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Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

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THanks bhai log aap sabhi sath mila to ek or story complete ho gyi aaj. Ye is story ka last part tha or ab aage surya ki story aage nhi badhegi. Jo maine compele kar di hai.



and ab aage me story sayad nhi likh paunga. Janta hi aap sabhi ko dukh hoga ye sunkar lekin ye sach hai. Kyuki mere pass ab samay ki bahut kami hai. Or story ko likhne ka samay utna nhi mil pata hai jitna mujhe chahiye hota hai. Chuki ye story maine start kar di thi isiliye isko complete karna mera farz tha.jo maine nibhaya. Or isiliye me ab aage koi or story start nhi karna chahta hu kyuki agar maine ise start kiya to use complete bhi karna padega or utna samay mujhe nhi mil pa raha hai. Isliye sorry aap sabhi ko.



and aap sabhi ke jo bhi doubt and confusion ho is story ko leke vo aap mujhse puchh sakte hai. Baise to maine sabhi doubt ko cover karne ki kosis ki hai lekin agar fir bhi kuch bach gya ho to aap bejhijhak puchh sakte hai.

and me ummid karta hu ki aap sabhi mere is faisale ka samman karenge or mujhe force nhi karenge koi or story start karne ke liye. Thanks everyone apna sath dene ke liye.





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Main jameen ke neeche fasa hua tha or uper chadne ki kosis kar raha tha lekin baat ban nhi pa rahi thi. Bahut kosis kar chuka tha me. Lekin nhi ja pa raha tha me uper ki taraf. Thoda bahut uper jata bhi tha to khisak kar vapis neeche aajata tha.






Main- are yaar ab kya karu kaise uper jaau. Hey mahadev koi rasta to dikhaao.






Ye bolte hiujhe dev ki baat yaad aai to maine socha ek baar try karke dekhta hi sayad kaam ban jaaye.






Maine apni aankho ko band kiya.or apne hatho ko joda. Or use yaad kiya jo uper moujud sare bhuto ka baap tha.





Pura dhyan lagaya or rider ko yaad kiya. Uski jhalak ko apni aankho me yaad kiya or use Bapis aane ka aavahan kiya usse madad ki guhaar lagai kyuki ek bahi tha jo is samay meri madad kar sakta tha.






Thodi der tak use yaad karne ke baad mere hatho me jalan hone lagi.




Ye mehsus hote hi maine or jor se uska naam pukara apne gale ki puri aawaj ke sath maine rider ko pukara.







Meri aawaj us gadde me gunj gyi or aasan ke gunjate hi mera rup ek dum se badal gya.




Or is baar kuch alag hua pehle me rider ke aate hi blank ho jata tha lekin ab mujhe sab kuch dikh raha tha or mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise abki baar me or rider ek sath driving seat per baithe hai. Or ek sath gadi chala rahe hai. Ye sab dekhke me kaafi kush or exited tha.







Main- jyada kush mat ho jana abhi uper kaise jaaye ye socho.






Main2- dekhte jaao bache.




Ye kehkar usne apne dono hatho ko jameen se touch kiya



Or aisa karte hi puri jameen kisi jwalamukhi ki tarah sulagane lagi.




Ye dekhke meri haalat kharab hone lagi. Kyuki rider ke irade mujhe theek nhi lag rahe the.






Main- ye kya karne ja rahe ho tum






Main2- bahar nikalne ka jugaad.




Ye sunkar maine neeche dekha to neeche ka pura malwa ek dum jwalamukhi jaisa dadhakne laga tha.




Or iske aage me kuch sochta ya kehta ek bhayankar dhamaka jaisa hua hamare pairo ke neeche. Or neeche se bhari pressure lagne ki bajah se ham uper ko jaane lage vo bhi super duper fast speed se. Pure gadde ko cheerte hue ham seedhe uper pahuche or neeche ka lava hame aasman me kaafi unchai tak le gya. Ham uper or hamare neeche garam lava.




Jo gadda khatam hote hi charo taraf fail gya.



Or aaspaas jo bhi moujud the us lava me jal kar khatam hogye.




Mujhe bas yahi dar tha ki kahi koi meri team wala na ho jo is lava ki chapet me aajaye. Lekin uper se maine jab neeche dekha to sabhi ki aankhe hamper hi jami hui thi. Mujhe rony avi vanraj or robo sabhi sahi salamat dikhai diye. To me tension free ho gya.






Khair aag ka force kam ho gya tha isliye me Bapis jameen ki taraf aane laga or ek jordaar superhero landing ho gyi jameen per.






Bahi rony vanraj or avi ke chehre per ek alag hi smile aagyi thi hame dekh kar.






Bahi jo bhi vampires baha per moujud the vo hame dekhte hi hamari taraf doude hamse ladne ke liye.





Or idhar unko aata hua dekhke hamare chehre per bhi smile aagyi. Or ham bhi super fast speed se unki taraf doude.



Or jaise hi hamari doud start hui time ek dum slow motion me aagya. Itna ki dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise sabhi ko ek sath stop kar diya gya ho.



Khair rider ne apni sword nikali or speed se use chalate hue aage badhne laga




Uski talvar jaha se bhi gujarati baha vampire ki mundiya kat kar alag hone ka wait karne lagi. Kyuki time abhi kaafi slow tha.







Ek hi jhatke me baha per moujud sare vampire ka kaam almost tamaam ho gya tha.




Or in sabko nipta kar jaise hi me ruka



To baha per moujud sabhi vampires ek dum khade hi reh gye
Or sabki ek hi jhatke me mundi alag hoke gir gyi or jameen per girte hi dhul me tabdeel ho gyi.




Ye seen dekh ke rony vanraj or avi kush ho gye.




Avi- kya baat hai papa ke rup me rider maja aagya. Baise inka aana rukne wala nhi hai. Isliye aap aona focus b.h per kare jo un holes me chhip kar baitha hua hai. Or un holes me ham ja nhi pa rahe hai. Isliye aap baha jaaye or usko dhyan lagane se roke kyuki prithvi apni jagah se kaafi aage aagyi hai. Almost marsh ke pass. Or jaldi hi ham usko bhi paar kar jayenge. Or vo dekhiye yaha ke ped paudhe kaise sukhane lage hai jabki paani gir raha hai lagatar fir bhi.






Ye sunkar ham sabhi ne aasman me dekha to hamari aankhe khuli ki khuli reh gyi. Kyuki hame hamare chand ki jagah per bada sa marsh dikhne laga tha.







Bahi is unhone ghatna se pure brahmaand me kuch na kuch anarth hone laga tha. Kahi jagah blast hone lage the or kai chhote mote grah to mast hi hone lage the. Bahi sabhi jagah moujud kaali or buri shaktiya jaagrit hone lagi thi. Or logo ko pareshan karne lagi thi. Unke to jaise man ka ho gya tha.






Yahi haal prithvi ka bhi tha. Charo or kaale dhue ke rup me kaali shaktiya udti hui dikhne lagi thi. Or brahmand me moujud shaktiya us hole se seedhe prithvi per aane lagi thi. Samudri me ufaan aane laga tha. Or kai sehar to aadhe se jyada dub hi gye the. Khaskar jo samudro ke kinare per base hue the unke liye to jaise pralay aagyi thi.









Same yahi haal baaki jagho per bhi tha. Surya per Grahan lag gya tha.



Jis bajah se vo shaktiya or bhi jyada shaktishali hone lagi thi. Or ab rony or team ke bas se bahar ja raha tha sara mamla.




Or rider akela kya kya sambhalega. Use is waqt bahut jor se madad ki jarurat thi.






Bahi aakash me ek or se super duper speed se ek tufaan b.h ki taraf aaraha tha. Or uske raste me jitne bhi Shaitan aarahe the vo sabhi usi tufaan me nast hote ja rahe the.




B.h is waqt apne dhyan me baitha hua tha or uska kaam almost pura hi ho gya tha to usne apni aankho ko khola.or jab usne saamne dekha to uski aankhe khuli ki khuli reh gyi.




Isse pehle vo kuch samajh pata vo tufaan use uda le gya. Or us hole me se use jameen per neeche le aaya.




Bahi sab keval dekhte hi reh gye. Or dekhte kya kuch dekh hi nhi paaye kyuki charo taraf bhyankar tufaan aagya tha jo ham sabki aankho ke saamne jaakar hi ruka.



Or jaise hi tufaan shant hua hamari aankho ke saamne b.h jameen per pada hua tha. Jo khud hila hua tha ki vo yaha kaise aagya.




Khair vo jaldi se khada hua or usne baha per moujud sare logo ko dekha.





Or fir uski najar gyi uske peeche moujud us tufaan per.





B.h- tum kon ho.






Dev- tumhara dushman hi samajhlo mujhe. Ye sab jo kar rahe ho ise abhi ke abhi band kar di Verna tumhari mout aaj koi nhi rok payega.








B.h- achha kon marega mujhe tum







Dev- me nhi vi dekho saamne tumhari mout




Ye sunte hi b.h ne saamne dekha or uski aankhe fati ki fati reh gyi. Kyuki saamne rider khada hua tha. Apne bahi purane rup me. B h ka gala puri tarah se sukh gya tha or uske muh me thook bhi nhi bacha tha jise vo andar lene ki kosis kar raha tha.






B.h- ye impossible hai. Ise to maine vapis bhej diya tha fir ye bapis kaise aagya.






Dev- ye tumhari soch thi ki tumne ise Bapis bhej diya tha. Joki sach bhi tha. Lekin tumne ek bat per Gour nhi kiya. Jo us contract me likhi hui thi. Kash use pad lete to achha hota tumhare liye.





Ye sunkar b.h kaafi confuse tha.







Dev- jyada confuse mat ho me batata hu tumhe. Us contract ki ek limit thi jo ki 1000 years ki thi. Or aaj abhi us contract ko pure 1000 years ho chuke hai. Ab ise tumhari kismat kaho ya kuch or. Lekin tumne jab rider ko vapis bheja uske agle hi din us contract ki miyaad khatam ho gyi or rider bhi vapis se aazad ho gya. Or jo hukum tumne rider ko diya tha vo bhi bekaar ho gya isiliye vo aazad ho gya or apne man ke hisaab se jaha chahe baha ja sakta hai to aagya vo yaha per tumhari band bajane.









Avi- ab nhi bachega tu jitna uchhalna tha uchhal liya tune ab tere din khatam hue.






B.h- bache ye tumhari galat fehmi hai. Kyuki bhale hi me mar jaau. Lekin ab ye brahmand bhi nhi bachega kyuki ab mujhe dhyan lagane ki bhi jarurat nhi hai. Kyuki prithvi apni raftar pakad chuki hai or ab vo apni dusri jagah per pahuche bina nahi rukne wali hai. Isliye tum log jeet kar bhi haar gye ho








Main2- bhale hi ham sabhi khatam ho jaaye lekin tumhara jo sapna hai vo me kabhi pura nhi hone dunga.





Ye kehkar rider ne doud lagai or b.h ko pakad kar us hole se dur le gya.jaha vo aaram se uska sikaar kar paaye.





Bahi dev or baaki sab bahi khade hue the.




Dev- aap logo ko ab kuch bhi karne ki jarurat nhi hai. Bas in vampire ko role rahiye baaki me dekh lunga.







Rony- tum dev ho na. Surya ne bataya tha tumhare bare me.






Dev- ha me bahi hu. Ye intro baad me pura kar lenge. Filhaal hamare pass jyda samay nhi hai.



Ye kehkar dev super fast speed se udd gya or jaha jaha vo kaale dhue ke shaitaan ud rahe the unko thikane lagane laga. Ye uske liye halwa khane jaisa kaam tha. Unko dekhne matra se unka khatma hota ja raha tha. Dev ki third eye ke prabhav se to shukracharya nhi bache fir ye to unke mukabale exist hi nhi karte hai.





10 min. Me dev puri prithvi ka chakkar lagakar Bapis un holes ke pass aagya. Or ab main kaam baaki tha. Prithvi ko Bapis uski jagah per pahuchne ka kaam jo keval dev hi kar sakta tha is kisi ke bas ki baat nhi thi ise theek karna..












Baaki dekhte hai ab kya hota hai aage. Kya dev ise vakai me theek kar payega. Ya aaj is brahmand ka vinash pakka hai. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.






























To be continue………………………..
oho to finally Dev aur rider ke aate hi pura kayapalat hi ho gaya.... black heart ko to viswash nahi ho raha tha..... Ki ye ho kya raha hai... aa ayega maza rider aur rider phir se ek ho gaye... black heart to giyo :happy:
prastut karne ka tarika, Action sab kuch bahot hi dilchasp tarike se pesh kiya gaya hai... kirdaaro ke action ke adhar par update ke hisson ko jis tarah se vargikit kiya hai wo padhne mein baakeyi adbhut aur dilchap tha.... .
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 

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us keede ko chhod ke koi bhi hathiyar ya koi khatarnaak prani nahi bache black heart ke paas...Waise bahot uttpat macha liya is black heart ne lekin isse pehle BH aur uddham machaye, usko uske anjam tak pahuncha diya gaya... bakre ki maa kab tak kher manati... wo bhi mara gaya rider ke hatho.... sab kuch thik ho gaya.... wo holes band hoke aise gayab hua jaise waha wo the hi nahi... dharti bhi sahi jagah pe aa gayi....
sab kuch ho jaane ke baad ab inko kuch dino tak sukun bhari jindagi dena Rahul0087@ sahab ka farz tha.... taaki apne Jeevan saathiyo ke sath ek achha time bita sake.... par hum readers ko pata hai writer sahab inko thodi na itne dino tak sukun bhari jindagi jeene denge... phir koi Naya villane entry lega, phir suru hoga mahasangram....
is story mein jo ek karm mein srikhalaa vadh tarike har hissa jode gaye hai, un sabhi hisson mein jis tarah se romance se leke rahashya tak, suspense se leke action aur thrill tak.... Past, aur present mein jikar kiye gaye har pehlu ko jis tarah se bina bigade ek lay vadh tarike se darshaya hai writer sahab ne sach mein adbhut aur aakarshaniya the.... kahani har bhag ko readers samjhe, uske anukul ek details ke sath explanation tha.... Pehlu, mod aise aakashit kare ki hazar baar kahani aur update se jude kirdaaro se dil se judne ko jee kare.... is tarah ki kahaniyo ko padhana sach mein kisi adventure se kam nahin hoti....na jaane kab kya seekhne ko mil jaaye.. kab kounsi baat aapke mann dil ke gehrayi tak chali jaaye.. ye sab kuch is tarah ki bemisal kahaniyo mein hi sambhav hai.... kahanikaar ne bharpoor koshish ki hai apni kahani mein apna best dene ki... aur sahi maayno mein writer sahab kaamyab bhi huye......
Fantasy prefix based story hi sahi lekin jeevan ke kayi anubhavon aur maadhurya se mishrit plot hai.. jo ki kahani kaar ne badi khubsurati se buna hai ,jeevan ki chunautiyaan, jimmedari, vachan , prerana, bhay aur laalach aur na jaane kya kya kahani kar apni kahani mein bata gaye .
kher ab dekhate hai katha ke majaboot paksh kya kya the...
narrations mein aapne kamaal kar diya hai ....shabdon ka aisa kamaal kaafi kam dekhne ko milta hai...har shabd ke andar bhaavnaye koot koot ke bhari hui hai ..har kisi ke bas ki baat nahin hoti, bhaavanao ko pradarshit karna jo ki aapne behatareen dhang se kiye hai...aapka bahut bahut dhanyavaad jo ek utkrisht kahani hume padhane ko mili....

Brilliant storyline with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 
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THanks bhai log aap sabhi sath mila to ek or story complete ho gyi aaj. Ye is story ka last part tha or ab aage surya ki story aage nhi badhegi. Jo maine compele kar di hai.



and ab aage me story sayad nhi likh paunga. Janta hi aap sabhi ko dukh hoga ye sunkar lekin ye sach hai. Kyuki mere pass ab samay ki bahut kami hai. Or story ko likhne ka samay utna nhi mil pata hai jitna mujhe chahiye hota hai. Chuki ye story maine start kar di thi isiliye isko complete karna mera farz tha.jo maine nibhaya. Or isiliye me ab aage koi or story start nhi karna chahta hu kyuki agar maine ise start kiya to use complete bhi karna padega or utna samay mujhe nhi mil pa raha hai. Isliye sorry aap sabhi ko.



and aap sabhi ke jo bhi doubt and confusion ho is story ko leke vo aap mujhse puchh sakte hai. Baise to maine sabhi doubt ko cover karne ki kosis ki hai lekin agar fir bhi kuch bach gya ho to aap bejhijhak puchh sakte hai.

and me ummid karta hu ki aap sabhi mere is faisale ka samman karenge or mujhe force nhi karenge koi or story start karne ke liye. Thanks everyone apna sath dene ke liye.





keep supporting.......
Koi nhi bhai tumne story complete kerdi wohi bhot hai thanks for these lovely stories
 

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sabhi log dance me lage hue the. Tabhi Samar ki najar gyi ki varsha abhi tak nahi aai hai. Or use bhi pressure aaraha tha to vo break leke chala gya bathroom ki taraf.




Lekin un ladkiyo ne use rokne ki bahut kosis ki lekin nature call ke aage kiski chalti hai. Isliye samar bhi chala gya.



Bahi un ladkiyo mese ek ne side me jaake un teeno ko msg kar diya ki carefull rahe unse sathi mese ek aaraha hai baha per.



Lekin unki kismat kharab jo unhone msg dekha hi nahi kyuki vo to us waqt varsha ke kapde kholne me lage hue the. Varsha apne hath pair chudane ko puri kosis kar rahi thi lekin nakaam thi vo.




Bahi Samar pehle to gya apni tanki khaali ki usne. Or jab baha aaya to uski najar neeche gyi jaha ek bracelet gira hua tha. To usne use utha kar dekha to vo pehchan gya ko vo varsha ka hai. Lekin varsha baha nahi thi. To usne socha ki rakh leta hu baad me use de dunga. Bahi usne washroom me varsha ko bahar se hi aawaj lagai lekin koi reply nahi aaya uska. Tabhi baha se ek ladki bahar nikli.




Samar- hello andar koi or hai kya.





L- kyu aapko kya karna hai.





Samar- me meri friend ko dhund raha hu. Vo washroom hi aai thi. Kaafi der ho gyi hai. Isliye puchh raha hu.






L- ohh. Ji nahi mujhe koi nahi dikha.





Samar- fir bhi ek baar achhe se dekh leejiye. Varsha naam hai uska.






L- ok.



To bo andar gyi or usne pura washroom chaan mara lekin baha koi nahi tha. To vo bhar aagyi.






L- ji nhi andar koi bhi nahi hai.




Ye kehke vo chali gyi. Ab Samar ko tension hone lagi. Isliye vo bhag kar dance floor ki taraf gya. Jaha usne bheed me dekhna start kiya use sabhi dikhe lekin varsha nahi dikhi. To vo Bapis bahi per aaya. Jaha ise bracelet mila tha. Vo bahi aaspass dekhne laga. To use thode aage se khusaro piskar ki aawaj aane lagi.



Samar dabe paav baha gya or sunne ki kosis karne laga.



Or usne kuch khaas to nahi suna bas itna hi ki saali ke kapde jaldi nikaal ab sabr nahi ho raha hai.




Ye sunte hi Samar samjh gya ki koi ladki hai andr ab vo kon hai ye janne ke liye darwaja kholna padega. Isliye usne jor se darwaja khatkhataya. Kon hai andar.






Ye aawaj sunte hi teeno ek dum dar gye. Bahi varsha turant hi pehchan gyi ki ye Samar ki aawaj hai. Isliye vo bolne ki kosis karne lage. Lekin uske muh per tape laga hua tha jis bajah se sirf hmmmm hmmmm ki aawaj hi aarahi thi. Or ye aawaj thodi tez hi thi. Thode samay ke liye. Kyuki uske baad unlogo ne uska muh achhe se daba liya.




Lekin thoda late ho gye. Kyuki Samar ke kanao me ye aawaj pahuch chuki thi.






Usne bina koi der kiya thoda peeche hata or ek jordar laat maari gate me. Gate kaafi kamjor tha. Lekin gate tuta nahi. Balki usme ek chhed ho gya. Kyuki Samar ka pair usme aarpaar nikal gya tha.




Samar ne jaldi se apna pair bahar nikala or jaha kundi ho sakti thi baha per laat maari. To baha bhi chhed ho gya. Bahi andar moujud teeno ab kaafi darne lage the. Lekin the vo bhi ek no. Ke kameene.



Jaise hi Samar me apna hath andar dala kundi kholne ke liye. To unme se 2 logo ne uska hath pakad liya.





Ab Samar apna hath chhudane ki kosis kar raha hai lekin unki pakad bhi majbut hai.





Lekin ye log nahi jaante ki ye rony ka beta hai.




Isliye usne or takat lagai or apna hath bahar kheechne ki kosis ki.



To jis area me uska hath tha vo area ka or furniture tut gya or ab baha bahut bada chhed ho gya tha. Jisme se andar ka najara pura dekha ja sakta tha. Or ab Samar ka hath bhi bahar tha. Usne jhak kar dekha to use andar varsha dikhi.






Or itna kaafi tha.




Samar ko ab kaafi gussa aane laga. Tha varsha ki aisi haalat dekh ke.


Isliye vo thoda peeche hua or doud laga ke darwaje se kandhe ke bhar takraya or ye takkar vakai jordaar thi. Ek hi jhatke me pura darwaja un dono per gir pada. Or rahi sahi kasar Samar ek unke uper kood kar puri kar di. Darwaja do tukdo me bat gya. Or neeche walo ki halat down.




Tabhi vo last bacha hua Samar ki taraf aaya use maarne ke liye.




Samar ne uska hath beech me hi roka. Or uski kalai ko itni jor se moda ki haddi ki aawaj sabhi ke kaano tak pahunchi.



Vo dard me bilbila gya.




Lekin Samar ne koi reham nahi dikhaya or uske face per ek jordaar punch jad diya. Vo boukhla sa gya or seedha neeche gira. Samar uske pass gya or uska dusra hath pakda or ek jagah ulta rakh diya or jordaar kaat mari joint per. Uska hath 2 tukdo me bat gyi bahi per. Or vo itni jor se chillaya ki aawaj bahar tak ghi hogi. Or tabhi uske thobde per 4-5 puches ek sath varsha diye. Jisse vo behosh hi ho gya. Uske baad aaya vo thoda neeche. Or uske goto per usne lato ki barsat suru kar di. Jab tak baha se khoon nahi nikla tab tak vo laate maarta hi raha. Pura kanchubar nikaal diya usne baha ka. Sayad hi ab ye kabhi kisi ko chhod payega.





Tabhi vo dono bhi darwaje ko uper se hata ke bahar nikal aaye. Or apne sathi ki haakat dekhke unhone ladne ki bajaye bhagne me dilchaspi dikhai. Or vo dono baha se bhag gye.




Bahi Samar ne jaldi se varsha ko khola varsha rone lagi thi. Or uski haalat dekhke to use bhi taras aagya tha.




Samar- koi nahi me hu na. Koi touch bhi nahi kar sakta mere hote hue. Bilkul mat ghabrao aao jara unke haal bhi dekh le.





Dono jaldi se bahar ki side gye. Jaha unhe vo dono bheed se nikalte hue dikhaao dene lage. Samar ne bhi doud lagai unki taraf. Bahi amar avi or ashk ki najar gyi Samar ki taraf. To vo samajh gye ki jarur kuch gadbad hui hai. Bahi vo ladkiya vo dheere dheere bheed me chhipane lagi thi.




Amar ne sabse pehle music band karwaya. Jisse sabhi ka dance ruk gya. Or sabhi chillane lage.



Tabhi Samar ne ek ko pakad liya or peeche se hi use apni taraf kheecha or neeche se uske pairo ko pakda or utha ke neeche patak diya. Is shor se sabhi ka dhyan us taraf ho gya.



Bahi ashk varsha ke pass thi. Uski haalat dekhte hi vo samajh gyi ki kya hua hoga. Usne use sambhala. Bhai dusra jo aage bhag raha tha pata nahi kaha se avi uske aage aagya or uske seene me ek laat maari jisse vo bhi gir pada. Neeche. Or Samar filhaal dusre gire wale ke pass.





Samar- saalo meri varsha ko hath kaise lagaya.



Ye bolte hue usne uska hath tod diya. Or uske pet per baith ke diye uske muh me puches. Ek ke baad ek. Lagataar. Saale ke muh se khoon ki ultiya hone lagi.




Bahi baha moujud sabhi log bas dekh hi rahe the ki kya kya ho raha hai. Bahi club ke bouncer is ladai ko rokne ke liye baha aagye or Samar ko uske uper se utha kar alag kar diya. Vo 2 log the dono ne ek ek hath se Samar ko pakad.







Samar- chhodo mujhe.





B1- pagal ho kya kitna maar rahe ho use. Mar jayega vo.






Samar- mar jaaye to achha hai. Or tum kaise bouncer ho. Tum dono ki naak ke neeche yaha ek ladki ka rape ho jata aaj.





Ye sunte baha moujud sabhi ke muh khule ke khule reh gye. Sabhi ek dum hairan reh gye ki ye kya bol raha hai.







B1- yaha aisa kuch nahi hota hai. Ha thodi bahut chhedchaad jarur karte hai ladke. Lekin itna nahi hota hai.







Samar- achha jara jaao washroom ke bagal me jo cabin bane hai na baha jaao. Or dekho isi ka ek sathi baha behosh pada hua hai. Baaki ke 2 sathi ye rahe. Or jiska rape ye karne wale the. Vo rahi meri gf. Jara dekho uske kapde. Sab kuch samajh me aajayega.







Sabhi najar utha ke varsha ki dekha. Or sab samjha gye ki kaand hote hote reh gya.




Samar- isliye keh raha hu chhod do mujhe. Verna kal se ye pub gya samjho. PM bhi isko band hone se nahi bacha payega.






B1- achha aisi kya top hai tu.





Samar- beta top to bahut badi hu. Ek phone per yaha pure mumbai ki police aajayegi. Bina koi der kiye. Isliye jyada udo mat.







B1- tum jo bhi ho yaha ye sab nahi karne ka. Bahar jaake kuch bhi karo samajh gye.







Samar- achha aisi bat hai.





Ye kehkar Samar ne apne hath ki pakad uske hath per majbut ki or jor se apni laat uski laat per maari or hatho ki power ko dikhate hue use neeche patak diya.


Uska dusra hath chhuta to usne turant hi dusre wale ki garden pakdi or use ekdum se utha diya or jor se chhod diya vo bhi neeche gira.




Dono hi kaafi hatte katte the. Lekin Samar bhi kam nahi hai. Saalo ki training mili hai use. Pal me aise kaiyo ko sambhal sakta hai vo.






Usne unhe bahi chhoda or teesre ke pass gya vo. Jise avi ne daba kar rakha tha.





Bahi pechhe se vo guard ute to amar unke pass gya or ek ko usne rok liye. Baaki dusre ko avi ne turant hi jaake rok liya.





Bahi us teesre ki fat ke char ho gyi thi.







Bahi Ashk ne police ko inform kar diya tha. Ye sab dekhke taaki mamla jaldi shant ho jaaye. Verna pata nahi kya hoga aaj. Kahi inko maar na de Samar.









Samar uske pass gya vo bhagne hi wala tha ki pakad liya. Or sabse pehla baar uske main part per. Jisse vo jhuk gya. Or agli kick uske muh per. Jisse vo gulati khate hue neeche dhadam se gira. Or uske baad seedi laat uske sir me. Jisse uske dant jor se jameen me takraaye or aage ke 2 tut gaye.





Uske baad uska bhi hath pakad ke ek hi jhatke me mod diya. Or peeche jaake seedhi laat maati uske goto me. Or de laate de laate.




Uska bhi kaam lagbhag tamam hi kar diya Samar ne. Saale aainda se khud ki biwi ke sath bhi nahi kar payenge kabhi. Or yahi inki sabse badi saja thi.




Usko niptane ke baad vo dusre ke pass gya or uske bhi gote fod diye. Farsh per khoon fail gya tha.




Tabhi baha per vijay aagya. Or usne dono ki haalat dekhi or samajh gya ki mamla kuch jyada hi bada hai.




Vo sabse pehle Samar ke pass gya or use sambhala usne. Baaki hawaldaro ne un neeche pade bakio ko uthaya bahi avi ne ek ke andar hone ka ishara kiya to 2 log baha gye jaha vo abhi bhi behosh hi pada hua tha.




Teeno ke liye ambulance bulaai or teeno ko bhej diya hoshpital. Bahi vijay Samar or bakio ko baha se le gya. Or sabhi ye najara dekh ke ek dum sunn the. Baha per ek bhi shabd kisi ke muh se nahi nikla tha. Abhi tak. Na vijay ne kuch kaha bola tha na hi Samar ya baakio ne. Sab shant the or sab samajh rahe the. Ki kya hua hai yaha per.




Khair uske baad club band ho gya or sabhi apne apne ghar chale gye.



Or Samar and party police station. Report likhwane.
















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Vijay ne jaldi hi sabko free kar diya or unhe ghar bhej diya. Or vo gya seedha hoshpital jaha jaake usne doctor se baat ki un teene ke baare me.




Vijay- doc kya haal hai Inke.






Doc- baise to sab theek hai. Bas hath pair tut gaye hai jo kuch dino me theek ho jayenge. Lekin ek cheez hai jo kabhi theek nahi hone wali.







Vijay- kya.






Doc- private part. Teene parts ko buri tarah chot lagi hai. Sayad hi ab ye kabhi sex kar payenge. Gye kaam se teeno.







Vijay- achha hua saale rape karenge. Vo to achha hua ki inhe jaan se nahi mara.







Doc- maar dete to jyada achha hota.





Vijay- ye saza inke liye perfact hai. Jindagi bhar inko inki galti ka ehsas hoga. Ki kyu unhone aisa karne ka try kiya.








Doc- sahi baat hai. Baise ye hai kon kuch pata chala inke ware me.







Vijay- pata nahi bahi pata karne to aaya hu. Inka parse vagera ho to deejiye.





Doc- ha hai rukiye me leke aata hu.






Doc andar gya or unka samaan leke aagya. Jaha vijay ne teeno ki id check ki to use pata chala ki inme se ek to kisi builder ka beta hai. Vaki dono ek middle class family se belong karte hai.





Khair vijay ne teeno ko inform kiya or unhe hoshpital bula liya.





Teeno jab baha aaye to apne bacho ki aisi haalat dekhke teeno ko rona aagya. Bahi jab vijay ne asliyat batai to teeno shock ho gye. Unhe bilkul yakeen nahi tha ki unke bache aisa karenge.






Lekin vijay ne club ki cctv footage unko dikhai jisme vo varsha ko leke kamre me le ja rahe the. Or itna sabut kaafi tha. Jise dekh ke in sabhi ki aankhe sharm se jhuk gyi. Kyuki unke liye bhi ye sab bahut hi kharab kaam tha. Or ye sab janne ke baad teeno ke maa baap ne kaha ki fir to theek hi saza mili hai inhe. Lekin ye to pal do pal ka gussa tha. Jaise jaise zindagi aage badegi. Sabhi ko dukh hoga ki kyu kiya tha unhone ye kaam. Ab kisi kaam ke nahj rahe.







Bahi dusri taraf. Sabhi bache ghar pahuch gye the. Aaj varsha Samar ke sath hi uske vistar me hi leti hui thi. Dono ek dusre se chipke hue the. Or dono hi shant the.






Tabhi pata nahi varsha ko kya sujha vo uthi or Samar ko paaglo ki tarah kiss karne lagi. Bahi Samar puri tarah se hairan tha ki ye kya ho gya.




Lekin vo bhi kiss me sath de raha tha.




Bahi varsha Samar ke hathon ko apne boobs per rakh kar unhen daba rahi thi. Bahi Samar ko ye sab filhaal theek nahi lag raha tha. Isliye usne khud ko roka or varsha ko bhi.








Samar- ye sahi nahi hai varsha. Shadi ke baad hi karenge.








Varsha- ha lekin mujhe abhi karna hai. Mujhe ab dar lagne laga hai ki kahi meri ijjat tumse pehle koi or na lut le. Isliye ab me or der nahi karna chahti hu. Tum mujhe aaj hi apna bana lo.







Samar- kiski itni himmat jo tumhe haath bhi lagaye.







Varsha- me jaanti hu tumhare sath mujhe koi khatra nahi hai. Lekin har waqt to tum mere sath nahi rahoge na. Jaise kal akele me un teeno ne mujhe pakda tha. Agar tum baha nahi aate to me tumhe muh dikhane ke bhi layak nahi rehti. Isliye aaj khud ko or mujhe mat roko. Ho jaane do jo ho raha hai. Pls Samar.








Samar- tum itna kyu dar rahi ho.





Varsha- actually maine tumhe bataya nahi. Lekin ek baar or mere sath aisa hadasa hote hote bacha hai. Kuch ladko ne 2-3 saal pehle bhi mera rape karne ki try ki thi. Tab papa ne mujhe bacha liya tha. Or aaj tumne. Aage ka kya bharosa.






Ye sunte hi Samar ki aankhe ek dum se laal ho gyi






Samar- kisne kiya tha ye naam batao saalo ko jinda gaad dunga me.






Varsha- uski jarurat nahi hai. Teeno apne kiye ki saza jail me bhugat rahe hai. Lekin ab mujhe vakai me dar lagne laga hai.isliye pls Samar mujhe aage badhne do.





Ye sunke Samar thodi der shant raha or fir usne decide kiya ki theek hai ho jaane do jo ho raha hai. Sayad isse varsha ke andar ka dar bhaag jaaye. Or vo samajh gya tha ki kyu varsha ne use itne chakkar lagwaye the. Vo abhi tak pehle wale hadse se ubri nahi thi ki dusra ho gya uske sath. Isliye samar ne khud ko samjha diya.





Or uske baad dono fir se kiss me dub gye. Dono full josh se aage bad rahe the. Or ek ek karke dono ke kapde utaar rahe the.






Or fir inki ye dhamake daar kahani pure 2 ghanto tak chalti rahi. Jisme 3 round khele Samar ne. Or dono hi tript ho gye the ek dusre se. Varsha ke chehre per dukh ki jagah ek kushi aagyi thi or uska chehra chamakne laga tha. Bahi Samar bhi kush tha. Kyuki varsha kush thi.





Uske baad dono so gye.







Next day news me khabar aagyi ki kal raat kya hua. Lekin kisi ka bhi naam aage nahi aaya. Sirf un ladko ke hi naam aaye bahar. Na hi varsha ka or na hi Samar ka.







Unki teeno ki diwani seedhe 6 mahine baad thi. Or tab tak unhe jail me hi rehna tha. Ye hai aajka kanoon. Aisi harkat hone per pehle seedhi saza milti hai 6 mahine tak jail me rehne Ki. Uske baad hi court me hearing hoti hai. Taaki thoda to ehsas ho gunehgaar ko ki usne kya kiya hai. Or court se bahar agar vo kisi tarah nikal bhi aaye tab bhi kamse kam 6 mahine ki saza to use mil hi gyi hoti hai. Jo kam to hoti hai lekin turant hi chhut jaane se to behtar hai.







Bahi agle din se sabki normal life shuru ho gyi. Pancho apni clg life me mast the. Achha time nikaal rahe the.




Usi din sham ko. Sabko pata chala ki clg me ek hafte ki chhutiyan hone wali hai. To kyuna kahi bahar ghumne jaya jaaye.






To sabhi apne apne plan batane lage koi kehta ghar chalo koi kahi or lekin kuch bhi decide nahi ho pa raha tha.







Avi- ek kaam karte hai. India ke bahar hi chalte hai.






Ashk- mujhe nahi jana bahar kahi bhi. Yahi per dekhlo.






Amar- sahi hai. Or baise bhi 7 din ki chhutti hai 4 din to aane jaane me hi lagenge. Vakai ghumenge kab.







Avi- to fir maldiv chalte hai badiya maja aayega.







Varsha- ha ye theek rahega. Bahi chalte hai. Pass me bhi hai. Or aane jaane me dikkat bhi nahi hogi.






Ashk- lekin baha hai kya. Samundar ke aalwa. Beech samundar me ghar bane hai. Kahi aisi jagah chalo jahan mouj masti ho sake. Verna ghar chalo. Kitne dino se baha gye bhi nahi hai. Badiya hafta bhar rukenge sabhi ko achha bhi lagega or varsha bhi apna gaav dekh legi.









Amar- i think ye badiya plan hai. Or kahi agar ghumne jana hoga to udaypur hai jaipur hai. Chittod hai. Bahut jagah hai sab jagah ghumenge. Varsha ko bhi ghumayenge.









Varsha- ha ye theek rahega. Ek kaam karo ashk tumhari vo friend hai na. Unhe bhi sath le lo. Kiran or Charu ko.







Ashk- ha vo bhi kehti hai ki hame le chalo apne gaav. To theek haim ham aaj hi chalte hai. Me unko call karke puchh leti hu.






Avi- ok.




Uske baad ashk ne un dono ko baari baari call kiya. Or jab unhe ghar jaane ke baare me puchha to un dono ne hi bina koi jhijhak ke ha keh di. Bahi Samar ne bhi jatin ko call kiya to usne bhi ha keh diya aane ke liye.




To sabhi ne sham ko nikalne ka plan banaya.




Sabhi ke pass din bhar tha to packing nagera kar li thodi si.



Kuch shopping bagera bhi kar li. Ladkiyo ne. Baaki ladke to mast the.





Baaki sham ko sabhi log seedhe airport gye or baha per avi ne Harry se kehke surya ka plan bulwa liya tha. Jisme sabhi seedha gaav me hi utre. Or harry ne bhi bina kisi deri ke bhej diya. Fir sabhi usme baithe or masti majak karte hue udd gye ghar ke liye. Bahi charu varsha jatin or kiran ye sabhi pehli Baar itne luxurious plan me safar kar rahe the. Halaki varsha ek baar kar chuki hai. Lekin vo surya ka nahi tha. Vo kisi or ka tha.







Khair ab dekhte hai ye mandali gaav me kya halla machati hai. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.















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sabhi bache ne badiya plane ka safar enjoy kiya or pahuch gye gaav. Jaha runway per land hua plan. Or sabhi bahar nikle. Jaha ek badi LIMOUSINE car sabhi ka wait kar rahi thi. Jise dekhke sab super exited ho gye. Itni lumbi car jisme desh ke president or PM safar karte hai. Aisi car me kisi ko ride offer ho to kon mana karega.




sabhi usme baith gye or gaav ke najare dekhte hue sabhi apne ghar tak pahuche.



Or ab fir se sabhi ke choukane ki baari thi. Kyuki palace dekh ke sabhi ki aankhe khuli ki khuli reh gyi. Kya bhavya palace the. Ek dum golden colour me. Kisi sone ki lanka se kam nahi lag raha tha.






Kiran- my god yaar ashk ye ghar hai tum logo ka. Kitna sundar hai. Ek hafta to isi me ghumate hue nikal jayega. Gaav dekhne ka to mouka hi nahi milega hame.





Charu- true. Yaar aisa palace to rajao ke time per hua karte the.






Ashk- ham bhi rajao ki family se hi belong karte hai. Fir your kind information miss charu.




Ye sunke unki hairangi or bad gyi.





Kiran- sach me. Kon the tumhare purvaj.







Ashk- Mewad ki aan baan or shan. MAHARANA PRATAP SINGH SISODIYA.





ye sunke sabhi ek dum se bhouchakke reh gye.





Varsha- sach me. Kya baat hai. Unke baare me kitna suna hai. Or ab lagta hai ki jitna suna hai kam hi hai. Tum sabhi ki bahaduri dekh ke lagta hai vo kitne bahadur honge.







Amar- ha. Pata hai dadaji bolte hai ki jo hamare chacha hai. Yaani ki ashk or avi ke pita. Vo kaafi had tak unke jaise hi hai. Chachu ko dekh lo ya unko. Ek hi baat hai. Unke andar unhi ke jaisa dimaag or tez hai. Jise dekhte hi achhe achhe ki halat patli ho jaati hai. Or to or ek khaas baat me batata hu sabko. Ki jab surya chachu ka janm hua tha to dadaji ne jab unhe dekha tha to dekhte hi pehchan liya tha ki maharana pratap singh ne fir se janm liya hai. Kyuki hamare purvaj batate the ki is khandaan me keval bahi the jinke jangh per ek massa hai. Baaki unke baad keval chachu ki jangh per massa aaya hai. Or kisi ke bhi nahi.






Charu- kya baat hai.





Samar- chalo ab andar se bhi najara dekh lo.




Ye kehkar sabhi main gate ki taraf aaye or jaise hi pahuche radha aarti ki thaal leke bahar aagyi or sabhi ko bahi per rok diya.



Unke sath amar or Samar ki bhi mummiyan thi. Sabhi ne baari baari se sabhi ki aarti utari or saari balaye khud per le li. Uske baad sabko andar aane diya.





Ashk- kiran or Charu or varsha ye hai meri mom. Mrs Radha surya pratap singh.




Ye sunke teeno radha ko bas dekhti hi reh gyi. Or fir teeno jhuki unke pair chhune ke liye. To radha ne unhe rok diya or apne gale se laga liya.




( Baaki bhabhiyo ke naam is waqt mujhe yaad nahi aarahe hai isliye unke naam me nahi likhne wala sorry guys)




Aise hi amar or Samar ne bhi apni apni moms ka intro karwaya unse. Or unhone bhi teeno ko gale se laga liya khas kar Samar ki mom ne varsha ko achhe se hug kiya kyuki unko bhi pata tha ki aage yahi unki bahu banne wali hai. Isliye uska swagat khub achhe se kiya sabhi maao ne. Jisse vo bhi kaafi kush ho gyi.






Radha- achha kiya jo tum log kahi or jaane ki jagah yaha aagye kabse tum sabhi ko dekha bhi nahi tha. Ghar ki yaad nahi aati tum sabhi ko.






Ashk- mujhe to roj hi aati hai. Baaki in teeno ko to bilkul bhi nahi aati hai. Ye kabhi nahi bolte ghar jane ke baare me.






Amar- achha hame bhi aati hai. Lekin padai me vyast rehte hai to aa hi nahi paate hai.






( Yaha me amar ki mom ko A mom likhunga or Samar ki mom ko S mom)





A mom- ha jaanti hu kitni padai karte ho tum log. Puri khabar milti hai hame. Bade aaye padai karne wale. Apni mummio ki yaad nahi aati tum sabhi ko. Na kabhi call karte ho na milne aate ho.






S mom- sahi kaha didi ne. Kyu re Samar tujhe bhi nahi aati yaad hamari.





Samar- mom aap sabhi ko to roj hi yad karte hai ham. Bas koi na koi adchan aati rehti hai jisme call karna bhul jaate hai.





Radha- hai rehne do bade aaye adchan wale. Didi inko bolne se koi fayeda nahi hai ye nahi sudharne wale.





A mom- sahi kaha.





In sab me avi ek dum shant ek jagah khada tha. Or soch raha tha ki uski baari na hi aaye to behtar hai. Verna chhota hone ke baate uski pitaai bhi ho sakti hai.






Ashk- baise mom aapka ek beta or bhi hai jo is waqt peeche chhipa hua hai.





Ye sunte hi avi ne ashk ke peeche se baal kheech diye





Radha- are mera pyara bacha aaja beta mummy ke gale nahi lagega.




Avi- me yahi theek hu.






Radha- kyu beta





Avi- mom sorry






Radha- koi baat nahi me jaanti hu tu kitna busy rehta hai lab me. Isliye tujhse me kuch nahi kahungi.






Avi- pakka na.






Radha- ha beta pakka.





Ye sunte hi avi ashk ke peechhe se bahar nikla or seedha gya amar ki mom ke pass or unke pair chhu ke aasirbaad liya. Uske baad Samar ki mom ke pass gya or fir Radha ke pass. Teeno ne use bhar bhar ke aasirbaad diya. Or akhir me ek halki si chamat bhi pyari si.





Tabhi pechhe se dadi or nani bhi aagyi bacho ko yani surya ki mom or bua.




Sabhi ne unse aasirbaad liya uske baad sabhi ki seva hone lagi coffee chai nasta man pasand ka khana. Sabhi dadaji se bhi mile






Sabhi dosto ko ghar ke sabhi logo se milke bahut achha laga.




Or fir Radha ne sabhi ke kamre bhi khulwa diye. Jaha varsha kiran charu or ashk ek hi room me jo kaafi bada tha or uska bed bhi king size tha jisme charo aaram se adjust ho sakti thi. Agar unhen koi dikkat na ho to. Or kisi ne koi aapatti nhi dikhai. Baaki jatin Samar ke kamre me or amar or avi apne saprate kamre me.





Raat ke khane ke waqt sabhi ke dad bhi aagye the to sabhi se fir se mulakaat hui bacho ki uske baad sabhi ne milke khana khaya or apne apne kamro me chale gye. Jaha sabhi bache kamro ki jagah chhat per chale gye tehalne.








Jatin- Samar yaar mujhe kal car ka collection dekhna hai tum sabhi ka






Samar- ha kyu nahi achhe se dekh lena






Amar- ha to ab kal ham sabhi gaav ka chakkar lagayenge aas pass badiya jheel hai to baha chalenge.




Baaki next day udaypur uske next day jaypur uske next day chittod




Aise hi din nikal jayenge.







Varsha- ok badiya hai maja aayega







Uske baad aadhi raat ko sabhi sone ke liye gye. Jaha Samar or varsha ne ek kiss kiya or so gye apne apne kamro me. Bahi baaki sabhi bhi apne apne kamro me chale gye. Bahi avi gya sabse pehle neeche base me jaha usne Harry ke haalchal puchhe kya chal raha hai sabhi jaankari li. Thoda bahut kaam kiya or fir aake so gya.









Next day sabhi apne apne time se uthe fresh hue nahaye dhoye or ready hoke aagye neeche. Jaha sabhi ne badiya se nasta kiya or uske baad sabhi gye neeche garage me. Jaha ka mahol sach me dil kush kar dene wala tha. Ek se ek antique car costly cars premium cars average car to koi thi hi nahi baha per. Or agar total mara jaaye to 50 ke something to keval cars hi thi.


Or kuch 4-5 bike thi jo khud rony ne hi banai thi.






Jatin- yaar ye bike konsi company ki hai.






Samar- ye actually kisi company ki nahi hai. Ise khud banaya hai mere dad ne apne hatho se. Ye sab unhi ki design ki hui bikes hai. Ek dum advance technology se lece.agar iska chamatkar dekh liya na to dang reh jaoge.







Jatin- aisa kya karti hai ye






Samar- ek min. Ruko dikhata hu.






Samar- rambo 2 start.




Ye sunte hi bike apne aap start ho gyi. Or na usme chabi lagi na kuch or. Voice command.




Samar- rambo 2 ride one round or circle.





Aisa sunte hi bike apne aap chalne lagi or ek chakkar laga kar vapis apni jagah aagyi. Or ye dekhke to jatin or vaki sabhi ek dum pagal hi ho gye.





Jatin- what tha. Ye kya hai. Bhutiya bike.




Isper sabhi hasne lage.





Uske baad sabhi ne ek car nikali jisme sabhi ban jaaye or nikal gyi party ghumne.






Inki aisi masti chalti hi rahi. Agle din ye log uday pur gye baha bhi ghume palace gye baha ke jheel me boating bagera ki. Bahi uday ke palace se bahar nikalte samay sabhi baato me vyast the tabhi achanak se amar kisi se takra gya.




Jisse uska beg neeche gir gya or usme rakha samaan bhi to amar ne turant hi sorry bola or sara samaan uthane me madad ki. Or jab dono ki aankho ne ek dusre ko dekha to dekhte hi reh gye. Donoham umra the or samne ek ladki thi jiski sadgi uske chehre per saaf dikh rahi thi. Ek dum natural beauty. Or ek hi najar me dono ek dusre se apna dill haar gye. Dono apne me hi khoye hue the ki tabhi avi ne dono ka kaam bigaad diya. Beech me chutki baja kar or amar ko bhaiya kehke.




Avi- chale bhaiya.






Ye sunke dono ko jaise hosh aaya ho.




Amar- sorry miss aapko laga to nhi.






L- ji nahi laga me theek hu. And sorry bolne ki jarurat nahi hai. Mera bhi dhyan kahi or hi tha.





Amar- ok. by the way mera naam amar hai. Amar pratap singh.





L- hii amar. Mera naam Nidhi singhaniya hai.




Amar- hii nidhi. Aap yahi rehti hai






Nidhi- ji nahi me mumbai me rehti hu. Yaha to ghumne ke liye aai hu.





Amar- aap akele aai hai.





Nidhi- ji nahi mere friends hai sath me. Vo mujhse thode aage nikal gye hai.





Amar- ok





Nidhi- aap log dekh aaye palace






Amar- actually mera dekhna reh gya hai. baaki ye log dekhke aagye hai. Me thoda late ho gya aane me yaha.







Nidhi- ohh so sad. Baise agar aap chahe to hamare sath chal sakte hai.






Amar- ha kyu nahi.





Avi- to bhaiya ham log nikal jaaye.





Amar- ha tum log niklo me baad me join karta hu tum logo ko.





Ye kehkar amar ne avi ko aankh maar di. Or avi bhi muskura gya or baha se chala gya. Amar ko chup ke se all the best bolke.






Bahi amar or nidhi palace ke andar chale gye. Or baaki sabhi ek restaurant me chale gye khana khane. Bahi nidhi ne bhi apne sathiyo ko bilkul bhi dhundne ki kosis nahi ki. Usko amar ki company bahut pasand aarahi thi isliye dono apne me hi mast the.



Amar nidhi ko pura palace ghuma raha tha. Vo aise behave kar raha tha jaise vo bhi pehli Baar aaya hai. Lekin usne pura palace kai baar dekha hua tha.




Nidhi bhi intrest ke sath uske sath judi hui thi. Or tabhi achanak se nidhi ki ek friend baha aagyi or usne nidhi ko dhund liya tha.






Nf- kaha thi tum kabse dhund rahe hai tumhe.






Nidhi- are me thoda peeche reh gyi thi or tum log aage nikal gye the to nahi mile.





Nf- ohh baise ye kon hai guide hai kya yaha ke.





Nidhi- chup kar kuch bhi bolti hai. Inka naam amar hai. Mere sath ye bhi ghum rahe hai palace ko to dono hi akele the to thodi baate kar li hamne.





Nf- ohh hii mera naam payal hai.





Amar- hii mera naam Amar pratap singh hai.





Nf- nice to meet you mr. Amar pratap singh.




Amar- just call me Amar. Pura naam lene ki jarurat nahi hai.





Nf- ok amar. To aap akele yaha kya kar rahe hai koi mila nahi aapko






Amar- achha hua na koi nahi mila Verna fir apki friend se mulakaat kaise hoti meri. Or inki company me hamesha miss karta fir.






Nf- ohhho thode se hi time me kaafi baate ho gyi lagta hai aap dono me. Dono ek dusre ki tariff karne lage hai.



Ye sunke dono hi Sharma gye.






Nf- to ab bataiye kya karne ka irada hai hamare sath chalenge aap ya yaha se akele apne safar pura karenge.






Nidhi- vo hamare sath hi safar pura karenge baaki tum aage bado





Nf- dekh rahe hai aap kaise naye dost ke milne per purani sabse best friend ko dur kar rahi hai ye ladki.







Amar- aisa ho jata hai kabhi kabhi.




Uske baad ye teeno gye or bakio se mile inka group bhi bada tha karib 5-6 logo ka. Jisme 2 ladke or char ladkiya thi. Or mujhe batane ki jarurat nahi hai ki vo 2 ladke amar ko dekhke kitna chod rahe honge. Khaskar nidhi ke sath dekhke.




Khair kisi tarah kuch ghanto me inka palace darshan khatam hua or sabhi bahar nikal aaye. Ab baari thi juda hone ki.





Is waqt amar or nidhi aamne saamne the or baaki sabhi ko payal inse thoda dur le aai thi. Jaan bhuj kar. Taaki Inka mamla kuch age bad sake.





Amar- achha to ab me chalta hu. Aapke sath bitaya gya samay vakai me yaadgaar tha.






Nidhi- same here.





Amar- baise ham dobara kabhi milenge kya.





Nidhi- aap jab bhi mumbai aaye to jarur mulakaat karna chahungi aapse.






Amar- well maine sayad bataya nahi aapko lekin me bhi mumbai me hi rehta hu. Bahi ke clg se hi apni study kar raha hu.





Ye sunke nidhi ka chehra ek dum se khil gya jo abhi juda hone ke dar se thoda murjha sa gya tha.





Nidhi- sach me.






Amar- ha.





Nidhi- fir to aapse mulakaat hoti rahegi.




Amar- well mulakaat karne ke liye sabse pehle contact no. Hona jaruri hai. Kya aap mujhe apna no. Dena chahengi.







Amar full Rajao wale swag se baat kar raha tha jise sunke achhe achhe flat ho jaate hai fir to yaha ye pehle se hi flat thi..





Nidhi- ha kyu nahi.





Usne amar ko apna no. Diya or amar me turant hi call laga kar ek misscall de diya. Or dono ne no. Ko save kar liya.





Amar- baise aap kab tak hai yaha per.







Nidhi- kal or hai perso chale jayenge ham sabhi.






Amar- kal kaha ghumne jaane wale hai aap sabhi.






Nidhi- jaipur jayenge aaj raat ko hi. Kal baha ghumenge fir baha se seedhe mumbai.






Amar- baise me aapko follow nahi kar raha hu lekin ham sabhi bhi kal jaypur me honge.






Nidhi- fir to vakai maja aayega.






Amar- ha maja to aayega hi.






Nidhi- theek hai to milte hai kal.




Ye bolke nidhi baha se chali gyi or amar use jaate hue dekhta raha. Jab tak vo uski anakho ke saamne se ojhal nahi ho gyi.






Tabhi amar ka phone baja jo avi ka tha.














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Amar- ha avi bolo.






Avi- kya hua bhai baat kuch aage badi ya jalebi ban rahi hai. Kuch madad chahiye kya.







Amar- beta tera bada bhai hu me.






Avi- vo to aap ho hi.





Amar- kaha ho tum log






Avi- hamlog ****** restaurant me hai. Aap aajiye aapka hi intjar ho raha hai.






Amar- lekin aau kaise car kaha hai.







Avi- texi leke aajaiye car nahi aane wali.




Amar- achhi baat hai. Aata hu





Avi- ha lekin bataiye to hua kya.






Amar- milke batata hu na itni jaldi kya hai janne ki.






Avi- sahi hai. Aajaiye.





Uske amar ne ek auto pakda or restaurant chala gya jisme thoda waqt laga lekin time per pahuch gya vo. Sabhi ka khana almost ho chuka tha.



Jab amar pahucha to sabhi khake free ho chuke the.




Avi- lo aagye bhai.





Amar- hii kha liya sabhi ne.





Samar- ha bhai. Aapke liye bhi order kar diya tha ready hi hai.





Amar- theek hai mangwa lo.





Avi ne turant hi waiter ko bolke order diya or waiter bhi 5 min. Me hi sab leke aagya. Ek dum garma garm.




Amar ne khana start kiya




Ashk- ha bhai bataiye kuch baat aage badi. Baise mujhe to pura bharosha hai aapne apne charm ka achha jalwa dikhaya hoga use.






Amar- ha ashk baat almost ho chuki hai no. Bhi mil chuka hai. Or kal ham jaypur ja rahe hai na. To vo log bhi hame bahi milenge.






Avi- kya baat hai bhai kya khabar sunai hai. Maja aagya. Matlab Kamal hi ho gya ye Samar ki love story dekhke mujhe laga tha ki kahi me budha na ho jau mera no. Aane tak. Lekin aapne to 1 ghante me hi kamaal kar diya.





Is baat per Samar ne avi ko tapli maar di or baaki sabhi hasne lage.





Kiran- baise avi tumhe kis tarah ki ladki chahiye. Batao ham dhund denge tumhare liye.






Avi- pata nahi. Jiske sath shuruwat se hi connection jud jaaye baisi chahiye. Jaise Samar ka juda bhai ka juda baise hi mera bhi judega.




Ashk- ha or mera bhi.






Avi- ohho badi exited ho hame chhod ke jane ke liye.





Ashk- ha vo kya hai teri shakl dekh dekh ke bor ho gyi ho. Uper se teen bhai hai mustande jaise kisi ki himmat hi nahi hoti mujh tak aane ki. Tum teeno ko dekh ke. Isliye mujhe kuch jyada hi chinta hai apne future ki.







Is bat per sabhi hasne lage.




Avi- theek hai bhaiyo kal se ise akela chhod dete hai. Isko takleef hoti hai apne sath rehne se. Ja ashk je le apni jindagi.




Samar- ha kyu nahi.





Amar- ok me bhi ready hu.





Teeno ne teamup kar liya or bahi ashk ka majak usi per bhari pad gya. Uska chehra ek dum se latak gya. Use laga jaise usne kuch galat keh diya ho.





Or ye dekh ke sabhi hasne lage to use or bura laga or vo uth kar chali gyi.




To Samar ne use turant hi pakad liya or use vapis se baitha diya.





Samar- are tum to ruth gyi. Ham sirf majak kar rahe the. Sun lo khabardar jo kisi ne ashk se aisa majak kiya to. Tange tod dunga me sabhi ki.






Amar- meri bhi.




Samar- aapki nahi bhai baaki sabhi ki.





Varsha- meri bhi.





Ab Samar fas gya.




Samar- vooooo are chhodo na kisi ko tange nahi todunga me. Lekin ashk se koi majak nahi karega. Or ashk tera sath to ham marne ke baad bhi nahi chhodne wale. Bhut banke tere aage pichhe ghumenge. Dekh lena.






Ye sunke ashk thodi emotional ho gyi.




Ashk- khabardaar jo aisi baate nikali apne muh se. Mare aapke dushman.





Amar- vo to mar hi rahe hai roj. Uski chinta tu mat kar. Or tu kabse itni emotional hone lagi.






Ashk- actually mujhe laga ki mera majak thoda jyada ho gya isliye mujhe dukh hua or aap sabhi ne bhi ek sath ha bol diya is bandar ki baato me aake.






Avi- lo bhai ab kisi ka bhala socho to bhi bure hi bante hai apan. Me to tere liye hi keh raha tha. Kam se kam tujhe thoda space milega to sayad tera bhi koi bf ban jaaye. Vaki mujhe kya padi hai.






Ashk- mere already 3-3 boyfriend hai. Jo mere saamne baithe hai. Mujhe or kisi ki jarurat nahi hai.






Amar- ham tere boyfriend hai.





Ashk- ha aap log boy ho or mere friend bhi or sath me bhai bhi. To ho gye na boy friend.





Isper sabhi ne apna sir pakad liya.





Amar- chalo chhodo. Varsha tum itni chup kyu ho subah se dekh raha hu. Kya hua. Samar ke sath akele time spend karna hai kya.





Varsha- nahi bhaiya me theek hu. Jitna mil raha hai time utna kaafi hai. Imp to ye time hai. Pata nahi ye samay dobara aaye ya na aaye life me. Dosto ke sath baithkar masti karna.







Avi- sahi kaha. Dad bhi hamesha sabhi ko sath leke hi jaate the ghumne. Taaki sabke sath achha time spend kar sake. Or ab dekho kisi ke pass thoda sa bhi time nahi hai. Dad apne business me to unke dost apne apne kamo me.







Ashk- baise yaar kaafi din ho gye karan fufa or vidya bua se mile hue






Amar- ha ham ek hi city me rehte hai lekin unko milne hi nahi ja paate hai.





Avi- ek kaam karte hai sabhi ko bula lete hai yahi per. Ek call karke dekhte hai kya bolte hai sabhi. Agar aagye to ek family reunion ho jayega.





Samar- idea achha hai tu hi call kar.





Avi- ok sabse pehle Aarav kaka ko.




Avi ne phone ghumaya




Aarav- kya baat hai aaj meri yaad kaise aagyi beta ji. Sab theek






Avi- kya chachu kya aapko aise hi yaad nahi kar sakte ham.





Aarav- are maine aisa to nahi kaha. Bilkul kar sakte ho beta ji. Boliye kya haal hai sabke.





Avi- aap sabhi ko yaad aarahi hai. Isliye ham ek family reunion plan kar rahe hai.






Aarav- idea vakai me jabardast hai bolo kab aana hai.





Avi- perso subah hi aajaiye me sabhi ko perso ka hi time dene wala hu.






Aarav- good achha ek kaam karo kisi ko mat batao ki kon kon aaraha hai sabko call karo or bolo ki aap aajao taaki jab sabhi ek sath baha mile to sabhi ko surprise mile.





Avi- idea achha hai yahi karta hu me.




Aarav- good ham perso pahuch jayenge. Baise tumne kal ka kyu nahi bola.





Avi- actually kal ham sabhi jaypur ja rahe hai hamare friends bhi aaye hai to unhe ghumana hai. Perso ham free rahenge.






Aarav- ok have fun. Ham aajayenge perso.




Avi- ok byy take care chachu.




Aarav- ok byy beta.




Call cut hua.




Avi- ok ek kaam karo ashk bhai log aap sabhi ek ek ko call karo or sirf unhe aane ke liye kaho or unko ye mat batana ki baaki sabhi bhi aane wale hai. Jab sab yaha aayenge to sabko surprise milega.






Amar- ok me sunny chachu ko kar raha hu.




Ashk- me vidya bua ko.





Samar- me rishi chachu ko.




Avi- me vijay chachu ko.





Sabhi ne baari baari se sabhi ko call kiya or jab vidya bua ko ashk ne bola ghar aane ko to vo to bahut kush ho gyi. Or sath me karan ko bhi laane ka to bo or kush ho gyi. Unhone bhi kaha ki aaj baat karengi vo or jaha tak hai perso vo bhi aajayegi.



Last me bache sekhar or aadil jinko Samar or avi ne hi call kiya or unhe bhi bula kiya perso ke hi din.




Sabhi ne baha aane ke liye ha keh diya tha. Vo bhi pure parivar ke sath. Ab dekhne wali baat thi ki perso kya tehalka machta hai gaav me. Or sabhi ka reaction kya hoga sabhi ko ek sath dekhne ke baad khaskar family ke sath kyuki kisi kaam se to sabhi aate hai lekin aise hi chhutti bitane kabhi kabhi hi aana hota hai vo bhi sath me nahi. Isliye sabka ek sath aana vakai me badi baat thi.




Khair uske baad sabhi ne sham tak bahi per masti ki or ghar ko chale gye. Bahi next day sabhi subah hi nikal gye jaypur. Jisme amar to jyada exited tha nidhi se milne ke liye. Unki baat ho gyi thi ki vo kaha milne wale hai.



To amar sabse pehle bahi le gya car ko. Or sabhi super exited the nidhi se milne ke liye. Filhaal ek dost ki tarah na ki bhabhi ki tarah.





Sabhi fort me gye jaha nidhi pehle se hi inka intjar kar rahi thi. Or bahi payal or baaki sabhi bhi the. Or is mandali ko dekhke sabhi ki aankho me ek dum se chamak si aagyi. Ladkiyo ki anakho me ladko ko dekhke bahi ladko ki aankho me ladkiyo ko dekh ke. Ya sirf ashk ko dekh ke.





Khair amar ne sabhi ko nidhi se milwaya or payal se bhi. Bahi payal ne bakio se sabka parichay karwaya. Isi me kaafi time nikal gya. Uske baad sabhi sath me hi ghumne lage bahi nidhi or amar sabse last me ek dusre ke sath.chalne lage baate karte hue. Or dono ki bonding kaafi achhi jam rahi thi. Dono ko ek dusre ka sath bhi achha lag raha tha. Matlab saaf tha ki jaldi hi dono prapose kar denge. Ab vo waqt kab aata hai pata nhi.




Bahi sab me sath me kaafi achha time spend kiya bahi vo dono ladke to pura time ashk ke aage pichhe hi ghumate rahe use impress karne ke liye. Or iska maja ashk or avi dono hi le rahe the man hi man muskura kar.






Ab agar aisi time me thode hindi ki entry ho jaaye to maja hi aajaye. Lekin inki kismat kharab jo baha per aisa koi bhi nahi tha. Jo ladkiyo se thodi bahut badtamiji kare or ladko ko herogiri dikhane ka mouka mile.





Khair kisi tarah din nikla or fir se judaai ka time aagya love birds ke liye.




Nidhi- kab aayenge aap mumbai.





Amar- 4-5 din baad.




Nidhi- aapse milne ka agar man hua to.




Amar- aajana mujhse milne udaypur me.





Nidhi- aap nahi aaoge mere bulane per.





Amar- kyu nahi aayenge. Keh dena thode samay ke liye to aahi jayenge. Baise to mera bhi dil karega aapko dekhne ka to milne aa ho jaunga sayad tumhe kehne ki jarurat hi nahi padegi. Baaki dekhte hai.




Nidhi- ok me intjar karungi aapka





Amar- mujhe bhi intjar rahega




Uske baad dono ne hath milaya. Baise to dono gale milna chahte the lekin hichkichahat me dono ne shuruwat nahi ki. Bas hath se hi kaam chala liya. Or sayad ye abhi jaldbazi bhi hoti isliye rehne diya.



Khair baaki sabhi ne bhi ek dusre se vida li. Vo dono ashk ka no lena chahiye the lekin ashk ne dene se inkar kar diya. Jisse dono ek dum se mayus ho gye. Khair uske baad sabhi apne apne raste nikal gya.





Or ab sabhi ko intjar tha kal hone ka kyuki kal ghar me tehalka machane wala tha.




Baaki dekhte hai kya hota hai kal.












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next day me or baki sabhi breakfast karne ke liye baithe hi the ki ek car ke rukne ko aawaj aai. Hamne jyada dhyan nahi diya socha hoga koi aayega to andar hi.



Thodi der baad ek or car ke rukne ki aawaj aai or uske baad or caro ki aawaje aane lagi.




Ham sabhi ek dum se hairan ho gyi ki itni care kaha se aagyi. Ye janne ke liye ham sabhi darwaje per pahuche. Or jab baha ka najara dekha to ham sabke hosh udd gye.



Hamare saamne Aarav sunny rishi vijay karan sekhar or sath me unka parivar matlab unke biwi bache vidya bhi aai thi.



Or vo aake sabse pehle mere gale lag gyi. Or baaki sabhi bhi shock the ki sabhi aagye unko laga ki sirf bahi aane wale hai. Or hame bhi ki ye sab achanak se kaise





Main- sabhi log ek sath what a pleasant surprise.





Vidya- bas aane ka man hua to aagye.




Aarav- ab andar nahi bulaoge kya.






Main- abhi ruko sabhi log yahi per. Aarti to utar lene do sabki.




Maine mom bua or radha or baki bhabhio ko aawaj lagai.to vo sabhi bhi aagyi. Or sabko dekh ke vo bhi kush ho gyi. Uske baad radha ne sabko aarti utari. Or ghar me sabka swagat kiya. Or fir sabhi ek baad ek andar aaye.





Main- achanak kaise aana hua bataya bhi nahi.





Shekhar- kyu hamara aana achha nahi laga kya





Main- kaisi baat karte ho ofcourse achha laga. Me bas janma chah raha hu ki ye kiske dimaag ki upaj thi.





Aarav- bacho ke dimaag ki. Unhone hi sabhi ko call karke bulaya hai. Family reunion.








Dad- kya baat hai maja aagya kitna time ho gya sabko ek sath dekhe hue.






Tabhi pechhe se bache bhi aagye or sabko dekhke kush ho gye vo bhi sabse mile.





Main- or karan babu kabhi mil bhi liya karo. Bahut busy ho gye ho tum to.






Sekhar- yahi saval mera bhi hai tumse surya. Kabhi phone hi kar liya karo. Bahut busy ho gye ho tum to.





Ye sunke me jhep gya.





Main- sorry thoda busy ho jata hu kaamo me mumbai me hote to milna hota rehta lekin abse delhi gye ho milna ho hi nahi pata hai.







Sekhar- ye bat to hai.b





Karan- same yahi mera jawab hai.





Vidya- kyu ashk tum log milne kyu nahi aate ho ek hi sehar me rehte ho tab bhi.





Ashk- bua ab kya kare study se kam hi time mil pata hai. Isiliye milna nahi ho pata hai. Baaki aapko yaad to roj hi karte hai. Or isiliye to hamne sabko yaha bulaya hai taaki sabke sath achhe se time spend kiya ja sake. Sab sath me honge to maja aayega.





Main- ye badiya kiya tum logo ne. Dil kush kar diya. Ab batado sab achhi chhuti leke aaye ho na. Verna kal hi bolne lago ki jana hai vapis. Ab me nahi jaane dene wala






Sunny- ha bhai sab kaam badiya se samet kar hi aaye hai taaki kuch din sath me bita sake.




Karan- ha tum jane ko kahoge tab bhi na jaye ham log. Puri mehman nabazi karwake hi jayenge.






Main- Mom damad ki khatirdari shuru kardo. Achhe se khilao pilao






Mom- tumhe kehne ki jarurat nhi hai me kar lungi





Isper sabhi hasne lage.






Rishi- ha to bacho batao ab kya karna hai kaise dhamaal machana hai.







Avi- jaise aap bolo. Ham sabke liye ready hai.






Dad- vo baad me kar lena filhaal sabhi nasta karo bahut baate karni hai sabse.






Vijay- ye bhi theek hai.




Uske bad sabhi baith gye nasta karne bhabhio ne jaldi se sabke liye badiya nasta banaya or sabhi jut gaye khane me.





Uske baad sabhi ki baate chalne lagi. Karne ko kuch tha sivay bate or masti ke. Or sab bahi kar rahe the. Bahut dino baad jo aise sabka milna hua tha.




Bahi amar or nidhi bhi beech beech me mobile per bate karte rehte the. Or dono ki hi ab milne ki ikchha badti ja rahi thi. Dono hi ek dusre ko prapose karna chahte the. Jo filhaal posible nhi ho pa raha tha.




Aise hi kuch din or nikle. Or ab sabhi ke vapis jaane ka time aagya tha. In 4-5 dino me sabhi ne badiya time spend kiya. Bahi radha ne vidya ko rukne ke liye kaha ki kuch time or sath rehke jaao





Vidya ka man to tha isliye karan ne use rukne ko keh diya. Jisse vo kush ho gyi. Or vidya fir bahi ruk gyi and baaki sabhi Bapis chale gye jinme bache bhi shamil the.





( Sorry guys is seen ko jyada lamba kheechne ka koi matlab tha nahi isliye ise jaldi hi khatm kar diya. Or dusri baat mujhe kuch sujh bhi nahi raha tha ki aisa kya kare ye log jo inhone pehle nahi kiya hai. Isliye inko jaldi nipta diya. Baaki aaplogo ke man me koi vichar ho to mujhe bataye next reunion me main baisa hi likh dunga. )






Very next day amar ne nidhi ko milne ke liye bulaya. Lovers point per. Jo ek badiya sa garden restaurant tha beach ke kinare. Jaha lovers aate jate bane rehte hai.






Khair amar baha pahucha or uska wait karne laga.




To thodi hi der me vo aati hui dikhai di use. Akeli.




Amar- hii kaisi ho.





Nidhi- ab or bhi jyada badiya ho gyi hu me. Aapko jo dekh liya.






Amar- me bhi.



Fir amar nidhi ko ek khali jagah per le gya. Or dono baha baith ke baate karne lage.





Bato hi bato me amar ne nidhi ko prapose kar diya. Jisse nidhi ek dum hairan reh gyi. Use sayad iski ummid thi nahi






Amar- jabse tumhe dekha hai sab kuch Veerana sa lagta hai. Kya tum meri life me aake use fir se hara bhara karogi. Will you be my future wife.







Ye sunke nidhi ne ek tak amar ki aankho me dekha or uske chehre per ek alag hi muskaan aagyi. Or usne turant hi ha keh diya. Amar ne use ring pehnaai or dono fir gale mile.






Nidhi- i love you too amar. Pehli hi najar me ghayal kar diya tha tumne. Kabse me is pal ka intjar kar rahi thi.






Amar- me bhi. Bas thoda samay dena chahta tha tumhe or jab tumne bina kisi shart ke yaha aana swikaar kiya to mujhe yakeen ho gya ki mujhe kya jawab milne wala hai tumse. Or dekho me sahi tha. I love you nidhi.






Uske baad nidhi ne bina kisi der ke ek chhota sa smotch amar ko kar diya jisse amar bhi kush ho gya.



Uske baad dono ne ek sath kai pictures click ki or bahi per badiya sa lunch kiya or apni date ko yaadgaar banaya.



Or sham tak dono baha se hile bhi nhi. Sham Tak dono ki bate chalti rahi.






Uske baad amar ne nidhi ko uske ghar chhoda jo dikhne me or bhi jyada shandaar tha. Nidhi use andar bulana chah rahi thi lekin amar ne filhaal baha jana theek nahi samjha isliye vo bye bolke nikal gya. Nidhi bhi kush hoke andar chali gyi.





Bahi us bunglow ki khidki se koi tha jisne ye najara dekha tha or vo dekhte hi pehchan gya ki mamla akhir hai kya. Or use bahut jalan si hone lagi nidhi ka hasta hua chehra dekh ke. Khair vo baha se filhaal andar chala gya or sochne laga ki kya kiya jaaye.




( Ye wala matter aage kaafi tool pakdega isliye kya hota hai janne ke liye sath bane rahe.)







Bahi amar bhi ghar ghar or uske chehre ki kushi dekhte hi banti thi. Sabhi samajh gye ki kaam ban gya hai. Or baad me amar ne khud sabko bataya jise sunke sabhi kush ho gye. Or sbahi ne amar ko congratulations kiya. Or use best wishes di.











Bahi ab bahut hi kam samay bacha hua tha black heart ko jinda karne ka. Or abhi bhi uske sare sathi baha ki jail main baithe hue yahi soch rahe the ki kya kare kaise kare.





Bahi vikraal ek band gufa me tha. Unki aankhe band thi or vo aadhe hawa me tair raha tha. Uske charo taraf bahut hi alag alag prakaar ki roshni faili hui thi. Uski mudra bhi dhyan me baithne wali thi. Uske badan per ek bhi kapda nahi tha. Vo puri tarah se nagn tha uska hathiyar hawa me hi latak raha tha jaise kisi gadhe ka hathiyar ho. Dekhne me hi kaafi ajeeb lag raha tha.





Bahi us gufa me uske seene se 2 roshniya nikli or jameen per gir gyi. Unke girte hi baha per 2 bahut hi sundar or seductive ladkiya pragat ho gyi. Ye dono uski ki shaktiyo se nirmit uski patniyan hai. "Chhaya or Kaya" thi.




Jaisa naam tha baisa hi kaam tha. Ye dono hi kaafi powerfull thi vikraal ka to chhod hi do. Vikraal ke dushmano ke liye ye dono kisi kaal se kam nhi hai. Or akele me vikraal ki biwiya. Ye dono har tarah se vikraal ke liye pagal hai. Or use har kushi deti hai. Fir chahe vo tan ki kushi ho ya man ki. Ya fir kuch or.





Vikraal ki shaktiyo ke sath ye dono bhi lupt ho gyi thi usi locket me. Or jab vo mantra surya ne pade tak ye bhi aazad ho gyi.







Ye dono apne hatho ko jod ke vikraal ke samne khadi ho gyi or uske jaagne ka intjar karne lagi. Or in dono ke bahar aane ka matlab hi yahi tha ki vikral ab kisi bhi waqt jaag sakta hai.







Baaki dekhiye ab next update me ki kya hota hai yaha.












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Chhaya or kaya dono hi hath jod ke vikraal ka aavahan karne lagi use neend se jagane ke liye. Jor jor se chillane lagi uska naam lene lagi.


Is sabse vikraal ki aankhe thodi thodi hilne lagi isliye vo or jor jor se pukarne lagi use.



Or thodi hi der me vikraal ne ek hi jhatke me apni dono aankho ko khol liya. Or uski aankhe khulte hi uski aankho se ek bhayankar jwala nikli jo us gufa ki dewar se takrai or baha per bhayankar dhamaka hua. Puri gufa kampne lagi is dhamake se. Jagah jagah se pathar girne lage neeche. Chhaya or kaya dono hi khushi se bachane lagi or vikraal ki jay jay kaar karne lagi.





Ye sunke vikral kush ho gya or jaise hi uske kadam jameen per touch hue puri gufa ka kampan ek dum se band pad gya. Gufa ka hilna pathar ka girna sab band ho gya ek hi jhatke me.





Uske baad dono ne vikraal ke pairon ko chhua or uska aasirbaad liya.







Kaya- Swamy aapko Bapis dekhke bahut hi aanand mil raha hai.





Chhaya- ha Swamy me to dhanyavad kehti hu us insan ko jisne aapko is shrap se aazad kiya hai.









Vikraal- ha uska shukriya to karna hi chahiye lekin ek baat ye bhi hai ki usko marna bhi padega. Kyuki bahut pareshan kiya hai usne mujhe. Mere bhai ko mara hai black heart ko jinda karne me sabse badi adchan banke khada hai vo.








Kaya- aap chinta na kare Swamy aap bas hame aadesh de. Ham dono abhi jaake uske sath uske pure parivar ka ant kar denge.





Chhaya- lekin denge use aasan mout hi. Kyuki usne aapko shrap se aazad jo kiya hai.




Ye kehkar vo dono hasne lagi.






Vikraal- usne vo pathar jaagrit kar liya hai. Isliye ab vo hamse use chhipa kar nhi rakh sakta hai. Lekin abhi sabse badi musibat bhi hamare liye bahi pathar hi hai. Kyuki use uski shaktiyo ka istemaal karna aane laga hai or uske istemaal se vo hame pal bhar me hara sakta hai. Isliye hame usse vo pathar hasil karna hi hoga. Fir chahe uske liye kuch bhi kyu na karna pade.







Kaya- ham aapke sath hai Swamy aagya de hame kya karna hai.






Vikraal- sabse pehle us gaddar ko pakad kar laao jisne mujhe dhoka diya hai. Us vanraj ko uske kiye ki saza mujhe deni hi hogi. Or vanraj ke khatam hone se surya ki powers bhi aadhi ho jayegi.







Chhaya- lekin Swamy vo aapse juda hua tha vo aapko dhoka de hi nahi sakta tha uski aisa sochne matra se jaan chali jati fir aisa kaise ho gya.







Vikraal- mere shrap se mukt hote hi vo bhi us bandhan se mukt ho gya. Jis bandhan me vo bandha hua tha meri shaktiyon ke jariye. Lekin mujhe is baat ka bura nhi laga balki use mere prati bafadari banaye rakhni thi lekin usne apna rasta badal liya or ab use uske kiye ki saza dena jaruri hai. Verna mere jitne samarthak hai kal ko vo bhi aisa kar sakte hai.







Kaya- aapka kehna sahi hai Swamy me abhi jaake use le kar aati hu.






Vikraal- ham prithvi per hi ja rahe hai bahi usko dekhenge




Ye kehkar vikral ne apni powers se ek portal khola or usme ye teeno ghus gye or seddhe nikle prithvi per. Baha pahuchte hi in teeno ke rup apne aap badal gye. Ye dekhne se ab normal insan hi lag rahe the. Baaki ye kya hai ye to sirf ham log hi jante hai.






Ye teeno mumbai pahuche. Baha vikraal ne apni shaktiyo se vanraj ko turant hi dhund liya.





Vikraal ne chhaya ke kaan me kuch kaha or vo baha se use pranam karke gayab ho gyi. Or ye dono pahuche seedhe vanraj ke ghar.




Is waqt vanraj ke ghar me keval uski patni hi thi. Na varsha thi na hi vanraj tha.




Kaya ne door bell bajai to usne darwaja khola




Vikraal- ji namaste. Vanraj bhai hai kya.






V mom- ji nhi vo to bahar gye hai. Aap kon.






Vikraal- ji me unka purana dost hu. Ye meri patni hai kaya. Hame pata chala tha ki vanraj ab yaha rehne lage hai to milne ke liye aa gye ham. Actually London me ham sath me hi padte the. Mujhe bhi scholarship mili thi vanraj ke sath.






Vikraal vanraj ki har ek baat janta tha uski sari janam kundali use pata tha. Or ye baat sunke uski wife ko yakeen ho gya ki ye vanraj ke dost hi honge isliye usne in dono ko andar invite kar liya.






Vo inke liye paani laai.




Vikraal- aap jara unhe call keejiye eme unse baat karta hu.





V mom- ji abhi lagati hu.




Unhone vanraj ko call kiya to kuch rings ke baad usne call utha liya.




Vanraj- ha ji boliye





V mom- ji aapke koi dost aaye hai aapse milne ke liye keh rahe hai London me aap dono sath me padte the.






Vanraj- achha kya naam hai unka.





V mom- ek min. Aapka Naam to me puchhna hi bhul gyi.






Vikraal- ji koi baat nhi. Laaiye mujhe phone deejiye.





Vikral ne unse phone liye or baat karne laga.




Vikraal- hello my friend pehchana mujhe.






Vanraj- ji nhi aapka Naam kya hai. Sayad usse yaad aajaye mujhe.






Vikraal ne bahut hi slow aawaj me apna naam bataya vanraj ko. Jise sunte hi vanraj ke hath pair ek dum se kamp gye.






Vanraj- vikraal don't do that. Pls.






Vikraal- ha pehchan liya na. Ab 15 min. Ke andar ghar pahuch jaao Verna me chala jaunga yaha se.






Vanraj- mumbai me nhi hu itni jaldi nahi pahuch paunga.






Vikraal- kya bhul gye ho ko tum kya ho. 15 min bahut hi jyada hai tumhare liye. Isliye ab sirf 5 min. Hai tumhare pass.


Ye kehkar vikraal ne call cut kar diya






Bahi varsha ki mom ye sab dekh or sun rahi thi lekin unhe samajh me kuch nhi aaraha tha.





V mom- ye aap kya keh rahe the ki 5 min. Me aajaiye. Bhala vo itni jaldi kaise aasakte hai yaha per. Vo to mumbai me hi nhi hai.







Vikraal- kamaal hai aap to sab janti hi hai vanraj ke bare me uski shaktiyo ke bare me fir bhi aisa sawal kar rahi ho ye to galat baat hai.






Ye sunte hi unhe laga bhayankar shock.





V mom- kon ho tum. Kyuki ye baat sirf kuch khaas logo ko hi pata hai.





Vikraal- un khaas logo me main bhi aata hu. Or mera naam hai vikraal.



Ye bolte hi dono apne asli rup me aagye jise dekhte hi vi char kadam pichhe ho gyi uski rooh kamp gyi ye seen dekhke.



Usne kuch socha or darwaje ki taraf bhagi lekin uske pair apnk hi jagah per jam gye vo hil bhi nhi pa rahi thi.




Uske baad kaya uske pass gyi or uska hath pakda or baha se gayab ho gyi. Usko leke. Bahi vikraal fir se apne normal rop me aagya or sofe per baith ke vanraj ka intjar karne laga. Abhi sirf 2 min. Hi hue the ki vanraj ghar ka darwaja kholte hue andar dakhil hua. Or apne samne usne kisi anjan saks ko dekha.






Vikraal- aaiye mahashay kaise hai aap.






Vanraj- vikraal





Vikraal- sahi pehchana.




Ye sunke usne ghar me uski patni ko aawaj lagai lekin koi nhi aaya bahar.





Vanraj- kaha hai meri patni.





Vikraal- filhaal jinda hai or sahi salamat hai. Lekin aisi kab tak rahegi ye tum per nirbhar karega.






Vanraj- kya chahiye tumhe.






Vikraal- paras pathar vo bhi surya ko khabar lage bina.






Vanraj- me aisa nahi kar sakta hu.






Vikraal- afsos fir tumhe apni patni ko hamesha ke liye bhulna hoga.






Vanraj- nhi. Tum samajh nhi rahe ho. Ye kaam tum aasani se kar sakte ho. Lekin me ye nhi kar sakta hu. Or ab to tumhe use dhundne ki bhi jarurat nhi hai.







Vikraal- me janta hu ki ye me aasani se kar sakta hu. Lekin mujhe ye kaam tumse karwana hai. Agar tumne ye kaam kar diya to tumhari jindagi se hamesha ke liye chala jaunga me. Verna tumhari patni or beti dono ko tumse hamesha ke liye cheen lunga me. Kyuki tumhe saza jo deni hai mujhe dhoka dene ki.







Vanraj- maine tumhe koi dhoka nhi diya hai.






Vikraal- achha mere sare raj khol diye tumne or ab kehte hi dhoka nhi diya mujhe. Tum agar surya se milke kahi gayab ho jate apne pariwar ke sath to mujhe koi afsos nhi rehta lekin tumne mera sath chhod ke mere dushman ka sath diya isliye ab tum bhi mere dushman ho or dushman ko kaise kabu me karna hai me achhe se janta hu. Isliye 24 ghante hai tumhare pass mere liye pathar le aao or apni biwi ko le jaao. Or agar aisa na kar paaye to 25be ghante me khud khushi kar lena kyuki itna dard tum seh nhi paoge jitna me tumhe dene ki soch raha hu. Or sabse imp baat mujhe dhoka dene ka vichar tyag dena kyuki meri najar har waqt rahegi tumper. Jaha mujhe thoda sa bhi doubt hua baha tumhari biwi gyi.





Ye kehke vo gayab ho gya.






Bahi vanraj apna sir pakad kar baith gya. Use kuch samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki kya kare kaise kare.



Uski sabse badi samasya ye thi ki vo surya ko dhoka kaise de. Or vo varsha ko kya muh dikhayega. Jab vo apni mom ke bare me puchhegi.




Or agar usne kuch dhoke baji karne ki sochi bhi to vikraal ko pata chal jayega or vo turant hi use maar dega.





Bahi ek sawal ye bhi tha ki kaam hone ke baad is baat ki koi gurantee nhi hai ki vo uske pariwar ko chhod dega. Vo pagal hai pura kaam bhi karwa lega or uske pariwar ko bhi maar dega.






Inhi sab socho me gum tha is waqt vanraj vo decide nhi kar pa raha tha ki vo kya kare or kaise kare. Pathar is waqt surya ke ghar me hai. Or baha per ghuste hi Harry ko pata chal jayega ki main use churane aaya hu.










Baaki dekhiye ki ab kya karta hai vanraj.












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