Fantasy The Cursed Love

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UPDATE 1


RAMPUR GAON, 1990

Ye Goan bahut hi bada gaon hai har taraf khusyali aur haryali h.
Aane wale samy me ye bahut hi developed sehar me se ek hone wala tha. Yaha ki jameene bahut upjau h.

Esse gaon ke ek chaurahe par do gangs ki ladai chal rahi thi.
Ye dono gangs gaon ke sabse ameer aur takatwar Samseer singh aur Vijay thakur ke admi h.

Ye dono pehle jigri dost hua karte the lekin inme kuch apsi an ban hogyi jiski wajha se ye ek dusre ke jaani dusman ban gye.



Chaliye pehla thoda enke bare me aur inki ladai ka karan bta dete h.
Samseer singh aur Vijay thakur
bachpan se sath pale bade khele kude aur inke pariwar me bhi bahut ache sambandh the. Pehle inka dono kapariwar bahut gareeb tha lekin wakt ke sath indono sab badal diya.Aaj ye dono hi bahut aameer h aur bade bade log inse milne aate h. Lekin wakt ke sath sab acha nhi hota Vijay Thakur me paise aut takat ka ghamaand aa gya tha vo galat raste par jakar paise kamana chahta tha drugs,vasooli karna vagera vagera.


Lekin Sameer singh is gaon ki taraki chahata tha usne Thakur ko rokne ki kosis ki par wo nhi mana. Is karan un dono me baat badh gyi aur wo dono dushman ban gye.Un dono ke
pariwar me bhi pehle acha relation tha. Samseer singh ki
biwi Sushmita singh to Thakur ke sabse chote bete ko apna
beta manti thi. Wo sabse sidha
tha wo in ladai jagdo se matlab nahi rakhta tha aur Sushmita ko apni ma kehke hi bulata tha.


At prsent:

Abhi yaha halki barish me dono taraf se lad rhe the katee aur hockey stick lekar. Sabke muh aur kaan se khun beh rhe the.
Tabhi waha police ke siren ki awaaj aati h aur saab bhag jaate h.

Jo log bhaag nikle the vo Thakur ki haveli pahuch jaate h aur ye khabar dete h jise sunke Thakur bahut gusse me aa jata h.
V. Thakur:Kya hua tum logo ki ye halat kisne ki
Admi: Ham to hafta vasul ne gye the lekin wha Samseer singh ke admi pahuch gye
V. Thakur:Ye samseer hamesa bich me tang aada h. Ab iska kissa khatam karna hoga.

Udhar Samseer singh ko bhi khabar mil chuki thi is saab ki.

S. Singh:Ye thakur ka aatank ab badhta ja rha h aur gaon ke logo ko bahut paresani ho rhi h. Apne admiyo ko bole tayar rhe parane dost se milne ka waqt aa gya h.

Wo apni biwi ko bata ke Thakur ke haweli ki oor nikal jata h.

Nice start
Purani dosti jo dusmani mein badal gayi
Dekhte hai jab samseer singh haweli pahuchta hai to kya hota hai

 

[DEMITRI]

Nice update

Nyc update bro
Dekhte aage kya hota hai

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for new story

Nice start
Purani dosti jo dusmani mein badal gayi
Dekhte hai jab samseer singh haweli pahuchta hai to kya hota hai

Thanks bhai log
Update 9 bje tak aa jaega

 

[DEMITRI]

UPDATE 2
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Samseer singh apni biwi ko bol kar nikal chuka tha jisne use rokne ki bahut kosis ki par wo nhi ruka.Usne apne dono beto ko bhi sath le liya tha.


Udhar Thakur ko bhi pta chal gya tha ki Samseer apne admiyo ke sath aa rha h. Uske mathe par chinta ki rekha thi.

V. Thakur:Lagta h vo din aaj hi h
Jao apne admiyo ko tayar rakhna

Samseer bhi Thakur ki haveli pahuch gya to Thakur apne admiyo ke sath bahar nikla.

V. Thakur: Aao samseer aaj hamare ghar kese aa gye

S. Singh:Tumhe rokne aya hu tum gunda gardi kab se karne lage

V. Thakur:Mene tumhe pehle hi bola tha ham yha milkar raj kar sakte the lekin nhi

S. Singh:Ham ye mamla apas me suljha skte h

V. Thakur:Ab uske liye bahut der hochuka h

Itna kehke wo aur uske admi gan tan dete h. Idhar Samseer ke bhi adme aur gan tan dete h. Mahol bahut garam ho gya tha.

S. Singh:Mae tujhe marna nhi chahta

V. Thakur:Ab is sab ke liye samay nhi h wo aa rhe h

S. Singh:Kon aa rha...

Thakur uski baat katte hue Samsser ke chote bete ke kandhe me goli chala deta h. Ab dono taraf se firing suru ho jata h. Samseer bhi ab gan tan leta h.

V. Thakur:Chala goli ab ya tu rhega ya me

Samseer bhi gun chala deta h aur Thakur bhi dono niche gir jaate h.
Thakur ko jada lagi thi.

V. Thakur:Mera bachna mushkil par tu bach jae ga aur mera badla lega. Ahh.. Mae tujhe jo batane wala hu dyaan se suna.
Wo Thakur ko kuch baat bta ta he jo hame age pta chale ga.

S. Singh:Tu mujhe pehle btata to aaj ye nhi hota

V. Thakur:Mujhe maaf kar dena dost ahh.... Mh.. Mere pote ko chod dena wo masuum h vadaa kar mujhse

S. Singh:vadda karta hu use kuch nhi hone dunga

Aur Thakur ki ankhe band ho jati h aur Samseer bhi behosh hone lagta h tab tak uska bada beta wha pahuch ke use hospital le jata h.

Samseer singh ki biwi ko jese hi ye khabar mili wo rote hue hospital pahuch gyi.

Edhar khabar har jagha phel chuki thi ki Thakur mar gya aur family bhi khatam ho gyi.

 

[Reza]

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Nice update

 

[DEMITRI]

UPDATE 3

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In Hospital:​

Samseer singh bed pe leta hua tha uski halat najuk thi aur side me uski biwi Sushmita bethi hui thi. Uski ankhe rone se laal ho gyi thi.Samseer ko ab hosh aane lagta h aur wo uthne ki kosish karne lagta h jisme uski biwi madat karti h. ​

S. Singh:Tum sab bahar jao mujhe tumhari ma se akele me kuch baat karni h​

Sab bahar chale jate h sivay Sushmita ke​

S. Singh:Tum kab se rone lagi tum tu meri serni h​

Sushmita:Bas kijye mene aapko roka tha par aap nhi ruke dekhiye kya ho gya​

S. Singh:Mujhe maaf kardo kash mene tumhari baat man li hoti. ​

Ham sab ke sath dhokha hua h bahut badi sazish rachi gyi jisme me aur Vijay dono hi phas gye h. Aane wala samay bahut hi khatarnak hone wala h. Ham ye bhi nhi bata sakte kon apna h aur kon dushman. ​

Me jo abhi tumhe batane wala hu use dhyan se suna.......... (ye baat hame aage pata chalegi) ​

Sushmita?:Etna sab ho gya aur aap mujhe aab bata rhe h. ​

S. Singh:Mae nhi bach paunga lekin tumhe hamare pariwar ko bachana hoga aur Vijay ko diya wada bhi pura karna hoga.​

Sushmita:Aap mujhe akele chod ke ja rhe h sameer bhi chala gya me kese sb sambhalungi.​

S. Singh:Tumhe kathor bana hoga aur sakht kadam uthane honge. ​

Ab Samseer ki sasse band hone lagti h to Sushmita doctor ko turant bulati h doctor check karta h. ​

Doctor:I am sorry he is dead. ​

Sushmita aur uske pariwar wale rone lagte h lekin ye rone ka waqt nhi h Sushmita ko ye ache se pta tha.Usne turant apne bade bete Dharam ko Samseer ke antim sanskar ki tayari karne ki baatt ki. Wo sab nipta ke usne jo ministers aur dig aae the unse mila. ​

Sushmita : Daram gaadi nikalo hame abhi ke abhi kahi jana h hamare dushman abhi bahut takatwar h.​

Dharam: Ma aap naam to bataye abhi kaat dunga use​

Sushmita:Hamesa josh se kaam nhi karte. Apne khaas admiyo ko sath le chalo. ​

Apne beto aur admiyo ko lekar wo ek sunsan ghar ke pas pahuchi jaha kuch log pahra de rhe the. Wo apne admiyo ko bolakar un pehradaro ko marvaya aur ghar ka darwaja khulwaya.

Samne ek admi ek ** saal ke chote bache ke gardan par chaku rakha tha.

Sushmita?:Jaggu us ladke ko chod do warna tumhari jindagi nark bna dungi.

Jaggu?:Malkin meri galti nhi h mujhe fasaya gya h mujhe chod dijye me ise chod dunga.

Sushmita:Pehle tum use choro

Wo use chod deta h aur wo ladka daudta hua aakr sushmita ke piche chup jata h. Sushmita pyar se us ki ankho me dekhti h to use Sameer(Thakur ka sabse chota bete jise wo apne bete ki tarah manti thi) ki yaad agayi.
Sushmita use apne sath gaadi me bethakar le jaane lagi.

Sushmita:Jaggu ke hath ped tod do aur uske aankhe bhi fod do. Tab use chod dena.

Jaggu :Nhi malkin maaf kar do ahh......

 

[Black water]

Nice update bhai

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

UPDATE 3

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In Hospital:​

Samseer singh bed pe leta hua tha uski halat najuk thi aur side me uski biwi Sushmita bethi hui thi. Uski ankhe rone se laal ho gyi thi.Samseer ko ab hosh aane lagta h aur wo uthne ki kosish karne lagta h jisme uski biwi madat karti h. ​

S. Singh:Tum sab bahar jao mujhe tumhari ma se akele me kuch baat karni h​

Sab bahar chale jate h sivay Sushmita ke​

S. Singh:Tum kab se rone lagi tum tu meri serni h​

Sushmita:Bas kijye mene aapko roka tha par aap nhi ruke dekhiye kya ho gya​

S. Singh:Mujhe maaf kardo kash mene tumhari baat man li hoti. ​

Ham sab ke sath dhokha hua h bahut badi sazish rachi gyi jisme me aur Vijay dono hi phas gye h. Aane wala samay bahut hi khatarnak hone wala h. Ham ye bhi nhi bata sakte kon apna h aur kon dushman. ​

Me jo abhi tumhe batane wala hu use dhyan se suna.......... (ye baat hame aage pata chalegi) ​

Sushmita?:Etna sab ho gya aur aap mujhe aab bata rhe h. ​

S. Singh:Mae nhi bach paunga lekin tumhe hamare pariwar ko bachana hoga aur Vijay ko diya wada bhi pura karna hoga.​

Sushmita:Aap mujhe akele chod ke ja rhe h sameer bhi chala gya me kese sb sambhalungi.​

S. Singh:Tumhe kathor bana hoga aur sakht kadam uthane honge. ​

Ab Samseer ki sasse band hone lagti h to Sushmita doctor ko turant bulati h doctor check karta h. ​

Doctor:I am sorry he is dead. ​

Sushmita aur uske pariwar wale rone lagte h lekin ye rone ka waqt nhi h Sushmita ko ye ache se pta tha.Usne turant apne bade bete Dharam ko Samseer ke antim sanskar ki tayari karne ki baatt ki. Wo sab nipta ke usne jo ministers aur dig aae the unse mila. ​

Sushmitaharam gaadi nikalo hame abhi ke abhi kahi jana h hamare dushman abhi bahut takatwar h.​

Dharam: Ma aap naam to bataye abhi kaat dunga use​

Sushmita:Hamesa josh se kaam nhi karte. Apne khaas admiyo ko sath le chalo. ​

Apne beto aur admiyo ko lekar wo ek sunsan ghar ke pas pahuchi jaha kuch log pahra de rhe the. Wo apne admiyo ko bolakar un pehradaro ko marvaya aur ghar ka darwaja khulwaya.

Samne ek admi ek 5 saal ke chote bache ke gardan par chaku rakha tha.

Sushmita?:Jaggu us ladke ko chod do warna tumhari jindagi nark bna dungi.

Jaggu:Malkin meri galti nhi h mujhe fasaya gya h mujhe chod dijye me ise chod dunga.

Sushmita:Pehle tum use choro

Wo use chod deta h aur wo ladka daudta hua aakr sushmita ke piche chup jata h. Sushmita pyar se us ki ankho me dekhti h to use Sameer(Thakur ka sabse chota bete jise wo apne bete ki tarah manti thi) ki yaad agayi.
Sushmita use apne sath gaadi me bethakar le jaane lagi.

Sushmita:Jaggu ke hath ped tod do aur uske aankhe bhi fod do. Tab use chod dena.

Jaggu :Nhi malkin maaf kar do ahh......

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