Fantasy The Cursed Love

[u.sir.name]

UPDATE 1


RAMPUR GAON, 1990

Ye Goan bahut hi bada gaon hai har taraf khusyali aur haryali h.
Aane wale samy me ye bahut hi developed sehar me se ek hone wala tha. Yaha ki jameene bahut upjau h.

Esse gaon ke ek chaurahe par do gangs ki ladai chal rahi thi.
Ye dono gangs gaon ke sabse ameer aur takatwar Samseer singh aur Vijay thakur ke admi h.

Ye dono pehle jigri dost hua karte the lekin inme kuch apsi an ban hogyi jiski wajha se ye ek dusre ke jaani dusman ban gye.



Chaliye pehla thoda enke bare me aur inki ladai ka karan bta dete h.
Samseer singh aur Vijay thakur
bachpan se sath pale bade khele kude aur inke pariwar me bhi bahut ache sambandh the. Pehle inka dono kapariwar bahut gareeb tha lekin wakt ke sath indono sab badal diya.Aaj ye dono hi bahut aameer h aur bade bade log inse milne aate h. Lekin wakt ke sath sab acha nhi hota Vijay Thakur me paise aut takat ka ghamaand aa gya tha vo galat raste par jakar paise kamana chahta tha drugs,vasooli karna vagera vagera.


Lekin Sameer singh is gaon ki taraki chahata tha usne Thakur ko rokne ki kosis ki par wo nhi mana. Is karan un dono me baat badh gyi aur wo dono dushman ban gye.Un dono ke
pariwar me bhi pehle acha relation tha. Samseer singh ki
biwi Sushmita singh to Thakur ke sabse chote bete ko apna
beta manti thi. Wo sabse sidha
tha wo in ladai jagdo se matlab nahi rakhta tha aur Sushmita ko apni ma kehke hi bulata tha.


At prsent:

Abhi yaha halki barish me dono taraf se lad rhe the katee aur hockey stick lekar. Sabke muh aur kaan se khun beh rhe the.
Tabhi waha police ke siren ki awaaj aati h aur saab bhag jaate h.

Jo log bhaag nikle the vo Thakur ki haveli pahuch jaate h aur ye khabar dete h jise sunke Thakur bahut gusse me aa jata h.
V. Thakur:Kya hua tum logo ki ye halat kisne ki
Admi: Ham to hafta vasul ne gye the lekin wha Samseer singh ke admi pahuch gye
V. Thakur:Ye samseer hamesa bich me tang aada h. Ab iska kissa khatam karna hoga.

Udhar Samseer singh ko bhi khabar mil chuki thi is saab ki.

S. Singh:Ye thakur ka aatank ab badhta ja rha h aur gaon ke logo ko bahut paresani ho rhi h. Apne admiyo ko bole tayar rhe parane dost se milne ka waqt aa gya h.

Wo apni biwi ko bata ke Thakur ke haweli ki oor nikal jata h.

Good start brother.....
To do purane dost ab jani dushman hai...

 

[u.sir.name]

UPDATE 2
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Samseer singh apni biwi ko bol kar nikal chuka tha jisne use rokne ki bahut kosis ki par wo nhi ruka.Usne apne dono beto ko bhi sath le liya tha.


Udhar Thakur ko bhi pta chal gya tha ki Samseer apne admiyo ke sath aa rha h. Uske mathe par chinta ki rekha thi.

V. Thakur:Lagta h vo din aaj hi h
Jao apne admiyo ko tayar rakhna

Samseer bhi Thakur ki haveli pahuch gya to Thakur apne admiyo ke sath bahar nikla.

V. Thakur: Aao samseer aaj hamare ghar kese aa gye

S. Singh:Tumhe rokne aya hu tum gunda gardi kab se karne lage

V. Thakur:Mene tumhe pehle hi bola tha ham yha milkar raj kar sakte the lekin nhi

S. Singh:Ham ye mamla apas me suljha skte h

V. Thakur:Ab uske liye bahut der hochuka h

Itna kehke wo aur uske admi gan tan dete h. Idhar Samseer ke bhi adme aur gan tan dete h. Mahol bahut garam ho gya tha.

S. Singh:Mae tujhe marna nhi chahta

V. Thakur:Ab is sab ke liye samay nhi h wo aa rhe h

S. Singh:Kon aa rha...

Thakur uski baat katte hue Samsser ke chote bete ke kandhe me goli chala deta h. Ab dono taraf se firing suru ho jata h. Samseer bhi ab gan tan leta h.

V. Thakur:Chala goli ab ya tu rhega ya me

Samseer bhi gun chala deta h aur Thakur bhi dono niche gir jaate h.
Thakur ko jada lagi thi.

V. Thakur:Mera bachna mushkil par tu bach jae ga aur mera badla lega. Ahh.. Mae tujhe jo batane wala hu dyaan se suna.
Wo Thakur ko kuch baat bta ta he jo hame age pta chale ga.

S. Singh:Tu mujhe pehle btata to aaj ye nhi hota

V. Thakur:Mujhe maaf kar dena dost ahh.... Mh.. Mere pote ko chod dena wo masuum h vadaa kar mujhse

S. Singh:vadda karta hu use kuch nhi hone dunga

Aur Thakur ki ankhe band ho jati h aur Samseer bhi behosh hone lagta h tab tak uska bada beta wha pahuch ke use hospital le jata h.

Samseer singh ki biwi ko jese hi ye khabar mili wo rote hue hospital pahuch gyi.

Edhar khabar har jagha phel chuki thi ki Thakur mar gya aur family bhi khatam ho gyi.

Good update brother....

 

[u.sir.name]

UPDATE 3

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In Hospital:​

Samseer singh bed pe leta hua tha uski halat najuk thi aur side me uski biwi Sushmita bethi hui thi. Uski ankhe rone se laal ho gyi thi.Samseer ko ab hosh aane lagta h aur wo uthne ki kosish karne lagta h jisme uski biwi madat karti h. ​

S. Singh:Tum sab bahar jao mujhe tumhari ma se akele me kuch baat karni h​

Sab bahar chale jate h sivay Sushmita ke​

S. Singh:Tum kab se rone lagi tum tu meri serni h​

Sushmita:Bas kijye mene aapko roka tha par aap nhi ruke dekhiye kya ho gya​

S. Singh:Mujhe maaf kardo kash mene tumhari baat man li hoti. ​

Ham sab ke sath dhokha hua h bahut badi sazish rachi gyi jisme me aur Vijay dono hi phas gye h. Aane wala samay bahut hi khatarnak hone wala h. Ham ye bhi nhi bata sakte kon apna h aur kon dushman. ​

Me jo abhi tumhe batane wala hu use dhyan se suna.......... (ye baat hame aage pata chalegi) ​

Sushmita?:Etna sab ho gya aur aap mujhe aab bata rhe h. ​

S. Singh:Mae nhi bach paunga lekin tumhe hamare pariwar ko bachana hoga aur Vijay ko diya wada bhi pura karna hoga.​

Sushmita:Aap mujhe akele chod ke ja rhe h sameer bhi chala gya me kese sb sambhalungi.​

S. Singh:Tumhe kathor bana hoga aur sakht kadam uthane honge. ​

Ab Samseer ki sasse band hone lagti h to Sushmita doctor ko turant bulati h doctor check karta h. ​

Doctor:I am sorry he is dead. ​

Sushmita aur uske pariwar wale rone lagte h lekin ye rone ka waqt nhi h Sushmita ko ye ache se pta tha.Usne turant apne bade bete Dharam ko Samseer ke antim sanskar ki tayari karne ki baatt ki. Wo sab nipta ke usne jo ministers aur dig aae the unse mila. ​

Sushmitaharam gaadi nikalo hame abhi ke abhi kahi jana h hamare dushman abhi bahut takatwar h.​

Dharam: Ma aap naam to bataye abhi kaat dunga use​

Sushmita:Hamesa josh se kaam nhi karte. Apne khaas admiyo ko sath le chalo. ​

Apne beto aur admiyo ko lekar wo ek sunsan ghar ke pas pahuchi jaha kuch log pahra de rhe the. Wo apne admiyo ko bolakar un pehradaro ko marvaya aur ghar ka darwaja khulwaya.

Samne ek admi ek 5 saal ke chote bache ke gardan par chaku rakha tha.

Sushmita?:Jaggu us ladke ko chod do warna tumhari jindagi nark bna dungi.

Jaggu:Malkin meri galti nhi h mujhe fasaya gya h mujhe chod dijye me ise chod dunga.

Sushmita:Pehle tum use choro

Wo use chod deta h aur wo ladka daudta hua aakr sushmita ke piche chup jata h. Sushmita pyar se us ki ankho me dekhti h to use Sameer(Thakur ka sabse chota bete jise wo apne bete ki tarah manti thi) ki yaad agayi.
Sushmita use apne sath gaadi me bethakar le jaane lagi.

Sushmita:Jaggu ke hath ped tod do aur uske aankhe bhi fod do. Tab use chod dena.

Jaggu :Nhi malkin maaf kar do ahh......

Nice update brother....
Ab dekhna yeh Aisa kya raaz hai ziske karan dono dost mare gaye...

 

[DEMITRI]

UPDATE 4

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Sushmita us bache ko lekar bahar nikal jaati h aur apne bete se baat karne ke liye ruk jaati h. Uske admi thoda dur ja ke pehra dene lagte h.

Dharam:Ye bacha kon hai ma jisse bachane ke liye aap yha aai.

Sushmita:Ye Vijay Thakur ka pota hai.

Dharam:Ma aap hamare dushman ke bete ko bachane ke liye yha aai.

Sushmita: dushman nhi tumhara bhai tha wo.

Dharam:Kesa bhai jisse apne bete ki tarah mana usi ne apko dhokha diya.

Sushmita:Ho sakta h uski koi majburi hogi. Aur tumhare pita ne Vijay bhaisahab ko vada kiya thi ki unke pote ko chod denge.

Dharam:Unka vaada ise chodne ka tha lekin rakhne ka nhi kal ko agar ye hamare khilaf hogya to.

Sushmita:Tum uski chinta mat kro.
Dharam:Thik h lekin ye ek naukar ki tarah rahe ga.

Sushmita kuch kehnaa chah rhi thi lekin uske muh se kuch sabd nhi nikal paye.
Kuch der waha shanti chae rhi phir Sushmita ne bola.

Sushmita:Thik h lekin ye baat sirf mere aur tumhare bich rehni chahie ki ye Vijay Thakur ka pota h.

Dharam:hmmm

Aur fir wo log waha se nikal jaate h aur apne haveli pahuch jaate h.
Sushmita us bache ko sath lekar apne room me chali jaati h.

Wo bacha abhi bhi dara hua tha bahut hi masoom ankho me halka pani aur use koi apna nhi dikh rha tha.

Sushmita us ladke ko apne seene se lagar saant karti hai aur vishwaas dilati h ki ab saab theek h. Wo ladka bhi kuch der me shaant ho jaata h.

Sushmita : chalo ab apna naam to batao.

Ladka:Ji mera naam Abhimanu h

Sushmita:Bahut pyara naam h

Abhi:Mere mummy papa kaha h mujhe mummy ke pas jaana h.

Sushmita kuch der shaant rehti phir pyaar se use samjhati h.

Sushmita:Abhimanu tumhare mummy papa bhagwan ke pas h wo tumko upar se dekh rhe h tum ese roge to wo wapas nhi aaenge tumhe strong banna hoga. Chalo ab rona band karo.
Uske ashu saaf kar deti h.
Abhi:kya me apko ma bula saktu mujhe aap mere ma jaese lagte ho.

Sushmita:Thik h lekin sirf ghar me. Ok

Abhi:Thik h ma

Sushmita ko ekdam se samaar yaad aaja ta hai

Sushmita:Chalo pehle kuch kha lo phir tumhe tumhare room me chod deti hu.

Abhi: kya me apke sath nhi reh sakta

Sushmita:koi tumhe mere sath dekhega to shak ho jae ga aur tumhe marne ki kosis krega

Abhi:Thik h to mae kha rahunga

Sushmita:tum yha servant quarter me rahoge
Abhi:thik h

Uske baad wo use servant quarter lejati h aur usse ek admi aur aurat se milwati aur unhe bolti h ki iska dhyaan rakhna.

Edhar dur Bumbai sehar ki ek sunsan farmhouse par ek admi saraab pi rha tha aur uske aas pas teen char ladkiya nangi ghum rahi thi

Admi:Boss ***** ka phone aya tha kaam hogya Vijay Thakur aur Samseer singh dono mar gye.

Boss:ye to bahut achhi khabar tune sunayi h mantus maan khus hogya h ja enme se ek ladki le ja

Admi:Boss lekin ek problem hogyi Samseer singh ka pariwar bach gya aur Ab Rampur ki kmaan Sushmita singh ne sambhaal li h

Boss:bosdike maene saaf saaf kha tha koi nhi bachna chahie aur Sushmita to Samseer se bhi jada chalak h uske rehte ham kabhi apna dhanda wha nhi kar sakte

Mantu:Boss aap bolo to abhi use uda du

Boss:nhi ab ham isse satranj ki tarah khelenge bahut mja aaega wese bhi hmare pas Vibhisan to he hi hahaha...

Wahi haveli me Dharam kisi se phone pe baat kar rha hota h ki tabhi Sidhi (Dharam ki wife) aaja ti h jise dekh wo phone kaat deta h.

Sidhi: Kisse baat kar rhe the aap

Dharam:Wo important kaam tha.
wo chodo ye batao sab so gye.

Sunidhi(Dharam ki biwi) :ha kyu
Dharam turant usko pakad leta h aur wildly kiss karne lagta. Sunidhi bhi uska sath dene lagti h dharam ek hath se uski 32 ki chuchi dabane lagta aur uske 38 ke gaand ko bhi dusre hath se dabata h saree ke upar se.

Sunidhi garam hone lagti h aur param ka lund pent ke upar se hi sehlane lagti h. Param bhi uski chuchi masle ja rha tha.
Sunidhi:ahhh..hmm aur jor se dabaiye ahh.... bahut paresan karte h oh.. Ah....Hmm..ahh..
Dharam ab saree ka pallu hata deta h aur uske samne sidhi ke chuche blouse me kase dikhai dete h. Wo blouse ko faad deta h aur uski chuchi ko ajaad kar deta h. Aur uske chuchi muh me le leta h.
Sunidhi:ahh..hmm. ohh esse hi chuso aah... Laal kardo inhe ahh... Mere nipple dekho na edkam kade hogae h ahh....
Dharam:kya chuche h tumhare ahh...
Thodi der chuchi chusne ke baad wo sunidhi ko ghodi bna ta h aur uski peticot nikal deta h aur panty bhi phaad deta h.
Sidhi:ahh ...daldo andar kyu tarpa rhe ho
Dharam apna 5 inch lund uski chut me dal deta h aur chodne lagta h
Dharam:le ahhh..... Kya chut h teri ahh...
Sidhi:ahh..chodo mujhe ahhh... Oh.. Ah aur jor se chodo ahh..
Dharam peche se uski chuchi pakad leta aur buri tarah chodne lagta h. Pure kamre me thap..thap ki awaje gunj rhe thi.das minute bad hi dono jhad jaate aur nange hi so jate h.

Abhimanu ab dhere dhere akele rehne ki aadat dal rha tha subah school jata Sushmita ka ashirvad leke phir wapas aake kuch kuch kam karta jo wha ke servants jisko Sushmita ne Abhimanu ka dyaan rakhne ke liye kha tha wo chalaki se use kaam karwate the.

Abhimanu ye saab Sushmita ko nhi btata tha .Aksar school me wo bade bacho se maar khata lekin kuch btata nhi tha. Wo padne me acha tha har chij ache se samjh jata ye god gifted tha. Padhai me apni hi theory lagata. Uski har raat Sushmita ko apni dincharya bta ke khatam hoti aur fir wo wapas apne room me ake so jata h.

Ek din Sushmita ke pote potiya bahar jane ki zidd karne lagi aur har kar Sushmita ne allowed kar diya aur sath hi Abhimanu ko bhi bhej diya kuch guards ke sath.

Wo log ek park me khel rhe the aur Abhimanu durse hi dekh rha tha,wi bas ek ladki ko khelte hue dekh rha tha jiski ankhe nilli thi. Uska dil joro se dhadak rha tha .
tabhi achanak wha kuch 2-3 gunde aagae aur chupke se us nili ankho wali ladki pe muh dabake le jane lage .Baki bacche dar gae aur rone lage .Abhimanu daud kar aaya aur ek aadmi ke piche se jhapat pada aur use gun chinne ki kosish karne laga.

lekin wo sambhal chuka tha usne turant apni gun se Abhimanu ke sar pe mara aur uske sar pe ek cut ban gya. Abhimanu ko bahut dard hua lekin usne himat karke us admi ke mainpoint pe mara aur usse uski gun chin li.ye sab bahut jaldi me hua un gundo ko sambhalne ka mauka hi nhi mila.Abhimanu ne wo gun us gunde pe tan di jo ladki ko uthaya hua tha. Uske haath kaap rhe the aur wo gun bhi bari thi loaded bhi.

G1:Ae bache gun mujhe dede ye bacho ki khelne wali nhi h

Abhimanu(kapte hue) :pehle tum use choro warna me chala dunga
G1 G2 se: Abe dekh kya rha h gun le le use
G2 jese hi aage badha Abhimanu ne gun chala di aur g2 ka bheja me lagi aur wo mar gya.
G1:Abe bhenchod...
usne jaldi se ladki ko niche rakha tab tak Abhimanu ne g3 ko bhi mar diya aur gun leke g1 ke per me ek goli mari.G1 per pakad kar dard se karahne laga.

Tab tak waha Sushmita uske bada beta aur uske admi bhi pahuch gye aur wha ka haal dekh ke chauk gye.
Saab bache ro rhe the aur Abhimanu ke hath me gun thi aur sare gunde nicche pade hue the.
Wo log turant wha pahuch ke saab bacho ko sant kara te h aur uss nilli ankho walo bacchi ko bhi utha te h.uske bhi sar par halki chot ayi thi jesse dekh ke Abhimanu ke ankh se ashu tapak pade.
Sushmita ne aage badhkar Abhimanu ke hath se gun li aur uske chehre se khoon pocha.
Wo nilli ankho wali bacchi ne ek baar Abhimanu ki taraf dekha jiske mathe pe cut ka nisan tha.

Abhi:sorry ma
Sushmita:yha kya hua tha mujhe saab batao
phir abhimanu unhe saari baat btata jisse sunke saab chauk jate h.
Sab sunke Sushmita Abhimanu ko pyaar se gale lagati h aur Dharam se kehti dekh aaj eski wajah se mere bache sahi salmat h.

Phir wo uthti h aur g1 jo behosh tha usse hosh me lane ko bolti h.
aur apne sare bacho ko ghar bhejwa deti h sivay Abhimanu ke.

Dharam:Ma ye hamla kisne karwaya hoga

Sushmita:Jisne bhi karwaya wo yha ka nhi h hamne pehle hi sabko maar diya h lekin ham ise najarandaz nahi kar sakte.

Dharam:hmm.kyu na ham bacho ko bahar padhne bhej de Rajeev ke pas(Sushmita ka sabse chota beta jo America me apna business karta h) esse wo surakshit bhi rahenge aur jab yha sab thik ho jaega to ham unhe wapas bula lenge

Sushmita:Thik h tum unke jaane ki tayari kro.

Dharam waha se jake kisse se baat karne lagta h phone par.

Sushmita:Abhimanu tum thik ho na.
Abhi:ha maa
Sushmita:kya tum kuch kehna chahte ho.
Abhi(hich kicha ke) :Ma mae fighting sikhna chahta hu taki me apki aur apni raksha kar saku
Sushmita:lekin tum abhi bache ho Abhimanu
Abhi:please maa?(masumiyat se dekhte hue)
Sushmita:thik h
Abhi:thanku maa

Samay beet raha tha Sushmita ne apne sare pote potiyo ko apne chote bete Rajesh ke pas bhej diya America. Edhar Abhimanu ne training start kar di thi roj usse kahi na kahi chot lagi hoti training ki wajah se par uske andar ek aag thi ki use bahut kuch karna h.

Abb story time lap lene wali h agle update me to tyaar rahiye aur comment kijye story kesi lagi usme character introduction bhi de dunga.

 

[DEMITRI]

Nice update brother....
Ab dekhna yeh Aisa kya raaz hai ziske karan dono dost mare gaye...

Thanks brother esse hi support karte rehna?

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

UPDATE 4

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Sushmita us bache ko lekar bahar nikal jaati h aur apne bete se baat karne ke liye ruk jaati h. Uske admi thoda dur ja ke pehra dene lagte h.

Dharam:Ye bacha kon hai ma jisse bachane ke liye aap yha aai.

Sushmita:Ye Vijay Thakur ka pota hai.

Dharam:Ma aap hamare dushman ke bete ko bachane ke liye yha aai.

Sushmita: dushman nhi tumhara bhai tha wo.

Dharam:Kesa bhai jisse apne bete ki tarah mana usi ne apko dhokha diya.

Sushmita:Ho sakta h uski koi majburi hogi. Aur tumhare pita ne Vijay bhaisahab ko vada kiya thi ki unke pote ko chod denge.

Dharam:Unka vaada ise chodne ka tha lekin rakhne ka nhi kal ko agar ye hamare khilaf hogya to.

Sushmita:Tum uski chinta mat kro.
Dharam:Thik h lekin ye ek naukar ki tarah rahe ga.

Sushmita kuch kehnaa chah rhi thi lekin uske muh se kuch sabd nhi nikal paye.
Kuch der waha shanti chae rhi phir Sushmita ne bola.

Sushmita:Thik h lekin ye baat sirf mere aur tumhare bich rehni chahie ki ye Vijay Thakur ka pota h.

Dharam:hmmm

Aur fir wo log waha se nikal jaate h aur apne haveli pahuch jaate h.
Sushmita us bache ko sath lekar apne room me chali jaati h.

Wo bacha abhi bhi dara hua tha bahut hi masoom ankho me halka pani aur use koi apna nhi dikh rha tha.

Sushmita us ladke ko apne seene se lagar saant karti hai aur vishwaas dilati h ki ab saab theek h. Wo ladka bhi kuch der me shaant ho jaata h.

Sushmita : chalo ab apna naam to batao.

Ladka:Ji mera naam Abhimanu h

Sushmita:Bahut pyara naam h

Abhi:Mere mummy papa kaha h mujhe mummy ke pas jaana h.

Sushmita kuch der shaant rehti phir pyaar se use samjhati h.

Sushmita:Abhimanu tumhare mummy papa bhagwan ke pas h wo tumko upar se dekh rhe h tum ese roge to wo wapas nhi aaenge tumhe strong banna hoga. Chalo ab rona band karo.
Uske ashu saaf kar deti h.
Abhi:kya me apko ma bula saktu mujhe aap mere ma jaese lagte ho.

Sushmita:Thik h lekin sirf ghar me. Ok

Abhi:Thik h ma

Sushmita ko ekdam se samaar yaad aaja ta hai

Sushmita:Chalo pehle kuch kha lo phir tumhe tumhare room me chod deti hu.

Abhi: kya me apke sath nhi reh sakta

Sushmita:koi tumhe mere sath dekhega to shak ho jae ga aur tumhe marne ki kosis krega

Abhi:Thik h to mae kha rahunga

Sushmita:tum yha servant quarter me rahoge
Abhi:thik h

Uske baad wo use servant quarter lejati h aur usse ek admi aur aurat se milwati aur unhe bolti h ki iska dhyaan rakhna.

Edhar dur Bumbai sehar ki ek sunsan farmhouse par ek admi saraab pi rha tha aur uske aas pas teen char ladkiya nangi ghum rahi thi

Admi:Boss ***** ka phone aya tha kaam hogya Vijay Thakur aur Samseer singh dono mar gye.

Boss:ye to bahut achhi khabar tune sunayi h mantus maan khus hogya h ja enme se ek ladki le ja

Admi:Boss lekin ek problem hogyi Samseer singh ka pariwar bach gya aur Ab Rampur ki kmaan Sushmita singh ne sambhaal li h

Boss???:bosdike maene saaf saaf kha tha koi nhi bachna chahie aur Sushmita to Samseer se bhi jada chalak h uske rehte ham kabhi apna dhanda wha nhi kar sakte

Mantu:Boss aap bolo to abhi use uda du

Boss:nhi ab ham isse satranj ki tarah khelenge bahut mja aaega wese bhi hmare pas Vibhisan to he hi hahaha...

Wahi haveli me Dharam kisi se phone pe baat kar rha hota h ki tabhi Sidhi (Dharam ki wife) aaja ti h jise dekh wo phone kaat deta h.

Sidhi: Kisse baat kar rhe the aap

Dharam:Wo important kaam tha.
wo chodo ye batao sab so gye.

Sidhi:ha kyu
Dharam turant usko pakad leta h aur wildly kiss karne lagta. Sidhi bhi uska sath dene lagti h dharam ek hath se uski 32 ki chuchi dabane lagta aur uske 38 ke gaand ko bhi dusre hath se dabata h saree ke upar se.

Sidhi garam hone lagti h aur param ka lund pent ke upar se hi sehlane lagti h. Param bhi uski chuchi masle ja rha tha.
Sidhi:ahhh..hmm aur jor se dabaiye ahh.... bahut paresan karte h oh.. Ah....Hmm..ahh..
Dharam ab saree ka pallu hata deta h aur uske samne sidhi ke chuche blouse me kase dikhai dete h. Wo blouse ko faad deta h aur uski chuchi ko ajaad kar deta h. Aur uske chuchi muh me le leta h.
Sidhi:ahh..hmm. ohh esse hi chuso aah... Laal kardo inhe ahh... Mere nipple dekho na edkam kade hogae h ahh....
Dharam:kya chuche h tumhare ahh...
Thodi der chuchi chusne ke baad wo sidhi ko ghodi bna ta h aur uski peticot nikal deta h aur panty bhi phaad deta h.
Sidhi:ahh ...daldo andar kyu tarpa rhe ho
Dharam apna 5 inch lund uski chut me dal deta h aur chodne lagta h
Dharam:le ahhh..... Kya chut h teri ahh...
Sidhi:ahh..chodo mujhe ahhh... Oh.. Ah aur jor se chodo ahh..
Dharam peche se uski chuchi pakad leta aur buri tarah chodne lagta h. Pure kamre me thap..thap ki awaje gunj rhe thi.das minute bad hi dono jhad jaate aur nange hi so jate h.

Abhimanu ab dhere dhere akele rehne ki aadat dal rha tha subah school jata Sushmita ka ashirvad leke phir wapas aake kuch kuch kam karta jo wha ke servants jisko Sushmita ne Abhimanu ka dyaan rakhne ke liye kja tha wo chalaki se use kaam karwate the.

Abhimanu ye saab Sushmita ko nhi btata tha .Aksar school me wo bade bacho se maar khata lekin kuch btata nhi tha. Wo padne me acha tha har chij ache se samjh jata ye god gifted tha. Padhai me apni hi theory lagata. Uski har raat Sushmita ko apni dincharya bta ke khatam hoti aur fir wo wapas apne room me ake so jata h.

Ek din Sushmita ke pote potiya bahar jane ki zidd karne lagi aur har kar Sushmita ne allowed kar diya aur sath hi Abhimanu ko bhi bhej diya kuch guards ke sath.

Wo log ek park me khel rhe the aur Abhimanu durse hi dekh rha tha,wi bas ek ladki ko khelte hue dekh rha tha jiski ankhe nilli thi. Uska dil joro se dhadak rha tha .
tabhi achanak wha kuch 2-3 gunde aagae aur chupke se us nili ankho wali ladki pe muh dabake le jane lage .Baki bacche dar gae aur rone lage .Abhimanu daud kar aaya aur ek aadmi ke piche se jhapat pada aur use gun chinne ki kosish karne laga.

lekin wo sambhal chuka tha usne turant apni gun se Abhimanu ke sar pe mara aur uske sar pe ek cut ban gya. Abhimanu ko bahut dard hua lekin usne himat karke us admi ke mainpoint pe mara aur usse uski gun chin li.ye sab bahut jaldi me hua un gundo ko sambhalne ka mauka hi nhi mila.Abhimanu ne wo gun us gunde pe tan di jo ladki ko uthaya hua tha. Uske haath kaap rhe the aur wo gun bhi bari thi loaded bhi.

G1:Ae bache gun mujhe dede ye bacho ki khelne wali nhi h

Abhimanu(kapte hue) :pehle tum use choro warna me chala dunga
G1 G2 se: Abe dekh kya rha h gun le le use
G2 jese hi aage badha Abhimanu ne gun chala di aur g2 ka bheja me lagi aur wo mar gya.
G1:Abe bhenchod...
usne jaldi se ladki ko niche rakha tab tak Abhimanu ne g3 ko bhi mar diya aur gun leke g1 ke per me ek goli mari.G1 per pakad kar dard se karahne laga.

Tab tak waha Sushmita uske bada beta aur uske admi bhi pahuch gye aur wha ka haal dekh ke chauk gye.
Saab bache ro rhe the aur Abhimanu ke hath me gun thi aur sare gunde nicche pade hue the.
Wo log turant wha pahuch ke saab bacho ko sant kara te h aur uss nilli ankho walo bacchi ko bhi utha te h.uske bhi sar par halki chot ayi thi jesse dekh ke Abhimanu ke ankh se ashu tapak pade.
Sushmita ne aage badhkar Abhimanu ke hath se gun li aur uske chehre se khoon pocha.
Wo nilli ankho wali bacchi ne ek baar Abhimanu ki taraf dekha jiske mathe pe cut ka nisan tha.

Abhi:sorry ma
Sushmita:yha kya hua tha mujhe saab batao
phir abhimanu unhe saari baat btata jisse sunke saab chauk jate h.
Sab sunke Sushmita Abhimanu ko pyaar se gale lagati h aur Dharam se kehti hekh aaj eski wajah se mere bache sahi salmat h.

Phir wo uthti h aur g1 jo behosh tha usse hosh me lane ko bolti h.
aur apne sare bacho ko ghar bhejwa deti h sivay Abhimanu ke.

Dharam:Ma ye hamla kisne karwaya hoga

Sushmita:Jisne bhi karwaya wo yha ka nhi h hamne pehle hi sabko maar diya h lekin ham ise najarandaz nahi kar sakte.

Dharam:hmm.kyu na ham bacho ko bahar padhne bhej de Rajeev ke pas(Sushmita ka sabse chota beta) esse wo surakshit bhi rahenge aur jab yha sab thik ho jaega to ham unhe wapas bula lenge

Sushmita:Thik h tum unke jaane ki tayari kro.

Dharam waha se jake kisse se baat karne lagta h phone par.

Sushmita:Abhimanu tum thik ho na.
Abhi:ha maa
Sushmita:kya tum kuch kehna chahte ho.
Abhi(hich kicha ke) :Ma mae fighting sikhna chahta hu taki me apki aur apni raksha kar saku
Sushmita:lekin tum abhi bache ho Abhimanu
Abhi:please maa(masumiyat se dekhte hue)
Sushmita:thik h
Abhi:thanku maa

Samay beet raha tha Sushmita ne apne sare pote potiyo ko apne chote bete Rajesh ke pas bhej diya America. Edhar Abhimanu ne training start kar di thi roj usse kahi na kahi chot lagi hoti training ki wajah se par uske andar ek aag thi ki use bahut kuch karna h.

Abb story time lap lene wali h agle update me to tyaar rahiye aur comment kijye story kesi lagi usme character introduction bhi de dunga.

Excellent update..bhai..

 

[Badshah Khan]

Bro for starting new thread
Concept was really intresting
Do dosto ko kisi aur ne hi katpotlio ki tarah istemal kiya
Dekhte hai samseer ne marne se pehle sushmita ko kya bataya
Abhinanyu kis tarah se tayyar hota hai apni training ke baad
Aur wo vibhishan kon hai
Keep writing
Keep posting
Stay SAFE
Stay HEALTHY

 

[AK 24]

UPDATE 4

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Sushmita us bache ko lekar bahar nikal jaati h aur apne bete se baat karne ke liye ruk jaati h. Uske admi thoda dur ja ke pehra dene lagte h.

Dharam:Ye bacha kon hai ma jisse bachane ke liye aap yha aai.

Sushmita:Ye Vijay Thakur ka pota hai.

Dharam:Ma aap hamare dushman ke bete ko bachane ke liye yha aai.

Sushmita: dushman nhi tumhara bhai tha wo.

Dharam:Kesa bhai jisse apne bete ki tarah mana usi ne apko dhokha diya.

Sushmita:Ho sakta h uski koi majburi hogi. Aur tumhare pita ne Vijay bhaisahab ko vada kiya thi ki unke pote ko chod denge.

Dharam:Unka vaada ise chodne ka tha lekin rakhne ka nhi kal ko agar ye hamare khilaf hogya to.

Sushmita:Tum uski chinta mat kro.
Dharam:Thik h lekin ye ek naukar ki tarah rahe ga.

Sushmita kuch kehnaa chah rhi thi lekin uske muh se kuch sabd nhi nikal paye.
Kuch der waha shanti chae rhi phir Sushmita ne bola.

Sushmita:Thik h lekin ye baat sirf mere aur tumhare bich rehni chahie ki ye Vijay Thakur ka pota h.

Dharam:hmmm

Aur fir wo log waha se nikal jaate h aur apne haveli pahuch jaate h.
Sushmita us bache ko sath lekar apne room me chali jaati h.

Wo bacha abhi bhi dara hua tha bahut hi masoom ankho me halka pani aur use koi apna nhi dikh rha tha.

Sushmita us ladke ko apne seene se lagar saant karti hai aur vishwaas dilati h ki ab saab theek h. Wo ladka bhi kuch der me shaant ho jaata h.

Sushmita : chalo ab apna naam to batao.

Ladka:Ji mera naam Abhimanu h

Sushmita:Bahut pyara naam h

Abhi:Mere mummy papa kaha h mujhe mummy ke pas jaana h.

Sushmita kuch der shaant rehti phir pyaar se use samjhati h.

Sushmita:Abhimanu tumhare mummy papa bhagwan ke pas h wo tumko upar se dekh rhe h tum ese roge to wo wapas nhi aaenge tumhe strong banna hoga. Chalo ab rona band karo.
Uske ashu saaf kar deti h.
Abhi:kya me apko ma bula saktu mujhe aap mere ma jaese lagte ho.

Sushmita:Thik h lekin sirf ghar me. Ok

Abhi:Thik h ma

Sushmita ko ekdam se samaar yaad aaja ta hai

Sushmita:Chalo pehle kuch kha lo phir tumhe tumhare room me chod deti hu.

Abhi: kya me apke sath nhi reh sakta

Sushmita:koi tumhe mere sath dekhega to shak ho jae ga aur tumhe marne ki kosis krega

Abhi:Thik h to mae kha rahunga

Sushmita:tum yha servant quarter me rahoge
Abhi:thik h

Uske baad wo use servant quarter lejati h aur usse ek admi aur aurat se milwati aur unhe bolti h ki iska dhyaan rakhna.

Edhar dur Bumbai sehar ki ek sunsan farmhouse par ek admi saraab pi rha tha aur uske aas pas teen char ladkiya nangi ghum rahi thi

Admi:Boss ***** ka phone aya tha kaam hogya Vijay Thakur aur Samseer singh dono mar gye.

Boss:ye to bahut achhi khabar tune sunayi h mantus maan khus hogya h ja enme se ek ladki le ja

Admi:Boss lekin ek problem hogyi Samseer singh ka pariwar bach gya aur Ab Rampur ki kmaan Sushmita singh ne sambhaal li h

Boss???:bosdike maene saaf saaf kha tha koi nhi bachna chahie aur Sushmita to Samseer se bhi jada chalak h uske rehte ham kabhi apna dhanda wha nhi kar sakte

Mantu:Boss aap bolo to abhi use uda du

Boss:nhi ab ham isse satranj ki tarah khelenge bahut mja aaega wese bhi hmare pas Vibhisan to he hi hahaha...

Wahi haveli me Dharam kisi se phone pe baat kar rha hota h ki tabhi Sidhi (Dharam ki wife) aaja ti h jise dekh wo phone kaat deta h.

Sidhi: Kisse baat kar rhe the aap

Dharam:Wo important kaam tha.
wo chodo ye batao sab so gye.

Sidhi:ha kyu
Dharam turant usko pakad leta h aur wildly kiss karne lagta. Sidhi bhi uska sath dene lagti h dharam ek hath se uski 32 ki chuchi dabane lagta aur uske 38 ke gaand ko bhi dusre hath se dabata h saree ke upar se.

Sidhi garam hone lagti h aur param ka lund pent ke upar se hi sehlane lagti h. Param bhi uski chuchi masle ja rha tha.
Sidhi:ahhh..hmm aur jor se dabaiye ahh.... bahut paresan karte h oh.. Ah....Hmm..ahh..
Dharam ab saree ka pallu hata deta h aur uske samne sidhi ke chuche blouse me kase dikhai dete h. Wo blouse ko faad deta h aur uski chuchi ko ajaad kar deta h. Aur uske chuchi muh me le leta h.
Sidhi:ahh..hmm. ohh esse hi chuso aah... Laal kardo inhe ahh... Mere nipple dekho na edkam kade hogae h ahh....
Dharam:kya chuche h tumhare ahh...
Thodi der chuchi chusne ke baad wo sidhi ko ghodi bna ta h aur uski peticot nikal deta h aur panty bhi phaad deta h.
Sidhi:ahh ...daldo andar kyu tarpa rhe ho
Dharam apna 5 inch lund uski chut me dal deta h aur chodne lagta h
Dharam:le ahhh..... Kya chut h teri ahh...
Sidhi:ahh..chodo mujhe ahhh... Oh.. Ah aur jor se chodo ahh..
Dharam peche se uski chuchi pakad leta aur buri tarah chodne lagta h. Pure kamre me thap..thap ki awaje gunj rhe thi.das minute bad hi dono jhad jaate aur nange hi so jate h.

Abhimanu ab dhere dhere akele rehne ki aadat dal rha tha subah school jata Sushmita ka ashirvad leke phir wapas aake kuch kuch kam karta jo wha ke servants jisko Sushmita ne Abhimanu ka dyaan rakhne ke liye kja tha wo chalaki se use kaam karwate the.

Abhimanu ye saab Sushmita ko nhi btata tha .Aksar school me wo bade bacho se maar khata lekin kuch btata nhi tha. Wo padne me acha tha har chij ache se samjh jata ye god gifted tha. Padhai me apni hi theory lagata. Uski har raat Sushmita ko apni dincharya bta ke khatam hoti aur fir wo wapas apne room me ake so jata h.

Ek din Sushmita ke pote potiya bahar jane ki zidd karne lagi aur har kar Sushmita ne allowed kar diya aur sath hi Abhimanu ko bhi bhej diya kuch guards ke sath.

Wo log ek park me khel rhe the aur Abhimanu durse hi dekh rha tha,wi bas ek ladki ko khelte hue dekh rha tha jiski ankhe nilli thi. Uska dil joro se dhadak rha tha .
tabhi achanak wha kuch 2-3 gunde aagae aur chupke se us nili ankho wali ladki pe muh dabake le jane lage .Baki bacche dar gae aur rone lage .Abhimanu daud kar aaya aur ek aadmi ke piche se jhapat pada aur use gun chinne ki kosish karne laga.

lekin wo sambhal chuka tha usne turant apni gun se Abhimanu ke sar pe mara aur uske sar pe ek cut ban gya. Abhimanu ko bahut dard hua lekin usne himat karke us admi ke mainpoint pe mara aur usse uski gun chin li.ye sab bahut jaldi me hua un gundo ko sambhalne ka mauka hi nhi mila.Abhimanu ne wo gun us gunde pe tan di jo ladki ko uthaya hua tha. Uske haath kaap rhe the aur wo gun bhi bari thi loaded bhi.

G1:Ae bache gun mujhe dede ye bacho ki khelne wali nhi h

Abhimanu(kapte hue) :pehle tum use choro warna me chala dunga
G1 G2 se: Abe dekh kya rha h gun le le use
G2 jese hi aage badha Abhimanu ne gun chala di aur g2 ka bheja me lagi aur wo mar gya.
G1:Abe bhenchod...
usne jaldi se ladki ko niche rakha tab tak Abhimanu ne g3 ko bhi mar diya aur gun leke g1 ke per me ek goli mari.G1 per pakad kar dard se karahne laga.

Tab tak waha Sushmita uske bada beta aur uske admi bhi pahuch gye aur wha ka haal dekh ke chauk gye.
Saab bache ro rhe the aur Abhimanu ke hath me gun thi aur sare gunde nicche pade hue the.
Wo log turant wha pahuch ke saab bacho ko sant kara te h aur uss nilli ankho walo bacchi ko bhi utha te h.uske bhi sar par halki chot ayi thi jesse dekh ke Abhimanu ke ankh se ashu tapak pade.
Sushmita ne aage badhkar Abhimanu ke hath se gun li aur uske chehre se khoon pocha.
Wo nilli ankho wali bacchi ne ek baar Abhimanu ki taraf dekha jiske mathe pe cut ka nisan tha.

Abhi:sorry ma
Sushmita:yha kya hua tha mujhe saab batao
phir abhimanu unhe saari baat btata jisse sunke saab chauk jate h.
Sab sunke Sushmita Abhimanu ko pyaar se gale lagati h aur Dharam se kehti hekh aaj eski wajah se mere bache sahi salmat h.

Phir wo uthti h aur g1 jo behosh tha usse hosh me lane ko bolti h.
aur apne sare bacho ko ghar bhejwa deti h sivay Abhimanu ke.

Dharam:Ma ye hamla kisne karwaya hoga

Sushmita:Jisne bhi karwaya wo yha ka nhi h hamne pehle hi sabko maar diya h lekin ham ise najarandaz nahi kar sakte.

Dharam:hmm.kyu na ham bacho ko bahar padhne bhej de Rajeev ke pas(Sushmita ka sabse chota beta) esse wo surakshit bhi rahenge aur jab yha sab thik ho jaega to ham unhe wapas bula lenge

Sushmita:Thik h tum unke jaane ki tayari kro.

Dharam waha se jake kisse se baat karne lagta h phone par.

Sushmita:Abhimanu tum thik ho na.
Abhi:ha maa
Sushmita:kya tum kuch kehna chahte ho.
Abhi(hich kicha ke) :Ma mae fighting sikhna chahta hu taki me apki aur apni raksha kar saku
Sushmita:lekin tum abhi bache ho Abhimanu
Abhi:please maa(masumiyat se dekhte hue)
Sushmita:thik h
Abhi:thanku maa

Samay beet raha tha Sushmita ne apne sare pote potiyo ko apne chote bete Rajesh ke pas bhej diya America. Edhar Abhimanu ne training start kar di thi roj usse kahi na kahi chot lagi hoti training ki wajah se par uske andar ek aag thi ki use bahut kuch karna h.

Abb story time lap lene wali h agle update me to tyaar rahiye aur comment kijye story kesi lagi usme character introduction bhi de dunga.

AWESOME UPDATE BRO
I THINK JO SUSMITA KA BETA DHARAM HAI WO US BOSS SE MILA HUA HAI
AUR BLUE EYES WALI LADKI HEROINE LAG RAHI HAI.
JB ABHIMANYU KO PATA LAGEGA KI WO THAKUR HOTE HUYE BHI NAUKRO KI TARAH RAHA TO KYA KAREGA
KEEP WRITING BRO.
AGAIN SUPER UPDATE...

 

[DEMITRI]

Excellent update..bhai..

Thanks bro?

 

[DEMITRI]

Bro for starting new thread
Concept was really intresting
Do dosto ko kisi aur ne hi katpotlio ki tarah istemal kiya
Dekhte hai samseer ne marne se pehle sushmita ko kya bataya
Abhinanyu kis tarah se tayyar hota hai apni training ke baad
Aur wo vibhishan kon hai
Keep writing
Keep posting
Stay SAFE
Stay HEALTHY

AWESOME UPDATE BRO
I THINK JO SUSMITA KA BETA DHARAM HAI WO US BOSS SE MILA HUA HAI
AUR BLUE EYES WALI LADKI HEROINE LAG RAHI HAI.
JB ABHIMANYU KO PATA LAGEGA KI WO THAKUR HOTE HUYE BHI NAUKRO KI TARAH RAHA TO KYA KAREGA
KEEP WRITING BRO.
AGAIN SUPER UPDATE...

Thanks bhailog accha laga jankar ki aap story pasand aa rhi h aur mainpoint note kar rhe h. Apke doubts bhi dhere dhere update ke sath clear kar Sunta ??