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Update.................Three.( 3 )...........................Location..............(planet earth India Delhi)............

Apni jan ke chehre par muskan dekh me

me kuch der ke liye usi me kho gya kitni
pyari lagti thi meri jan sote hue kitni pyari
hi me kabhi iska sath nhai chodunga chaye jo
ho jaye me apni jan Rani ko hmesa kush
Rakhunga kabhi ise dukhi nhai
hone dunga ye mene apne
app se vachan lia

mene socha kuch der aur some deta hu
bechri ko kitni pyari aur masoum hi
uske bad me apne room se nikla
mujhe wo Aadmi mil gya

Character introduction of family-------------


Aadmi.............Din dyal
Aurat............Rani wife of din dyal
Raju...........son of din dyal and Rani

Din dyal................Are Raj beta kese ho chalo naha dho kr ready ho jao Dhabe pr bhi chalna hi
hme
me...........ji chacha ji hm abhi naha kr tyar ho jaye hi
bs kuch der rukiye
uske baad me fresh hokr nha kr tyar ho gya
mene socha ab chlu apni jan ko jaga du
me apne room me chal dia jab me phucha to dekha meri
jan jag gayi hi
me........... gudiya app jab jagi thodi der aur so
leti
Priya...........Pyare bhayu ajj app chacha ji ke sath
Kam karne jane wale hi a ache se rhiyega
apna dyan rakhiyega
aur time se khana kha lijiyega
me.......... hahahahahah bas karo bhai tum to abhi se
Bibi wali harkate karni lagi ho
Priya.............Abhi nhai hu app ki bibi to kya
hu bad me to houngi
me apni jan ki baat sun kar hasne laga
kitni pyari baat karti thi meri
jan
me......... Acha baba ye sab chodo m chala jaunga
to chachi ko tang mat karna ok


Priya( has kar)............Thik hi pyare bhayu
me uske baad Angan me chal dia chacha beth kr
Waha khana kha rhe the
Chachi............Raj chalo app bhi khana kha lo
me..........ji chachi
uske baad me bhi chacha ke sath beth kr khana kaya

fir chacha ne apni bike nikali
me............Chachi meri gudiya ka dyan rakhna
Chachi.........Thik hi Raj
fir me aur chacha bike pr beth kr dhabe pr chal
die kuch der bad ham waha pahuche

Dhaba dikhne me acha tha waha 4 log kam
karte the 1...kalu, 2..... Ramu, 3.......kamla, 4.......Rani
kalu aur Ramu dhabe pr ane wale logo ka
odar likhta aur kalu unko khana deta
kamla aur Rani khana tyar karti

Jab ham dhabe pr pahuche to charo
Ne jese hi chacha ko dekha
Charo........Pranam malik
Chacha..........ye hi Raj ajj se tum logo ke sath
Kam Karega thik hi
Charo.........Ji malik

fir me bhi unhi logo ke sath kam karne laga
Jese mej safh karna kurshi saf karna
logo ko pani dena pira din yahi kam karta
rha me duphar hone pr hm charo
me khana khaya
Rat tk me bhut thak gya ajj tak mene ye
sare kam kabhi kia hi nhai tha to meri adat

nhai thi karne ki lakin mene socha mujhe
ye kam karna hoga apni jan ke
liye karna hoga
Rat ko me chacha ke sath unki bike
pr beth kr ghar a gya

mujhe dekh kr Priya mere pas ayi aur
mujh se lipat gayi
uske bad me aur chacha aur Priya ne sath -
sath khana kaya

Ab mera yahi kam ho gya tha me Subha
news paper batta tha aur Rat ko apni
gudiya se pyar bhari bate karta tha
chachi meri jan ka ache se khayal

rakhti thi mujhe vhi ab adat pr gayi
thi ese hi dekhte dekhte ek year
bit gye ab meri jan 7 year ki ho gyi thi aur me 11 year ka

Mere pas news paper aur dhabe se kam
karne se bhut rupaye jama ho gaye
tha mene socha kyu na me apni jan ka nam
kisi ache school me likha du

ajj jb me Subha utha to apni jan ko
dekha to kho sa gaya usme kitni pyari dikhti thi meri jan
mene usko jagaya
me........jan meri gudiya me soch rha hu ki
apka admission school me kra du
app bta rahi thi na ki app ko padhna acha lagta hi

meri baat sun kr Priya kush ho gayi
Priya.........ha mere pyare bhau mughe padhna bhut acha
lagta hi app mera nam sach me school me sach me likheyege
me........Ha meri jan kl tumhe me school le chalunga
Priya.........ok pyare bhau

us din me chacha ke sath dhabe pr se ja raha tha
to mujhe raste me ik school dikha
uska nam tha N . M public school
mene socha ki me apni Priya ka admision isi me krunga
mere pas abhi 95000 rupaye the

kl Subha mene meri jan ko pyar se uthaya
Me........me chalo jan ab hme school jane ke liye
tyar hona hi
fir me aur meri jan tyar ho gye jane ke liye

Location ..............N . M public school
admission office me me apni jan ke sath ache
se tyar hokr a gya
wha bhut sare bache the
mene admission forum lia aur U . K . G
ka use ek uncle se fil kra kr
rakh lia jab hmari bari ayi to me apni jan ke sath admission room
me chala gaya

Sir........... Hallo beta kya nam hi apka aur
apke parents kha hi
me............ Hallo sir my name Raj Singh Thakur and she is my
sister Priya Singh Thakur sir mujhe meri behan ka admission
karana hi
Mere mami papa nhai hi
Sir..........what app ke mom dad nhai hi sorry beta app
fir apni bhen ki fees kese dohe beta
me.........sir mujhe bas apni behan ka admission
karana hi me ik dhabe aur news paper
deta hu app chinta mata kare me

apni bhen ke liye aur kam krunga
use sche se padhaunga
Sir........what app itni si umar me itna kam karte hi
Bhagwan kre har behan ko App jesa bhai mile
uske baad sir ne Priya ka admission kr lia
mene rupaye submit kiye

me.........sir ise kab se school ana hi
sir..........beta kl se ajj app inhe copy aur book la dena
me........ok sir Thanks
Sir.........your welcome beta

usKe bad me aur Priya market gaye waha se mene Priya
ke liye drese aur copy aur book lia
fir ham ghar a gaye Priya bhut kush thi kyoki

use school jana tha ab se mene bhi soch lia mujhe ab
aur kam karna hoga tabhi me apni jan ko ashe se padha paunga

Location...............Raja Thakur house

Sakti kumar aur aur uska 4 year ka beta
ache se ab mahal me rahne lage
kabya bhi bhut kush thi kyoki wo
maa banne wali thi

Raja Thakur ka bisness bhi acha chal raha tha ab
wo log bhut kush the

kabaya ki hi marji chalti thi hr jagah ab
Raja Thakur bs uska katputli ban kr rah
gya tha

Location............Din dyal dhaba

EK bhut mhengi var ruki aur usme se ak aurat nikli
aur Ramu bhag kr uske pas gaya
Ramu............. boliye medam kya lau
Medam............Kuwar Raj Pratap Singh Thakur ko bulaya ke le awo
Jabardast update bhai
 

Raj Singh Thakur

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Update number............ Four...........( 4 )..................

Location.................Din dyal dhaba

Duphar ka time tha ki ek bhut
mhengi car aker dhabe par rukti hi
aur uske Piche lagbhag 50 gadi hoti hi
sari ki sari
top Asians the jo ki gun liye
rahte hi sb log jitne bhi dhabe par
the sab ke sab khade ho jate hi Raj us
time ntha nhai wo gaya tha
kisi ko khana dene

Din dyal , Ramu aur kalu bahr
ate hi wo bhi itni security
ko dekh dar gaye the
Din dyal.........Ji mam boliye hm app ki kya madad
kr sakte hi
Aurat............kuwar Raj Pratap Singh Thakur kaha hi unhe bulao
us Aurat ki baat sun to Din dyal Raj ke nam ke
age Thakur aur Kuwar sun to muh khula
ka khula hi rh jata hi

Din dyal ( haklate hue ).........kya bola app ne mam kuwar Raj Pratap Singh Thakur Kya Raj jo mere dhabe pr
kam karta hi app uske bare me phuch
rahi hi kya wo kon hi jo app
uske bare me phuch
rahi wo to mujhe sadak par mila tha
wo kh rha tha ki ik anath hi

Din dyal ki baat ko sun Aurat ko a gya
gussa
Aurat.............ye kuwar jinke bare me itna bol raha
hi aur tum sab sun rahe ho pehle isko
do tamacha maro fir age ki
beet hogi

Aurat ke kahne pr unme se do log bahar aye aur
2 Tamacha mara din dyal ko
uske ankho ke age andhera cha gya

Abhi wo sab tisra tamacha marne hi wala
tha ki waha Raj pahuch gaya
Jb usne dekha itni sari car ko khadi

jb ander pahucha aur un Asians ko apne chacha
ko marte hue dekha to gusse se pagal
ho gaya aur bhag kr ik Asians ko
pura jor laga kar ik lat mar

RAj ke lat padhte hi wo Asian 20 meter dur ja gira
sab log ik dam dang ki koi 11 - 12 year ke ladke
Ne ek expert world top Asian ko itna dur


fek dia

Me.........kon ho tum log aur chacha ko kyu mar rahe
ho
Din dyal.........( Rote hue ).........Are Raj beta acha hua ki
Tum a gaye inse bacha lo mujhe din dyal ne jo
hua tha wo sab Raj ko bata dia
sari baat sun kr to me sann rh gya kyoki
ajj tak mene kisi ko nhai bataya tha ki me Thakur hun

but mujhe ik baat samajh me nhai a rahi thi
ki ye kuwar aur Pratap ka kya chakkar hi

Aurat..........kuwar ji acha hua ki app a gaye
hamne kaha kaha nhai dudha app ko

Me.........kon hi app sab
Aurat.........me app ki maa Shalini Singh Pratap
Thakur ki Personal assistant hu app ke
Nana ji aur maa ne app ke nam bhut sari property
ki hi me uski Care Taker hu
me.........ji me kuch samjha nhai

Aurat............Ji apke Nana ji Rajgarh ke Raja
hi Raja Veer Pratap Singh Thakur app ki
Maa ka nam hi Shalini Pratap Singh Thakur unhone
aur Raja Thakur ne ghar se bhag kr shadi


ki thi iski wajah se app ke Nana ji bhut
Gussa ho gaye unhone app ki
maa se sare rishte Nate tod liye
jab unhe pata chal ki

Raja Thakur ne app ko aur app ki
behan ko apne ghar se nikal
dia tabse wo app ko dundh rahe hi
unhone apni sari property aur world
wide lavel ki company aur Raj gaddi ka

Naya Raja chun lia hi aur app ke nam
Apni company jo unhone app ke
Name pr rakhi hi R . S group of industries Pvt Ltd

Hm sab app ko dhund rahe the kl hme pata
Chala ki app yaha hi to ham turant a
Gaye Abhi unki tabiyat kharab hi isliye hamne
Unhe nhai bataya ki app mil gaye hi

Nhai to wo a jate app ko ab esi jindagi
bitane ki koi jarurat nhai hi
app apni behan nko le lijiye aur chaliye
apke Nana ji app ko dekh bhut kush

ho jayenge

us Aurat ki baat sun kr me bhut kush ho
gaya kyoki mere vhi nana ji hi








 

Himanshu ♥

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Update number............ Four...........( 4 )..................

Location.................Din dyal dhaba

Duphar ka time tha ki ek bhut
mhengi car aker dhabe par rukti hi
aur uske Piche lagbhag 50 gadi hoti hi
sari ki sari
top Asians the jo ki gun liye
rahte hi sb log jitne bhi dhabe par
the sab ke sab khade ho jate hi Raj us
time ntha nhai wo gaya tha
kisi ko khana dene

Din dyal , Ramu aur kalu bahr
ate hi wo bhi itni security
ko dekh dar gaye the
Din dyal.........Ji mam boliye hm app ki kya madad
kr sakte hi
Aurat............kuwar Raj Pratap Singh Thakur kaha hi unhe bulao
us Aurat ki baat sun to Din dyal Raj ke nam ke
age Thakur aur Kuwar sun to muh khula
ka khula hi rh jata hi

Din dyal ( haklate hue ).........kya bola app ne mam kuwar Raj Pratap Singh Thakur Kya Raj jo mere dhabe pr
kam karta hi app uske bare me phuch
rahi hi kya wo kon hi jo app
uske bare me phuch
rahi wo to mujhe sadak par mila tha
wo kh rha tha ki ik anath hi

Din dyal ki baat ko sun Aurat ko a gya
gussa
Aurat.............ye kuwar jinke bare me itna bol raha
hi aur tum sab sun rahe ho pehle isko
do tamacha maro fir age ki
beet hogi

Aurat ke kahne pr unme se do log bahar aye aur
2 Tamacha mara din dyal ko
uske ankho ke age andhera cha gya

Abhi wo sab tisra tamacha marne hi wala
tha ki waha Raj pahuch gaya
Jb usne dekha itni sari car ko khadi

jb ander pahucha aur un Asians ko apne chacha
ko marte hue dekha to gusse se pagal
ho gaya aur bhag kr ik Asians ko
pura jor laga kar ik lat mar

RAj ke lat padhte hi wo Asian 20 meter dur ja gira
sab log ik dam dang ki koi 11 - 12 year ke ladke
Ne ek expert world top Asian ko itna dur


fek dia

Me.........kon ho tum log aur chacha ko kyu mar rahe
ho
Din dyal.........( Rote hue ).........Are Raj beta acha hua ki
Tum a gaye inse bacha lo mujhe din dyal ne jo
hua tha wo sab Raj ko bata dia
sari baat sun kr to me sann rh gya kyoki
ajj tak mene kisi ko nhai bataya tha ki me Thakur hun

but mujhe ik baat samajh me nhai a rahi thi
ki ye kuwar aur Pratap ka kya chakkar hi

Aurat..........kuwar ji acha hua ki app a gaye
hamne kaha kaha nhai dudha app ko

Me.........kon hi app sab
Aurat.........me app ki maa Shalini Singh Pratap
Thakur ki Personal assistant hu app ke
Nana ji aur maa ne app ke nam bhut sari property
ki hi me uski Care Taker hu
me.........ji me kuch samjha nhai

Aurat............Ji apke Nana ji Rajgarh ke Raja
hi Raja Veer Pratap Singh Thakur app ki
Maa ka nam hi Shalini Pratap Singh Thakur unhone
aur Raja Thakur ne ghar se bhag kr shadi


ki thi iski wajah se app ke Nana ji bhut
Gussa ho gaye unhone app ki
maa se sare rishte Nate tod liye
jab unhe pata chal ki

Raja Thakur ne app ko aur app ki
behan ko apne ghar se nikal
dia tabse wo app ko dundh rahe hi
unhone apni sari property aur world
wide lavel ki company aur Raj gaddi ka

Naya Raja chun lia hi aur app ke nam
Apni company jo unhone app ke
Name pr rakhi hi R . S group of industries Pvt Ltd

Hm sab app ko dhund rahe the kl hme pata
Chala ki app yaha hi to ham turant a
Gaye Abhi unki tabiyat kharab hi isliye hamne
Unhe nhai bataya ki app mil gaye hi

Nhai to wo a jate app ko ab esi jindagi
bitane ki koi jarurat nhai hi
app apni behan nko le lijiye aur chaliye
apke Nana ji app ko dekh bhut kush

ho jayenge

us Aurat ki baat sun kr me bhut kush ho
gaya kyoki mere vhi nana ji hi
sahi h biru ab aayega asli maja raja thakur ke to l.... lg gye
 
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