi rahega. Baaki to inko kismat hai )



















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[Nevil singh]

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Main jameen ke neeche fasa hua tha or uper chadne ki kosis kar raha tha lekin baat ban nhi pa rahi thi. Bahut kosis kar chuka tha me. Lekin nhi ja pa raha tha me uper ki taraf. Thoda bahut uper jata bhi tha to khisak kar vapis neeche aajata tha.






Main- are yaar ab kya karu kaise uper jaau. Hey mahadev koi rasta to dikhaao.






Ye bolte hiujhe dev ki baat yaad aai to maine socha ek baar try karke dekhta hi sayad kaam ban jaaye.






Maine apni aankho ko band kiya.or apne hatho ko joda. Or use yaad kiya jo uper moujud sare bhuto ka baap tha.





Pura dhyan lagaya or rider ko yaad kiya. Uski jhalak ko apni aankho me yaad kiya or use Bapis aane ka aavahan kiya usse madad ki guhaar lagai kyuki ek bahi tha jo is samay meri madad kar sakta tha.






Thodi der tak use yaad karne ke baad mere hatho me jalan hone lagi.




Ye mehsus hote hi maine or jor se uska naam pukara apne gale ki puri aawaj ke sath maine rider ko pukara.







Meri aawaj us gadde me gunj gyi or aasan ke gunjate hi mera rup ek dum se badal gya.




Or is baar kuch alag hua pehle me rider ke aate hi blank ho jata tha lekin ab mujhe sab kuch dikh raha tha or mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise abki baar me or rider ek sath driving seat per baithe hai. Or ek sath gadi chala rahe hai. Ye sab dekhke me kaafi kush or exited tha.







Main- jyada kush mat ho jana abhi uper kaise jaaye ye socho.






Main2- dekhte jaao bache.




Ye kehkar usne apne dono hatho ko jameen se touch kiya



Or aisa karte hi puri jameen kisi jwalamukhi ki tarah sulagane lagi.




Ye dekhke meri haalat kharab hone lagi. Kyuki rider ke irade mujhe theek nhi lag rahe the.






Main- ye kya karne ja rahe ho tum






Main2- bahar nikalne ka jugaad.




Ye sunkar maine neeche dekha to neeche ka pura malwa ek dum jwalamukhi jaisa dadhakne laga tha.




Or iske aage me kuch sochta ya kehta ek bhayankar dhamaka jaisa hua hamare pairo ke neeche. Or neeche se bhari pressure lagne ki bajah se ham uper ko jaane lage vo bhi super duper fast speed se. Pure gadde ko cheerte hue ham seedhe uper pahuche or neeche ka lava hame aasman me kaafi unchai tak le gya. Ham uper or hamare neeche garam lava.




Jo gadda khatam hote hi charo taraf fail gya.



Or aaspaas jo bhi moujud the us lava me jal kar khatam hogye.




Mujhe bas yahi dar tha ki kahi koi meri team wala na ho jo is lava ki chapet me aajaye. Lekin uper se maine jab neeche dekha to sabhi ki aankhe hamper hi jami hui thi. Mujhe rony avi vanraj or robo sabhi sahi salamat dikhai diye. To me tension free ho gya.






Khair aag ka force kam ho gya tha isliye me Bapis jameen ki taraf aane laga or ek jordaar superhero landing ho gyi jameen per.






Bahi rony vanraj or avi ke chehre per ek alag hi smile aagyi thi hame dekh kar.






Bahi jo bhi vampires baha per moujud the vo hame dekhte hi hamari taraf doude hamse ladne ke liye.





Or idhar unko aata hua dekhke hamare chehre per bhi smile aagyi. Or ham bhi super fast speed se unki taraf doude.



Or jaise hi hamari doud start hui time ek dum slow motion me aagya. Itna ki dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise sabhi ko ek sath stop kar diya gya ho.



Khair rider ne apni sword nikali or speed se use chalate hue aage badhne laga




Uski talvar jaha se bhi gujarati baha vampire ki mundiya kat kar alag hone ka wait karne lagi. Kyuki time abhi kaafi slow tha.







Ek hi jhatke me baha per moujud sare vampire ka kaam almost tamaam ho gya tha.




Or in sabko nipta kar jaise hi me ruka



To baha per moujud sabhi vampires ek dum khade hi reh gye
Or sabki ek hi jhatke me mundi alag hoke gir gyi or jameen per girte hi dhul me tabdeel ho gyi.




Ye seen dekh ke rony vanraj or avi kush ho gye.




Avi- kya baat hai papa ke rup me rider maja aagya. Baise inka aana rukne wala nhi hai. Isliye aap aona focus b.h per kare jo un holes me chhip kar baitha hua hai. Or un holes me ham ja nhi pa rahe hai. Isliye aap baha jaaye or usko dhyan lagane se roke kyuki prithvi apni jagah se kaafi aage aagyi hai. Almost marsh ke pass. Or jaldi hi ham usko bhi paar kar jayenge. Or vo dekhiye yaha ke ped paudhe kaise sukhane lage hai jabki paani gir raha hai lagatar fir bhi.






Ye sunkar ham sabhi ne aasman me dekha to hamari aankhe khuli ki khuli reh gyi. Kyuki hame hamare chand ki jagah per bada sa marsh dikhne laga tha.







Bahi is unhone ghatna se pure brahmaand me kuch na kuch anarth hone laga tha. Kahi jagah blast hone lage the or kai chhote mote grah to mast hi hone lage the. Bahi sabhi jagah moujud kaali or buri shaktiya jaagrit hone lagi thi. Or logo ko pareshan karne lagi thi. Unke to jaise man ka ho gya tha.






Yahi haal prithvi ka bhi tha. Charo or kaale dhue ke rup me kaali shaktiya udti hui dikhne lagi thi. Or brahmand me moujud shaktiya us hole se seedhe prithvi per aane lagi thi. Samudri me ufaan aane laga tha. Or kai sehar to aadhe se jyada dub hi gye the. Khaskar jo samudro ke kinare per base hue the unke liye to jaise pralay aagyi thi.









Same yahi haal baaki jagho per bhi tha. Surya per Grahan lag gya tha.



Jis bajah se vo shaktiya or bhi jyada shaktishali hone lagi thi. Or ab rony or team ke bas se bahar ja raha tha sara mamla.




Or rider akela kya kya sambhalega. Use is waqt bahut jor se madad ki jarurat thi.






Bahi aakash me ek or se super duper speed se ek tufaan b.h ki taraf aaraha tha. Or uske raste me jitne bhi Shaitan aarahe the vo sabhi usi tufaan me nast hote ja rahe the.




B.h is waqt apne dhyan me baitha hua tha or uska kaam almost pura hi ho gya tha to usne apni aankho ko khola.or jab usne saamne dekha to uski aankhe khuli ki khuli reh gyi.




Isse pehle vo kuch samajh pata vo tufaan use uda le gya. Or us hole me se use jameen per neeche le aaya.




Bahi sab keval dekhte hi reh gye. Or dekhte kya kuch dekh hi nhi paaye kyuki charo taraf bhyankar tufaan aagya tha jo ham sabki aankho ke saamne jaakar hi ruka.



Or jaise hi tufaan shant hua hamari aankho ke saamne b.h jameen per pada hua tha. Jo khud hila hua tha ki vo yaha kaise aagya.




Khair vo jaldi se khada hua or usne baha per moujud sare logo ko dekha.





Or fir uski najar gyi uske peeche moujud us tufaan per.





B.h- tum kon ho.






Dev- tumhara dushman hi samajhlo mujhe. Ye sab jo kar rahe ho ise abhi ke abhi band kar di Verna tumhari mout aaj koi nhi rok payega.








B.h- achha kon marega mujhe tum







Dev- me nhi vi dekho saamne tumhari mout




Ye sunte hi b.h ne saamne dekha or uski aankhe fati ki fati reh gyi. Kyuki saamne rider khada hua tha. Apne bahi purane rup me. B h ka gala puri tarah se sukh gya tha or uske muh me thook bhi nhi bacha tha jise vo andar lene ki kosis kar raha tha.






B.h- ye impossible hai. Ise to maine vapis bhej diya tha fir ye bapis kaise aagya.






Dev- ye tumhari soch thi ki tumne ise Bapis bhej diya tha. Joki sach bhi tha. Lekin tumne ek bat per Gour nhi kiya. Jo us contract me likhi hui thi. Kash use pad lete to achha hota tumhare liye.





Ye sunkar b.h kaafi confuse tha.







Dev- jyada confuse mat ho me batata hu tumhe. Us contract ki ek limit thi jo ki 1000 years ki thi. Or aaj abhi us contract ko pure 1000 years ho chuke hai. Ab ise tumhari kismat kaho ya kuch or. Lekin tumne jab rider ko vapis bheja uske agle hi din us contract ki miyaad khatam ho gyi or rider bhi vapis se aazad ho gya. Or jo hukum tumne rider ko diya tha vo bhi bekaar ho gya isiliye vo aazad ho gya or apne man ke hisaab se jaha chahe baha ja sakta hai to aagya vo yaha per tumhari band bajane.









Avi- ab nhi bachega tu jitna uchhalna tha uchhal liya tune ab tere din khatam hue.






B.h- bache ye tumhari galat fehmi hai. Kyuki bhale hi me mar jaau. Lekin ab ye brahmand bhi nhi bachega kyuki ab mujhe dhyan lagane ki bhi jarurat nhi hai. Kyuki prithvi apni raftar pakad chuki hai or ab vo apni dusri jagah per pahuche bina nahi rukne wali hai. Isliye tum log jeet kar bhi haar gye ho








Main2- bhale hi ham sabhi khatam ho jaaye lekin tumhara jo sapna hai vo me kabhi pura nhi hone dunga.





Ye kehkar rider ne doud lagai or b.h ko pakad kar us hole se dur le gya.jaha vo aaram se uska sikaar kar paaye.





Bahi dev or baaki sab bahi khade hue the.




Dev- aap logo ko ab kuch bhi karne ki jarurat nhi hai. Bas in vampire ko role rahiye baaki me dekh lunga.







Rony- tum dev ho na. Surya ne bataya tha tumhare bare me.






Dev- ha me bahi hu. Ye intro baad me pura kar lenge. Filhaal hamare pass jyda samay nhi hai.



Ye kehkar dev super fast speed se udd gya or jaha jaha vo kaale dhue ke shaitaan ud rahe the unko thikane lagane laga. Ye uske liye halwa khane jaisa kaam tha. Unko dekhne matra se unka khatma hota ja raha tha. Dev ki third eye ke prabhav se to shukracharya nhi bache fir ye to unke mukabale exist hi nhi karte hai.





10 min. Me dev puri prithvi ka chakkar lagakar Bapis un holes ke pass aagya. Or ab main kaam baaki tha. Prithvi ko Bapis uski jagah per pahuchne ka kaam jo keval dev hi kar sakta tha is kisi ke bas ki baat nhi thi ise theek karna..












Baaki dekhte hai ab kya hota hai aage. Kya dev ise vakai me theek kar payega. Ya aaj is brahmand ka vinash pakka hai. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.





























To be continue………………………..

Chitaakarshit update dost

 

[Nevil singh]

UPDATE - 104














B.H- dekh mujhe chhod de ham puri dunia per sath me raaj kar sakte hai. Tu jo abhi tak gulaam tha ab aazad rahega hamesha ke liye






Ye sunke rider hasne laga vo bhi jor jor se or uski hasi dekh ke b.h kaafi confuse





B.h- has kyu raha hai tu. Maine koi joke mara kya.







Main2- joke hi to hai. Tu bhul gya ki mera kaam hai buri aatmaon ka sikaar karna. Or agar me aazad hu or tere sath kaam karunga to sabse pehle tera hi sikaar karunga na kyuki sabka sardar to tu hi rahega. Isiliye has raha hu me. Bhale hi me kisi ka bhi gulaam rahu ya aazad rahu. Lekin mera kaam hamesha se ye hi rahega. Agar mera malik mujhe nirdosh ko maarne ko kahega to sabse pehle us malik ka hi me sikaar karunga. Kyuki mujhe kabhi koi gulaam nhi bana sakta hai. Bas mere aane jaane per control pa sakta hai vo. Lekin mujh per kabu nhi kar sakta hai. Isliye ye faltu ke offer dena band kar de. Or apni mout ko swikaar kar le.









B.h- itna aasan nahi hai mera sikaar karna mere andar is waqt samast prithvi ki buri shaktiya baas kar rahi hai ortu ek sath unka saamna nahi kar sakta ye baat me janta hu. Chahe to aajma le.








Main2- achha. Dekhte hai.






Ye kehkar rider ne apna muh khola or jor se saas li.



Aisa karte hi b.h apne aap hawa me hi udne laga or rider ke muh ki taraf khicha aane laga.



Ye dekhke vo bhi hairan tha. Lekin vo itni jaldi haar manne walo me se to bilkul nhi tha.




Usne bhi apna dabaav neeche ki taraf badaya jisse vo turant hi neeche jameen per vapis se khada ho gya.


Ye dekhke rider ne apni sword ko feka lekin b.h usse bach gya or agle hi sec rider ke karib aagya or apna hath uske seene me ghusa diya.




Or uska hath andar jaate hi rider ki body ko jaise keede lag gye hi vo turant hi sadne lagi.




Tabhi maine jor se ek punch mara b.h ke muh per jisse vo dur ja gira or uska hath hamse dur hote hi hamari body Bapis se normal ho gyi.




B.h fir se khada hua or hamari taraf douda. Or ham bhi uski taraf doude.



Bahi raste me hi b.h ke body me se kai prakar ke dhuye bahar nikale jo ki alag alag powerfull black soul thi. Or charo taraf failne lagi.lekin hamne rukna nahi chhoda ham seedhe uski taraf jaane lage.




Or jaise hi thode aage gye hamare pair jameen me dhas gye. Jo ki ek dal dal jaisa tha jo sakht jameen per ban gya tha. Or ham usme neeche ki taraf dhasne lage.




Bahi b h doudta hua hamari taraf aaya or ek jordar punch usne hamare sir me mara jisse ham ek hi jhatke me jameen ke neeche chal gye.





Ab ham pani ke dal dal me fase the isliye rider ki aag kam hone lagi thi. Or pani me rehne ki bajah se meri saas bhi rukne lagi thi.





Bahi paani ke andar moujud aatmaye hamper charo taraf se hamla karne lagi. Jo vakai me bahut jor se lag rahi thi hame






Lekin rider in sabhi se ladne ki puri kosis kar raha tha lekin uske hath koi bhi nahi aaraha tha. Bahi b h uper se sab dekhke kush ho raha tha.







Rider ka dimaag ab kharab hone laga tha.

Isliye usne dono hatho se apni sword ko pakda or jor se jameen me gaad diya.




Or aisa karte hi vo paani puri tarah se sukh gya kyuki charo taraf dhadakti aag fail gyi thi. Jisme achha khasa insan pighal jaaye fir ye chhota sa dal dal kya karega.




Bahi us jalan me un sabhi ka ant ho gya jo us daldal me moujud the or hamper hamla kar rahe the.




Bahi ye garmahat sirf bahi tak seemit nhi rahi balki uper bhi pahuch gyi. Or b.h ne jab apne pairo me garmahat mehsus ki to vo turant hi hawa me ho gya. Kyuki use pata tha ki ye garmahat uska ant baise hi kar sakti hai bina ki mehnat ke.






Bahi ham jo jameen ke neeche the ab jameen ko faad ko uper ko aagye. Jaha hamne dekha ki b.h hawa me tair raha hai.





Ye dekhke rider apni talvar ko Bapis uski taraf feka. Or b.h fir se usse bach nikala lekin abki baar uske hath me ek jara sa cut lag gya. Or itna cut kaafi tha. Us cut me se jo uska khun nikalna shuru hua to rukne ka naam hi nahi liya. Or ye dekhke usne apni aankho ko band kiya or apni puri takat jhonk di us ghaav ko bharne me. Or iska asar bhi hota dikh raha tha. Tabhi rider ne jor se doud lagai or ek chhalang maar kar seedha b.h ka gala pakad liya. Or is hamle se b.h pura hill gya. Lekin ab use khud ko bachana tha isliye usne hawa me tez udna start kiya itna tez ki rider ki aag puri tarah bhun jaaye. Lekin vo ye bhul gya ki aag ko hawa ke pass le jaoge to vo bhujne ki jagah or failne lagegi.






Khair b.h ne hawa me hi rider ko kai punches maarna start kiya jiska asar kaafi ho raha tha. Kyuki uski khopdi chatakne lagi thi.





Or b.h me rider ko pakad kar hawa me or uper ki taraf fek diya.



Ab uski kismat kaho ya hamari ham ek fighter jet se takra gye. Or use jor se pakad liya.


Bahi b h ye dekh raha tha or muskura raha tha.



Or jet ko dekhkar rider ke dimaag me bhi khurafat uthi.



Or ye soch aate hi rider jet ke uper khada ho gya. Or jo use drive kar raha tha uski to rider ko dekhte hi fat gyi. Khair vo plan ko gol gol round khilane laga taaki ham neeche gir jaaye. Lekin rider ne jise hi us jet ko hath lagaya vo jet puri tarah se rider ke vehicle me tabdeel hone laga. Uske charo taraf bhaynakr aag ki lapten uthni lagi. Or ye dekhkar pilot ne seat ejjecter on kiya or vo seat samet hawa me udd gya. Use laga plan blast ho jayega lekin use kya pata ye ab rider ka vehicle hai.







Khair uske jaane ke baad rider uski seat per baitha or usne jet ko b.h ki taraf mod liya. Or hawa me moujud b.h ne jab ye sab dekha to uski hasi bahi gayab ho gyi or vo hawa me ek ore bhagne laga. Or uske peechhe aag ki lapto se ghira hua hamara jet. Or rider ke usper baithne se jet ka look puri tarah se badal gya. Uska muh ki jagah per khatarnaak skull ne le liya tha. Or vo jet bhi apni top speed se bhi jyada fast bhag raha tha. Jaise uske andar bhi koi formula inject kar diya gya ho.






Khair jet b.h ke lagbhag peeche hi tha. B.h baar baar apni dirction change karta ja raha tha taaki koi use pakad na sake.






Or abki baar jaise hi jet uske karib pahucha or usne mudne ki kosis ki baise hi jet ke skull wale muh se ek aag lagi hui moti chain bahar nikli or or usne b.h ko hawa me hi pakad liya itna kaske ki b.h fir kahi ja hi nhi paya.




Or fir rider ne us chain ko Bapis andar ki taraf kheech liya. Or us chain me bandha hua b h jor se jet ke muh se chipak gya us chain ki bajah se jisse use bahut dard ho raha tha. Kyuki charo taraf rider ki lagai hui aag jo thi.







Khair b.h ki aisi haalat dekhen rider ne apni full voice ke sath apni hasi ko bahar nikala jisse sara aasman hi hill gya.








Bahi dusri taraf dev un holes ki bagal se antriksh me pahuch gya tha. Or prithvi ke sath vo bhi udd raha tha or dekh raha tha ki kaise ise roka jaaye or pechhe ki taraf dhakela jaaye. Kyuki jaha per force lagana tha baha per vo hole bana hua tha. Isliye sabse pehle un holes ko band karna padega tabhi prithvi ki speed kam hogi.






Isliye dev vapis se earth per aaya or un holes me se andar chala gya un holes me jo bijli beh rahi thi vo dev ko rokne me nakamyaab thi.





Vo holes ki ek lambi gufa type thi or har ek hole ek grah ko darsha raha tha. Or is waqt earth apne dusre hole. Se thodi hi duri per thi.



Is liye dev ne khud ko dusre hole ke neeche beech rok liya.





Dev- hey mahadev raksha karna.




Ye kehkar dev ne apne dono hatho ko joda or apni third eye ko open kiya or aisa karte hi uska aakar itna bada hua jisme vo hole puri tarah se dhak gya. Or uske dhakte hi holes mese jo energy earth ko uske andar kheech rahi thi uska kaam bahi ruk gya. Kyuki ab dev unke beech me khada hua tha.





Lekin earth ki speed bandh chuki thi isliye uski speed me koi fark nhi pada vo itni hi tezi se us hole ki taraf aa rahi thi.





Or ab dev ko earth ki speed ko kam karna tha.


Isliye usne apni third eye per Bapis se focus kiya or ek tarah ki energy ko earth ki taraf tezi se chhodna start kiya.





Vo energy ka kaam tha earth ko aage badhne se rokna or jaise hi vo energy earth se takrai earth ki speed kam hone lagi dheere dheere hi sahi lekin ye tarika kaam kar raha tha. Dev ki soch thi ki earth us tak pahuche tab tak uski speed kam ho jaaye.





Or aisa hota dikh bhi raha tha. Earth ki raftaar ab kam hone lagi thi. Or use puri tarah se rokne ke liye dev ne apni power ko or badhaya or pressure se earth ki taraf chhodna start kiya or iska asara ye hua ki earth ab puri tarah se usi jagah per ruk gyi or uska aage badhna bhi ruk gya.







Bahi ye sab avi or harry dekh rahe the jise dekhkar unka muh khula ka khula reh gya tha. Kyuki unhe Biswas nhi ho taha tha ki dev itna jyada powerfull hai. Or uski third eye ko dekhke to unke hosh hi udd gye bahi ab unko lagne laga jaise swayam mahadev hi unki madad karne yaha aaye hai ye sab kar rahe hai.









Khair dev ne apni power ko or badhaya or earth ko pechhe ki taraf dhakelna start kiya full force ke sath. Or aisa hone bhi laga turant hi earth Bapis apni jagah per jaane lagi thi. Usi speed se. Jis speed se vo aage ki taraf bad rahi thi.







Lekin yaha bhi ek main kaam tha ki earth ko Bapis se usi jagah per rokna tha jaha vo pehle thi. Ek inch bhi yaha se baha hua to gadbad pakki ho jayegi. Kyuki earth ke bahiri aavran ki graviti uske sath hi chalti hai. Jaha earth rahegi ye graviti bhi bahi per set ho jayegi. Isliye earth ko Bapis se utni hi duri per rokna tha jaha vo pehle ruki hui thi.







Khair usko abhi baha tak pahuchne me waqt lagne wala tha isliye dev ne usko force ke sath dhakel kar chhod diya or ab use in sabhi holes ko band karna tha.




Isliye unse khud ko Bapis moda or apna muh un holes ki taraf kiya or apni aankho ko Bapis se band kiya or mahadev se madad ki mang ki or apne guru ko yaad kiya or jor se OM NAMAH SHIVAYA ka jaao kiya or aisa karte hi uski third eye se kuch kirne nikalne lagi or un holes jaane lagi ek ek karke vo sabhi holes me pahuch gyi or jaise hi vo un holes ke neeche beech ruki unhone apna jalwa dikhana shuru kiya or un holes ko band karna start kiya.



Vo kad holes ki boundry ko apani taraf kheech rahe the or aisa hote hi holes apne aap band hote ja rahe the.





Jaise jaise holes chhote ho rahe the vaise vaise vo kad ka size bhi chhota hota ja raha tha




Or jaise hi vo holes ki boundry un kad se judi baise hi un kad ka size itna chhota hogya ki nagn aankho se unhe dekha imp. Tha. Vo suksham se jyada suksham ho gye the. Or aisa karte hi vo holes puri tarah se band ho gye. Halaki dekha jaaye to vo hole band nhi hue the balki unki size chhoti ho gyi thi. Itni chhoti ki usme se ek cheeti bhi bahar na ja paaye.or unki size chhoti hone ki bajah se usme se jo megnet earth ko apni taraf kheech raha tha uski power ko ek dum se kam ho gyi itni ki vo ek mitti ke kad ko bhi apni taraf na kheech paaye.






Ab keval earth ka hole hi bacha hua tha. Or vampires ka aana ab ruk gya tha kyuki jaha se vo aaraye the vo sabhi holes to ab band ho chuke the. Isliye ab vo aate bhi to kaise aate.







In sabko band karne ke baad dev ne apni uddan ko aage badhaya earth ki taraf or jaldi hi vo earth ke hole ke pass pahuch gya or same bahi process karke usne earth ka hole bhi band kar diya.





Earth per moujud logo ne jab ye sab dekha ki kaise ye holes band ho gye to sabme kushi ki lehar doud padi. Sabhi jashna manane lage. Lekin earth abhi bhi unbalanced thi kyuki is sab me earth ki band achhe se baj gyi thi. Kyuki jagah jagah bhukamp or sunami aane lagi thi. Or ye tabhi rukta jab earth apni sahi jagah per pahuch jaati or travel karna band kar deti.




Or uska hole band hote hi dev gya earth ke neeche or apni full power laga kar earth ko apne kandhe per uthane ki kosis karne laga lekin ye koi halwa to tha nhi isliye isme use kaafi mehnat karni padi. Uski third eye puri tarah se laal hogyi is power se. Lekin akhir kaar usne earth ko uthaya or tezi se uski sahi jagah per le jaane laga.









Bahi rider or b.h ki najar bhi gyi un holes per.






Main2- dekh le tere plan ki batti ban gyi hai. Vo sare hole ab band ho chuke hai or earth bhi apni jagah per Bapis aane lagi hai or jaldi hi aa bhi jayegi. Or ab tu sach me haar gya hai.






Ye sunke b.h ne aasman me jor ki cheekh maari





Or usne apne dono hatho se us chain ko pakda or apni power ka istemaal karne laga or aisa karte hi vo chain sadne lagi or tut kar neeche girne lagi.




Aisa hote hi b.h us qaid se aazad ho gya or qaid se aazad hote hi usne apni aankho se ek bhayankar lazor ko us jet per chhoda jisse us jet ke dono pankh kat gye or agle war me us jet ke 2 tukde ho gye.



Or aisa hote hi us jet me lagi aag apne aap bujh gyi or vo neeche ko girne laga kisi parkare pakchhi ki tarah. Jisme baithe ham bhi neeche ki taraf girne lage.







Ye dekhe b.h fir se kush hone laga lekin vo janta tha ki itni unchai se girne ke baad bhi sayad use kuch ho. Isliye vo udkar hamare pass aaya or apni aankho se lazor se seedha hamper hamla karne laga. Lekin vo rider tha sabka baap. Usme khud bhayankar aag lagi hui thi fir bhala ye lazor uska kya bigaad leti.



Or yahi hua jab usne lazor chhodna band nhi kiya to rider ne tang aakar apna muh khola or bhayankar aag ki lapten bikwali jo seedhi b.h ke muh me lagi or isme vo jhulas bhi gya or uski aankho se lazor nikalna bhi puri tarah se band ho gya. Or vo bhi hamari hi tarah jameen per seedha girne laga kyuki is aag me jhulsane se vo thodi der ke liye be sudh ho gya tha or jab tak use hosh aata ham jameen per gir chuke the or hamare jameen se takrate hi baha per bhayankar sa dhamaka jaisa ho gya or baha per ek bada sa gadda ban gya.





Khair ham jaldi khade hue or us gadde se bahar nikale hamse thodi hi duri per b.h bhi jameen per pada hua tha





Rider uske pass gya or apne dono hatho se uski coller ko pakda or use hawa me utha.




Main2- bahut uchhal kood kar li tumne or ab tumhare narak ki aag me jalne ka waqt aagya hai





Ye kehke rider ne uski jeb me hath dala or vo paras pathar usse le liya.



B.h ne use vapis lene ki kosis ki lekin vo nakamyaab raha.





Main2- dekho meri aankho me.



B.h- nhi.




Main2- kyu dar lag raha hai apne gunaho ko fir se dekhne se. Dekho.




Ye dekho rider ne itnj jor se kaha ki b.h ki aatma tak kamp gyi or uski najre seedhi rider ki najro se mil gyi.



Or aisa hote hi use vo sab dikhne laga jo usne Aaj Tak kiya tha pichhale kai hazar salon ke liye uske sare gunaah aaj uske saamne the




Or jab use uske gunaah dikhne band hue jo ki bahut der baad hua kyuki iske gunaaho ki list bahut lambi to thi hi lekin uske andar jo itni buri aatmaye basi hui thi is waqt unke gunaah bhi use hi dikh rahe the or sabka ant ek saath hi ho raha tha. Jis bajah se b.h ki cheekh pure aasman me failne lagi thi.







Or jab in sabka ant hua to b.h puri tarah se pathar ka ban gya tha uski aankho me jahannum ki jameen ki tarah sulag gyi thi or pathar ban gyi thi.




Or jab rider ne use chhoda to vo gira neeche or girte hi tukdo me bat gya.





Or uske marte hi b.h ka chahita keeda jo ki kahi chhipa hua tha vo bhi gusse me aagya or apni gufa se bahar nikal aaya or bahi se usne tabahi machana start kar diya.








Or uski aawaj rider ko bhi aane lagi.


To rider ne uski taraf jaana shuru kar diya.




Super fast speed se rider us keede ke raste me uske aage aagya.






Or rider ko dekhkar vo keeda or bhi gusse me aagya or usne apne muh se kuch lava jaise thok diya.




Or us thok me rider buri tarah fas gya.




Or vo chhutne ka prayas karne laga lekin chhut nhi pa raha tha.



Tab tak vo keeda rider me ek dum karib pahuch gya or usne rider ko apne muh me bhar kar khane ka prayas kiya.




Ye dekhkar rider ne apni aag ko or jyada bhadka diya or us aag me us keede ka sara lava jal gya or rider aazad ho gya. Or uske aazad hote hi rider ne apni talvar ko liya or uske muh me ghusa diya or use ghuma diya. Or sword ko ghumate hi sword me bhayankar aag jalne lagi or us aag me vo keeda bhi jalne laga.



Us aag se bachne ke liye vo yaha baha ghumne laga or apna sir yaha baha takrane laga lekin isse koi fark nhi pad raha tha or aag apna kaam karne me lagi hui thi. Or isi me us keede ka bhi ant ho gya.










Bahi dev bhi earth ko uski sahi jagah per set kar chuka tha or is tarah earth per aaya hua sara sankat khatam ho gya tha.





Or ab keval sab cover up karna hi baaki tha jo next update me hoga. Dekhiye kya or kaise hota hai sab.

















To be continue………………………..

Shaandaar update dost

 

[Nevil singh]

UPDATE - 105













Sare dushmano ka safaya ho chuka tha. Lekin abhi bhi ek musibat thi jo samne khadi hui thi. Or vo thi rider ab vapis kaise jayega. Or kahi aisa to nhi ki dobara aajayega vo bhi bina bataye.







Main- kaam pura ho gya hai. Ab batao tum kya chahte ho.







Main2- tum tension mat lo me yaha nhi rukne wala. Lekin hai ek baat jarur kahunga ki jab bhi tumhe meri madad ki jarurat padegi me aajuang.







Main- achha hai baise ab kaha jaoge.






Main2- yahi rahunga kyuki bure logo ki kami nahi aane wali hai yaha. Or unka sikaar karne ke liye mujhe to yaha hona hi chahiye.








Tabhi hamare pechhe se ek aawaj aai.






H.K- iski jarurat nhi hai rider. Tum mere sath vapis chal rahe ho.





Ye sunkar hamne peechhe dekha to hell king khade hue the. Jise dekhkar ham thode shocked the ki ye kaha se aagye.





Main- aap yaha kaise aapko to qaid kiya tha na b.h ne






H.k- ha kiya to tha lekin mujhe nhi mere ek dusre rup ko. Main janta tha ki vo kya karega mere sath isliye maine khud ko pehle hi safe kar liya tha.






Main- to fir abhi tak saamne kyu nhi aye the.






H.k- me bhale hi tumhare samne nhi aaya lekin maine tumhari madad to ki hi. Verna tum nahi hara paate b.h ko.






Main- kaisi madad.





H.k- rider ko vapis bhej kar or kya. Maine hi use jahannum se bahar nikala tha or Bapis se tumhare pasa bheja tha. Ek naye contract ki madad se.




Ye sunkar me muskuraya.





Main- gajab ho aap bhi. Maan gye aapko. Khair nice to meet u.






H.k- nice to meet u too surya. Ummid hai dobara jaldi hi mulakaat hogi.






Main- mat lagaiye aisi ummid aapse dobara milne ka matlab hai fir se koi nai bhutiya musibat. Isliye ye ummid karo ki hamara milna ho hi na kabhi.






Ye sunkar vo bhi hasne lage. Or fir vo hame bye bolke gayab ho gye.



Or unke jaate hi rider bhi gayab ho gya or reh gya sirf me akela. Us sunsan jagah per.





Isliye maine khud ko sambhala or vapis se me pahucha usi jagah jaha fight chal rahi thi.





Baha pahuch kar maine sabka halchal puchha. Sab badiya the. Sara kachar apne aap hi saaf ho gya tha. Matlab sari lashe panchtatva me vileen ho gyi thi. Hole band ho gya tha or prithvi ab apne sahi kram me vapis aane lagi thi. Jitni bhi tabahi hui thi usme se keval baad ka paani Bapis gya tha baaki jo bhukamp vagera aaye the jiski bajah se jagah jagah darare khuli thi vo itni jaldi nhi bharne wali thi.





Sarakar apne kaam me Bapis se lag gyi thi. Sabhi logo ko unke ghar pahunchane me or jitna bhi nuksan hua hai uski bharpai karne me.






Bahi dev se ham mile.







Main- chalo ab ghar sabko milna hai tumse or khane ka promise yaad hai na.






Dev- ha bhai baise bhi ladai ke baad bhul bahut lagti hai. Isliye chalte hai.





Rony- race lagate hai kon pehle gaao pahuchta hai. Or dev babu udd kar nhi doud kar jana hai.






Dev- me to udunga hi lekin uper nahi tum logo ke sath neeche hi






Avi- aisa kaise chalega





Dev- chal jayega baise bhi in mahanubhavon ke sath doud pana impossible hai. Isliye me to udunga hi.






Avi- to fir me bhi udunga. Aapke sath






Main- badiya hai.




Chalo ek line me aao sare.



Sabhi ek line me khade ho gye.



Uske baad maine ginti gini




Get set go…………..




Ye bolte hi hamne doudna or udna shuru kiya.



Sabhi super fast speed se bhag rahe the ghar ki taraf. Jaha se bhi nikalte baha ek chhota sa tufaan sa aajata.




Lekin kisi ko kuch bhi nahi dikha. Sirf avi hi tha jo hamare sath nahi udd pa raha tha. Kyuki uska suit itna fast nhi tha. Lekin itna slow bhi nahi tha vo.




Jaha hame ghar pahunchane me 1-2 sec. Lage bahi avi ko kuch min.





Ham sabhi ghar ke bahar hi ruke seedhe or hamari is race me keval avi hi haar gya. Baaki ham sabhi lagbhag ek sath hi pahuche apni manjil tak.






Rony- maja aagya. Lekin avi bichara vo peechhe reh gya.





Tabhi avi ki aawaj aai.




Avi- chachu me hara nhi hu balki jeet gya hu. Kyuki ghar ke darwaje tak pahunchana tha na ki bahar wale darwaje tak.



Ye bolke vo hamare uper se udta hua ghar ke darwaje ke pass land hua or ghar ki doorbell baja di.





Ye dekhke ham sabhi shocked reh gye or ek dusre ka muh dekhne lage. Or anayaas hi hamare chehre per hasi aagyi.




Khair ham sabhi normali chal ke apne ghar ke andar gye or jab maine sabko bataya ki ye dev hai or iski madad se ham sare dushmano ko khatma karne me kaamyab rahe to sabki kushi ka thikana hi nahi raha. Sabhi ne dev ko bahut bahut dhanyavad kaha




Or fir thodi gapshap karne ke baad ham sabhi khana khane baith gye.







Vanraj- baise ek cheez ke baare me mujhe puchhna hai.





Main- kya





Vanraj- udhar ladai ke dauran mujhe ek vampire ne kata tha lekin uske kaatne ke baad mujhe to kuch nhi hua lekin us vampire ki haalat badal gyi thi.vo behosh ho pada hua tha or uska rang bhi normal ho gya.






Ye sunke maine chouka.




Main- kya sach me.





Vanraj- ha us waqt to maine dhyan nhi diya lekin abhi mujhe janna hai uske bare me.






Dev- actually vanraj tumhare andar vikraal ki powers hai isiliye tumper un vampire ka koi asar nhi hua. Kyuki vikraal khud ek power tarah ka vampire tha or in sabhi se jyada power full. Isliye tumhare khoon me kuch aisa hai jiski bajah se vo vampire vapis se insan ban gya. Or ye baat to tum bhi jante hi ho ki tum kisi bhi insan ko vapis se swasth karne me saksham ho fir chahe use kaisi bhi beemari kyu na ho. Or usi ki bajah se tumhara khoon chakhte hi vo vampire theek ho gya or Bapis se insan ban gya.





Ye sunke hame bakai me bahut kushi hui kyuki aage agar kabhi bhi aisi koi situation aati hai to vanraj ki madad se ham unhe theek kar sakte hai.



Uske baad avi bola.



Avi- baise dev chachu aap apni story bataiye na ki aapko ye sab powers kaha se or kaise mili hai. Hame janna hai. Jab uper aasman me hamne aapka rup dekha or vo third eye to sach me me to hill gya tha. Kitni power hai aapke pass aapne kaise earth ko utha liya tha apne kandho per.






Ye sunke sabhi ka muh khula ka khula hi reh gya.






Dad- kya sach me





Avi- ha dadu vo seen aap dekhte na to dekhte hi reh jaate.





Dad- fir to bhai mujhe bhi janna hai batao na beta





Ye sunke sabhi ne dev se uski story janne ki zid ki.






Dev- theek hai batata hu. Baise maine ek story likhi hai apni life per aap use pad sakte hai usme har ek detail ka zikr hai. Ki kaise or kyu mere pass ye shaktiya hai.






Ashk- padne me vo maja nhi aayega jo sunne me aayega aao hi bataiye na







Ye sunke dev hasa.






Dev- theek hai to suniye.




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Iske baad dev ne unhen apni puri life journey ko bataya jisme kai ghante aise hi nikal gye or jab sabne suna ki swayam mahadev ke or param bhakt persuram ji ki darshanon ka laabh bhi prapt hua hai dev ko to sabhi ke aacharya ki koi seema hi nhi rahi. Or to or ye to sisya hai bhagwan persuram ke.






Sabhi ka sir apne aap hi dev ke samne jhuk gya.



Jise dev ne uthaya or un sabko aisa karne se mana kiya



Sari life story janne ke avi and party akele hi dev ke sath gappo me jut gyi. Jaha avi ne itne sawal puchhe ki dev unka jawab dete dete pareshan ho gya. Multiverse se releted or sare grahon se releted. Isi brahamand me earth jaisa dusra grah konsa hai vagera vagera.




Dev ek gyan ka samundar tha jisse avi jyada se jyada gyan bator lena chahta tha or dev bhi bina kisi jhijhak ke use sab bata raha tha. Sayad kuch soch kar hi.




Aise hi kab samay beet gya pata hi nahi chala.



Uske baad dev ki Bidaai ka samay aaya to mom ne use jaldi hi apne pure parivar ke sath aana ka nimantran diya. Jise usne swikaar bhi kiya bina kisi deri ke





Fir usne sabse bida li or vo palak jhapkate hi baha se adrishya ho gya. Or apni manjil per pahuch gya.







Bahi dev ke jaane ke kuch dino baad tak sab kuch normal hi gya tha zindagi Bapis patri per aane lagi thi. Sabhi in sab hadso ko bhul kar aage badhne lage the.






Aise hi ek mahina nikal gya.




Fir ek din maine dad se mere or radha ke chhuti per jaane ki baat kahi jise sunkar sabhi kush the. Or sabhi ka man tha kahi bahar jaane ka lekin me akele radha ke sath time bitana chahta tha.




Main- dad me or radha manali ja rahe hai baha apna jo ghar hai ham bahi rukenge kuch dino tak. Baaki aap sabhi logo ko kaha jana hai aap sabhi jaiye. Bahut samay ho gya radha ke sath kahi bahar nhi gya hu or usko utna samay bhi nahi de paya hu isliye pls hame jaane deejiye.





Ye sunkar sabhi hasne lage.




Dad- beta ham sabhi majak kar rahe hai hame nahi banna hai kabab me haddi tum dono jaao or khub enjoy karo ham yahi theek hai. Baaki me to veer or rony ko bhi kahi bahar bhejane wala hu bahuo ke sath. Sabhi alag alag jagho per jayenge isliye veer or rony apni apni jagah dhund lo or pehli fursat me nikal lo. Samajh gye na.





Ye sunke un dono ne bhi apni mundi hilaai. Or vo bhi kush ho gye.




Uske baad next day me or radha nikal gye bahi usi din veer or rony bhi chale gye. Bahi veer gya Switzerland or rony gya. Singapore





Or bahi junior party Bapis apne clg jaane lagi or unki life bhi normal hone lagi. Amar nidhi Samar or varsha in charo ki love story me badiya se chalne lagi thi. Dono ki shadi to tay hi thi isiliye apni life ke sare tensions ko bhula kar vo bas enjoy hi kar rahe the. Lekin avi or ashk abhi bhi single hi the. Ab pata nhi inke partner kab inki life me aate hai. Or kaise aate hai.






Bahi radha or me baithe hue the manali me haseen sham ka aanand lete hue





Main- maine kuch decide kiya hai radha abse me in sab me nahi padne wala hu. Apne kaam or ghar per hi focus rahunga.






Radha- or agar koi nai musibat aai fir






Main- bache sambhal lenge. Ab unka samay aagya hai. Halaki me unko guide karta rahunga but maidan me nhi jaunga. Jab tak bahut hi jyada jaruri na ho.






Radha- jaisa aapko theek lage. Lekin ek baat me keh deti hu. Me apna ghar chhodke kahi or rehne nahi jaane wali. Mujhe sabke sath hi rehne me maja aata hai. Isliye rehna to aapko bahi gaao. Me hi padega.







Main- main janta hu or maine to uske baare me socha bhi nhi hai isliye tum tension na lo. Ham sab sath me hi rahenge





Radha- hamesha.




Ye kehke dono ne ek dusre ka hath pakada or ek chhota sa kiss kiya or dhalte hue suraj ke dekhne me kho gye dono hi.










(Or dosto isi ke sath surya ki trilogy ka yahi per ant hota hai. Iske maine teen hi part soche the jo maine pure kar diye hai. Or agar ab aage story likhunga to usme avi and party lead hero rahegi or surya ka keval beech beech me cameo hi rahega. Baaki to inko kismat hai )



















IT'S JUST A NEW BEGINNING……..

Bahad khubsurat update ke sath katha ka samapan bahut hi sarahniye hai mitr

 

[Nevil singh]

THanks bhai log aap sabhi sath mila to ek or story complete ho gyi aaj. Ye is story ka last part tha or ab aage surya ki story aage nhi badhegi. Jo maine compele kar di hai.



and ab aage me story sayad nhi likh paunga. Janta hi aap sabhi ko dukh hoga ye sunkar lekin ye sach hai. Kyuki mere pass ab samay ki bahut kami hai. Or story ko likhne ka samay utna nhi mil pata hai jitna mujhe chahiye hota hai. Chuki ye story maine start kar di thi isiliye isko complete karna mera farz tha.jo maine nibhaya. Or isiliye me ab aage koi or story start nhi karna chahta hu kyuki agar maine ise start kiya to use complete bhi karna padega or utna samay mujhe nhi mil pa raha hai. Isliye sorry aap sabhi ko.



and aap sabhi ke jo bhi doubt and confusion ho is story ko leke vo aap mujhse puchh sakte hai. Baise to maine sabhi doubt ko cover karne ki kosis ki hai lekin agar fir bhi kuch bach gya ho to aap bejhijhak puchh sakte hai.

and me ummid karta hu ki aap sabhi mere is faisale ka samman karenge or mujhe force nhi karenge koi or story start karne ke liye. Thanks everyone apna sath dene ke liye.





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UPDATE - 104














B.H- dekh mujhe chhod de ham puri dunia per sath me raaj kar sakte hai. Tu jo abhi tak gulaam tha ab aazad rahega hamesha ke liye






Ye sunke rider hasne laga vo bhi jor jor se or uski hasi dekh ke b.h kaafi confuse





B.h- has kyu raha hai tu. Maine koi joke mara kya.







Main2- joke hi to hai. Tu bhul gya ki mera kaam hai buri aatmaon ka sikaar karna. Or agar me aazad hu or tere sath kaam karunga to sabse pehle tera hi sikaar karunga na kyuki sabka sardar to tu hi rahega. Isiliye has raha hu me. Bhale hi me kisi ka bhi gulaam rahu ya aazad rahu. Lekin mera kaam hamesha se ye hi rahega. Agar mera malik mujhe nirdosh ko maarne ko kahega to sabse pehle us malik ka hi me sikaar karunga. Kyuki mujhe kabhi koi gulaam nhi bana sakta hai. Bas mere aane jaane per control pa sakta hai vo. Lekin mujh per kabu nhi kar sakta hai. Isliye ye faltu ke offer dena band kar de. Or apni mout ko swikaar kar le.









B.h- itna aasan nahi hai mera sikaar karna mere andar is waqt samast prithvi ki buri shaktiya baas kar rahi hai ortu ek sath unka saamna nahi kar sakta ye baat me janta hu. Chahe to aajma le.








Main2- achha. Dekhte hai.






Ye kehkar rider ne apna muh khola or jor se saas li.



Aisa karte hi b.h apne aap hawa me hi udne laga or rider ke muh ki taraf khicha aane laga.



Ye dekhke vo bhi hairan tha. Lekin vo itni jaldi haar manne walo me se to bilkul nhi tha.




Usne bhi apna dabaav neeche ki taraf badaya jisse vo turant hi neeche jameen per vapis se khada ho gya.


Ye dekhke rider ne apni sword ko feka lekin b.h usse bach gya or agle hi sec rider ke karib aagya or apna hath uske seene me ghusa diya.




Or uska hath andar jaate hi rider ki body ko jaise keede lag gye hi vo turant hi sadne lagi.




Tabhi maine jor se ek punch mara b.h ke muh per jisse vo dur ja gira or uska hath hamse dur hote hi hamari body Bapis se normal ho gyi.




B.h fir se khada hua or hamari taraf douda. Or ham bhi uski taraf doude.



Bahi raste me hi b.h ke body me se kai prakar ke dhuye bahar nikale jo ki alag alag powerfull black soul thi. Or charo taraf failne lagi.lekin hamne rukna nahi chhoda ham seedhe uski taraf jaane lage.




Or jaise hi thode aage gye hamare pair jameen me dhas gye. Jo ki ek dal dal jaisa tha jo sakht jameen per ban gya tha. Or ham usme neeche ki taraf dhasne lage.




Bahi b h doudta hua hamari taraf aaya or ek jordar punch usne hamare sir me mara jisse ham ek hi jhatke me jameen ke neeche chal gye.





Ab ham pani ke dal dal me fase the isliye rider ki aag kam hone lagi thi. Or pani me rehne ki bajah se meri saas bhi rukne lagi thi.





Bahi paani ke andar moujud aatmaye hamper charo taraf se hamla karne lagi. Jo vakai me bahut jor se lag rahi thi hame






Lekin rider in sabhi se ladne ki puri kosis kar raha tha lekin uske hath koi bhi nahi aaraha tha. Bahi b h uper se sab dekhke kush ho raha tha.







Rider ka dimaag ab kharab hone laga tha.

Isliye usne dono hatho se apni sword ko pakda or jor se jameen me gaad diya.




Or aisa karte hi vo paani puri tarah se sukh gya kyuki charo taraf dhadakti aag fail gyi thi. Jisme achha khasa insan pighal jaaye fir ye chhota sa dal dal kya karega.




Bahi us jalan me un sabhi ka ant ho gya jo us daldal me moujud the or hamper hamla kar rahe the.




Bahi ye garmahat sirf bahi tak seemit nhi rahi balki uper bhi pahuch gyi. Or b.h ne jab apne pairo me garmahat mehsus ki to vo turant hi hawa me ho gya. Kyuki use pata tha ki ye garmahat uska ant baise hi kar sakti hai bina ki mehnat ke.






Bahi ham jo jameen ke neeche the ab jameen ko faad ko uper ko aagye. Jaha hamne dekha ki b.h hawa me tair raha hai.





Ye dekhke rider apni talvar ko Bapis uski taraf feka. Or b.h fir se usse bach nikala lekin abki baar uske hath me ek jara sa cut lag gya. Or itna cut kaafi tha. Us cut me se jo uska khun nikalna shuru hua to rukne ka naam hi nahi liya. Or ye dekhke usne apni aankho ko band kiya or apni puri takat jhonk di us ghaav ko bharne me. Or iska asar bhi hota dikh raha tha. Tabhi rider ne jor se doud lagai or ek chhalang maar kar seedha b.h ka gala pakad liya. Or is hamle se b.h pura hill gya. Lekin ab use khud ko bachana tha isliye usne hawa me tez udna start kiya itna tez ki rider ki aag puri tarah bhun jaaye. Lekin vo ye bhul gya ki aag ko hawa ke pass le jaoge to vo bhujne ki jagah or failne lagegi.






Khair b.h ne hawa me hi rider ko kai punches maarna start kiya jiska asar kaafi ho raha tha. Kyuki uski khopdi chatakne lagi thi.





Or b.h me rider ko pakad kar hawa me or uper ki taraf fek diya.



Ab uski kismat kaho ya hamari ham ek fighter jet se takra gye. Or use jor se pakad liya.


Bahi b h ye dekh raha tha or muskura raha tha.



Or jet ko dekhkar rider ke dimaag me bhi khurafat uthi.



Or ye soch aate hi rider jet ke uper khada ho gya. Or jo use drive kar raha tha uski to rider ko dekhte hi fat gyi. Khair vo plan ko gol gol round khilane laga taaki ham neeche gir jaaye. Lekin rider ne jise hi us jet ko hath lagaya vo jet puri tarah se rider ke vehicle me tabdeel hone laga. Uske charo taraf bhaynakr aag ki lapten uthni lagi. Or ye dekhkar pilot ne seat ejjecter on kiya or vo seat samet hawa me udd gya. Use laga plan blast ho jayega lekin use kya pata ye ab rider ka vehicle hai.







Khair uske jaane ke baad rider uski seat per baitha or usne jet ko b.h ki taraf mod liya. Or hawa me moujud b.h ne jab ye sab dekha to uski hasi bahi gayab ho gyi or vo hawa me ek ore bhagne laga. Or uske peechhe aag ki lapto se ghira hua hamara jet. Or rider ke usper baithne se jet ka look puri tarah se badal gya. Uska muh ki jagah per khatarnaak skull ne le liya tha. Or vo jet bhi apni top speed se bhi jyada fast bhag raha tha. Jaise uske andar bhi koi formula inject kar diya gya ho.






Khair jet b.h ke lagbhag peeche hi tha. B.h baar baar apni dirction change karta ja raha tha taaki koi use pakad na sake.






Or abki baar jaise hi jet uske karib pahucha or usne mudne ki kosis ki baise hi jet ke skull wale muh se ek aag lagi hui moti chain bahar nikli or or usne b.h ko hawa me hi pakad liya itna kaske ki b.h fir kahi ja hi nhi paya.




Or fir rider ne us chain ko Bapis andar ki taraf kheech liya. Or us chain me bandha hua b h jor se jet ke muh se chipak gya us chain ki bajah se jisse use bahut dard ho raha tha. Kyuki charo taraf rider ki lagai hui aag jo thi.







Khair b.h ki aisi haalat dekhen rider ne apni full voice ke sath apni hasi ko bahar nikala jisse sara aasman hi hill gya.








Bahi dusri taraf dev un holes ki bagal se antriksh me pahuch gya tha. Or prithvi ke sath vo bhi udd raha tha or dekh raha tha ki kaise ise roka jaaye or pechhe ki taraf dhakela jaaye. Kyuki jaha per force lagana tha baha per vo hole bana hua tha. Isliye sabse pehle un holes ko band karna padega tabhi prithvi ki speed kam hogi.






Isliye dev vapis se earth per aaya or un holes me se andar chala gya un holes me jo bijli beh rahi thi vo dev ko rokne me nakamyaab thi.





Vo holes ki ek lambi gufa type thi or har ek hole ek grah ko darsha raha tha. Or is waqt earth apne dusre hole. Se thodi hi duri per thi.



Is liye dev ne khud ko dusre hole ke neeche beech rok liya.





Dev- hey mahadev raksha karna.




Ye kehkar dev ne apne dono hatho ko joda or apni third eye ko open kiya or aisa karte hi uska aakar itna bada hua jisme vo hole puri tarah se dhak gya. Or uske dhakte hi holes mese jo energy earth ko uske andar kheech rahi thi uska kaam bahi ruk gya. Kyuki ab dev unke beech me khada hua tha.





Lekin earth ki speed bandh chuki thi isliye uski speed me koi fark nhi pada vo itni hi tezi se us hole ki taraf aa rahi thi.





Or ab dev ko earth ki speed ko kam karna tha.


Isliye usne apni third eye per Bapis se focus kiya or ek tarah ki energy ko earth ki taraf tezi se chhodna start kiya.





Vo energy ka kaam tha earth ko aage badhne se rokna or jaise hi vo energy earth se takrai earth ki speed kam hone lagi dheere dheere hi sahi lekin ye tarika kaam kar raha tha. Dev ki soch thi ki earth us tak pahuche tab tak uski speed kam ho jaaye.





Or aisa hota dikh bhi raha tha. Earth ki raftaar ab kam hone lagi thi. Or use puri tarah se rokne ke liye dev ne apni power ko or badhaya or pressure se earth ki taraf chhodna start kiya or iska asara ye hua ki earth ab puri tarah se usi jagah per ruk gyi or uska aage badhna bhi ruk gya.







Bahi ye sab avi or harry dekh rahe the jise dekhkar unka muh khula ka khula reh gya tha. Kyuki unhe Biswas nhi ho taha tha ki dev itna jyada powerfull hai. Or uski third eye ko dekhke to unke hosh hi udd gye bahi ab unko lagne laga jaise swayam mahadev hi unki madad karne yaha aaye hai ye sab kar rahe hai.









Khair dev ne apni power ko or badhaya or earth ko pechhe ki taraf dhakelna start kiya full force ke sath. Or aisa hone bhi laga turant hi earth Bapis apni jagah per jaane lagi thi. Usi speed se. Jis speed se vo aage ki taraf bad rahi thi.







Lekin yaha bhi ek main kaam tha ki earth ko Bapis se usi jagah per rokna tha jaha vo pehle thi. Ek inch bhi yaha se baha hua to gadbad pakki ho jayegi. Kyuki earth ke bahiri aavran ki graviti uske sath hi chalti hai. Jaha earth rahegi ye graviti bhi bahi per set ho jayegi. Isliye earth ko Bapis se utni hi duri per rokna tha jaha vo pehle ruki hui thi.







Khair usko abhi baha tak pahuchne me waqt lagne wala tha isliye dev ne usko force ke sath dhakel kar chhod diya or ab use in sabhi holes ko band karna tha.




Isliye unse khud ko Bapis moda or apna muh un holes ki taraf kiya or apni aankho ko Bapis se band kiya or mahadev se madad ki mang ki or apne guru ko yaad kiya or jor se OM NAMAH SHIVAYA ka jaao kiya or aisa karte hi uski third eye se kuch kirne nikalne lagi or un holes jaane lagi ek ek karke vo sabhi holes me pahuch gyi or jaise hi vo un holes ke neeche beech ruki unhone apna jalwa dikhana shuru kiya or un holes ko band karna start kiya.



Vo kad holes ki boundry ko apani taraf kheech rahe the or aisa hote hi holes apne aap band hote ja rahe the.





Jaise jaise holes chhote ho rahe the vaise vaise vo kad ka size bhi chhota hota ja raha tha




Or jaise hi vo holes ki boundry un kad se judi baise hi un kad ka size itna chhota hogya ki nagn aankho se unhe dekha imp. Tha. Vo suksham se jyada suksham ho gye the. Or aisa karte hi vo holes puri tarah se band ho gye. Halaki dekha jaaye to vo hole band nhi hue the balki unki size chhoti ho gyi thi. Itni chhoti ki usme se ek cheeti bhi bahar na ja paaye.or unki size chhoti hone ki bajah se usme se jo megnet earth ko apni taraf kheech raha tha uski power ko ek dum se kam ho gyi itni ki vo ek mitti ke kad ko bhi apni taraf na kheech paaye.






Ab keval earth ka hole hi bacha hua tha. Or vampires ka aana ab ruk gya tha kyuki jaha se vo aaraye the vo sabhi holes to ab band ho chuke the. Isliye ab vo aate bhi to kaise aate.







In sabko band karne ke baad dev ne apni uddan ko aage badhaya earth ki taraf or jaldi hi vo earth ke hole ke pass pahuch gya or same bahi process karke usne earth ka hole bhi band kar diya.





Earth per moujud logo ne jab ye sab dekha ki kaise ye holes band ho gye to sabme kushi ki lehar doud padi. Sabhi jashna manane lage. Lekin earth abhi bhi unbalanced thi kyuki is sab me earth ki band achhe se baj gyi thi. Kyuki jagah jagah bhukamp or sunami aane lagi thi. Or ye tabhi rukta jab earth apni sahi jagah per pahuch jaati or travel karna band kar deti.




Or uska hole band hote hi dev gya earth ke neeche or apni full power laga kar earth ko apne kandhe per uthane ki kosis karne laga lekin ye koi halwa to tha nhi isliye isme use kaafi mehnat karni padi. Uski third eye puri tarah se laal hogyi is power se. Lekin akhir kaar usne earth ko uthaya or tezi se uski sahi jagah per le jaane laga.









Bahi rider or b.h ki najar bhi gyi un holes per.






Main2- dekh le tere plan ki batti ban gyi hai. Vo sare hole ab band ho chuke hai or earth bhi apni jagah per Bapis aane lagi hai or jaldi hi aa bhi jayegi. Or ab tu sach me haar gya hai.






Ye sunke b.h ne aasman me jor ki cheekh maari





Or usne apne dono hatho se us chain ko pakda or apni power ka istemaal karne laga or aisa karte hi vo chain sadne lagi or tut kar neeche girne lagi.




Aisa hote hi b.h us qaid se aazad ho gya or qaid se aazad hote hi usne apni aankho se ek bhayankar lazor ko us jet per chhoda jisse us jet ke dono pankh kat gye or agle war me us jet ke 2 tukde ho gye.



Or aisa hote hi us jet me lagi aag apne aap bujh gyi or vo neeche ko girne laga kisi parkare pakchhi ki tarah. Jisme baithe ham bhi neeche ki taraf girne lage.







Ye dekhe b.h fir se kush hone laga lekin vo janta tha ki itni unchai se girne ke baad bhi sayad use kuch ho. Isliye vo udkar hamare pass aaya or apni aankho se lazor se seedha hamper hamla karne laga. Lekin vo rider tha sabka baap. Usme khud bhayankar aag lagi hui thi fir bhala ye lazor uska kya bigaad leti.



Or yahi hua jab usne lazor chhodna band nhi kiya to rider ne tang aakar apna muh khola or bhayankar aag ki lapten bikwali jo seedhi b.h ke muh me lagi or isme vo jhulas bhi gya or uski aankho se lazor nikalna bhi puri tarah se band ho gya. Or vo bhi hamari hi tarah jameen per seedha girne laga kyuki is aag me jhulsane se vo thodi der ke liye be sudh ho gya tha or jab tak use hosh aata ham jameen per gir chuke the or hamare jameen se takrate hi baha per bhayankar sa dhamaka jaisa ho gya or baha per ek bada sa gadda ban gya.





Khair ham jaldi khade hue or us gadde se bahar nikale hamse thodi hi duri per b.h bhi jameen per pada hua tha





Rider uske pass gya or apne dono hatho se uski coller ko pakda or use hawa me utha.




Main2- bahut uchhal kood kar li tumne or ab tumhare narak ki aag me jalne ka waqt aagya hai





Ye kehke rider ne uski jeb me hath dala or vo paras pathar usse le liya.



B.h ne use vapis lene ki kosis ki lekin vo nakamyaab raha.





Main2- dekho meri aankho me.



B.h- nhi.




Main2- kyu dar lag raha hai apne gunaho ko fir se dekhne se. Dekho.




Ye dekho rider ne itnj jor se kaha ki b.h ki aatma tak kamp gyi or uski najre seedhi rider ki najro se mil gyi.



Or aisa hote hi use vo sab dikhne laga jo usne Aaj Tak kiya tha pichhale kai hazar salon ke liye uske sare gunaah aaj uske saamne the




Or jab use uske gunaah dikhne band hue jo ki bahut der baad hua kyuki iske gunaaho ki list bahut lambi to thi hi lekin uske andar jo itni buri aatmaye basi hui thi is waqt unke gunaah bhi use hi dikh rahe the or sabka ant ek saath hi ho raha tha. Jis bajah se b.h ki cheekh pure aasman me failne lagi thi.







Or jab in sabka ant hua to b.h puri tarah se pathar ka ban gya tha uski aankho me jahannum ki jameen ki tarah sulag gyi thi or pathar ban gyi thi.




Or jab rider ne use chhoda to vo gira neeche or girte hi tukdo me bat gya.





Or uske marte hi b.h ka chahita keeda jo ki kahi chhipa hua tha vo bhi gusse me aagya or apni gufa se bahar nikal aaya or bahi se usne tabahi machana start kar diya.








Or uski aawaj rider ko bhi aane lagi.


To rider ne uski taraf jaana shuru kar diya.




Super fast speed se rider us keede ke raste me uske aage aagya.






Or rider ko dekhkar vo keeda or bhi gusse me aagya or usne apne muh se kuch lava jaise thok diya.




Or us thok me rider buri tarah fas gya.




Or vo chhutne ka prayas karne laga lekin chhut nhi pa raha tha.



Tab tak vo keeda rider me ek dum karib pahuch gya or usne rider ko apne muh me bhar kar khane ka prayas kiya.




Ye dekhkar rider ne apni aag ko or jyada bhadka diya or us aag me us keede ka sara lava jal gya or rider aazad ho gya. Or uske aazad hote hi rider ne apni talvar ko liya or uske muh me ghusa diya or use ghuma diya. Or sword ko ghumate hi sword me bhayankar aag jalne lagi or us aag me vo keeda bhi jalne laga.



Us aag se bachne ke liye vo yaha baha ghumne laga or apna sir yaha baha takrane laga lekin isse koi fark nhi pad raha tha or aag apna kaam karne me lagi hui thi. Or isi me us keede ka bhi ant ho gya.










Bahi dev bhi earth ko uski sahi jagah per set kar chuka tha or is tarah earth per aaya hua sara sankat khatam ho gya tha.





Or ab keval sab cover up karna hi baaki tha jo next update me hoga. Dekhiye kya or kaise hota hai sab.

















To be continue………………………..

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Sare dushmano ka safaya ho chuka tha. Lekin abhi bhi ek musibat thi jo samne khadi hui thi. Or vo thi rider ab vapis kaise jayega. Or kahi aisa to nhi ki dobara aajayega vo bhi bina bataye.







Main- kaam pura ho gya hai. Ab batao tum kya chahte ho.







Main2- tum tension mat lo me yaha nhi rukne wala. Lekin hai ek baat jarur kahunga ki jab bhi tumhe meri madad ki jarurat padegi me aajuang.







Main- achha hai baise ab kaha jaoge.






Main2- yahi rahunga kyuki bure logo ki kami nahi aane wali hai yaha. Or unka sikaar karne ke liye mujhe to yaha hona hi chahiye.








Tabhi hamare pechhe se ek aawaj aai.






H.K- iski jarurat nhi hai rider. Tum mere sath vapis chal rahe ho.





Ye sunkar hamne peechhe dekha to hell king khade hue the. Jise dekhkar ham thode shocked the ki ye kaha se aagye.





Main- aap yaha kaise aapko to qaid kiya tha na b.h ne






H.k- ha kiya to tha lekin mujhe nhi mere ek dusre rup ko. Main janta tha ki vo kya karega mere sath isliye maine khud ko pehle hi safe kar liya tha.






Main- to fir abhi tak saamne kyu nhi aye the.






H.k- me bhale hi tumhare samne nhi aaya lekin maine tumhari madad to ki hi. Verna tum nahi hara paate b.h ko.






Main- kaisi madad.





H.k- rider ko vapis bhej kar or kya. Maine hi use jahannum se bahar nikala tha or Bapis se tumhare pasa bheja tha. Ek naye contract ki madad se.




Ye sunkar me muskuraya.





Main- gajab ho aap bhi. Maan gye aapko. Khair nice to meet u.






H.k- nice to meet u too surya. Ummid hai dobara jaldi hi mulakaat hogi.






Main- mat lagaiye aisi ummid aapse dobara milne ka matlab hai fir se koi nai bhutiya musibat. Isliye ye ummid karo ki hamara milna ho hi na kabhi.






Ye sunkar vo bhi hasne lage. Or fir vo hame bye bolke gayab ho gye.



Or unke jaate hi rider bhi gayab ho gya or reh gya sirf me akela. Us sunsan jagah per.





Isliye maine khud ko sambhala or vapis se me pahucha usi jagah jaha fight chal rahi thi.





Baha pahuch kar maine sabka halchal puchha. Sab badiya the. Sara kachar apne aap hi saaf ho gya tha. Matlab sari lashe panchtatva me vileen ho gyi thi. Hole band ho gya tha or prithvi ab apne sahi kram me vapis aane lagi thi. Jitni bhi tabahi hui thi usme se keval baad ka paani Bapis gya tha baaki jo bhukamp vagera aaye the jiski bajah se jagah jagah darare khuli thi vo itni jaldi nhi bharne wali thi.





Sarakar apne kaam me Bapis se lag gyi thi. Sabhi logo ko unke ghar pahunchane me or jitna bhi nuksan hua hai uski bharpai karne me.






Bahi dev se ham mile.







Main- chalo ab ghar sabko milna hai tumse or khane ka promise yaad hai na.






Dev- ha bhai baise bhi ladai ke baad bhul bahut lagti hai. Isliye chalte hai.





Rony- race lagate hai kon pehle gaao pahuchta hai. Or dev babu udd kar nhi doud kar jana hai.






Dev- me to udunga hi lekin uper nahi tum logo ke sath neeche hi






Avi- aisa kaise chalega





Dev- chal jayega baise bhi in mahanubhavon ke sath doud pana impossible hai. Isliye me to udunga hi.






Avi- to fir me bhi udunga. Aapke sath






Main- badiya hai.




Chalo ek line me aao sare.



Sabhi ek line me khade ho gye.



Uske baad maine ginti gini




Get set go…………..




Ye bolte hi hamne doudna or udna shuru kiya.



Sabhi super fast speed se bhag rahe the ghar ki taraf. Jaha se bhi nikalte baha ek chhota sa tufaan sa aajata.




Lekin kisi ko kuch bhi nahi dikha. Sirf avi hi tha jo hamare sath nahi udd pa raha tha. Kyuki uska suit itna fast nhi tha. Lekin itna slow bhi nahi tha vo.




Jaha hame ghar pahunchane me 1-2 sec. Lage bahi avi ko kuch min.





Ham sabhi ghar ke bahar hi ruke seedhe or hamari is race me keval avi hi haar gya. Baaki ham sabhi lagbhag ek sath hi pahuche apni manjil tak.






Rony- maja aagya. Lekin avi bichara vo peechhe reh gya.





Tabhi avi ki aawaj aai.




Avi- chachu me hara nhi hu balki jeet gya hu. Kyuki ghar ke darwaje tak pahunchana tha na ki bahar wale darwaje tak.



Ye bolke vo hamare uper se udta hua ghar ke darwaje ke pass land hua or ghar ki doorbell baja di.





Ye dekhke ham sabhi shocked reh gye or ek dusre ka muh dekhne lage. Or anayaas hi hamare chehre per hasi aagyi.




Khair ham sabhi normali chal ke apne ghar ke andar gye or jab maine sabko bataya ki ye dev hai or iski madad se ham sare dushmano ko khatma karne me kaamyab rahe to sabki kushi ka thikana hi nahi raha. Sabhi ne dev ko bahut bahut dhanyavad kaha




Or fir thodi gapshap karne ke baad ham sabhi khana khane baith gye.







Vanraj- baise ek cheez ke baare me mujhe puchhna hai.





Main- kya





Vanraj- udhar ladai ke dauran mujhe ek vampire ne kata tha lekin uske kaatne ke baad mujhe to kuch nhi hua lekin us vampire ki haalat badal gyi thi.vo behosh ho pada hua tha or uska rang bhi normal ho gya.






Ye sunke maine chouka.




Main- kya sach me.





Vanraj- ha us waqt to maine dhyan nhi diya lekin abhi mujhe janna hai uske bare me.






Dev- actually vanraj tumhare andar vikraal ki powers hai isiliye tumper un vampire ka koi asar nhi hua. Kyuki vikraal khud ek power tarah ka vampire tha or in sabhi se jyada power full. Isliye tumhare khoon me kuch aisa hai jiski bajah se vo vampire vapis se insan ban gya. Or ye baat to tum bhi jante hi ho ki tum kisi bhi insan ko vapis se swasth karne me saksham ho fir chahe use kaisi bhi beemari kyu na ho. Or usi ki bajah se tumhara khoon chakhte hi vo vampire theek ho gya or Bapis se insan ban gya.





Ye sunke hame bakai me bahut kushi hui kyuki aage agar kabhi bhi aisi koi situation aati hai to vanraj ki madad se ham unhe theek kar sakte hai.



Uske baad avi bola.



Avi- baise dev chachu aap apni story bataiye na ki aapko ye sab powers kaha se or kaise mili hai. Hame janna hai. Jab uper aasman me hamne aapka rup dekha or vo third eye to sach me me to hill gya tha. Kitni power hai aapke pass aapne kaise earth ko utha liya tha apne kandho per.






Ye sunke sabhi ka muh khula ka khula hi reh gya.






Dad- kya sach me





Avi- ha dadu vo seen aap dekhte na to dekhte hi reh jaate.





Dad- fir to bhai mujhe bhi janna hai batao na beta





Ye sunke sabhi ne dev se uski story janne ki zid ki.






Dev- theek hai batata hu. Baise maine ek story likhi hai apni life per aap use pad sakte hai usme har ek detail ka zikr hai. Ki kaise or kyu mere pass ye shaktiya hai.






Ashk- padne me vo maja nhi aayega jo sunne me aayega aao hi bataiye na







Ye sunke dev hasa.






Dev- theek hai to suniye.




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Iske baad dev ne unhen apni puri life journey ko bataya jisme kai ghante aise hi nikal gye or jab sabne suna ki swayam mahadev ke or param bhakt persuram ji ki darshanon ka laabh bhi prapt hua hai dev ko to sabhi ke aacharya ki koi seema hi nhi rahi. Or to or ye to sisya hai bhagwan persuram ke.






Sabhi ka sir apne aap hi dev ke samne jhuk gya.



Jise dev ne uthaya or un sabko aisa karne se mana kiya



Sari life story janne ke avi and party akele hi dev ke sath gappo me jut gyi. Jaha avi ne itne sawal puchhe ki dev unka jawab dete dete pareshan ho gya. Multiverse se releted or sare grahon se releted. Isi brahamand me earth jaisa dusra grah konsa hai vagera vagera.




Dev ek gyan ka samundar tha jisse avi jyada se jyada gyan bator lena chahta tha or dev bhi bina kisi jhijhak ke use sab bata raha tha. Sayad kuch soch kar hi.




Aise hi kab samay beet gya pata hi nahi chala.



Uske baad dev ki Bidaai ka samay aaya to mom ne use jaldi hi apne pure parivar ke sath aana ka nimantran diya. Jise usne swikaar bhi kiya bina kisi deri ke





Fir usne sabse bida li or vo palak jhapkate hi baha se adrishya ho gya. Or apni manjil per pahuch gya.







Bahi dev ke jaane ke kuch dino baad tak sab kuch normal hi gya tha zindagi Bapis patri per aane lagi thi. Sabhi in sab hadso ko bhul kar aage badhne lage the.






Aise hi ek mahina nikal gya.




Fir ek din maine dad se mere or radha ke chhuti per jaane ki baat kahi jise sunkar sabhi kush the. Or sabhi ka man tha kahi bahar jaane ka lekin me akele radha ke sath time bitana chahta tha.




Main- dad me or radha manali ja rahe hai baha apna jo ghar hai ham bahi rukenge kuch dino tak. Baaki aap sabhi logo ko kaha jana hai aap sabhi jaiye. Bahut samay ho gya radha ke sath kahi bahar nhi gya hu or usko utna samay bhi nahi de paya hu isliye pls hame jaane deejiye.





Ye sunkar sabhi hasne lage.




Dad- beta ham sabhi majak kar rahe hai hame nahi banna hai kabab me haddi tum dono jaao or khub enjoy karo ham yahi theek hai. Baaki me to veer or rony ko bhi kahi bahar bhejane wala hu bahuo ke sath. Sabhi alag alag jagho per jayenge isliye veer or rony apni apni jagah dhund lo or pehli fursat me nikal lo. Samajh gye na.





Ye sunke un dono ne bhi apni mundi hilaai. Or vo bhi kush ho gye.




Uske baad next day me or radha nikal gye bahi usi din veer or rony bhi chale gye. Bahi veer gya Switzerland or rony gya. Singapore





Or bahi junior party Bapis apne clg jaane lagi or unki life bhi normal hone lagi. Amar nidhi Samar or varsha in charo ki love story me badiya se chalne lagi thi. Dono ki shadi to tay hi thi isiliye apni life ke sare tensions ko bhula kar vo bas enjoy hi kar rahe the. Lekin avi or ashk abhi bhi single hi the. Ab pata nhi inke partner kab inki life me aate hai. Or kaise aate hai.






Bahi radha or me baithe hue the manali me haseen sham ka aanand lete hue





Main- maine kuch decide kiya hai radha abse me in sab me nahi padne wala hu. Apne kaam or ghar per hi focus rahunga.






Radha- or agar koi nai musibat aai fir






Main- bache sambhal lenge. Ab unka samay aagya hai. Halaki me unko guide karta rahunga but maidan me nhi jaunga. Jab tak bahut hi jyada jaruri na ho.






Radha- jaisa aapko theek lage. Lekin ek baat me keh deti hu. Me apna ghar chhodke kahi or rehne nahi jaane wali. Mujhe sabke sath hi rehne me maja aata hai. Isliye rehna to aapko bahi gaao. Me hi padega.







Main- main janta hu or maine to uske baare me socha bhi nhi hai isliye tum tension na lo. Ham sab sath me hi rahenge





Radha- hamesha.




Ye kehke dono ne ek dusre ka hath pakada or ek chhota sa kiss kiya or dhalte hue suraj ke dekhne me kho gye dono hi.










(Or dosto isi ke sath surya ki trilogy ka yahi per ant hota hai. Iske maine teen hi part soche the jo maine pure kar diye hai. Or agar ab aage story likhunga to usme avi and party lead hero rahegi or surya ka keval beech beech me cameo hi rahega. Baaki to inko kismat hai )



















IT'S JUST A NEW BEGINNING……..

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Bhayankar bijli or paani ke beech hamari najar unhi holes per bani hui thi.



Hame desperate ho rahe the use dekh dekh ke.



Holes ek dusre ke ekdum karib aagye the. Ya u kahu ki holes almost pure mil chuke the. Bas thodi finishing hi baaki thi.








Bahi un holes ke ek dum neeche B.h aaya or unhe dekhne laga. Or muskurane laga.





Hame bhi pata chala ki vo baha pahuch chuka hai isliye ham bhi baha pahuch gye.






Main- band kardo ye sab isse kuch hasil nhi hoga tumhe. Prithvi ko uski jagah se hilana bilkul bhi sahi dicision nhi hai. Sara solar system tabah ho jayega or pure brahmaand ka vinash ho jayega. Or agar aisa hua to tum fir raaj kispee karoge.









B.H- kya baat hai bahut jaankari hasil karli tumne. Lekin ek baat batao kya tumhe me shakal se itna bebakuf lagta hu.






Main- ab shakal ki baat to karo hi mat to badiya hai.







B.H- beta jaha se tum sochna khatam karte ho baha se me sochna start karta hu. Ye pathar yaad hai na. Ye pathar kisi khajane se kam nhi hai. Iski madad se me ek naya brahmand bana sakta hu. Vo bhi chutkiyo me. Mera maksad hi yahi hai is brahmaand ko khatam karke ek naye brahmand ka nirmaan karna jaha ka me bhagwan rahunga.






Ye sunkar ham sabke hosh udd gye the. Abhi tak ham jo soch rahe the vo sab aadha sach tha lekin baaki ka sach janne ke baad hamari bolti puri tarah band ho gyi thi.



Or hamari halat dekhke vo has raha tha.





B.H- laga na jhatka. Kaise rokoge mujhe. Me tum sabki aukat ke bahar ka course hu.






Main- vaise tumhe agar yahi maar du to kya





B.H- kaise maroge mujhe.me amar hu. Ha vo rider jarur mujhe maar sakta tha. Lekin use to me pehle hi Bapis bhej chuka hu. Ab kya karoge.





Ye sunna tha ki rony ne super speed se usper hamla bol diya apni sword ke sath. Jiske war se vo aasani se bach raha tha. Ye sab dekhke ham dono bhi maidan me utar aaye or ab ham teeno milke usper hamla kar rahe the.




Teeno dishao se usper hamla ho raha tha. Lekin vo bakai me fast tha. Ham teeno hi super duper fast hai lekin fir bhi use touch bhi nhi kar pa rahe the. Or vo hamla nhi kar raha tha keval apne chehre per smile lake bach raha tha.



Rony ne apni sword ko uski garden per aade me ghumaya vo neeche jhuka. Neeche se maine apni talvar ghumai to vo baha se gayab hi ho gya. Or hamse thodi duri per pragat ho gya.





B.h- me yaha hu.





Ye dekhke vanraj ne uski taraf doud lagai or jaise hi use maarne ka try kiya usne uska hath pakad kar use rok liya.




B.h- power to hai lekin mujhe maar sako itni power nhi hai.





Ye kehkar usne vanraj ka hath ek jhatke me mod diya. Vanraj dard me tadap utha.




Or agle hi pal usne ek jordaar prahar kiya uski chest per. Or vo udta hua hamare pass aake gira.




Maine use uthaya



Main- theek ho.




Vanraj- ha lagta to hai. Baaki kya hai ye. Ise touch bhi nhi kar pa rahe hai ham.





Main- kuch jyada hi powerfull ho gya hai ye. Isiliye ham ise nhi rok pa rahe hai.





Rony- to ab kya kare.





Main- kosis.



Ye kehkar abki baar me uski taraf bhaga super duper fast speed me.



Or maine apni uske najdeek pahuch kar apna hamla start kiya. Jisse vo bachata ja raha tha.




Tabhi use ek jordaar jhatka laga jisse uska dhyan bhatak gya or maine uska pura fayeda uthaya or uske seene me itni jor se punch mara ki mera hath usko cheerte hue aarpaar nikal gya.




Use dard hua or usne mujhe dekhka. To maine ek hi jhatke me apna hath bahar nikala liya. Jisse use or dard hua. Or fir maine uski garden ko pakda or utha kar neeche patak diya or speed se us ground ka ek chakkar laga diya or speed ki bajah se uska haal fate haal ho gya. Uske kapde chhil gye peeth se.



Tabhi meri najar uper gyi jaha avi hawa me ruka hua tha. Usne mujhe hatne ka ishara kiya or mere hat te hi usne apni power se jordaar prahar kiya usper. Bahi uske sath robo bhi tha usne bhi apni power ka prahar kiya usper





Jaha per vo pada hua tha baha per dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise 1000 w. Ka bulb jala diya ho. Itni roshni baha fail rahi thi.



Bahi b.h ka kya haal ho raha tha hame kuch bhi pata nhi tha. Bas soch kar hi maja aaraha tha ki uski haalat kya ho rahi hogi.




Karib 5 min. Tak uske uper energy girti rahi or fir jaake dono ne apna hamla karna band kiya uski halat dekhne ke liye.





Ham sabki najar gyi baha per to vo baha per nahi tha. Ye dekhke ham sabhi ek dum se hairan reh gye.





Tabhi aasman me bhayankar bijli kadki or hamara dhyan uper gya to b.h baha per tha. Or usko aankhe ek dum se laal ho gyi thi. Or use dekhte hi ham samajh gye ki hamne sanp ki puch per pair rakh diya hai. Or ab ye hame dabane ki puri kosis karega.





Or abhi ham kuch karte usse pehle ham sabper ek sath bijli ka bhari prahaar hua. Or prahar hota hi gya. Jo band hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha. Is dauran mujhe keval abhi ki fikr ho rahi thi. Kyuki filhaal vo ek normal human tha. Or ummid yahi kar raha tha me ki uska suit uski hifajat kar le.







Bahi jaisa maine socha tha uska theek ulta hua. Ham sabke suit ek dum se charged ho gye the jinme unlimited power aagyi thi.




Jise dekhke ham sabhi kush ho gye.



Or hamne ek dusre ko dekha or ek sath apni apni power ko b.h per chhoda.



Itni sari power ke usse takrate hi uska balance bigad gya or vo parkare pakchhi ki tarah neeche girne laga lekin hamari energy usper lagatar girti hi ja rahi thi.




Bahi Robo udta hua uske ekdum karib pahuch gya



Or usper hamla or bhi ghatak karne laga lekin iska ulta ye hua ki robo ke pass aate hi b.h ne apna hath power se uske andar ghusa diya.




Or aisa hote hi Robo achanak se band ho gya. Or uski body kaali padne lagi. Or b.h ne apna hath uske andar se bahar nikaal diya or ab robo bina koi sahare ke neeche girne laga tha. Ye dekhke avi ne udna start kiya or use hawa me hi pakad liya or uski ek safe landing neeche karwa di.



Bahi ham bhi avi ke pass pahuche jaha vo robo ko check kar raha tha kyuki uski puri body ek dum se kaali pad gyi thi.






Avi- ye kaise sambhav hai.




Rony- kya hua.





Avi- isko body to sad gyi hai.




Ye sunke ham sabhi ko tagda jhatka laga. Ki vibranium kaise sad sakta hai.





Main- uske hatho se bach ke rehne ki jarurat hai. Baise ye theek ho sakta hai.





Avi- ha ho jayegi. Iske andar upyog kiya gya material apne aap khud ko theek kar sakta hai. Bas thoda time lagega.




Hamne robo ko bahi per chhoda.




Or hamne uper dekha jaha vo saare holes puri tarah se ek ho gye the.



Or uske sath hi puri earth per bhayankar earth quake ke jhatke lagne lage. Or ye jhatke hamne bhi mehsus kiye






B.H - ye hui na baat. Bahut time pass kar liya ab tum sabhi mera kamaal dekho. Bas.




Ye kehkar usne apne hatho ko joda or kuch mantro ko padne laga or aisa karte hi hame aisa laga jaise ham lift me ho. Kyuki ham sabhi achanak se uper ko jaane lage the.




Maine avi ko dekha vo samjh gya maine uska hath pakda or vo udata hua mujhe uper uske pass le gya. Or speed se hi maine uske thobde per ek tagda punch mara or use jor se pakad liya.



Jisse uska dhyan tut gya.



Usne aone dono hatho ko jhatke se alag kiya jisse mera balance bigad gya or me neeche girne laga to usne mujh per apne hatho se energy nikaal kar jordaar hamla kiya or me us energy ke prahar se seedha jameen me ghus gya kitna neeche mujhe nahi pata lekin me neeche jata hi ja raha tha.






Bahi uper moujud rony vanraj or avi ne ye dekha to foran hi vi log us gadde ke pass aaye jaha me ghus gya tha. Avi bhi mere pichhe usme jaane laga to rony ne use rok liya.




Kyuki un holes me se or bhi musibate neeche aane lagi thi. Vampire seedhe jameen per land kar rahe the. Or ye kuch jyada hi khatarnaak type lag rahe the. Or inki tadaat bhi kaafi jayada thi. Kyuki inka aana ruk hi nhi raha tha.





B.h- mere bacho tabahi machana start kar do. In prithvi walo se le lo apna badla. Jitni jyada ho sake utne logo ko apni tarah bana do jaao. Or prithvi walo rok sakte ho to rok lo Verna pyar se inke hawale kardo khud ko ye log aaram se tum sabka sikaar kar lenge.








Ye sunte hi uske sabhi sathi charo taraf bhagne lage. Bahi vo fir se dhyan karne laga or earth ko uthane laga apni jagah se.




Bahi avi ne rony se kaha.


Avi- chachu dad vapis kaise aayenge.





Rony- uski fikr chhodo or inko thikane lagana hai. Tum bas black heart ko dhyan mat lagane do. Inhe ham sambhal lenge. Uska dhyan dur se bhatkate raho. Samajh gye na. Uske pass mat jana.






Ye sunke avi ne ha me garden hilaai.





Or vo udd gya uper ki taraf or dur se hi b.h per hamla start kar diya usne. Bahi rony or vanraj dono hi doud laga kar vampire ki bheed ke aage jaane lage taaki samne se unka sikaar kiya ja sake.







Baaki dekhte hai ab kya hota hai or surya ab kaise vapis aata hai.

















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Rony- chhodna mat ek ko bhi. Koi bhi apan ko paar nhi kar paaye. Ye log chandi ki hai.




Rony ne chandi ki sword di vanraj ko.





Vanraj- samajh gya.



Vanraj ne us sword ko pakda or dono hi furti se doud ke unke aage pahuch gye.





Or achanak se inko apne saamne dekhke unki bheed ek dum se ruk gyi.





Rony- khabardar jo ek kadam bhi aage badhaya hai to. Sabki kabr yahi khod dunga. Jaha se aaye ho bahi bapis chale jaao.





Ye sunke vo sabhi ek tak rony ko ghurne lage or dekhne lage use.



Or dekhne ke baad hasne lage.





Unme se ek bola.



A1- shuruwat isi se karte hai lagta hai bahut garmi me hai isme.





Ye kehkar vo sabhi ne ek ghera bana liya rony or vanraj ke charo taraf. Dono hi beech me khade hue the apne hatho me talvar leke. Or unke charo taraf vo vampire jo lakho ki sankhya me the.






Thodi der tak ek dusre ko ghurne ka khel chalta raha



Or uske baad sare ek dum se hawa me uchhal kar rony or vanraj per tut pade.





Bahi rony or vanraj dono hi ready the iske liye.


Jaise hi sabhi uchhale dono ne apni super speed ka istemaal kiya or vampires ko kaatna start kar diya.




Chandi ki talvar vakai me asar kar rahi thi or jisko bhi lag rahi thi vo seedha khatam hota ja raha tha.



Dono hi gajar muli ki tarah kaat rahe the unko unki talvar itni fast move kar rahi thi ki aisi normal aankho se dekh pana mushkil tha. Bahi vampire bhi bahut hi fast hote hai lekin ye unse bhi fast the.





Bahi unme jo sabse experience wala tha vo samajh gya ki aise to ye unki puri sankhya ko hi mita denge.




Isliye usne in dono ko alag alag karne ka socha



Or chupke se vanraj ke peechhe gya or use furti se daboch liya.



Bahi vanraj is hamle se puri tarah shocked reh gya. Vo chah kar bhi usse pechhab nhi chhuda pa raha tha.




Bahi vo vanraj ko dhakelte hue rony se dur le ja raha tha. Or vampires ki jo bheed thi vo inko cover karti ja rahi thi. Jisse rony ko vanraj dikhna almost band ho gya tha.






Bahi usne vanraj ke kandhe me apne danto ko gada diya or uska khun peene laga.



Bahi dard me vanraj chillane laga or ye aawaj rony tak pahuch rahi thi.

Halaki rony ko bhi kaatne ka prayas kiya tha lekin uske suit ki bajah se unke dant us tak nhi pahuch paaye the abhi tak.





Or vampire jhund ke jhund me rony per tut rahe the. Jinhe sambhalna muskil hota ja raha tha.



Bahi vanraj ki aankhe bhi band ho lagi thi. Or sath me us vampire ki bhi. Ab uski anakhe kyu band ho rahi thi iski jaankari to filhaal kisi ko bhi nhi thi.




Lekin is waqt dono hi behosh hone jameen per pade hue the.







Bahi agar b.h ka haal dekhe to avi use abhi tak dhyan na lagane dene me kaamyab raha tha. Vo dur se hi b.h per hamla karke uska dhyan bhatka raha tha. Or jab b.h usper hamla karta to vo move kar jata. Avi ud sakta tha ye aaj uske bahut kaam aaraha tha.





B.h bahut frustrate ho raha tha avi se or sabse jyada use ye baat lag rahi thi ki vo avi ko abhi tak touch bhi nhi kar paya tha.



Isiliye ab usne apna pura jor lagane ka tay kiya




Or vo jor se dharti per land hua jis bajah se puri dharti hi kamp gyi.



Bahi usne apni jeb se paras pathar nikala or apni hatheli per rakha


Or usne avi ki band bajane ke liye us pathar se kaha or pathar ko aage kar diya.



Bahi pathar se khatarnaak energy nikalna start hua or avi ne unse bachne ka prayas kiya lekin vo fail raha or energy usse takrane lagi. Avi jaha bhi jata energy uske peechhe jaati or usse takra jaati. Bahi us energy se avi ko keval jhatka hi lag raha tha or kuch nhi. Sayad b.h bhi filhaal kisi ko maarna nahi chahta tha kyuki sab baise bhi marne hi wale the.





Isse ek kaam jarur ho gya tha ki avi ab busy ho gya tha. Or b.h free vo pathar avi ka barabar uljha kar rakhe hue tha.




Ye mouka dekhke b.h fir se apna Dhyan lagane me lag gya.



Bahi avi pure aasman me yaha baha udta fir raha tha. Lekin pathar se pechha nhi chhuda pa raha tha.



Avi ne socha ki iska war utna heavy nhi hai isliye vi pathar ke samne ruk gya. Or uske rukte hi pathar ne usper ek sath tagda hamla start kar diya. Jisme uska suit pighalne laga. Or ye dekhke avi ne fir se udna start kar diya. Kyuki vo samajh gya tha ki isse bach pana muskil hai. Udte hue avi ne b h ki taraf aona rukh kiya or dur se usper fir se hamla kar diya. Bahi b h fir se gusse me aagya.


Usne avi ki taraf dekha jiska dhyan is waqt pathar se bachne me tha.


Or isi ka fayeda utha kar b h ne apne hatho se energy ko chhoda jo avi ke seene se takrai or avi ek dum se behosh hone jameen ki taraf girne laga.





Filhaal rony ka dhyan bhi avi ki taraf nhi tha. Vo vanraj ki taraf move karne ki kosis kar raha tha. Lekin vampire ki bheed use rok rahi thi. Jo kam hi nahi ho rahi thi. Ulti badti hi ja rahi thi. Jitne vampire mar rahe the usse dogune us hole me se bahar nikal rahe the.




Rony bhi thakne laga tha lekin vo haar manne walo me se to bilkul nahi tha.




Bahi vanraj or vo vampire abhi bhi behosh pade hue the.



Or avi neeche gir raha tha.


Jaise hi avi jameen ke karib pahucha use hawa me hi pakad liya


Robo ne. Jo ki ab hosh me aagya tha or uski body bhi fir se normal ho gyi thi or uske sare function bhi theek se kaam karne lage the.




Robo ne avi ko safely land karwaya or uske chehre ka mask hataya to avi is waqt hosh me tha. Bas uska suit band ho gya tha isliye vo neeche girne laga tha.





Robo- kya hua





Avi- sale ne suit ki power supply ko per hamla kiya hai. Arc reactor band ho gya hai isliye me neeche gir gya. Mujhe turant hi base le chalo. Or mujhe chhodke vapis aajana or b.h lo dhyan lagane se rokna dur se hi hamla karna usper.




Ye sunke robo ne avi ko god me uthaya or udd gya base ki taraf. Jaldi hi avi ko base me chhoda or khud vapis maidan me aagya udte hue or sabse pehle hamla b.h per kiya udte hue. Jisse b.h ka dhyan fir se tut gya.




Or is bajah se vo bahut hi jyada gusse me aa raha tha. Jiska asar mousam me dikhne laga tha. Bijli ka kadakna badta hi ja raha tha.




Bahi dusri taraf avi ne foran hi ek naya arc reactor liya or aone suit me fit kiya uski power supply ko fir se on kiya or suit ko check kiya sab function fir se kaam karne lage.





Avi- dad ka kuch pata chala






Harry- nhi sir ab dikhna hi band ho gye hai. Halaki unka transmitter on hai isliye unki location mujhe mil rahi hai vo sahi salamat hai.





Avi- najar banaye rakho. Airforce se kaho dur se b.h per hamla karte rahe or vampires per bhi.







Harry- ok sir.




Ye bolke avi udd gya or tezi se vampire ke ek jhund per jordaar landing ki.



Jisse aadhe vampire to uske pressure me hi dur ja gire. Baaki ke bach gye. Unke liye avi ne apni power ko chhodne start kiya or unhe jalana lage. Jo uske pass aate unhe vo apne laat or ghuse ka swad chakhata.




Bahi rony ne abhi tak kuch nhi to 100000 ke karib vampires ko nipta diya tha.






Bahi vanraj ki aankhe achanak se khul gyi.



Or usne jab khud ka haal dekha to hairan reh gya. Vo jaldi se khada hua. Or apne aaspaas dekhne laga sabhi vampire rony ki taraf hi bhagte hue ja rahe the.





Usne apne neeche dekha jaha ek vampire pada hua tha jiska rang badal chuka tha safed se insano jaisa ho gya tha vo uske dant bhi gayab ho gye the.



Vanraj ne use achhe se check kiya to vo bhi hairan reh gya ki ye insan kaise van gya. Khair us samay ye sab sochne ka waqt bilkul bhi nhi tha.



Isme ek baat or thi ki vanraj vampire nhi bana tha. Jabki uska to bahut sara khub usne piya tha or apna virus usme chhoda tha. Lekin vanraj per iska koi asar nhi hua tha.






Khair jo bhi ho achha hi hua.




Ab vanraj bhi form me tha.



Isliye usne aone dono hatho ko aage kiya uske saamne jitne bhi vampire the usne unko ek dum se sthir kar diya. Or doud laga kar unko apni talvar se 2 tukdo me baat diya.





Or aise hi aage badhne laga vo hajaron ko ek sath freeze karne laga or unko kaatne laga.





Sabhi apna apna kaam karne me vyast the.



Earth abhi bhi apni hi jagah per bani hui thi. Or un holes ki position ab change hone lagi thi. Jis bajah se b.h bahut pareshan ho gya tha. Kyuki koi na koi uska dhyan bhatkane aa hi raha tha. Isliye ab use jo bhi karna tha jaldi hi karna tha. Or isiliye vo un holes me ghus gya. Bahi uske peechhe robo me ghusne laga to use bhayankar bijli ka jhatka laga or vo hole se dur ho gya bahi usne fir se andar jaane ki kosis ki lekin fir se nakam raha.


Robo samajh gya ki iske andar ab jana impossible Hai. Or ab b.h ko rokna bhi possible nhi hai dhyan lagane se.



Bahi b h ab shanti se apne dhyan me baith gya or aisa karte hi puri prithvi fir se kampne lagi baha per bhayankar earth quake aane lage charo taraf jwalamukhi fatne lage. Samudra me baad aane lagi nadiya apne ufaan per aane lagi. Charo taraf tabahi machne lagi.




Ab airforce bhi aachuki thi unhone bhi hole me seedha hamla kiya liya unki missile hole ke centre me jaate hi blast ho gyi or kuch bhi nhi hua.






To unhone neeche vampires per hamla start kar diya.




Vampire us aag me jalne lage lekin unki tadaat kam nhi ho rahi thi.




Bahi surya bhi jameen me kai hajaar foot neeche ghusa hua tha vo bhi uper nhi aa pa raha tha. Use samajh me nahi aaraha tha ki ab vo kya kare kaise uper jaaye.







Is sabme bas ek baat achhi hui ki koi bhi vampire abhi tak rony or vanraj ko paar nhi kar paya tha. Or logo tak nhi pahuch paya tha. Vampire aa rahe the or mar rahe the. Dono ki chandi ki talvar puri laal ho gyi thi.







Baaki dekhiye ab next update me ki kya hota hai kaise is sabka ant hota hai. Ya fir b.h apne irado me kaamyab ho jayega.


Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.
























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