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Dev ko sab se pehle romance kiske saath karna chahiye...?

  • Sonal

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Previously….

Naidu bhi ab samajh chuka tha ki yaha rehna kitna khatarnak ho sakta hai...Mr. Khatri use nahi chodne wala...woh haath dho kar uske pichhe pada hai…

Naidu : Riya...sahi bol...hum yaha nahi reh sakte...Sukun se toh kabhi nahi..aur mujhe sukun se rehna hai...mein sab intezam karta hun...STARCOMM chodne ki baat par shayad sab maan jaye aye bina dare yeh kaam kare…


Riya : hmm..Ab mein ja rahi hun...Mujhe kuch saman lana hai...tum aage ki taiyari karo…

Riya wahan se chali jati hai aur Naidu apne dost se baat karne lagta hai….




Continue…

LOCATION : ETERNAL CITY

Dev Sonal ko milne ke liye NEW CITY ja raha tha...Dr. khan ne usse milne ke liye mana kiya tha...isliye Dev ek hafte baad wahan jaa raha tha…

Raste me usse disha aur raj milte hai jo ped ke niche baithe baatein kar rahe the...disha dev ko aate dekh khadi hoti hai…


Disha : Dev…!!! Kya tum Sonal se milne ja rahe ho…?

Dev ki nazare Raj par thi lekin uss ke baad disha ki taraf mod di…

Dev : han Disha...bahut din hue usse mile hue..kya tum bhi chalna chahogi…?

Disha : nahi tum jao...mein baad me jaati hun...ab mujhe scouting ke liye nikalna hai...suna hai bahut se BIOBOTs ETERNAL CITY ki taraf aate dikhai de rahe bhai…unn sab ka count mr. Singh ko dena hai...

Dev : theek hai...apna khayal rakhna…kya raj bhi tumhare saath ja raha hai…?

Disha : han woh mere saath aaa raha hai...kuch kaam tha kya…

Dev : nahi...bas aise hi pucha...ok bye...see you...

Disha : usse meri taraf se hi keh dena…

Dev : wait...If you dont mind kya mein bhi tumhare saath aa sakta hun kya...Mujhe yahan se thoda dur jana hai…

Disha : Is everything ok..?

Dev : Ohh...yes..sab theek hai bas thoda man ko shant karna tha...Aaj kal kuch jyada hi complicate hota ja raha hai…

Disha ; agar aisi baat hai toh main ruk jati hun..Tum Sonal se mil kar aao...Tab tak mein sab taiyyari karti hun…

Dev : ok..Mein abhi aata hun..

Disha : Ok..take your time Dev..

Dev wahan se aage chala jata hai...Mr. Singh apne naye ghar ke saamne baithe the...Saath mein kuch log bhi the...unn me Mr. Ratan bhi the…

Dev uke p[as jakar unki baatein sun ne lagta hai...Mr. Sing usse dekh kar ek smile dete hai...aur apne baat jari rakhte hai…

Mr. Singh : Kaisi lagi taiyyari...Dost..?

Mr. Ratan : Singh ji aap ne sach me kamal kar diya...Yeh jagah sach me gajab lag rahi hai...aap ne toh pura naksha hi badal diya iss jagah ka…

Mr. Singh : Thank you..Yeh sab aap ki wajah se hi possible hua hai..Nahi toh mere log aaj bhi ghar ki talash me bhatakte rehte…

Mr. Ratan : Mana ki maine aap ki madat ki lekin yeh baat baar baar bol kar mujhe sharminda na kare..Apne bhi toh hamari madad ki thi...toh badle mein humne bhi ki...Its not a big deal…

Mr. Singh : Toh theek hai aaj ke baad aap ko pareshan nahi karunga...hahaha…

Mr. Ratan : haha…

Tabhi Mr. Ratan ki nazar piche khare Dev par padti hai..

Mr. Ratan : Are Dev...Come here beta..Waha khade kyun ho..?

Dev : Aap logon ko disturb nahi karna chahta tha...isliye….

Mr. Ratan : Don't worry…!! Come and sit here…

Dev : Nahi sir..mein theek hun…

Mr. Ratan : Tumhe pata hai Dev Mr. Siddharth aur Aasha kafi khush hai….Thanks to you beta...Tumne unki zindagi me jaan bhar di hai...Nahin toh woh bas ek zinda lashein hi the...Mr. Siddharth ka toh theek tha lekin Aasha..usne toh jeene ki tamanna hai chhod di thi...tum ne sab badal diya Dev..Thank you…

Dev Mr. Ratan ki baaton par kuch nahi bolta woh ek baar Mr. Singh ki taraf dekhta hai...Lekin unki taraf dekh kar usse samajh aata hai ki unhone bhi yeh baat maan li hai ki Aasha aur Siddharth hi uss ke parents hai...Woh dev ki taraf dekh ha mein sar hila rahe the...Smile ke saath…

Dev : I’ll try to make everyone Happy...That's all…

Mr. Ratan : Yahi tumhare sanskar bolte hai... Dev...Kafi acche sanskar diye hai tumhare maa baap ne….

Dev ko Rajesh ki baaton se Raja-Rani ki yaad aati hai..Use yakin nahi hota ki itne dinon se woh apni TALAASH kaise rok sakta hai…? Kya sab ho gaya…? Aasha-Sid ke milte hi sab khatam hua…? Aise kaise ho sakta hai…? Kyun mein apne laksh se bhatak raha hun…? Kya meri talaash sach me khatam hui….Lekin Maa ka kya...mujhe uski talaash jari rakhni hogi….

Mr. Singh : Dev...Dev….? Dev…!!!

Mr. Singh ke aawaj se Dev apne khayalon se baahar aata hai…

Dev : h..ha...han baba boliye…

Mr. Singh : Are beta kaha kho gaye..? Mr. Ratan kuch puch rahe hai..

Dev : Kuch nahi baba...bas aise hi...

Mr. Ratan : koi baat nahi...abhi mein chalta hun...Radha aue Bani se milna hai…

MR. Singh : Theek hai..Phir milte hai…

Mr. RAtan : Jarur…

Itna keh kar woh waha se nikal jate hai…


Dev : Baba...Sonal…

Mr. Singh : Woh andar hai…

Yeh baat kehte hue MR. Singh ki aawaj bhar aayi…

Dev : Kya hua baba..Sab theek toh hai na…?

Mr. Singh us ka jawan diye bina waqhan se chale jaate hai...Dev ko thoda ajeeb laga...baba ne bina baat liye yahan se kyun chale gaye…? Kahin Sonal ko kuch hua toh nahin…?

Yeh sochte hue Dev angar chala jata hai…

Ek kamre me Sonal bed par leti hui thi...jiski aankhe dev ki tarf hi thi...Uss ke haath pair kaanp rahe tha...dev ne sonal ko iss haalat me kabhi dekha nahi tha ...yeh dekh kar sonal par bahut taras aa raha tha…

Uske bed ke baju ek chair par Dr Payal (Sonal ki badi behan) baithi hui thi…Dev ko andar aata hue dekh woh khadi hoti hai...uske gale laga kar rone lagti hai…

Dev : Payal kya baat hai...Sonal aise kyun kaamp rahi hai…?

Dev ki baaton se Payal aur rone lagti hai…

Dev : Baat kya hai Payal..? Please mujhe batao…

Payal : Dev...Sonal ki body paralyse ho gayi hai…

Dev : Kya..? Kaise…? Operation toh successful hua tha na...Toh phir

Payal : operation toh sab theek hua tha...lekin jab sonal hosh me aayi toh woh apne organs ko feel nahi kar pa rahi thi...Dr. khan ne phir Electric Shock treatment deni jaruri samjhi...aur dekho na meri sonal ka kya hua….

Dev : toh tum yeh keh rahi ho ki yeh sab Dr. Khan ki wajah se hua hai..?

PAyal : Nahi Dev...Iss me uski koi galti nahi hai… mein khud Dr Khan ke saath waha thi...Mein Doctor ki jagah rehti toh shayad yahi karti...Sonal agar uss halat mein rehti toh abb tak zinda nahi rehti...Shock treatment ki wajah se uss ke saare organs work toh kar rahe hai lekin abhi tak puri tarah se work nahi kar pa rahe…

Dev : Toh woh abb khatre se bahar toh hai na …?

Payal : han woh theek to hai...Lekin usse iss halat me dekha nahi ja raha...Pata nahi kab puri tarah se theek hogi…theek hona sirf uske haath me hai dev...aur Tumhe pata hai woh tumhe dekh aur sun bhi sakti hai….? Lekin nervous system damage hone se woh kuch kar nahi sakti...

Dev : Yen to acchi baat hai…

Dev sonal ke paas bed par baithta hai...uss ka haath apne haath me le kar woh kehta hai…

Dev : Sonal...Fighter Queen..tumhe aise dekhne me kisi ko bhi acha nahi lag raha...Please tum jaldi theek ho jao...Baba ko aise dekhna accha nahi lag raha hai..Please tum jaldi theek ho jao...Hum sab tumhara wait kar rahe hai…

Yeh sab sun kar wahan khadi payal ki aankho me aansu aa gaye..

Payal : Kitni aasani se samjh dete ho…?Thank you...Yeh sab sun kar woh jaldi se theek hogi..haha...Mujhe tum dono ki dosti par naaz hai Dev…aur jo bhi sonal ne kiya hai uske baad bhi yeh saari baate bolna bahut mushkil hai...hai na…? Meri baat alag hai…
Woh meri behan hai...lekin….

Payal ko beech me hi kaat kar…

Dev : Payal...Woh meri Achi dost hai...Shuruaat se...Agar woh kuch galat karein toh mujhe hi usse sudharna hoga na...yahi toh dost karte hai...Rasta dikhana….Aur Jo bhi Sonal ne kiya woh sab Anjane me kiya..Iss baat par uske saath bane rishte todna galat hoga... Sonal ek zariya tha STARCOMM walon ka...Agar tumhe koi patthar mare toh tum patthar ko dosh toh nahi doge na...iss matter me sonal literally patthar thi..Woh device lagane se woh ek Bejan patthar hi thi... jisse acche bure ki samajh nahi thi...Kar toh koi aur raha tha na...Tum samajh rahi ho na...

Payal : Sach me tum ek dusre ko bahut acche se samajh lete ho...Aur tumhari baat se sabse jyada mujhe khushi hui hai...ki tum sonal ko doshi nahi maante...Thank you…

Payal yeh kehte hue aansu bahane lagti hai...

Dev : Payal tum bhi ek Doctor hi ho...agar tum iss ka khayal rakh rahi ho toh sonal jaldi se theek hogi hi...Aur aise rona ek doctor ko shobha nahi deta...Cheer up..Mujhe issi baat se matlab hai ki Soanl ab theek hai....

Payal : galat kiya STARCOMM walon ne hamari Sonal ke saath…Mujhe pata hai ki tum pehle se STARCOM ke khilaf jung ladh rahe ho...Lekin promise me...Jis ne bhi hamare Bunker ka woh haal kiya hai usse aur Sonal ke iss halat ke pichhe ka shakhs...unn dono ko tum chhodoge nahi...

Dev : Tumhe nahi pata payal... jitna gussa tumhe hai na...uss kai guna gussa mujhe STARCOMM par hai...bachpan me jo hua tha woh tum bhool chuki hogi lekin mein uska badla to mein lekar hi rahunga… Jisne meri maa ko mujhse alag kiya...bete ke saamne uske baap ko maar diya...uska badla mein jarur lunga...Hum sab milkar lenge…

Payal : I hope woh ghadi jaldi aaye…

Dev : i hope...lekin jab tak woh time nahi aata Payal tab tak tum wohi karo jisme tum best ho...Logo ka ailaaj...Sonal ka ilaaj…

Payal : Thank you Dev…

Dev : Abhi mujhe jaana hoga..Mein Disha ke saath Scouting ja raha hun…

Payal : Ok...Take care..Time mile toh jarur aana…

Dev : Yeh bhi koi batane ki baat hai...i’ll definitely come back payal...see you…

Dev yeh keh kar bahar aata hai..Disha uska bahar khadi wait kar rahi thi…

Dev : SOrry..Sorry..

Disha : I swear...!1 min baad aate toh mein yaha se ja chuki hoti…

Dev : Sorry bahut time liya maine...Chalo...Meri Bike…?

Disha : Tum mere saath baithoge...It’s punishment for being late…

Dev : Galati ki hai toh punishment toh milni chahiye..Chalo…

Dev Disha ki bike pe baith-ta hai... aur Sonal boke ko jungle ki aur le jati hai..saath me Raj bhi bike le kar unke pichhe piche chalta hai...Baate karte karte sab scouting ke liye nikal jate hai…




LOCATION : STARCOMM

Raka : Kya matlab hai tumhara woh bach gaye…?Kitni mushkil se hath lage the...Kaise hua yeh…?

John : Sir...MilitaryBots unka pichha kar rahe the...Aur hamari STARCOM Police bhi location pahunch rahi thi...Par jabtak police waha punch pati woh log militaryBots ko gira kar waha se bhaag gaye…

Raka : Tumhe pata bhi hai yeh sun-ne me kitna stupid lag raha hai...STARCOMM ki latest Bot version70 MilitaryBots ko do logo ne gira diya…? Bina kisi Weapons ke…? Bots kaun chala raha tha..? Use zinda rehne ki koi jarurat nahi...

Raka apni gun nikalta hai…

John : s..s...Sir..Sir...Woh AI bots ko handle kar rahi thi...Isiliye unhe bhagne ka mauka mila…

Anamika : MilitaryBots AI kab se handle karne lage…? OrdinaryBot, LabourBot ki baat alag hai lekin..MilitaryBots ko AI ke haath me dene kya jarurat thi..?

John : Ma’am Woh ek WorkerBot ne alert bheja tha..Mujhe laga ki False Alert hoga isliye maine AI ko dekhne ke liye bola...Aur jab unki identity ka pata chala toh Bots ka control maine khud hath me liya…

Raka uske paas ja kar..

Raka : aur kya kiya…? Unhe jane diya..Right…?

John : Sir Uss DROHI Riya ne unhe Hack kiya kiya tha...Aur jab mujhe samajh aaye tab tak uss ne lagaye hue LASER Bomb me sare Bots tabah ho gaye...Iss me meri koi galati nahi..Darasal Riya unn me se ek hai jinhone woh Bots banaye the...lisiliye woh aasani se hack kar payi…

Raka yeh sun kar gusse se laal hota hai...puri gun John ke andar utar kar...jor se chillata hai…

Raka : pura STARCOMM chhan maro aur mujhe woh dono la kar do...Pure STARCOMM ko Level-10 security laga do...bina permission ke kisi ko bhi bahar mat nikalne do...jo bhi dekhe usse seedha maar do...Bahut hua abb...abb dekhta hun kaise bechte hai woh log...

Raka yeh keh kar pair patakte hue bahar chala jata hai...aur saath me Anamika bhi...Bache hue saare log..apni-apni teams ko le kar security ke kamo me lag gaye...
Amazing update
 

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Ek raka pe kitna focus karte ho aap .. baaki ke kirdaar nazar nahi aate kya :D
are riya aa rahi hai sonsl ke paas, swagat ki taiyari kijiye... after all Mr singh ki hone wali bahu hai riya :lol1:


waise is shaadi se sabse zyada khush to radha hi hogi.... sochegi ki chalo bala tali :D

Naina ji Story ka main villain hai RAKA usse kaise ignore karein..? :hinthint:
sorry...So much happening with RAKA and other character are slightly idle right now....
i mean Radha aur Dev ko chhod baki saare characters par focus karke story aage nahi badh sakti...story ko pregress karne ke liye raka ka chapter aage badhana hoga... aur Radha aur Dev ki story dheere dheere aage badh toh rahi hai... :wink2:

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So sonal thik hokar bhi thik nahi ho payi but hope ki wo jald hi apne purane avtar mai ayegi fighter queen.
Finally ab kahi jakar payal ka kuch to scene aya.
Diya raj and Dev nikal chuke hai apne shikar ke liye.
Lagta hai raj and diya ki jodi banegi.
Riya ki mushkile to badti ja rahi hai dekhte hai wo kaise nikal ti hai starcom se apni Jaan raka se bacha kar.
And abhi raka ka main plan samne nahi aya hai kyunki alien ke blood ki wajah se usey aliens ke visuals dikh rahe hai ab agar ye confirm hojaye raka ke liye to aliens and earth walo se nipat ne ke liye achi tayyari karlega us visuals ki madad se.
And Dev ki Maa rani kya starcom ki giraft mai hai?
Sonal ka ab kuch keh nahi sakte...
haha Payal ka bhi part hoga...second half me...
Riya is smart girl kuch na kuch jugaad kar hi legi...
Bahut jald RAKA ka main goal saamne aa jayega... Alien blood ki wajah se uske dimag me kya naye plans aate hai...aage pata chalega...
Dev ki maa rani..?
Stay tuned to find out more (TALAASH) :hinthint:

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Sonal paralyze ho gayi yeh tow bahot bura huwa
Raka or Anamika to pagal huwe ja rehe h Riya or Naidu k bach jaane se
Itni security tigt ker di h kia dono nakal payenge ??
Badhiya shaandaar update bhai
KAise bhi kar ke unhe wahan se nikalna hai...jarur kuch jugaad karnge woh log...
Stay tuned...
Thank you Naik...:)
 

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Kaha gaye?
Waiting for an update...
Busy tha thoda bhai...
Update shortly...:)
 

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Naina ji Story ka main villain hai RAKA usse kaise ignore karein..? :hinthint:
sorry...So much happening with RAKA and other character are slightly idle right now....
i mean Radha aur Dev ko chhod baki saare characters par focus karke story aage nahi badh sakti...story ko pregress karne ke liye raka ka chapter aage badhana hoga... aur Radha aur Dev ki story dheere dheere aage badh toh rahi hai... :wink2:

Thank you for your comment...
Keep suporting...:D
Sonal aur riya ki jodi superhit hai Black_Mamba ki nazar mein :protest2:
 
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