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Update number..............Two ...... ( 2 )


Me ( man me ) ............... Dekh rahi ho
maa ajj tera
ye beta akela pad gya hi sab ne cod dia
sath mera
lakin tum chinta mat karna
me apni jan apni Rani gudiya ka sath
kabhi bhi nhai chodunga ise padha
likha kar bhut bada insan banuga me maa ye wada hi tere bete ka tujh se maa

me bhut der se chal raha tha aur ab bhut thak gya
tha mene dekha ki bagal me ek park tha
to me wahi beth gaya thoda aram karne ke
liye
Priya ............ Mere pyare bhayu ab hm log kaha
jayege papa ne hme ghar se nikal dia app
ko nhai ana chahiye tha mere sath app ko
ghar pr rahna chahiye tha
app kyo aye mere sath jaye chale jayie yaha se

me ............ Meri jan ho tum meri pyari gudia tumhara
bhai rumhe puri jindgi apne sath rakh lega
tum chinta mat karo me tumhe kuch
nhai hone dunga
Priya ............. App ko mere sath rahne ke liye jab me
badi ho jaugi tab mujh se shadi karni hogi tabhi
to me app ke sath rh pungi wada karo
mujh se app ki app mujh se hi shadi karo ge
gudiya ki baat ko sun mujhe bhut hasi a
gayi

Priya ............ Me yaha sirus mettar pr baat kr rahi
hu app se aur ek app hi bs hase ja rhe hi jayie
me app se baat nhai karti
gudiya mujh se bar - bar jis karne lagi thi
mene socha abhi coti hi is liye esi bate kr rahi hi
me ........ Acha baba kar lunga me shadi apse ab
kush
meri baat sun kr uske chehre par muskan a gayi

Priya ( kush hote hue ) ............ Ha ab me bhut kush hu
ese hi hasi majak karte hue kuch hour bit gaye
me ......... Gudiya ab chalo ab hme yaha se chalna
chahiye meri gudiya Rani jan
Priya .......... Chaliye fir mene kb apse mana kia hi


location ................. Raja Thakur house

Raj aur Priya ke jane ke bad Kabya aur Sakti
kumar bhut kush hue

Raja .......... Chalo ek musibat hi kam hui
Sakti kumar ........... Ha Jija ji ajj apne koi sahi
phesla lia hi dono sapolo ko is ghar se nikal
kr ab ja kr is ghar ko shanti milegi

kabya ........... Ha ji bhiaya sahi kh rhe hi

me aur Priya roed se ja rhe the use me apni baho
me lia tha aur bate kr raha tha
ki mere pair ke jute me mujhe kuch chubhne laga
me ........ Jan kuch der yahi rahna me apna juta nikal
kr dekh lu is me kuch hi
Priya .......... Ok pyare bhayu

me juk kr apne shoes ko nikal kr dekhne
Laga ki achanak ek bike pr ek Aurat
aur Aadmi beth kr a rhe the unke hath
me ek chota sa bacha tha

achanak us admi ki bike ek brekar pr jakr jor se uchli
aur us aurat ke hath se wo bacha
uchal kr niche girne laga
mene dekha to jor bhag kr use apni godi me le
liya jamin se girne se pehle

Aurat bhut dar gai
Aadmi ne turant apni bike roki aur
Utar kr bhag kr mere pas aya
Aurat ........... ( Rote huye ) ......... Bhut - bhut
Sukragujar hu me tumhari beta me ye karz
jindagi bhar nhai bhul paungi
ajj tumne hmare ek lote bete ko marne se bachaya hi

Aadmi ........... Ha beta
itne me gudiya meri jan meri rani bhi a gyai
mere pas
Priya .......... Pyare bhayu app ko kahi chot to nhai lagi
me ............ Me nhai meri gudiya

me ........ Isme sukriya ki koi baat nhai hi
ye to mera farz hi
Aurat .......... Beta Tum dono akele ho tumhare sath koi
nhai hi tumhare maa baap
me ....... Nhai hmara is duniya me koi nhai
hi
Aadmi ........... Beta Tum kaha rahte ho
me ........ Yahi kahi koi park me so jaunga
Aadmi ........... Nhai beta ajj se tum hmare sath rhoge
mera ek dhaba hi kya tum usme kam karoge
me ......... ( Kushi se ) ji kyo nhai mujhe bs app ni
gudiya ke liye kuch bhi kr lunga

Aurat .......... Ha beta app hmare sath chalo
Ajj se app ki gudiya ka dyan me rakhungi
unki baat sun kr me bhut kush ho gya


fir me aur gudiya unke sath chle aye
unhone hme apne ghar me rahne ke liye
ik kamra
de dia aur us Aadmi
ne kaha ki kl mujhe wo dhabe
pr le jayega ajj me aram karu
Me aur gudiya bhut kush the ki ajj
mujhe rahne ke
Liye ek ghar mil gaya

Me gudiya app so jao
Priya ............... nhai mere pyar bhau me nhai soungi
app din bhr mujhe apni godi me lekr thak
Gaye honge chaliye app let jayie me app ke per hath sb
ki ache se malish kr deti hu

meri jan ki baat sun kr mujhe hasi a gayi
ki kitna pyar karti thi meri jan mujhe
se
me............meri jan me tumhe sari jindagi app
ni baho me lekr rakh sakta hu
isi trah bate karte rhe hm log
aur kuch der baad ham dono so gaye

location............... Death lok

Goddess of life...............dekh rhe hi app
apne Putra ko
kya hal ho gya hu
unka wo sare Universe ke Prince
hokar God of life Prince of death hokr
ik dhabe
Pr kam karne ja rhe hi
aur app bs muskara kr Anand le rhe hi
Goddess of life..........Me unka esa hal nhai dekh
sakti app kuch karte kyo nhai app
ke bhi putra hi wo

God of death..............Me bs hmare putra ke adbhut
prem ka anand le rha hu

God of death................abhi unhe is Universe ka sanchaln
karna hi wo itne kamjor bhi nhai hi
app maa hi app ko bs app na putra dikh rha hi bs

pr ik bar app unhe Tha Goddess of life ki
jagah rakh kr dekhe to app ko samajh a jaye ga
wo koi Aam manushya nhai balki is Universe
ke Prince hone ke sath - sath Tha God of life
and Tha Prince of death son of Tha God of death
and Tha Goddess of life hi

Putra hi wo mere unhe dukh me dekh mujhe
bhi dard hota hi lekin ik pita ki drist me
na ki Tha God of death ki dristi se

Tha Godess of life ............ App sahi kh rhe hi
lekin is maa ke dil ko hm kese samjhaye
Jo Ki app ne putra se beintaha
mahobbat karta hi

Location............Earth India Delhi

Morning me meri ankh khuli
Mene dekha ki meri jan ke chehre pr bhut
Pyari muskan dekh kr me kho sa gya







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Nevil singh

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Update.................Three.( 3 )...........................Location..............(planet earth India Delhi)............

Apni jan ke chehre par muskan dekh me

me kuch der ke liye usi me kho gya kitni
pyari lagti thi meri jan sote hue kitni pyari
hi me kabhi iska sath nhai chodunga chaye jo
ho jaye me apni jan Rani ko hmesa kush
Rakhunga kabhi ise dukhi nhai
hone dunga ye mene apne
app se vachan lia

mene socha kuch der aur some deta hu
bechri ko kitni pyari aur masoum hi
uske bad me apne room se nikla
mujhe wo Aadmi mil gya

Character introduction of family-------------


Aadmi.............Din dyal
Aurat............Rani wife of din dyal
Raju...........son of din dyal and Rani

Din dyal................Are Raj beta kese ho chalo naha dho kr ready ho jao Dhabe pr bhi chalna hi
hme
me...........ji chacha ji hm abhi naha kr tyar ho jaye hi
bs kuch der rukiye
uske baad me fresh hokr nha kr tyar ho gya
mene socha ab chlu apni jan ko jaga du
me apne room me chal dia jab me phucha to dekha meri
jan jag gayi hi
me........... gudiya app jab jagi thodi der aur so
leti
Priya...........Pyare bhayu ajj app chacha ji ke sath
Kam karne jane wale hi a ache se rhiyega
apna dyan rakhiyega
aur time se khana kha lijiyega
me.......... hahahahahah bas karo bhai tum to abhi se
Bibi wali harkate karni lagi ho
Priya.............Abhi nhai hu app ki bibi to kya
hu bad me to houngi
me apni jan ki baat sun kar hasne laga
kitni pyari baat karti thi meri
jan
me......... Acha baba ye sab chodo m chala jaunga
to chachi ko tang mat karna ok


Priya( has kar)............Thik hi pyare bhayu
me uske baad Angan me chal dia chacha beth kr
Waha khana kha rhe the
Chachi............Raj chalo app bhi khana kha lo
me..........ji chachi
uske baad me bhi chacha ke sath beth kr khana kaya

fir chacha ne apni bike nikali
me............Chachi meri gudiya ka dyan rakhna
Chachi.........Thik hi Raj
fir me aur chacha bike pr beth kr dhabe pr chal
die kuch der bad ham waha pahuche

Dhaba dikhne me acha tha waha 4 log kam
karte the 1...kalu, 2..... Ramu, 3.......kamla, 4.......Rani
kalu aur Ramu dhabe pr ane wale logo ka
odar likhta aur kalu unko khana deta
kamla aur Rani khana tyar karti

Jab ham dhabe pr pahuche to charo
Ne jese hi chacha ko dekha
Charo........Pranam malik
Chacha..........ye hi Raj ajj se tum logo ke sath
Kam Karega thik hi
Charo.........Ji malik

fir me bhi unhi logo ke sath kam karne laga
Jese mej safh karna kurshi saf karna
logo ko pani dena pira din yahi kam karta
rha me duphar hone pr hm charo
me khana khaya
Rat tk me bhut thak gya ajj tak mene ye
sare kam kabhi kia hi nhai tha to meri adat

nhai thi karne ki lakin mene socha mujhe
ye kam karna hoga apni jan ke
liye karna hoga
Rat ko me chacha ke sath unki bike
pr beth kr ghar a gya

mujhe dekh kr Priya mere pas ayi aur
mujh se lipat gayi
uske bad me aur chacha aur Priya ne sath -
sath khana kaya

Ab mera yahi kam ho gya tha me Subha
news paper batta tha aur Rat ko apni
gudiya se pyar bhari bate karta tha
chachi meri jan ka ache se khayal

rakhti thi mujhe vhi ab adat pr gayi
thi ese hi dekhte dekhte ek year
bit gye ab meri jan 7 year ki ho gyi thi aur me 11 year ka

Mere pas news paper aur dhabe se kam
karne se bhut rupaye jama ho gaye
tha mene socha kyu na me apni jan ka nam
kisi ache school me likha du

ajj jb me Subha utha to apni jan ko
dekha to kho sa gaya usme kitni pyari dikhti thi meri jan
mene usko jagaya
me........jan meri gudiya me soch rha hu ki
apka admission school me kra du
app bta rahi thi na ki app ko padhna acha lagta hi

meri baat sun kr Priya kush ho gayi
Priya.........ha mere pyare bhau mughe padhna bhut acha
lagta hi app mera nam sach me school me sach me likheyege
me........Ha meri jan kl tumhe me school le chalunga
Priya.........ok pyare bhau

us din me chacha ke sath dhabe pr se ja raha tha
to mujhe raste me ik school dikha
uska nam tha N . M public school
mene socha ki me apni Priya ka admision isi me krunga
mere pas abhi 95000 rupaye the

kl Subha mene meri jan ko pyar se uthaya
Me........me chalo jan ab hme school jane ke liye
tyar hona hi
fir me aur meri jan tyar ho gye jane ke liye

Location ..............N . M public school
admission office me me apni jan ke sath ache
se tyar hokr a gya
wha bhut sare bache the
mene admission forum lia aur U . K . G
ka use ek uncle se fil kra kr
rakh lia jab hmari bari ayi to me apni jan ke sath admission room
me chala gaya

Sir........... Hallo beta kya nam hi apka aur
apke parents kha hi
me............ Hallo sir my name Raj Singh Thakur and she is my
sister Priya Singh Thakur sir mujhe meri behan ka admission
karana hi
Mere mami papa nhai hi
Sir..........what app ke mom dad nhai hi sorry beta app
fir apni bhen ki fees kese dohe beta
me.........sir mujhe bas apni behan ka admission
karana hi me ik dhabe aur news paper
deta hu app chinta mata kare me

apni bhen ke liye aur kam krunga
use sche se padhaunga
Sir........what app itni si umar me itna kam karte hi
Bhagwan kre har behan ko App jesa bhai mile
uske baad sir ne Priya ka admission kr lia
mene rupaye submit kiye

me.........sir ise kab se school ana hi
sir..........beta kl se ajj app inhe copy aur book la dena
me........ok sir Thanks
Sir.........your welcome beta

usKe bad me aur Priya market gaye waha se mene Priya
ke liye drese aur copy aur book lia
fir ham ghar a gaye Priya bhut kush thi kyoki

use school jana tha ab se mene bhi soch lia mujhe ab
aur kam karna hoga tabhi me apni jan ko ashe se padha paunga

Location...............Raja Thakur house

Sakti kumar aur aur uska 4 year ka beta
ache se ab mahal me rahne lage
kabya bhi bhut kush thi kyoki wo
maa banne wali thi

Raja Thakur ka bisness bhi acha chal raha tha ab
wo log bhut kush the

kabaya ki hi marji chalti thi hr jagah ab
Raja Thakur bs uska katputli ban kr rah
gya tha

Location............Din dyal dhaba

EK bhut mhengi var ruki aur usme se ak aurat nikli
aur Ramu bhag kr uske pas gaya
Ramu............. boliye medam kya lau
Medam............Kuwar Raj Pratap Singh Thakur ko bulaya ke le awo







Beshkimti update mitr
 

Luffy

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Update.................Three.( 3 )...........................Location..............(planet earth India Delhi)............

Apni jan ke chehre par muskan dekh me

me kuch der ke liye usi me kho gya kitni
pyari lagti thi meri jan sote hue kitni pyari
hi me kabhi iska sath nhai chodunga chaye jo
ho jaye me apni jan Rani ko hmesa kush
Rakhunga kabhi ise dukhi nhai
hone dunga ye mene apne
app se vachan lia

mene socha kuch der aur some deta hu
bechri ko kitni pyari aur masoum hi
uske bad me apne room se nikla
mujhe wo Aadmi mil gya

Character introduction of family-------------


Aadmi.............Din dyal
Aurat............Rani wife of din dyal
Raju...........son of din dyal and Rani

Din dyal................Are Raj beta kese ho chalo naha dho kr ready ho jao Dhabe pr bhi chalna hi
hme
me...........ji chacha ji hm abhi naha kr tyar ho jaye hi
bs kuch der rukiye
uske baad me fresh hokr nha kr tyar ho gya
mene socha ab chlu apni jan ko jaga du
me apne room me chal dia jab me phucha to dekha meri
jan jag gayi hi
me........... gudiya app jab jagi thodi der aur so
leti
Priya...........Pyare bhayu ajj app chacha ji ke sath
Kam karne jane wale hi a ache se rhiyega
apna dyan rakhiyega
aur time se khana kha lijiyega
me.......... hahahahahah bas karo bhai tum to abhi se
Bibi wali harkate karni lagi ho
Priya.............Abhi nhai hu app ki bibi to kya
hu bad me to houngi
me apni jan ki baat sun kar hasne laga
kitni pyari baat karti thi meri
jan
me......... Acha baba ye sab chodo m chala jaunga
to chachi ko tang mat karna ok


Priya( has kar)............Thik hi pyare bhayu
me uske baad Angan me chal dia chacha beth kr
Waha khana kha rhe the
Chachi............Raj chalo app bhi khana kha lo
me..........ji chachi
uske baad me bhi chacha ke sath beth kr khana kaya

fir chacha ne apni bike nikali
me............Chachi meri gudiya ka dyan rakhna
Chachi.........Thik hi Raj
fir me aur chacha bike pr beth kr dhabe pr chal
die kuch der bad ham waha pahuche

Dhaba dikhne me acha tha waha 4 log kam
karte the 1...kalu, 2..... Ramu, 3.......kamla, 4.......Rani
kalu aur Ramu dhabe pr ane wale logo ka
odar likhta aur kalu unko khana deta
kamla aur Rani khana tyar karti

Jab ham dhabe pr pahuche to charo
Ne jese hi chacha ko dekha
Charo........Pranam malik
Chacha..........ye hi Raj ajj se tum logo ke sath
Kam Karega thik hi
Charo.........Ji malik

fir me bhi unhi logo ke sath kam karne laga
Jese mej safh karna kurshi saf karna
logo ko pani dena pira din yahi kam karta
rha me duphar hone pr hm charo
me khana khaya
Rat tk me bhut thak gya ajj tak mene ye
sare kam kabhi kia hi nhai tha to meri adat

nhai thi karne ki lakin mene socha mujhe
ye kam karna hoga apni jan ke
liye karna hoga
Rat ko me chacha ke sath unki bike
pr beth kr ghar a gya

mujhe dekh kr Priya mere pas ayi aur
mujh se lipat gayi
uske bad me aur chacha aur Priya ne sath -
sath khana kaya

Ab mera yahi kam ho gya tha me Subha
news paper batta tha aur Rat ko apni
gudiya se pyar bhari bate karta tha
chachi meri jan ka ache se khayal

rakhti thi mujhe vhi ab adat pr gayi
thi ese hi dekhte dekhte ek year
bit gye ab meri jan 7 year ki ho gyi thi aur me 11 year ka

Mere pas news paper aur dhabe se kam
karne se bhut rupaye jama ho gaye
tha mene socha kyu na me apni jan ka nam
kisi ache school me likha du

ajj jb me Subha utha to apni jan ko
dekha to kho sa gaya usme kitni pyari dikhti thi meri jan
mene usko jagaya
me........jan meri gudiya me soch rha hu ki
apka admission school me kra du
app bta rahi thi na ki app ko padhna acha lagta hi

meri baat sun kr Priya kush ho gayi
Priya.........ha mere pyare bhau mughe padhna bhut acha
lagta hi app mera nam sach me school me sach me likheyege
me........Ha meri jan kl tumhe me school le chalunga
Priya.........ok pyare bhau

us din me chacha ke sath dhabe pr se ja raha tha
to mujhe raste me ik school dikha
uska nam tha N . M public school
mene socha ki me apni Priya ka admision isi me krunga
mere pas abhi 95000 rupaye the

kl Subha mene meri jan ko pyar se uthaya
Me........me chalo jan ab hme school jane ke liye
tyar hona hi
fir me aur meri jan tyar ho gye jane ke liye

Location ..............N . M public school
admission office me me apni jan ke sath ache
se tyar hokr a gya
wha bhut sare bache the
mene admission forum lia aur U . K . G
ka use ek uncle se fil kra kr
rakh lia jab hmari bari ayi to me apni jan ke sath admission room
me chala gaya

Sir........... Hallo beta kya nam hi apka aur
apke parents kha hi
me............ Hallo sir my name Raj Singh Thakur and she is my
sister Priya Singh Thakur sir mujhe meri behan ka admission
karana hi
Mere mami papa nhai hi
Sir..........what app ke mom dad nhai hi sorry beta app
fir apni bhen ki fees kese dohe beta
me.........sir mujhe bas apni behan ka admission
karana hi me ik dhabe aur news paper
deta hu app chinta mata kare me

apni bhen ke liye aur kam krunga
use sche se padhaunga
Sir........what app itni si umar me itna kam karte hi
Bhagwan kre har behan ko App jesa bhai mile
uske baad sir ne Priya ka admission kr lia
mene rupaye submit kiye

me.........sir ise kab se school ana hi
sir..........beta kl se ajj app inhe copy aur book la dena
me........ok sir Thanks
Sir.........your welcome beta

usKe bad me aur Priya market gaye waha se mene Priya
ke liye drese aur copy aur book lia
fir ham ghar a gaye Priya bhut kush thi kyoki

use school jana tha ab se mene bhi soch lia mujhe ab
aur kam karna hoga tabhi me apni jan ko ashe se padha paunga

Location...............Raja Thakur house

Sakti kumar aur aur uska 4 year ka beta
ache se ab mahal me rahne lage
kabya bhi bhut kush thi kyoki wo
maa banne wali thi

Raja Thakur ka bisness bhi acha chal raha tha ab
wo log bhut kush the

kabaya ki hi marji chalti thi hr jagah ab
Raja Thakur bs uska katputli ban kr rah
gya tha

Location............Din dyal dhaba

EK bhut mhengi var ruki aur usme se ak aurat nikli
aur Ramu bhag kr uske pas gaya
Ramu............. boliye medam kya lau
Medam............Kuwar Raj Pratap Singh Thakur ko bulaya ke le awo







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Vickey.a

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First or all congrats for new story upadte bahut accha hai bhai pad or maza aa gya
Ab kon aa gya abhi tk to koi bhi puchne nhi aa raha tha dekhna h aage kya hota h bhai wait nhi ho raha ek update or de do plzzz
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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Update.................Three.( 3 )...........................Location..............(planet earth India Delhi)............

Apni jan ke chehre par muskan dekh me

me kuch der ke liye usi me kho gya kitni
pyari lagti thi meri jan sote hue kitni pyari
hi me kabhi iska sath nhai chodunga chaye jo
ho jaye me apni jan Rani ko hmesa kush
Rakhunga kabhi ise dukhi nhai
hone dunga ye mene apne
app se vachan lia

mene socha kuch der aur some deta hu
bechri ko kitni pyari aur masoum hi
uske bad me apne room se nikla
mujhe wo Aadmi mil gya

Character introduction of family-------------


Aadmi.............Din dyal
Aurat............Rani wife of din dyal
Raju...........son of din dyal and Rani

Din dyal................Are Raj beta kese ho chalo naha dho kr ready ho jao Dhabe pr bhi chalna hi
hme
me...........ji chacha ji hm abhi naha kr tyar ho jaye hi
bs kuch der rukiye
uske baad me fresh hokr nha kr tyar ho gya
mene socha ab chlu apni jan ko jaga du
me apne room me chal dia jab me phucha to dekha meri
jan jag gayi hi
me........... gudiya app jab jagi thodi der aur so
leti
Priya...........Pyare bhayu ajj app chacha ji ke sath
Kam karne jane wale hi a ache se rhiyega
apna dyan rakhiyega
aur time se khana kha lijiyega
me.......... hahahahahah bas karo bhai tum to abhi se
Bibi wali harkate karni lagi ho
Priya.............Abhi nhai hu app ki bibi to kya
hu bad me to houngi
me apni jan ki baat sun kar hasne laga
kitni pyari baat karti thi meri
jan
me......... Acha baba ye sab chodo m chala jaunga
to chachi ko tang mat karna ok


Priya( has kar)............Thik hi pyare bhayu
me uske baad Angan me chal dia chacha beth kr
Waha khana kha rhe the
Chachi............Raj chalo app bhi khana kha lo
me..........ji chachi
uske baad me bhi chacha ke sath beth kr khana kaya

fir chacha ne apni bike nikali
me............Chachi meri gudiya ka dyan rakhna
Chachi.........Thik hi Raj
fir me aur chacha bike pr beth kr dhabe pr chal
die kuch der bad ham waha pahuche

Dhaba dikhne me acha tha waha 4 log kam
karte the 1...kalu, 2..... Ramu, 3.......kamla, 4.......Rani
kalu aur Ramu dhabe pr ane wale logo ka
odar likhta aur kalu unko khana deta
kamla aur Rani khana tyar karti

Jab ham dhabe pr pahuche to charo
Ne jese hi chacha ko dekha
Charo........Pranam malik
Chacha..........ye hi Raj ajj se tum logo ke sath
Kam Karega thik hi
Charo.........Ji malik

fir me bhi unhi logo ke sath kam karne laga
Jese mej safh karna kurshi saf karna
logo ko pani dena pira din yahi kam karta
rha me duphar hone pr hm charo
me khana khaya
Rat tk me bhut thak gya ajj tak mene ye
sare kam kabhi kia hi nhai tha to meri adat

nhai thi karne ki lakin mene socha mujhe
ye kam karna hoga apni jan ke
liye karna hoga
Rat ko me chacha ke sath unki bike
pr beth kr ghar a gya

mujhe dekh kr Priya mere pas ayi aur
mujh se lipat gayi
uske bad me aur chacha aur Priya ne sath -
sath khana kaya

Ab mera yahi kam ho gya tha me Subha
news paper batta tha aur Rat ko apni
gudiya se pyar bhari bate karta tha
chachi meri jan ka ache se khayal

rakhti thi mujhe vhi ab adat pr gayi
thi ese hi dekhte dekhte ek year
bit gye ab meri jan 7 year ki ho gyi thi aur me 11 year ka

Mere pas news paper aur dhabe se kam
karne se bhut rupaye jama ho gaye
tha mene socha kyu na me apni jan ka nam
kisi ache school me likha du

ajj jb me Subha utha to apni jan ko
dekha to kho sa gaya usme kitni pyari dikhti thi meri jan
mene usko jagaya
me........jan meri gudiya me soch rha hu ki
apka admission school me kra du
app bta rahi thi na ki app ko padhna acha lagta hi

meri baat sun kr Priya kush ho gayi
Priya.........ha mere pyare bhau mughe padhna bhut acha
lagta hi app mera nam sach me school me sach me likheyege
me........Ha meri jan kl tumhe me school le chalunga
Priya.........ok pyare bhau

us din me chacha ke sath dhabe pr se ja raha tha
to mujhe raste me ik school dikha
uska nam tha N . M public school
mene socha ki me apni Priya ka admision isi me krunga
mere pas abhi 95000 rupaye the

kl Subha mene meri jan ko pyar se uthaya
Me........me chalo jan ab hme school jane ke liye
tyar hona hi
fir me aur meri jan tyar ho gye jane ke liye

Location ..............N . M public school
admission office me me apni jan ke sath ache
se tyar hokr a gya
wha bhut sare bache the
mene admission forum lia aur U . K . G
ka use ek uncle se fil kra kr
rakh lia jab hmari bari ayi to me apni jan ke sath admission room
me chala gaya

Sir........... Hallo beta kya nam hi apka aur
apke parents kha hi
me............ Hallo sir my name Raj Singh Thakur and she is my
sister Priya Singh Thakur sir mujhe meri behan ka admission
karana hi
Mere mami papa nhai hi
Sir..........what app ke mom dad nhai hi sorry beta app
fir apni bhen ki fees kese dohe beta
me.........sir mujhe bas apni behan ka admission
karana hi me ik dhabe aur news paper
deta hu app chinta mata kare me

apni bhen ke liye aur kam krunga
use sche se padhaunga
Sir........what app itni si umar me itna kam karte hi
Bhagwan kre har behan ko App jesa bhai mile
uske baad sir ne Priya ka admission kr lia
mene rupaye submit kiye

me.........sir ise kab se school ana hi
sir..........beta kl se ajj app inhe copy aur book la dena
me........ok sir Thanks
Sir.........your welcome beta

usKe bad me aur Priya market gaye waha se mene Priya
ke liye drese aur copy aur book lia
fir ham ghar a gaye Priya bhut kush thi kyoki

use school jana tha ab se mene bhi soch lia mujhe ab
aur kam karna hoga tabhi me apni jan ko ashe se padha paunga

Location...............Raja Thakur house

Sakti kumar aur aur uska 4 year ka beta
ache se ab mahal me rahne lage
kabya bhi bhut kush thi kyoki wo
maa banne wali thi

Raja Thakur ka bisness bhi acha chal raha tha ab
wo log bhut kush the

kabaya ki hi marji chalti thi hr jagah ab
Raja Thakur bs uska katputli ban kr rah
gya tha

Location............Din dyal dhaba

EK bhut mhengi var ruki aur usme se ak aurat nikli
aur Ramu bhag kr uske pas gaya
Ramu............. boliye medam kya lau
Medam............Kuwar Raj Pratap Singh Thakur ko bulaya ke le awo







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