Thriller The cold night (वो सर्द रात) (completed)

[Raj_sharma]

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[DesiPriyaRai]

हां बिल्कुल, इसीलिए बोला फिल्मों और कहानियों में जो रियल लाइफ में नहीं होता, लोग वो ही होना एक्सपेक्ट करते हैं।

Ye bat hai sahi, Par dekha jaye to jis hisab se Romesh ka character likha gaya hai, is hisab se usko saaja milna ek behtarin ending hai. Jesa ki Gabbar movie me huva tha.

 

[Raj_sharma]

Super ending, aesa alg raha tha ki drashyam Vijay itni mehnat karne ke bad bhi har gaya... Bahut khub..

Thanks Raj_sharma itni behtareen story ke liye...

Aapko Acha laga ye sunkar mujhe lagta hai ki meri mehnat safal huiab sala koi bhi bole ki story achi nahi thi, apne ko tension nahi Waise thanks ki jarurat nahi, Aap to Aate raha karomujhe to us se hi motivation mil jayega abhi meri doosri story सुप्रीम aapka intzaar kar rahi hai Thank you very much for your amazing review and superb DesiPriyaRai

 

[Raj_sharma]

Aapne jo kaha wo ek movie ke liye thik hai, pr jesa real life me hota hai us hisab se sayad yahi end hota.

Bilkul

 

[DesiPriyaRai]

Aapko Acha laga ye sunkar mujhe lagta hai ki meri mehnat safal huiab sala koi bhi bole ki story achi nahi thi, apne ko tension nahi Waise thanks ki jarurat nahi, Aap to Aate raha karomujhe to us se hi motivation mil jayega abhi meri doosri story सुप्रीम aapka intzaar kar rahi hai Thank you very much for your amazing review and superb DesiPriyaRai

सुप्रीम को पढ़ाना होगा, पर उसके पहले Riky007 ji की स्टोरी रीड करनी है.

 

[Raj_sharma]

सुप्रीम को पढ़ाना होगा, पर उसके पहले Riky007 ji की स्टोरी रीड करनी है.

Mujhse itni doori? Dil dukha diya

 

[DesiPriyaRai]

Mujhse itni doori? Dil dukha diya

Nahi, aesa nahi hai.

 

[Raj_sharma]

Nahi, aesa nahi hai.

Aao fir

Fantasy - सुप्रीम

Bhai badhiya update Shaifali ne to math ki class kol li haiShefali is kahani ki jaan hai bhai😊 Thank you very much for your valuable review bhai :thanx:

xforum.live

 

[Raj_sharma]

आसिफा जी ऐक नजर अगर आप के पास समय हो तो इस कहानी पर भी

 

[Raj_sharma]

 

[Raj_sharma]

Hi dosto,
Mai aapka Raj Sharma, aaj fir aapke samne lekar Aa raha hu ek ek hindi kahani wo sard Raat.
Ummeed hai meri pichli kahani, Collage love( दोस्ती प्यार मे बदल गई) ki tarah aap log ise bhi apna sneh denge. Dhanyawaad

Bulbul_Rani agar thriller padhna ho to ye bohot badhiya hai