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UPDATE 37

Portal ki wo bhayanak sunehri roshni abhi bhi Aryan ki aankhon mein chubhan paida kar rahi thi. Use aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jaise uske shareer ke ek-ek kan ko khench kar dobara joda gaya ho. Ek zor daar jhatke ke saath, Aryan ka sharir narm ghaas par gira.
Aryan ne dhire se apni aankhein kholi. Sabse pehle jo cheez usne dekhi, wo tha aasmaanโ€”lekin wo neela nahi tha. Divine Heavens ka aasmaan halka sunehra aur baingani (purple) tha, jahan teen suraj ek saath chamak rahe thay. Yahan ki hawa itni ghani aur urja (energy) se bharpur thi ki Aryan ko saans lene mein bhi thoda zor lagana pad raha tha.
"Kavya? Vanya? Maa? Pitaji?" Aryan ne hadbadakar apne charo taraf dekha, lekin wahan sivaaye sunehre pedon aur chandi jaisi chamakti mitti ke kuch nahi tha.
Uska dil zor-zor se dhadakne laga. Portal se guzarne waqt ek 'Dimension Turbulence' (viman-toofan) aaya tha, jisne shaktiyon ke hisaab se sabko alag-alag dishaon mein fek diya.
"System! Report!" Aryan ne mann mein chillaya.
Ting!
[Host Profile: Season 2 Update]

* Location: Emerald Province (The Outer Rim of Divine Heavens).
* Cultivation Rank: Mortal Soul - Stage 1 (Reset).
* Note: Aapki Mortal Realm ki 'Half-Step Sky Realm' taqat yahan ki 'Mortal Soul' ke barabar hai. Aap abhi is realm ke sabse kamzor yoddha hain.
* Status: Heart-Link broken (Temporary). Sabhi companions 500 se 2000 kilometer ke daire mein kahin bhi ho sakte hain.
"Reset? Sabse kamzor?" Aryan ne mutthi bhinchi aur pass pade ek sunehre ped par mukka maara. Usne apni poori taqat lagayi thi, lekin ped hila tak nahi, balki Aryan ke haath mein hi dard hone laga.
"Shit... yahan ke niyam (laws) hi alag hain," Aryan ne thandi saans li. "Lekin pehle unhe dhoondna hoga. Agar Vanya ya Kavya kisi galat haath mein pad gayi, toh unhe bachane ki taqat abhi mere paas nahi hai."
Aryan utha aur us anjaan jungle mein aage badhne laga. Har taraf se ajeeb parindon ki awaazein aa rahi thin. Tabhi, use thodi doori par kisi ke rone aur gidgidane ki awaaz sunayi di. Usne jhadiyon ke piche se dekha.
Wahan ek talab ke kinare ek ladka aur ek ladki khade thay. Ladka ne ek neeli shahi robe pehni thi aur uske haath mein ek chamakti hui talwaar thi. Ladki behad khoobsurat thi, uske baal raat ke andhere jaise kaale thay aur usne safed reshmi libaas pehna tha jo kisi farishte (angel) jaisa lag raha tha. Uske haath mein ek bansuri (flute) thi.
"Saintess Mei," wo ladka ghamand se has raha tha. "Tumhare mandir ke log ab khatam ho chuke hain. Agar tumne wo 'Jade Lotus Flute' mujhe nahi di, toh aaj raat main tumhe apna bandi (prisoner) bana lunga."
Mei piche hat rahi thi, uski aankhon mein aansu thay. "Yeh mere mandir ki amanat hai, Master Zhao. Main ise marte dum tak tumhe nahi dungi."
Master Zhao aage badha aur usne Mei ki kalayi (wrist) pakad li. "Toh phir pehle tumhari khubsurti ka maza liya jaye..."
Aryan ka khoon ubalne laga. Chahe wo koi bhi realm ho, 'Asura' kabhi ladkiyon par zulm bardasht nahi karta tha. Halanki uski shakti kam thi, par uska system aur uski 'Asura Intent' abhi bhi uske paas thi.
"Oye kide!" Aryan jhadiyon se bahar nikla. Uske kapde fate thay aur wo thaka hua lag raha tha, lekin uski aankhon ki chamak ne Master Zhao ko ek pal ke liye thithakne par majboor kar diya.
Master Zhao ne Aryan ko dekha aur zor se hasne laga. "Ek 'Mortal Soul' kachra? Tu mujhe 'kida' bol raha hai?"
Mei ne Aryan ki taraf dekha, uski aankhon mein darr aur thodi si hairani thi. "Bhaiya, aap yahan se bhaag jaiye! Yeh Master Zhao hai, yeh Earth-God Realm ka disciple hai!"
Aryan ne Mei ki taraf dekh kar ek shararati muskaan di. "Fikar mat karo, sundari. Asura ko darr lagna hazaron saal pehle bhool gaya tha."
Aryan ne Master Zhao ki taraf dekha. "Apna ganda haath usse hata, varna main tera haath hi nahi, teri hasti mita dunga."
"Tujhe maut chahiye!" Master Zhao ne apni talwaar hawa mein ghumayi.
Ting!
[Combat Mode Activated!]
[Target Analysis: Master Zhao - Mortal Soul Stage 5.]
[Advice: Use 'Asura Pulse' to disrupt his internal energy.]
Master Zhao Aryan ki taraf lapka, uski talwaar se ek neeli lehar nikli. Aryan ne Void Shadow Step ka use kiya (jo yahan ki shakti ke hisaab se bohot dhima tha, par effective tha). Wo Zhao ki talwaar ke neeche se fisla aur usne Zhao ke pet (stomach) par ek punch maara jisme usne apni bachi-kuchi sari Asura energy jhonk di.
BAM!
Zhao piche hat gaya, uski saans atak gayi. Use vishwas nahi hua ki ek Stage 1 ke ladke ne use Stage 5 wale ko touch kar liya.
Isse pehle ki Zhao dobara hamla karta, Aryan ne Mei ka haath pakda aur use apni taraf khincha. Mei sidha Aryan ki chhati (chest) se ja takrayi. Unki nazrein miliโ€”Mei ne dekha ki Aryan ki aankhon mein ek ajeeb sa purple andhera aur kashish (attraction) thi jo kisi bhi mard mein nahi thi.
"Mere piche raho," Aryan ne Mei ke kaan mein whisper kiya. Uski garam saansein Mei ki skin par lagi, jisse wo pal bhar ke liye sab kuch bhool gayi.
"Tum... tum mera saath kyun de rahe ho?" Mei ne dhire se pucha, uska dil kisi drum ki tarah dhadak raha tha.
"Kyunki tum khoobsurat ho, aur main ek hero hoon," Aryan ne has kar kaha.
Zhao gusse mein pagal ho gaya. "TUM DONO MAROGE!"
Usne ek bada magic circle banaya, lekin tabhi aasmaan se ek bhayanak dahaad sunayi di. Kaalu (Void Dragon) portal ki turbulence se nikal kar sidha unke beech mein land hua.
ROOOAAAARRRR!
Kaalu yahan aakar ek bada sa wolf jitna bada ho gaya tha, par uski aura ne Zhao ki halat kharab kar di. Zhao apni talwaar chhod kar wahan se darr ke maare bhaag gaya.
Jungle mein ab sannata tha. Mei abhi bhi Aryan ki baahon mein thi. Use hosh aaya toh wo turant piche hati, uska chehra tamatar jaisa laal ho gaya.
"M-Maaf kijiye," Mei ne sar jhuka kar kaha. "Main Saintess Mei hoon... Emerald Province ke 'Heavenly Flute Temple' se. Aapne meri jaan bachayi, main aapki karazdaar hoon."
Aryan ne use upar se neeche tak dekha. Mei ki saadgi aur uski masoomiyat ne Aryan ke dil mein ek nayi halchal paida kar di thi.
"Mera naam Aryan hai," usne aage badhkar Mei ka haath uthaya aur uski hatheli par ek halka sa kiss kiya. "Aur karz chukane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Bas mujhe yahan se bahar nikalne mein madad karo."
Mei ka sharir kaanpne laga. Upper Realm mein koi mard itni himmat nahi dikhata tha. Wo Aryan ki taraf dekh rahi thi, aur Aryan uski aankhon mein apna agla shikar dekh raha tha.
"Main... main aapko apne Temple le ja sakti hoon," Mei ne sharmate hue kaha. "Wahan aap safe rahenge aur apne doston ko dhoondne mein bhi help milegi."
Aryan ne aasmaan ki taraf dekha, jahan sunehra suraj dhal raha tha.
"Chalo Mei. Lagta hai Upper Realm ka maza ab shuru hone wala hai."
Matlab ek baar phir zero se start karni hogi Aryan ko. Ab dekhna hai yaha per bagair kisi madad ke kaisay survive karta hai bus ek plus point hai ki Kaalu sath hain
 

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Matlab ek baar phir zero se start karni hogi Aryan ko. Ab dekhna hai yaha per bagair kisi madad ke kaisay survive karta hai bus ek plus point hai ki Kaalu sath hain
"Bhai, aapko lag raha hai ki Aryan 'Zero' par aa gaya hai... par kya waqai?

Kabhi-kabhi zero wo muqaam hota hai jahan se 'Qayamat' ki ginti shuru hoti hai. Aapne kaha Kaalu saath hai, ye badi baat hai... par kya Kaalu wahi hai jo wo dikh raha hai? Is naye safar mein dushman se zyada khatarnak wo 'Raaz' hain jo Aryan ke saath chal rahe hain.

Aryan akela hai ya uske piche koi aisi taqat khadi hai jiska ehsaas abhi dushmano ko nahi hai? Asli khel toh ab pardo ke piche shuru hua hai... aur yaad rakhna, jab Asura zero par hota hai, tabhi wo sabse zyada 'Lethal' hota hai.

Bas intezar kijiye, kyunki agla mod aapko wahan le jayega jahan maut bhi Aryan se raasta mangegi! "
 
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"Bhai, aapko lag raha hai ki Aryan 'Zero' par aa gaya hai... par kya waqai?

Kabhi-kabhi zero wo muqaam hota hai jahan se 'Qayamat' ki ginti shuru hoti hai. Aapne kaha Kaalu saath hai, ye badi baat hai... par kya Kaalu wahi hai jo wo dikh raha hai? Is naye safar mein dushman se zyada khatarnak wo 'Raaz' hain jo Aryan ke saath chal rahe hain.

Aryan akela hai ya uske piche koi aisi taqat khadi hai jiska ehsaas abhi dushmano ko nahi hai? Asli khel toh ab pardo ke piche shuru hua hai... aur yaad rakhna, jab Asura zero par hota hai, tabhi wo sabse zyada 'Lethal' hota hai.

Bas intezar kijiye, kyunki agla mod aapko wahan le jayega jahan maut bhi Aryan se raasta mangegi! "
Bhai aap samjhe hi nahi mainay kaha yaha aan ker usko shuru se shurwat karni hogi coz uski power ek dam starting phase per hai means nayi shuruwat ki zaroorat hai.
 
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Bhai aap samjhe hi nahi mainay kaha yaha aan ker usko shuru se shurwat karni hogi coz uski power ek dam starting phase per hai means nayi shuruwat ki zaroorat hai.
"Arey bhai, ab aapki baat ki gehrai samajh mein aayi! Aapka ishara us 'Raw Phase' ki taraf hai jahan Aryan ke paas na koi purani taqat hai aur na hi koi sahara.

Lekin yahan ek bada 'Raaz' chhupa hai... Kya ye reset sirf ek kamzori hai? Ya phir Asura System ne Aryan ko 'Nayi Shuruwat' ke bahane ek aisi 'Forbidden Power' ke liye taiyar kiya hai jo 3rd Realm se bhi pare hai?

Aryan ab bilkul 'Zero' level par hai, par uski ye base-level shuruat hi use 'The Absolute Sovereign' banayegi. Survival namumkin hai, dushman hazaaron hain, aur Aryan ke paas ab sirf uski 'Asura Will' bachi hai. Par yaad rakhna, jab shuruat sabse neeche se hoti hai, toh tabahi sabse unchi hoti hai!

Bas dekhte jaiye, ye 'Starting Phase' Aryan ko kis mod par le jata hai... kyunki asli khel toh ab shuru hua hai! ๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿ”ฅ"
 
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nice update
 
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