Nice update...Update 30Jesse hi Raj ander ghusta hai to Ruhi ko dekhta hi reh jata hai, aur apne mann mai baas yahi sochne lagta hai ki koi itna pyara kese ho sakta hai, bilkul massom si, chuyi muyi si lag rahi thy Ruhi sote huye….Abhi Raj Ruhi ko dekh hi raha hota hai ki Ruhi kuch badbadane lagti hai, to Raj usko sunne ke liye bilkul uske karib aajata hai.Ruhi (nind mai) : haye..kitne cute hai mera Raj, bilkul cutipie ki tarah, pata nahi gussa kanha se aagaya itna..mera to mann karta hai ki uski naak pe kiss karu aur sara gussa bhaga dun….Raj ko Ruhi ki baate sunke apne mann mai bahut hasta hai, fir Ruhi ke kaan ke paas jake bolta hai,Raj : apka cutipie apko uthne ka intezar kar raha hai madam to jaldi se uthiye.Raj ke baate sunke Ruhi bhi uth jati hai per uske chehre mai se muskurahat ja hi nahi rahi thy, wo aab bhi soch rahi thy ki wo ek sapna hai ki Raj usse uthane aaya hai. Per jaab Ruhi apni ankhe khol ke samne Raj ko dekti hai to hadbada jati hai….Ruhi : aa….aap…sach mai…..Raj : ji mai sach mai hun aur kitna soti ho yaar tum, chalo utho aab aur fresh ho jao mai niche tumhara wait kar raha hun khane pe….Ruhi : wo…wo….Raj : kya hua….Ruhi : wo mere paas…kapde nahi hai…..Raj : itni si baat ye cupboard kholo aur jo pasand aaye wo pehen lena….Ruhi jhat se uthke cupboard khol leti hai to usme bahut se dress thy aur 6 saree bhi thy wo sabhi simple thy per behed hi khubsurat.Ruhi : ye kiski hai..Anu to ye nahi pehen ti janha tak mai janta hun usko.Raj : han wo use nahi karti ye, ye saab tumhara hai..pichle 6 salo se kharid ke rakha hua hai, aur ye saree tumhare har saal birthday pe kharid ta tha aur ye jo kamra hai wo bhi tumhare liye aur isme rakhe sari chize bhi.Raj ki baate sunke Ruhi ke ankho mai anshu aajate hai aur Ruhi aage badhkar Raj ko kash ke gale laga leti hai. Raj bhi thoda heran tha aur khush bhi. Jese hi Raj Ruhi ko dekhta hai to Ruhi ro rahi hoti hai, to Raj Ruhi ko chehre ko tham leta hai apne hatho se aur uski anshu ko pochne lagta hai.Raj : sssshhh….mujhe inn ankho mai se aage kabhi bhi anshu nahi chahiye..aur jaldi se ready hoke niche aajao..mai wait kar raha hun….Ruhi han mai apna sar hila leti hai, aur Raj chala jata hai niche aur Ruhi ek saree utha ke chal deti hai fresh hone….Kuch time baad Ruhi tayar hoke niche aati hai, wo ek meroon green colour ka saree aur uske sath matching earrings chote chote, baal ko ek side kiya hua tha, thoda sa make up saree se match hota hua.Jaab Ruhi niche aayi to Raj baas dekta hi raha use, jese jese Ruhi niche utara rahi thy, Raj ko yese laag raha tha ki uska dil bahar aajayega uske sarir se.Aur kaam karne wale bhi baas Ruhi aur raj ko hi dekh rahe hote hai,Naukar 1 : yaar yesa lagat hai ki yanhi hamare madam banengi….Naukar 2 : bhai mujhe bhi yanhi lagta hai, kyun ki aaj tak iss ghar mai Anu madam ke alawa koi aur ladki aayi hi nahi hai, aur na hi sir aaj tak kisi ladki ko yese dekhe hai.Naukar 1 : han bhai.Ruhi niche aake Raj ke samne beth jati hai, aur Raj ko ek chutki kaat leti hai….Raj bhi apne hosh mai aajata hai.Ruhi : kya hua Raj, kya dekh rahe thy, kya mai achi nahi lag rahi hun…Raj : bahut achi lag rahi ho…..Ruhi : thanks Raj….Raj : Raj se kuch bola nahi ja raha tha badi muskil ye bolta hai, kuch socha tumne….Ruhi herani se : kis bare mai….Raj : yanhi ki uncle se kya baat karni hai…..Ruhi (jor se) : kya…aapne socha nahi kuch…hai bhagwan kya hoga inka….Raj : aare yaar mai majak kar raha hun..baat kar lunga mai uncle se tum baas mujhe support de dena thik hai.Ruhi : ji….Fir dono hi yese baate karte karte khana khatam karte hai, khane ke time bhi Raj baas Ruhi ko dekh raha hota hai aur iska yehsas Ruhi ko bhi ho gaya tha aur wo baas saram maare laal hua lada tha.Jaab khana khatam hota hai to Ruhi aur Raj ke ankhe milti hai to Ruhi zyada sarmane lagti hai aur Raj bhi hadbada jata hai aur apna phone nikal ke baate karte huye bahar ki aur chala jata hai.Raj : Viren kab tak mujhe join karoge....aur sham tak ek khush khabri bhi deni hai tumhe to iss baar phone utha lena.Dusri taraf : bhai kaal sham taak ye mission pura ho jayega to tujhe mai parso tere ghar per hi milunga aur Rohan kesa hai?Raj : sham ko tujhe batata hun wo kesa hai chal bye..khyal rakhna….Dusre taraf : ham..chal bye….Fir Raj Ruhi ko leke Zara ke ghar chala jata hai. Wo ek bunglow ke ander chale jate hai aur jake wanha beth jate hai, kuch der baad ek budha admi aata hai aur jaab Raj ki nazar uske upar padti to wo uthke jake unke gale milta hai.Raj : kese hai Mallik sahab.Mallik : thik hun barkhudar, tum batao aur wo Ruhi ko dekhne lagte.Ruhi bhi unke paas jake hath jod ke unko namaste karti hai to wo bhi Ruhi ke sar pe hath rakh deta hai.Mallik : ye bachi kon hai Raj….Raj : ye meri bahut purani dost hai aur hamare sath hi kaam karti hai, per mai aaj aapke paas kuch jaruri baat karne aaya hun.Mallik : bolo Raj….Raj : Mallik sahab…Zara ke bare mai baat hai….Mallik ji thode sakte mai aagaye jaab ye suna….Mallik : fir se kisiko pit dala usne ya kuch aur kiya….Raj : are nahi Mallik sahab pichle tin saalo mai wo mere sath hai aur yesa kuch nahi kiya usne….Mallik : to kya baat hai….Ruhi se aur raha nahi gaya to wo apne jagah se uthke aake Mallik ji ke ghutne ke paas beth jati hai aur bolne lagti hai,Ruhi : uncle Zara kisi se pyaar karti hai aur shadi karna chahti hai. Mallik ji ye sunke uthne ke huye to Ruhi ne unka hath pakad liya.Ruhi : uncle aap pehle puri baat sun lijiye fir kuch karna….Ruhi ki baate sunke wo rukh jate hai, Ruhi bhi apni baate ko jari rakhti hai.Ruhi : uncle Zara jisse pyaar karti hai wo aur koi nahi Raj ke bachpan ke dost aur mere bhai Rohan hai. Wo bahut ache hai. Janha taak mujhe pata hai aap Raj per bahut bharosha karte hai to yanhi bharosha aap aab bhi rakhiye, aagar Rohan Bhai sahi nahi hote Zara ke liye to Raj kabhi bhi apke paas nahi aate.Raj : ji Mallik sahab aur jante hai aap, Rohan koi aur nahi mera Wanhi dost hai jo mere sath yanha tha aur mere har sukh dukh mai mere sath khada raha hai. Aap hamesha mujhse uske baare mai baate karte thy aur uske baare mai puchte thy na to apki beti ko bhi wanhi pasand aaya. Mai galat ho sakta hun per Rohan kabhi nahi…..Mallik : iss bachi se uska rishta kesse….Fir Raj Ruhi aur Rohan ke baare mai saab kuch bata deta hai.Mallik : mujhe itna acha ladka to khud dhundne se bhi nahi milta. Mujhe ye rishta manjur hai.Ruhi (khushi se) : thanks uncle aab mai Zara ko Zara bhabhi hi bolungi.Raj bhi khushi se Mallik ke gale lag jata hai.Mallik : per shadi yanhi hogi tum Zara aur Rohan ko lekar jaldi se yanha iss seher mai aajao baki baate fir kabhi karenge.Raj : ji Jessa aapko sahi lage.Dono jesse hi Jane ke liye nikalte hai to Ruhi kisi se takra ke girne lagti hai per uss admi se pakadne se pehle hi Raj Ruhi ko pakad leta hai.Raj : tum thik to ho….Ruhi han mai apna sar hila deti hai.Raj aur Ruhi samne dekhte hai to ek 6 feet ka ladka gora chehera, halki si beard, kali ankhe, aur black pathani suit mai tha. Wo Raj ko herani se dekh raha tha aur Raj usse….Raj : tum yanha…kese….Wo ladka : yanhi mai tujhse puchu to….
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Update 31
Raj aur wo ladka baas ek dusre ko dekhe hi ja rahe thy, fir haste huye ek dusre ke gale lag jate hai. Ruhi herani se dono ko dekh rahi hoti hai. Wo ladka bhi Raj se alag hoke Ruhi ko dekhne lagta hai fir bolta hai,
Ladka : Raj..tune bataya nahi ki tune shadi kar li, aur jake Ruhi ke aage khada ho jata hai.
Ladka : hello bhabhi ji….
Ruhi gusse se Raj ko dekhne lagti hai Raj to baas hass raha tha.
Raj : oo…baas kar meri koyi shadi nahi huyi hai aur Ruhi dost hai meri aur Ruhi ye Zara ka bada bhai Kabir hai.
Ruhi Kabir ko namaste karti hai.
Kabir : sorry..bha…mera matlab Ruhi ji…wo aaj tak kisi ladki ke sath isse dekha nahi to mujhe laga….
Tabhi Raj ko ek call aajata hai to wo bahar chala jata hai aur Ruhi ko Kabir baas dekhta hi rehta hai. To Ruhi ko bahut ajib lagti hai to wo bhi bahar jane lagti hai to Kabir bhi sath hi chalne lagta hai.
Kabir : ek baat bolu Ruhi ji aapse….
Ruhi : Ruhani..mera naam Ruhani hai Ruhi sirf Raj hi bula sakte hai mujhe….
Kabir : chaliye to Ruhani ji aap Raj se pyaar karte ho na….
Ruhi herani se Kabir ko dekhne lagti hai….
Kabir bhi apne baate jari rakhte huye : aur Raj bhi aapse pyaar karta hai.
Ruhi : ye..ye saab kya bol rahe hai aap….
Kabir : wanhi jo sach hai apki ankho mai dikta hai Raj ke liye pyaar….
Ruhi kuch bolne hi wali thy ki Raj wanha aajata hai to Ruhi bolte bolte rukh jati hai.
Raj : Kabir Zara ne apne liye ladka dhund liya hai, aur fir sari baate bata deta hai. To tujhe thik laga na….
Kabir : dekh Rohan ko mai janta hun aur usse acha ladka Zara ko mil hi nahi sakta hai.
Raj : han wo to hai….
Kabir : tu wo chod tu ye bata ki tu kaab shadi kar raha hai….
Raj Ruhi dekhta hai aur bolta hai : pehle ladki to han kare fir aage kuch hoga….
Ruhi inke baate na sunke jake sidhe car mai beth jati hai, Raj bhi Kabir ko jawab de ke apna sar hilake car ki aur chala jata hai….
Kabir wanh khade khade badbadata hai : aag to dono taraf lagi hai….
Raj aur Ruhi dono thodi der ke drive ke baad ghar pahunch jate hai.
Raj : Ruhi ham aaj raat ko nikal rahe hai…
Ruhi kuch udas ho jati hai, wese hi bolti hai : hmm..itni jaldi….
Raj : han kal Zara aur Rohan ko bata kar unhe yanha Mallik sahab se bhi milwana hai.
Ruhi : thik hai….fir Ruhi apne kamre mai chali jati hai aur apne mann mai badbadane ke wajaye sach mai bol deti hai.
Ruhi : abhi to mile thy, paas bhi nahi aaye aur firse dur….
Raj bahar khada sun raha tha aur muskura raha tha. Tabhi Raj ke piche koyi apna hath rakh deta hai to Raj piche mud kedekhta hai jo heran ho jata hai. Piche Kabir khada tha.
Raj : tu hamara picha kar raha tha?
Kabir : karna pada kyun ki tu mujhe bye bolke bhi nahi aaya.
Raj : tu ek bye ke liye to yanha nahi aasakta..bata kya baat hai….
Kabir : wo..mujhe Zara aur Rohan se Abu se pehle milna hai to mai tumhare sath hi ja raha hun….
Raj : kuch jaruri baat hai….
Kabir : yaar bhai hun to….samajha kar na….aur Rohan se bhi milne ka maan hai….
Raj : ok ok no problem to ham baas kuch hi der mai nikalte hai….
Kabir : to..wese ye ruhani meri bhabhi hi hai na….
Raj Kabir ko dekhne lagta hai, to Kabir ne Raj ko ankh mar deta hai, jesse ye keh rhaa ho ki mujhe to pehle hi pata lag gaya tha.
Kabir : tujhe mai 6 saal se janta hun, tu jaab se yanha aaya tha taab se, tu kisi ladki se baat to dur dekhta bhi nahi tha aur iss ladki se….
Raj : Kabir wo ladki meri Ruhi hai….jo mere jine ki wajah hai….
Kabir Raj ko herani se dekhne lagta hai, fir bolta hai : to ye hai wo..teri dream girl jiske liye tune yanha ki har ladki ka dil tod diya..wow yaar..wese bhabhi bahut khubsurat hai….
Raj haste huye Kabir ke gale lag jata hai aur tabhi Ruhi bhi bahar aajati hai….
Ruhi : aap..aap dono yanha…..
Raj ne jese hi mud ke dekha to dekhta reh gaya, kyun ki abhi Ruhi ek salwar suit mai thy aur uske sath saab kuch matching ki pehni thy....
Raj (dhire se) : ye ladki to aaj meri jaan hi leke manegi….
Ruhi ne ek aur baar wanhi sawal karti hai….
Raj : wo mai tumhe dekhne….mera matlab..bulane..han bulane aaya tha aur Kabir bhi aagaya…to hamare sath hi jayega….
Ruhi ne han mai sar hilaya aur Raj Kabir ke sath hi niche aagayi….
Kabir (haste huye) : tera to usse dekhte hi bura haal ho jata hai to bolega kesse…..
Raj : tu na..baas yaar chup hoja aab….wese bhi aab raha nahi jata dur….chal chod aab ye bata ki baat kya hai jo tu ja raha hai mere sath kyun ki mera itna kehne per bhi tu kabhi ye field chod ke kahi nahi gaya…aur aab….
Kabir : yanha ka kaam khatam hua Raj…aab thode din chuti pe hun…to Abu se pehle Rohan se milna chahta hun aur kuch baate clear karna chahta hun aur fir se sath chahta hun..uska….
Raj : Rohan ko nahi pata Zara tumhari behen hai aur Zara ko bhi Rohan ka nahi pata….
Kabir : to fir sahi hai mere liye, easy hoga dono ko samajhana….
Raj : hmm…wese Rohan ko ye pata hai ki mai tumse aur Viren se dono se baate karta hun aur kaam bhi kar raha hun…per wo kuch nahi bolta mujhse..baas tum dono ko miss na karna yanhi dikhata hai….
Kabir : janta hun wo apne aapko bahut dur rakh raha hai per kaab tak dur rahega….
Raj : aab lag raha hai ki saab thik ho hi jayega….
Raj, Kabir aur Ruhi teeno mumbai ki aur nikal jate hai, aur Raj car drive kar raha tha, Kabir uske paas samne betha tha aur Ruhi piche. Raj ne to back mirror Ruhi ke chehre pe hi set kar liya tha, aur Raj ki ankhe to baas Ruhi pe set thy.
Kuch dur aane per Kabir ka phone per message aaya to Kabir kuch sochne lagta hai fir piche Ruhi ko dekh ke bolta hai,
Kabir : Ruhani ji apko bukh nahi lagi hai….
Ruhi : han lagi to hai….
Kabir : Raj..aage ek resort hai Wanha rok dena..wanha kafi acha khana milta hai.
Raj : ok….
Kuch der mai teeno ek resort ke samne khade thy, teeno ander chale jate hai aur khana order kar dete hai aur Ruhi fresh hone ke liye chali jati hai. Jesse hi Ruhi jati hai to Raj Kabir se puchta hai,
Raj : kya hua….
Kabir : wo kaal jiss neta ko mara tha uski party ne hungama kiya hai aur road jam kar diya hai aage se to, yanhi rukhna hoga..sir ka message hai ki wo handle kar lenge hame baas kuch din koi mission nahi karna hai to isiliye mujhe bhi chuti leni padi.
Raj : ok chalo acha hi hai, ham Rohan ki shadi pe pura dhyaan denge….
Kabir : han Viren bhi free ho gaya hoga..wo aab tak Punjab mai hi hai ya aagaya….
Raj : kaam to ho gaya hai Wanha aab aajayega wo kaal sham tak….
Kabir lambi sans leke,
Kabir : char saal baad ham charo sath honge Raj….tu to Rohan se mil liya karta tha per hamse to usne khud hi duri bana li yaar aur Viren to kabhi kuch nahi bolta baas kuch bhi karo baas muskura kar chala jata hai.
Raj : wo issliye kyunki ham saab mai se sabse samajhdar wanhi hai Rohan ke baad Viren hi hai jo kisi bhi situation ko handle kar sakta hai….
Kabir (gusse se) : tere kehna ka matlab mai samajhdar nahi hun….
Tabhi Ruhi aakar beth gayi aur Kabir ko dekhne lagi jo gusse se Raj ko dekh raha tha.
Ruhi : Kabir kya hua hai apko, aap itne gusse mai kyun ho....
Kabir : Raj ko lagta hai ki Viren mujhse jyada samajhdar hai….
Ruhi : aab ye Viren kon hai….
Kabir : hamara jigri yaar….
Raj : oye..Ruhi ko kese pata hoga….
Ruhi : to batao…mujhe bhi janna hai ki ye 6 saal kese gujre thy….
Raj : ok..per pehle khana kha lo..wese bhi aaj raat yanhi rukhna hai aage dange ho gaye hai aur rasta band hai..maine room book kar liya hai….
Ruhi : ooh..chalo aaj apki kahani sunugi….
Saab khana kahne lage….
Mumbai….Raj ke ghar…..
Zara Anu ke sath kitchen mai thy aur Rohan office ka kaam kar raha tha. Tabhi doorbell baji to Anu darwaja kholne gayi..per jese hi Anu ne darwaja khola to koyi nahi dikha….
Anu thoda sa bahar aayi to koi piche se ander jane laga to Anu bina dekhe boli….
Anu : to apki yese aane ki aadat badli nahi..mujhe laga itna time dur rahe ho to badal gaye honge….
Admi : tum bhi to nahi badli..hamesha ki tarah pehchan hi liya wo bhi bina dekhe….
Anu jese hi piche ki aur palti to dekh ke dar gayi…uski ankho se anshu aagaye….
Anu : apko ye chot kese…kaab…aap apna dhyaan kyun nahi rakhte….
Udhar Ruhi, Raj, Kabir khana kha kar Ruhi ke kamre mai ikathe ho gaye. Sabhi bed pe beth gaye..Ruhi ne to pop corn bhi manga liya tha.
Raj : Ruhi ye saab sunne se pehle mujhe ek wada chahiye….
Ruhi : kessa wada Raj….
Raj : yanhi ki jo bhi tumhe aaj pata chalega tum kabhi kisiko nahi bataogi..kyun ki ye ham charo se judi kahani hai, mai, Rohan, Kabir aur Viren…..
Aur ye baat to Zara ko bhi nahi pata, per han Anu saab janti hai….
Ruhi herani se kabhi Raj ko dekhti to kabhi Kabir ko….
Ruhi : yasi kya baat hai….
Raj : bharosa hai….
Ruhi : khud se bhi jyada….
Raj : to wada….
Ruhi ne Raj ka hath pakad liya,
Ruhi : wada….
Kabir : oye…Romeo Juliet..ham bhi hai yanha pe….
Ruhi aur Raj Kabir ki baat sunke baas idhar udhar dekhne lagte hai. Thodi der baad,
Raj : han to kahani suru karte hai.
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