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Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

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Guys jaisa ki aap sabhi ko title se pata chal hi gya hoga ki ye kahani thodi alag hone wali hai. Isme surya ka saamna thode jyada khatarnak logo se hoga. Ye kahani SCI-FI KAM OR FANTASY THODI JYADA HOGI JISME THODA BAHUT HORROR KA TADKA BHI LAGANE KI KOSIS KARUNGA. OR HAMESHA KI TARAH THRILL TO HOGA HI. BAS AAP SABHI APNA SATH BANAYE RAKHE. JALD HI PEHLA UPDATE POST KARUNGA...



INTRODUCTION



JAY PRATAP SINGH -
ye ghar ke bade hai or hamare hero ke dad hai. Ye ek genetic scientist hai. Or itne kabil ki inse kuch bhi banwa lo inhe jyada der nahi lagti. Inki age to kaafi ho chuki hai. Lekin inke liye ye bas ek no. Hai or kuch nhi.

Baaki story me hero ki mom bua or fufa or bhabhiya bhi hai. Lekin unka role jyada nahi hai. Bas kahi kahi beech beech me unki jarurat padegi to us jagah per keval unke role se hi unhe bulaunga.



Veer pratap singh - ye jay ke bade bete hai or hamare hero ke bade bhai. Pichhali story me aapne pada hoga ki jay ne inke andar bhi formula inject kiya tha jis bajah se inke pass bhi ab super strength hai. Sharp to ye pehle se hi the kyuki inhone kai saal secrate service me kaam kiya hai. Baaki apni family se bahut pyar karte hai or unke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai.



Yash pratap singh- ye jay ke chhote bhai Samar ke bete hai lekin vo ab is dunia me nahi hai isliye jay inhe apna beta hi manate hai or ghar ke sabhi inhe bahut pyar or samman dete hai. Inke baare me ik baat khaas hai. Inka para agar chad jaye to fir saamne wale ki shamat aai samjho. Or ye baat ghar ke sabhi log jaante hai. Inke pass bhi super strength hai jisse ye unbeatable ho gye hai. Ye pehle hi kai logo per akele hi bhari pad jaate the or ab usme or ijafa ho gya hai. Or bahar ki dunia ke logo ke liye inka code name hai RONY sabhi inhe adhiktar isi naam se bulate hai.



Surya pratap singh - ye hai hamari kahani ke hero. Inke ware me kya bolu kuch samajh me hi nahi aaraha hai. Jitna bolu utna kam hai. Fir bhi bata deta hu. Ye ghar me sabke chahete hai or sabhi inko or ye sabhi ko bahut pyar karte hai. Inke liye family pehle hai baaki sab baad me. Or koi inki family ko baad me nuksan na pahucha paaye isiliye ye apne dushmano ko jyada mouke dete nahi hai. Aage ki sochkar unka kaam pehle hi tamam kar dete hai. Baaki inka mind bhi kaafi sharp hai. Dushman ki agli chal kya ho sakti hai ye pehle se hi anumaan laga lete hai or 100% inki predictions sach hoti hai. Baaki baate story me jaaniyega.




Radha- ye surya ki wife hai or surya ke bua ki ladki bhi. Ye apne pariwar apne pati se bahut pyar karti hai. Or ye apne pati ko kabhi kisi cheez ke liye mana nahi karti. Baaki thodi bahut super strength to inke pass bhi hai.




Amar- ye veer ke bete hai ikloute hai. Or bacho me sabse bade hai. Bahut hi suljhe hue or samajhdaar. Apne teeno bhai bahen ko sath leke chalte hai or musibat me unke aage khade rehte hai.



Samar- ye Rony ke bete hai. Inka naam rony ne apne pita ke naam per rakha hai. Baaki inka swabhav bhi thoda thoda apne pita jaisa hi hai. Gussa thoda jaldi aata hai inko or us gusse me saamne wale ka kya hasr hoga ye bhagwan hi jaane. Apne bhai bahen se bahut pyar karte hai. Or unke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai.



Aviraj- ye surya ke bete hai chuki surya ke pass shadi ke pehle se hi super strength thi jiska asar isper bhi hua hai iska mind pata nahi kis mitti ka bana hai. Isse jo chahe vo banwa lo. Is baat ka andaja isi baat se laga sakte hai ki inke ghar me jo arc reactor laga hua hai use isi ne banaya tha vo bhi sirf 10 saal ki age me. Baaki aap sabhi samajh hi gye honge ki ye kya cheez hai. Baaki inka jyadatar samay to inke base me gujarat hai ye apne khilono me hi dube rehte hai.



ASHQ- ye avi ki judwa bahen hai. Thodi gusse wali hai. Lekin apne gusse ka sahi istemaal karna jaanti hai. Apne dad se bahut pyar karti hai. Baise wala nahi. Normal baap beti wala. Baaki kuch powers to iske andar bhi hai. Lekin filhaal unki koi detail nahi hai. Baaki aage story me pata chal hi jayega sabhi ko.




Sunny- ye veer ke under secrate service me kaam karta tha. Veer ise apna chhota bhai hi maanta hai. Or yahi baaki sabhi ka bhi manna hai ise ghar ka sadasya hi samjhte hai sabhi or ye bhi sabhi ko apne pariwar ka hissa hi samajhta hai. Baaki kabiliyat to isme bhi bahut hai. Lekin koi super strength nhi hai.



Rishi- iski bhi kahani same sunny jaisi hi hai.



Aarav- ye banda surya ka favourite hai. Iska dimaag computer me kamal ka chalta hai. Harry isi ki den hai jise isne kuch hi dino ki mehnat me bana dala tha. Baaki iski kahani bhi sunny or rishi jaisi hi hai.




aadil- ye banda bhi isi pariwar ka hissa hai. Iski back story bhi kuch baisi hi hai lekin is baar ye veer ke sath nahi baki rony ke sath kaam karta tha. Iske pita ne hi muskil samay me rony ko sahara diya tha jis bajah se in dono me sage bhaiyon jaisa pyar hai. Or surya or veer or ghar ke baaki sadasya bhi ise apna hi samjhte hai inme koi bhi aapsi matbhed nahi hai. Sabhi apni life me mast rehte hai. Ye bhi computer expert hai Aarav se kam bhi nahi hai or jyada bhi nahi hai.




Chouhan- ye banda veer ka guru hai. Or ye secrate service ke head bhi reh chuke hai. Chuki ab retire ho chuke hai lekin story me inka bhi role bahut eham hai. Ye bhi surya veer or baaki sabhi ki bahut izzat karte hai or surya or veer ko to ye apna beta hi maante hai. Or ye sabhi bhi inko vaisi hi respect karte hai. Baaki deadly to ye bhi hai is age me bhi.




so bhai log ye ek chhota sa intro hai sabhi main characters ka. Kahani me or bhi kirdaar aayenge jinka usi samay intro de diya jayega.
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Vanraj apni socho me gum tha.



Lekin use koi solid plan nhi mil pa raha tha surya ke ghar ko bhedne
Ka or samay uske hatho se nikalta ja raha tha. Use jo bhi karna tha jaldi hi karna tha.





Vanraj me Harry se contact kiya.





Harry- hello sir.




Vanraj- hello Harry . Kya haal sab theek






Harry- ji ha sir sab badiya hai.





Vanraj- pathar.





Harry- vo bhi safe hai filhaal.






Vanraj- surya kaha hai.






Harry- vo office gye hai.






Vanraj- badiya hai.







Harry- baise sir baat kya hai aapki aawaj se lag raha hai aapko kaafi tension hai







Vanraj- actually mujhe sirf vikraal ki hi tension hai. Ab jyada samay bacha nhi hai isliye mujhe thodi tension ho rahi hai.







Harry- don't worry sir surya sir or aap milke use hara denge aap dono ke saamne vo jyada der nhi tik payega.






Vanraj- i hope so ki aisa hi ho. Theek hai baad me baat karte hai





Harry- ok sir. Take care byy.





Vanraj- thanks by.





Vanraj- ne call cut kar diya. Or ab sochne laga ki kya kare. Kaise ghuse us ghar me Harry ki najro se bachte hue.




Tabhi use ek idea aaya. Isme bhi risk to tha lekin ab usne soch liya tha ki jo hoga so dekha jayega.






Vanraj surya ke gaav gya or andhera hone ka wait karne laga. Vanraj ko surya ke ghar me kaam karne wale sabhi ki jaankari achhe se thi kon kya kaam karta hai iski jaankari bhi thi.


To vanraj us insan ko dhundne laga jo us kamre ki saaf safai karta hai jis kamre me vo pathar rakha hua hai. Pathar abhi bhi usi photo me chipka hua hai jaha radha ne use rakha tha.




Or vanraj ki kismat achhi jo vo insan use bahar hi mil gya.



Vanraj ne apni powers ka thoda sa istemaal kiya or use puri tarah se hypnotize kar liya. Or use order diya us pathar ko laane ka.




Vo insan chup chap ghar me gya. Sabhi use jaante the or uska daily ka hi kaam rehta tha subah or sham ka to kisi ne use nahi roka. Vo apna safai ka saman leke us kamre me gya. Or usne sabse pehle us pathar ko nikala or apni safai ke saman chhipa ke rakh diya. or saaf safai karne laga or theek aadhe ghante baad vo kamre se bahar nikal to Harry ne uski body ko scan kiya or saman ko bhi. Lekin hairat ki baat ye thi ki use vo pathar nhi dikha ye baat vanraj janta tha. Vanraj ne ek khas box diya tha us insan ko jisme koi bhi cheez rakhne se vo adrishya ho jaati hai. Vo rehti usi me hai lekin koi bhi aaj ki technology use trace nhi kar sakti hai. Ye box vikraal ne vanraj ko diya tha taaki jab vo log pathar ko churaye to us jagah ye kaam aaye. Lekin vo ye kaam karte usse pehle hi vikraal gayab ho gya or vanraj bhi free ho gya or ye box apni jagah rakha reh gya. Lekin aaj vanraj ko iski yaad aagyi. Or ye kaam bhi kar gya.





Bahi vo safai wala us box me pathar Ko rakh ke bahar aagya or bahar aate hi vanraj ne usse vo box le liye chupke se or usne check kiya to usme pathar rakha hua tha.



Ye dekhke use tasalli hui or vo baha se nikal gya.





Bahi kisi ko kanokaan bhanak bhi nhi lagi ki vo pathar akhir gya kaha. Lekin Harry ko sab pata tha. Or vo ye dekhna chahta tha ki akhir mamla kya hai. Kyuki use gadbad ki aashanka to tabhi ho gyi thi jab vanraj ka call aaya tha. Or dusri baat ek chhipa hua camera us kamre me already laga hua hai jaha per pathar rakha hua tha. Or usse Harry har sec uski nigrani karta rehta tha.





Harry ne turant hi mujhse contact kiya.





Main- ha Harry sab theek






Harry- nhi sir kuch gadbad hai.






Main- kya hua.






Harry- sir vanraj pathar ko le gye hai.







Main- what kab kaise.





Harry ne sab kuch bistaar se bataya mujhe jise sunke mujhe bhi bahut badi gadbad ki aashanka hone lagi.






Main- abhi kaha hai vo.






Harry- sir vo apne ghar hi gye hai.





Main- badiya najar rakho uspe. Me bhi baha pahuchta hu.







Harry- ok sir.





Ye sunke Harry lag gya kaam per. Or main bhi jaldi hi office se nikla or seedha gya mumbai ke liye. Super fast speed se.





Mumbai pahuch kar me vanraj ke ghar se thodi duri per ruk gya or chhip gya.


Bahi vanraj ne ghar pahuch kar vikraal ko yaad kiya. Or aisa karte hi vikraal uske saamne aagya.






Vikraal- kya baat hai. Tum vakai me ek kabil insan ho. Kitni jaldi or aasani se tumne vo pathar hasil kar liya. Vo bhi kisi ko bina pate chale. I m impressed.






Vanraj- ab meri biwi ko Bapis laao or ye pathar le jaao or hamari jindagi se hamesha ke liye nikal jaao.







Vikraal- nikal jaunga itni bhi kya jaldi hai. Pehle dekh to lene do ki pathar asli hai ya nakli.






Vanraj ne us pathar ko apne hatho me rakha or dur se hi vikraal ko dikhaya. Vikraal ne use achhe se dekha or use pata chal gya ki ye asli hai.





Vikraal- bahut badiya. Baise tum agar chaho to iska istemaal kar sakte ho. Mujhe maarne ke liye.






Vanraj- ha kar sakta hu. Lekin fir meri biwi ki jaan ko bhi khatra bad jayega. Or ye risk me filhaal nhi utha sakta hu. Isliye baato me waqt jaya mat karo. Isse pehle surya yaha aajaye or tumhari band baja de nikal jaao yaha se lekin meri biwi ko loutane ke baad.








Ye sunte hi vikraal ne ek chutki bajai or agle hi sec. Kaya vanraj ki wife ko leke hajir ho gyi.




Vanraj ne apni biwi ko dekha or usne vanraj ko. Dono ki hi aankhe nam si hone lagi thi.





Vanraj- chinta mat karo sab theek ho jayega. Main hu na.




Usne ha me sir hilaya.





Vikraal- ye baad me kar lena ab mera pathar mujhe vapis do.





Vanraj- ek hath de dusre hath le.




Ye sunte hi kaya ne vanraj ki biwi ko vanraj ko taraf ravana kiya or vanraj ne vo pathar vikraal ki taraf fek diya.



Vanraj ki biwi turant hi doud laga ke uski taraf aagyi bahi vo pathar vikraal pakadta usse pehle hi main baha pahuch gya or super speed se us pathar ko apne hatho me le liye. Or ek side ko khada ho gya.







Ye dekhte hi vikraal ka matha ek dum se thanak gya.





Vikraal- tu fir se aagya






Main- ab kya karu. Jaha tum baha me. Baise manna padega achhi chal chali tumne. Lekin tum bhul gye ki mere ilake me meri izazat ke bina ek parinda bhi nhi aasakta or tumne to pura insan pahucha diya. Or soch bhi liya ki mujhe pata nhi chalega. Gjb.







Vikraal- janta tha ki tumhe pata chal jayega isiliye ye kiya maine. Taaki tumhara khel bhi khatam kar saku me.




Ye kehte hue vikraal meri taraf aaya or me kuch samajh pata usse pehle hi ham donk vanraj ke ghar ko faadte hue hawa me udne lage. Usne meri garden ko kaafi kas ke pakad rakha tha or vo mujhe aasman me uper le ja raha tha. Mere hath pair sunn se padne lage the meri saas tutne lagi thi mujhe samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki me kya karu.





Vikraal- ab maja aaya sale machhar. Maine kaha tha na jab me aaunga to bahut bura hoga ab anjaam bhugatane ke liye tayyar raho.





Main- itni. jaldi. kya. hai.




Ye kehkar maine ek jordaar punch mara uske thobde per. Jisse uski pakad chhut gyi mujhse or me par kate pakchhi ki tarah neeche ko girne laga. Maine socha ab marna tay hai. Baise nhi to aise. Itni unchai se girkar sayad hi jinda bachu. Or dusri baat mera balance puri tarah hila hua tha. Me seedha nhi gir raha tha balki hawa me gumatiyan khate hue neeche ki taraf ja raha tha.




Tabhi vikraal pata nhi kaha se aagya or mujhe leke fir se udd gya.







Bahi neeche kaya ne jaise hi vanraj per hamla kiya vanraj ne use freeze kar diya or bina kisi deri ke uska sir dhad se uda diya. Lekin vo kaya thi. Use maarna itna aasaan nhi hai.





Jaise hi uski garden alag hui agle hi pal vo fir se jinda ho gyi or puri tarah se aazad bhi.




Ye dekhke vanraj samajh gya ki lafda alag leval ka hai.



Isliye dono me hand combat shuru ho gyi. Dono hi ek dusre per bhari pad rahe the.



Bahi kaya ne dekha ki isko harana aasaan nhi hai isliye usne apni shaktiyo ka istemaal karna shuru kar diya. Apne hatho se vo energy chhodne lagi



Lekin vanraj tez tha isliye vi har baar usse bach raha tha.


Or aise hi ek baar bachte hue vo energy seedhe uski biwi ko ja lagi. Or vo udte hue deewal se ja takarai uska bahut tezi se pehle deewar or fir baad me jameen per takraya or vo behosh ho gyi. Ya mar hi gyi pata nhi.



Ye dekh kar vanraj turant hi uske pass gya uska sir apni godi me rakha or use jagane ke liye aawaj dene laga. Bahi kaya ye dekhke khush ho gyi. Usne is mouke ka fayeda uthaya or vanraj per ek jordaar baar kiya or ye baar vanraj ke sath uski biwi ko bhi laga. Lekin vanraj strong tha isliye use jyada kuch nhi hua lekin uski biwi ki haalat kharab hone lagi. Vo dard me tadapane lagi. Bahi ye dekhke vanraj ko gussa aagya or usne ek baar or kaya ko freeze kar diya. Vo bahi murti ban gyi.



Tabhi vanraj ne apne dono hatho ko joda or apni powers ko yaad kiya aisa karte hi uske dono hatho me neeli roshni jalne lagi usne apne dono hatho ko apni biwi ke mathe per rakh diya or aisa karte hi vo roshni seedhi uske andar jaane lagi. Or powers ne apna asar dikhaya or uski takleef kam hone lagi. Or thodi hi der me vo puri tarah se theek ho gyi or usne apni aankhe khol li.



Is waqt dono ki hi aankhe nam thi. Dono ek dusre se gale mile



Thodi der gale mile rehne ke baad vabraj ne use god me uthaya or baha se bhag kar vo gya surya ke mumbai wale ghar me. Or baha bache bhi the lekin unko samjhane ka time filhaal uske pass nhi tha isliye usne apni wife ko bahi chhoda or Bapis se apne ghar aagya kaya se nipatne ke liye. Jo abhi bhi murti bani hui thi.







Bahi main or vikraal abhi bhi hawa me hi lad rahe the







Baaki dekhiye ab kya hota hai next update me.














To be continue……………………….
Mast zabardast awesome maiend blowing update
 

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hawa me kabhi me use marta to kabhi vo mujhe maarta.



Tabhi vikraal ko ek badi si buiding dikhi.



Or usne ek bahut hi kameeni smile mujhe di me samajh gya ki kya hone wala hai.



Vikraal mujhe hawa se seedhe neeche ki taraf le jaane laga super fast speed se. Or usne apna pura jor lagaya or mujhe jor se building ki chhat per giraya mera force jyada tha isliye me chhat ko todta hua next floor per pahucha tabhi vikraal fir se neeche aaya achhi speed se or vo mujhe neeche ki taraf dhakelne laga or ham dono hi us building ki chhato ko todte hue jameen ki taraf jaane lage. Me neeche side tha isliye isliye mere sare anjar panjar dheele ho gye the. Bahi building me moujud log hame aise dekhke bhagne lage the or kaafi dar bhi gye the. Unhe laga jaise koi hollywood movie ki shooting chal rahi hai. Lekin ye haqikat thi.





Building karib 25 floor ki hogi or hamne puri building me ek bada sa chhed kar diya tha.





Ham jameen per pahuche me abhi bhi leta hua tha. Vikraal mere uper se khada hua or apne dono hatho se khatarnaak power generat karne laga or jab vo power mujhse takrai to charo taraf bhayankar ujala fail gya.



Mujhe mere body per uski jalan mehsus hone lagi thi. Matlab saaf tha ki mera suit isko jhel nahi pa raha hai.






Or vakai me mere suit ke chhithde ud gaye the. Mujhe kuch samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye akhir hi kya raha hai or isse me kaise bachu. Kya karu kya nhi. Tabhi mujhe pathar ki yaad aai. Or maine unse vinti ki.




Maine apne hatho ko joda or pathar se kaha.




Main- he paras pathar is dust ki powers se meri raksha kare




Mere itna bolte hi mere charo taraf ek suraksha kavach ban gya or vo itna majbut tha ki vikraal ki shaktiya use nahi bhed pa rahi thi.




Or ye dekhke vo or chid gya. Or vo mere karib aaya. Meri haalat abhi bhi kharab thi. Or vikraal ne jaise hi apni power ka istemaal band kiya baise hi vo kavach apne aap mit gya. Usne mujhe hawa me utha liya meri garden ko daba liya. Or usne mere saare jeb check kiye or use vo pathar mil gya. Jaise hi usne use pakadne ki kosis ki baise hi meri aankhe ikdum se khuli or maine ek jordaar last uske seene me maari jisse vo thodi dur ja gira. Vo puri tarah hill gya is war se. Or vo uthta usse pehle hi maine uske pass gya or uske muh per punches ki barsaat kar di. Vo bhi super fast speed se. Aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi bade engine ka turbine super fast speed se chal raha ho. Vikral puri tarah se nidhal sa hone laga tha bahi maine apne punches ko roka or use hawa me uthaya or jor se jameen per patak diya. Fir se uthaya or is war apne ghutno per patka aisa maine 6-7 waar usko apne ghutne per patka vo bhi jor se. Taaki uski haadi tut jaaye lekin jaise hi uski haadi tut jaati agle hi pal vapis se jud jaati.



Bahi usne iska fayeda uthaya or apne panje ko mere seene me ghusa diya full power se. Power kuch jyada hi thi hath me uske. Kyuki uska hath mere seene ke aarpaar nikal gya tha. Ye achha hua ki mera dill uske hatho me nhi aaya tha Verna pakka vo uska kachumbar nikaal deta. Me jinda tha lekin meri haalat kharab thi. Usne is mouke ka fayeda uthaya or meri jeb se pathar nikaal liya.





Raat ho chuki thi charo taraf andhera chaya hua tha or building ke log dur se hamari ladai ko dekh rahe the baha per police bhi aachuki thi. Unhone apni gun vikraal ke uper taan rakhi thi.





P1- usko chhodo or apne dono hatho ko uper karo Verna ham goli chalane ko majbur ho jayenge.






Vikraal- tumhari ye goliyan mera kuch nhi bigaad sakti isliye kosis bhi mat karna. Jisko apni jaan pyari hai nikal jaaye yaha se Verna lasho ke dher laga dunga me.





Ye sunte hi logo me bhagdad machane lagi kyuki vo dekh or samajh chuke the ki ye koi mamuli insan nahi hai



Bahi police ne last warning di or jab uska bhi koi asar usper nahi hua to unhone firing shuru kar di. Lekin jaisa usne kaha tha uske uper koi asar nhi hua goliyo ka. Balki mujhe kaafi goliya lag rahi thi. Lekin mere ghav abhi bhi bhar rahe the isliye me bhi normal tha.






Goliyo ki aawaj se vo kaafi pareshan ho raha tha isliye usne mujhe ek side ko fel diya. Or apne dono hatho se energy ko release kiya or aisa karte hi baha per jitne bhi log the fir chahe vo police wale ho ya normal log sab ke sab ek hi jhatke me khak ban gye. Ye seen kuch logo ne dur se dekh liya or baha se bhag gye. Unhe samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki is musibat ka saamna kaise kare.




Aisa karne ke baad vo fir se meri taraf aane laga mujhe maarne ke liye kyuki paras pathar uske hath already lag chuka tha ab bas mera khatma hi bacha tha uske liye.





Vikraal- surya ab kya karoge. Pathar mere pass hai tumhari haalat hi bata rahi hai ki tumhari kitni buri tarah se haar hui hai. Ab bas tumhara marna hi baaki hai.






Main- itni jaldi kya hai vikraal. Me itni jaldi haar manne walo me se nhi hu. Or fight abhi baaki hai mere dushman.




Ye kehke me ek dum se utha




Ye dekhke vo hansa or usne bina koi der kiye firse mujhper hamla kar diya apni powers se. In sab powers ke istemaal se ek cheez hi mere favour me hui thi jis per mera dhyan abhi gya tha. Mera arc reactor. Jo puri tarah se fully charged ho gya tha or ab bas uski powers dikhane ki hi deri thi. Isliye maine bhi bina der kiye apni powers ko khola apni speed ko Bapis liya or bijli ka ek jor ka jhatka vikraal ko mara jisse vo udta hua dur ja gira or building ke 2-3 pilers tut gye. Jisse puri ki puri building ek dum se neeche girne lagi. Ye dekhke me bahar ki taraf bhagne laga lekin bhag nahi saka kyuki mere pair puri tarah se jam gye the. Or ye kaam vikraal ka hi tha. Or aisa hote hi puri ki puri building mere uper dhadam se gir padi. Or me uske malve ke neeche dab gya. Mere hath free the isliye maine apne hatho se jitne ho sake utne pathari ko apne uper girne nhi diya lekin fir bhi kaafi mere uper the. Jinhe me ek ek karke apne uper se hatane ki kosis kar raha tha. Tabhi ek jor daar dhamaka hua jisme un patharo ke sath me bhi udta hua dur ja gira.




Bahi vikraal is waqt jor jor se has raha tha meri haalat per.




Vikraal- dekho surya tabahi ka manjar dekho.




Ye kehkar usne apni powers ka istemaal shuru kiya or mumbai ke samandar me ek bahut hi bada babandar bana diya uska size itna bada tha ki puri ki puri mumbai iski chapet me aajayegi or koi kuch nhi kar payega. Or hua bhi aisa hi. Vo babandar tezi se city ko taraf badhne laga or bahi jin logo ne ye najara dekha vo turant hi kisi na kisi safe jagah bhagne lage.




Vo babandar jaise hi city me enter hua usne apni tabahi machana shuru kar diya. Badi se badi building pal bhar me jameen me samaye ja rahi thi. Jo bhi log uski chapet me aate vo usi me fase reh jaate or gol gol ghumte rehte mumbai me baad jaise haalat hone lage the. Ghar tutne lage the.log marne lage the. Or agar ise jaldi hi roka nahi gya to ye puri ki puri city ko hi kha jayega.



Bahi mere hatho se paras pathar ja chuka tha. Meri chhati me bada hole tha jo bhar gya tha. Mera dimaag or kaan puri tarah se sunn the. Jo dheere dheere theek ho rahe the. Mere kapde almost fat chuke the. Bas thode thode hisse me hi kapde bache hue the. Meri aisi haalat thi ki raste ka bhikhari bhi sharma jaaye.



Khair maine kisi tarah khud ko sambhala or apni watch se dusra suit open kiya. Apne hatho me sword li. Or vikraal ko lalkara.





Meri aawaj sunke usne pechhe dekha or agle hi pal uski mundi jameen per padi hui thi jaise hi vo jameen per giri maine apna apna pura bajan rakha usper or uski mundi bahi fat gyi. Isi pal ka fayeda utha kar maine uske hatho se pathar Bapis le liya.


Bahi mujhe laga tha ki ye jaldi hi theek hoke fir se khada ho jayega lekin aisa kuch bhi nhi hua or ye dekhkar me kaafi hairan tha. Bahi is vikaral ke marte hi vo babandar apne aap shant ho gya. Lekin jab vo shant hua to aadhi se jyada mumbai tabah ho gyi thi. Jisko fir se banane me hi kai mahine lag jaane the. Isliye maine socha kyuna paras pathar ka istemaal karke ye sab theek karne ki kosis karu.



Or aisa sochte hi pata nahi mujhe kya hua main kuch karta ya us pathar ka istemaal karta usse pehle hi main garden se leke neeche pairo tak pura pathar ka ban gya. Mera sirf sir hi bacha hua tha. Or uske baad mere peeche se ek aurat mere saamne aai.






Mera naam chhaya hai or agar tumne iska istemaal karne ki kosis bhi ki to tumhare ghar ki sari aurate maari jayengi. Or iska me pura intjaam karke aai hu. Chahe to pata kar lo.




Maine turant hi Harry se contact kiya.




Harry- sir hamare pure ghar me bhayankar aag lagi hui hai. Or saari ledies gayab hai mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aaraha hai ki kya ho raha hai aap pls jaldi aaiye.



Ye kehte hi line kat gyi.





Chhaya- sun liya. Ab achhe bache ki tarah vo pathar mere hawale kar do.






Main- tum ho kon.






Chhaya- me chhaya hu vikraal ki hamsafar. Or jisko tumne mara hai ye meri hi banai hui ek parchhai hai vikraal ki. Na ko asli vikraal hai ye. Or isi tarah tumhare pure ghar ko khak me milane me bhi mera hi hath hai ghar ki sari ledies ko maine gayab kar diya hai.








Ye sunte hi me ek d shock tha ki kya karu me.




Main- tum mujhse ye le sakti ho lekin mujhe mera pura parivar surakshit chahiye







Chhaya- theek hai.





Ye kehkar usne ek chutki bajai or baha le ghar me sab pehle jaisa hi normal ho gya. Vo bas ek hologram jaisa tha jise chhaya ne banaya tha. Lekin itna real tha ki Harry bhi nhi samajh paya ki ye asli hai ya nakli.




Bahi turant hi harry ka call aaya or usne sabke theek hone ki news mujhe di jise sunke mujhe chain mila. Uske baad usne mere hath se vo pathar utha liya. Halaki vo chahti to pehle bhi utha sakti thi lekin aisa karne per me apne man me pathar se isko khatam karne ka leh deta or pal bhar me ye bahi khak ho jaati isliye isne pehle mujhse deal ki fir pathar mujhse liya. Or agle hi pal vo baha se gayab ho gyi or uske jaate hi me puri tarah se normal ho gya or bahi jameen per apna sir pakad kar baith gya. Kyuki aaj pehli baar mujhe itni badi haar mili thi.








Bahi dusri taraf kaya or vanraj me bhi khatarnaak ladai hui. Aaspass ke kaafi ghar un dono ne mita diye.




Lekin akhir me kaya ne vanraj ki haalat bhi down kar hi di thi. Lekin vanraj ke pass jabardast healing power thi jisse vo khudko or dusro ko bhi theek kar sakta tha. Jaise usne apni wife ko kiya tha.



Isiliye vo abhi tak bacha hua tha



Bahi yaha se chaya ke gayab hote hi baha per kaya bhi gayab ho gyi. Or me or vanraj dono hi bas dekhte reh gye. Or sochne lage ki ab kya kiya jaaye.








Bahi maine sabse pehle vanraj ke pass jaane ka faisla kiya. Or main baha se doud gya vanraj ke ghar ki taraf. Jab me baha pahucha to baha ki haalat dekhte hi samajh me aagya ki yaha kya hua hoga. Maine vanraj ko dhunda vo ek jagah bilkul shant baitha hua tha.





Main- vanraj.




Ye aawaj sunte hi usne uper dekha or mujhe dekhte hi fir se apna sir jhuka liya.





Vanraj- sorry surya mujhe maaf kar dena. Maine tumhe dhoka diya.






Main- koi baat nhi. Tumne kin halato ye kadam uthaya tha mujhe achhe se pata hai. Isliye chinta mat karo. Tumhari jagah me hota to me bhi yahi karta.







Vanraj- thanks mujhe samajhne ke liye. Baise vikraal kaha hai or vo pathar.






Main- vo jo vikraal tha vo bas uski ek perchhai bhar thi. Jisne aadhe se jyada mumbai tabah kar diya. Halaki vo mara gya hai. Lekin pathar ab hamare pass nhi hai. Or iska matlab saaf hai ki ab hamara saamna jald hi black heart se hone wala hai. Ham use rokne me nakamyab rahe.






Vanraj- shit. Saari mehnat bekaar ho gyi. Ab kya karenge ham. Jara socho jab vikraal akela ham per itna bhari pada hai to jab black heart or uske baaki ke sathi yaha aayenge tab kitni tabahi machegi.







Main- me jaanta hu. Or samajhta bhi hu ki aage kya hone wala hai. Or sach kahu to is ladai me hamare jeetne ke percentage 0.1% se bhi kam hai. Lekin fir bhi hame ladna to padega hi.









Vanraj- tumhara kehna sahi hai. Hame ladna to padega hi. Baise kyuna ham time travel karke fir se inhe rok le.







Main- ham aisa kar sakte hai. Or karna hi padega. Hame kisi tarah tumhare pathar churane se pehle hi pathar ko hasil karna hoga or fir in teeno ka ant karna hoga. Tabhi hamari jeet pakki ho sakti hai. Or ham black heart ko jinda hone se rok sakte hai.







Vanraj- to fir der kis baat ki hai.






Main- mujhe bas thoda sa doubt ho raha hai or kuch nhi.




Vanraj- kaisa doubt.





Main- kahi vikraal bhi past me na pahuch jaaye hame rokne ke liye. Kyuki agar vo baha gya to jabardast kand kar dega. Or uska natija kuch bhi nikal sakta hai.







Vanraj- hone ko to kuch bhi ho sakta hai. Lekin hame kosis to karni hi hogi fir chahe anjaam jo bhi ho.






Main- sahi kaha chalo theek hai chalte hai kahi khali jagah per.






Vanraj- ok.





Ye kehkar ham log mumbai ke airport per gye. Jaha Harry hamara jet leke ready tha or ham udne ke liye ready the.








Baaki ab dekhiye next update me ki kya hota hai aage chalke kya vakai me ye rok payenge vikraal ko ya yaha bhi inki band bajegi.



Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.

















To be continue……………………….
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Avi mumbai wale base per pichhle 1 saal se ek nayi tarah ki machine bana raha tha. Jiske baare me usne abhi tak kisi ko nahi bataya tha. Or is baat ki bhanak Harry ko bhi nahi thi. Kyuki avi jaanta tha ki Harry ise secrate nahi rakh payega isliye avi ne Harry ko us base se switch off kar diya tha.



Is machine me abhi bhi kuch kaam baaki tha. Lekin ye almost 98% tak complete ho chuki thi. Dekhne se ye kisi tarah ka robot lag raha tha. Jiski saari body vibranium se bani hui thi. Or ye metel kitna solid hota hai ye mujhe batane ki jarurat nahi hai aap sabhi ye achhe se jaante hai.




Ab baaki bacha hua kaam Harry ko karna tha. Isliye avi ne Harry ko us base bapis se active kiya.





Harry- hello avi. Lagta hai project pura ho chuka hai.





Avi- ha Harry ab jo bhi kaam bacha hak vo tumhe karna hai. Ab tumhe iske andar jaan daalni hai.
Samajh rahe ho na.





Harry- kya aap bakai sure hai iske liye.





Avi- me to sure hu. Lekin kya tum ready ho iske liye.






Harry- sir me bhala kyu nahi ready rahunga iske liye. Theek hai isko process me karib 1.5 din ka time lag sakta hai. Kyuki itna sara data load karne me ise time to lagega hi.






Avi- vo me jaanta hu. Tum bas kaam suru karo. Baaki agar koi dikkat aaye to mujhe batana.





Harry- ok sir.




Ye sunke avi baha se chala gya.




Bahi avi ke jaate hi Harry lag gya kaam me.





Raat ke karib 1 baje kisi ne base ki security ko breach kiya or is tarah se kiya ki Harry bhi nahi samajh paya ki kya kaise hua.


Or abhi Harry ise samajhne ki kosis hi kar raha tha ki tabhi us base me lights on hui or ek aawaj Harry ko sunai di.






Unknown Voice- kaise ho Harry




Harry- apni pehchan batao. Or apne yaha aane ka kaaran bhi.





UV- are wah maine to suna tha tum sabko pehchan lete ho fir mujhe nahi pehchana.




Harry ne uske face se uski identity janne ki kosis ki lekin uska koi bhi record nahi mila use.





Harry- kaise pehchanunga me. Tumne apni identity chhipa rakhi hai.






UV- ha ye baat to hai. Khair tumhara samay barbaad na karte hue me hi tumhe bata deta hu.




Ye kehte hue vo baha per moujud Harry ki main programming system tak chala gya.






UV- me tumhara or tumhare us boss kya naam hai uska ha Surya dono ka kaal hu. Itna intro kaafi hai tumhare liye.




Harry- sayad tumhe apne jeevan se moh nahi hai. Verna yaha aane ki gati kabhi nahi karte.






UV- ha me janta hu tumhare kehne ka matlab. Lekin tum tension na lo. Me apni raksha karna achhe se jaanta hu. Lekin mujhe nahi lagta ki tum apni raksha kar sakte ho.





Harry- matlab?





UV- matlab ye ki



Itne me usne baha moujud CPU me ek chip ko install kar diya. Harry ne turant hi us chip ko stop kar diya jis bajah se vo run hi nahi kar pai. Lekin Harry nahi janta tha ki is chip ko run karne ki jarurat padti hi nahi hai.




UV- ohh Harry kam se kam use run to karne dete.





Harry- me janta hu ise run karne per kya ho sakta hai. Lekin mere rehte ye kabhi run nahi kar payegi.





UV- baise maine tumhe bataya ya nahi ki is chip ko run karne ki jarurat nahi padti hai. Ye bina run ke hi apna kaam kar deti hai. Jab tak ye tumhare system me install rahegi tab tak ise rok pana kisi ke bas ki baat nahi hai.






Harry- kya matlab hai tumhara.





UV- iska jadu dekhna chahoge.



Itna kaha hi tha ki pata nahi Harry ko kya hone laga. Use aisa lag raha tha jaise andar hi andar use koi maar raha hai. Harry is sab ko rokne ki tamam kosis kar raha tha lekin vo nakaam hi ho raha tha. Kyuki use pata hi nahi tha ki ye sab ho kaise raha hai. Or use exactly rokna kise hai.


Tab Harry ke pass ek hi rasta bacha ki khud ko shutdown karle. Or usne bina koi time ko gabaye khud ko shutdown kar liya.





Or ye dekhkar UV hasne laga. Kyuki use pata tha ki aisa hi kuch hone wala hai.



Bahi Harry ne band hote hote ye msg surya tak pahucha diya tha. Uske mobile per. Lekin yaha afsos ki baat ye thi ki surya bina kisi chinta ke so kar raha tha. Isliye usne vo msg dekha hi nahi.



Bahi us UV ne sare base ki achhe se talashi li jisse use baha per kai tarah ke weapons mile jinhe khud avi ne banaya tha. Or sath me vo robot ki body bhi jise aaj hi avi ne Harry ke hawale kiya tha. Usne apne aadmiyo ko khabar ki or ek truck ko baha bula liya or sara samaan usme load karwa diya or baha se jaate jaate us pure base jagah jagah per kai bombs fit kar diye. Or baha se nikalte hi unhe blast kar diya. Jiska asra ye hua ki base ke uper bani hui puri building hi kuch hi palo me jameen me sama gyi. Kai log jo us building me rehte the vo neend me hi mar gye. Ye ek bahut hi tagda jhatka tha surya ke liye. Bahi mumbai me bahut bada tehalka mach gya tha sari police or fire brigade bagera thodi hi der me baha aachuki thi. Or media is jagah ka live telecast karne lagi thi. Sabhi ki neend ud gyi thi ye seen dekhkar. Sabhi hairan the ki ye building achanak se gir kaise gyi. Halaki kuch chashmdid gavaho ne unhe bata diya tha ki pehla neeche ek bada dhamaka hua or fir building gir gyi. Ye khabar kaafi shocking thi kyuki aisa dhamaka yaha hona vo bhi police bagera bina pata chale bahut badi baat thi. Sabhi iss ek bahut bada terrerist attack samajhne lage the. Or police foran hi action me aagyi thi.har jagah per nakabandi ho gyi thi. Lekin jisne ye kiya tha vo to ab tak jaha use pahuchna tha baha pahuchne hi wala tha.







Next subah tak pure desh me ye khabar fail chuki thi. Or surya ko bhi vo msg mil gya tha jo use Harry ne bheja tha.


Or us msg ko padte hi surya ka dimaag hi hil gya ki ye kaise sambhav hua. Vo turant hi ghar me bane base me gya or baha per usne Harry ko fir se active karne ki kosis ki lekin vo nahi hua. Or ye bahut hi serious matter tha. Isliye usne foran hi Aarav or aadil ko conference call per ek sath liya.






Aarav- hello bhai good morning



Aadil- ha bro good morning or Aarav tere liye good evening.





Aarav- thanks bro. Or sunao kya haal sab theek.





Main- agar milaap ho gya ho to meri sunoge.





Aarav- sorry ha bhai bolo na. Kya hua.





Main- Harry ko hack kiya gya hai. Ya sayad uske system me koi virus daal diya gya hai. Vo raat se hi shutdown hai. Or ab start hi nahi ho raha hai.




Ye baat sunte hi dono ek dum hairan reh gye.




Aarav- impossible hai bhai. Jab tak koi khud aake Harry ke processor se connect nahi hoga aisa karna sambhav hi nahi hai.





Aadil- exactly to fir ye kaise ho sakta hai.






Main- are hamare mumbai wale base me der raat koi ghus gya tha security ko breach karke. Harry ne uski photo mujhe bheji thi or is baat ki jaankari bhi di thi. Lekin me thaka hone ke kaaran gehri neend me tha isliye mera dhyan hi nahi gya. Maine abhi subah hi dekha hai uska msg. Or jo bhi baha ghusa tha usne hamare base ko bomb se uda diya hai. Pal bhar me puri building neeche aagyi.





Ye sunke aadil or Aarav ne apna matha pakad liya.





Aadil- jarur Harry ne us virus se bachne ke liye khud ko shutdown kiya hai. Taaki vo jyada nuksaan.na pahucha sake. Or jab tak uske andar se vo bacha khucha virus nahi hatayenge vo start nahi hone wala.






Aarav- tumne sahi kaha aadil. Ek kaam karte hai me india aata hu. Next flight se. Tum bhi pahuncho. Ham use theek karne ka koi na koi rasta nikaal hi lenge.






Aadil- theek hai niklo tum.





Main- ek min ruko. Akele mat aao. Bhabiyo ko bhi sath le aao. Jisne bhi ye kiya hai. Agar usne baha tum logo ki gair moujudgi me unper hamla kar diya to gadbad ho jayegi or Harry bhi nahi hai jo hame saavdhan kar sake. Or ha apne sabhi bhaiyo ko inform kar do ki satark rahe.







Aarav- theek hai me sunny or rishi ko bata dunga. Baaki bhai or Rony to bahi per honge na.






Main- unki tension nahi hai. Vo yahi per hai. Sirf tum un dono ko bol do. Or jaldi se yaha aajao. Kahi kuch or gadbad na ho jaye. Tab tak me yaha dekhta hu or kya kya gol hua hai.





Aadil- theek hai bhai ham aate. Ek kaam karo. Apna jet bhej do. Usme ham safily or jaldi baha pahuch jayenge.






Main- ha ye theek rahega. Me bhejta hu pilot ko




Ye kehke maine call cut kiya or apne pilot ko call kiya. Baise to mera jet Harry hi chalata tha. Lekin emergency ke liye usme pilot me moujud rehte hi hai.



Maine unhe bata diya ki kaha jana hai or kinhe leke aana hai. Vo bhi jaldi. Vo bhi samajh gye or jaldi hi nikal gye London jaha se aadil tha. Or sayad bahi per Aarav bhi aajye kisi alag flight se. Verna use lene newyork jana padega.





Bahi me ye sab sochke hairan tha ki ye sab kisne kiya hai. Kiski itni himmat ho gyi.



Khair maine avi ko call kiya.





Avi- hii dad aapko khabar mili.





Main- ha mujhe abhi pata chala. Tum log to nahi the na base per.





Avi- nahi dad me to sham ko hi baha se bapis ghar aagya tha Harry ko sopkar. Lekin ye sab kya hua or kaise. Mere pata nahi kitne hi experiment us base me rakhe hue the. Pata nahi unka kya hua hoga.







Main- meri baat dhyan se suno. Harry ke andar usi base me se virus install kiya gya hai. Jis bajah se vo shutdown ho gya hai. Or rahi baat tumhare projects ki to. Jisne bhi ye kiya hai. Usne sayad tumhare sab project chura liye honge ya fir vo is blast me tabah ho gye honge. Isliye unke liye rona band karo. Or sabse imp baat. Sabhi satark rehna koi bhi anjaan agar tumhe aaspass dikhe jo aisa lage jaise tumper watch rakhe hue hai uski khabar foran mujhe dena. Or incrypted phone ka istemaal karna jo jyada safe rahega. Samajh gye na. Sabhi ko bol dena ye.







Avi- theek hai dad. Me bata dunga sabhi ko. Kya aap yaha aarahe ho.





Main- filhaal nahi. Lekin agar koi emergency hui to aajaunga. Tum sabhi apna khayal rakhna.




Itna kehke maine call cut kiya. Or fir bhaiyo ko base me bulaya jisme dad bhi shamil the.



Teeno neeche aaye or maine unhe sari baat batai. Jise sunkar unke bhi hosh udd gye the. Abhi subah ke 7 hi baje the or itna bada dhamak sabko sunne mil raha tha. Ab pata nahi aage kya hone wala hai.



Mera dimaag is waqt har possibilities ko calculate kar raha tha. Or usi hisaab se me sabhi ko order de raha tha. Baaki kya hoga vo to bhagwan hi jaane.











To be continue…………………...
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Avi mumbai wale base per pichhle 1 saal se ek nayi tarah ki machine bana raha tha. Jiske baare me usne abhi tak kisi ko nahi bataya tha. Or is baat ki bhanak Harry ko bhi nahi thi. Kyuki avi jaanta tha ki Harry ise secrate nahi rakh payega isliye avi ne Harry ko us base se switch off kar diya tha.



Is machine me abhi bhi kuch kaam baaki tha. Lekin ye almost 98% tak complete ho chuki thi. Dekhne se ye kisi tarah ka robot lag raha tha. Jiski saari body vibranium se bani hui thi. Or ye metel kitna solid hota hai ye mujhe batane ki jarurat nahi hai aap sabhi ye achhe se jaante hai.




Ab baaki bacha hua kaam Harry ko karna tha. Isliye avi ne Harry ko us base bapis se active kiya.





Harry- hello avi. Lagta hai project pura ho chuka hai.





Avi- ha Harry ab jo bhi kaam bacha hak vo tumhe karna hai. Ab tumhe iske andar jaan daalni hai.
Samajh rahe ho na.





Harry- kya aap bakai sure hai iske liye.





Avi- me to sure hu. Lekin kya tum ready ho iske liye.






Harry- sir me bhala kyu nahi ready rahunga iske liye. Theek hai isko process me karib 1.5 din ka time lag sakta hai. Kyuki itna sara data load karne me ise time to lagega hi.






Avi- vo me jaanta hu. Tum bas kaam suru karo. Baaki agar koi dikkat aaye to mujhe batana.





Harry- ok sir.




Ye sunke avi baha se chala gya.




Bahi avi ke jaate hi Harry lag gya kaam me.





Raat ke karib 1 baje kisi ne base ki security ko breach kiya or is tarah se kiya ki Harry bhi nahi samajh paya ki kya kaise hua.


Or abhi Harry ise samajhne ki kosis hi kar raha tha ki tabhi us base me lights on hui or ek aawaj Harry ko sunai di.






Unknown Voice- kaise ho Harry




Harry- apni pehchan batao. Or apne yaha aane ka kaaran bhi.





UV- are wah maine to suna tha tum sabko pehchan lete ho fir mujhe nahi pehchana.




Harry ne uske face se uski identity janne ki kosis ki lekin uska koi bhi record nahi mila use.





Harry- kaise pehchanunga me. Tumne apni identity chhipa rakhi hai.






UV- ha ye baat to hai. Khair tumhara samay barbaad na karte hue me hi tumhe bata deta hu.




Ye kehte hue vo baha per moujud Harry ki main programming system tak chala gya.






UV- me tumhara or tumhare us boss kya naam hai uska ha Surya dono ka kaal hu. Itna intro kaafi hai tumhare liye.




Harry- sayad tumhe apne jeevan se moh nahi hai. Verna yaha aane ki gati kabhi nahi karte.






UV- ha me janta hu tumhare kehne ka matlab. Lekin tum tension na lo. Me apni raksha karna achhe se jaanta hu. Lekin mujhe nahi lagta ki tum apni raksha kar sakte ho.





Harry- matlab?





UV- matlab ye ki



Itne me usne baha moujud CPU me ek chip ko install kar diya. Harry ne turant hi us chip ko stop kar diya jis bajah se vo run hi nahi kar pai. Lekin Harry nahi janta tha ki is chip ko run karne ki jarurat padti hi nahi hai.




UV- ohh Harry kam se kam use run to karne dete.





Harry- me janta hu ise run karne per kya ho sakta hai. Lekin mere rehte ye kabhi run nahi kar payegi.





UV- baise maine tumhe bataya ya nahi ki is chip ko run karne ki jarurat nahi padti hai. Ye bina run ke hi apna kaam kar deti hai. Jab tak ye tumhare system me install rahegi tab tak ise rok pana kisi ke bas ki baat nahi hai.






Harry- kya matlab hai tumhara.





UV- iska jadu dekhna chahoge.



Itna kaha hi tha ki pata nahi Harry ko kya hone laga. Use aisa lag raha tha jaise andar hi andar use koi maar raha hai. Harry is sab ko rokne ki tamam kosis kar raha tha lekin vo nakaam hi ho raha tha. Kyuki use pata hi nahi tha ki ye sab ho kaise raha hai. Or use exactly rokna kise hai.


Tab Harry ke pass ek hi rasta bacha ki khud ko shutdown karle. Or usne bina koi time ko gabaye khud ko shutdown kar liya.





Or ye dekhkar UV hasne laga. Kyuki use pata tha ki aisa hi kuch hone wala hai.



Bahi Harry ne band hote hote ye msg surya tak pahucha diya tha. Uske mobile per. Lekin yaha afsos ki baat ye thi ki surya bina kisi chinta ke so kar raha tha. Isliye usne vo msg dekha hi nahi.



Bahi us UV ne sare base ki achhe se talashi li jisse use baha per kai tarah ke weapons mile jinhe khud avi ne banaya tha. Or sath me vo robot ki body bhi jise aaj hi avi ne Harry ke hawale kiya tha. Usne apne aadmiyo ko khabar ki or ek truck ko baha bula liya or sara samaan usme load karwa diya or baha se jaate jaate us pure base jagah jagah per kai bombs fit kar diye. Or baha se nikalte hi unhe blast kar diya. Jiska asra ye hua ki base ke uper bani hui puri building hi kuch hi palo me jameen me sama gyi. Kai log jo us building me rehte the vo neend me hi mar gye. Ye ek bahut hi tagda jhatka tha surya ke liye. Bahi mumbai me bahut bada tehalka mach gya tha sari police or fire brigade bagera thodi hi der me baha aachuki thi. Or media is jagah ka live telecast karne lagi thi. Sabhi ki neend ud gyi thi ye seen dekhkar. Sabhi hairan the ki ye building achanak se gir kaise gyi. Halaki kuch chashmdid gavaho ne unhe bata diya tha ki pehla neeche ek bada dhamaka hua or fir building gir gyi. Ye khabar kaafi shocking thi kyuki aisa dhamaka yaha hona vo bhi police bagera bina pata chale bahut badi baat thi. Sabhi iss ek bahut bada terrerist attack samajhne lage the. Or police foran hi action me aagyi thi.har jagah per nakabandi ho gyi thi. Lekin jisne ye kiya tha vo to ab tak jaha use pahuchna tha baha pahuchne hi wala tha.







Next subah tak pure desh me ye khabar fail chuki thi. Or surya ko bhi vo msg mil gya tha jo use Harry ne bheja tha.


Or us msg ko padte hi surya ka dimaag hi hil gya ki ye kaise sambhav hua. Vo turant hi ghar me bane base me gya or baha per usne Harry ko fir se active karne ki kosis ki lekin vo nahi hua. Or ye bahut hi serious matter tha. Isliye usne foran hi Aarav or aadil ko conference call per ek sath liya.






Aarav- hello bhai good morning



Aadil- ha bro good morning or Aarav tere liye good evening.





Aarav- thanks bro. Or sunao kya haal sab theek.





Main- agar milaap ho gya ho to meri sunoge.





Aarav- sorry ha bhai bolo na. Kya hua.





Main- Harry ko hack kiya gya hai. Ya sayad uske system me koi virus daal diya gya hai. Vo raat se hi shutdown hai. Or ab start hi nahi ho raha hai.




Ye baat sunte hi dono ek dum hairan reh gye.




Aarav- impossible hai bhai. Jab tak koi khud aake Harry ke processor se connect nahi hoga aisa karna sambhav hi nahi hai.





Aadil- exactly to fir ye kaise ho sakta hai.






Main- are hamare mumbai wale base me der raat koi ghus gya tha security ko breach karke. Harry ne uski photo mujhe bheji thi or is baat ki jaankari bhi di thi. Lekin me thaka hone ke kaaran gehri neend me tha isliye mera dhyan hi nahi gya. Maine abhi subah hi dekha hai uska msg. Or jo bhi baha ghusa tha usne hamare base ko bomb se uda diya hai. Pal bhar me puri building neeche aagyi.





Ye sunke aadil or Aarav ne apna matha pakad liya.





Aadil- jarur Harry ne us virus se bachne ke liye khud ko shutdown kiya hai. Taaki vo jyada nuksaan.na pahucha sake. Or jab tak uske andar se vo bacha khucha virus nahi hatayenge vo start nahi hone wala.






Aarav- tumne sahi kaha aadil. Ek kaam karte hai me india aata hu. Next flight se. Tum bhi pahuncho. Ham use theek karne ka koi na koi rasta nikaal hi lenge.






Aadil- theek hai niklo tum.





Main- ek min ruko. Akele mat aao. Bhabiyo ko bhi sath le aao. Jisne bhi ye kiya hai. Agar usne baha tum logo ki gair moujudgi me unper hamla kar diya to gadbad ho jayegi or Harry bhi nahi hai jo hame saavdhan kar sake. Or ha apne sabhi bhaiyo ko inform kar do ki satark rahe.







Aarav- theek hai me sunny or rishi ko bata dunga. Baaki bhai or Rony to bahi per honge na.






Main- unki tension nahi hai. Vo yahi per hai. Sirf tum un dono ko bol do. Or jaldi se yaha aajao. Kahi kuch or gadbad na ho jaye. Tab tak me yaha dekhta hu or kya kya gol hua hai.





Aadil- theek hai bhai ham aate. Ek kaam karo. Apna jet bhej do. Usme ham safily or jaldi baha pahuch jayenge.






Main- ha ye theek rahega. Me bhejta hu pilot ko




Ye kehke maine call cut kiya or apne pilot ko call kiya. Baise to mera jet Harry hi chalata tha. Lekin emergency ke liye usme pilot me moujud rehte hi hai.



Maine unhe bata diya ki kaha jana hai or kinhe leke aana hai. Vo bhi jaldi. Vo bhi samajh gye or jaldi hi nikal gye London jaha se aadil tha. Or sayad bahi per Aarav bhi aajye kisi alag flight se. Verna use lene newyork jana padega.





Bahi me ye sab sochke hairan tha ki ye sab kisne kiya hai. Kiski itni himmat ho gyi.



Khair maine avi ko call kiya.





Avi- hii dad aapko khabar mili.





Main- ha mujhe abhi pata chala. Tum log to nahi the na base per.





Avi- nahi dad me to sham ko hi baha se bapis ghar aagya tha Harry ko sopkar. Lekin ye sab kya hua or kaise. Mere pata nahi kitne hi experiment us base me rakhe hue the. Pata nahi unka kya hua hoga.







Main- meri baat dhyan se suno. Harry ke andar usi base me se virus install kiya gya hai. Jis bajah se vo shutdown ho gya hai. Or rahi baat tumhare projects ki to. Jisne bhi ye kiya hai. Usne sayad tumhare sab project chura liye honge ya fir vo is blast me tabah ho gye honge. Isliye unke liye rona band karo. Or sabse imp baat. Sabhi satark rehna koi bhi anjaan agar tumhe aaspass dikhe jo aisa lage jaise tumper watch rakhe hue hai uski khabar foran mujhe dena. Or incrypted phone ka istemaal karna jo jyada safe rahega. Samajh gye na. Sabhi ko bol dena ye.







Avi- theek hai dad. Me bata dunga sabhi ko. Kya aap yaha aarahe ho.





Main- filhaal nahi. Lekin agar koi emergency hui to aajaunga. Tum sabhi apna khayal rakhna.




Itna kehke maine call cut kiya. Or fir bhaiyo ko base me bulaya jisme dad bhi shamil the.



Teeno neeche aaye or maine unhe sari baat batai. Jise sunkar unke bhi hosh udd gye the. Abhi subah ke 7 hi baje the or itna bada dhamak sabko sunne mil raha tha. Ab pata nahi aage kya hone wala hai.



Mera dimaag is waqt har possibilities ko calculate kar raha tha. Or usi hisaab se me sabhi ko order de raha tha. Baaki kya hoga vo to bhagwan hi jaane.











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Ham log plane me baithe hue the lekin ek dusre se baat bhi nhi kar rahe the. Balki apni apni socho me gum the. Mere dimaag me kai tarah ke khayal aaraye the. Lekin sab be matlab ke the. Or yahi haal vanraj ka bhi tha.







Bahi dusri tarah vikraal hame lagataar dekh raha tha. Use bhi pata chal gya tha ki ham kya soch rahe hai or kaha ja rahe hai. Isliye vo hame rokne ke liye counter plan bana raha tha.






Abhi ham apnianjil se kaafi dur the. Tabhi achanak se mousam me kaafi badlaav hone laga. Hamare plane ko bijli ke jhatke lagne lage.





Main- kya ho raha hai Harry.





Harry- sir achanak se mousam kharab ho gya hai ghabrane ki baat nhi hai.






Main- badiya hai. Jaldi chalo.




Harry- ok sir.





Abhi maine itna hi bola tha ki pata nhi kya hua. Hamare plane se kuch takraya. Or uske takrate hi plane me bahut hi bada dhamaka ho gya. Hame kuch bhi samajh me nhi aaya ki kya hua kaise hua. Or ab haalat ye thi ki ham jameen per girte hue ja rahe the kisi par kate pakchhi ki tarah. Or ham dono hi hosh me nahi the hamari aankhe band thi. Or itni unchai se girne ke baad hamare hath pair na tute ye to sambhav hi nhi tha. Bhale hi ham mare na lekin nuksaan to kaafi hone wala tha.





Or yahi sab sochate hue ham dono jameen per dhadaam se gire. Or girte hi ham dono ko hosh aagya or hosh ke sath hame hua bhayankar dard ka aabhash. Itna ki mar hi jaate to badiya rehta. Or dard kuch jyada hi tha isliye ham fir se behosh ho gye.





Ham kaha the kaha nhi kuch pata nhi tha hame.








Bahi dusri taraf vikraal ne black heart ko jinda karne ka process raat me hi shuru kar diya tha. Uski body ko recover karke uske mathe per paras pathar ko rakh diya tha or usse black heart ko jinda karne ka aavahan bhi kar diya tha. Or vo pathar apne kaam me bhi lag chuka tha. Vikraal or kaya dono hi is sari process me bahi moujud the. Or chhaya ko vikraal ne surya or vanraj ko rokne ke liye bheja tha. Or unke plan ko udane me iska hi hath tha.




Or ye abhi bhi unke aas pass hi bani hui thi. Taaki kisi tarah inko rok ke rakh sake.







Kaafi der baad meri aankh khuli. Body ka sara dard ab gayab ho chuka tha. Or jaise hi mujhe yaad aaya ki mera plane blast ho chuka hai. Me ek dum se uth gya. Or charo taraf dekhne laga. Charo taraf andhera laga hua tha. Lekin mere night vision lences se mujhe sab dikh raha tha. Tabhi meri najar vanraj per padi jo mujhse thodi duri per pada hua tha behosh. Me uth ke uske pass gya. Or use aawaj lagane laga. Use hilane dulane laga. Mere pass ek chhoti paani ki bottle thi jisme se maine uske uper thoda paani chidka or paani girte hi vo bhi hadbada kar uth gya. Uske uthte hi maine paani piya or thoda sa use diya.




Usne bhi pani piya




Vanraj- ham kaha hai.





Main- pata nhi.




Vanraj- hua kya tha.





Main- blast Plane me.





Vanraj- ye pakka vikraal ka hi kaam hoga.





Main- ho sakta hai.






Vanraj- ab kya kare.






Main- pehle to kisi safe jagah chalte hai fir sochenge ki kya kare.






Vanraj mera sahara leke khada hua. Uske baad maine Harry se contact karne ki kosis ki lekin nhi hua. Fir hamne aas pass ke area ko achhe se dekha. Charo taraf khet hi the or doudne ke liye bahut hi achha maidaan bhi tha.





Maine vanraj ki taraf dekha or usne meri taraf or hamne aankho hi aankho me ishara kar liya or doud laga di. Hamne doud lagai circle me. Ham time travel karne ki kosis karne lage. Hamari speed apne charam per thi. Tabhi hamare raste me kai tarah ke blast hone lage jisse rasta ubad khabad hone laga. Hame pata hi nhi chal pa raha tha ki hamla ho kaha se raha hai. Or rasta kharab ho jaane ki bajah se hamne apna dayera bada liya lekin speed kam nhi hone di.






Bahi chhaya ne jab ye dekha to usne kai jagah per hamla start kar diya. Taaki ham doud na paaye.




Lekin ham kahi na kahi se apna rasta banate ja rahe the. Ye dekhke vo pareshan ho ne lagi or usne abki baar hamla kiya vanraj ke uper. Lekin hamari speed bahut tez thi jis bajah se uska nishana sahi se nahi lag raha tha. Na mere uper na vanraj ke uper. Ye dekhke ham dono hi muskura rahe the.




Tab chaya ne thoda dimaag lagaya or usne hamla hamare raste me thode aage karna start kiya taaki hamari or uski timing mil sake. Vo har baar nakamyaab ho rahi thi. Or isi beech hamara portal khul gya or ham dono hi usme ghus gye. Or time barrier ko todte hue ham ja pahuche 1 din pehle. Jab sab normal tha or vikraal bhi nhi jaga tha.




Vanraj- ab kya karna hai.





Main- hame pathar ko chhipana padega. Taaki jab tum ghar aao pathar lene to tumhare hath nakli pathar lage.






Vanraj- aisa possible nhi hai. Kyuki pathar ab active hai to ham use kahi bhi chhipa le mujhe uski exact location mil hi jayegi or vikraal ko bhi. Isliye use chhipane se kuch fayeda nhi hone wala.







Main- ha yar me to bhul hi gya tha. To ab kya kiya jaaye.







Vanraj- hame vikraal ko mujhtak pahuchne se pehle hi rokna hai. Taaki vo mere ghar tak pahuche hi na or na hi mujhe blackmail kar sake.







Main- ye badiya hai. Vo kal aaya tha haina.






Vanraj- ha. Sham ke 4 baje ke karib.






Main- to ab kal sham tak ham kya karenge.




Vanraj- intjar.




Ye kehkar ham baha se seedhe mumbai ke liye nikal gye doud laga ke. Hajaron km ka safar tha jo hamne kuch hi min. Me pura kar liya. Or ham is waqt mumbai me the.



Hamne ek chhoti si lodge me 2 kamre liye or unme hi chhip kar baith gye. Uske baad maine apne mobile me thodi cctv ki hacking ki or vanraj ke ghar ke aaspaas jitne bhi cctv the unhe search kiya. To mujhe ek cctv mil gya. Jisse vanraj ka ghar to nhi dikh raha tha lekin vo gali jarur dikh rahi thi. Or agar koi vanraj ke ghar jata hai to hame aaram se pata chal jaane wala tha.





Ab thi planing ki baari. Or me samajh gya tha ki inko harana itna aasan nhi hai. Isliye mujhe dev ki ya hell king ki madad ki jarurat padne wali thi.




Isliye sabse pehle maine dev se contact kiya.





Main- hii dev.





Dev- or kaisa lag raha hai dusri baar past me aake.





Main- tension ho rahi hai. Baaki sab theek hai.





Dev- to ab kya karne ka socha hai.






Main- kuch sujh hi to nhi raha hai ki kya or kaise kiya jaaye. Koi rasta ho to bata do.








Dev- baise tumhe thodi future ki jhalak dikha deta hu. Tum kuch bhi karlo paras pathar vikraal ke hath lag ke rahega. Or agar tum dono ne abhi use rokne ki kosis ki to dono hi past me maare jaoge. Ye tay hai. Tum apni reality ko badalna chahte ho lekin hoga bahi jo likha hua hai. Isliye meri mano to Bapis chale jaao or black heart ke Bapis aane ka intjar karo.








Main- agar black heart aagya to use bhi to main nhi rok sakta na. Aise hi vo bhi mujhe bhari padega tab kya karunga me.





Dev- sirf lado or kuch nhi. Baki ka kaam kismat kar degi.






Main- kam se kam chhaya kaya ko to maar hi sakte hai or kyu na me paras pathar ka istemaal karke teeno ko maar du. Abhi to vo mere ghar per hi hai.








Dev- aisa tum kar sakte ho. Lekin ek baat tumhe pata hi hai ki jo vikraal yaha aaya tha vo keval ek parchhai bhar tha. To use maar bhi doge tab bhi kuch nhi badlega. Ulta vikraal jyada tabahi macha dega. Or ho sakta hai kai log usme maare jaaye.








Main- to kya me aise hi haar manlu. Or paras pathar ko me bol dunga ki asli wale vikraal ko maar do to vo jaha bhi hoga use dhund ke vo maar dega.







Dev- agar tumne aisa kiya to multiverse me tehalka mach jayega. Or kai alag timeline paida ho jayegi jiska parinam bahut hu bhayanak hoga ham sabke liye. Vikraal ko marna hai lekin abhi nhi. Uska time abhi nhi aaya hai.






Ye sunke mera dimaag ghum gya ki ab karu to kya karu.






Main- tum majak nhi kar rahe ho na.






Dev- nhi surya me sach keh raha hu. Me sab jaante hue tumhe aisa kaam nhi karne de sakta jisse samast brahmaand me musibaton ka bhandara lag jaaye.





Main- To fir tumne mujhse ye time travel karne se pehle mujhse kyu nhi kaha kuch bhi.







Dev- kyuki yaha tumhe aana tha. Or ab vapis jaana hai. Kuch bhi change kiye bina.






Main- theek hai me yaha se vapis chala jaunga lekin khali hath nhi. Mujhe tumse kuch chahiye hai. Jisse me in sabhi ka khatma kar saku. Koi weapon ya kuch or. Ye sabhi aasani se marne walo me se nhi hai. Me inse din bhar lad sakta hu lekin inko maar nhi sakta hu. Isliye mujhe kuch aisa chahiye jisse in sabhi ka khatma hota jaaye. Or black heart ko chot pe chot lagti jaaye.








Dev- iske liye tumhe hell king se sampark karna padega. Vo jo bhi deal tumse karna chahe kar lo. Kyuki bahi ek aise hai jo tumhe kuch aisa de sakte hai jisse tum sabhi per bhari padoge.







Main- unhone mujhse vada kiya hai ki bina kisi deal ke vo mera sath denge. To fir deal karne ki kya jarurat hai.







Dev- ha mujhe pata hai lekin tum unse yahi kehna jo maine tumse kaha hai. Kehna unko ki jo aap kahoge me sab karne ko ready hu. Bas mujhe in sabhi ko harane ke liye powers chahiye hai. Baaki unke uper chhod do.







Main- pakka na. Kahi fasba mat dena.






Dev- viswas rakho mujhper tumhe kuch bhi nhi hone dunga me.






Main- ok. To ab ham Bapis jaaye.






Dev- ha tumhari ab baha jyada jarurat hai. Kyuki tumhara pariwar akela hai. Or chhaya or kaya kaafi khatarnaak hai.







Main- samajh gya.




Ye kehkar hamara sampark tut gya. Or me bahi baith gya.
















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Kaafi der tak me sochta raha ki kya karu dev ki baat maanu ya rehne du. Ek baar ko to mujhe doubt bhi hua ki kahi me kisi or se baat to nhi kar raha tha. Lekin fir mera doubt apne aap chala bhi gya. Kyuki dev ke mamle me koi risk ho hi nhi sakta hai. Uski jaankari kisi ko bhi nhi hai mere aalawa. Na hell king ki na kisi or ko. Isliye shak karna bebuniyaad hai.




Isliye me turant hi apne kamre se bahar aaya or gya vanraj ke kamre me.





Vanraj ne darwaja khola.





Vanraj- kya hua.





Main- hame vapis jana hoga. Ham yaha kuch bhi nhi kar sakte hai. Or agar hamne timeline me ched chhad ki to bahut badi gadbad ho sakti hai.






Vanraj- lekin achanak kya hua. Or tumhe ye sab kaise pata






Main- mera ek shubh chintak hai usne mujhe ye jaankari di hai. Or uski baato per yakeen na karna bahut badi bebakafu hogi. Isliye jaisa usne kaha hai hame Bapis jana hoga






Vanraj- theek hai chale jayenge lekin fir vikraal or black heart ka kya karenge apan.







Main- black herat jinda hoke rahega or hame uska saamna bhi karna hi padega aaj nhi to kal. Lekin aisa hoga jarur. Ham usse bhag nhi sakte hai. Or abhi jyada sawal mat karo me sayad jawab nhi de paunga. Isliye jaisa ho raha hai hone dete hai.





Vanraj- ok.




Uske baad ham dono Bapis se apne usi jagah ke liye nikal gya jaha se ham aaye the. Or baha jaake firse hamne time travel kiya. Or Bapis apni timeline me pahuch gye.





Ham jaise hi bahar nikale bahar chhaya hamara wait kar rahi thi. Or usne fir se hamper hamla kar diya. Or is baar hamse uska hamla takra gya or ham dono hi bikhar se gye. Bahut jor se laga ye jhatka.







Chhaya- surya tumne kya kiya hai baha jaake mujhe batao. Verna abki baar dono ko jaan se maar dungi vo bhi bina kisi chetavani ke.





Vanraj- are kuch nhi kiya hai jaise gye the baise hi Bapis aagye hai. Or jara tum hi socho agar hamne baha kuch kiya hota to tum yaha iss waqt hamara wait nhi kar rahi hoti balki kisi kabr me dafan hoti. Kyuki tumhe jinda to nhi chodte ham dono.





Ye sunke chhaya me thoda vichar kiya or usne vikraal se contact kiya or use pata chala ki sab theek hai. Or ye sunke use yakeen ho gya ki bakai me in logo ne kuch nhi kiya hai.






Chhaya- achha faisla liya tum dono ne jo baha jaake kuch nhi kiya. Baise bhi bahut kam jindagi bachi hai tum dono ki. Isliye achha yahi hoga ki apani family ke sath jyada se jyada time spend karo. Or hame rokne ke upaay sochna band kar do. Abhi tumne dekhi nhi hai hamari shaktiya.






Main- ha pata hai or yahi baat me bhi tumse kehna chahunga ki aainda mere pariwar ko mere khilaaf istemaal kiya to tera ye sir tere dhad se alag karke football khelunga usse. Himmat hai to mere se aamne saamne lado. Fir bhale me haar jaau ya kuch bhi ho. Lekin family ko beech me laai to anjaam aisa hoga ki duniya me kabhi dobara janm lene se pehle 100000 baar sochogi ki lu ya na lu. Abhi tum bhi nhi jaanti ho mujhe.







Chhaya- ohhh me to dar gyi.



Ye kehkar vo hasne lagi.





Main khada hua.




Main- ek kaam karte hai aao 2-2 hath kar lete hai.





Chhaya- achha theek hai to. Aajao. Or agar mar jaao tum to mujhse mat kehna fir.






Main- nhi kahunga.







Ye kehkar usne bina koi warning keujhoer hamla kiya. Me turnt hi side ko ho gya. Maine apna suitup kiya or apni energy ko ekathha kiya or ek tez jhatka mara uske thobde per or bakai me tagda tha jhatka uske anjar panjar sab dheele ho gye. Or iska fayeda maine uthaya or time ko slow kiya. Or fir uske thobde ko jo foda hai maine. Uski body react hi nahi kar pa rahi thi usse pehle hi mere punches usko lag rahe the. Or fir time normal hua or use itna tez dard hua ki uski cheekh dur dur tak sunai di hogi logo ko.








Main- maja aaya Mrs chaya vikraal. Utho or saamna karo mera.





Ye kehkar me uske pass gya. To usne apni maya failana shuru kar diya usne apne anek ruk bana liye. Jo mere charo taraf faile hue the.




Chhaya- dum to hai tumhare andar. Ab dekhna hai dimaag kitna hai. Dhundo mujhe.





Maine apne charo tafar dekha to har taraf chhaya hi chhaya thi. Uper se aaj chand bhi nhi nikala tha. Sayad badalo me chhipa hua tha. Isliye samajh me hi nhi aaraha tha ki konsi asli hai konsi nakli. Uske karib 25 rup baha moujud the.





Maine apni speed ko full kiya or time ko firse slow kiya. Or ek ek ke thobde per punch maarna shuru kiya. Jitni nakli thi unke aarpaar mera hath nikal raha tha. Lekin jo asli thi usko ye punch bahut jor se lagne wale the.




Ek ek karke maine sabhi ko mara or 24 ko kuch nhi hua. Lekin 25be ko jo punch laga uska sara concertrate tut gya or uske sare ruk ek ek karke gayab ho gaye. Maine apni sword nikali or uske dill me ghusa di. Bina kisi deri ke. Meri swrod uske dill ko cheerte hue aarpaar nikal gyi.





Or uski cheekhe puri fizaao me fail gyi. Use viswas nhi ho raha tha ki ye kaise or kyu hua. Meri talvar uske dill me kaise ghus gyi. Jabki baha per achhe se achhe hathiyar bhi nhi ghus paate hai.





Chhaya em dum hairan thi. Or vo kuch samajh paati usse pehle hi vo pathar ban gyi or tukdo me bikhar gyi.





Maine apni talvar ko saaf kiya or use dekha to usme meri energy beh rahi thi sayad isiliye ye isko bhedne me kaamyaab rahi. Chalo jo bhi hua ho ek musibat to khatam hui.





Vanraj- kya baat hai maja agaya.




Main- mujhe bhi thodi frustration to kam hui.





Vanraj- ha lekin ab nikale yaha se Verna fir koi nai musibat aa sakti hai yaha per.




Main- sahi kaha.





Uske baad ham baha se mumbai ke liye vapis chale gaye. Kaafi thak gye the ham donk hi. Vanraj ka ghar to tut fut gya tha. Isliye ham dono mere hi ghar gye or jaate hi ek ek kamre me ghus gye or so gye.






Bahi dusri taraf vikraal ko jab chhaya ke marne ka pata chala to vo bahut hi tez se chillaya. Or uske sath kaya bhi. Kyuki bina kisi chetavani ke uski aadhi shaktiya chali gyi thi chhaya ke sath. Ye dono usi ka hissa thi. Or is hisaab se agar kaya or or maar diya jaaye to sayad vikraal khud ba khud mar jaaye.ya itna kamjor ho jaaye ki use koi bhi maar sake.





Lekin ye baat sirf vikraal or chaya hi jaante the surya ko ye baat filhaal nhj pata tha.




Bahi black heart ko jinda karne ki process apne charam per thi. Or kuch ghanto me puri bhi ho jaane wali thi.



Uska sari ek percent bhi nhi sada tha jabki kai varshon se vo vaise hi pada hua tha.




Ye baat hell king ko bhi pata chal chuki thi ki black heart jinda hone wala hai. Isliye unhone apne kuch khaas aadmiyo ko bheja vikraal ke pass taaki use rok sake or us pathar ko hasil kar sake.







Ye log total 4 the or baha sirf vikraal or kaya.






Unhone bina kisi warning ke in dono per hamla kar diya. Or hamla ladai takatvar bhi tha. Lekin ye dono bhi kam nhi the.





Or is hamle se vikraal ka gussa satven aasaman per pahuch gya tha.



Jaise hi vo khada hua uske body per yodhaao wali poshak aagyi or uske hatho me ek sword or yahi same kaya ke sath bhi hua vo bhi puri tarah se ready ho gyi yudh ke liye.





Yhaa ye char bhi ready the.




Vikraal- hat jaao mere raste se Verna sabhi ko khak bana dunga.





H1- tumhe maare bina ham nhi rukne wale black heart kisi bhi tarah jinda nahi ho sakta hamare rehte.






Vikraal- to fir tum sabko marna hoga kyuki black heart to jinda hoke rahega





Ye kehkar vikraal ne apne talvar se energy ko release kiya lekin vo ready the. Unhone uske hamle ko hawa me hi rok diya. Bahi kaya ne bakio ki taraf doud laga di. Uska saamna karne ke liye 2 log aage aaye or inme talvar ka mukabla hone laga. Kaya akeli hi dono per bhari pad rahi thi. Talvar bazi me usko hara pana na mumkin sa lag raha tha. Isi beech kaya ne ek ke body per ek bahut hi bada cut kar diya ye dekhke dusre ne thoda jor se apni power ka war kaya per kiya or kaya ne apni talvar ko aage kar diya or vo energy usi talvar me sama gyi. Or iska fayeda utha kar kaya ne ek dum se us bande ki mundi alag kar di or baaki sabhi keval dekhte hi rahe.




Baaki vikraal or un dono me powers ka mukabla ho raha tha udd udd kar dono ek dusre per hamla kar rahe the. Lekin natiza kuch bhi nhi nikal raha tha.





Tab vikraal ne apni powers ka istemaal bada diya or ek tez roshni nikli uski body se. Or pal bhar me dono ka ant ho gya. Is roshni ka tod filhaal kisi ke pass nhi tha. Yahi roshni vikraal ne prithvi per bhi chhodi thi jisme sabhi log jal kar khak ho gye the.



Bahi sirf ek bacha hua tha. Or kaya ki talvar uski garden per thi. Uski halat baise hi kharab ho rakhi thi.



Aise me vikraal uske pass aaya.




Vikraal- Jake bol do apne raja se ki uske din ab bhar gye hai uska kaal jald hi uske darwaje per dastak dene wala hai. Isliye hame rokne me samay barbaad na kare or apne chhupne ki vyavastha karke rakhe.




Us guard ne mundi hilai or vo pal bhar me baha se gayab ho gya or seedha pahuch hell king ke pass or use pura sandesh sunaya jise sunke uska para bhi chadne laga lekin tabhi uske dimaag me ek tarkeeb aai jis bajah se uske chehre per smile aagyi. Or use pura vishwas tha ki ye tarkeeb kaise bhi fail nhi hone wali.






Baaki next update me jaaniye ki akhir he konsi tarkeeb hai. Or hell king kya karta hai. Or surya or vanraj ab kya karte hai inhe rokne ke liye.



Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.
















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Hell king ne kuch socha tha. Isliye vo turant hi baha se gayab ho gya. Uske sabhi sathi baha ki suraksha me lag gye. Unko bhi pata tha ki king jarur kisi khaas kaam se gye hai kahi.






Bahi is waqt main badiya se apni neend le raha tha.




Ki achanak se me ek andheri sunsaan jagah per tha jo ek xforum tha. Baha se 4 raste gye the. Maine pehle thoda socha or mujhe samajh me aagya ki me yaha kyu hu






Main- kaha ho aap





Ye kehte hi mere pichhe se aawaj aai.





H.king- yahi hu tumhare pichhe.





Main pechhe muda or mere saamne hell king khade the.






Main- kahiye mujhe yaha kyu bulaya hai aapne.






H.king- jaise tumhe kuch pata hi nhi haj. Jaante ho na kya chal raha hai. Or aage kya hone wala hai.






Main- ha main janta hu. Or isme kahi na kahi meri bhi galti hai. Me bhi raksha kar paya us pathar ki.







H.king- nhi surya tumne in sabko jitna roka hai utna to sayad me bhi nhi rok pata. Balki sirf tumhari bajah se ham itne dino se surakshit the. Lekin ab nhi hai. Or me janta hu ki aisa hona hi tha kisi na kisi din.







Main- badiya hai. To ab aage kya karne ka irada hai. Baise aap to itne powerfull hai. Aap insabko kyu nhi maar rahe ho. Ye vikraal or uske sathiyo ko. Khatam kardo aadhi tension to mitegi







H.king- idea achha hai lekin me ye nhi kar sakta. Mere andar ab vo baat nhi rahi hai. Or aisa hone ke peechhe black heart ka hi hath hai. Usne meri power of sources ko mita diya tha pichhli fight me. Jis bajah se ab utna takatvar nhi hu jitna pehle tha. Or hell se bahar nikalte hi meri powers seemit ho jaati hai. Isliye unka mukabla me hell ke bahar to nhi kar sakta hu.








Main- ohh to ye baat hai. Tabhi me sochu ki aapne abhi tak kuch kiya kyu nhi. Kyuki black heart ke jinda hone ke baad sabse jyada khatra to aapko hi hone wala hai.







H.king- ha lekin ye baat uske dusre sathiyo ko nhi pata hai. Verna abhi tak vo sabhi milke mujhe kabka khatam kar dete. Ye baat sirf black heart hi jaanta tha. Jise maine apni saari shaktiyo se mita diya tha.






Main- theek hai. To ab aap bataiye ki kya karna hai or kaise karna hai. Kyuki ab khatra kai guna bad gya hai. Or aise me main unke saamne jyada der nhi tik sakta hu. Ye baat aap bhi jaante hai. Me bhag sakta hu. Hatho se hajaro ki mundi alag kar sakta hu. Lekin jab mundi alag hone per bhi vo na mare to me kya hi karu.








H.king- isiliye to aaya hu me yaha per. Mere pass tumhare liye offer hai. Tum itne shaktishali ho jaoge ki black heart bhi tumhare saamne jyada der nhi tik payega. Lekin is powers ke kuch side effect bhi hai.







Main- kaise side effect.






H.king- is power ko control karna bahut hi muskil hai. Or jab jab ye power active hogi tum surya nhi rahoge balki kuch or hi ban jaoge.







Main- what. Agar me apne hosh me hi nhi rahunga to kaise kaam chalega jara socho agar us saks ne kisi aise ko maar diya jisko nhi maarna tha fir.








H.king- aisa nhi hoga. Kyuki ye power keval burai ko hi mitati hai. Agar tumhare aaspass burai rahegi to ye apne aap hi active ho jayegi. Or tum puri tarah se badal jaoge or ek rider ban jaoge. GHOST RIDER.

Bas uske baad jab tak un sabhi burai ka khatma vo nhi karega tab tak tum baise hi bane rahoge. Or jaise hi tumhare aaspass se burai hategi tum normal ban jaoge.








Main- ye bahut hi khatarnaak lag raha hai mujhe. Kya mujhe hamesha ke liye use jhelna padega.






H.king- ha filhaal to yhi ek rasta hai jiski madad se tum in sabhi ka khatma kar sakte ho.






Main- ek baat or batao. Jab black heart tumhare udhar hamla karega tab aap kya karoge. Kyuki me to prithvi per hi rahunga.






H.king- vo tum mujhper chhod do. Me apne logo ko kisi na kisi tarah bacha hi lunga. Baaki tum keval yaha ka morcha sambhalo. Kyuki ek baar agar black heart ne yaha per apna saamrajya jama liya to fir pure brahmaand me tabahi mach jayegi or koi bhi kahi bhi surakshit nhi rahega. Fir chahe vo hell me ho ya kahi or. Isliye usko yaha apne pair jamane se tumhe rokna hoga. Or ye powers usme tumhara pura sath degi. Ab ye faisla tumhe karna hai ki tum ise accept karte ho ya nhi.







Main- aapko iske badle koi deal bhi karni hai kya mujhse.






H.king- nhi. Maine tumse vada kiya tha ki meri jarurat padne per me madad karunga to yahi hai meri madad.





Main- baise ye power ka aapne abhi tak istemaal kyu nhi kiya kabhi.







H.king- maine pehle bhi kiya hai iska istemaal. Lekin dusro currypt karke unhen badle me ye power maine di hai. Or ab unke contract khatam ho gye hai. Isliye ye ab aise hi padi hui hai. Ye meri hi creation hai. Or jaha tak me soch raha hu. Tumhari or rider ki powers milke kuch kamaal hi hoga.








Main- me aapki baat ko maan leta hu. Lekin meri ek condition hai.






H.king- kya.





Main- ye power mujhe hamesha ke liye nhi chahiye hai. Isliye black heart ke marte hi mujhe isse chhutkara chahiyen. Kyuki bure loge ke liye main baise hi kaafi hu. Ha lekin future me kabhi iski dobara jarurat padegi to me ise fir se accept kar lunga. Lekin seemit samay ke liye. Permanent isko me nahj rakhne wala. Agar ye ho sakta hai to aap mujhe ye powers de sakte hai. Verna me aise hi theek hu.








H.king- theek hai surya me tumse ye shaktiyan vapis le lunga kyuki hamare beech koi contract nhi ho raha hai isliye aisa hona sambhav bhi ho jayega. Lekin ye tum per nirbhar karega. Agar tum chahoge to aisa ho jayega or nhi chahoge to aisa nhi hoga.






Main- done.






Uske baad hell king ne mere mathe per apna hath rakha or achanak se meri neend khul gyi. Me abhi bhi apne bister per hi tha. Maine time dekha to 6 baj gaye the. Or meri neend bhi udd gyi thi. Mujhe apne andar garmi si mehsus hone lagi thi. Isliye me jaldi se utha or bathroom me ghus gya. Jaha maine badiya shower liya jisse andar ki garmi shant ho gyi. Uske baad maine apne aap ko aaine me dekha to mujhe kuch khaas fark nhi laga jaise kuch hua hi nhi ho. Baaki pata nhi.





Main ready hua or neeche aaya jaha almost sabhi jaag chuke the. Neeche varsha or uski maa bhi moujud thi. Or sath me charo bache bhi.





Varsha- uncle papa kaha hai.




Main- yahi kisi kamre me so rahe honge. Sath me hi aaye the ham dono.




Ye sunke varsha ne sabhi kamro ka darwaja khatkhataya or ek me se vanraj bahar bhi nikal aaya jise dekhke vo kush ho gyi or turant hi gale lag gyi.





Vanraj- me theek hu chinta mat karo. Tumhari maa kaha hai.




Varsha- yahi haj.




Ye kehke dono alag hue or hall me aagye. Jaha varsha ki maa bhi vanraj se mili.





Ashk- papa hua kya tha. Puri mumbai kabad ho gyi hai. Hamara clg bhi ab nhi raha hai.







Main- beta musibat aachuki hai or ab aasani se jayegi nhi. Isliye mera manna hai ki tum sabhi Bapis gaao chale jaao jab tak sab theek nhi hota hai. Kyuki yaha khatra badta hi ja raha hai.





Ye sunke sabse bada jhatka amar ko laga kyuki vo ab nidhi se nhi mil payega. Use koi bahana bhi nhi mil raha tha batane ke liye. Or bahi teeno uski halat bhi samajh rahe the.





Main- amar koi problem hai kya.






Amar- nhi chachu. Sab theek haj. Bas mujhe tension ho rahi hai ki ab hamari padai ka kya hoga.






Main- beta padai to kahi se bhi ki ja sakti hai. Online classes ki vyavastha kar dega clg tum sabki. Isliye padai ki tension lo hi mat.






Avi- papa hame bhi madad karni hai aapki. Is ladai me. Ham aise hath per hath rakhe nhi baithe reh sakte hai.






Main- achha. To ye karo ki ghar ki raksha karo. Kyuki ab me ghar filhaal nhi aane wala hu. Jab tak ye sab khatam nhi ho jata hai. Isliye ghar ki dekh rekh tum sabhi ko karni hai rony or bhai ke sath milke.






Un sabhi ka man to nhi tha lekin mere bar baar samjhane per vo maan gye. Or maine unke sath varsha or uski maa ko bhej diya. Car se hi. Kyuki flights saari delay chal rahi thi or mera jet to blast ho gya tha. Jiska mujhe kaafi dukh tha. Halaki company se naya mil jayega insurance ki madad se lekin usme waqt lagega. Vanraj bhi mere faisale se kush tha. Use bhi ab jyada chinta nhi rahegi in dono ki.





Baaki dekhte hai kya hota hai sab aage.















To be continue……………………...
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Amar ne nidhi ko call karke sab bata diya tha. Or ye sunke use bhi bahut bura lag raha tha. Use bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki vo kya kahe kya kare. Kaise vo amar ke pass reh sake. Lekin filhaal use koi rasta nhi mila sivaay ek ke ki vo bhi udaypur chali jaaye or bahi ruke. Lekin vo aise ghar se nhi ja sakti thi. Uske pita usko nahi jaane dete or ye baat vo bhi jaanti thi. Isliye usne filhaal ke liye ye sab sochna chhod diya. Or is judaai ko swikaar kar liya.









Bahi subah ki pehli kiran nikalte hi black heart ki aankhe khul gyi. Uska chehra pura safed pada hua tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise uski body me blood hai hi nhi. Or hoga bhi kaha se. Vo pehle se hi murda tha.





Bahi uske jaagte hi vikraal or kaya dono hi apne ghutno per baith gye or apne raja ko naman karne lage.







B.H- kaha hu main. Or ye konsa saal hai.






Vikraal- mere malik aap karib 100 varshon se soye hue the. Or ye ek Anjaan jagah hai jaha kaal ne aapko chhipa diya tha taaki aapka sarir salamat rahe or aapko firse neend se jagaya ja sake.







Ye sunte hi use yaad aaya ki kya hua tha or kyu vo so gya tha ya mar gya tha.

Or yaad aate hi uski anakhe puri tarah se laal ho gyi. Or uski aankho se turant hi ek laal roshni nikli jo ek bahut bade pahad se take gyi or dekhte hi dekhte vo pahad tukdo me tabdeel ho gya.






B.H- pitaji ab kya karoge kaise rokogi mujhe. Aapki jitni manmani karni thi aapne kar li. Ab mera samay aagya hai. Or aapka dafan hone ka.




Ye kehkar vi hasne laga or uske sath vikraal or kaya bhi.






B.H- kaal kaha hai vikraal.







Vikraal- malik vo ab nhi raha. Prithvi ke ek keede ne usko maar diya hai. Or itne dino se bahi ek tha jo aapko jinda nhi hone de raha tha. Usne is paras pathar ko chhipa rakha tha.








B.H- kya prithvi ka ek chhote se keeda ne tumhe or kaal ko pareshan kar rakha tha. Kuch aisa bolo jo hajam ho mujhe. Ya fir sach me tum log kamjor ho gye ho.






Vikraal- ha malik ham aapke bina bakai me kamjor hi ho gye hai. Hamare andar jaan to thi lekin takat bilkul bhi nhi thi. Ham bas ji rahe the is ummid men ki aap kabhi na kabhi vapis jarur aayenge







B.H- chinta mat karo ab me aagya hu. Ab sab theek ho jayega. Kaal ka badla bhi lenge ham. Puri prithvi ki iski keemat chukanj padegi. Lekin sabse pehle hame hell king ko thikane lagana hoga isse pehle vo mere khilaaf fir se koi chal chale unko rokna hoga or hamare sare sathi kaha per hai. Or mohini vo kaha hai.







Vikraal- un sabhi ko hell king ne bandhi bana rakha hai. Vo bhi aapke loutne ka intjar kar rahe hai. Us qaid me unki powers tak kaam nhi kar rahi hai. Or mohini ab nahi rahi hai. Usko bhi usi prithvi ke keede me maar diya hai isi pathar ki madad se.



Ye sunte hi black heart ka gussa or bad gya or usne apna pair jor se jameen per patak diya. Or aisa karte hi baha ki puri jameen me bhari kampann hone laga. Kai jagah per bahut badi badi daraar khul gyi. Or usi ek darar mese ek bahut hi chhota keeda bahar nikla.
Or black heart ne use apne hatho me le liya. Or apne aap ko shant karne ke baad bola.




B.H-theek hai sabse pehle hame aone sathio ko chudana hai fir us prithvi wale se niptenge.





Vikraal- maaf karna malik lekin me or kaya baha nhi ja sakte hai hamne agar baha pair bhi rakha to ham bhi khak ho jayenge.






B.H- oohh ha me bhul gye tha. Theek hai tum dono prithvi jaao or mere swagat ki taiyariyan karo. Or is ko apne sath le jaao. Tab tak me hell se nipat ke aata hun




Usne vo keeda vikraal ke hath me rakha




Vikraal- jo hukum.





Ye kehkar black heart baha se gayab ho gya or uske jaate hi vikraal or kaya bhi baha se prithvi chale gye.








Black heart hell ke darwaje per pahucha apna signature kala wala lumba kot pehne hue or jaise hi use baha ke pehredaro ne dekha usper hamla kar diya. Lekin vo hamla ustak pahuchta usse pehle hi ek energy ne us pure darwaje ke hi chithde uda diye jiski chapet me vo do pehredaar bhi aagye. Or udte hue andar ja gire.






Uske baad black heart ne apni janm bhumi per apne kadam rakhe. Is waqt vo pathar uske pass hi tha. Or ye energy usi se nikli thi. Vo apni shaktiyo ka istemaal bilkul bhi nhi kar raha tha sirf pathar ko aadesh de raha tha or vo apna kaam karte ja raha tha.






Vo andar aaya or jitne bhi logo ne use dekha unme bhagdad mach gyi. Sabhi apni apni jaan bacha kar baha se bhagne lage. Yaha baha. Or black heart ko ye dekhkar kaafi maja aaraha tha isliye usne unke gharo me baisi hi energy chhodna start kar diya. Or ek ek karke sabhi gharo me bhayankar blast hone lage jiski bajah se kaafi log marne lage.




Tabhi uski najar ek bache per padi jo bahut hi tez ro raha tha or uski maa uske baaju me hi Mari padi thi.



Vo uske pass gya uske sir per hath fera pyar se use thoda chup karaya or koi kuch samajhta usse hi pehle vo bacha bahi per puri tarah se sad gya. Uska sarir ek hi jhatke me aisa hogya jaise lakdi me dimak lagne ke baad vo sad jaati hai or uski dhul jharne lagti hai. Baise hi us bache ki puri body ek hi jhatke me sad gyi or rakh banke bahi per gir gyi. Ye dekhke bakio ki ruh kamp gyi.





Or abhi vo or aage jata usse pehle hi usper hamla hua jo kisi or ne nahi balki hell king ne kiya tha.





B.H- kaise hai pitaji. Marne ke liye ready ho aap.





H.king- bhul me mat raho black. Bhulo mat pehle bhi tumhe tumhari manjil tak pahucha chuka hu main.





B.H- ha janta hu ki dhoke se kaise aapne mujhe qaid kiya tha. Lekin ab meri soul aazad hai or ab aapke qaid hone ki baari hai.







H.king- kosis karke dekh lo sayad kaam ban jaaye. Or yaha ke Masum logo ko maarna band kardo Verna ye pathar bhi tumhe nhi bacha payega mujhse.






B.H- ohhh me to dar gya. Pitaji kripa kar mujhe mat maariyega.



Ye Kehke vo hasne laga or baha moujud baaki sabhi apne dant peesne lage.






Bahi hell king ko bhi gussa aagya or unhone apni saahi chhadi se usper hamla kar diya. Lekin usper iska koi asar nhi hua.





B.H- kya pitaji bhul gye jab tak mere pass ye pathar hai aapki kisi bhi shakti ka mujhper koi asar nhi hone wala.








H.king- ha pata hai. Lekin koi haj jisse tumhe ye pathar bhi nhi bacha payega.







B.H- achha kon hai vo jara batana.







H.king- hai koi jald hi tumhari mulakaat hogi usse. Tab khud pata chal jayega.





Ye sunke vo thoda soch me pad gya.






B.H- jab saamne aayega tab usko bhi dekh lenge. Filhaal aapki baari hai.


Ye kehkar usne apne hatho ko aage kiya or unse jabardast energy nikli jo seedhi jaake king ko lagne lagi. Lekin king bhi ready tha usne apni chhadi se uski powers ko rok liya


Or dono ke beech ek bheesan yudh hona laga. Jisme haar to king ki hi ho rahi thi. Dono ek dusre per bhari pad rahe the. Lekin jyada bhari black heart hi tha. Black heart unke karib gya or unko garden se pakad liya king ne apni chhadi aage ki to usne use apne hatho me pakad liya or unke hathon se chhen liya or apni pakad ko unki garden per majbut karne laga. Lekin ye sadne wala jadu unper kaam nhi kar raha tha. Isliye usne unki chhadi ka istemaal unhi per kiya or vo dur ja gire.




Uske baad vo sambhal pate usse pehle hi usne pathar se unki soul ko qaid karne ko keh diya. Or aisa kehte hi unka sharir bejaan sa dharti per gir pada. Uske baad vo unke body ke pass gya or use sada diya apni powers se. Bahi king ke log ye najara dekhte hi reh gye. Unhe samajh me nhi aaya ki ye kaise or kya ho gya.





B.H- abse yaha ka raja me hu. Or agar kisi ne meri baat manne se inkaar kiya to uska anjaam isse bhi bhayanak hoga.





Ye sunte hi baha per moujud sare log uske saamne jhuk gye. Or use pranaam karne lage.





Or sabko aise dekhke vo apni hasi hasne laga.





Fir usne ek khas ko ishare se apne pass bulaya. Or vo darte hue uske pass aaya.





B.H- jaao or mere sare sathiyo ko aazad kardo or unse kaho ki maine sabko darbaar me bulaya hai.






Ye sunke vo bhagta hua gya or black heart ke jitne samarthak the sabko usne aazad kar diya. Or sabko sandesha bhi suna diya. Jise sunke sabhi black heart ke darshan ke liye darbaar me doudte hue jaane lage. Or raste me jo bhi guard unhe milte vo un sabko maarne lage. Itne saalo ka gussa jo andar bhara hua tha vo sab nikalne lage. Or apni aazadi ka jashn manane lage. Un sabhi ne jail ke pass moujud har ek guard ko maar dala or kuch ne to unka khoon bhi pi liya itne saalo ki jo pyas thi saari un sabhi ne bujha li.





Aise hi sabhi pahuch gye darbaar me.





Baha unhone black heart ko king ki chair per baitha dekha or sabhi ne jhuk kar use pranam kiya.





Takshak- maharaj aapko sahi salamat dekhke kitni kushi ho rahi hai me bata nhi sakta hu.







B.H- hame bhi takshak ab tum sab aazad ho. Or jo karna hai kar sakte ho. Aadhe log prithvi per jaao or baha vikraal ke sath milke tehalka macha do. Sabko pata hona chahiye ki ham vapis aagye hai. Or baaki ke aadhe sabhi chhoti moti riyasato me jaao or hamara fermaan sunao ki ya to mit jaao ya mil jaao. Baaki aap sabhi jante hi hai ki kaise karna hai ye sab.






Ye sunke sabhi ne apni mundi ha me hilaai or sabhi ke chehre ki khushi hi bata rahi thi ki aaj ye sabhi kitne kush hai. Or black heart ka frrmaan sunte hi sabhi apne apne rasto per nikal gye.



Aadhe prithvi per to baaki space me baaki jagho per.






Baaki next update me dekhiye ki ab sab jagah kya hota hai. Or surya ki shaktiya kaise sabko rokti hai. Kya hota hai aage janne ke liye sath bane rahe.

















To be continue………………………..
Ab to king bhi nahi raha ye black heart boht bari toop lagti h

Let's see what happend
 

Asif khan

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Black heart apni gaddi per baitha apna manoranjan kar raha tha. Bahi uske pita ke bafadaar sabhi jail me daal diye gye the. Pure hell me jitni bhi praja thi unke bure din ab shuru ho gye the. Or us baat ka ehsas unhe bhi ho chuka tha. Kyuki black heart ke log 3- 4 gharon se kuch ladkiyo ko utha le gye the black heart ki seva karne ke liye.



Or sabhi jaante the ki aaj nhi to kal unke ghar ka bhi no. Lag hi jayega.






Bahi space me black heart ke logo ne tehalka macha diya tha. Bina kisi warning ke unhone sabhi jagho per utpaat macha diya tha. Logo ko maarna or unhe currypt karna bhi shuru kar diya tha. Like vampire ya or bhi kuch. Inki tadat badti ja rahi thi. Or har ek jagah black heart ka percham lehrata ja raha tha.






And rahi baat prithvi ki to. Yaha mamla kuch alag hone wala tha.





Raat ke samay vikraal takshak kaya or inke kuch sathi ek kisi sunsaan jagah per baithe hue the. Is waqt hath me bahi keeda tha jo B.H ne diya tha.






Takshak- kya soch rahe ho vikraal.






Vikraal- soch raha hu ye keede ka karna kya hai.






Takshak- sayad tum ise bhul gye ho. Yaad hai iska nirmaan black heart ne hi kiya tha. Sakaar planet ko tabah karne ke liye. Yaad karo.






Ye sunte hi vikraal sochne laga or use yaad aaya.




Vikraal- are ha me to bhul hi gya tha ise. Ye to vakai me kamaal ka jeeb hai.








Takshak- bahi to iska istemaal hame jab karna hai jab mamla hamare hatho se puri tarah nikalne lage. Khair aisa hoga to nhi lekin kya pata kya ho jaaye aage.






Kaya- chutkiyon me ye puri prithvi me tabahi macha dega. Baise ye najara dekhne me maja bahut aayega.








Vikraal- ye baat to hai.






Takshak- khair abhi suno kya karna hai. Hame seedha surya ko target karna hai. Vo khatam hua to samjho ham ye jung jeet gaye. Uske baad kisi ki himmat nhi hogi hamare khilaaf aankh uthane ki. Or sab aasani se hamare gulaam ban jayenge.







Vikraal- lekin kaise kare aap ye bataye.






Takshak- logo ko pareshan karo taaki vo hamare saamne aaye. Baise bhi ab puri prithvi per suraj jyada nhi nikalne wala hai. Kyuki black heart ke jaagte hi charo taraf baise bhi andhere ka raaj ho gya hai. Or andhera hamari takat hai. Or insano ki sabse badi kamjori. Or isi ka fayeda hame uthana hai.








Kaya- kya aisa sach me hoga.






Vikraal- ha kaya aisa pehle bhi ham hote hue dekh chuke hai.





Takshak- or uski shuruwat bhi ho chuki hai. Kal se din me keval 10 ghante hi suraj nikalega or ye samay dheere dheere kam hota jayega.







Kaya- fir to maja aajayega.






Vikraal- maja to aayega hi.






Inki yahi charcha chalti rahi kaafi der tak. Or aise hi raat ke 2-3 baj gye.





Jo samay in shaktiyon ke liye sabse jyada takatvar rehta hai.




Aise me takshak ne vikraal ko bheja surya ki neend haraam karne ke liye.







Vikraal or kaya sath me hi the. Or is waqt unke ghar ke bahar khade hue the mumbai wale.






Kaya- baise mera khayal ye hai ki kahi or tabahi machate hai. Vo use dekhke jaldi hi baha pahuch jayega. Aap kahi or tabahi machaye tab tak me usse chaya ka badla lungi. Or use aap tak nhi aane dungi.









Vikraal- nhi main ab tumhe nhi kho sakta hu. Mujhe tumhari kabiliyat per pura bharosa hai lekin uski chalaki per usse bhi jyada bharosa hai. Vo kisi bhi tarah tumhe hara dega ya maar dega or tumhare khatam hote hi meri shaktiya or kam ho jayegi. Or fir vo mujhe bhi aasani se hara dega.or ye risk me nhi le sakta isliye tumhe har waqt chhipa hua hi rehna hai. Taaki kahi agar vo mujhper bhari pade to tum meri madad kar sako.








Kaya- lekin





Vikraal- lekin vekin kuch nhi.




Ye sunte hi kaya ne sada sa muh bana liya. Or ye dekhke vikraal ko hasi aagyi.





Vikraal- theek hai ek kaam karo tum vanraj ko sambhalo. Vo dono agar ek sath lade to bhari pad sakte hai. Isliye tum use uljhao me surya ko dekh lunga.







Kaya- theek hai.





YE sunte hi kaya gayab ho gyi or seedhi pahuch vanraj ke saamne. Jo abhi gehri neend me soya hua tha.





Use aisa dekhke kaya ko bahut gussa aaya or usne apni powers ka istemaal kiya or vanraj ko hawa me uchhal diya or seedha vanraj laga kamre ki chhat per or fir dhadaam se bed pe. Or is jhatke se uski neend ek dum se tut gyi. Or vo ladkhadata hua bed se neeche gir gya. Use samajh me nhi aaya ki abhi hua kya. Or kaise. Uski aankhe abhi bhi puri tarah se nhi khuli thi.






Kaya- hamari neend haraam karke tum chain ki neend so rahe ho.





Ye aawaj vanraj achhe se pehchanta tha. Or aisa hi hua aawaj sunte hi vanraj ki neend ek dum se gayab ho gyi. Or usne aankho ko pura khola or samne dekha




Jaha kaya apne pure khatarnaak rup me khadi hui thi. Uske baad pure bikhre the or slow-motion me move kar rahe the. Jaise koi saanp ho. Uske nakhun itne lumbe the ki kisi ke bhi body ko cheerte hue aar paar nikal jaaye. Uski aankhe laal thi. Or honto per ek kutil muskaan thi. Jiski bajah se uske danto ki thodi jhalak dikh rahi thi. Jo kaafi nukile the.






Isko aise dekhke koi bhi dar jaaye. Or kisi ki bhi neend hamesha ke liye udd jaaye.






Vanraj ek dum se khada hua.






Vanraj- mujhe to laga tha ki tum or vikraal dum daba ke bhag gye hoge chhaya ki mout ki khabar sunke. Lekin ab agar tum yaha ho to iska matlab saaf hai ki black heart jinda ho gya hai or usi ne tum sabko yaha bheja hai.









Kaya- sahi samjhe ho. Or tumhe ek or good news deti hu me. Tumhara madadgaar vo hell king ab nhi raha hai. Uski soul ko black heart ne qaid kar liya hai.





Ye sunte hi vanraj ko vakai me tagda jhatka laga. Use yakeen hi nhi ho raha tha ki itna takatvar king kaise black heart ki qaid me aagya.





Or kaya ne vanraj ka chehre per tension dekhte hi. Uske chehre per muskaan aagyi.





Or isi tension me vanraj apni soch me duba hua tha. Tabhi chaya ne. Apni speed se vanraj ke seene me aone nakhun gada diye. Or achanak hue is hamle se vanraj pura hill gya. Or use tez dard bhi hua. Bahi kaya ke nakhun se ek teevra poison vanraj ki body me failne laga. Or vanraj ki aankhe per poison ka asar dikhane laga tha. Uski aankhe chadne lagi thi.






Isi mouke ka fayeda uthaya or kaya vanraj ko baha se gayab karke kisi sunsaan jagah per le gyi.







Or use jameen per patak diya. Or jor jor se hasne lagi. Uski aawaj raat ke sannate ko cheerte hue charo dishaon me failne lagi. Ye aisi hasi thi ki sunke neend me hi mutde insaan.






Bahi uski aawaj sunke charo dishaon se dhua ke aakar me uske sathi aagye or charo taraf udne lage.





Bahi vanraj ab bhi behosh tha. Uski body heal ho rahi thi. Or kaafi tezi se hi rahi thi







Tabhi kaya ke ek sathi ne kaha ko bola.






A1- kahi ye mar to nhi gya.






Kaya- ye itni aasani se nahi marne wala hai. Dekhna abhi khada ho jayega. Puri tarah se theek hoke. Tum log bas ye dhyan rakhna ki vo surya yaha iski madad karne na aa paye.






A2- hamare hote hue is area tak koi pahuch sakta hai. Tum befikr raho or iska sahi se ilaaj karo.







Ye kehkar vo charo hawa me hi gayab ho gaye. Or charo dishaon me fail gye.






Bahi kaya vanraj ke jaagne ka intjaar karne lagi.

















To be continue………………………..
Bechara vanraj neend hi Haram kr di kaya ne
 
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