Romance Taqdeer [Completed]

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Update 50​

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Udhar Raj Ruhi ko terrace per le kar aaya tha, janha dono apni aane wali jindegi ke baare mai soch rahe thy.​

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Ruhi : kabhi socha na tha ki ham dono yese ek sath honge…yakin nahi tha apni taqdeer per ki wo mere sath degi kyun ki hamesha daga hi deti aayi hai.​

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Raj ne Ruhi ko apni baho mai le leta hai,​

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Raj : yakin to mujhe bhi apni taqdeer per nahi tha ki tum se kabhi mil bhi paunga, per han apne bhagwan pe bharosha tha ki wo kabhi na kabhi to hamme iss jindegi mai mila hi denge, per ye yakin tha ki sath bhi hoga tumhara kabhi mere sath.​

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Ruhi : aaj apse ek wada chahiye mujhe….​

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Raj ne Ruhi ke chehra apne hath mai leke : jitna chahiye wada le lo mai to pura tumhara hi hun.​

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Ruhi Raj ki baate sunke hasne lagti hai,​

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Ruhi : janti hun…baas yanhi wada chahiye ki aab kabhi bhi kisi bhi baat ko leke kisi galat-fhemi mai bhi ek dusre se kabhi dur nahi honge….ye kehke apna hath aage badha deti hai…​

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Raj ne Ruhi ka hath apne hath mai le leta hai,​

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Raj : wada raha kabhi tumhe khud se dur nahi karunga….​

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Ruhi : mai apko aur kuch bolna chahti hun….Je t’aime….​

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Raj : je t’aime aussi….​

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Ruhi : apko French aati hai….​

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Raj haste huye : tum bhul rahi ho ki mai agent bhi hun….​

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Fir ek dusre ko gale lag jate hai aur wese hi wanhi bethe rehte aur baate karte rehte….​

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Idhar Rohan Zara ko ek room mai leke aaya tha jisme charo aur lights lagi thy aur Zara ki photos bhi…ye Zara ki wo photos thy jaab wo mumbai gayi thy. Har din ka photo tha. Zara to ye dekh kar hi heran thy.​

Rohan ne kabhi bhi yese apna pyaar jahir nahi kiya tha, Zara charo aur ghum kar dekh rahi thy. Fir Rohan ke gale laag gayi aur Rohan ke galo pe kiss kar leti hai.​

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Rohan bhi Zara ko kaas leta hai fir aane wali jindegi ke bare mai sochne lagte hai.​

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Udhar Kabir aur Nibi ke paas,​

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Nibi baas herani se Kabir ko hi dekhe ja rahi thy,​

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Kabir : kya hua..pehle chup thy per aab to hil bhi nahi rahi ho…ajib ho yaar tum bhi.​

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Nibi : ajib aur mai..aare ajib to aap ho…​

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Kabir : mai..wo kese….​

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Nibi : kabhi school mai bhi achi tarah baat nahi kari hamesha chidhate thy wo to hamesha Viren ji hi bulate thy mujhe…aur to aur fir jaab aaj mili hun to bhi pehchana bhi nahi….aur….wese bhi aap jese handsome ladka mujh jesse ladkiyo mai interest kanha….​

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Nibi kuch aur bolne hi wali thy ki Kabir usse khinch ke gale laga leta hai, jisse Nibi ki ankhe badi ho jati hai herani se….​

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Kabir : aare baas pagli rulayigi kya…itna kuch tha dil mai…wese tujhe chidata tha iss liye ki tu bahut cute se face banati thy to mujhe badi pyaari lagti thy, aur chal sidhe sidhe sun….​

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Aaj jaab se tujhe dekha hai tujhe baas tu hi tu Nazar aarahi hai…pasand aagayi hai tu mujhe…samajh gayi…teri han na ka wait nahi karunga…Zara ka nikah ke baad hi Abu se baat karke tere ghar aajaunga tujhe tere papa se mangne ke liye..to ready rehna.​

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Kabir jaab tak bolta raha Nibi uski baho mai nikalne me liye machalti rahi per Kabir ne usse nahi choda. Jesse hi choda to Nibi bina Kabir ko dekhe hi bhag jati hai, Kabir wanhi grass pe leet jata hai aur muskurane lagta hai.​

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Viren Anu ko leke pool side aagaya tha, aur baas hath pakade dono bethe thy, aaj Viren ne Anu ko apne chest le laga liya tha. Viren ne jaab dekha ki Anu uske cheast pe hi sar rakh ke so gayi hai, to sabki nazar bacha ke Viren Anu ko uske kamre mai leke sula deta hai. Anu ke face pe smile thy sote huye bhi Viren aage badh ke uske mathe pe kiss kar deta hai fir aake garden mai Kabir paas grass pe let jata hai.​

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Dono hi pyaar ke nashe mai muskura rahe thy aur kisi baat ki hosh nahi thy.​

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Agle din mehendi ki rasam huyi, saab ne haala kiya aur apni apni wali ke hatho mai thodi mehendi lagayi. Bichara Kabir saab se bach ke Nibi ke paas jata to Nibi wanha se bhag jati. Nibi to dil hi dil mai khush thy per baas ghabra rahi thy. Pasand to Kabir ko pehle se hi karti thy per jaab Kabir ne yesa saab kaha to ander se hi hil gayi thy usne kabhi socha nahi tha ki yesa kuch hoga.​

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Akhir kaar kuch saman lene jaab Nibi ek room mai gayi to Kabir bhi wanha aagaya aur Nibi ke hath pakad ke bed pe beth gaya aur apni naam ka mehendi lag diya, aur Nibi ki gaal ko chum kar bhag gaya.​

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Saab kuch ache hai ho gaya aur shadi ka din bhi aajata hai.​

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Din mai Zara aur Rohan ka nikah tha, Ruhi ne bhi dono tarah se shadi ki jid ki to unka bhi sath mai hi nikah padhwa diya gaya. Fir raat ko do mandap lage aur in dono jodiyo ka shadi karwaya gaya.​

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Shadi ke baad saab ki bidayi bhi ho jati hai, Rohan Zara ko leke Bangalore apne ghar nikal jata hai aur Raj Ruhi ko leke Bangalore apne banglow mai. Anu aur Nibi ne mil ke Ruhi aur Raj ka ghar prabesh karwaya. Fir kuch rashme ki aur Ruhi ko apne sath leke nikal gaya. Puri raat thakan se saab so gaye thy, per raat ko Anu aur Nibi ne Raj ka karma saza diya tha aur Ruhi ko wanha betha diya tha. Yu to ruhi Raj ke behed paas aagayi thy per aaj ghabra rahi thy.​

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Kuch der baad Raj aata hai kamre mai aur darwaja band karke Ruhi ke paas beth jata hai aur ek dairy mai kuch likhke Ruhi ko de deta hai. Ruhi ne jaab dairy dekha to usme likha tha.​

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Raj : kya mai ghungat utha sakta hun….​

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Ruhi ko school ki din yaad aajati hai, aur hasne lagti hai.​

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Ruhi bhi kuch likh ke Raj ke taraf badha deti hai,​

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Ruhi : nahi​

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Raj : kyun​

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Ruhi : pehle mujhe koyi toufa dijiye fir….​

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Raj : apna pair aage karo….​

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Ruhi na samajhne wali stiti mai pair aage kaar deti hai Raj ne apni jeb se payal ka joda nikal ke Ruhi ko pehena deta hai.​

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Ruhi jaab payal dekhti hai to khush ho jati hai aur ghungat utha ke Raj ke gale lag jati hai.​

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Raj : aare…aare…rani sahiba kya kar rahe hai…..​

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Ruhi : apko kese pata chal jata hai ki mujhe kya pasand hai….​

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Raj : sans ho tum meri…to itna to janta hun na….​

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Pata hai kabhi socha nahi tha ki meri taqdeer meri jindegi mujhe de degi.​

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Ruhi ne jaab Raj ko dekha to uska ankhe naam thy. Ruhi ne apna hath aage badha ke Raj ke ansu ko poch leti hai aur gaal pe ek kiss kar deti hai.​

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Raj : pata hai aaj mai bahut khush hun….​

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Ruhi : mai bhi….​

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Raj : acha ji….​

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Fir aage badh ke aaj Raj aur Ruhi taan maan se ek ho jate hai (sorry friends mujhe nahi aata likhna sex scean acha).​

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Rohan aur Zara bhi Bangalore pahunch ke so jate hai unke ghar mai koyi nahi tha to Rohan ne hi saab rasme kiye aur rat ko ye bhi ek ho jate hai. ​

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Abhi so rahe thy ki subha subha Rohan utha ta hai to dekhta hai ki Switzerland ki ticket booking ki confirmation ka message tha. Tabhi Kabir ka bhi call aajata hai.​

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Kabir : maine tere hi phone se booking kar di thy aaj sham ki flight hai tum dono ki to packing kar liyo….​

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Rohan : thank you….​

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Kabir : chal be phone rakh aur sone de mujhe, tujhe batane ke chakar mai maine apni nind kharab ki…kuch din ki hi chuti hai to nind bhi puri karni hai mujhe.​

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Rohan : tu sach mai pura kumbhakaran hai….​

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Kabir haste huye call cut kar leta hai. Idhar Raj aur Viren Sharma ji se saab kuch sikh rahe thy, Ritika ji aur Ron mumbai wale ghar mai rehte aur Sharma ji Bangalore mai.​

Raj aur ruhi apne past ki yaad karke apne takdeer ko thank u kah rhe hai...kahe bhi kyo nhi aakhir unke Milan ke naummido ke bich ummid ki Kiran hi nhi jagayi apitu unka Milan bhi karwa Diya ...Kabir to bahut fast forward nikala jaldi se Dil ki baat bhi bol di aur hath managane ki bhi baat kah di, matlab nibi ko to mauka hi na Diya sochane samajhane ka , sahi khel gaya guru...Raj aur ruhi shadi karke ab ek ho gaye , aur honeymoon bhi manane jayenge....aur ye Kabir mahashay aaj bhi let Tak soye hai are Bhai jao nibi ke sath kuchh pyar bhari baate Kar lo...
Owsm update writer sir ... keep it up...

 

[NewWriter23]

Raj aur ruhi apne past ki yaad karke apne takdeer ko thank u kah rhe hai...kahe bhi kyo nhi aakhir unke Milan ke naummido ke bich ummid ki Kiran hi nhi jagayi apitu unka Milan bhi karwa Diya ...Kabir to bahut fast forward nikala jaldi se Dil ki baat bhi bol di aur hath managane ki bhi baat kah di, matlab nibi ko to mauka hi na Diya sochane samajhane ka , sahi khel gaya guru...Raj aur ruhi shadi karke ab ek ho gaye , aur honeymoon bhi manane jayenge....aur ye Kabir mahashay aaj bhi let Tak soye hai are Bhai jao nibi ke sath kuchh pyar bhari baate Kar lo...
Owsm update writer sir ... keep it up...

Thank you brother

 

[mashish]

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Din ba din Ruhi aur Raj ka pyaar aur badh raha tha wanhi Viren aur Anu ki bhi kuch din baad sagayi ho jati hai. Saab bahut khush thy. Kabir ki bhi chuti khatam ho gayi aur wo kaam per laag gaya aur department mai jo gaddar thy un per nazar rakhta tha aur sath mai Nibi ko bhi phone karke tang bhi karta rehta tha. ​

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Nibi ne han nahi kaha tha na, na nahi kaha tha baas jo uske Papa kehte wanhi maan na tha to Kabir se papa se baate karne ko kaha. Kabir bhi maan gaya per agle mahine ke liye taab taak tang karta rehta.​

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ek din Ruhi behosh ho gayi to hospital le gaye. Wanha pata chala ki Ruhi maa banne wali thy tabhi Rohan bhi aajata hai aur Zara bhi maa banne wali hai. Saab ye khabar sunke behed khush hote hai.​

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Dekhte dekhte ek mahina ho gaya aab Viren ko Abu Dhabi nikalna tha to wo nikal gaya. Wanha per jane ke baad roj Anu ko raat ko message kar diya karta tha. ​

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Anu bhi aab Ruhi ke sath company sambhalne lagi thy. Raj kaam hi aata tha aab jyada taar mission ke dhyaan de raha tha. Rohan aur Zara mumbai ke company ko dekh rahe thy. Ruhi ko doctor se pata chala tha ki judwa bache hai ye khabar sunke bhi saab khush hote hai.​

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ek mahine ke baad aab Raj ka bhi mission pe jane ka din aagaya, raat ko Raj karke Ruhi ki goud mai sar rakh ke leta tha aur Ruhi Raj ke balo mai hath pher rahi thy. ​

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Raj : Ruhi wada karo ki mere jane ke baad apna aur dono bacho ka pura khyal rakhogi.​

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Ruhi : wada raha mere dono bacho ke papa...per aap bhi ek wada kijiye..aap roj mujhe phone karenge aur baat karenge aur roj apne ek photo bhejenge.​

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Raj : wada..aur tum bhi apni har photo bhejna mai apne bacho ko badhta hua dekhna chahta hun pata nahi sayad char mahine se jyada time lag gaya to...​

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Ruhi : yesa maat boliye na...jaldi hi aap meri aur hamare baby ke paas honge.​

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Raj ne uth ke Ruhi ke honth ko chum leta hai aur gale laga leta hai.​

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Raj : jaldi hi apne bacho aur unki mumma ke paas wapas aaunga.​

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Agle din Raj chala jata hai, Raj ke samne to Ruhi ne apne aap ko sambhal liya per jesse hi ek gaya Ruhi ki ankhe behne lagi. Per Anu ne Ruhi ko sambhal liya. Fir dhire dhire din gujar ne lage aur Anu Ruhi ka pura dhyaan rakhti. Anu to bua banne ke liye sabse jyada khusi thy, aur office bhi pura Raj ki tarah hi sambhalne lagi.​

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Raj Ruhi ko roj raat ko phone karta, dono ek dusre ko apna khyal rakhna ko bolte. Raj Ruhi ki tasveer ko dekhta rehta jaab bhi mission pe kamjor padta. Ruhi ke chehre pe aab maa banne ka noor aaraha tha. Wo aur bhi khubsurat lagne lagi thy. Wanhi Raj jyada tar pathani suit mai hota aur beard bhi bade ho gaye thy.​

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kabir bhi aakar Ruhi ko hasta rehta, Rohan aur Zara bhi kabhi kabhi aajate thy ya fir Ruhi aur Anu mumbai chale jate thy.​

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char mahine ho gaye thy Viren bhi apna mission pura karke aagaya tha. Usse iss baar bahut chot lagi thy ek terrorist ne goli maar di thy jo sidhe Viren ke leg mai lagi thy per Viren ne apna mission pura kiya tha aur wapas aagaya tha, to usse 6 mahine ke liye free kar diya gaya tha. Viren Anu ke jid ke karan wanhi reh gaya tha apne ghar na jake.​

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Aab Ruhi khafi udas rehne lagi thy kyun ki pichle 1 hafte se Raj ka na koyi call aaya hai na koyi photo.​

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Sabhi pareshan thy aur sabse jyada pareshan Sharma ji, Ram ji Ron aur Ritika ji ko bhi yanhi Ruhi ke paas rehne ke liye bula liya tha, aur pareshan iss liye kyun ki Raj aur uska team ka koyi khabar sahi nahi raha tha.​

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Ek din Viren Ruhi ke paas betha hua tha to Ruhi ke munh se halki si chikh nikal gayi aur apna hath apne pet pe chala gaya.​

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Viren (tension mai) : bhabhi kya hua...aap thik to hai na...​

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Ruhi (khush hote huye) : bacho ne kick kiya.​

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Jaab ye baat Anu ko pata chali to wo khusi pure ghar mai kudne lagi.​

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Yese hi dekhte dekhte Raj ko gaye huye 8 mahine ho gaye thy, saab aab kafi dare huye thy, Ron, Ritika ji, Mallick sahad ko baas ye lata tha ki Raj kanhi kaam mai busy hai per asal baat baki saab ko pata thy, saab aab kafi dar gaye thy, Ruhi to baas bhagwan ko prathana kar rahi thy ki jesse bhi kare Raj wapas aajaye.​

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yese hi time guzar raha tha, saab sirf Raj ko hi miss kar rahe thy aur yahi dua kar rahe thy ki wo sahi salamat wapas aajaye, ek Zara ko pain start ho jata hai to usse hospital le jaya jata hai aur usne ek bete ko janam diya, jiska naam Ruhi ne rakha Rohan ne kehne se, Ruhi ne uska naam Rehan rakhta hai, sabhi ko ye naam bahut acha lagta hai.​

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Kabir wanha hospital mai hi masti karne lagta hai kyun ki wo mama ban gaya tha, Mallick sahab bhi behed khush thy.​

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Saab baas upar se khush dikha rahe thy kyun wo dukhi hoke Ruhi ko dukhi karna nahi chahte thy, Rohan, Kabir aur Viren saab Raj ka pata karne ka kossis karte per kuch hath nahi lagta unhe, unhe ye lagta tha ki sayad Raj dusman ke hath lag gaya hai ye fir....., Sharma ji to ander se tut chuke thy, wo jaab bhi Ruhi ko dekhte to samne Ruhi safed saree mai nazar aati.​

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ek din Ruhi jaab raat ko apne kamre mai jaldi aagayi aur saab bahar khana kha rahe thy pata nahi kyun usse subha se bechani ho rahi thy. Jesse hi kamre mai aake darwaja band kiya to piche se kisine uske ankho mai hath rakh diya, Ruhi wo hath rakhne wale ko pehchan gayi aur jor se bol gayi.....​

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Ruhi : Raj......​

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Ruhi ne Raj ka hath hamare piche dekha to Raj samne khada muskura raha tha ..Ruhi to Raj ko dekhte hi behosh ho gayi. Ruhi jaab behosh huyi to Raj tension mai aagaya wo jaldi se Ruhi ko apne goud mai utha ke bahar ki aur bhaga, saab ne Raj ko dekha to heran reh gaye aur khush bhi huye....uske chehre pe bahut se chot aaye thy.​

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Raj (jor se) : Viren car nikal Ruhi ko hospital leke jana hai.​

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Viren bhi jaldi harkat mai aagaya aur car nikal diya for sabhi hospital chale gaye.​

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Saab hospital mai Raj ko dekh ke behed khush huye Sharma ji to aage badh ke Raj ko gale laga liya, fir teeno dost bhi inki to jindegi hi wapas aagayi thy, bhale hi teeno saab ko sambhalte thy per ander se Raj ko khone ka dar se dare huye thy. Fir Anu bhi Raj ke gale lag gayi, aur to rahi thy Raj usse chup karwa raha tha. Fir Raj aage badh ke Ritika ji ke pair chuta hai Ritika ji ne usse rakh ke gale lag leti hai.​

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Udhar Ruhi ko doctor dekh rahe thy, fir kuch der baad bahar aake Raj se....​

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Doctor : congratulation Mr. Singh apko ek beta aur beti huyi hai... Mrs. Singh ko thodi der baad room mai shift karwa denge aap taab mil lena bacho se aur Mrs. Singh se.​

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Raj : thank you doctor.....​

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Uske chehre pe ek muskan thy aur ankho mai anshu...baap jo ban gaya tha, jaab Ruhi ko sift kiya gaya to Raj uss room ke ander aata hai, Ruhi aab bhi behos thy, Raj ke piche piche Rohan aur Kabir bhi aate hai, aur dono bacho ko apne goud mai utha lete hai.​

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Kabir : wah..mai to chachu bhi ban gaya....wanhi Viren aur Rohan....​

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Viren : mai fufa....​

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Rohan : mai mamu....​

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Ritika ji aur Ram ji bhi ander aate hai,​

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Ritika ji : koyi mujhe bhi mere nati natin se milwa do....​

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Kabir aur Rohan ne bacho ko unhe de dete hai.​

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Karib adhe ghante baad jaab Ruhi ko hosh aaya aur wo ankhe khola to Raj apne beti ko goud mai leke betha hua tha aur Rohan beta ko....​

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Jaab Ruhi ko hosh aaya to Rohan Raj hath se beti ko leke bahar chala jata hai.​

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Ruhi uthne ko huyi ki Raj usse rok ke khus aage badh ke gale laga leta hai Ruhi bhi usse apni baho mai kash leti hai jesse abhi wo kabhi bhi Raj ko kanhi nahi chodegi....​

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kuch din baad saab ghar wapas aajate hai aur iss baar bacho ka naam rakhne ka Jima Anu ko dete hai....​

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Anu bhi bete ka naam Rahul rakhti hai aur beti ka naam Riyanshi rakhti hai sabhi ko naam pasand aata hai.​

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Raj ke aane ka 2 mahine ke ander hi Raj ne Anu aur Viren ka bhi shadi karwa deta hai, wo bhi apni married life ache se nibha rahe thy, aur Kabir ne bhi Mallick sahab yanhi ki apne papa se Nibi ke baare mai baat kar li wo bhi khush thy, per Nibi ke papa nahi maane to Kabir ne apne style mai hi unhe samajha diya....​

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Kabir : dekhiye sasur ji jaat paat mai kya rakha hai, IPS damad dete bithaye mil raha hai to maan jao warna Nibi ko bhaga le jaunga for do saal mai uske Jessa do cute cute bache paida karunga aur apko unse milne nahi dunga.....​

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Aab yese pyaar bhari dhamki sunke kon rahi nahi hota wo bhi raji ho gaye Kabir ki aur Nibi ki bhi shadi ho gayi....​

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Issi bich Anu aur Viren ki taraf se bhi khush khabri aagayi ki Anu maa banne wali hai, sabhi khus thy, fir wo bhi din aagaya jaab Anu ne ek ladki ko janam diya, to Raj ne uska naam Radhika rakha, Kabir ke taraf se bhi ussi din khush khabri mili jiss din Anu ne ladki ko janam diya, Nibi maa banne wali hai, Kabir sabse jyada khush tha aur usse bhi jyaada khush Mallik sahad....​

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9 mahine baad Nibi ne bhi do judwa bete ko janam diya, aur inka naam Zara ne rakha, ek ka naam sahil tha aur dusra ka naam Noman. Mallik sahab apne pote ke khusi mai badi party di.​

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Viren ko aab ETF ka chief bana diya gyaa tha, Ruhi to Raj ko aab koyi mission ke liye chodti bhi nahi, per Raj chupke chupke mission kar leta tha, Kabir bhi gaddar ka list banake Viren ko deta tha baki Viren aur Raj kar lete thy.​

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Saab dost Akshar milte thy aur apne bacho ko bhi apne jesa dosti nibhane ka batate thy aur apne apne kisse bhi....yese hi saab guzara kar rahe thy haasi khushi......​

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Taqdeer ko jo bhi dena hai wo de dega usko na to aap badal sakte na mai badal sakta, to tension lene se kya hoga, so stay happy be happy. Hamesha haste rahiye muskurate rahiye.​

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cause laughter is the best medicine.​

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The End​

BEautiful ending

 

[Neel Singh]

Finally ab war of Gods continue hogi aur me writer sahab ko bata du maine ye waali kahani padi nahi hain kyuki mohobbat waali kahani pasand nahi hain aur agar main topic hi love ho to bilkul nahi.
Love chhod ke aur koi main topic ho to me padu. Ha love ho to ho side hi rahe .

 

[NewWriter23]

BEautiful ending

Thank you

 

[NewWriter23]

Finally ab war of Gods continue hogi aur me writer sahab ko bata du maine ye waali kahani padi nahi hain kyuki mohobbat waali kahani pasand nahi hain aur agar main topic hi love ho to bilkul nahi.
Love chhod ke aur koi main topic ho to me padu. Ha love ho to ho side hi rahe .

Brother saab ki apni apni pasand hoti hai, but thank you comment karne liye

 

[Naik]

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Din ba din Ruhi aur Raj ka pyaar aur badh raha tha wanhi Viren aur Anu ki bhi kuch din baad sagayi ho jati hai. Saab bahut khush thy. Kabir ki bhi chuti khatam ho gayi aur wo kaam per laag gaya aur department mai jo gaddar thy un per nazar rakhta tha aur sath mai Nibi ko bhi phone karke tang bhi karta rehta tha. ​

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Nibi ne han nahi kaha tha na, na nahi kaha tha baas jo uske Papa kehte wanhi maan na tha to Kabir se papa se baate karne ko kaha. Kabir bhi maan gaya per agle mahine ke liye taab taak tang karta rehta.​

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ek din Ruhi behosh ho gayi to hospital le gaye. Wanha pata chala ki Ruhi maa banne wali thy tabhi Rohan bhi aajata hai aur Zara bhi maa banne wali hai. Saab ye khabar sunke behed khush hote hai.​

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Dekhte dekhte ek mahina ho gaya aab Viren ko Abu Dhabi nikalna tha to wo nikal gaya. Wanha per jane ke baad roj Anu ko raat ko message kar diya karta tha. ​

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Anu bhi aab Ruhi ke sath company sambhalne lagi thy. Raj kaam hi aata tha aab jyada taar mission ke dhyaan de raha tha. Rohan aur Zara mumbai ke company ko dekh rahe thy. Ruhi ko doctor se pata chala tha ki judwa bache hai ye khabar sunke bhi saab khush hote hai.​

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ek mahine ke baad aab Raj ka bhi mission pe jane ka din aagaya, raat ko Raj karke Ruhi ki goud mai sar rakh ke leta tha aur Ruhi Raj ke balo mai hath pher rahi thy. ​

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Raj : Ruhi wada karo ki mere jane ke baad apna aur dono bacho ka pura khyal rakhogi.​

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Ruhi : wada raha mere dono bacho ke papa...per aap bhi ek wada kijiye..aap roj mujhe phone karenge aur baat karenge aur roj apne ek photo bhejenge.​

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Raj : wada..aur tum bhi apni har photo bhejna mai apne bacho ko badhta hua dekhna chahta hun pata nahi sayad char mahine se jyada time lag gaya to...​

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Ruhi : yesa maat boliye na...jaldi hi aap meri aur hamare baby ke paas honge.​

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Raj ne uth ke Ruhi ke honth ko chum leta hai aur gale laga leta hai.​

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Raj : jaldi hi apne bacho aur unki mumma ke paas wapas aaunga.​

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Agle din Raj chala jata hai, Raj ke samne to Ruhi ne apne aap ko sambhal liya per jesse hi ek gaya Ruhi ki ankhe behne lagi. Per Anu ne Ruhi ko sambhal liya. Fir dhire dhire din gujar ne lage aur Anu Ruhi ka pura dhyaan rakhti. Anu to bua banne ke liye sabse jyada khusi thy, aur office bhi pura Raj ki tarah hi sambhalne lagi.​

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Raj Ruhi ko roj raat ko phone karta, dono ek dusre ko apna khyal rakhna ko bolte. Raj Ruhi ki tasveer ko dekhta rehta jaab bhi mission pe kamjor padta. Ruhi ke chehre pe aab maa banne ka noor aaraha tha. Wo aur bhi khubsurat lagne lagi thy. Wanhi Raj jyada tar pathani suit mai hota aur beard bhi bade ho gaye thy.​

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kabir bhi aakar Ruhi ko hasta rehta, Rohan aur Zara bhi kabhi kabhi aajate thy ya fir Ruhi aur Anu mumbai chale jate thy.​

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char mahine ho gaye thy Viren bhi apna mission pura karke aagaya tha. Usse iss baar bahut chot lagi thy ek terrorist ne goli maar di thy jo sidhe Viren ke leg mai lagi thy per Viren ne apna mission pura kiya tha aur wapas aagaya tha, to usse 6 mahine ke liye free kar diya gaya tha. Viren Anu ke jid ke karan wanhi reh gaya tha apne ghar na jake.​

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Aab Ruhi khafi udas rehne lagi thy kyun ki pichle 1 hafte se Raj ka na koyi call aaya hai na koyi photo.​

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Sabhi pareshan thy aur sabse jyada pareshan Sharma ji, Ram ji Ron aur Ritika ji ko bhi yanhi Ruhi ke paas rehne ke liye bula liya tha, aur pareshan iss liye kyun ki Raj aur uska team ka koyi khabar sahi nahi raha tha.​

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Ek din Viren Ruhi ke paas betha hua tha to Ruhi ke munh se halki si chikh nikal gayi aur apna hath apne pet pe chala gaya.​

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Viren (tension mai) : bhabhi kya hua...aap thik to hai na...​

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Ruhi (khush hote huye) : bacho ne kick kiya.​

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Jaab ye baat Anu ko pata chali to wo khusi pure ghar mai kudne lagi.​

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Yese hi dekhte dekhte Raj ko gaye huye 8 mahine ho gaye thy, saab aab kafi dare huye thy, Ron, Ritika ji, Mallick sahad ko baas ye lata tha ki Raj kanhi kaam mai busy hai per asal baat baki saab ko pata thy, saab aab kafi dar gaye thy, Ruhi to baas bhagwan ko prathana kar rahi thy ki jesse bhi kare Raj wapas aajaye.​

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yese hi time guzar raha tha, saab sirf Raj ko hi miss kar rahe thy aur yahi dua kar rahe thy ki wo sahi salamat wapas aajaye, ek Zara ko pain start ho jata hai to usse hospital le jaya jata hai aur usne ek bete ko janam diya, jiska naam Ruhi ne rakha Rohan ne kehne se, Ruhi ne uska naam Rehan rakhta hai, sabhi ko ye naam bahut acha lagta hai.​

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Kabir wanha hospital mai hi masti karne lagta hai kyun ki wo mama ban gaya tha, Mallick sahab bhi behed khush thy.​

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Saab baas upar se khush dikha rahe thy kyun wo dukhi hoke Ruhi ko dukhi karna nahi chahte thy, Rohan, Kabir aur Viren saab Raj ka pata karne ka kossis karte per kuch hath nahi lagta unhe, unhe ye lagta tha ki sayad Raj dusman ke hath lag gaya hai ye fir....., Sharma ji to ander se tut chuke thy, wo jaab bhi Ruhi ko dekhte to samne Ruhi safed saree mai nazar aati.​

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ek din Ruhi jaab raat ko apne kamre mai jaldi aagayi aur saab bahar khana kha rahe thy pata nahi kyun usse subha se bechani ho rahi thy. Jesse hi kamre mai aake darwaja band kiya to piche se kisine uske ankho mai hath rakh diya, Ruhi wo hath rakhne wale ko pehchan gayi aur jor se bol gayi.....​

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Ruhi : Raj......​

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Ruhi ne Raj ka hath hamare piche dekha to Raj samne khada muskura raha tha ..Ruhi to Raj ko dekhte hi behosh ho gayi. Ruhi jaab behosh huyi to Raj tension mai aagaya wo jaldi se Ruhi ko apne goud mai utha ke bahar ki aur bhaga, saab ne Raj ko dekha to heran reh gaye aur khush bhi huye....uske chehre pe bahut se chot aaye thy.​

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Raj (jor se) : Viren car nikal Ruhi ko hospital leke jana hai.​

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Viren bhi jaldi harkat mai aagaya aur car nikal diya for sabhi hospital chale gaye.​

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Saab hospital mai Raj ko dekh ke behed khush huye Sharma ji to aage badh ke Raj ko gale laga liya, fir teeno dost bhi inki to jindegi hi wapas aagayi thy, bhale hi teeno saab ko sambhalte thy per ander se Raj ko khone ka dar se dare huye thy. Fir Anu bhi Raj ke gale lag gayi, aur to rahi thy Raj usse chup karwa raha tha. Fir Raj aage badh ke Ritika ji ke pair chuta hai Ritika ji ne usse rakh ke gale lag leti hai.​

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Udhar Ruhi ko doctor dekh rahe thy, fir kuch der baad bahar aake Raj se....​

​

Doctor : congratulation Mr. Singh apko ek beta aur beti huyi hai... Mrs. Singh ko thodi der baad room mai shift karwa denge aap taab mil lena bacho se aur Mrs. Singh se.​

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Raj : thank you doctor.....​

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Uske chehre pe ek muskan thy aur ankho mai anshu...baap jo ban gaya tha, jaab Ruhi ko sift kiya gaya to Raj uss room ke ander aata hai, Ruhi aab bhi behos thy, Raj ke piche piche Rohan aur Kabir bhi aate hai, aur dono bacho ko apne goud mai utha lete hai.​

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Kabir : wah..mai to chachu bhi ban gaya....wanhi Viren aur Rohan....​

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Viren : mai fufa....​

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Rohan : mai mamu....​

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Ritika ji aur Ram ji bhi ander aate hai,​

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Ritika ji : koyi mujhe bhi mere nati natin se milwa do....​

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Kabir aur Rohan ne bacho ko unhe de dete hai.​

​

Karib adhe ghante baad jaab Ruhi ko hosh aaya aur wo ankhe khola to Raj apne beti ko goud mai leke betha hua tha aur Rohan beta ko....​

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Jaab Ruhi ko hosh aaya to Rohan Raj hath se beti ko leke bahar chala jata hai.​

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Ruhi uthne ko huyi ki Raj usse rok ke khus aage badh ke gale laga leta hai Ruhi bhi usse apni baho mai kash leti hai jesse abhi wo kabhi bhi Raj ko kanhi nahi chodegi....​

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kuch din baad saab ghar wapas aajate hai aur iss baar bacho ka naam rakhne ka Jima Anu ko dete hai....​

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Anu bhi bete ka naam Rahul rakhti hai aur beti ka naam Riyanshi rakhti hai sabhi ko naam pasand aata hai.​

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Raj ke aane ka 2 mahine ke ander hi Raj ne Anu aur Viren ka bhi shadi karwa deta hai, wo bhi apni married life ache se nibha rahe thy, aur Kabir ne bhi Mallick sahab yanhi ki apne papa se Nibi ke baare mai baat kar li wo bhi khush thy, per Nibi ke papa nahi maane to Kabir ne apne style mai hi unhe samajha diya....​

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Kabir : dekhiye sasur ji jaat paat mai kya rakha hai, IPS damad dete bithaye mil raha hai to maan jao warna Nibi ko bhaga le jaunga for do saal mai uske Jessa do cute cute bache paida karunga aur apko unse milne nahi dunga.....​

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Aab yese pyaar bhari dhamki sunke kon rahi nahi hota wo bhi raji ho gaye Kabir ki aur Nibi ki bhi shadi ho gayi....​

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Issi bich Anu aur Viren ki taraf se bhi khush khabri aagayi ki Anu maa banne wali hai, sabhi khus thy, fir wo bhi din aagaya jaab Anu ne ek ladki ko janam diya, to Raj ne uska naam Radhika rakha, Kabir ke taraf se bhi ussi din khush khabri mili jiss din Anu ne ladki ko janam diya, Nibi maa banne wali hai, Kabir sabse jyada khush tha aur usse bhi jyaada khush Mallik sahad....​

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9 mahine baad Nibi ne bhi do judwa bete ko janam diya, aur inka naam Zara ne rakha, ek ka naam sahil tha aur dusra ka naam Noman. Mallik sahab apne pote ke khusi mai badi party di.​

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Viren ko aab ETF ka chief bana diya gyaa tha, Ruhi to Raj ko aab koyi mission ke liye chodti bhi nahi, per Raj chupke chupke mission kar leta tha, Kabir bhi gaddar ka list banake Viren ko deta tha baki Viren aur Raj kar lete thy.​

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Saab dost Akshar milte thy aur apne bacho ko bhi apne jesa dosti nibhane ka batate thy aur apne apne kisse bhi....yese hi saab guzara kar rahe thy haasi khushi......​

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Taqdeer ko jo bhi dena hai wo de dega usko na to aap badal sakte na mai badal sakta, to tension lene se kya hoga, so stay happy be happy. Hamesha haste rahiye muskurate rahiye.​

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cause laughter is the best medicine.​

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The End​

Bahot shaandaar kahani ka bahot lajawab
END
ZABERDAST SHAANDAAR

 

[parkas]

Last update​

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Din ba din Ruhi aur Raj ka pyaar aur badh raha tha wanhi Viren aur Anu ki bhi kuch din baad sagayi ho jati hai. Saab bahut khush thy. Kabir ki bhi chuti khatam ho gayi aur wo kaam per laag gaya aur department mai jo gaddar thy un per nazar rakhta tha aur sath mai Nibi ko bhi phone karke tang bhi karta rehta tha. ​

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Nibi ne han nahi kaha tha na, na nahi kaha tha baas jo uske Papa kehte wanhi maan na tha to Kabir se papa se baate karne ko kaha. Kabir bhi maan gaya per agle mahine ke liye taab taak tang karta rehta.​

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ek din Ruhi behosh ho gayi to hospital le gaye. Wanha pata chala ki Ruhi maa banne wali thy tabhi Rohan bhi aajata hai aur Zara bhi maa banne wali hai. Saab ye khabar sunke behed khush hote hai.​

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Dekhte dekhte ek mahina ho gaya aab Viren ko Abu Dhabi nikalna tha to wo nikal gaya. Wanha per jane ke baad roj Anu ko raat ko message kar diya karta tha. ​

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Anu bhi aab Ruhi ke sath company sambhalne lagi thy. Raj kaam hi aata tha aab jyada taar mission ke dhyaan de raha tha. Rohan aur Zara mumbai ke company ko dekh rahe thy. Ruhi ko doctor se pata chala tha ki judwa bache hai ye khabar sunke bhi saab khush hote hai.​

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ek mahine ke baad aab Raj ka bhi mission pe jane ka din aagaya, raat ko Raj karke Ruhi ki goud mai sar rakh ke leta tha aur Ruhi Raj ke balo mai hath pher rahi thy. ​

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Raj : Ruhi wada karo ki mere jane ke baad apna aur dono bacho ka pura khyal rakhogi.​

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Ruhi : wada raha mere dono bacho ke papa...per aap bhi ek wada kijiye..aap roj mujhe phone karenge aur baat karenge aur roj apne ek photo bhejenge.​

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Raj : wada..aur tum bhi apni har photo bhejna mai apne bacho ko badhta hua dekhna chahta hun pata nahi sayad char mahine se jyada time lag gaya to...​

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Ruhi : yesa maat boliye na...jaldi hi aap meri aur hamare baby ke paas honge.​

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Raj ne uth ke Ruhi ke honth ko chum leta hai aur gale laga leta hai.​

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Raj : jaldi hi apne bacho aur unki mumma ke paas wapas aaunga.​

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Agle din Raj chala jata hai, Raj ke samne to Ruhi ne apne aap ko sambhal liya per jesse hi ek gaya Ruhi ki ankhe behne lagi. Per Anu ne Ruhi ko sambhal liya. Fir dhire dhire din gujar ne lage aur Anu Ruhi ka pura dhyaan rakhti. Anu to bua banne ke liye sabse jyada khusi thy, aur office bhi pura Raj ki tarah hi sambhalne lagi.​

​

Raj Ruhi ko roj raat ko phone karta, dono ek dusre ko apna khyal rakhna ko bolte. Raj Ruhi ki tasveer ko dekhta rehta jaab bhi mission pe kamjor padta. Ruhi ke chehre pe aab maa banne ka noor aaraha tha. Wo aur bhi khubsurat lagne lagi thy. Wanhi Raj jyada tar pathani suit mai hota aur beard bhi bade ho gaye thy.​

​

kabir bhi aakar Ruhi ko hasta rehta, Rohan aur Zara bhi kabhi kabhi aajate thy ya fir Ruhi aur Anu mumbai chale jate thy.​

​

char mahine ho gaye thy Viren bhi apna mission pura karke aagaya tha. Usse iss baar bahut chot lagi thy ek terrorist ne goli maar di thy jo sidhe Viren ke leg mai lagi thy per Viren ne apna mission pura kiya tha aur wapas aagaya tha, to usse 6 mahine ke liye free kar diya gaya tha. Viren Anu ke jid ke karan wanhi reh gaya tha apne ghar na jake.​

​

Aab Ruhi khafi udas rehne lagi thy kyun ki pichle 1 hafte se Raj ka na koyi call aaya hai na koyi photo.​

​

Sabhi pareshan thy aur sabse jyada pareshan Sharma ji, Ram ji Ron aur Ritika ji ko bhi yanhi Ruhi ke paas rehne ke liye bula liya tha, aur pareshan iss liye kyun ki Raj aur uska team ka koyi khabar sahi nahi raha tha.​

​

Ek din Viren Ruhi ke paas betha hua tha to Ruhi ke munh se halki si chikh nikal gayi aur apna hath apne pet pe chala gaya.​

​

Viren (tension mai) : bhabhi kya hua...aap thik to hai na...​

​

Ruhi (khush hote huye) : bacho ne kick kiya.​

​

Jaab ye baat Anu ko pata chali to wo khusi pure ghar mai kudne lagi.​

​

Yese hi dekhte dekhte Raj ko gaye huye 8 mahine ho gaye thy, saab aab kafi dare huye thy, Ron, Ritika ji, Mallick sahad ko baas ye lata tha ki Raj kanhi kaam mai busy hai per asal baat baki saab ko pata thy, saab aab kafi dar gaye thy, Ruhi to baas bhagwan ko prathana kar rahi thy ki jesse bhi kare Raj wapas aajaye.​

​

yese hi time guzar raha tha, saab sirf Raj ko hi miss kar rahe thy aur yahi dua kar rahe thy ki wo sahi salamat wapas aajaye, ek Zara ko pain start ho jata hai to usse hospital le jaya jata hai aur usne ek bete ko janam diya, jiska naam Ruhi ne rakha Rohan ne kehne se, Ruhi ne uska naam Rehan rakhta hai, sabhi ko ye naam bahut acha lagta hai.​

​

Kabir wanha hospital mai hi masti karne lagta hai kyun ki wo mama ban gaya tha, Mallick sahab bhi behed khush thy.​

​

Saab baas upar se khush dikha rahe thy kyun wo dukhi hoke Ruhi ko dukhi karna nahi chahte thy, Rohan, Kabir aur Viren saab Raj ka pata karne ka kossis karte per kuch hath nahi lagta unhe, unhe ye lagta tha ki sayad Raj dusman ke hath lag gaya hai ye fir....., Sharma ji to ander se tut chuke thy, wo jaab bhi Ruhi ko dekhte to samne Ruhi safed saree mai nazar aati.​

​

ek din Ruhi jaab raat ko apne kamre mai jaldi aagayi aur saab bahar khana kha rahe thy pata nahi kyun usse subha se bechani ho rahi thy. Jesse hi kamre mai aake darwaja band kiya to piche se kisine uske ankho mai hath rakh diya, Ruhi wo hath rakhne wale ko pehchan gayi aur jor se bol gayi.....​

​

Ruhi : Raj......​

​

Ruhi ne Raj ka hath hamare piche dekha to Raj samne khada muskura raha tha ..Ruhi to Raj ko dekhte hi behosh ho gayi. Ruhi jaab behosh huyi to Raj tension mai aagaya wo jaldi se Ruhi ko apne goud mai utha ke bahar ki aur bhaga, saab ne Raj ko dekha to heran reh gaye aur khush bhi huye....uske chehre pe bahut se chot aaye thy.​

​

Raj (jor se) : Viren car nikal Ruhi ko hospital leke jana hai.​

​

Viren bhi jaldi harkat mai aagaya aur car nikal diya for sabhi hospital chale gaye.​

​

Saab hospital mai Raj ko dekh ke behed khush huye Sharma ji to aage badh ke Raj ko gale laga liya, fir teeno dost bhi inki to jindegi hi wapas aagayi thy, bhale hi teeno saab ko sambhalte thy per ander se Raj ko khone ka dar se dare huye thy. Fir Anu bhi Raj ke gale lag gayi, aur to rahi thy Raj usse chup karwa raha tha. Fir Raj aage badh ke Ritika ji ke pair chuta hai Ritika ji ne usse rakh ke gale lag leti hai.​

​

Udhar Ruhi ko doctor dekh rahe thy, fir kuch der baad bahar aake Raj se....​

​

Doctor : congratulation Mr. Singh apko ek beta aur beti huyi hai... Mrs. Singh ko thodi der baad room mai shift karwa denge aap taab mil lena bacho se aur Mrs. Singh se.​

​

Raj : thank you doctor.....​

​

Uske chehre pe ek muskan thy aur ankho mai anshu...baap jo ban gaya tha, jaab Ruhi ko sift kiya gaya to Raj uss room ke ander aata hai, Ruhi aab bhi behos thy, Raj ke piche piche Rohan aur Kabir bhi aate hai, aur dono bacho ko apne goud mai utha lete hai.​

​

Kabir : wah..mai to chachu bhi ban gaya....wanhi Viren aur Rohan....​

​

Viren : mai fufa....​

​

Rohan : mai mamu....​

​

Ritika ji aur Ram ji bhi ander aate hai,​

​

Ritika ji : koyi mujhe bhi mere nati natin se milwa do....​

​

Kabir aur Rohan ne bacho ko unhe de dete hai.​

​

Karib adhe ghante baad jaab Ruhi ko hosh aaya aur wo ankhe khola to Raj apne beti ko goud mai leke betha hua tha aur Rohan beta ko....​

​

Jaab Ruhi ko hosh aaya to Rohan Raj hath se beti ko leke bahar chala jata hai.​

​

Ruhi uthne ko huyi ki Raj usse rok ke khus aage badh ke gale laga leta hai Ruhi bhi usse apni baho mai kash leti hai jesse abhi wo kabhi bhi Raj ko kanhi nahi chodegi....​

​

kuch din baad saab ghar wapas aajate hai aur iss baar bacho ka naam rakhne ka Jima Anu ko dete hai....​

​

Anu bhi bete ka naam Rahul rakhti hai aur beti ka naam Riyanshi rakhti hai sabhi ko naam pasand aata hai.​

​

Raj ke aane ka 2 mahine ke ander hi Raj ne Anu aur Viren ka bhi shadi karwa deta hai, wo bhi apni married life ache se nibha rahe thy, aur Kabir ne bhi Mallick sahab yanhi ki apne papa se Nibi ke baare mai baat kar li wo bhi khush thy, per Nibi ke papa nahi maane to Kabir ne apne style mai hi unhe samajha diya....​

​

Kabir : dekhiye sasur ji jaat paat mai kya rakha hai, IPS damad dete bithaye mil raha hai to maan jao warna Nibi ko bhaga le jaunga for do saal mai uske Jessa do cute cute bache paida karunga aur apko unse milne nahi dunga.....​

​

Aab yese pyaar bhari dhamki sunke kon rahi nahi hota wo bhi raji ho gaye Kabir ki aur Nibi ki bhi shadi ho gayi....​

​

Issi bich Anu aur Viren ki taraf se bhi khush khabri aagayi ki Anu maa banne wali hai, sabhi khus thy, fir wo bhi din aagaya jaab Anu ne ek ladki ko janam diya, to Raj ne uska naam Radhika rakha, Kabir ke taraf se bhi ussi din khush khabri mili jiss din Anu ne ladki ko janam diya, Nibi maa banne wali hai, Kabir sabse jyada khush tha aur usse bhi jyaada khush Mallik sahad....​

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9 mahine baad Nibi ne bhi do judwa bete ko janam diya, aur inka naam Zara ne rakha, ek ka naam sahil tha aur dusra ka naam Noman. Mallik sahab apne pote ke khusi mai badi party di.​

​

Viren ko aab ETF ka chief bana diya gyaa tha, Ruhi to Raj ko aab koyi mission ke liye chodti bhi nahi, per Raj chupke chupke mission kar leta tha, Kabir bhi gaddar ka list banake Viren ko deta tha baki Viren aur Raj kar lete thy.​

​

Saab dost Akshar milte thy aur apne bacho ko bhi apne jesa dosti nibhane ka batate thy aur apne apne kisse bhi....yese hi saab guzara kar rahe thy haasi khushi......​

​

Taqdeer ko jo bhi dena hai wo de dega usko na to aap badal sakte na mai badal sakta, to tension lene se kya hoga, so stay happy be happy. Hamesha haste rahiye muskurate rahiye.​

​

cause laughter is the best medicine.​

​

The End​

Nice and superb update..
beautiful end of the story..

 

[NewWriter23]

Bahot shaandaar kahani ka bahot lajawab
END
ZABERDAST SHAANDAAR

Nice and superb update..
beautiful end of the story..

Thank you

 

[Pintupaul]

Superb ending bro