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Hero tera

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adhyaay 14: sahee bali ka bakara!

hathiyaaron ke aapas mein takaraane kee aavaaz prashikshan kaksh mein goonj rahee thee.

elesiya aur geraald ek doosare ke khilaaf lad rahe the, aur donon baraabaree par the - kam se kam kuchh samay ke lie.

yah sab tab badal gaya jab sundar mahila ne muskura kar kaee prakaash kee talavaaren bulaeen jo usake chaaron or chakkar laga rahee theen, jisase usake pati ko khud ko door karane ke lie majaboor hona pada.

lekin, vah ek galatee thee.

prakaash kee talavaaren misailon kee tarah usakee or badheen, jisase use chakama dene, vikshepit karane aur unhen rokane ke lie majaboor hona pada.

jab vah is vikarshan ke aage jhuk gaya, to elesiya ne unake beech kee dooree ko kam karane mein kaamayaabee haasil kee, aur usane apanee talavaar apane pati kee gardan par rakh dee, jisase dvandv samaapt ho gaya.

"tumane dhokha diya," geraald ne kadave svar mein kaha.

"mainne kiya," elesiya ne sveekaar kiya. "lekin isase tumhen aashchary hua, hai na?"

geraald ne sir hilaaya kyonki yah vaastav mein maamala tha. vah apanee patnee kee ladaee shailee ka itana aadee ho chuka tha ki jaise hee usane apana tareeka badala, use usakee chaalon ka mukaabala karana mushkil lagane laga.

donon mein se kisee ne bhee apanee pooree taakat nahin dikhaee, kyonki ve prashikshan maidaan aur sambhavatah apane ghar ko bhee nasht nahin karana chaahate the.

lekin elesiya ne jo shakti dikhaee, vah usake pati ko yah vishvaas dilaane ke lie paryaapt thee ki apanee naee maarshal takaneek ko samajhane ke teen dinon ke baad vah bahut majaboot ho gaee thee.

"aakhir zaayan aisa kaise kar paata hai?" geraald ne poochha, jab usane shaasha dvaara die gae haath ke tauliye se apana paseena ponchha.

"mainne bhee usase yahee savaal poochha tha. aur kya tumhen pata hai ki usane mujhe kis tarah ka javaab diya?" elesiya ne vaapas poochha.

"mujhe nahin pata, lekin mujhe yakeen hai ki tum mujhe bata dogee."

"tum mazedaar nahin ho."

phir elesiya ne apane paanch saal ke bachche kee or dekha, jo us samay apanee sabase chhotee betee remee ke saath "kaich bol" ka khel khel raha tha.

elesiya ko nahin pata tha ki tharteen itanee kam umr mein hee apanee chhotee bahan kee trening shuroo kar raha tha, jisase remee apanee indriyon ko tej kar sake aur apanee pratikriya samay ko behatar bana sake.

"siyon ne kaha ki vah aspataal mein kuchh samay ke lie mar gaya tha aur ek bhagavaan se mila tha," elesiya ne javaab diya. "usane aage kaha ki choonki vah marane ke lie bahut chhota, bahut sundar aur bahut bhayaanak tha, isalie bhagavaan ne use jeevan mein saphal hone ke lie gyaan dene ka phaisala kiya. haalaanki, use hamaare parivaar ke baahar is gyaan ko phailaane se pratibandhit kar diya gaya tha."

"... mujhe pata hai ki yah ajeeb lag sakata hai, lekin main is kahaanee par vishvaas karane ke lie bahut ichchhuk hoon," geraald ne javaab diya.

yah ekamaatr uchit spashteekaran tha jise vah sveekaar kar sakata tha ki usaka beta apanee umr ke hisaab se paripakv vyavahaar karane mein saksham tha, saath hee aisee cheejen jaanata tha jinake baare mein ve bhee nahin jaanate the.

"main bhee," elesiya ne sveekaar kiya. "lekin vah jeevit aur svasth hai. yahee sab maayane rakhata hai. vah abhee bhee chhota hai, isalie haalaanki usane apanee yaaden kho dee hain, phir bhee vah bada hone par naee yaaden bana sakata hai."

geraald ne sir hilaaya. "theek hai, kam se kam isase yah to pata chalata hai ki vah aap teenon ko ye maarshal takaneeken kyon de paaya. vaise, kya usane in takaneekon kee raink ka ullekh kiya?"

"pauraanik raink," elesiya ne dil kee dhadakan mein uttar diya.

"haahaaha! bahut mazedaar," geraald ne hansate hue kaha. "to, isakee asalee raink kya hai?"

"pauraanik."

"... kya tum gambheer ho?"

yahaan tak ki leventis svord aart bhee gold gred ke shikhar par thee, jisaka arth tha ki elesiya aur usake do bachchon ne jo kaushal seekha tha, vah das pratishthit parivaaron ke paas maujood kaushal se behatar tha.

elesiya ko yah nahin pata tha ki terah ne usase jhooth bola tha.

usane apane parivaar ke sadasyon ko jo takaneeken dee theen, ve divy raink vaalee maarshal takaneeken theen.

usane unhen sach kyon nahin bataaya, isaka ekamaatr kaaran do tha.

pahala kaaran yah tha ki use lag raha tha ki agar vah kahe ki ab unake paas teen divy raink vaalee maarshal takaneeken hain, to usakee maan aur pita us par vishvaas nahin karenge.

doosara kaaran usake parivaar kee suraksha thee.

vartamaan mein, maarshal kaushal ke lie uchchatam gyaat gred pauraanik raink ka tha. agar koee takaneek jo us raink ko paar kar jaatee hai, achaanak kaheen se prakat hotee hai, to yah paanch samraat kulon aur das pratishthit parivaaron ko terah aur usake parivaar ko nishaana banaane ke lie prerit karegee.

us mudde se bachane ke lie, usane keval itana kaha ki yah pauraanik raink kee thee.

usake pita aur maan donon hee ghumakkad the, isalie
 

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adhyaay 15: baal shram kaanoon ke viruddh hai, kya aap jaanate hain?

leventis svord aart, jise hevans divaid ke naam se bhee jaana jaata hai, peek-gold gred maarshal takaneek ke roop mein apanee raink ke yogy thee.

yahaan tak ki tharteen bhee apanee memoree kor mein isakee jaanakaaree kee jaanch karane ke baad isase kaaphee prabhaavit hua.

kaee logon ka maanana tha ki leventis parivaar das pratishthit parivaaron mein sabase majaboot tha.

lekin bhale hee yah achchha tha, ant mein, yah sirph ek peek-gold gred maarshal takaneek thee.

tharteen ke paas anaginat divy takaneeken theen, jo unhen istemaal karane vaalon ko maarshal aart ke shikhar tak pahunchane kee anumati detee theen.

choonki unake pita parivaar ke bharan-poshanakarta the, isalie unhen geraald ko majaboot banaane kee zaroorat thee, taaki baad mein use badhane ke lie ek surakshit aur sthir vaataavaran pradaan kiya ja sake.

hevans divaid ko aadhaar ke roop mein upayog karate hue, tharteen ne anukaran kiya ki divy maarshal takaneekon mein se kaun see is svord aart ke anukool thee.

poore din saavadhaaneepoorvak unmoolan ke baad, paanch varsheey ne ise anant bled naamak divy gred takaneek ke saath sanyojit karane ka nirnay liya.

svarg kee vibhaajan maarshal takaneek dushmanon par prahaar karane aur pratyek prahaar ke saath unhen divy kshati pahunchaane par kendrit thee.

ve pailaadin kee tarah the aur mahaan kshati deelar hone mein bahut kushal the. lekin, ek samasya thee.

unaka phutavark ausat darje ka tha. seedhe shabdon mein kahen to, ve apanee taakat tabhee dikha sakate the "jab" ve apane virodhiyon par prahaar kar saken ya aisa karane ke lie paryaapt kareeb pahunch saken.

is samasya kee bharapaee ke lie, leventis parivaar ne svarg kee sair naamak ek moovament takaneek ka upayog kiya.

terah aashcharyachakit hue bina nahin rah sake ki leventis parivaar ke kulapati un kaushalon ko chunane par itane kendrit kyon the jinamen "svarg" shabd tha.

"svarg mein aisa kya achchha hai?" terah ne naak bhaun sikodee. "mera boodha aadamee vahaan oopar hai, aur vah dekhane aur mahakane mein bakavaas jaisa lag raha tha."

achaanak, usane aakaash mein gadagadaahat kee tez gadagadaahat sunee, jisase vah hans pada.

lagata hai mainne boodhe aadamee ko naaraaz kar diya, terah man hee man hansa. oh! use bhoonana kitana achchha hai, aur vah vaapas lad nahin sakata!

terah jaanata tha ki devata nashvar kshetr mein svatantr roop se hastakshep nahin kar sakate kyonki ve daiveey niyamon se bandhe the.

usake pita, dyoos eks maakina ne jo kiya vah abhee bhee sahaneey tha kyonki usane koee niyam nahin toda tha.

usane ek aise bachche ko chuna jo marane vaala tha aur usane terah ke kor ko ladake ke shareer mein mila diya.

devataon ko aisa karane kee anumati thee, jab tak ki ve aisa aksar nahin karate.

yahee kaaran tha ki unamen se kuchh any duniyaon se naayakon ko apanee duniya mein prakat hone ke lie bula sakate the aur unake lie ve kaam kar sakate the jo ve karane mein asamarth the - jaise apane do haathon se daanav bhagavaanon ko maarana.

svarg kee sair ko ek achchhee moovament takaneek maana ja sakata hai kyonki yah svarg ke vibhaajan ke saath sangat thee.

phir bhee, isane samasya ko pooree tarah se theek nahin kiya.

adhik se adhik, yah keval terah kee nazar mein hee sveekaary tha. beshak, leventis paitriaark ko isake lie doshee nahin thaharaaya ja sakata.

solatera se kaushal aur kaushal pustaken praapt karana aasaan kaam nahin tha.

choonki bhikhaaree chayanakarta nahin ho sakate the, isalie unhonne moovament takaneek ko chuna jo kuchh had tak unake parivaar kee talavaar kala ka samarthan karatee thee.

terah kee pasand, itaranal bled, ek divy gred takaneek thee jo svarg ke vibhaajan ke saath bahut sangat thee.

yah na keval joradaar prahaar karata tha, balki isake saath moovament takaneek ka apana set bhee aata tha, jisase isaka upayogakarta ek hee samay mein tezee se aage badh sakata tha aur tezee se prahaar kar sakata tha.

lekin is takaneek ka upayog karane ke lie ek sakht aavashyakata thee.

upayogakarta mein dard ke prati uchch sahanasheelata honee chaahie.

is takaneek ko nishpaadit karane se isake upayogakarta ke shareer par bahut adhik bojh padata tha. keval ve log jinhonne apanee shaareerik shakti aur sahanashakti ko bahut seema tak prashikshit kiya tha, ve hee is takaneek ka upayog karane mein saksham the.

saubhaagy se, unake pita ek maasokist the - yaanee, koee aisa vyakti jisane apane shareer ko charam seema tak prashikshit kiya tha.

vaastav mein, svarg ke vibhaajan mein mahaarat haasil karane vaale sabhee logon ke paas ek majaboot shareer hona aavashyak tha. is takaneek ke lie unhen apane dushmanon ke kareeb jaana padata tha, isalie ve apane lakshy par vaar karane se pahale hee ghaayal ho jaate the.

yahee kaaran tha ki terah ko bharosa tha ki agar leventis parivaar ke kulapati ne apane pita ko shaitaan ke saath dekha to ve nishchit roop se ghaayal ho jaenge.
 

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adhyaay 15: baal shram kaanoon ke viruddh hai, kya aap jaanate hain?

leventis svord aart, jise hevans divaid ke naam se bhee jaana jaata hai, peek-gold gred maarshal takaneek ke roop mein apanee raink ke yogy thee.

yahaan tak ki tharteen bhee apanee memoree kor mein isakee jaanakaaree kee jaanch karane ke baad isase kaaphee prabhaavit hua.

kaee logon ka maanana tha ki leventis parivaar das pratishthit parivaaron mein sabase majaboot tha.

lekin bhale hee yah achchha tha, ant mein, yah sirph ek peek-gold gred maarshal takaneek thee.

tharteen ke paas anaginat divy takaneeken theen, jo unhen istemaal karane vaalon ko maarshal aart ke shikhar tak pahunchane kee anumati detee theen.

choonki unake pita parivaar ke bharan-poshanakarta the, isalie unhen geraald ko majaboot banaane kee zaroorat thee, taaki baad mein use badhane ke lie ek surakshit aur sthir vaataavaran pradaan kiya ja sake.

hevans divaid ko aadhaar ke roop mein upayog karate hue, tharteen ne anukaran kiya ki divy maarshal takaneekon mein se kaun see is svord aart ke anukool thee.

poore din saavadhaaneepoorvak unmoolan ke baad, paanch varsheey ne ise anant bled naamak divy gred takaneek ke saath sanyojit karane ka nirnay liya.

svarg kee vibhaajan maarshal takaneek dushmanon par prahaar karane aur pratyek prahaar ke saath unhen divy kshati pahunchaane par kendrit thee.

ve pailaadin kee tarah the aur mahaan kshati deelar hone mein bahut kushal the. lekin, ek samasya thee.

unaka phutavark ausat darje ka tha. seedhe shabdon mein kahen to, ve apanee taakat tabhee dikha sakate the "jab" ve apane virodhiyon par prahaar kar saken ya aisa karane ke lie paryaapt kareeb pahunch saken.

is samasya kee bharapaee ke lie, leventis parivaar ne svarg kee sair naamak ek moovament takaneek ka upayog kiya.

terah aashcharyachakit hue bina nahin rah sake ki leventis parivaar ke kulapati un kaushalon ko chunane par itane kendrit kyon the jinamen "svarg" shabd tha.

"svarg mein aisa kya achchha hai?" terah ne naak bhaun sikodee. "mera boodha aadamee vahaan oopar hai, aur vah dekhane aur mahakane mein bakavaas jaisa lag raha tha."

achaanak, usane aakaash mein gadagadaahat kee tez gadagadaahat sunee, jisase vah hans pada.

lagata hai mainne boodhe aadamee ko naaraaz kar diya, terah man hee man hansa. oh! use bhoonana kitana achchha hai, aur vah vaapas lad nahin sakata!

terah jaanata tha ki devata nashvar kshetr mein svatantr roop se hastakshep nahin kar sakate kyonki ve daiveey niyamon se bandhe the.

usake pita, dyoos eks maakina ne jo kiya vah abhee bhee sahaneey tha kyonki usane koee niyam nahin toda tha.

usane ek aise bachche ko chuna jo marane vaala tha aur usane terah ke kor ko ladake ke shareer mein mila diya.

devataon ko aisa karane kee anumati thee, jab tak ki ve aisa aksar nahin karate.

yahee kaaran tha ki unamen se kuchh any duniyaon se naayakon ko apanee duniya mein prakat hone ke lie bula sakate the aur unake lie ve kaam kar sakate the jo ve karane mein asamarth the - jaise apane do haathon se daanav bhagavaanon ko maarana.

svarg kee sair ko ek achchhee moovament takaneek maana ja sakata hai kyonki yah svarg ke vibhaajan ke saath sangat thee.

phir bhee, isane samasya ko pooree tarah se theek nahin kiya.

adhik se adhik, yah keval terah kee nazar mein hee sveekaary tha. beshak, leventis paitriaark ko isake lie doshee nahin thaharaaya ja sakata.

solatera se kaushal aur kaushal pustaken praapt karana aasaan kaam nahin tha.

choonki bhikhaaree chayanakarta nahin ho sakate the, isalie unhonne moovament takaneek ko chuna jo kuchh had tak unake parivaar kee talavaar kala ka samarthan karatee thee.

terah kee pasand, itaranal bled, ek divy gred takaneek thee jo svarg ke vibhaajan ke saath bahut sangat thee.

yah na keval joradaar prahaar karata tha, balki isake saath moovament takaneek ka apana set bhee aata tha, jisase isaka upayogakarta ek hee samay mein tezee se aage badh sakata tha aur tezee se prahaar kar sakata tha.

lekin is takaneek ka upayog karane ke lie ek sakht aavashyakata thee.

upayogakarta mein dard ke prati uchch sahanasheelata honee chaahie.

is takaneek ko nishpaadit karane se isake upayogakarta ke shareer par bahut adhik bojh padata tha. keval ve log jinhonne apanee shaareerik shakti aur sahanashakti ko bahut seema tak prashikshit kiya tha, ve hee is takaneek ka upayog karane mein saksham the.

saubhaagy se, unake pita ek maasokist the - yaanee, koee aisa vyakti jisane apane shareer ko charam seema tak prashikshit kiya tha.

vaastav mein, svarg ke vibhaajan mein mahaarat haasil karane vaale sabhee logon ke paas ek majaboot shareer hona aavashyak tha. is takaneek ke lie unhen apane dushmanon ke kareeb jaana padata tha, isalie ve apane lakshy par vaar karane se pahale hee ghaayal ho jaate the.

yahee kaaran tha ki terah ko bharosa tha ki agar leventis parivaar ke kulapati ne apane pita ko shaitaan ke saath dekha to ve nishchit roop se ghaayal ho jaenge.
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adhyaay 16: terah kee vyaktigat divy gred takaneek [bhaag 1]

"main ab ja raha hoon," geraald ne apanee patnee ko choomane se pahale kaha. "bachchon ka khyaal rakhana, aur mujhe bahut yaad mat karana." "saavadhaan rahana," elesiya ne use vaapas chooma. "hamaare paas surakshit vaapas aana." "main aaoonga. main vaada karata hoon." "mamm." apanee patnee ko alavida kahane ke baad, geraald ne bhee apane bachchon ko ek-ek karake gale lagaaya aur chooma. jab vah terah ko choomane vaala tha, to paanch varsheey remee ne dhaal ke roop mein istemaal kiya, jisase geraald hans pada. phir usane apanee sabase chhotee betee ko uthaaya aur usake gaalon ko do baar chooma. remee ne bhee aisa hee kiya, jisase geraald ko usakee yaad aa gaee. "chinta mat karo, paapa," terah ne kaha. "jab tak tum door ho main parivaar kee raksha karoonga." geraald ne apane bete ke baalon ko sahalaane se pahale asahaay hokar apana sir hilaaya, jisane use pareshaan kar diya. "main sabako tumhaare havaale karata hoon, siyyon," geraald ne kaha. "jab tak main jaoon, unaka khyaal rakhana."

"beshak. jitana ho sake utane jinn aur maajin kor ghar laana sunishchit karen. saath hee, kuchh raakshas bhaagon ko ghar laana na bhoolen. main unaka achchhe se upayog karoonga."

"theek hai." geraald ne apanee pyaaree betee ko neeche rakhane se pahale sir hilaaya. "main ja raha hoon, sab log."

geraald ne us chhote se pravesh dvaar mein pravesh kiya jise usane apane ghar ke andar sthaapit karane ke lie kameeshan kiya tha taaki vah aur elesiya apanee ichchhaanusaar aa-ja saken.

yah sthaapana bahut mahangee thee, lekin phir bhee jode ne ise poora karane ka phaisala kiya.

agar geraald solatera jaana chaahata tha, to use shahar ke kendr mein sthit pravesh dvaar ka upayog karana hoga, jo kendr sarakaar ka tha.

use teleeporteshan get ka upayog karane ke lie shulk dena hoga, aur solatera se apane saath ghar vaapas lae gae sabhee sansaadhanon ka bhee nireekshan karana hoga.

get ko parivahan ke saadhan ke roop mein istemaal karane vaale har vyakti ko apanee loot ka 20% bhugataan karana padata tha, jo ki geraald aur elesiya taalana chaahate the.

keval kendreey sarakaar ke lie kaam karane vaale logon ko is niyam se chhoot thee, jo vaandarars ko apane raink mein bhartee karane ka unaka tareeka bhee tha.

paanch samraat kulon aur das pratishthit parivaaron ke paas bhee aisee hee vyavastha thee.

un sabhee ne apane-apane getave surakshit kar lie the, jisase unhen solatera aur isake vipareet yaatra karane kee anumati milatee thee. beshak, unake sahayogee aur adheenasth bhee shulk se mukt the.

geraald kee maan ne apane pati se geraald ko ek chhota sa getave banaane kee anumati dene kee vinatee kee thee, jisase mutthee bhar log pravesh kar saken.

usaka tark saral tha. haalaanki use asveekaar kar diya gaya tha, geraald ka upanaam abhee bhee leventis tha.

agar unake antim naam vaale kisee vyakti se kendreey sarakaar aur any parivaaron ke getave ka upayog karane ke lie pravesh aur nikaas shulk ka bhugataan karane ke lie kaha jaata, to ve duniya bhar mein hansee ka paatr ban jaate.

ant mein, leventis kabeele ke kulapati ne anichchha se sahamati vyakt kee, lekin unhonne geraald aur elesiya ko getave banaane ka kharch uthaane ke lie baadhy kiya, unhen koee chhoot nahin dee.

beshak, in getave mein pravesh kie bina solatera jaane ke any tareeke bhee the.

lekin aisa karana ek jua tha.

vaandarars ke roop mein, unake paas duniya ke beech jaane aur solatera aur painjiya mein prakat hone kee kshamata thee. lekin ve jin sthaanon par dikhaee dete the ve pooree tarah se yaadrchchhik the.

agar geraald solatera mein kisee any sthaan par dikhaee deta, jisase vah parichit nahin tha, to use tab tak apane dam par jeevit rahana hoga jab tak ki vah ek getave nahin dhoondh leta jo use vaapas ghar le jae.

isee tarah, agar vah getave ka upayog kie bina painjiya lautata, to ek mauka tha ki vah badakismatee se un bhoomiyon mein paida ho jaata, jo pahale se hee jinn dvaara jeet lee gaee theen.

agar aisa hua, to vah barbaad ho gaya.

sankshep mein, getave yaatra karane aur surakshit roop se ek nishchit sthaan par pahunchane ka ek saadhan the.

sach kaha jae to painjiya par jo pahalee peedhee ke getave dikhaee die, ve vahee the jinaka istemaal log pahale karate the.

haalaanki, jaise-jaise log majaboot hote gae, unaka laalach bhee badhata gaya.

kendr sarakaar ne in getave ko jabt kar liya aur un tak pahunch par ekaadhikaar kar liya.

yah bhee kaha ja sakata hai ki kendr sarakaar, samraat kulon aur das pratishthit parivaaron ke svaamitv vaale sabhee getave hamaare paas the.
 
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adhyaay 17: terah kee vyaktigat divy gred takaneek [bhaag 2]

ekamaatr jaadoo jise da van aur laaplaas deman ne usake upayog ke lie sveekrt kiya tha, vah tha roon jaadoo. vah is anoothee kshamata ka upayog isake madhyavartee raink tak kar sakata tha, jo itana bura nahin tha.

roon jaadoo ka upayog karane ka bas ek bada nukasaan tha, vah yah ki isamen bahut saare sansaadhanon kee khapat hotee thee. bahut saare sansaadhan!

choonki mera shareer abhee bhee yuva hai, aur main bhaaree hathiyaar nahin utha sakata, isalie main pahale phenkane aur shooting takaneekon mein mahaarat haasil karoonga, terah ne socha. chaakoo phenkane, patthar phenkane, gulel, bhaala, krosabo aur dhanush ke lie, yah behatar hai ki main pahale maarshal takaneek, cheep shot saavant ka adhyayan karoon.

terah ko yah maarshal takaneek vishesh roop se pasand thee kyonki usake pichhale mejabaanon mein se ek cheep shot saavant tha.

kameena hamesha apane shastraagaar mein sabase ishtatam hathiyaar ka upayog karake apane dushmanon par door se hamala karata tha. agar lakshy door hota, to vah dhanush, krosabo aur gulel ka istemaal karata.

madhy-dooree ke lie, vah bhaala ka istemaal karata.

kam dooree ke lie, vah phenkane vaale chaakoo, daart aur patthar ka istemaal karata.

are, ek samay to aisa bhee tha jab usake host ne baunon ko uthaaya aur unhen top ke gole kee tarah phenk diya, jisase usake paksh ke kareebee ladaakoo ladaake apane lakshyon ke kareeb aur vyaktigat roop se pahunch gae.

beshak, usaka pichhala host aisa kaaranaama karane mein saksham hone ka ekamaatr kaaran yah tha ki vah do meetar lamba barbar tha jise talavaaron aur kulhaadiyon ka upayog karake ladana pasand nahin tha.

yah ladane ka ek bahut hee besharm aur ganda tareeka tha, jo terah ke lie ekadam sahee tha, jisakee nishpaksh aur khule taur par ladane kee koee yojana nahin thee.

nihatthe yuddh ke lie, main beest haart drankan phist chunoonga. terah ne man hee man hansate hue kaha. main isamen galat nahin ho sakata. meree pahalee pasand northastaar kee mutthee hogee, lekin kopeerait bhagavaan mujhe maut ke ghaat utaar denge, isalie main isaka istemaal nahin kar sakata.

bhikshu varg kee nihatthe yuddh takaneekon mein, sharaabee mutthee abhee bhee unake shastraagaar mein sabase apratyaashit aur kashtaprad maarshal takaneek thee.

bestiyal strenth kee shakti ke saath, jo log yah maanane kee galatee karenge ki terah bina kisee hathiyaar ke ek aasaan vikalp hai, ve khud ko bhool jaenge, isase pahale ki ve jaanate ki unhen kya maara gaya tha.

nazadeekee yuddh hathiyaaron ke lie, main ek talavaar ka upayog karane ke bajaay chhotee talavaaron aur khanjaron ke saath dohare hathiyaar chalaana pasand karata hoon, terah ne muskuraate hue kaha.

usane is ladaee shailee ko kyon chuna?

kyonki yah kool tha!

dohare hathiyaar chalaane se koee vyakti ek visheshagy ladaakoo kee tarah dikhata hai, aur terah shaant aur bhayabheet dikhana chaahata tha.

saath hee, jab usane talavaar se sistam bhagavaan se ladaee kee, to yah kaam nahin kiya.

choonki aisa hee tha, isalie usane is baar ek alag shailee chunane ka phaisala kiya, taaki jab ve phir se milen, to cheejen alag tarah se samaapt hon.

hamm... main analimited bled varks naamak maarshal takaneek ka upayog kar sakata hoon. lekin yah bhee kopeerait bhagavaan ka hai, isalie agar main isaka upayog karata hoon to mujhe ek straik milegee. terah ne badabadaaya. mujhe lagata hai ki main raitiyas sentinal ke lie samajhauta karoonga.

raitiyas sentinal maarshal takaneek ek aakraamak aur rakshaatmak maarshal takaneek donon thee.

haalaanki, yah sabase adhik chamakatee thee jab isaka upayog karane vaala vyakti vaimbres ya gauntalet pahanata tha.

raitiyas sentinals ne is maarshal takaneek mein raksha ko shaamil kiya tha, jisamen vaimbres aur gauntalet ko dhaal ke roop mein upayog kiya jaata tha.

is yuddh shailee ke saath, yuddh ke maidaan par dhaal le jaane kee koee aavashyakata nahin thee, jisase yah ek bahut hee bahumukhee yuddh shailee ban gaee.

beshak, vaimbres ko vishesh roop se vaar ka saamana karane ke lie taiyaar kiya jaana tha, jo aapaatakaal ke samay dhaal ke roop mein kaam karata tha.

saubhaagy se, terah ke lohaar gyaan aur roon jaadoo ke saath, vah in hathiyaaron ko banaane mein saksham hoga, jisaka upayog vah apane teesare bhatakane ke dauraan kar sakega.

pahale bhatakane aur doosare bhatakane ke dauraan, chune hue log solatera mein koee bhee hathiyaar, kavach, sahaayak upakaran ya kalaakrtiyaan laane mein asamarth honge.

is duniya par shaasan karane vaale sarvashaktimaan praanee nahin chaahate the ki koee bhee vyakti shuroo se hee bahut bada laabh praapt kare, khaasakar ve jo shaktishaalee aur prabhaavashaalee parivaaron se paida hue the.

jo log jeevit rahane mein kaamayaab rahe
 

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adhyaay 18: kya main usakee jagah jaoon?



"ee!"

"achchha, tum bahut badhiya kar rahee ho, remee."

"ee!"

elesiya ko samajh nahin aa raha tha ki use hansana chaahie ya rona chaahie, kyonki vah apanee sabase chhotee betee ko tharteen dvaara kiking moov sikhaate hue dekh rahee thee.

paanch varsheey bachche ne is takaneek ko natakraikar kik kaha, aur vah do varsheey ladakee ko aisa hee moov sikha raha tha, jise vah peechhe se sahaara de raha tha.

chhota ladaka apanee bahan kee baahon ko sahaara ke roop mein pakade hue tha, jabaki bahan apane daahine pair se kik maar rahee thee, use jitana sambhav ho sake utana oopar utha rahee thee.

"ee!"

"achchhee ladakee!"

"ee!"

ise aur sahan na kar paane ke kaaran, sundar mahila muskuraate hue donon bachchon ke paas pahunchee.

"siyon, kya remee ke lie prashikshan lena abhee bahut jaldee nahin hai?" elesiya ne poochha.

"vaastav mein nahin," tharteen ne uttar diya. "jitanee jaldee vah is moov mein mahaarat haasil kar legee, badee hone par yah utana hee prabhaavee hoga. theek hai, remee?"

"ee!"

javaab dene ke bajaay, chhotee ladakee ne ek baar aur laat maaree, jisase elesiya asahaay hokar apana sir hilaane lagee.

achaanak, ek halkee hava chalee, jisase terah aur usakee maan bhaunchakke rah gae.

ek kshan baad, batalar soot pahane ek adhed umr ka aadamee unase kaee meetar door dikhaee diya aur usane sammaanapoorvak apana sir jhukaaya.

batalar ne maafee maangate hue kaha, "mujhe bina batae aane ke lie khed hai, ledee elesiya." "main saamane ke daravaaze se aana chaahata tha, lekin main apane aane ka koee nishaan nahin chhodana chaahata tha. mujhe ummeed hai ki aapako koee aapatti nahin hogee."

leventis parivaar kee mukhy shaakha mein seva karane vaale batalar ko dekhakar elesiya ka chehara naram pad gaya.

"hans, kaaphee samay ho gaya hai," elesiya ne muskuraate hue javaab diya. "agar aap mere pati kee talaash kar rahe hain, to mujhe dar hai ki vah abhee solatera ke lie nikal gaya hai. vah ek ya do maheene tak vaapas nahin aaega."

sundar mahila kee baaten sunakar hans ke hothon se ek aah nikal gaee.

"... mujhe mat batao ki yang maastar geraald is saal phir se bhaagane kee yojana bana raha hai?" hans ne poochha.

"mujhe dar hai ki vaastav mein aisa hee hai." elesiya ne aah bharee. "vah saal ke is samay ke aasapaas nikalata hai."

"aur yahaan mujhe laga ki main jaldee aa gaya hoon, lekin mujhe abhee bhee der ho rahee hai aisa lagata hai."

"achchha, agale saal behatar kismat, mujhe lagata hai?"

leventis parivaar ke batalar ne apanee naak ke pul ko chutakee se dabaaya, avishvasaneey roop se niraash mahasoos kar raha tha.

agar vah kuchh din pahale aaya hota, to vah apane yang maastar se vyaktigat roop se baat kar sakata tha, jise usake niyokta ne asveekaar kar diya tha.

"kya kuchh gadabad hai, hans?" elesiya ne poochha.

aamataur par, jaise hee use pata chalata ki geraald ghar par nahin hai, vah kuchh vinamrata ke baad turant chala jaata. lekin batalar ulajhan mein lag raha tha, jisase elesiya ko aashchary ho raha tha ki kya leventis nivaas mein kuchh gambheer hua tha.

shaayad, vah jo soch rahee thee usaka anumaan lagaane mein saksham hone ke kaaran, hans ne apana sir hilaaya.

"yah utana gambheer nahin hai jitana aap sochatee hain, ledee elesiya," hans ne kaha. "bas itana hai ki ledee kailista ka svaasthy haal hee mein bahut achchha nahin raha hai. main yuva maastar ko paitriaark ke janmadin samaaroh ke dauraan, thode samay ke lie hee sahee, unase milane ke lie manaana chaahata tha."

"oh, priy. kya meree saas beemaar hain?" elesiya ne poochha.

"agar vah beemaar bhee hain, to bhee vah kuchh nahin kahengee," hans ne javaab diya. "aap jaanate hain ki vah kabhee-kabhee kitanee jiddee ho sakatee hain. hamesha majaboot hone ka dikhaava karatee hain. lekin unake saath kaee saal bitaane ke baad, main bata sakata tha ki jab bhee vah theek mahasoos nahin karatee theen.

"haalaanki unake shareer mein jahar daba diya gaya hai, phir bhee yah pooree tarah se theek nahin hua hai. har gujarate saal ke saath yah badatar hota ja raha hai, khaasakar jab se yang maastar chale gae hain."

elesiya pareshaan mahasoos kar rahee thee kyonki vah aur geraald kee maan bahut achchhee tarah se saath rahate the.

vaastav mein, yah ledee kailista hee thee jisane use apane bete ke saamane apanee bhaavanaon ko kabool karane ke lie protsaahit kiya tha, jise ladaee ke alaava kisee aur cheez kee paravaah nahin thee.

yah sunakar ki usakee saas abhee bhee jahar ke dushprabhaavon ko sahan kar rahee thee, jo use apane pati ke saath jaane par unake aayaamee chhaapon mein se ek se mila tha, usaka dil dukh gaya.

"isake bajaay ek pratinidhi ko bhejane ke baare mein kya khyaal hai?"

ek shaant aavaaz unake donon kaanon tak pahunchee, jisase donon ne paanch saal ke ladake kee or dekha jo apanee bahan ka haath pakadakar apanee maan kee or ja raha tha.

"choonki pitaajee nahin ja sakate, to main unakee or se kyon na jaoon?" terah ne poochha. "main bhee jaoonga
 

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adhyaay 19: kya galat ho sakata hai?


do saptaah baad...

"zaayan, kya tum is baare mein nishchit ho?" elesiya ne chintit hokar apane bete ke kapade theek karate hue poochha, yah sunishchit karate hue ki vah apane daada aur daadee ke saamane achchha dikhe.

"haan." terah ne sir hilaaya. "zyaada mat socho, maan."

"jab tum vahaan ho, to krpaya apane shishtaachaar ka dhyaan rakho. logon se badatameezee se baat mat karo, theek hai?"

"theek hai."

"aagyaakaaree bano aur haan ke nirdeshon ka paalan karo," elesiya ne chidhaate hue kaha. "krpaya, logon se badatameezee se baat mat karo, theek hai?"

"kitana badatameez," terah ne bhaunhen chadhaeen. "tumane do baar badatameezee ka zikr kiya, maan. mujhe nahin lagata ki main badatameez hoon."

"zaayan, tum badon se aise baat karate ho jaise ve tumhaare baraabar ke hon. yah badatameezee hai."

"tum sahee kah rahee ho, maan. mujhe unase aise baat karanee chaahie jaise ve tuchchh keede hon."

"... jo mainne pahale kaha tha use bhool jao," elesiya ne utsukata se kaha. "bas thoda vinamr bano, theek hai?"

terah ne sir hilaaya. "chinta mat karo, maan. main apana sarvashreshth vyavahaar karoonga."

"achchha." elesiya ne apane bete ke pratibimb ko aaeene mein dekhate hue muskuraee.

haalaanki zaayan abhee bhee chhota tha, lekin usaka achchha dikhana pahale se hee spasht tha, jo usake aur geraald ke beech paida hue kisee vyakti se apekshit tha.

vah apane pita kee tarah dikhata tha, sivaay usakee haree aankhon ke jo use apanee maan se viraasat mein milee thee.

yah sunishchit karane ke baad ki usake kapadon mein kuchh bhee gadabad nahin hai, elesiya ne use living room mein le jaane se pahale usake daahine gaal ko chooma, jahaan hans intazaar kar raha tha.

"vah lagabhag maastar geraald jaisa dikhata hai jab vah apanee umr ka tha," hans ne tippanee kee. "mujhe eemaanadaar hona padega. shuroo mein, main use apane saath paartee mein laane ke baare mein sanshay mein tha, taaki meree ledee ka mood theek ho jae. lekin, ab use dekhane ke baad, mujhe yakeen hai ki meree ledee use paartee mein apane saath laane ke lie mujhe dhanyavaad dengee... maastar kya sochenge, is baare mein main baad mein sochoongee."

"tumhaare lie yah mushkil hai, hans," elesiya ne daya se kaha.

"sabase pahale aur sabase mahatvapoorn, meree vaphaadaaree ledee kailista ke prati hai," hans ne drdhata se uttar diya. "bhale hee mujhe baad mein thoda kasht uthaana pade, lekin yah isake laayak hoga."

terah ne baatacheet sunee aur kuchh dilachasp baaten samajheen.

sabase pahale aur sabase mahatvapoorn, haalaanki hans leventis hausahold mein batalar ke roop mein kaaryarat tha, aisa lag raha tha ki vah apane maalik aarthar leventis kee tulana mein apanee maalakin ledee kailista ko praathamikata deta tha.

shaayad main isaka upayog kar sakata hoon. terah ne aantarik roop se muskuraate hue batalar ke peechhe-peechhe chalana shuroo kiya, jo use leventis nivaas par le jaega.

eldebaaran mahaadveep par kendreey sarakaar, ek samraat kabeele aur teen pratishthit parivaaron ka sanyukt roop se shaasan tha.

chaar any samraat kabeelon ke saath-saath any pratishthit parivaaron kee "shaakhaen" theen jinhen eldebaaran mahaadveep ke bheetar kaam karane kee anumati thee.

yah sabhee mahaadveepon ke lie vyavastha thee, jisaka arth tha ki leventis parivaar ke paas any mahaadveepon par bhee any shaakha parivaar the.

hans apanee khud kee kaar lekar aae, jis par savaar hokar ve apane gantavy tak jaenge.

pahale, vah ek limosin laana chaahata tha, lekin usake istemaal ke lie koee atirikt kaar upalabdh nahin thee kyonki ve pahale se hee mukhy aur shaakha parivaaron ke sadasyon dvaara aarakshit theen.

"yuva maastar siyon, mujhe yakeen hai ki ledee elesiya ne aapako pahale hee yah bata diya hai, lekin krpaya, mukhy nivaas par pahunchate hee apana sarvashreshth vyavahaar karen," hans ne apane riyar-vyoo mirar mein paanch varsheey bachche ko dekhate hue kaha.

"samajh gaya, hans," terah ne uttar diya. "tum bahut chinta karane vaale ho. mera matalab hai, kya galat ho sakata hai?"

"yuva maastar, krpaya, ise ashubh na maanen."

"tsk."

batalar ne asahaay hokar apana sir hilaaya aur apana dhyaan vaapas sadak par lagaaya. is vishesh kaaryakram mein keval leventis parivaar hee bhaag nahin lega.

paanch samraat kulon aur nau any pratishthit parivaaron ke pratinidhi bhee samaaroh mein upasthit honge.

jab hans is baare mein gaharaee se soch raha tha ki leventis parivaar dvaara zaayon ke saath kaisa vyavahaar kiya jaega, to chhote ladake ne achaanak usase ek savaal poochha.

"mujhe batao, hans. meree daadee kee beemaaree ko theek karane ke lie tum kya tyaag karane ko taiyaar ho?"

"yuva maastar, kya tum kah rahe ho ki tumhaare paas meree mahila ke zahar ko theek karane ka koee tareeka hai?"

"yah tumhaare uttar par nirbhar karega
 

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