Romance Taqdeer [Completed]

[Pass1234]

Oye passu pahale nhi Bata sakta tha...

Mujhe bhi abhi pata laga Kuch din phle hi

 

[Pass1234]

Hamako lagata hai ki ham let ho gaye...
Writer ji apni next story ka name mention Kar de waha ham jarur maujud rahenge...

NewWriter23 new story Ka name

 

[NewWriter23]

Superb ending bro

Thank you

 

[NewWriter23]

NewWriter23 new story Ka name

Brother second story chal rahi hai War of Gods

 

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Din ba din Ruhi aur Raj ka pyaar aur badh raha tha wanhi Viren aur Anu ki bhi kuch din baad sagayi ho jati hai. Saab bahut khush thy. Kabir ki bhi chuti khatam ho gayi aur wo kaam per laag gaya aur department mai jo gaddar thy un per nazar rakhta tha aur sath mai Nibi ko bhi phone karke tang bhi karta rehta tha. ​

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Nibi ne han nahi kaha tha na, na nahi kaha tha baas jo uske Papa kehte wanhi maan na tha to Kabir se papa se baate karne ko kaha. Kabir bhi maan gaya per agle mahine ke liye taab taak tang karta rehta.​

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ek din Ruhi behosh ho gayi to hospital le gaye. Wanha pata chala ki Ruhi maa banne wali thy tabhi Rohan bhi aajata hai aur Zara bhi maa banne wali hai. Saab ye khabar sunke behed khush hote hai.​

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Dekhte dekhte ek mahina ho gaya aab Viren ko Abu Dhabi nikalna tha to wo nikal gaya. Wanha per jane ke baad roj Anu ko raat ko message kar diya karta tha. ​

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Anu bhi aab Ruhi ke sath company sambhalne lagi thy. Raj kaam hi aata tha aab jyada taar mission ke dhyaan de raha tha. Rohan aur Zara mumbai ke company ko dekh rahe thy. Ruhi ko doctor se pata chala tha ki judwa bache hai ye khabar sunke bhi saab khush hote hai.​

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ek mahine ke baad aab Raj ka bhi mission pe jane ka din aagaya, raat ko Raj karke Ruhi ki goud mai sar rakh ke leta tha aur Ruhi Raj ke balo mai hath pher rahi thy. ​

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Raj : Ruhi wada karo ki mere jane ke baad apna aur dono bacho ka pura khyal rakhogi.​

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Ruhi : wada raha mere dono bacho ke papa...per aap bhi ek wada kijiye..aap roj mujhe phone karenge aur baat karenge aur roj apne ek photo bhejenge.​

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Raj : wada..aur tum bhi apni har photo bhejna mai apne bacho ko badhta hua dekhna chahta hun pata nahi sayad char mahine se jyada time lag gaya to...​

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Ruhi : yesa maat boliye na...jaldi hi aap meri aur hamare baby ke paas honge.​

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Raj ne uth ke Ruhi ke honth ko chum leta hai aur gale laga leta hai.​

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Raj : jaldi hi apne bacho aur unki mumma ke paas wapas aaunga.​

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Agle din Raj chala jata hai, Raj ke samne to Ruhi ne apne aap ko sambhal liya per jesse hi ek gaya Ruhi ki ankhe behne lagi. Per Anu ne Ruhi ko sambhal liya. Fir dhire dhire din gujar ne lage aur Anu Ruhi ka pura dhyaan rakhti. Anu to bua banne ke liye sabse jyada khusi thy, aur office bhi pura Raj ki tarah hi sambhalne lagi.​

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Raj Ruhi ko roj raat ko phone karta, dono ek dusre ko apna khyal rakhna ko bolte. Raj Ruhi ki tasveer ko dekhta rehta jaab bhi mission pe kamjor padta. Ruhi ke chehre pe aab maa banne ka noor aaraha tha. Wo aur bhi khubsurat lagne lagi thy. Wanhi Raj jyada tar pathani suit mai hota aur beard bhi bade ho gaye thy.​

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kabir bhi aakar Ruhi ko hasta rehta, Rohan aur Zara bhi kabhi kabhi aajate thy ya fir Ruhi aur Anu mumbai chale jate thy.​

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char mahine ho gaye thy Viren bhi apna mission pura karke aagaya tha. Usse iss baar bahut chot lagi thy ek terrorist ne goli maar di thy jo sidhe Viren ke leg mai lagi thy per Viren ne apna mission pura kiya tha aur wapas aagaya tha, to usse 6 mahine ke liye free kar diya gaya tha. Viren Anu ke jid ke karan wanhi reh gaya tha apne ghar na jake.​

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Aab Ruhi khafi udas rehne lagi thy kyun ki pichle 1 hafte se Raj ka na koyi call aaya hai na koyi photo.​

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Sabhi pareshan thy aur sabse jyada pareshan Sharma ji, Ram ji Ron aur Ritika ji ko bhi yanhi Ruhi ke paas rehne ke liye bula liya tha, aur pareshan iss liye kyun ki Raj aur uska team ka koyi khabar sahi nahi raha tha.​

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Ek din Viren Ruhi ke paas betha hua tha to Ruhi ke munh se halki si chikh nikal gayi aur apna hath apne pet pe chala gaya.​

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Viren (tension mai) : bhabhi kya hua...aap thik to hai na...​

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Ruhi (khush hote huye) : bacho ne kick kiya.​

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Jaab ye baat Anu ko pata chali to wo khusi pure ghar mai kudne lagi.​

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Yese hi dekhte dekhte Raj ko gaye huye 8 mahine ho gaye thy, saab aab kafi dare huye thy, Ron, Ritika ji, Mallick sahad ko baas ye lata tha ki Raj kanhi kaam mai busy hai per asal baat baki saab ko pata thy, saab aab kafi dar gaye thy, Ruhi to baas bhagwan ko prathana kar rahi thy ki jesse bhi kare Raj wapas aajaye.​

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yese hi time guzar raha tha, saab sirf Raj ko hi miss kar rahe thy aur yahi dua kar rahe thy ki wo sahi salamat wapas aajaye, ek Zara ko pain start ho jata hai to usse hospital le jaya jata hai aur usne ek bete ko janam diya, jiska naam Ruhi ne rakha Rohan ne kehne se, Ruhi ne uska naam Rehan rakhta hai, sabhi ko ye naam bahut acha lagta hai.​

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Kabir wanha hospital mai hi masti karne lagta hai kyun ki wo mama ban gaya tha, Mallick sahab bhi behed khush thy.​

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Saab baas upar se khush dikha rahe thy kyun wo dukhi hoke Ruhi ko dukhi karna nahi chahte thy, Rohan, Kabir aur Viren saab Raj ka pata karne ka kossis karte per kuch hath nahi lagta unhe, unhe ye lagta tha ki sayad Raj dusman ke hath lag gaya hai ye fir....., Sharma ji to ander se tut chuke thy, wo jaab bhi Ruhi ko dekhte to samne Ruhi safed saree mai nazar aati.​

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ek din Ruhi jaab raat ko apne kamre mai jaldi aagayi aur saab bahar khana kha rahe thy pata nahi kyun usse subha se bechani ho rahi thy. Jesse hi kamre mai aake darwaja band kiya to piche se kisine uske ankho mai hath rakh diya, Ruhi wo hath rakhne wale ko pehchan gayi aur jor se bol gayi.....​

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Ruhi : Raj......​

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Ruhi ne Raj ka hath hamare piche dekha to Raj samne khada muskura raha tha ..Ruhi to Raj ko dekhte hi behosh ho gayi. Ruhi jaab behosh huyi to Raj tension mai aagaya wo jaldi se Ruhi ko apne goud mai utha ke bahar ki aur bhaga, saab ne Raj ko dekha to heran reh gaye aur khush bhi huye....uske chehre pe bahut se chot aaye thy.​

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Raj (jor se) : Viren car nikal Ruhi ko hospital leke jana hai.​

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Viren bhi jaldi harkat mai aagaya aur car nikal diya for sabhi hospital chale gaye.​

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Saab hospital mai Raj ko dekh ke behed khush huye Sharma ji to aage badh ke Raj ko gale laga liya, fir teeno dost bhi inki to jindegi hi wapas aagayi thy, bhale hi teeno saab ko sambhalte thy per ander se Raj ko khone ka dar se dare huye thy. Fir Anu bhi Raj ke gale lag gayi, aur to rahi thy Raj usse chup karwa raha tha. Fir Raj aage badh ke Ritika ji ke pair chuta hai Ritika ji ne usse rakh ke gale lag leti hai.​

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Udhar Ruhi ko doctor dekh rahe thy, fir kuch der baad bahar aake Raj se....​

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Doctor : congratulation Mr. Singh apko ek beta aur beti huyi hai... Mrs. Singh ko thodi der baad room mai shift karwa denge aap taab mil lena bacho se aur Mrs. Singh se.​

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Raj : thank you doctor.....​

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Uske chehre pe ek muskan thy aur ankho mai anshu...baap jo ban gaya tha, jaab Ruhi ko sift kiya gaya to Raj uss room ke ander aata hai, Ruhi aab bhi behos thy, Raj ke piche piche Rohan aur Kabir bhi aate hai, aur dono bacho ko apne goud mai utha lete hai.​

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Kabir : wah..mai to chachu bhi ban gaya....wanhi Viren aur Rohan....​

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Viren : mai fufa....​

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Rohan : mai mamu....​

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Ritika ji aur Ram ji bhi ander aate hai,​

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Ritika ji : koyi mujhe bhi mere nati natin se milwa do....​

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Kabir aur Rohan ne bacho ko unhe de dete hai.​

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Karib adhe ghante baad jaab Ruhi ko hosh aaya aur wo ankhe khola to Raj apne beti ko goud mai leke betha hua tha aur Rohan beta ko....​

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Jaab Ruhi ko hosh aaya to Rohan Raj hath se beti ko leke bahar chala jata hai.​

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Ruhi uthne ko huyi ki Raj usse rok ke khus aage badh ke gale laga leta hai Ruhi bhi usse apni baho mai kash leti hai jesse abhi wo kabhi bhi Raj ko kanhi nahi chodegi....​

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kuch din baad saab ghar wapas aajate hai aur iss baar bacho ka naam rakhne ka Jima Anu ko dete hai....​

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Anu bhi bete ka naam Rahul rakhti hai aur beti ka naam Riyanshi rakhti hai sabhi ko naam pasand aata hai.​

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Raj ke aane ka 2 mahine ke ander hi Raj ne Anu aur Viren ka bhi shadi karwa deta hai, wo bhi apni married life ache se nibha rahe thy, aur Kabir ne bhi Mallick sahab yanhi ki apne papa se Nibi ke baare mai baat kar li wo bhi khush thy, per Nibi ke papa nahi maane to Kabir ne apne style mai hi unhe samajha diya....​

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Kabir : dekhiye sasur ji jaat paat mai kya rakha hai, IPS damad dete bithaye mil raha hai to maan jao warna Nibi ko bhaga le jaunga for do saal mai uske Jessa do cute cute bache paida karunga aur apko unse milne nahi dunga.....​

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Aab yese pyaar bhari dhamki sunke kon rahi nahi hota wo bhi raji ho gaye Kabir ki aur Nibi ki bhi shadi ho gayi....​

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Issi bich Anu aur Viren ki taraf se bhi khush khabri aagayi ki Anu maa banne wali hai, sabhi khus thy, fir wo bhi din aagaya jaab Anu ne ek ladki ko janam diya, to Raj ne uska naam Radhika rakha, Kabir ke taraf se bhi ussi din khush khabri mili jiss din Anu ne ladki ko janam diya, Nibi maa banne wali hai, Kabir sabse jyada khush tha aur usse bhi jyaada khush Mallik sahad....​

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9 mahine baad Nibi ne bhi do judwa bete ko janam diya, aur inka naam Zara ne rakha, ek ka naam sahil tha aur dusra ka naam Noman. Mallik sahab apne pote ke khusi mai badi party di.​

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Viren ko aab ETF ka chief bana diya gyaa tha, Ruhi to Raj ko aab koyi mission ke liye chodti bhi nahi, per Raj chupke chupke mission kar leta tha, Kabir bhi gaddar ka list banake Viren ko deta tha baki Viren aur Raj kar lete thy.​

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Saab dost Akshar milte thy aur apne bacho ko bhi apne jesa dosti nibhane ka batate thy aur apne apne kisse bhi....yese hi saab guzara kar rahe thy haasi khushi......​

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Taqdeer ko jo bhi dena hai wo de dega usko na to aap badal sakte na mai badal sakta, to tension lene se kya hoga, so stay happy be happy. Hamesha haste rahiye muskurate rahiye.​

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cause laughter is the best medicine.​

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superbbb story thi writer sahab
pyar krne wale phle bichde and then mil gye
sbko apna pyar mila
or hsi - khusi se pyar bhra sansar
sath hi dosti ki ek mishaal bhi inhone kayam ki
again lazwab story thi bhai

 

[NewWriter23]

superbbb story thi writer sahab
pyar krne wale phle bichde and then mil gye
sbko apna pyar mila
or hsi - khusi se pyar bhra sansar
sath hi dosti ki ek mishaal bhi inhone kayam ki
again lazwab story thi bhai

Thank you brother

 

[mashish]

Kya hua War of gods story kyo close kar di writer ji

 

[Aakash.]

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Din ba din Ruhi aur Raj ka pyaar aur badh raha tha wanhi Viren aur Anu ki bhi kuch din baad sagayi ho jati hai. Saab bahut khush thy. Kabir ki bhi chuti khatam ho gayi aur wo kaam per laag gaya aur department mai jo gaddar thy un per nazar rakhta tha aur sath mai Nibi ko bhi phone karke tang bhi karta rehta tha.

Nibi ne han nahi kaha tha na, na nahi kaha tha baas jo uske Papa kehte wanhi maan na tha to Kabir se papa se baate karne ko kaha. Kabir bhi maan gaya per agle mahine ke liye taab taak tang karta rehta.

ek din Ruhi behosh ho gayi to hospital le gaye. Wanha pata chala ki Ruhi maa banne wali thy tabhi Rohan bhi aajata hai aur Zara bhi maa banne wali hai. Saab ye khabar sunke behed khush hote hai.

Dekhte dekhte ek mahina ho gaya aab Viren ko Abu Dhabi nikalna tha to wo nikal gaya. Wanha per jane ke baad roj Anu ko raat ko message kar diya karta tha.

Anu bhi aab Ruhi ke sath company sambhalne lagi thy. Raj kaam hi aata tha aab jyada taar mission ke dhyaan de raha tha. Rohan aur Zara mumbai ke company ko dekh rahe thy. Ruhi ko doctor se pata chala tha ki judwa bache hai ye khabar sunke bhi saab khush hote hai.

ek mahine ke baad aab Raj ka bhi mission pe jane ka din aagaya, raat ko Raj karke Ruhi ki goud mai sar rakh ke leta tha aur Ruhi Raj ke balo mai hath pher rahi thy.

Raj : Ruhi wada karo ki mere jane ke baad apna aur dono bacho ka pura khyal rakhogi.

Ruhi : wada raha mere dono bacho ke papa...per aap bhi ek wada kijiye..aap roj mujhe phone karenge aur baat karenge aur roj apne ek photo bhejenge.

Raj : wada..aur tum bhi apni har photo bhejna mai apne bacho ko badhta hua dekhna chahta hun pata nahi sayad char mahine se jyada time lag gaya to...

Ruhi : yesa maat boliye na...jaldi hi aap meri aur hamare baby ke paas honge.

Raj ne uth ke Ruhi ke honth ko chum leta hai aur gale laga leta hai.

Raj : jaldi hi apne bacho aur unki mumma ke paas wapas aaunga.

Agle din Raj chala jata hai, Raj ke samne to Ruhi ne apne aap ko sambhal liya per jesse hi ek gaya Ruhi ki ankhe behne lagi. Per Anu ne Ruhi ko sambhal liya. Fir dhire dhire din gujar ne lage aur Anu Ruhi ka pura dhyaan rakhti. Anu to bua banne ke liye sabse jyada khusi thy, aur office bhi pura Raj ki tarah hi sambhalne lagi.

Raj Ruhi ko roj raat ko phone karta, dono ek dusre ko apna khyal rakhna ko bolte. Raj Ruhi ki tasveer ko dekhta rehta jaab bhi mission pe kamjor padta. Ruhi ke chehre pe aab maa banne ka noor aaraha tha. Wo aur bhi khubsurat lagne lagi thy. Wanhi Raj jyada tar pathani suit mai hota aur beard bhi bade ho gaye thy.

kabir bhi aakar Ruhi ko hasta rehta, Rohan aur Zara bhi kabhi kabhi aajate thy ya fir Ruhi aur Anu mumbai chale jate thy.

char mahine ho gaye thy Viren bhi apna mission pura karke aagaya tha. Usse iss baar bahut chot lagi thy ek terrorist ne goli maar di thy jo sidhe Viren ke leg mai lagi thy per Viren ne apna mission pura kiya tha aur wapas aagaya tha, to usse 6 mahine ke liye free kar diya gaya tha. Viren Anu ke jid ke karan wanhi reh gaya tha apne ghar na jake.

Aab Ruhi khafi udas rehne lagi thy kyun ki pichle 1 hafte se Raj ka na koyi call aaya hai na koyi photo.

Sabhi pareshan thy aur sabse jyada pareshan Sharma ji, Ram ji Ron aur Ritika ji ko bhi yanhi Ruhi ke paas rehne ke liye bula liya tha, aur pareshan iss liye kyun ki Raj aur uska team ka koyi khabar sahi nahi raha tha.

Ek din Viren Ruhi ke paas betha hua tha to Ruhi ke munh se halki si chikh nikal gayi aur apna hath apne pet pe chala gaya.

Viren (tension mai) : bhabhi kya hua...aap thik to hai na...

Ruhi (khush hote huye) : bacho ne kick kiya.

Jaab ye baat Anu ko pata chali to wo khusi pure ghar mai kudne lagi.

Yese hi dekhte dekhte Raj ko gaye huye 8 mahine ho gaye thy, saab aab kafi dare huye thy, Ron, Ritika ji, Mallick sahad ko baas ye lata tha ki Raj kanhi kaam mai busy hai per asal baat baki saab ko pata thy, saab aab kafi dar gaye thy, Ruhi to baas bhagwan ko prathana kar rahi thy ki jesse bhi kare Raj wapas aajaye.

yese hi time guzar raha tha, saab sirf Raj ko hi miss kar rahe thy aur yahi dua kar rahe thy ki wo sahi salamat wapas aajaye, ek Zara ko pain start ho jata hai to usse hospital le jaya jata hai aur usne ek bete ko janam diya, jiska naam Ruhi ne rakha Rohan ne kehne se, Ruhi ne uska naam Rehan rakhta hai, sabhi ko ye naam bahut acha lagta hai.

Kabir wanha hospital mai hi masti karne lagta hai kyun ki wo mama ban gaya tha, Mallick sahab bhi behed khush thy.

Saab baas upar se khush dikha rahe thy kyun wo dukhi hoke Ruhi ko dukhi karna nahi chahte thy, Rohan, Kabir aur Viren saab Raj ka pata karne ka kossis karte per kuch hath nahi lagta unhe, unhe ye lagta tha ki sayad Raj dusman ke hath lag gaya hai ye fir....., Sharma ji to ander se tut chuke thy, wo jaab bhi Ruhi ko dekhte to samne Ruhi safed saree mai nazar aati.

ek din Ruhi jaab raat ko apne kamre mai jaldi aagayi aur saab bahar khana kha rahe thy pata nahi kyun usse subha se bechani ho rahi thy. Jesse hi kamre mai aake darwaja band kiya to piche se kisine uske ankho mai hath rakh diya, Ruhi wo hath rakhne wale ko pehchan gayi aur jor se bol gayi.....

Ruhi : Raj......

Ruhi ne Raj ka hath hamare piche dekha to Raj samne khada muskura raha tha ..Ruhi to Raj ko dekhte hi behosh ho gayi. Ruhi jaab behosh huyi to Raj tension mai aagaya wo jaldi se Ruhi ko apne goud mai utha ke bahar ki aur bhaga, saab ne Raj ko dekha to heran reh gaye aur khush bhi huye....uske chehre pe bahut se chot aaye thy.

Raj (jor se) : Viren car nikal Ruhi ko hospital leke jana hai.

Viren bhi jaldi harkat mai aagaya aur car nikal diya for sabhi hospital chale gaye.

Saab hospital mai Raj ko dekh ke behed khush huye Sharma ji to aage badh ke Raj ko gale laga liya, fir teeno dost bhi inki to jindegi hi wapas aagayi thy, bhale hi teeno saab ko sambhalte thy per ander se Raj ko khone ka dar se dare huye thy. Fir Anu bhi Raj ke gale lag gayi, aur to rahi thy Raj usse chup karwa raha tha. Fir Raj aage badh ke Ritika ji ke pair chuta hai Ritika ji ne usse rakh ke gale lag leti hai.

Udhar Ruhi ko doctor dekh rahe thy, fir kuch der baad bahar aake Raj se....

Doctor : congratulation Mr. Singh apko ek beta aur beti huyi hai... Mrs. Singh ko thodi der baad room mai shift karwa denge aap taab mil lena bacho se aur Mrs. Singh se.

Raj : thank you doctor.....

Uske chehre pe ek muskan thy aur ankho mai anshu...baap jo ban gaya tha, jaab Ruhi ko sift kiya gaya to Raj uss room ke ander aata hai, Ruhi aab bhi behos thy, Raj ke piche piche Rohan aur Kabir bhi aate hai, aur dono bacho ko apne goud mai utha lete hai.

Kabir : wah..mai to chachu bhi ban gaya....wanhi Viren aur Rohan....

Viren : mai fufa....

Rohan : mai mamu....

Ritika ji aur Ram ji bhi ander aate hai,

Ritika ji : koyi mujhe bhi mere nati natin se milwa do....

Kabir aur Rohan ne bacho ko unhe de dete hai.

Karib adhe ghante baad jaab Ruhi ko hosh aaya aur wo ankhe khola to Raj apne beti ko goud mai leke betha hua tha aur Rohan beta ko....

Jaab Ruhi ko hosh aaya to Rohan Raj hath se beti ko leke bahar chala jata hai.

Ruhi uthne ko huyi ki Raj usse rok ke khus aage badh ke gale laga leta hai Ruhi bhi usse apni baho mai kash leti hai jesse abhi wo kabhi bhi Raj ko kanhi nahi chodegi....

kuch din baad saab ghar wapas aajate hai aur iss baar bacho ka naam rakhne ka Jima Anu ko dete hai....

Anu bhi bete ka naam Rahul rakhti hai aur beti ka naam Riyanshi rakhti hai sabhi ko naam pasand aata hai.

Raj ke aane ka 2 mahine ke ander hi Raj ne Anu aur Viren ka bhi shadi karwa deta hai, wo bhi apni married life ache se nibha rahe thy, aur Kabir ne bhi Mallick sahab yanhi ki apne papa se Nibi ke baare mai baat kar li wo bhi khush thy, per Nibi ke papa nahi maane to Kabir ne apne style mai hi unhe samajha diya....

Kabir : dekhiye sasur ji jaat paat mai kya rakha hai, IPS damad dete bithaye mil raha hai to maan jao warna Nibi ko bhaga le jaunga for do saal mai uske Jessa do cute cute bache paida karunga aur apko unse milne nahi dunga.....

Aab yese pyaar bhari dhamki sunke kon rahi nahi hota wo bhi raji ho gaye Kabir ki aur Nibi ki bhi shadi ho gayi....

Issi bich Anu aur Viren ki taraf se bhi khush khabri aagayi ki Anu maa banne wali hai, sabhi khus thy, fir wo bhi din aagaya jaab Anu ne ek ladki ko janam diya, to Raj ne uska naam Radhika rakha, Kabir ke taraf se bhi ussi din khush khabri mili jiss din Anu ne ladki ko janam diya, Nibi maa banne wali hai, Kabir sabse jyada khush tha aur usse bhi jyaada khush Mallik sahad....

9 mahine baad Nibi ne bhi do judwa bete ko janam diya, aur inka naam Zara ne rakha, ek ka naam sahil tha aur dusra ka naam Noman. Mallik sahab apne pote ke khusi mai badi party di.

Viren ko aab ETF ka chief bana diya gyaa tha, Ruhi to Raj ko aab koyi mission ke liye chodti bhi nahi, per Raj chupke chupke mission kar leta tha, Kabir bhi gaddar ka list banake Viren ko deta tha baki Viren aur Raj kar lete thy.

Saab dost Akshar milte thy aur apne bacho ko bhi apne jesa dosti nibhane ka batate thy aur apne apne kisse bhi....yese hi saab guzara kar rahe thy haasi khushi......

Taqdeer ko jo bhi dena hai wo de dega usko na to aap badal sakte na mai badal sakta, to tension lene se kya hoga, so stay happy be happy. Hamesha haste rahiye muskurate rahiye.

cause laughter is the best medicine.

The End​

भाई
सबसे पहली बात आप XF हों या नहीं भाई

 

[Adirshi]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words tak ho sakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. . Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writers ko Awards k alawa Cash prizes bhi milenge jinki jaankaari rules thread mein dedi gayi hai, Total 7000 Rupees k prizes iss baar USC k liye diye jaa rahe hain, sahi Suna aapne total 7000 Rupees k cash prizes aap jeet shaktey hain issliye derr matt kijiye or apni kahani likhna suru kijiye.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 28th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar shakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Rules Check karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Rules & Queries Thread


Contest ke regarding Chit Chat karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Chit Chat Thread

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Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	3000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	1500 Rupees + Award + 3000 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP	750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader	750 Rupees Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :-XForum Staff