Fantasy The Age Of Divinity.........

[Sanki Rajput]

The mainline story is going to start soon which will be the beginning of a new age that is :-

THE AGE OF DEAD CIVILIZATION
(AS A DEVELOPED)
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This will soon be in front of everyone.........


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[ashish_1982_in]

Update:-11

(Disastorous is very bad but that is that never be......??)




Human god kisi Disastorous Entity ki trah uss mahol me khade the,unki personality kisi aam gods se kya kisi High ranked god se bhi kahi jyada uppar lag rahi thi,

Wo abhi uss dragon ko hi ghure jaa rahe the lekin tabhi wo dragon. Jo niche pada hua tha usmme kuch halchal hui aur ek hi jhatke me bohhot saari lightning hui aur usske uppar giri jisse human god piche ki traf khisak gaye jab wo lightning hatti to wo Dragon apne Godly forrm me tha iska matlab God Yuan yaha hai

Wo Dragon ab kahi se bhi koi Dragon nhi lag raha tha wo ek godly being lag raha tha uski puri body golden red aur bluish lightning aur thunder se had se jyada chamak rahi thi,uske body pe jitne bhi cracks aaye the aur chotte aaye the wo sab heal hogayi thi wo dragon kisi Bohot badi mountain ki trah khada tha,

Tab hui ek jordar thunder ke saath lightnig aur uss dragon nne ab apna muh kholna suru kiya uske har ek badhtte sppeed matlab muh khulte khulte thunderbolt lightning aur hawa ka pressure badhte hi jaa raha tha waha uss pressure se saare shield tutne ko hogaye the jo human god ne waha lagaye the unn sabpar,

Human god nne jaise ye paaya pressure unke liye bhi bohot hi jyada harmful hai unhone ek haath move kiya aur unn sab shield ko aur strongly packed kr diya,

Uss badhte pressure ke kaaran jamin ander ki wor dhas rahi thi, lightning aur thunder badhte hi jaa rahi,uss dragon ka muh lagbhag khulne ko hi tha


Jaise hi uss dragon ka muh khula Tezz roshni fail gayi uss pure war zone me jo puri trah se greyish colour ki thi jiske contact me jo bhi aaraha tha wo wahi ke wahi sukh jaa raha thaa matlab wahha jitne bhi hathyaar gire pade the yudh me aur lashe girri thi sab sukh si gayi aur raakh me badal gayi,jo bhi shield me tha bach gaya tha,



Jab dhhire dhire wo roshni hatti to saamne khade uss shaks ko dekh sab ke sab sirf human god ko chorr kr sab ghutne pe aagaye aur sir jhuka liya koi bhi khada nhi ho raha tha,ye khauf,dar, aur ek sihran si thi jo daud rahi thi unn jhuke hue har ek ke ander,wo ander hi ander kaanp rahe the,unka dil dar raha tha dimag khauf me ulagh raha tha unki manshikta tak kaanp rahi thii,unkki rooh unse chin jaane ka dar unke ander ho rahe kampan se saaf pata chal raha tha

Human God uss Shaks ko dekh bohot jyada gusse me the bohot jyada,unko apni pariwar ki jhalak dikh gayi ek pal me unke saamne,wo pariwar jinke liye wo jite the,wo maa jo unka khyaal jaan se bhi jyada rakhti thi,,wo pita jo unhe har ek chis ke gyan se unka samna krne me madad krte the unke jivan ko ek nayi disha ki wor lejaane me prerit krte the,unke wo bhai aur bahen,......sabko maar diya tha ussne sabko koi nhi bacha tha unke pariwar koi nhi,unki puri jindagi ek pal me tabah kr daali thi ussne ek pal me,


Aur wo shaks aaj unke saamne khada tha,wo shaks jisse Gods ka king manna jaata tha,wo shaks
*THE KING OF GOD-GOD YUAN*
Khud the unki wo lahhrate hue lambe greyish aur redish baal unki cruelness se bhadi aankhe jo chikh chikh ke ek hi lafz kah rahi thi
*superiority*
Ye unka aura tak darsa raha tha unke aura me wo superiority thi jo kisi me bhi n ho matlab unka moto ek hi hota tha *jhuko mera saamne warna maro mere saamne*

Unke sarir pr bas ek lamba *Hanfu* jaisa kapra pure sarir pr lapeta hua tha unke pairo me kuch nhi tha unhone yaha tk ki *THE CROWN SUPERIORITY* bhi nhi pahna hua tha, unkki wo surkh laal aankh jinki putliyaa tk greyish thi, wo kahi se bhi ek god nhi ek devil God jyada lag rahe the,aur unhe ye kahha bhi jaata tha ki wo khud ek heavenly god ke roop me ek DEVIL GOD hai,


Human god ko ghurte hue God Yuan niche aram se lahrate hue uttre aur bola

God Yuan:- kaise ho *Human God Yuromiya*, yaa ye kahu,
*THE SON OF SUPREME KING OF SPIRITUALITY*haha

Ye laga jhatka,human god unki baat sun ek pal to blank se ho gaye unhe kuch smjh nhi aaraha tha ki usse ye baat pata kaise chali

God Yuan :- shock ho gaye kya Human god,haha,tumhe kya laga tum bach gaye hoge uss raat,nhi hamne tumhe jinda rakha tha kyunki hamme tumse kkuch chahiye tha jo sirf tum hi de sakte the,haha

Human god ko kuch smjh n aaraha tha ki ye ye bol kya raha hai

God Yuan :- Human God Yuromiya mughe sirf tumse wo chis chahiye bas aur kuch nhi,haa wo chis ussi samay mughe mil jaati jab maine tumhare pariwar ko maara lekin afshosh tum mile nhi aur mai tumhe marne dena nhi chta tha issliye mai tumhare piche to nhi aaya lekin mughe nhi pata tha tum iss mukaam tak pohonch jaoge jaha koi pohochne ke baare me sochta tak nhi,tum bbohot alag ho inn insaano se agar tum chaho to tum mughe wo chis dedo aur mera gullamm aur Heaven me God ban kr rah sakte ho socho jara tumhe mai Heavenly God bana dunga socho.......


Human god ko ab sab smjh me aagaya tha ki wo mere beam of life
*SPRITUAL CORIESTER FLOWER SERPENT*
ke liye ye sab nhi kr rahe hai unka real maqsad uss chis ko pana hai jiske baare me wo khud kuch nhi jaante lekin unhe anumaan to ho hi gaya tha ki unhe chahiye kya agar wo chis unhe chaiye to bohot bura hai bohot bura had se bhii jyada bura ye pura universe khatre mme aajayega pura universe aur aisa kabhi human god nhi hone denge kabhi nhi


Human god:- tum tummm kahi *RECLESSNESS OF STREPTURURA CREPTA* ke piche to nhi pade

Ye naam sun God Yuan thode shock hue aur fir haste hue bola

God Yuan:- tum sahi me bohot hi jyada knowledgeable ho Human god Yuromiya,tum kaise ye human god bangaye tumhe heaven me hona chahiye tha,lekin nhi mughe *Recklessness Of streturura Crepta* nhi chahiye mughe wo chahiye jisski tulna ye universe kya ye pura sansar nhi kr sakta jisse ye universe kya other universe bhi nhi hara sakte mughe wo power Ructure chahiye jisse Supreme God bhi hassil nhi kr sakte mughe wo power chahiye jiski tulna *DEVIL LAURECTERNESS TRIFANDA* ne ki thi,mughe wo chahiye jisse
**DEVIL GOD DIABOLOS (SAITAN)
ne khud banaya tha,hahaha


Uss chis ke baare me sun ke to sab kaanp gaye sab har ek shaks jo waha upsthit tha wo ssab kaanp raha tha, Human god ko bohot bada jhatka laga tha abhi bohot bada, unhe bhi apne sarir me wo kampan mahsus ho rahi thii jo sabhi ko ho rahi thi,sabhi ko maut se bhi buri haallat dikh rahe the,demons, humans,demon gods sab kaanp rahe the unki haalat aise the ki jaise unhe hell se khud Lucifer ne bula liya ho,

lekin Human God ko ye smjh nhi aaya ye ye chis usse mughse kyun chahiye agar chaahiye bhi to wo bohot buri hai bohot buri uski tulna tum kisi bhi power se nhi kr sakte lekin ek hai lekin wo kabhi bhi nhi kabhi nhi




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Very nice update bhai

 

[Itachi_Uchiha]

Update:-10


Uss dhund ke kaaran kuch dikh nhi raha tha,dur pade human god jakhmi pade hue the unke chera emotionless tha boleto unke chere pe koi expression hi nhi tha maano wo jaante the ki ye hona hi tha ek din ki wo khud aagaye dharti pr

Uss dhund me ek akriti si panapne lagi thi jo bohot hi wishal dikh rahi thi jab sabne uss akriti ko dekha to unki haalat hi khraab ho gayi lekin jo heavenly gods abhi niche baithe bandhe hue the aur tadap rahe the unki chere ki to khushi to samundar me uthtte lahar jaisi ho gayi thi,saare humans aur demons,demon god dar se kaanp rahe the unki haalat kisi chujo ki jhund jaisi ho gayi thi

**Hhaooooorrrrrrrr**

Tabhi bahot tez dahar gunji,jisski daahaar se to pura mahol hi badal gaya badal grajne lage ,hawa ki dasa bohot Tezz ho gayi,kaale badal lahrane lage the assman me aur tab wo dhund hata jiske baad to unn sabki aisi haalat ho gayi ki unhone apni maut se bhi badtar kuch dekh liya ho,jo sahi bhi tha wo Dragon saamne khada tha jo khud ek Great entity tha,wo pahla Dragon jo dharti pr pahlibaar janma tha aur iss Duniya ka sabse taakatwar yaa kaho to ek khatarnak creature tha iski powers ki tulna kisi High ranking God se kya Ancient God ke barabar ki jaa sakti thi,uss Dragon ki wishal kaaye roop dekh ke hi sab kaanp rahe the, uske har ek ek spikes aur uski wishal kaaye lahrati hui puch aur uske saarir ke har ang pr thunder aur lightning daur rahi thi usski ankhe jo nark ka dwaar khud dikhane ko ubhar rahi thi jo ektak Human god ko ghur rahi tthi,




heavenly gods to bohot khus the kyunki unhe bhi pata tha ki agar ye yaha pe hai to Wo shaks bhi yaha pe hoga hi hoga

Human God jo uss Dragon ko dekh rahe the unhone uss Dragon ko dekhte hue bola

Human God:- Bahar Aao Great God King God Yuan.......

Wo abhi itna hi bole theki Uss dragon ne apne puch se eek thundder strike kiya jo bohot hi Tezz tha jisko Human god achanaak aur itni tezzi se aate hue attack ko rok nhi paaye aur unki pet chirti hui wo strike chali gayi jisse unki stithi aur khrab ho gayi unke khun bahne lage the uss jagah se jo bohot hi gahra ghao de gayi thi leekin shockin baat ye hui ki jab Human god ghutno pr se uthte hue hasne lage aur bole

Human god:- bas,ruko itni bhi jaldi kya hai

Unke ye bolte hi wo ghao bharne laga aur wo Armor jo unke pet ka pura hissa chir gaya tha wo apne aap jurne laga jo bohot shock dene waali baat thi bohot hi jyada wo shock puri trah se hila ke rakh di thi heavenly gods aur demon gods ko jo abhi khus ho rahe the aab unki hawiya udi hui thi,wo shaks jo ye sab dekh raha tha wo to pahle shock bohot jyada hi hua lekin fir uske chere pe eek smile si agayi

Wo dragon to itna gussa ho gaya ki uski dahar fir gunj uthi uss mahol me aur fir usne apna attack kiya


**Wippphhhhh**

Uss dragon ne apne ankho ko uppar uthate hue ek dhar maarte hi ek aatack kiya jo bohot khatarnaak thi had se jyada jo dekhne pe hi lag rahi thi

Wo attack red aur blue lightning jaisi thi lekin uss attack me bohot saare creatures kki ajjib ajjib chikhe aur awazze gunj rahi thi jo uss attack me saaf dekhi aur sunni jaa sakti thi

Uss attack ke hote hi Human god ne apni sword thama aur ek jump maarte hi apne maathe pe sword ko ttikate hi chilate hue ek attacck perform kiiya

** Spread of clingness circle **

Unke ye bolte hi unhone apni sword ko sidha chor diyya jo aage jaa kr uss aarrahi attack se jaa lagi,jiske takrate hi bohot hi jordar wave nikli bohot hi Tezz jiske kaaran hua ye ki aaspas ki hawao me ek katao aur boleto ek sharpness si fail gayi jiska asar bohot bura hua ass pass me parehue heavenly gods aur demon gods ke sariro pr kkatao si banne lagi jo sword aattack se kam to bilkul bhi n thi

Wahi uss sword ke takrate hi uss sword ne apna roop hi badal liya boleto epic transformation,


(bc yaha mai apni hassi n rok paa raha yaar transformation bc really ye bohot epic scene honewali hai other attack se enjoy it)


uss transformation hua aise ki uss sword ne ek circle chakra bana liya jisme universe saaf saaf dikh rahi thi lekin wo. Universe n thi,tabhi achanak se hi uss circle se bohot saare saare reptiles jaise creatures ki spirit nikli ekdum g faad scene thaa yaar unn reptiles spirit ne sidha uss attack ko chirte hue nikli aur aisa lag raha tha jaise wo reptiles uss attack ko shokh rahi hai yaa khaa rahi hai kyunki wo sab dhire dhire unn repttiles ke dwara absorb hote hi jaaa rahi thi,jab wo attack hata to wo dragon kuch duur jaa gira uske girte hi uski haalat kisi tadapte hue machli jaisi ho gayi thi

Lekin Human god ne apna sword laaya wwaapas aur aage badh gaye,unko aata. Dekh wo Dragonbhi uth khada hua jaise taise aur apni spritual power milane laga aur ek ke baad ek beam attack krne laga apni aankho se to kabhi apni puch se strike,lekin unn attacks ka koi asar n ho raha tha Human god bahot tezzi se aage badh rahe the unn attack ko bohot hi tezzi se wo dodge kr rahe the unki speed. Had se jyada Tezz thi bohot jyada

Human god waha pohonchte hi waha unhone sword se strike krne suru kr diye unhone just 2 second me apne 3,525 strike ko perform kr diye the unki strike bilkul hi blue aur red colour ki thi jo 3,525 strike ke saath bohot hi gajab scene create kr rahi thi

Dragon ne shield create ki lekin wo usse bhi kuch hi se bach paaya kyun ki wo striike uska picha nhi chor rahi thi wo dragon bohot hi jakhmi tha aur gussa to uske aankho me swar chadha tha

Uss dragon ki itni buri haalat dekh to saare gods ki halak tak sukh gayi unhe biswas n ho raha tha ki ek human god ne iss pure duniya ki sabse Powerfull entity ka ye haal kiya ye impossible tha impossible

Ab wo shaks jo God Yuan khud the jo yaha the lekin kisiko najar nhi aarahe the wo bhi smjh gaye the ki yye God koi mamuli power nhi rakhta ye God khud ek Disastorous Entity ke jaise hai jo kabhi nhi harta kabhi nhi






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Bole to fadu. Batao Dragan na hua ek chota khitta ho gaya. Jo maar maar ke ye haal kar diya.
Bahut hi shandar Sanki Rajput bhai.

Update:-11

(Disastorous is very bad but that is that never be......??)




Human god kisi Disastorous Entity ki trah uss mahol me khade the,unki personality kisi aam gods se kya kisi High ranked god se bhi kahi jyada uppar lag rahi thi,

Wo abhi uss dragon ko hi ghure jaa rahe the lekin tabhi wo dragon. Jo niche pada hua tha usmme kuch halchal hui aur ek hi jhatke me bohhot saari lightning hui aur usske uppar giri jisse human god piche ki traf khisak gaye jab wo lightning hatti to wo Dragon apne Godly forrm me tha iska matlab God Yuan yaha hai

Wo Dragon ab kahi se bhi koi Dragon nhi lag raha tha wo ek godly being lag raha tha uski puri body golden red aur bluish lightning aur thunder se had se jyada chamak rahi thi,uske body pe jitne bhi cracks aaye the aur chotte aaye the wo sab heal hogayi thi wo dragon kisi Bohot badi mountain ki trah khada tha,

Tab hui ek jordar thunder ke saath lightnig aur uss dragon nne ab apna muh kholna suru kiya uske har ek badhtte sppeed matlab muh khulte khulte thunderbolt lightning aur hawa ka pressure badhte hi jaa raha tha waha uss pressure se saare shield tutne ko hogaye the jo human god ne waha lagaye the unn sabpar,

Human god nne jaise ye paaya pressure unke liye bhi bohot hi jyada harmful hai unhone ek haath move kiya aur unn sab shield ko aur strongly packed kr diya,

Uss badhte pressure ke kaaran jamin ander ki wor dhas rahi thi, lightning aur thunder badhte hi jaa rahi,uss dragon ka muh lagbhag khulne ko hi tha


Jaise hi uss dragon ka muh khula Tezz roshni fail gayi uss pure war zone me jo puri trah se greyish colour ki thi jiske contact me jo bhi aaraha tha wo wahi ke wahi sukh jaa raha thaa matlab wahha jitne bhi hathyaar gire pade the yudh me aur lashe girri thi sab sukh si gayi aur raakh me badal gayi,jo bhi shield me tha bach gaya tha,



Jab dhhire dhire wo roshni hatti to saamne khade uss shaks ko dekh sab ke sab sirf human god ko chorr kr sab ghutne pe aagaye aur sir jhuka liya koi bhi khada nhi ho raha tha,ye khauf,dar, aur ek sihran si thi jo daud rahi thi unn jhuke hue har ek ke ander,wo ander hi ander kaanp rahe the,unka dil dar raha tha dimag khauf me ulagh raha tha unki manshikta tak kaanp rahi thii,unkki rooh unse chin jaane ka dar unke ander ho rahe kampan se saaf pata chal raha tha

Human God uss Shaks ko dekh bohot jyada gusse me the bohot jyada,unko apni pariwar ki jhalak dikh gayi ek pal me unke saamne,wo pariwar jinke liye wo jite the,wo maa jo unka khyaal jaan se bhi jyada rakhti thi,,wo pita jo unhe har ek chis ke gyan se unka samna krne me madad krte the unke jivan ko ek nayi disha ki wor lejaane me prerit krte the,unke wo bhai aur bahen,......sabko maar diya tha ussne sabko koi nhi bacha tha unke pariwar koi nhi,unki puri jindagi ek pal me tabah kr daali thi ussne ek pal me,


Aur wo shaks aaj unke saamne khada tha,wo shaks jisse Gods ka king manna jaata tha,wo shaks
*THE KING OF GOD-GOD YUAN*
Khud the unki wo lahhrate hue lambe greyish aur redish baal unki cruelness se bhadi aankhe jo chikh chikh ke ek hi lafz kah rahi thi
*superiority*
Ye unka aura tak darsa raha tha unke aura me wo superiority thi jo kisi me bhi n ho matlab unka moto ek hi hota tha *jhuko mera saamne warna maro mere saamne*

Unke sarir pr bas ek lamba *Hanfu* jaisa kapra pure sarir pr lapeta hua tha unke pairo me kuch nhi tha unhone yaha tk ki *THE CROWN SUPERIORITY* bhi nhi pahna hua tha, unkki wo surkh laal aankh jinki putliyaa tk greyish thi, wo kahi se bhi ek god nhi ek devil God jyada lag rahe the,aur unhe ye kahha bhi jaata tha ki wo khud ek heavenly god ke roop me ek DEVIL GOD hai,


Human god ko ghurte hue God Yuan niche aram se lahrate hue uttre aur bola

God Yuan:- kaise ho *Human God Yuromiya*, yaa ye kahu,
*THE SON OF SUPREME KING OF SPIRITUALITY*haha

Ye laga jhatka,human god unki baat sun ek pal to blank se ho gaye unhe kuch smjh nhi aaraha tha ki usse ye baat pata kaise chali

God Yuan :- shock ho gaye kya Human god,haha,tumhe kya laga tum bach gaye hoge uss raat,nhi hamne tumhe jinda rakha tha kyunki hamme tumse kkuch chahiye tha jo sirf tum hi de sakte the,haha

Human god ko kuch smjh n aaraha tha ki ye ye bol kya raha hai

God Yuan :- Human God Yuromiya mughe sirf tumse wo chis chahiye bas aur kuch nhi,haa wo chis ussi samay mughe mil jaati jab maine tumhare pariwar ko maara lekin afshosh tum mile nhi aur mai tumhe marne dena nhi chta tha issliye mai tumhare piche to nhi aaya lekin mughe nhi pata tha tum iss mukaam tak pohonch jaoge jaha koi pohochne ke baare me sochta tak nhi,tum bbohot alag ho inn insaano se agar tum chaho to tum mughe wo chis dedo aur mera gullamm aur Heaven me God ban kr rah sakte ho socho jara tumhe mai Heavenly God bana dunga socho.......


Human god ko ab sab smjh me aagaya tha ki wo mere beam of life
*SPRITUAL CORIESTER FLOWER SERPENT*
ke liye ye sab nhi kr rahe hai unka real maqsad uss chis ko pana hai jiske baare me wo khud kuch nhi jaante lekin unhe anumaan to ho hi gaya tha ki unhe chahiye kya agar wo chis unhe chaiye to bohot bura hai bohot bura had se bhii jyada bura ye pura universe khatre mme aajayega pura universe aur aisa kabhi human god nhi hone denge kabhi nhi


Human god:- tum tummm kahi *RECLESSNESS OF STREPTURURA CREPTA* ke piche to nhi pade

Ye naam sun God Yuan thode shock hue aur fir haste hue bola

God Yuan:- tum sahi me bohot hi jyada knowledgeable ho Human god Yuromiya,tum kaise ye human god bangaye tumhe heaven me hona chahiye tha,lekin nhi mughe *Recklessness Of streturura Crepta* nhi chahiye mughe wo chahiye jisski tulna ye universe kya ye pura sansar nhi kr sakta jisse ye universe kya other universe bhi nhi hara sakte mughe wo power Ructure chahiye jisse Supreme God bhi hassil nhi kr sakte mughe wo power chahiye jiski tulna *DEVIL LAURECTERNESS TRIFANDA* ne ki thi,mughe wo chahiye jisse
**DEVIL GOD DIABOLOS (SAITAN)
ne khud banaya tha,hahaha


Uss chis ke baare me sun ke to sab kaanp gaye sab har ek shaks jo waha upsthit tha wo ssab kaanp raha tha, Human god ko bohot bada jhatka laga tha abhi bohot bada, unhe bhi apne sarir me wo kampan mahsus ho rahi thii jo sabhi ko ho rahi thi,sabhi ko maut se bhi buri haallat dikh rahe the,demons, humans,demon gods sab kaanp rahe the unki haalat aise the ki jaise unhe hell se khud Lucifer ne bula liya ho,

lekin Human God ko ye smjh nhi aaya ye ye chis usse mughse kyun chahiye agar chaahiye bhi to wo bohot buri hai bohot buri uski tulna tum kisi bhi power se nhi kr sakte lekin ek hai lekin wo kabhi bhi nhi kabhi nhi




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Wahh Matlb ab main god ko waha aana hi pada. Lakin sayad inse bhi jyada powefull god aur hai tabhi to wo ek human god se koi chij maang rahe hai. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Update:-11

(Disastorous is very bad but that is that never be......??)




Human god kisi Disastorous Entity ki trah uss mahol me khade the,unki personality kisi aam gods se kya kisi High ranked god se bhi kahi jyada uppar lag rahi thi,

Wo abhi uss dragon ko hi ghure jaa rahe the lekin tabhi wo dragon. Jo niche pada hua tha usmme kuch halchal hui aur ek hi jhatke me bohhot saari lightning hui aur usske uppar giri jisse human god piche ki traf khisak gaye jab wo lightning hatti to wo Dragon apne Godly forrm me tha iska matlab God Yuan yaha hai

Wo Dragon ab kahi se bhi koi Dragon nhi lag raha tha wo ek godly being lag raha tha uski puri body golden red aur bluish lightning aur thunder se had se jyada chamak rahi thi,uske body pe jitne bhi cracks aaye the aur chotte aaye the wo sab heal hogayi thi wo dragon kisi Bohot badi mountain ki trah khada tha,

Tab hui ek jordar thunder ke saath lightnig aur uss dragon nne ab apna muh kholna suru kiya uske har ek badhtte sppeed matlab muh khulte khulte thunderbolt lightning aur hawa ka pressure badhte hi jaa raha tha waha uss pressure se saare shield tutne ko hogaye the jo human god ne waha lagaye the unn sabpar,

Human god nne jaise ye paaya pressure unke liye bhi bohot hi jyada harmful hai unhone ek haath move kiya aur unn sab shield ko aur strongly packed kr diya,

Uss badhte pressure ke kaaran jamin ander ki wor dhas rahi thi, lightning aur thunder badhte hi jaa rahi,uss dragon ka muh lagbhag khulne ko hi tha


Jaise hi uss dragon ka muh khula Tezz roshni fail gayi uss pure war zone me jo puri trah se greyish colour ki thi jiske contact me jo bhi aaraha tha wo wahi ke wahi sukh jaa raha thaa matlab wahha jitne bhi hathyaar gire pade the yudh me aur lashe girri thi sab sukh si gayi aur raakh me badal gayi,jo bhi shield me tha bach gaya tha,



Jab dhhire dhire wo roshni hatti to saamne khade uss shaks ko dekh sab ke sab sirf human god ko chorr kr sab ghutne pe aagaye aur sir jhuka liya koi bhi khada nhi ho raha tha,ye khauf,dar, aur ek sihran si thi jo daud rahi thi unn jhuke hue har ek ke ander,wo ander hi ander kaanp rahe the,unka dil dar raha tha dimag khauf me ulagh raha tha unki manshikta tak kaanp rahi thii,unkki rooh unse chin jaane ka dar unke ander ho rahe kampan se saaf pata chal raha tha

Human God uss Shaks ko dekh bohot jyada gusse me the bohot jyada,unko apni pariwar ki jhalak dikh gayi ek pal me unke saamne,wo pariwar jinke liye wo jite the,wo maa jo unka khyaal jaan se bhi jyada rakhti thi,,wo pita jo unhe har ek chis ke gyan se unka samna krne me madad krte the unke jivan ko ek nayi disha ki wor lejaane me prerit krte the,unke wo bhai aur bahen,......sabko maar diya tha ussne sabko koi nhi bacha tha unke pariwar koi nhi,unki puri jindagi ek pal me tabah kr daali thi ussne ek pal me,


Aur wo shaks aaj unke saamne khada tha,wo shaks jisse Gods ka king manna jaata tha,wo shaks
*THE KING OF GOD-GOD YUAN*
Khud the unki wo lahhrate hue lambe greyish aur redish baal unki cruelness se bhadi aankhe jo chikh chikh ke ek hi lafz kah rahi thi
*superiority*
Ye unka aura tak darsa raha tha unke aura me wo superiority thi jo kisi me bhi n ho matlab unka moto ek hi hota tha *jhuko mera saamne warna maro mere saamne*

Unke sarir pr bas ek lamba *Hanfu* jaisa kapra pure sarir pr lapeta hua tha unke pairo me kuch nhi tha unhone yaha tk ki *THE CROWN SUPERIORITY* bhi nhi pahna hua tha, unkki wo surkh laal aankh jinki putliyaa tk greyish thi, wo kahi se bhi ek god nhi ek devil God jyada lag rahe the,aur unhe ye kahha bhi jaata tha ki wo khud ek heavenly god ke roop me ek DEVIL GOD hai,


Human god ko ghurte hue God Yuan niche aram se lahrate hue uttre aur bola

God Yuan:- kaise ho *Human God Yuromiya*, yaa ye kahu,
*THE SON OF SUPREME KING OF SPIRITUALITY*haha

Ye laga jhatka,human god unki baat sun ek pal to blank se ho gaye unhe kuch smjh nhi aaraha tha ki usse ye baat pata kaise chali

God Yuan :- shock ho gaye kya Human god,haha,tumhe kya laga tum bach gaye hoge uss raat,nhi hamne tumhe jinda rakha tha kyunki hamme tumse kkuch chahiye tha jo sirf tum hi de sakte the,haha

Human god ko kuch smjh n aaraha tha ki ye ye bol kya raha hai

God Yuan :- Human God Yuromiya mughe sirf tumse wo chis chahiye bas aur kuch nhi,haa wo chis ussi samay mughe mil jaati jab maine tumhare pariwar ko maara lekin afshosh tum mile nhi aur mai tumhe marne dena nhi chta tha issliye mai tumhare piche to nhi aaya lekin mughe nhi pata tha tum iss mukaam tak pohonch jaoge jaha koi pohochne ke baare me sochta tak nhi,tum bbohot alag ho inn insaano se agar tum chaho to tum mughe wo chis dedo aur mera gullamm aur Heaven me God ban kr rah sakte ho socho jara tumhe mai Heavenly God bana dunga socho.......


Human god ko ab sab smjh me aagaya tha ki wo mere beam of life
*SPRITUAL CORIESTER FLOWER SERPENT*
ke liye ye sab nhi kr rahe hai unka real maqsad uss chis ko pana hai jiske baare me wo khud kuch nhi jaante lekin unhe anumaan to ho hi gaya tha ki unhe chahiye kya agar wo chis unhe chaiye to bohot bura hai bohot bura had se bhii jyada bura ye pura universe khatre mme aajayega pura universe aur aisa kabhi human god nhi hone denge kabhi nhi


Human god:- tum tummm kahi *RECLESSNESS OF STREPTURURA CREPTA* ke piche to nhi pade

Ye naam sun God Yuan thode shock hue aur fir haste hue bola

God Yuan:- tum sahi me bohot hi jyada knowledgeable ho Human god Yuromiya,tum kaise ye human god bangaye tumhe heaven me hona chahiye tha,lekin nhi mughe *Recklessness Of streturura Crepta* nhi chahiye mughe wo chahiye jisski tulna ye universe kya ye pura sansar nhi kr sakta jisse ye universe kya other universe bhi nhi hara sakte mughe wo power Ructure chahiye jisse Supreme God bhi hassil nhi kr sakte mughe wo power chahiye jiski tulna *DEVIL LAURECTERNESS TRIFANDA* ne ki thi,mughe wo chahiye jisse
**DEVIL GOD DIABOLOS (SAITAN)
ne khud banaya tha,hahaha


Uss chis ke baare me sun ke to sab kaanp gaye sab har ek shaks jo waha upsthit tha wo ssab kaanp raha tha, Human god ko bohot bada jhatka laga tha abhi bohot bada, unhe bhi apne sarir me wo kampan mahsus ho rahi thii jo sabhi ko ho rahi thi,sabhi ko maut se bhi buri haallat dikh rahe the,demons, humans,demon gods sab kaanp rahe the unki haalat aise the ki jaise unhe hell se khud Lucifer ne bula liya ho,

lekin Human God ko ye smjh nhi aaya ye ye chis usse mughse kyun chahiye agar chaahiye bhi to wo bohot buri hai bohot buri uski tulna tum kisi bhi power se nhi kr sakte lekin ek hai lekin wo kabhi bhi nhi kabhi nhi




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Bc ye yuhan toh power ka bhukha h matlab human god ki puri family ko marne wala h
aur human god ko bi yuhan jo chahta h uska pata nahi agar sach mai shaitan ki wo power agar human god ko pata h toh agai tagda bawal hoga
shandaar update typical terms kafi h toh confusion rah jata h par ab samaj arahi h dheeredheere

 

[Sanki Rajput]

Very nice update bhai

Thanx bro keep supporting as always

 

[Sanki Rajput]

Bole to fadu. Batao Dragan na hua ek chota khitta ho gaya. Jo maar maar ke ye haal kar diya.
Bahut hi shandar Sanki Rajput bhai.

Wahh Matlb ab main god ko waha aana hi pada. Lakin sayad inse bhi jyada powefull god aur hai tabhi to wo ek human god se koi chij maang rahe hai. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.

Thanx Itachi_Uchiha bhaya ,keep supporting as like this

Take care......

 

[Sanki Rajput]

Bc ye yuhan toh power ka bhukha h matlab human god ki puri family ko marne wala h
aur human god ko bi yuhan jo chahta h uska pata nahi agar sach mai shaitan ki wo power agar human god ko pata h toh agai tagda bawal hoga
shandaar update typical terms kafi h toh confusion rah jata h par ab samaj arahi h dheeredheere

Thanx Sandeep singh nirwan bhaya ,bro ek baar apna review thik se padhne ka man aapne mistake kiya hai to mai bata deta ki human god ki family ko pahle hi maar chuke hai god Yuan, so,koi n jaldi baaji me aapne idhar udhar likha hai manne pata hai koi n

Take care......

 

[DeepHeart💘]

Sanki bhai kba ho

 

[Sanki Rajput]

Sanki bhai kba ho

On study focus and reading my fav. Stories Updates that I just finished bas uss valentine ka story update rah gaya and just now then I am writing some shayri on https://xforum.live/threads/शायरी-और-गजल™.12354/post-4954342

And update ki baat kr rahe ho aap deep bhaya to wo kal post krdunga

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Thanx Sandeep singh nirwan bhaya ,bro ek baar apna review thik se padhne ka man aapne mistake kiya hai to mai bata deta ki human god ki family ko pahle hi maar chuke hai god Yuan, so,koi n jaldi baaji me aapne idhar udhar likha hai manne pata hai koi n

Take care......

Oh ha right mar chuki h family mistake ho gayi likhne mai isilye toh dekh ke bhadka huva tha human god he he he

 

[Naik]

Update:-11

(Disastorous is very bad but that is that never be......??)




Human god kisi Disastorous Entity ki trah uss mahol me khade the,unki personality kisi aam gods se kya kisi High ranked god se bhi kahi jyada uppar lag rahi thi,

Wo abhi uss dragon ko hi ghure jaa rahe the lekin tabhi wo dragon. Jo niche pada hua tha usmme kuch halchal hui aur ek hi jhatke me bohhot saari lightning hui aur usske uppar giri jisse human god piche ki traf khisak gaye jab wo lightning hatti to wo Dragon apne Godly forrm me tha iska matlab God Yuan yaha hai

Wo Dragon ab kahi se bhi koi Dragon nhi lag raha tha wo ek godly being lag raha tha uski puri body golden red aur bluish lightning aur thunder se had se jyada chamak rahi thi,uske body pe jitne bhi cracks aaye the aur chotte aaye the wo sab heal hogayi thi wo dragon kisi Bohot badi mountain ki trah khada tha,

Tab hui ek jordar thunder ke saath lightnig aur uss dragon nne ab apna muh kholna suru kiya uske har ek badhtte sppeed matlab muh khulte khulte thunderbolt lightning aur hawa ka pressure badhte hi jaa raha tha waha uss pressure se saare shield tutne ko hogaye the jo human god ne waha lagaye the unn sabpar,

Human god nne jaise ye paaya pressure unke liye bhi bohot hi jyada harmful hai unhone ek haath move kiya aur unn sab shield ko aur strongly packed kr diya,

Uss badhte pressure ke kaaran jamin ander ki wor dhas rahi thi, lightning aur thunder badhte hi jaa rahi,uss dragon ka muh lagbhag khulne ko hi tha


Jaise hi uss dragon ka muh khula Tezz roshni fail gayi uss pure war zone me jo puri trah se greyish colour ki thi jiske contact me jo bhi aaraha tha wo wahi ke wahi sukh jaa raha thaa matlab wahha jitne bhi hathyaar gire pade the yudh me aur lashe girri thi sab sukh si gayi aur raakh me badal gayi,jo bhi shield me tha bach gaya tha,



Jab dhhire dhire wo roshni hatti to saamne khade uss shaks ko dekh sab ke sab sirf human god ko chorr kr sab ghutne pe aagaye aur sir jhuka liya koi bhi khada nhi ho raha tha,ye khauf,dar, aur ek sihran si thi jo daud rahi thi unn jhuke hue har ek ke ander,wo ander hi ander kaanp rahe the,unka dil dar raha tha dimag khauf me ulagh raha tha unki manshikta tak kaanp rahi thii,unkki rooh unse chin jaane ka dar unke ander ho rahe kampan se saaf pata chal raha tha

Human God uss Shaks ko dekh bohot jyada gusse me the bohot jyada,unko apni pariwar ki jhalak dikh gayi ek pal me unke saamne,wo pariwar jinke liye wo jite the,wo maa jo unka khyaal jaan se bhi jyada rakhti thi,,wo pita jo unhe har ek chis ke gyan se unka samna krne me madad krte the unke jivan ko ek nayi disha ki wor lejaane me prerit krte the,unke wo bhai aur bahen,......sabko maar diya tha ussne sabko koi nhi bacha tha unke pariwar koi nhi,unki puri jindagi ek pal me tabah kr daali thi ussne ek pal me,


Aur wo shaks aaj unke saamne khada tha,wo shaks jisse Gods ka king manna jaata tha,wo shaks
*THE KING OF GOD-GOD YUAN*
Khud the unki wo lahhrate hue lambe greyish aur redish baal unki cruelness se bhadi aankhe jo chikh chikh ke ek hi lafz kah rahi thi
*superiority*
Ye unka aura tak darsa raha tha unke aura me wo superiority thi jo kisi me bhi n ho matlab unka moto ek hi hota tha *jhuko mera saamne warna maro mere saamne*

Unke sarir pr bas ek lamba *Hanfu* jaisa kapra pure sarir pr lapeta hua tha unke pairo me kuch nhi tha unhone yaha tk ki *THE CROWN SUPERIORITY* bhi nhi pahna hua tha, unkki wo surkh laal aankh jinki putliyaa tk greyish thi, wo kahi se bhi ek god nhi ek devil God jyada lag rahe the,aur unhe ye kahha bhi jaata tha ki wo khud ek heavenly god ke roop me ek DEVIL GOD hai,


Human god ko ghurte hue God Yuan niche aram se lahrate hue uttre aur bola

God Yuan:- kaise ho *Human God Yuromiya*, yaa ye kahu,
*THE SON OF SUPREME KING OF SPIRITUALITY*haha

Ye laga jhatka,human god unki baat sun ek pal to blank se ho gaye unhe kuch smjh nhi aaraha tha ki usse ye baat pata kaise chali

God Yuan :- shock ho gaye kya Human god,haha,tumhe kya laga tum bach gaye hoge uss raat,nhi hamne tumhe jinda rakha tha kyunki hamme tumse kkuch chahiye tha jo sirf tum hi de sakte the,haha

Human god ko kuch smjh n aaraha tha ki ye ye bol kya raha hai

God Yuan :- Human God Yuromiya mughe sirf tumse wo chis chahiye bas aur kuch nhi,haa wo chis ussi samay mughe mil jaati jab maine tumhare pariwar ko maara lekin afshosh tum mile nhi aur mai tumhe marne dena nhi chta tha issliye mai tumhare piche to nhi aaya lekin mughe nhi pata tha tum iss mukaam tak pohonch jaoge jaha koi pohochne ke baare me sochta tak nhi,tum bbohot alag ho inn insaano se agar tum chaho to tum mughe wo chis dedo aur mera gullamm aur Heaven me God ban kr rah sakte ho socho jara tumhe mai Heavenly God bana dunga socho.......


Human god ko ab sab smjh me aagaya tha ki wo mere beam of life
*SPRITUAL CORIESTER FLOWER SERPENT*
ke liye ye sab nhi kr rahe hai unka real maqsad uss chis ko pana hai jiske baare me wo khud kuch nhi jaante lekin unhe anumaan to ho hi gaya tha ki unhe chahiye kya agar wo chis unhe chaiye to bohot bura hai bohot bura had se bhii jyada bura ye pura universe khatre mme aajayega pura universe aur aisa kabhi human god nhi hone denge kabhi nhi


Human god:- tum tummm kahi *RECLESSNESS OF STREPTURURA CREPTA* ke piche to nhi pade

Ye naam sun God Yuan thode shock hue aur fir haste hue bola

God Yuan:- tum sahi me bohot hi jyada knowledgeable ho Human god Yuromiya,tum kaise ye human god bangaye tumhe heaven me hona chahiye tha,lekin nhi mughe *Recklessness Of streturura Crepta* nhi chahiye mughe wo chahiye jisski tulna ye universe kya ye pura sansar nhi kr sakta jisse ye universe kya other universe bhi nhi hara sakte mughe wo power Ructure chahiye jisse Supreme God bhi hassil nhi kr sakte mughe wo power chahiye jiski tulna *DEVIL LAURECTERNESS TRIFANDA* ne ki thi,mughe wo chahiye jisse
**DEVIL GOD DIABOLOS (SAITAN)
ne khud banaya tha,hahaha


Uss chis ke baare me sun ke to sab kaanp gaye sab har ek shaks jo waha upsthit tha wo ssab kaanp raha tha, Human god ko bohot bada jhatka laga tha abhi bohot bada, unhe bhi apne sarir me wo kampan mahsus ho rahi thii jo sabhi ko ho rahi thi,sabhi ko maut se bhi buri haallat dikh rahe the,demons, humans,demon gods sab kaanp rahe the unki haalat aise the ki jaise unhe hell se khud Lucifer ne bula liya ho,

lekin Human God ko ye smjh nhi aaya ye ye chis usse mughse kyun chahiye agar chaahiye bhi to wo bohot buri hai bohot buri uski tulna tum kisi bhi power se nhi kr sakte lekin ek hai lekin wo kabhi bhi nhi kabhi nhi




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King God n Human God ko sirf isliye nahi mara tha kyonki use woh power chahiye thi jo Human God k paas h lekin inhe bhi theek se pata nahi isa baare m
Baherhal dekhte h ab kia hota h
Badhiya shaandaar lajawab update bhai