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HI,
Bhai log ye meri peheli story hogi .abhi bhi complete draft nahini banaya hai maine par post karneka soch raha hun plz mujhe batana kaisa lag raha he ..aaj tak sirf story read kiya he . kasam se mujhe to adha function bhi nahini pata ki kaise post aur usse edit hota he .par try karne maine kya rakha he . pata bohat galtiyan hogi par aap logo mujhe bata dena plz ki kya galti he aur mujhe kya sudharni he ..
Character Introduction
Bhai log ye meri peheli story hogi .abhi bhi complete draft nahini banaya hai maine par post karneka soch raha hun plz mujhe batana kaisa lag raha he ..aaj tak sirf story read kiya he . kasam se mujhe to adha function bhi nahini pata ki kaise post aur usse edit hota he .par try karne maine kya rakha he . pata bohat galtiyan hogi par aap logo mujhe bata dena plz ki kya galti he aur mujhe kya sudharni he ..
Character Introduction
- RB (story hero.par ye alag RB he maine nahini hun .maine sirf naam laga diya apna waise bhi na hi sakal hero jaisi he na hi koi character ,comedian jada lagta hu.)
- Swati Dibang(han yehi he wo jiske liye itna lamba story likhna pad raha he i mean story heroine )
- Sushil Dibang(swati"s father , hitler sala )
- Sarita DIbang(bole toh hero ki sashumaa "honewali")
- Sachin Dibang& Sourabh Dibang( sala relation wala nahini re .Bhai log a wo bale Sala he jise dekh ke sab ku munh se sirf yehi nikalta he "chal bsdk" .unfortunately swati's brother )
- vikram(vicky, RB ka best friend kuch jada hi handsome aur utna bada wala **** bhi he apne aap ko teesmaar khan ka baap samajh ta he par hamesha moonh ki khata he )
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