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Sanki Rajput

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The mainline story is going to start soon which will be the beginning of a new age that is :-

THE AGE OF DEAD CIVILIZATION
(AS A DEVELOPED):declare:

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This will soon be in front of everyone.........:D


Stay tuned guys because......HE IS COMING !!

Keep supporting as usual......
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And rahi baat update ki timing ki to wo mai kabhi bhi de sakta hu jab bhi mughe man kre lekin confirm inn teen din ko hi honge:-
(Monday/Thursday/Saturday)
 
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Xabhi itne khatarnak reply ki ummed nhi thi sanki bhai ko dho dala pura ka pura....
Sanki bhai aapke reply ke awashakta hai yha bhot plz reply😁😁😁😁😁😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣
Thik se padhna Sayad Ise kahte hain... :D


Jab ek hath popcorn ke dabbe me ho or dusra hath khud ke land pe or ek pair computer ke mouse me ho or dusra pair kisi ki chut me... Sayad isi ko thik se Padhne ki position kahte hai... :laugh: :laughing:
Acha to jara mera teaser to padh lo ek baar:-

"Mahfil saji thi unn readero ki,
Mahfil saji thi unn readero ki,

Suruwat hui ek baat se Sanki ne tok diya majak majak me ek reader bhaisab ko fir kya ho gaya bawal,

Tab unn reader mahoday ko aagaya gussa,
Unhone puch daala ek sawaal,
Sawal ho gayaa thoda jordar,

Unka sawal tha ki
"Tu hi bata thik se padhna kya hota hai"

Ab iss sawal se hogaye apne sanki bhai ka dimag khrab,
Unhone likha tha majak me lekin yaha ho gaya bawal,
Ab aagaya sanki bhai ko bhi gussa, unhone simple si bhasa me Rafa dafa Krna chaha baat ko ,

To unhone likh daala ki maine majak kiya tha aur mai frankly iss baat ko le raha hu,

Lekin ho gayi khujli ek reader mahoday ko,
The to wo bhi yaar hi sanki ke,
Lekin unhone waha uss sawal kaa jawab dekar bana diya gambhir yudh ka mahol,

Unki di hui sawal ka jawab padh kr ho gayi deep bhai ko bhi masti,
Unhone bhi dho di bahti ganga me apni kasti,

Unhone reply kiya sanki bhai ko ki apko to pura dho daala bhai xabhi bhai ne ab apki bhi jordar pratikiyao ki jarurat padi hai yudh me,

Sanki khel raha tha cricket,
Bc tab aayi notification uske mobile pr,
Jab usne site open ki aur reply padhi to uska matha satak gaya,
Satka hua dimag lekr aaya wo ghar,

Phir kya hui suru mahabharat ddo dosto ke bich,

Ab sanki ne likh dala xabhi ko acha to isko padhne ka tariika khate hai,

To xabhi ne bola haa bilkul,

Tab sanki ne likha aisi baat jisse padh ke to xabhi ki bhi fatt ke 64 ho gayi,"

Simple si bhasa me likha tha sanki ne,

" Bas ek chis ki kami rah gayi tumhare diye hue tarike me,
Tumne likha to thik bas ye tarika saayad tum hi use krte hoge padhne ke liye,
Agar aisa hai to table aur tumhare bich me space to hoga hi be,

**Haina,to sahi me ju chair pe hi baithe baithe missionary krwalete ho kya be"
Gay saale 😁😜**

Ab baat se mukarna Matt be tune hi likha hai khud last me
"issi ko thik se padhne ki *position* kahte hai"


Ab bolna iske aage jawab chiye to,ek se ek jwab hai be don't fikar when I am here for your fadne ko be 😜


Ye sab baate majak me lene ka seriously nhi kyun Xabhi mere yaar sahi kaha n
 
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Sanki Rajput

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Waiting next
Bahot behtareen
Shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Thik se padhna Sayad Ise kahte hain... :D


Jab ek hath popcorn ke dabbe me ho or dusra hath khud ke land pe or ek pair computer ke mouse me ho or dusra pair kisi ki chut me... Sayad isi ko thik se Padhne ki position kahte hai... :laugh: :laughing:
Dekho bhailog mai hogaya aaj bhadi busy,update lagbhag 50% complete hai aur abhi mai padh raha hu wo bhi bhadi busy hai study me apun,to update kal mai college se aane ke baad dopehar me full dhamakedar update post krdunga,

Sorry 😐 Guys but Study me busy hu to kal dopehar tak wait krneka
 
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Acha to jara mera teaser to padh lo ek baar:-

"Mahfil saji thi unn readero ki,
Mahfil saji thi unn readero ki,

Suruwat hui ek baat se Sanki ne tok diya majak majak me ek reader bhaisab ko fir kya ho gaya bawal,

Tab unn reader mahoday ko aagaya gussa,
Unhone puch daala ek sawaal,
Sawal ho gayaa thoda jordar,

Unka sawal tha ki
"Tu hi bata thik se padhna kya hota hai"

Ab iss sawal se hogaye apne sanki bhai ka dimag khrab,
Unhone likha tha majak me lekin yaha ho gaya bawal,
Ab aagaya sanki bhai ko bhi gussa, unhone simple si bhasa me Rafa dafa Krna chaha baat ko ,

To unhone likh daala ki maine majak kiya tha aur mai frankly iss baat ko le raha hu,

Lekin ho gayi khujli ek reader mahoday ko,
The to wo bhi yaar hi sanki ke,
Lekin unhone waha uss sawal kaa jawab dekar bana diya gambhir yudh ka mahol,

Unki di hui sawal ka jawab padh kr ho gayi deep bhai ko bhi masti,
Unhone bhi dho di bahti ganga me apni kasti,

Unhone reply kiya sanki bhai ko ki apko to pura dho daala bhai xabhi bhai ne ab apki bhi jordar pratikiyao ki jarurat padi hai yudh me,

Sanki khel raha tha cricket,
Bc tab aayi notification uske mobile pr,
Jab usne site open ki aur reply padhi to uska matha satak gaya,
Satka hua dimag lekr aaya wo ghar,

Phir kya hui suru mahabharat ddo dosto ke bich,

Ab sanki ne likh dala xabhi ko acha to isko padhne ka tariika khate hai,

To xabhi ne bola haa bilkul,

Tab sanki ne likha aisi baat jisse padh ke to xabhi ki bhi fatt ke 64 ho gayi,"

Simple si bhasa me likha tha sanki ne,

" Bas ek chis ki kami rah gayi tumhare diye hue tarike me,
Tumne likha to thik bas ye tarika saayad tum hi use krte hoge padhne ke liye,
Agar aisa hai to table aur tumhare bich me space to hoga hi be,

**Haina,to sahi me ju chair pe hi baithe baithe missionary krwalete ho kya be"
Gay saale 😁😜**

Ab baat se mukarna Matt be tune hi likha hai khud last me
"issi ko thik se padhne ki *position* kahte hai"


Ab bolna iske aage jawab chiye to,ek se ek jwab hai be don't fikar when I am here for your fadne ko be 😜


Ye sab baate majak me lene ka seriously nhi kyun Xabhi mere yaar sahi kaha n
Hot khoob bhai bhot khoob love u all 😙😙😙😙
 

Xabhi

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Acha to jara mera teaser to padh lo ek baar:-

"Mahfil saji thi unn readero ki,
Mahfil saji thi unn readero ki,

Suruwat hui ek baat se Sanki ne tok diya majak majak me ek reader bhaisab ko fir kya ho gaya bawal,

Tab unn reader mahoday ko aagaya gussa,
Unhone puch daala ek sawaal,
Sawal ho gayaa thoda jordar,

Unka sawal tha ki
"Tu hi bata thik se padhna kya hota hai"

Ab iss sawal se hogaye apne sanki bhai ka dimag khrab,
Unhone likha tha majak me lekin yaha ho gaya bawal,
Ab aagaya sanki bhai ko bhi gussa, unhone simple si bhasa me Rafa dafa Krna chaha baat ko ,

To unhone likh daala ki maine majak kiya tha aur mai frankly iss baat ko le raha hu,

Lekin ho gayi khujli ek reader mahoday ko,
The to wo bhi yaar hi sanki ke,
Lekin unhone waha uss sawal kaa jawab dekar bana diya gambhir yudh ka mahol,

Unki di hui sawal ka jawab padh kr ho gayi deep bhai ko bhi masti,
Unhone bhi dho di bahti ganga me apni kasti,

Unhone reply kiya sanki bhai ko ki apko to pura dho daala bhai xabhi bhai ne ab apki bhi jordar pratikiyao ki jarurat padi hai yudh me,

Sanki khel raha tha cricket,
Bc tab aayi notification uske mobile pr,
Jab usne site open ki aur reply padhi to uska matha satak gaya,
Satka hua dimag lekr aaya wo ghar,

Phir kya hui suru mahabharat ddo dosto ke bich,

Ab sanki ne likh dala xabhi ko acha to isko padhne ka tariika khate hai,

To xabhi ne bola haa bilkul,

Tab sanki ne likha aisi baat jisse padh ke to xabhi ki bhi fatt ke 64 ho gayi,"

Simple si bhasa me likha tha sanki ne,

" Bas ek chis ki kami rah gayi tumhare diye hue tarike me,
Tumne likha to thik bas ye tarika saayad tum hi use krte hoge padhne ke liye,
Agar aisa hai to table aur tumhare bich me space to hoga hi be,

**Haina,to sahi me ju chair pe hi baithe baithe missionary krwalete ho kya be"
Gay saale 😁😜**

Ab baat se mukarna Matt be tune hi likha hai khud last me
"issi ko thik se padhne ki *position* kahte hai"


Ab bolna iske aage jawab chiye to,ek se ek jwab hai be don't fikar when I am here for your fadne ko be 😜


Ye sab baate majak me lene ka seriously nhi kyun Xabhi mere yaar sahi kaha n
Chalo is mamle ko let's discuss vale thread me le jate hai aur vha ek gadar mchate hai bula lo or bhi jo interested Ho is gadar me or sath me popcorn bhi manga lo fir hoga position pr Charcha or Sayad aage hoga thoda Bahut kharcha...

yha mchaya Yadi Hamne gadar to koi na koi MOD kr dega Hamko BAN...
Yadi sanki Aap ho to ham bhi kuchh kam nhi... :D
Mera is thread me last post hai faltu ka, ab mai sirf isme review hi dunga... Gadar machane ke liye kahi or Milo jaha discuss kr sahe...
 

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(Disastorous is very bad but that is that never be......??)




Human god kisi Disastorous Entity ki trah uss mahol me khade the,unki personality kisi aam gods se kya kisi High ranked god se bhi kahi jyada uppar lag rahi thi,

Wo abhi uss dragon ko hi ghure jaa rahe the lekin tabhi wo dragon. Jo niche pada hua tha usmme kuch halchal hui aur ek hi jhatke me bohhot saari lightning hui aur usske uppar giri jisse human god piche ki traf khisak gaye jab wo lightning hatti to wo Dragon apne Godly forrm me tha iska matlab God Yuan yaha hai

Wo Dragon ab kahi se bhi koi Dragon nhi lag raha tha wo ek godly being lag raha tha uski puri body golden red aur bluish lightning aur thunder se had se jyada chamak rahi thi,uske body pe jitne bhi cracks aaye the aur chotte aaye the wo sab heal hogayi thi wo dragon kisi Bohot badi mountain ki trah khada tha,

Tab hui ek jordar thunder ke saath lightnig aur uss dragon nne ab apna muh kholna suru kiya uske har ek badhtte sppeed matlab muh khulte khulte thunderbolt lightning aur hawa ka pressure badhte hi jaa raha tha waha uss pressure se saare shield tutne ko hogaye the jo human god ne waha lagaye the unn sabpar,

Human god nne jaise ye paaya pressure unke liye bhi bohot hi jyada harmful hai unhone ek haath move kiya aur unn sab shield ko aur strongly packed kr diya,

Uss badhte pressure ke kaaran jamin ander ki wor dhas rahi thi, lightning aur thunder badhte hi jaa rahi,uss dragon ka muh lagbhag khulne ko hi tha


Jaise hi uss dragon ka muh khula Tezz roshni fail gayi uss pure war zone me jo puri trah se greyish colour ki thi jiske contact me jo bhi aaraha tha wo wahi ke wahi sukh jaa raha thaa matlab wahha jitne bhi hathyaar gire pade the yudh me aur lashe girri thi sab sukh si gayi aur raakh me badal gayi,jo bhi shield me tha bach gaya tha,



Jab dhhire dhire wo roshni hatti to saamne khade uss shaks ko dekh sab ke sab sirf human god ko chorr kr sab ghutne pe aagaye aur sir jhuka liya koi bhi khada nhi ho raha tha,ye khauf,dar, aur ek sihran si thi jo daud rahi thi unn jhuke hue har ek ke ander,wo ander hi ander kaanp rahe the,unka dil dar raha tha dimag khauf me ulagh raha tha unki manshikta tak kaanp rahi thii,unkki rooh unse chin jaane ka dar unke ander ho rahe kampan se saaf pata chal raha tha

Human God uss Shaks ko dekh bohot jyada gusse me the bohot jyada,unko apni pariwar ki jhalak dikh gayi ek pal me unke saamne,wo pariwar jinke liye wo jite the,wo maa jo unka khyaal jaan se bhi jyada rakhti thi,,wo pita jo unhe har ek chis ke gyan se unka samna krne me madad krte the unke jivan ko ek nayi disha ki wor lejaane me prerit krte the,unke wo bhai aur bahen,......sabko maar diya tha ussne sabko koi nhi bacha tha unke pariwar koi nhi,unki puri jindagi ek pal me tabah kr daali thi ussne ek pal me,


Aur wo shaks aaj unke saamne khada tha,wo shaks jisse Gods ka king manna jaata tha,wo shaks

*THE KING OF GOD-GOD YUAN*
Khud the unki wo lahhrate hue lambe greyish aur redish baal unki cruelness se bhadi aankhe jo chikh chikh ke ek hi lafz kah rahi thi
*superiority*
Ye unka aura tak darsa raha tha unke aura me wo superiority thi jo kisi me bhi n ho matlab unka moto ek hi hota tha *jhuko mera saamne warna maro mere saamne*

Unke sarir pr bas ek lamba *Hanfu* jaisa kapra pure sarir pr lapeta hua tha unke pairo me kuch nhi tha unhone yaha tk ki *THE CROWN SUPERIORITY* bhi nhi pahna hua tha, unkki wo surkh laal aankh jinki putliyaa tk greyish thi, wo kahi se bhi ek god nhi ek devil God jyada lag rahe the,aur unhe ye kahha bhi jaata tha ki wo khud ek heavenly god ke roop me ek DEVIL GOD hai,


Human god ko ghurte hue God Yuan niche aram se lahrate hue uttre aur bola

God Yuan:- kaise ho *Human God Yuromiya*, yaa ye kahu,
*THE SON OF SUPREME KING OF SPIRITUALITY*haha

Ye laga jhatka,human god unki baat sun ek pal to blank se ho gaye unhe kuch smjh nhi aaraha tha ki usse ye baat pata kaise chali

God Yuan :- shock ho gaye kya Human god,haha,tumhe kya laga tum bach gaye hoge uss raat,nhi hamne tumhe jinda rakha tha kyunki hamme tumse kkuch chahiye tha jo sirf tum hi de sakte the,haha

Human god ko kuch smjh n aaraha tha ki ye ye bol kya raha hai

God Yuan :- Human God Yuromiya mughe sirf tumse wo chis chahiye bas aur kuch nhi,haa wo chis ussi samay mughe mil jaati jab maine tumhare pariwar ko maara lekin afshosh tum mile nhi aur mai tumhe marne dena nhi chta tha issliye mai tumhare piche to nhi aaya lekin mughe nhi pata tha tum iss mukaam tak pohonch jaoge jaha koi pohochne ke baare me sochta tak nhi,tum bbohot alag ho inn insaano se agar tum chaho to tum mughe wo chis dedo aur mera gullamm aur Heaven me God ban kr rah sakte ho socho jara tumhe mai Heavenly God bana dunga socho.......


Human god ko ab sab smjh me aagaya tha ki wo mere beam of life

*SPRITUAL CORIESTER FLOWER SERPENT*
ke liye ye sab nhi kr rahe hai unka real maqsad uss chis ko pana hai jiske baare me wo khud kuch nhi jaante lekin unhe anumaan to ho hi gaya tha ki unhe chahiye kya agar wo chis unhe chaiye to bohot bura hai bohot bura had se bhii jyada bura ye pura universe khatre mme aajayega pura universe aur aisa kabhi human god nhi hone denge kabhi nhi


Human god:- tum tummm kahi *RECLESSNESS OF STREPTURURA CREPTA* ke piche to nhi pade

Ye naam sun God Yuan thode shock hue aur fir haste hue bola

God Yuan:- tum sahi me bohot hi jyada knowledgeable ho Human god Yuromiya,tum kaise ye human god bangaye tumhe heaven me hona chahiye tha,lekin nhi mughe *Recklessness Of streturura Crepta* nhi chahiye mughe wo chahiye jisski tulna ye universe kya ye pura sansar nhi kr sakta jisse ye universe kya other universe bhi nhi hara sakte mughe wo power Ructure chahiye jisse Supreme God bhi hassil nhi kr sakte mughe wo power chahiye jiski tulna *DEVIL LAURECTERNESS TRIFANDA* ne ki thi,mughe wo chahiye jisse
**DEVIL GOD DIABOLOS (SAITAN)
ne khud banaya tha,hahaha


Uss chis ke baare me sun ke to sab kaanp gaye sab har ek shaks jo waha upsthit tha wo ssab kaanp raha tha, Human god ko bohot bada jhatka laga tha abhi bohot bada, unhe bhi apne sarir me wo kampan mahsus ho rahi thii jo sabhi ko ho rahi thi,sabhi ko maut se bhi buri haallat dikh rahe the,demons, humans,demon gods sab kaanp rahe the unki haalat aise the ki jaise unhe hell se khud Lucifer ne bula liya ho,

lekin Human God ko ye smjh nhi aaya ye ye chis usse mughse kyun chahiye agar chaahiye bhi to wo bohot buri hai bohot buri uski tulna tum kisi bhi power se nhi kr sakte lekin ek hai lekin wo kabhi bhi nhi kabhi nhi




Enjoy this one.......
 
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(Disastorous is very bad but that is that never be......??)




Human god kisi Disastorous Entity ki trah uss mahol me khade the,unki personality kisi aam gods se kya kisi High ranked god se bhi kahi jyada uppar lag rahi thi,

Wo abhi uss dragon ko hi ghure jaa rahe the lekin tabhi wo dragon. Jo niche pada hua tha usmme kuch halchal hui aur ek hi jhatke me bohhot saari lightning hui aur usske uppar giri jisse human god piche ki traf khisak gaye jab wo lightning hatti to wo Dragon apne Godly forrm me tha iska matlab God Yuan yaha hai

Wo Dragon ab kahi se bhi koi Dragon nhi lag raha tha wo ek godly being lag raha tha uski puri body golden red aur bluish lightning aur thunder se had se jyada chamak rahi thi,uske body pe jitne bhi cracks aaye the aur chotte aaye the wo sab heal hogayi thi wo dragon kisi Bohot badi mountain ki trah khada tha,

Tab hui ek jordar thunder ke saath lightnig aur uss dragon nne ab apna muh kholna suru kiya uske har ek badhtte sppeed matlab muh khulte khulte thunderbolt lightning aur hawa ka pressure badhte hi jaa raha tha waha uss pressure se saare shield tutne ko hogaye the jo human god ne waha lagaye the unn sabpar,

Human god nne jaise ye paaya pressure unke liye bhi bohot hi jyada harmful hai unhone ek haath move kiya aur unn sab shield ko aur strongly packed kr diya,

Uss badhte pressure ke kaaran jamin ander ki wor dhas rahi thi, lightning aur thunder badhte hi jaa rahi,uss dragon ka muh lagbhag khulne ko hi tha


Jaise hi uss dragon ka muh khula Tezz roshni fail gayi uss pure war zone me jo puri trah se greyish colour ki thi jiske contact me jo bhi aaraha tha wo wahi ke wahi sukh jaa raha thaa matlab wahha jitne bhi hathyaar gire pade the yudh me aur lashe girri thi sab sukh si gayi aur raakh me badal gayi,jo bhi shield me tha bach gaya tha,



Jab dhhire dhire wo roshni hatti to saamne khade uss shaks ko dekh sab ke sab sirf human god ko chorr kr sab ghutne pe aagaye aur sir jhuka liya koi bhi khada nhi ho raha tha,ye khauf,dar, aur ek sihran si thi jo daud rahi thi unn jhuke hue har ek ke ander,wo ander hi ander kaanp rahe the,unka dil dar raha tha dimag khauf me ulagh raha tha unki manshikta tak kaanp rahi thii,unkki rooh unse chin jaane ka dar unke ander ho rahe kampan se saaf pata chal raha tha

Human God uss Shaks ko dekh bohot jyada gusse me the bohot jyada,unko apni pariwar ki jhalak dikh gayi ek pal me unke saamne,wo pariwar jinke liye wo jite the,wo maa jo unka khyaal jaan se bhi jyada rakhti thi,,wo pita jo unhe har ek chis ke gyan se unka samna krne me madad krte the unke jivan ko ek nayi disha ki wor lejaane me prerit krte the,unke wo bhai aur bahen,......sabko maar diya tha ussne sabko koi nhi bacha tha unke pariwar koi nhi,unki puri jindagi ek pal me tabah kr daali thi ussne ek pal me,


Aur wo shaks aaj unke saamne khada tha,wo shaks jisse Gods ka king manna jaata tha,wo shaks

*THE KING OF GOD-GOD YUAN*
Khud the unki wo lahhrate hue lambe greyish aur redish baal unki cruelness se bhadi aankhe jo chikh chikh ke ek hi lafz kah rahi thi
*superiority*
Ye unka aura tak darsa raha tha unke aura me wo superiority thi jo kisi me bhi n ho matlab unka moto ek hi hota tha *jhuko mera saamne warna maro mere saamne*

Unke sarir pr bas ek lamba *Hanfu* jaisa kapra pure sarir pr lapeta hua tha unke pairo me kuch nhi tha unhone yaha tk ki *THE CROWN SUPERIORITY* bhi nhi pahna hua tha, unkki wo surkh laal aankh jinki putliyaa tk greyish thi, wo kahi se bhi ek god nhi ek devil God jyada lag rahe the,aur unhe ye kahha bhi jaata tha ki wo khud ek heavenly god ke roop me ek DEVIL GOD hai,


Human god ko ghurte hue God Yuan niche aram se lahrate hue uttre aur bola

God Yuan:- kaise ho *Human God Yuromiya*, yaa ye kahu,
*THE SON OF SUPREME KING OF SPIRITUALITY*haha

Ye laga jhatka,human god unki baat sun ek pal to blank se ho gaye unhe kuch smjh nhi aaraha tha ki usse ye baat pata kaise chali

God Yuan :- shock ho gaye kya Human god,haha,tumhe kya laga tum bach gaye hoge uss raat,nhi hamne tumhe jinda rakha tha kyunki hamme tumse kkuch chahiye tha jo sirf tum hi de sakte the,haha

Human god ko kuch smjh n aaraha tha ki ye ye bol kya raha hai

God Yuan :- Human God Yuromiya mughe sirf tumse wo chis chahiye bas aur kuch nhi,haa wo chis ussi samay mughe mil jaati jab maine tumhare pariwar ko maara lekin afshosh tum mile nhi aur mai tumhe marne dena nhi chta tha issliye mai tumhare piche to nhi aaya lekin mughe nhi pata tha tum iss mukaam tak pohonch jaoge jaha koi pohochne ke baare me sochta tak nhi,tum bbohot alag ho inn insaano se agar tum chaho to tum mughe wo chis dedo aur mera gullamm aur Heaven me God ban kr rah sakte ho socho jara tumhe mai Heavenly God bana dunga socho.......


Human god ko ab sab smjh me aagaya tha ki wo mere beam of life

*SPRITUAL CORIESTER FLOWER SERPENT*
ke liye ye sab nhi kr rahe hai unka real maqsad uss chis ko pana hai jiske baare me wo khud kuch nhi jaante lekin unhe anumaan to ho hi gaya tha ki unhe chahiye kya agar wo chis unhe chaiye to bohot bura hai bohot bura had se bhii jyada bura ye pura universe khatre mme aajayega pura universe aur aisa kabhi human god nhi hone denge kabhi nhi


Human god:- tum tummm kahi *RECLESSNESS OF STREPTURURA CREPTA* ke piche to nhi pade

Ye naam sun God Yuan thode shock hue aur fir haste hue bola

God Yuan:- tum sahi me bohot hi jyada knowledgeable ho Human god Yuromiya,tum kaise ye human god bangaye tumhe heaven me hona chahiye tha,lekin nhi mughe *Recklessness Of streturura Crepta* nhi chahiye mughe wo chahiye jisski tulna ye universe kya ye pura sansar nhi kr sakta jisse ye universe kya other universe bhi nhi hara sakte mughe wo power Ructure chahiye jisse Supreme God bhi hassil nhi kr sakte mughe wo power chahiye jiski tulna *DEVIL LAURECTERNESS TRIFANDA* ne ki thi,mughe wo chahiye jisse
**DEVIL GOD DIABOLOS (SAITAN)
ne khud banaya tha,hahaha


Uss chis ka naam sun ke to sab kaanp gaye sab har ek shaks jo waha upsthit tha wo ssab kaanp raha tha, Human god ko bohot bada jhatka laga tha abhi bohot bada, unhe bhi apne sarir me wo kampan mahsus ho rahi thii jo sabhi ko ho rahi thi,sabhi ko maut se bhi buri haallat dikh rahe the,demons, humans,demon gods sab kaanp rahe the unki haalat aise the ki jaise unhe hell se khud Lucifer ne bula liya ho,

lekin Human God ko ye smjh nhi aaya ye ye chis usse mughse kyun chahiye agar chaahiye bhi to wo bohot buri hai bohot buri uski tulna tum kisi bhi power se nhi kr sakte lekin ek hai lekin wo kabhi bhi nhi kabhi nhi




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Dimag ki dahi to bna hi diye ho ab garmi Itni ho rhi hai to Chalo ham us dahi ko lassi bna dete hai... :D

King god ne human god ke pure parivar ko mara pr human god ko baksh diya or Aaj unhone khud yah kabool kiya ki unhone use on purpose chhoda hua tha, unhe human god se vo power chahiye Jiska tod sirf ek hi hai or uske bare me kisi ko bhi pta nhi hai Sayad, human god ab soch me pad gye hai ki Vo Jaise bchaye us power ko is king god se... Superb bhai sandar jabarjast update
 

Sanki Rajput

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Dimag ki dahi to bna hi diye ho ab garmi Itni ho rhi hai to Chalo ham us dahi ko lassi bna dete hai... :D

King god ne human god ke pure parivar ko mara pr human god ko baksh diya or Aaj unhone khud yah kabool kiya ki unhone use on purpose chhoda hua tha, unhe human god se vo power chahiye Jiska tod sirf ek hi hai or uske bare me kisi ko bhi pta nhi hai Sayad, human god ab soch me pad gye hai ki Vo Jaise bchaye us power ko is king god se... Superb bhai sandar jabarjast update
Wo dahi n hoga taste thik se kar ke dekh be :D,joke apart

Thanx yaar tere itne ache review ke liye ju great ho men
 

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(Disastorous is very bad but that is that never be......??)




Human god kisi Disastorous Entity ki trah uss mahol me khade the,unki personality kisi aam gods se kya kisi High ranked god se bhi kahi jyada uppar lag rahi thi,

Wo abhi uss dragon ko hi ghure jaa rahe the lekin tabhi wo dragon. Jo niche pada hua tha usmme kuch halchal hui aur ek hi jhatke me bohhot saari lightning hui aur usske uppar giri jisse human god piche ki traf khisak gaye jab wo lightning hatti to wo Dragon apne Godly forrm me tha iska matlab God Yuan yaha hai

Wo Dragon ab kahi se bhi koi Dragon nhi lag raha tha wo ek godly being lag raha tha uski puri body golden red aur bluish lightning aur thunder se had se jyada chamak rahi thi,uske body pe jitne bhi cracks aaye the aur chotte aaye the wo sab heal hogayi thi wo dragon kisi Bohot badi mountain ki trah khada tha,

Tab hui ek jordar thunder ke saath lightnig aur uss dragon nne ab apna muh kholna suru kiya uske har ek badhtte sppeed matlab muh khulte khulte thunderbolt lightning aur hawa ka pressure badhte hi jaa raha tha waha uss pressure se saare shield tutne ko hogaye the jo human god ne waha lagaye the unn sabpar,

Human god nne jaise ye paaya pressure unke liye bhi bohot hi jyada harmful hai unhone ek haath move kiya aur unn sab shield ko aur strongly packed kr diya,

Uss badhte pressure ke kaaran jamin ander ki wor dhas rahi thi, lightning aur thunder badhte hi jaa rahi,uss dragon ka muh lagbhag khulne ko hi tha


Jaise hi uss dragon ka muh khula Tezz roshni fail gayi uss pure war zone me jo puri trah se greyish colour ki thi jiske contact me jo bhi aaraha tha wo wahi ke wahi sukh jaa raha thaa matlab wahha jitne bhi hathyaar gire pade the yudh me aur lashe girri thi sab sukh si gayi aur raakh me badal gayi,jo bhi shield me tha bach gaya tha,



Jab dhhire dhire wo roshni hatti to saamne khade uss shaks ko dekh sab ke sab sirf human god ko chorr kr sab ghutne pe aagaye aur sir jhuka liya koi bhi khada nhi ho raha tha,ye khauf,dar, aur ek sihran si thi jo daud rahi thi unn jhuke hue har ek ke ander,wo ander hi ander kaanp rahe the,unka dil dar raha tha dimag khauf me ulagh raha tha unki manshikta tak kaanp rahi thii,unkki rooh unse chin jaane ka dar unke ander ho rahe kampan se saaf pata chal raha tha

Human God uss Shaks ko dekh bohot jyada gusse me the bohot jyada,unko apni pariwar ki jhalak dikh gayi ek pal me unke saamne,wo pariwar jinke liye wo jite the,wo maa jo unka khyaal jaan se bhi jyada rakhti thi,,wo pita jo unhe har ek chis ke gyan se unka samna krne me madad krte the unke jivan ko ek nayi disha ki wor lejaane me prerit krte the,unke wo bhai aur bahen,......sabko maar diya tha ussne sabko koi nhi bacha tha unke pariwar koi nhi,unki puri jindagi ek pal me tabah kr daali thi ussne ek pal me,


Aur wo shaks aaj unke saamne khada tha,wo shaks jisse Gods ka king manna jaata tha,wo shaks

*THE KING OF GOD-GOD YUAN*
Khud the unki wo lahhrate hue lambe greyish aur redish baal unki cruelness se bhadi aankhe jo chikh chikh ke ek hi lafz kah rahi thi
*superiority*
Ye unka aura tak darsa raha tha unke aura me wo superiority thi jo kisi me bhi n ho matlab unka moto ek hi hota tha *jhuko mera saamne warna maro mere saamne*

Unke sarir pr bas ek lamba *Hanfu* jaisa kapra pure sarir pr lapeta hua tha unke pairo me kuch nhi tha unhone yaha tk ki *THE CROWN SUPERIORITY* bhi nhi pahna hua tha, unkki wo surkh laal aankh jinki putliyaa tk greyish thi, wo kahi se bhi ek god nhi ek devil God jyada lag rahe the,aur unhe ye kahha bhi jaata tha ki wo khud ek heavenly god ke roop me ek DEVIL GOD hai,


Human god ko ghurte hue God Yuan niche aram se lahrate hue uttre aur bola

God Yuan:- kaise ho *Human God Yuromiya*, yaa ye kahu,
*THE SON OF SUPREME KING OF SPIRITUALITY*haha

Ye laga jhatka,human god unki baat sun ek pal to blank se ho gaye unhe kuch smjh nhi aaraha tha ki usse ye baat pata kaise chali

God Yuan :- shock ho gaye kya Human god,haha,tumhe kya laga tum bach gaye hoge uss raat,nhi hamne tumhe jinda rakha tha kyunki hamme tumse kkuch chahiye tha jo sirf tum hi de sakte the,haha

Human god ko kuch smjh n aaraha tha ki ye ye bol kya raha hai

God Yuan :- Human God Yuromiya mughe sirf tumse wo chis chahiye bas aur kuch nhi,haa wo chis ussi samay mughe mil jaati jab maine tumhare pariwar ko maara lekin afshosh tum mile nhi aur mai tumhe marne dena nhi chta tha issliye mai tumhare piche to nhi aaya lekin mughe nhi pata tha tum iss mukaam tak pohonch jaoge jaha koi pohochne ke baare me sochta tak nhi,tum bbohot alag ho inn insaano se agar tum chaho to tum mughe wo chis dedo aur mera gullamm aur Heaven me God ban kr rah sakte ho socho jara tumhe mai Heavenly God bana dunga socho.......


Human god ko ab sab smjh me aagaya tha ki wo mere beam of life

*SPRITUAL CORIESTER FLOWER SERPENT*
ke liye ye sab nhi kr rahe hai unka real maqsad uss chis ko pana hai jiske baare me wo khud kuch nhi jaante lekin unhe anumaan to ho hi gaya tha ki unhe chahiye kya agar wo chis unhe chaiye to bohot bura hai bohot bura had se bhii jyada bura ye pura universe khatre mme aajayega pura universe aur aisa kabhi human god nhi hone denge kabhi nhi


Human god:- tum tummm kahi *RECLESSNESS OF STREPTURURA CREPTA* ke piche to nhi pade

Ye naam sun God Yuan thode shock hue aur fir haste hue bola

God Yuan:- tum sahi me bohot hi jyada knowledgeable ho Human god Yuromiya,tum kaise ye human god bangaye tumhe heaven me hona chahiye tha,lekin nhi mughe *Recklessness Of streturura Crepta* nhi chahiye mughe wo chahiye jisski tulna ye universe kya ye pura sansar nhi kr sakta jisse ye universe kya other universe bhi nhi hara sakte mughe wo power Ructure chahiye jisse Supreme God bhi hassil nhi kr sakte mughe wo power chahiye jiski tulna *DEVIL LAURECTERNESS TRIFANDA* ne ki thi,mughe wo chahiye jisse
**DEVIL GOD DIABOLOS (SAITAN)
ne khud banaya tha,hahaha


Uss chis ke baare me sun ke to sab kaanp gaye sab har ek shaks jo waha upsthit tha wo ssab kaanp raha tha, Human god ko bohot bada jhatka laga tha abhi bohot bada, unhe bhi apne sarir me wo kampan mahsus ho rahi thii jo sabhi ko ho rahi thi,sabhi ko maut se bhi buri haallat dikh rahe the,demons, humans,demon gods sab kaanp rahe the unki haalat aise the ki jaise unhe hell se khud Lucifer ne bula liya ho,

lekin Human God ko ye smjh nhi aaya ye ye chis usse mughse kyun chahiye agar chaahiye bhi to wo bohot buri hai bohot buri uski tulna tum kisi bhi power se nhi kr sakte lekin ek hai lekin wo kabhi bhi nhi kabhi nhi




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