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Ashu1345

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Main yaha pr apni pahli story likhne ja raha hu main kai salo se yaha story padh rhaa hu socha main bhi likhu or dr.zeus or Raja chauhan bhai ka story main daily padhta hu inse inspiration leta hu mujhe abhi itni idea nhi hai main koi professional writer nhi hu
To bhi or bahn log mujhse jo bhi glti hi plzz mujhe bataye taki main usse sudhar saku or pls koi mujhe batayega ki font kaise change' krte hai
 

Ashu1345

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Update 1


Mumbai ke bandra police station me enquiry room me ek ladka baitha tha jisse police puch-tach kr rahi thi
Police - to tum uske dost ho.
Ladka- ji sir
Police - kab se jante ho tum usko
Ladka - bachpan se sir
Police - isse pahle kabhi usne. Kisi ko mara tha
Ladka - nahi sir
Police - mujhe uska puri history batao
Ladka- sir ye aisa tha hi nhi but kahte hai na samaj or waqt ye dono hame badlne pr majboor kr dete hai
* Flashback*

1 January2000 Mumbai ke sion hospital me
Ek admi kafi deri se operation theatre ke samne badi bechaini se chahal-kadmi kr raha tha aisa lag raha tha ki jaise wo bahut badi chinta me duba ho or pass ke bench pr ek chhoti bachi baithi thi jo bahut tez ro rahi thi. Sayad apne mummy ke pass jane ke liye jidd kr rahi thi isliye mummy mummy ka name le kr chilla rahi thi
Admi ne usse uthaya apne god me le liya or chup karane ka kosis kr raha tha but kahte hai na ma ki god ki jagah koi nhi le sakta
Tabhi ek admi bahar se aya andar aaya wo khaki suit me tha sayad wo auto driver tha
Uske sath ek lady bhi thi . Dono jaise hi admi ke pass pahuche lady ne turant bachhi ko apne god me le liya
Admi (jo bahar se aaya ) - rajesh bhabhi kaisi hai
Rajesh- bhai kuch kah nhi sakta dr. Bol rahe hai ki maa or bachhe me se kisi ek ko bacha sakte hai
Admi- tune kya kaha
Rajesh- maine Sangeeta ko choose kiya
Maa rahegi to dusra bachaa aa sakta hai agar maa hi na rahi to bache ko maa ka pyar kaha se milega but...
Admi- but kya
Rajesh- Sangeeta boli ki usko yahi bachaa chahiye dr. Ne kaha ki wo dono ko bachane ki puri kosis kregi
Admi - ab kya hoga
Rajesh - ab uper wala hi kuch kr sakta hai
Lady - bhai sahab aap chinta mt kijiya
Uper wala sub thik kr dega bhabhi or bacha dono thik rahenge
Tabhi operation theatre ka door open hota hai or dr. Bahar niklta hai jisse dekh kr admi lady or Rajesh sub dr. Ko gher lete hai
Rajesh - chinta ki koi baat nhi maa or bacha dono safe hai or congrats apko ladka hua hai
Ye sunte hi Rajesh ekdum khus hoga wo dr ko gale laga liya or usko pakad kr nachne laga ye dekh admi bola
Admi - congrats bhai hamara sher iss dharti pr aa gya hai
Rajesh (dr. Ko chhod kr admi ko gale lga liya ) - haa bhai hamara sher aa gya mera beta aa gya hey uper wale tera lakh lakh sukr hai .
Rajesh- dr. Kya hum maa or bete se mil sakte hai
Dr. - abhi maa ki halat thoda kharab hai isliye nind ki dava diya kuch time baad aap mil sakte hai or unhe kuch din or hospital me rahna hoga uske baad aap le ja skte hai
Rajesh - thank you dr. Aap nahi jante apne mere uper kit a bada ehsaan kiya hai
Dr. - koi baat nhi main bhi ek baap hu to apki feeling samjh sakta hu or maine to wahi kiya jo hum krte hai jindgi or mout do o uper wale ke hath me hai
Itna kah kar dr. Chala gaya tab tak admi jo khuskhabri sunte hi bahar ja kr mithai le kr aaya or aa kr Rajesh ko khilaya
Mithai khilate waqt admi ka dhyan Rajesh pr gya to dekha Rajesh ro raha hai
Admi - bhai tu ro kyu raha hai
Rajesh - bhai agar pita ji or maa yaha hoti ot Kitna khus hoti
Admi - haa bhai but kya kr sakte hai
Tabhi nurse bache ko le kr aati hai la kr rajesh ke hath me deti hai or kahti
Nurse - maa jag gai hai aap chahe to mil sakte hai
Rajesh bache ko god me lete huye - Kitna pyara hai ye iski boli ankhe to dekho pura apni maa or gaya hai uski bhi ankhe nili hai
Admi - haa bhai bahut cute hai hamara sher
Rajesh iska name kya rakhe
Abmi - ............





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gazab starting hai .....nice dear best of luck dear Ashu1345 bhai acha laga jaankar ....:perfect:

or kismat ne bhi acha mouka diya first comment karne ka :don:

congratulation for ur new story bro....:congrats:

my all good wishes with u ....
:congrats::perfect:
 

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Good started best of luck



My running story
 
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Ashu1345

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gazab starting hai .....nice dear best of luck dear Ashu1345 bhai acha laga jaankar ....:perfect:

or kismat ne bhi acha mouka diya first comment karne ka :don:

congratulation for ur new story bro....:congrats:

my all good wishes with u ....
:congrats::perfect:
Thanks bhai apki kripa hai plzz ye font kaise change kru bta do or apne comment ke niche apne apni story ko kaise add kiya hai bta do
 
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Ashu1345

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Good started best of luck



My running story
Thanks bhai
 
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Main yaha pr apni pahli story likhne ja raha hu main kai salo se yaha story padh rhaa hu socha main bhi likhu or dr.zeus or Raja chauhan bhai ka story main daily padhta hu inse inspiration leta hu mujhe abhi itni idea nhi hai main koi professional writer nhi hu
To bhi or bahn log mujhse jo bhi glti hi plzz mujhe bataye taki main usse sudhar saku or pls koi mujhe batayega ki font kaise change' krte hai


bhai font change karna asan hai bas post karne se pehle bas sab ko select kar lena ek sath jis font me chahte ho uske liye option me tool sign me sirf A ko click karna or jo fornt pasnad aaye use click kar dena ...or bas post reply per click kar dena baaki font change ho gaya ...asan hai ....

or haan agar font ka size change karna ho toh T sign per click karna sab select karne ke baad or jis size me pasand ho click nd post reply ....

once again congrats bro ....:congrats:

welcome to our new family ...we really welcome u ....:welcome1::drunk::applause:
 

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bhai font change karna asan hai bas post karne se pehle bas sab ko select kar lena ek sath jis font me chahte ho uske liye option me tool sign me sirf A ko click karna or jo fornt pasnad aaye use click kar dena ...or bas post reply per click kar dena baaki font change ho gaya ...asan hai ....

or haan agar font ka size change karna ho toh T sign per click karna sab select karne ke baad or jis size me pasand ho click nd post reply ....

once again congrats bro ....:congrats:

welcome to our new family ...we really welcome u ....:welcome1::drunk::applause:
Thanks Bhai
 
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Thanks bhai apki kripa hai plzz ye font kaise change kru bta do or apne comment ke niche apne apni story ko kaise add kiya hai bta do

simple hai bhai aap apni profile per click karna or signature per click karna aage jo usme add karna ho add kar dena story ka naam or sath me link ko copy karke paste kar dena or bas ho gaya ....

bhai jo bhi kuch samjh me na aaye bindass keh do we are always with u ...and always support each other ...so keep writing dear ...best of luck once again..
 
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simple hai bhai aap apni profile per click karna or signature per click karna aage jo usme add karna ho add kar dena story ka naam or sath me link ko copy karke paste kar dena or bas ho gaya ....

bhai jo bhi kuch samjh me na aaye bindass keh do we are always with u ...and always support each other ...so keep writing dear ...best of luck once again..
Thanks bhai
 
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