Bro tension na lo me utavla ni hota. And spoiler s frk ni parta hai. Me chahta hn jsa plot tagra hai wse hi story bhi tagri ho. Coz me anime and manga ka kafi bara fan hn. And or xforum pe system wali stories ka. Like werewolf and salty bhai ki.
Baki chahe yug ko dost rkho dhushman rkho chahe bhot zyada powerful rakho I don't care.
But story me jo emotions heina wo realistic rkho. For example hero ko apni maa or bhen ya bhai jo bhi hai. Usse nafrat hai coz wo bachpan s usse torture krte aye hein. Or is kadar torture kiya ke wo suicide krne lga tha. To wo emotions sam ke behavior me nzr ane chahiye. Nake apni sister ke bare me sex jokes kre ya kuch. Aise dikhao ke usse care hi ni hai. That's what I'm trying to say. Baki best of luck. And ap ne mra negative comment bhot hi behtr trike se liya. Uske liye I appreciate you.