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Romance TANHAI KE SAHARE

fnd, this is my 1st story to bataiye mujhe kya imrovement karni he .and plz rate my writing


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Rbcl.007

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Ye update shayad unexpected laga ho kai readers ko, par jaisa bhi he, shuruat me he ek turnover jaisa he :reading1: keep writing dude :good:
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Samne wohi char aadmi khade the jin maine se do wohi the jinse usne lift mangi thi . apne aap ko iss halat maine aur unlogon ke haton maine daru ki bottel dekh ke usse pata chal jaata he uske sath kya hone wala he . wo bohat minnate karti he ki usse chod diya jaye . wo chilati he kasmaine deti he .roti he bilbilati he par koi faida nahini aaj uski awaj sun ne ko wanha koi nahini tha wo charon ne wari wari se uski izzat ki chithde uda diye . wo rotee rahi ek pal to aisa aagaya ki usski awaj nikalna hi band hogayee .shayad wo apne kisamt ko maan liya tha .

Par shayad ye uski bbhul thi kyun ki ab wo darinde usse chilane ko bol rahe thi aaj uski dard unhe maja derahi thi .phir najaane kitne cigarette se jalne ki nishan blade se katne ki nishan uske sarir maine padte gaye .Do din tak uske sath jo hua shayad jahnum maine bhi aisa kisike sath na hota hoga . uske baad wo log usse leke kanhi phek ke chale gaye .


Aaj phir se wohi ho rah tha jo ek baar ho chuka tha anjane sadak maine raat ki andhere maine aankh khulna par iss baar swati ke sarir maine itni taqat hi nahini thi ki wo apne aankh bhi khol sake aise hi pade pade ghante bit gaye abtoh wo jine ki umeeed bhi chod chuki thi .ghant baad wo ek faisla leti he ki ab wo jeeke kya karegi faida kya ab ye jindegi ka ab wo yeh jindegi ko khatam kar degi .jis sharir maine abhi aankh bhi kholne ki himmat nahini thi ab wo hilne lagi thi “ pata nahini jindegi jeene ke liye logon ke pass jo taqat nahini hoti he wo jindegi ko khatam karne ke time aajati he “ . kafi koshis ke bad wo uth ke beth jaati he par uske munh se nikli chikh us sunsan sadak aur aas paas ki khet maine thodi der ke liye shanti bhang kar leti he . uski vagina maine itna dard ho rah tha ki ussse beth nahini jaa raha tha .

Par kya hena ab uske dilmiane sharir ke har pida ko khatam karne ka raast aa chuka th auske samne kuch der ki taqleef kuch nahini yehi soch ke pass ki ek ped ki sahara lete hue wo khadi hoti he .

Ab uski bas ek hi maqsad tha kaise bhi karke pass ke road tak ponhachna aur aati hui koi gadi ke samne apni iss jindegi ko bhet chada dena .


Kafi kas-ma-kas ke baad wo road taq ponhach jaati he tabhi usse ek car aati hui usse dikhayee deti he ek aakhiri hashi uski chere pe aaa jati he . shayad aaj wo hashi bhi samjh nahini pari thi log hamesha khusi ki aansoo ki baat kar te haine par koi kabhi gam ki hasi ki baat nahini karta jab ki ismaine duniya bhar ka dard chupa rehta he . Ab wo car aur pass aane lagti he . ab swati maine itne bhi himat nahini thi ki wo ke chalke car ke samne jaa sake kya pata wo car wala usse dekhke car rok de . Isiliye wo apni puri taqat lagake car ke samne jump laga deti he . par shayad uski kismat ko ye manjoor nahini tha ya uske sarir ke halat ki wo car ke aage tak na ponhach ke side maine gir gayee . wo car wala apne car ke samne kisi ko kudt adekh ke jor se turn leke break maar leta he jis se car ghasit te hue pass ke khet maine jaa ghus ti he .



 

Tiwari_baba

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tanhai ke sahare
Milte nhi kinare
Ghut ghut ke kaise
Ye zindagi gujare..

Abhi jinda hun
To jiii lene do
Ek dottal or
pii lene do...

Supeeer update hai...

Or ye mara apne hero ne car se entry... Lekin bechare ki car kar gai khet me entry.... Mast.... Dard bhara...
 

Rbcl.007

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tanhai ke sahare
Milte nhi kinare
Ghut ghut ke kaise
Ye zindagi gujare..

Abhi jinda hun
To jiii lene do
Ek dottal or
pii lene do...

Supeeer update hai...

Or ye mara apne hero ne car se entry... Lekin bechare ki car kar gai khet me entry.... Mast.... Dard bhara...
Thanks for your support bhai .stay tuned and keep supporting me .:party:
 
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Update No 3
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Samne wohi char aadmi khade the jin maine se do wohi the jinse usne lift mangi thi . apne aap ko iss halat maine aur unlogon ke haton maine daru ki bottel dekh ke usse pata chal jaata he uske sath kya hone wala he . wo bohat minnate karti he ki usse chod diya jaye . wo chilati he kasmaine deti he .roti he bilbilati he par koi faida nahini aaj uski awaj sun ne ko wanha koi nahini tha wo charon ne wari wari se uski izzat ki chithde uda diye . wo rotee rahi ek pal to aisa aagaya ki usski awaj nikalna hi band hogayee .shayad wo apne kisamt ko maan liya tha .

Par shayad ye uski bbhul thi kyun ki ab wo darinde usse chilane ko bol rahe thi aaj uski dard unhe maja derahi thi .phir najaane kitne cigarette se jalne ki nishan blade se katne ki nishan uske sarir maine padte gaye .Do din tak uske sath jo hua shayad jahnum maine bhi aisa kisike sath na hota hoga . uske baad wo log usse leke kanhi phek ke chale gaye .


Aaj phir se wohi ho rah tha jo ek baar ho chuka tha anjane sadak maine raat ki andhere maine aankh khulna par iss baar swati ke sarir maine itni taqat hi nahini thi ki wo apne aankh bhi khol sake aise hi pade pade ghante bit gaye abtoh wo jine ki umeeed bhi chod chuki thi .ghant baad wo ek faisla leti he ki ab wo jeeke kya karegi faida kya ab ye jindegi ka ab wo yeh jindegi ko khatam kar degi .jis sharir maine abhi aankh bhi kholne ki himmat nahini thi ab wo hilne lagi thi “ pata nahini jindegi jeene ke liye logon ke pass jo taqat nahini hoti he wo jindegi ko khatam karne ke time aajati he “ . kafi koshis ke bad wo uth ke beth jaati he par uske munh se nikli chikh us sunsan sadak aur aas paas ki khet maine thodi der ke liye shanti bhang kar leti he . uski vagina maine itna dard ho rah tha ki ussse beth nahini jaa raha tha .

Par kya hena ab uske dilmiane sharir ke har pida ko khatam karne ka raast aa chuka th auske samne kuch der ki taqleef kuch nahini yehi soch ke pass ki ek ped ki sahara lete hue wo khadi hoti he .

Ab uski bas ek hi maqsad tha kaise bhi karke pass ke road tak ponhachna aur aati hui koi gadi ke samne apni iss jindegi ko bhet chada dena .


Kafi kas-ma-kas ke baad wo road taq ponhach jaati he tabhi usse ek car aati hui usse dikhayee deti he ek aakhiri hashi uski chere pe aaa jati he . shayad aaj wo hashi bhi samjh nahini pari thi log hamesha khusi ki aansoo ki baat kar te haine par koi kabhi gam ki hasi ki baat nahini karta jab ki ismaine duniya bhar ka dard chupa rehta he . Ab wo car aur pass aane lagti he . ab swati maine itne bhi himat nahini thi ki wo ke chalke car ke samne jaa sake kya pata wo car wala usse dekhke car rok de . Isiliye wo apni puri taqat lagake car ke samne jump laga deti he . par shayad uski kismat ko ye manjoor nahini tha ya uske sarir ke halat ki wo car ke aage tak na ponhach ke side maine gir gayee . wo car wala apne car ke samne kisi ko kudt adekh ke jor se turn leke break maar leta he jis se car ghasit te hue pass ke khet maine jaa ghus ti he .


Ye bohot bura hua uske saath :noo:
Aur uske baad me jo usne faisla liya, uske liye kya bole ye bhi samaz nahi aata.
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Rbcl.007

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Ye bohot bura hua uske saath :noo:
Aur uske baad me jo usne faisla liya, uske liye kya bole ye bhi samaz nahi aata.
Keep writing
Thanks for your support bhai .stay tuned and keep supporting me .:party:
 
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