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Nevil singh

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*Introduction*


Rajesh Sharma :- ye 26 saal ke hai ye auto driver hai Inhone 5 saal pahle ek ladki se pyar krte the inhone family wale ko bina bataye uss ladki se sadi kr li jo unke ghar wale ko achaa nhi lga or unhone Rajesh ko ghar se nikal diya jiske baad wo mumbai me aa kr rahne lga apni wife ke sath rahne laga uska ek dost hai jo usse bahut madad kiya mumbai me rahne ke liye
Sangeeta Sharma:- ye 25 saal ki hai but dikhne me abhi ye jaise 20 ki lagti hai ye kisi apshara se kam nhi hai ye Rajesh ki wife hai or ek housewife bhi hai ye bachpan se rajesh ke sath padhti thi dono bahut achhe dost the unme kab pyar ho gya pta hi nhi chala jub dono ke ghar wale sadi ke liye nhi mane to bhag kr sadi kr li

Kirti:-ye hai rajesh or sangeeta ki badi beti ye abhi 3 saal ki hai abhi playschool me name likhaya hai

Guddu :- ye rajesh ka dost hai ye bhi Bachpan se rajesh ke sath padhta tha but family problem ke wjh se bich me hi padhai chodna pda or mumbai aa kr riksha chalane lga ye or rajesh dost kam bhai jyada the guddu ka khud ka riksha tha issi riksha pr rajesh or guddu dono chalate the rajesh din me chalata tha or guddu raat me jo Mumbai me akshar sare riksha wale krte hai din me khud chalate hai or raat ke liye ek driver rakh lete the
Radha:- ye guddu ki wife hai ye bhi sangeeta ki tarah bahut khubsurat hai ye or sangeeta dono bahno se bhi jyada pyar hai starting me jub rajesh mumbai aaya tha to yahi jid kr ke apne hi room me rahne ke liye kaha but baad me rajesh ne jabardsti alag room lene ke liye kaha to guddu ne baju wlaa room dila diya

Hero ka name update me bta diya jayega
Or
Baki character story ke sath bta diya jayega
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Nevil singh

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*Update 2 *
Rajesh bache ko god me lete huye - Kitna pyara hai ye iski boli ankhe to dekho pura apni maa or gaya hai uski bhi ankhe nili hai
Admi - haa bhai bahut cute hai hamara sher
Rajesh iska name kya rakhe
Abmi - ............


Ab aage


Guddu - bhai iski ankhe dekh rahe ho aap ekdum neelmani ke jaise hai iss sher ka name 'neel' rakh de


Rajesh - bahut badhiya name bataya tune iska neel name hi rakhnege
Radha - bhai sahab bhabhi ke pass chale
Rajesh - haa kyu nhi chalo


Sub Sangeeta ke pass aa jate hai Sangeeta bed pr leti hoti hai apne pati ko dekh rone lagti hai
Rajesh - are pahli to kyu rahi hai ye to khusi ka mauka hai dekho bhagwan ne hamari sun li
Hamara sher aa gya hai
Sangeeta - ye khusi ke anshu hai main hi janti hu ki kitna tadpi hu main ek bete ke liye
Bhagwan ne aaj wo kami puri kr di or apne bete ko lene ke liye uth kr baith gai
Rajesh ( bete ko Sangeeta ke god me dete huye ) - iski ankhe dekh rahi ho sangeeta pura tum or gya hai neeli ankhe ekdum neel Mani jaise kyu sahi kaha na
Sangeeta - haa ekdum neelmani jaisa kyu na iska name neel rakh diya jaye
Guddu - are waah kya baat hai humne bhi yahi socha hai Radha ne suggest kiya tha
Sangeeta - akhir bahan kiski hai
Mere jaisa nahi sochegi to kiske jaisa sochegi

Radha - bus kya bhabhi sub aap se hi to sikha hai
Sangeeta - tum lagta hai mujhe apna nhi manti
Radha (ghabrate huye ) - nhi bhabhi aap aisa kyu kah rahi hai itne bade sahar me apke alawa hai ko apna
Sangeeta - tabhi to bhabhi kahti rahti ho tumse kitni baar kaha hai mujhe bhabhi mt kaha kro humumar ke hai hum bahn bolaya kro
Rajesh - haa mujhe bhi bhai sahab bhai sahab kahti ho
Radha - to kya bulau apko bhai sahab mujhe bade hai isliye unko bhai sahab kahti hu or app unki wife hai isliye apko bhabhi bolti hu
Sangeeta - bhabhi se pahle main teri bahan hu to mujhe tu bahan ya didi bola kr
Rajesh - or mujhe bhaiya bola kr mujhe bhi ek bahan mil jayegi
Radha - to Neel mera bhanja lagega ya bhatija
Iss pr sub khil-khila kr has dete hai


Wahi kahi dur Uttar Pradesh ke ek gaon me
Ek shandaar haweli thi or haweli me sub so rahe the or ek bhudhaa admi ek chair pr baitha tha charo taraf andhera tha khidki se halka ujala aa raha tha usse dekh kr aisa lag rhaa tha ki jaise wo kisi ka besabri se intzaar kr raha ho
Tabhi darwaza khulta hai ek 27 saal ka admi ghar ke andar aata hai usse dekh kr aisa lag raha tha ki jaise 10 12 bottle sarab Piya ho but fhir bhi apne kadmo pr chal kr aa aya yani ki usse experience hai itne daru pine ki
Admi buddhe ko dekh kr shocked ho gya or bola
Admi - dad aap abhi tak soye nhi
Budhaa admi - jiska beta itni raat ko daru pi kr ghar aaye usko bhala kaise nind aa sakti hai
Admi - sorry dad wo dost log ne jabardasti pila di aaj mere dost ka birthday tha isliye mna nahi kiya
Budhaa admi - daily tumahare dost ka birthday rahta hai?
Admi - wo dad ...
Budhaa admi- kya ... Mujhe sub pta hai tumahre baare me bahu ke hote hue bhi tum roj bazaru aurato ke pass sote ho kabhi socha hai uss pr kya bitati hogi bol
Isliye maine tumko Landon padhne bheja tha tum waha ja kr ye sub sikh kr aao
Admi - come on dad I'm not a kid main bhi bada ho gaya hu it's normal don't get serious
Buddha admi- itna bda ho gya hai ki tu gundagardi krna , drugs bechna ,apni wife ke hote huye kothe pr jana yaha tk logo ko marna bhi suru kr diya hai haaa
Admi - to kya kru mujhe amir banana hai name kamana hai Raj krna hai logo pr yaha gaon me rah kr ye kheti nhi krna apke jaisa
Budhha admi - to apni ek business start kr leta ye 2 no. Ke kaam kyu krne laga kabhi socha hai ki agar tujhe kuch ho gya to hamara kya hoga tumahare bibi bache ka kya hoga
Admi - mujhe kuch nhi hoga pure Sahar me kisi ki himmat nhi ki mujhse unchi awaj me baat kr sake or dad police tk mujhe salam krti hai mujhe kon marega
Budhaa admi - yaha ke log tumse isliye unchi awaj me baat nhi krte kyuki tum mere bete ho isliye sub izzat krte hai or isliye police bhi tumko salam krti hai or ye sub mujhe police se pta chala hai ki tumne kai ladkiyon ka rape kr diya
Admi - but dad .....
Budhaa admi - police wala bahut imandar hai meri bahut izzat krta hai isliye case file krne se pahle mujhe aa kr bataya usne kaha ki main tumko samjhau ki ye rasta chhod du maine usse wada kiya hai ki tum ab kabhi bhi koi galt kaam nhi kroge
Admi - sorry dad ab mujhe koi nhi rok sakta
Budhaa admi - main rokunga tumko
Admi - rokoge tab na dad jab aap jinda rahoge
Budhaa admi - kya matalb ...
Admi - sorry dad main chahta to nahi tha but mazboor hu aap fikar mt karna apki ashthiyon ko ganga me jarur visarjit krunga
Good bye dad and rest in peace ...
Or issi ke sath pass me pada ek chaku le kr sidha budhhe ke sine me mar diya or muh ko daba diya .....


But koi tha jo ye sub apni ankho se dekh rha wo kon tha janane ke liye stay with me
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*Update 3*

Admi - sorry dad main chahta to nahi tha but mazboor hu aap fikar mt karna apki ashthiyon ko ganga me jarur visarjit krunga
Good bye dad and rest in peace ...
Or issi ke sath pass me pada ek chaku le kr sidha budhhe ke sine me mar diya or muh ko daba diya .....
Ab aage
Idhar Rajesh Sangeeta ko hospital se discharge kra kr ghar ke liye nikal gya guddu ne auto ke driver seat pr baith gya or piche pahle Radha fhir Sangeeta or last me Rajesh baith gya Sangeeta ko bich me bithaya taki koi problem na ho guddu auto ko road pr bhagane lga but sambhal kr kahi problem na ho jaye aise sub ghar or pahuch gaye jaise hi Sangeeta auto se utri aaju baju wale sare ladies usko gher liye sub Neel ko dekhne ke liye jisse dekh Radha ne apne ankh se kajal nikal kr turant kala tika lga diya kahi nazar na lag jaye
Ye dekh sub has pade
Ek lady boli - yrrr Kitna cute hai na
Dusri lady - haa yr iski ankhe to dekh usme hi kho jaane ko ji krta hai mera bus chale a hi isse sadi kr lu
Ye sun kr
Radha boli - bajar na laga kharidhar pahle aa gaye
Ek baar fhir sub has pade
Rajesh - are pahle bache ko andar to ane do
Jisse sun subne Sangeeta ko rasta diya or jane diya
Anadar jane ke baad fhir sare lady or kuch bache unko gher liya tabhi ek bachi boli
Bachi- aunty ye chhota Babu kon hai
Radha boli - Babu ye hamare ghar ka naya memeber hai or apka new frnd
Bachi - woww ...to ye mere sath khelega
Radha - haa Babu tumahre sath khelega
Bachi - aunty ye koi alien ? hai kya
Radha - nahi Babu aisa kyu
Bachi - iski ankhe dekho na blue colour ki hai
Hum sub ki black hai
Radha - nhi babu wo subko nhi hota million me kisi ek ko hota hai
Bachi - ye million me se ek hai apna babu
Radha - haa
Bachi - tab to main inse sadi krungi main mummy ko bolungi ki meri sadi babu se kare fhir hum dono din bhar sath me khelenge

Uss bachi ki maa jo pass me khadi thi kafi der apni bachi ki masti dekh rahi thi or maze le rahi thi wo boli
Bachi ki maa - bacha kr rakhana Sangeeta apne bache ko wrna meri beti bhag jayegi le kr
Or sab hasne lage
Tabhi Guddu bahar se andar aaya or bola
Guddu - bhai party to banti hai
Rajesh - kyu nhi bhai jarur milegi pure colony wale ko milegi party
Guddu - are bhai wo party nhi dusri party
Rajesh - dusri kon si party achha chiken party kya
Guddu - haa bhai but chicken ke sath jo pite hai na uski baat kr raha tha
Tabhi Sangeeta bich me bol padi
Kis party ki baat ho rahi hai
Rajesh - are kuch nhi yrrr hum chicken party ki baat kr rahe hai ab itna to banta hai na
Sangeeta - sub samjhti hu main kis chicken ki baat ho rahi hai agar sarab ko hath bhi lagaya to dekh lena ( thoda gussa dikhate huye boli )
Rajesh - are bhagwan aisa kuch nhi hai
Aap kripya sant rahe dr. Ne apko aram krne bola hai or Radha tu thoda inka dhyan rakhna hum abhi aaye
Itna bol kr Rajesh Guddu ko lekr nikal gya
Bahar aate hi Rajesh guddu pr barash pada
Rajesh - abe sale marwane ki puri tayari kr chuka tha tu kya jarurat tha waha sab ke samne bolne ka baad me akele me nhi bol sakta tha kya
Guddu - are sorry yarr wo party ke chakkar me bhul gya ki aas pass kon hai
Rajesh - chal thik hai apne adde par chalte hai
Guddu ne auto Start kiya or nikal pade
Dono apne adde pr pahuche sub unke driver group wale waha baithe the or Rajesh ke aate hi uske paas chale aye or congratulations dene lage
Driver 1- congrats bhai party to banti hai
Driver 2- bhai chicken daru sub hona chahiye
Rajesh - haaa bhai jarur hoga sub hoga akhir jasn to banta hai


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Update 4

Driver 1- congrats bhai party to banti hai
Driver 2- bhai chicken daru sub hona chahiye
Rajesh - haaa bhai jarur hoga sub hoga akhir jasn to banta hai

Ab aage .....

Kuch time aise hi bitane ke baad sub log waha se nikal gaye ye dono ghar aa gaye
Ghar aaye to dekha 1 2 lady ko chhod kr baki sub apne ghar ja chuke the jo the bhi wo baju wale hi the
Jaise hum log ka niyam hai ki bache ke birth ke 7 din tak bachhe ki maa or bache ghar ke bahar nhi niklte 7th day pr ek dhum dham program rahta hai uske baad bache ki maa ghar se bahar nikal sakte hai
Isliye 7 din tk Radha dono ghar ka khana banati thi or ghar ka kaam krti thi
Sangeeta ko koi kaam nhi krne deti thi
Yaha tak Kirti ka bhi dhyan Radha hi rakhti thi
Aise hi 7th day ka program bhi ho gya sare colony wale ko party di gai or baad me Rajesh gang ka daru party bhi hui
Fhir 4 month baad Radha or guddu ne bhi ek ladke ko janam diya jiska name kartik tha
Or fhir time apne raftaar se chalne lagi 4 saal bit gaye teeno bache bade ho gaye kirti 2nd class me thi jubki Neel or kartik ka first day tha to Neel or kartik bahut khus the kyuki new school me padhe ke liye jane wale the sub chiz se anjaan ho kar jubki kirti roye jaa rahi thi kyuki school ke panishment se usse dar lagta tha to yahi haal kirti ka bhi tha but Neel or kartik iss baat se bekhabar ho kar apni new dress me new bag le kr bahut khus the but kirti school na jana pade isliye pet dard ka bahana marne lagi
( Jo bachho ka sabse best bahana me se ek hai
Writer - hum thoda hat kr the hum sidha bag gayab kr dete the fhir mummy se bolte the ki pahle bag lao fhir hum school jayenge but unko bag milne se raha ????)

But jub Radha or Sangeeta bachi ko le kr ghar se bahar aaye to kartik ne kirti ko rote huye dekha to apne mummy se pucha

Kartik -mummy didi kyu ro rahi hai

Radha - beta didi ka pet dukh raha hai na isliye
Kartik - mummy jub didi ka pet dukh raha hai to unhe school kyu bejh rahe ho

Radha - actually beta tumahari didi ne homework nhi kiya na isliye bahana bna rahi hai taki school na jana pade warna teacher inhe panish krenge

Neel - but aunty hum to nhi ro rahe hame bhi to le kar ja rahe hai na

Radha - haa beta kyuki tumko abhi koi homework nhi mila na kyuki aaj tumahara first day hai

Neel - aunty hame bhi homework milega

Kartik - hame bhi Panishment milega

Radha - haa agar tumane homework nhi kiya to jarur Panishment milega but tum to achhe bache ho na to tum daily homework karoge

Kartik& Neel - haa hum apna homework daily krnege

Tab tak school bhi aa gaya kirti to chali gai apni friends ke sath class me kartik or Neel ne dekha ki unke jaise bahut saare bache the unke age ke jo aaj school aaye the unka bhi aaj first day tha tabhi Sangeeta dono bachho ko apne pass bulaya or bola

Sangeeta - bachho aaj tumahara first day hai school me man laga kar padhna or apne teachers ka kahna manana jyada masti mat karna or tum donk sath me rahana kisi se ladai jhagda bilkul mt karna koi parshan kare to teachers ko bolna ok

Kartik - ok badi mummy ( Kartik Sangeeta ko badi mummy or Rajesh ko bade Papa bulata tha)
Neel- thik hai mummy hum iss baat ka khyal rakhanege
Radha ne aaju baju dekha to ladkiyan Neel ko hi ghur rahi thi
Radha - ek baat or beta ladkiyon se dur rahna or apne ankh ke kajal nikal kar Neel ko laga diya
Kartik jhoota gussa karte huye - mummy aapse baat nahi karunga aap mujhse jyada Neel ko pyar karti ho or muh dusri taraf kar liya
Radha - haste huye are nahi bets tu to meri jaan hai tujhse jyada pyar main kisi ko nahi kar sakta aaj saam ko tum dono ki fav nasta banaungi
Kartik - kya
Radha - sabudana ki khichadi
Kartik - but mummy ye to apne writer ki fav. Hai kahi wo aakr kha liye to ??
Wo hi to yahi rahte hai pass me
Radha - nahi bets main unko nahi bataungi agar aa bhi gaye to bol dungi ki ye mere bacho ke liye bani hai

Tabhi school ki bell baj gayi dono bache Radha or Sangeeta ko buy b kar chale gaye
Sangeeta ke ankh me nami aa gayi
Radha ne pucha kya hua aap to kyu rahi hai

Sangeeta - Radha dekha tune hamare bache kitne bade ho gaye hai school jane lage hai
Kisi ki najar na lag jaye
Radha maje lete huye
Radha - didi ek baat ka fayada hai apne Neel ko usse ladki dhundhne ki jarurat nhi hai ladkiyan khud uske aage piche ghumegi apne dekha nhi kaise ladkiyan undo ghur rahi thi jaise abhi usse kha jaye
Or fhir dono apne ghar ki taraf chal diye


Aaj ke liye itna hi
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gazab starting hai .....nice dear best of luck dear Ashu1345 bhai acha laga jaankar ....:perfect:

or kismat ne bhi acha mouka diya first comment karne ka :don:

congratulation for ur new story bro....:congrats:


my all good wishes with u ....
:congrats::perfect:
Good started best of luck



My running story
Nice start
Abe yeh kesa sankee beta peda kiya us budde ki wife ne... sala apne baap ko upar pohcha diya...
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Superb funny update bro..
School jane laga humara hero aur kartik
Chhote bachhe ki baate bhi kamal ki hoti hai..
Kirti bahana kar rahi thi school nai jane ki
Hehehe..
Waiting next..
 

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acha likh rahe ho Ashu1345 bhai or aapki kismat bhi lajawab hai jo Nevil singh jaise mitra ne aapko shuru me hi join kar liya aab dekhna ...aage or acha hoga ...
aapke ache ke kamna ke sath or acha likhne ke liye dua karta hun ...
Bade bhai apse se hi sikha hai ab apke hi bharoshe hai or haa sayad sach me meri kismat achhi hai jo suruaat me hi itne bade bade writer mujhse jud rahe hai thanks everyone update bahut jldi hi post kr dunga nd thank you again aap sub ke wjh se hi main ye shuruwat kr pata hu
 
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Superb funny update bro..
School jane laga humara hero aur kartik
Chhote bachhe ki baate bhi kamal ki hoti hai..
Kirti bahana kar rahi thi school nai jane ki
Hehehe..
Waiting next..
Haa bhai hum nahi bhul sakte apna bachapn
wo din bhi kuch aise hi the
Jaha paraye bhi apne jaise the
Isse matalabi duniya se anjaan the hum
Pal me ruthna pal me manana
Wo pal bhi sapne jaise the
....... ashu
 
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