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RStar99

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Ye to lala ki bahu ko pta hi liya kal din me pelne ke liye sandar update bhai jabarjast superb
Are Ye kya jhol hai haveli use light on off karke bulati hai or Aaj use ek baba mila jo use haveli ke bare me kahaniyo ke madhyam se btane vala hai ek hi sart pr ki vo ek baar suru hone ke baad vapas nhi ja sakta... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
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Kahi ye Pujari mayavi to nhi Pujari Ji ne margdarsan kr diya hai ab dekhna yah hai ki apna hero hero rhega ya villan...superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Wah kya kahani thi balak to apni ma baba ki garibi dur karne ke liye apni bali dene ke liye taiyar hua tha rishi ke vachan ka kya jo unhone malayketu se liya tha vo to usi wakt tut jayega or ho sakta hai vo apni putri bhi vapas le le... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Super excited bhai jabarjast sandar to Shiva ne pahla jvab de diya hai or ek darvaja bhi khul gya hai or Uski kaam shakti bhi jagrat ho chuki hai...
Sandar or Jabardast lga aapka yah update vo Kala or safed gola Shiva me kya kya badlav karta hai dekhte hai or vo kali Jyoti kiski hai or kaha gyi dilhi me us mayavi Jangal me to nhi gyi vo ab Shiva aa rha hai dekhte hai uski bahan switi ko Kon paresan karta hai...
Wao amazing update bhai sandar jabarjast to ek sath kai logo ko chetavni mili pr Unhone Uspr dhyan nhi diya or aage badhte rhe pr aage rasta hi band tha or usi Samay vo black and white boll aakr Shiva ko lgi or sath me us Budhi aurat ka totka bhi Jisse Shiva to chidha hi sath me Delhi ke ek Ghar me piano bjati ladki ki bhi dard se chikh nikal gyi or Vo behosh ho gyi... Kafi sare rahasyo se bhara update tha yah akhir Kon hai vo jungle vali aurat or kyo kr rhi hai Vo aisa akhir kya dushmani hai uski Shiva or uske papa se superb

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RStar99

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update no. 11
Kahani ab tak:-

kamera ke samne ek badi si kanchh ke khidaki lagi hui thi, jisse koi bhi us kamre se bahari sunadrta ko dekhakar mantr mugdh ho jata………….us ladki ke chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi jaise uaski koi mangi hui wish puri hone wali ho…………….lekin tabhi uske hriday me atyadhik dard hone laga aur vah jor se chikh uthi n…...hi rudraravi…… aur vah vah neeche dhadam se gir ke behosh ho gai…………
(jab vah ladki ke sine me dard utha usi samay shiva ka takkar us aurat ke bheje hue kaali dhuaa aur us haveli ke dhue se huaa tha)

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Abb age:-

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Location:- himachal pradesh ke jilla shimala ke ratanganj gav ke ek purani kothi keshari bhavan me jo aaj bhi bade -2 mahlo ko apne aage maat deta hai:-

Ek kamre me ek mahila sayad bahut dino se koma me thi jor se chikhate hue uthati hai…..

Ru……Ru….draravi………………..

Phir achanak behosh ho jati hai……….

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Location:- jaha mai (shiva) tha

jab vah dhue ka gola mujhase takraya to mujhe ek tej jhataka laga aur mai ma……….chilate hue dur ja gira jaha mai ek ped se takra gya aur jab mai khada hone ki koshis ki to khada ho kar kuchh hi dur gya tha ki mai dhadam se jameen par gir gya aur meri aakhe dhire dhire band hoti chali gayi…...

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Location:-jaha ma baba aur mamta didi the:-

jangal me ma papa mamata didi mujhe dundhane lage………… ma to mujhe naa pakar rone lagi aur saara dos papa par dalne lagi ki unke hi kahne par jangal ke raste se aaye the….

ma rote hue:- suresh mai kuchh nahi janti kahi se bhi mera beta lakar dijiye…………………

mamata didi- shant ho jaiye chachi use kuchh nahi hoga shayad vah jo roshani faili thi to use me4bhatkakar jangal me kahi chala gaya hoga………..

halanki mamata didi bhi ghabra rahi thi vah man hi man bhagwan se prarthana kar rahi thi ki mai jaha bhi rahu surakshit raahu jabki mamata didi ne mujh se kabhi pyar se baat nahi ki kyoki bachapan me mujhase ek galati anjane me ho gayi tab se lekin vah mujhse sabse adhik pyar karti thi…………….

aaj unka bhi dill bahut joro se dhadak raha tha ki kahin mujhe kuchh na ho jaye…….

yaha par sabb log pareshan the vahi jangal me usi mandir me god aur martand rishi aapas me baate kar rahe the………

martand rishi:- god ye to anarth ho gaya………


God- ha rishi var jo hona nahi chahiye vahi ho gaya mujhe iska pata pehle se hi pata tha lekin mai prakritik ke karyo me hastakshep nahi karunga aur na hi aap karne ko cheshtha kare………………

hoga vahi jo ********chahenge………

rishi - parantu god shiva ki atma to subah hote hi uski sharir chod degi aur vah shaitani aatma uske sharir par kabja kar kar legi jo atadhik vinashkari sidh ho sakta hai ………


God- chintit na hoiye rishivar jo hota hai vah lok kalyan ke liye hi hota hai ………. burai chahe jitna bhi apna bistar kar le par ant me jeet sachchai ki hi hoti hai aab aap jaiye aur shiva ke parivar walo ko sambhaliye aur ha jitani jaldi ho sake aap devil ki badi rani vidhi ko unka karm ka samran dilaiye……
dusari baat yah hai ki aab se ham aur aap is jangal me nahi milenge……..

rishi - god mujhe aapaki margdarshan ki ati avsyakta padegi …..


God - aapke mardarshan ke liye aapke guru प्रचंडक rishi ji hai jo aap ko aage ki raah dikhayenge……...philhal प्रचंडक rishi himalaya par kathor tapasya kar rahe hai uchit samay aane par vah aap se milne swayam aayenge……….l.

jo aagya bhagwan………

kalyan ho……….

aur god antardhyan ho gaye.

Martand rishi chal diye jidhar meri ma baba the………

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Location :- jha mai tha:-
Time:- savera abhi abhi apana pankh faila rahi thi………

jab meri aakh khuli to subahj ho gayi thi……..mere akho ke samane neela aasaman tha, muhe aisa lag raha tha jaise mai kuchh ghanto se yaha behosh pada hua tha……

jab mai utha to dekha mere samane nadi bas rahi thi aur mere charo or keval hare bhare ped paudhe hi dikhay de rahe the……...tabhi mujhe ki mai to ma baba aur did ke sath delhi ja raha tha …….aur jangal wala raste ke aadhe me se hi gayab ho gaya tha aur kuchh der baad vah tej roshni……….uske aage mujhe kuchh yaad nahi aaraha tha……….tabhi meri najar niche ki or gayi mai ek dam se uchhal pada kyoki jaha mai pahle behosh pada tha vaha mere jaise hi ek aadami leta huaa hai ………..tab mujhe reyakais huaa ki mera mritu ho chuki hai mai mar chuka hu…………...mai apana deh tyag chuka hu mere sharir se meri aatma bahar nikal chuki hai………..mera to diumag hi ghum gya ki ye sab kya huaa……..kaise huaa...mere man me savalo ka jvala uathane laga ………...mai jab jamin par lete hue sharir ke pass jakar use chhune ki koshis ki to mai chhu hi nmahi pa raha tha..mera haath sharir ke aar paar ho ja raha tha…….
mai kisi bhi vastu ko touch hi nahi kar pa raha tha …..aur mai yahi soch raha tha ki mai na jaane kis musibat me fas gya hu……….aur kaise fasa ye to mujhe bilkul nahi p[ata ………..

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dusari taraf…….

ma- na jane mera bacha kaha gayab ho gaya kis haal me hoga…….
mamata didi- use kuchh nahi hoga chchi………..aap shant ho jaiye dekhna vah aata hi hoga mai janti hu vo ham sab se dur nahi rah sakta hai………….

sahi kaha putri vah tum sab se dur nahi rah sakta hai…………..

sabhi9 log pichhe mud kar dekhate hai to ek sadhu piche khada hai jisame atadhik tej hai chehre par chamak aisa lag raha tha ki vah koi mahan punyatma hai………

papa- hath jodte hue……...aap kaun hai…….

mai mahadev ka ek chhota sa tuchh bhakt hu aur unhi ke aadesh par yaha aaya hu…….ye batane ke liye ki aap sabhi chinta na kare aapke bete ko kuch nahi hoga …….. aap nishchint hokar apne ghar jaye…………...rishi ne bola

kaise chale jaye ghar bina apane bachhe ko liye mai ghar kya ann ka ek dana bhi muh me nahi lungi………… suresh chahe jo bhi karo mujhe mera beta chha hiye…...ma ne kaha

papa- sudha ha rishivar ham aapne bachhe ke bina yaha se nahi jayenge………..

rishi- kya aap bhul gaye jabb aaplog shiva ko mile the to un tapasvi ne kya kaha tha……….tumhe to sab yaad hi hoga……

Mamata didi… sochane lagi ki baat kya hai jo hamme nahi pata…...chacha chachi ne humse kya chhupaya hai……...

ma baba- ko yaad aane lagta hai ki………….

flashback first ( 1):-
aaj se 15 saal pahle:-

shudha aur suresh aur sath me Sweety aur shiva ham dono bhi the ( ) himachal pradesh ke mandiro par ja ja kar darshan kar rahe the bas ek hi mandir rah gaya tha vah tha himachal pradesh ke jangal ke beech ek mandir tha jisaka naam ********* devi mandir tha



jab sudha( maa), suresh (pap), aur Sweety didi aur shiva saath me ********** mandir chal dete hai……...shiva ko papa ne god me utha rakha tha………

Sweety-papa betu ko mujhako do na mai bete ko apni god me lekar chalti hu………..vo mera betu hai…………

Ma- ha….ha...ham jante hai vo tera hi betu hai hamara to vah beta hai ye baat ham jante hai…...aur rahi baat shiva ko tere god me lene ki to tu aabhi chhoti hai apane betu ko giraana chahti ho kya……..

Sweety-jaldi se…..nahi….nahi mai betu ko kaise neeche giraungi…………

Maa- to use god me kyo lena chahti hai tu jannati hai ki tu abhi betu ko god me lekar nahi chal sakti…….uske liye bada hona padega………

Masumiyat se……..kitana mammi…….

Tere papa jitane….ma ne kaha

Papa jitane ……. Phir kuch sochte hue……...matlab aap abhi choti ho…...mujhase badi ho to……...Sweety ne bholepan se puchh

Maa- haste hue………. chal hame jaldi mandir pahuchana hai aaj koi auto wale bhi nahi dikhai de rahe hai raat hone wali hai……..aur mandir bhi abhi dur hai…..ham hotel bhi nahi ja sakte hai kyon ki mandir yahan se bahut pass padega……...suresh mere to jee bahut ghabara raha hai……….

Papa-sudha aur kuchh dur chal lete hai abb ham pahuchane wale hai is jangal me rukana bhi to khatarnak hai…….

Sweety- papa mere betu so gaya kya..

Papa- ha beta tera betu aur hamara beta so gaya hai……….chalo jaldi jaldi chalo………

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Flashback me hi dusri taraf……….

Ek car teji se usi jangal ki taraf aa rahi thi us gadi me ek mahila aur ek aadmi the. Ko karib 30-32 saal ke honge……..usi car me ek bachh th jo behosh tha ki soya huaa tha ye mujhe nahi pata…………..

Aadmi- tumhe kya lagta hai ham jo kar rahe hai vah sahi hai……..

Aurat- kyo nahi sahi hai…..ha……..agar ye sahi nahi hai to kya vah sahi tha jo isane aur isaki ma ************* ne kya……….

Aadami- ********** tum samjh nahi rahi ho bhabhi ne jo bhi kya vah janbujhkar nahi kya vah to use hi bachane ke liye jaa rahi thi……

Aurat- dekho ji mai kuchh bhi nahi janti usake karan mera beta hame chod gaya abb uska beta nahi rahega ………..

Aadmi--dekho ********** ham phir se koshish karenge to hame phir se bachha ho sakte hai……….aur……...bhabhi ne apana operation kara liya hai hai unke vansh vridhi ke liye bas yahi ek hai aur ham aaj isako bhi unase chhin lege………..

Aurat-chin lege……..ha….to usane jo hamare bachhe ko chhin liya usaka kya ha………

Aadmi-unhone jaan bujh kar nahi kya hai *******.......tum samjh nahi rahi ho jis din tumhe sachai pata chalegi tum bahut pachhatane waali hi…………

Aurat--dekho ji…...mai kuchh nahi janti mai sirf itana jaanti hu ki usane mera beta mujhe chhina hai……..(aur aapke bhai ke karan meri bahan ki jindagi jo barbad ho gayi hai uska bhi badala hai ye chhodungi nahi tujhe ******* Thakur abhi to ye suruaat hai)
……...…..dant pisate hue……….. mai uska beta usage chhin lungi…..bas…...mujhe khun ke badale khun aur bete ke badale beta chahiye….aur kuchh nahi……..aur rahi beta paida karne ka to is saari sampati jo hai use sambhalne ke liye koi to chahiye……..aur dono jeth me se to ek aaj nirvansh ho jayega to unki bhi dhan daulat ko sambhalne ke kiye koi to chahiye……
Vah aadami kuchh nahi bolta hai….

Aurat- aur aap ne hse vada kiya tha ki mai jo bhi karungi aap bina koi saval puchhe karenge…….

Aadmi--rukhepan se halanki vah bhi apane bete ke liye dukhi tha par vah yah nahi karna chahta lekin vah apne patni se bahut pyar karta tha isliye vah uska sath de raha tha…….

Dono hidimba van pahuch gaye the…..aur car ko jangal ke anadar leliya the…………………

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Lib am

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update no. 11
Kahani ab tak:-

kamera ke samne ek badi si kanchh ke khidaki lagi hui thi, jisse koi bhi us kamre se bahari sunadrta ko dekhakar mantr mugdh ho jata………….us ladki ke chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi jaise uaski koi mangi hui wish puri hone wali ho…………….lekin tabhi uske hriday me atyadhik dard hone laga aur vah jor se chikh uthi n…...hi rudraravi…… aur vah vah neeche dhadam se gir ke behosh ho gai…………
(jab vah ladki ke sine me dard utha usi samay shiva ka takkar us aurat ke bheje hue kaali dhuaa aur us haveli ke dhue se huaa tha)

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Abb age:-

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Location:- himachal pradesh ke jilla shimala ke ratanganj gav ke ek purani kothi keshari bhavan me jo aaj bhi bade -2 mahlo ko apne aage maat deta hai:-

Ek kamre me ek mahila sayad bahut dino se koma me thi jor se chikhate hue uthati hai…..

Ru……Ru….draravi………………..

Phir achanak behosh ho jati hai……….

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Location:- jaha mai (shiva) tha

jab vah dhue ka gola mujhase takraya to mujhe ek tej jhataka laga aur mai ma……….chilate hue dur ja gira jaha mai ek ped se takra gya aur jab mai khada hone ki koshis ki to khada ho kar kuchh hi dur gya tha ki mai dhadam se jameen par gir gya aur meri aakhe dhire dhire band hoti chali gayi…...

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Location:-jaha ma baba aur mamta didi the:-

jangal me ma papa mamata didi mujhe dundhane lage………… ma to mujhe naa pakar rone lagi aur saara dos papa par dalne lagi ki unke hi kahne par jangal ke raste se aaye the….

ma rote hue:- suresh mai kuchh nahi janti kahi se bhi mera beta lakar dijiye…………………

mamata didi- shant ho jaiye chachi use kuchh nahi hoga shayad vah jo roshani faili thi to use me4bhatkakar jangal me kahi chala gaya hoga………..

halanki mamata didi bhi ghabra rahi thi vah man hi man bhagwan se prarthana kar rahi thi ki mai jaha bhi rahu surakshit raahu jabki mamata didi ne mujh se kabhi pyar se baat nahi ki kyoki bachapan me mujhase ek galati anjane me ho gayi tab se lekin vah mujhse sabse adhik pyar karti thi…………….

aaj unka bhi dill bahut joro se dhadak raha tha ki kahin mujhe kuchh na ho jaye…….

yaha par sabb log pareshan the vahi jangal me usi mandir me mahadev aur martand rishi aapas me baate kar rahe the………

martand rishi:- mahadev ye to anarth ho gaya………

mahadev- ha rishi var jo hona nahi chahiye vahi ho gaya mujhe iska pata pehle se hi pata tha lekin mai prakritik ke karyo me hastakshep nahi karunga aur na hi aap karne ko cheshtha kare………………

hoga vahi jo aadi shiv chahenge………

rishi - parantu mahadev shiva ki atma to subah hote hi uski sharir chod degi aur vah shaitani aatma uske sharir par kabja kar kar legi jo atadhik vinashkari sidh ho sakta hai ………

mahadev- chintit na hoiye rishivar jo hota hai vah lok kalyan ke liye hi hota hai ………. burai chahe jitna bhi apna bistar kar le par ant me jeet sachchai ki hi hoti hai aab aap jaiye aur shiva ke parivar walo ko sambhaliye aur ha jitani jaldi ho sake aap devil ki badi rani vidhi ko unka karm ka samran dilaiye……
dusari baat yah hai ki aab se ham aur aap is jangal me nahi milenge……..

rishi - mahadev mujhe aapaki margdarshan ki ati avsyakta padegi …..

mahadev - aapke mardarshan ke liye aapke guru vishwamitra ji hai jo aap ko aage ki raah dikhayenge……...philhal viswamitra himalaya par kathor tapasya kar rahe hai uchit samay aane par vah aap se milne swayam aayenge……….l.

jo aagya mahadev………

kalyan ho……….

aur mahadev antardhyan ho gaye.

Martand rishi chal diye jidhar meri ma baba the………

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Location :- jha mai tha:-
Time:- savera abhi abhi apana pankh faila rahi thi………

jab meri aakh khuli to subahj ho gayi thi……..mere akho ke samane neela aasaman tha, muhe aisa lag raha tha jaise mai kuchh ghanto se yaha behosh pada hua tha……

jab mai utha to dekha mere samane nadi bas rahi thi aur mere charo or keval hare bhare ped paudhe hi dikhay de rahe the……...tabhi mujhe ki mai to ma baba aur did ke sath delhi ja raha tha …….aur jangal wala raste ke aadhe me se hi gayab ho gaya tha aur kuchh der baad vah tej roshni……….uske aage mujhe kuchh yaad nahi aaraha tha……….tabhi meri najar niche ki or gayi mai ek dam se uchhal pada kyoki jaha mai pahle behosh pada tha vaha mere jaise hi ek aadami leta huaa hai ………..tab mujhe reyakais huaa ki mera mritu ho chuki hai mai mar chuka hu…………...mai apana deh tyag chuka hu mere sharir se meri aatma bahar nikal chuki hai………..mera to diumag hi ghum gya ki ye sab kya huaa……..kaise huaa...mere man me savalo ka jvala uathane laga ………...mai jab jamin par lete hue sharir ke pass jakar use chhune ki koshis ki to mai chhu hi nmahi pa raha tha..mera haath sharir ke aar paar ho ja raha tha…….
mai kisi bhi vastu ko touch hi nahi kar pa raha tha …..aur mai yahi soch raha tha ki mai na jaane kis musibat me fas gya hu……….aur kaise fasa ye to mujhe bilkul nahi p[ata ………..

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dusari taraf…….

ma- na jane mera bacha kaha gayab ho gaya kis haal me hoga…….
mamata didi- use kuchh nahi hoga chchi………..aap shant ho jaiye dekhna vah aata hi hoga mai janti hu vo ham sab se dur nahi rah sakta hai………….

sahi kaha putri vah tum sab se dur nahi rah sakta hai…………..

sabhi9 log pichhe mud kar dekhate hai to ek sadhu piche khada hai jisame atadhik tej hai chehre par chamak aisa lag raha tha ki vah koi mahan punyatma hai………

papa- hath jodte hue……...aap kaun hai…….

mai mahadev ka ek chhota sa tuchh bhakt hu aur unhi ke aadesh par yaha aaya hu…….ye batane ke liye ki aap sabhi chinta na kare aapke bete ko kuch nahi hoga …….. aap nishchint hokar apne ghar jaye…………...rishi ne bola

kaise chale jaye ghar bina apane bachhe ko liye mai ghar kya ann ka ek dana bhi muh me nahi lungi………… suresh chahe jo bhi karo mujhe mera beta chha hiye…...ma ne kaha

papa- sudha ha rishivar ham aapne bachhe ke bina yaha se nahi jayenge………..

rishi- kya aap bhul gaye jabb aaplog shiva ko mile the to un tapasvi ne kya kaha tha……….tumhe to sab yaad hi hoga……

Mamata didi… sochane lagi ki baat kya hai jo hamme nahi pata…...chacha chachi ne humse kya chhupaya hai……...

ma baba- ko yaad aane lagta hai ki………….

flashback first ( 1):-
aaj se 15 saal pahle:-

shudha aur suresh aur sath me Sweety aur shiva ham dono bhi the ( Sweety us samay 6 varh ki thi aur mai 4 varsh ka tha ) himachal pradesh ke mandiro par ja ja kar darshan kar rahe the bas ek hi mandir rah gaya tha vah tha himachal pradesh ke jangal ke beech ek mandir tha jisaka naam hidimba devi mandir tha

( hidimba mandir ke bare me thoda sa jaan lete hai:-
hidimba devi mandir uttar bharat me himachal pradesh ke manaali me sthit eh prachin mandir gufs madir ha, jo bharatiy mahakavy mahabharat ke bhim ki patni hidibi devi ko samarpit hai yah manali me sabse lokpriy mandiro me se ek mandir hai . is mandir ko dhungari mandir ke naam se bhi jana jata hai. manali ghumane aane waale sailani is mandir ko jarur ek bar dekhne aate hai ….. yah mandir ek chhar manjile hai, jo jangal ke beech me sthit hai. sathaniy log ne mandir ka naam aas paas ke vano ke aadhar par rakha hai
hill station me sthit hone ke karan barf bari ke dauran is mandi ko dekhane ke liye is mandir me bhari sailaniyuo ki sankhya badi bhari matra me bhid yah iakktha hoti hai aap ko jankar hairani hogi ki is mandir me devi ki koi murti sthapit nahi hai , balki hidimbi devi mandir me hidimba devi ke padchinho ki puja ki jaati hai . )

jab sudha( maa), suresh (pap), aur Sweety didi aur shiva saath me hidimba mandir chal dete hai……...shiva ko papa ne god me utha rakha tha………

Sweety-papa betu ko mujhako do na mai bete ko apni god me lekar chalti hu………..vo mera betu hai…………

Ma- ha….ha...ham jante hai vo tera hi betu hai hamara to vah beta hai ye baat ham jante hai…...aur rahi baat shiva ko tere god me lene ki to tu aabhi chhoti hai apane betu ko giraana chahti ho kya……..

Sweety-jaldi se…..nahi….nahi mai betu ko kaise neeche giraungi…………

Maa- to use god me kyo lena chahti hai tu jannati hai ki tu abhi betu ko god me lekar nahi chal sakti…….uske liye bada hona padega………

Masumiyat se……..kitana mammi…….

Tere papa jitane….ma ne kaha

Papa jitane ……. Phir kuch sochte hue……...matlab aap abhi choti ho…...mujhase badi ho to……...Sweety ne bholepan se puchh

Maa- haste hue………. chal hame jaldi mandir pahuchana hai aaj koi auto wale bhi nahi dikhai de rahe hai raat hone wali hai……..aur mandir bhi abhi dur hai…..ham hotel bhi nahi ja sakte hai kyon ki mandir yahan se bahut pass padega……...suresh mere to jee bahut ghabara raha hai……….

Papa-sudha aur kuchh dur chal lete hai abb ham pahuchane wale hai is jangal me rukana bhi to khatarnak hai…….

Sweety- papa mere betu so gaya kya..

Papa- ha beta tera betu aur hamara beta so gaya hai……….chalo jaldi jaldi chalo………

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Flashback me hi dusri taraf……….

Ek car teji se usi jangal ki taraf aa rahi thi us gadi me ek mahila aur ek aadmi the. Ko karib 30-32 saal ke honge……..usi car me ek bachh th jo behosh tha ki soya huaa tha ye mujhe nahi pata…………..

Aadmi- tumhe kya lagta hai ham jo kar rahe hai vah sahi hai……..

Aurat- kyo nahi sahi hai…..ha……..agar ye sahi nahi hai to kya vah sahi tha jo isane aur isaki ma ************* ne kya……….

Aadami- ********** tum samjh nahi rahi ho bhabhi ne jo bhi kya vah janbujhkar nahi kya vah to use hi bachane ke liye jaa rahi thi……

Aurat- dekho ji mai kuchh bhi nahi janti usake karan mera beta hame chod gaya abb uska beta nahi rahega ………..

Aadmi--dekho ********** ham phir se koshish karenge to hame phir se bachha ho sakte hai……….aur……...bhabhi ne apana operation kara liya hai hai unke vansh vridhi ke liye bas yahi ek hai aur ham aaj isako bhi unase chhin lege………..

Aurat-chin lege……..ha….to usane jo hamare bachhe ko chhin liya usaka kya ha………

Aadmi-unhone jaan bujh kar nahi kya hai *******.......tum samjh nahi rahi ho jis din tumhe sachai pata chalegi tum bahut pachhatane waali hi…………

Aurat--dekho ji…...mai kuchh nahi janti mai sirf itana jaanti hu ki usane mera beta mujhe chhina hai……..(aur aapke bhai ke karan meri bahan ki jindagi jo barbad ho gayi hai uska bhi badala hai ye chhodungi nahi tujhe ******* Thakur abhi to ye suruaat hai)
……...…..dant pisate hue……….. mai uska beta usage chhin lungi…..bas…...mujhe khun ke badale khun aur bete ke badale beta chahiye….aur kuchh nahi……..aur rahi beta paida karne ka to is saari sampati jo hai use sambhalne ke liye koi to chahiye……..aur dono jeth me se to ek aaj nirvansh ho jayega to unki bhi dhan daulat ko sambhalne ke kiye koi to chahiye……
Vah aadami kuchh nahi bolta hai….

Aurat- aur aap ne hse vada kiya tha ki mai jo bhi karungi aap bina koi saval puchhe karenge…….

Aadmi--rukhepan se halanki vah bhi apane bete ke liye dukhi tha par vah yah nahi karna chahta lekin vah apne patni se bahut pyar karta tha isliye vah uska sath de raha tha…….

Dono hidimba van pahuch gaye the…..aur car ko jangal ke anadar leliya the…………………

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Kahani ab tak---

baba bole --- shiva tum apana dhyan lagao aur is saval ka sahi sahi javab dena nahi to tum jante ho ki kya hoga tumhare sath. aur ha chaar baj gaya hai aaj saam ko tumhe apane gav jaan hai to tumhare pasaa keval abb se keval 10 ghante ka samay rah gya hai to apane dimag lagao aur is kahani ke prashno ke uttar do aur mai phir se bata deta hu ki tumne kahaniyo ke mayajal me pravesh kar chuke ho aab tum chah kar bhi isase bacha kar nahi bhag sake ho agar iske samay jo nirdharit hai us samay me nahi javabde paye yaa bhag gaye to tumhe iska parinaam bhugatana hoga.

mai-- ji mai samjh gya hu.

baba - aur ha is saval ke javab dene ke badd tumhe saat dino ke andar dusari kahani ka javab dena hoga nahi to parinam wahi hoga jo javab galat ya bhagane par ho

chalta hu phir milate hai agli kahani ke sath ….

Aab aage:-



Mai baba ke chale jane ke baad bhi vaha par bahut der tak baitha raha ki ye to mere sar ke upar se ja raha hai yah prasanna iska jawab kya hoga mai kisi se kuchh bhi nahi puchh sakthu........

Phir ghadi dekha to 5 baj gya tha mai vaha se utha aur ghar jakar chhat par chala gya aur utter sochane laga


Vahi dusari oor----

Vah baba kuchh dur jakar gayab ho jate hai.

Usi jangal me usi mandir me jaha shiva us pandit ji se mila tha vaha par pandit ji baithe the tabhi vaha ek aur sakhs pragt hota hai....jo vastav me ye vahi baba hai jo shiva ko kahani suna rahe hai.......lekin ye yaha kaya kar rahe hai.......tabhi vah baba un pandit ji ko prnam karte hai. ...... Bolte hai.........parnam mahadev apne mujhe kis liye yad kiya hai o bhi is samay......
(Dosto sahi suna apane jo is mandir me pandit ji hai vah devo ke dev mahadev hai)

Mahadev---.......mai isliye aapko yaad kiya ki abb samay aa gaya hai ki the devil ki shaktiya jagrit hone ka aap jaise jaise kahani sunayenge aur vah us kahani ko sunkar us kahani ke prashno ka uttar dega taise taise uski shaktiya uske andar jagrit hoti jayegi.....

martand munni---magadev ye to badi vikat samsya khadi ho jayegi agar uski sahkitya jagrit ho gayi to use sambhalne ke liye unke sanginiye ko rahana ati avashyak hai kyoki uski pahle shakti jo jagrit hone vali hai un shaktiyo me kam shakti sabse prbal hoge aur agar ise nahi roka jayega to yah phir se vahi galti karega jo isne purv me kiyA tha yah phir se jabajsti kisi se baat prem karega jo iske andar devil ke power ko atyadhik badhadega..........jiska matlab ye hoga ki vah ek purn devil banane lgega to ......... Bataiye ki ab aage kya kia jaye........

Mahadev----iasivar ek hi upay hai rajkumari vidhi....vahi devil ko kabu me kar sakti hai...

martand munni---prantu mahadev vo to inse atyadhik ….. Phir lekin ye kaise ho sakta hai mahadev…….rani vidhi to……...nafrat karti hai is janam me to ve kyo rokegi.......

Mahadev----martand munni aap sab kuchh jante huye bhi aisi bate kar rahe hai......vah nafrat karti......prantu jab unhe ye pta chalega ki unke sath shiva ne vah sab kyo kiya tha aur jab unhe pichhle janam ki sari bate yaad aayegi to vah jarur sab samajh jayegi kyon ki unhe sab yad aate hi uski sari shaktiya jagrit ho jayengi.aur unka prem bhi jo abhi tak apane andar chhu pai hui hai........

martand munni-----mahadev aap to sarv gyta hai aap se kya chhupa hua hai.......to bataiye kya kiya jaye.........

Mahadev-----devil ki badi rani vidhi ko unke saty se avgat karaya jaye..vahi is devil ko roke payegi…....

martand munni--- aur baki raniyo ka kya mahadev.....unhe kab sari bato ka pata chalegi.......

Mahadev----- martand munni aap to jante hai ki kabhi bhi bina uchit samay aaye koi kary nahi hota usi trah jab uchit samay aayega to unhe bhi apani saree bate yad aa jayegi......pahle aap jaiye aur rani vidhi ko unke saty aur unke karm ko yadd dilaiye...nahi to share brahmand me hahakar macha dega the devil.......Agar samay raht use roka nahi jayega tab…..

Phir rishton martand baha se gayab ho jate hai aur mahadev mandir ke murti me sama jate hai.


Vahi dusari oor-----

shiva us saval ke uttar ke bare me soch raha tha par use kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki is saval ka uttar kya hoga........

Tabhi uski ma sudha upar aati hai....

Sudha---- beta tu yaha kya kar rahi hai.....itani dhup me.......chal niche

Sudha---- beta tu yaha kya kar rahi hai.....itani dhup me....... cha niche chal tere papa ka phone aaya tha oh bol rahe the ki tujhase koi kaam hai.........

mai-- apni soch se bahar nikale hue bola aur Sare soch vichar ko darkinare karte huye mai niche aagye......
papa phone par hi the ... mai phone lete hue......heloo papa kya baat hai.......aapne mujhe yad kiya
papa-- ha beta shiva mujhe tuhase ye batana tha ki hame aaj hi char baje dilii ke liye nkana hoga ..... vaha bahut arjent ho gaya hai abhi abhi tere bade papa ke phone aaya tha....
mai--lekin papa hame kal nikalna tha aur achanak aisa kaun aisa kaam aa gaya hai ki kal tak sab bigad jayega.....
papa-- bbeta ye to hame vaha ja kar hi pata chale ga.....ab jaldi se sare saman pack karo aur apani maa se bhi bol do ki vah bhi mera aur apna saaman pack kar le hame aaj hi vaha se nikalna ho ga 4 baje se.......
mai ok papa bola aur papa ne phone kaat diya.

Phir mai sab ma ko bataya to vah jaldi se room me chali gyi aur Mamta didi ko bhi bol diya…….

Mai bhi apane room me aa gaya aur apani paking karte huye saval ka jawab sochata raha tabhi mere dimag me ek bijali si kaudhi …….ki yahi uttar hona chahiye balki yahi uttar hoga…….

Mai_o teri…..bahnchod is saval ka uttar to mere hisab se uttar yahi hona chahiye……..ha...ha...yahi hoga hi….

Phir mai ghadi ki oor dekhata hu…..

Mai_sala saman paking karte hue hi itana samy ho gya…..chalo koi na abhi bhi 2 ghante ka time hai tab tak thoda aaram kar lete hu……

Mai_vahi bisatar par pasar gaya…..aur sochane laga…….

Ki Mujhe aaj 12 saal ho gaya hai apane sare parivar walo ko dekhe hue (mamta didi kabhi kabhi saal me yaha aati thi.inke aalava ma papa saath the)......keri pyari minal to ek dam badi ho gayi hoge kya vah mujhe pahchanegi…..ha….ha…..kyo nahi pahchanegi akhir vh to mujhase jayda mujhko 0yar karti hai bas thoda sa naraj ho lgi mana lunga use…..aur didi kaya mujhe abhi tak maf kar payi hongi……...sayad…..nahi……..agar mujhe maaf kar diya hota to vh mujhse jarur milne aati….kyoki vah mujhase itana pyar jobkarti thi……..

Yahi sab sochate hua kab 1:50 ho gaya mujhe pata hi nahi chala mai jaldi se utha aur gresh hokar……Niche aaya.



Ma…..kaha ja raha hai...beta ….. abhi hame 2 ghante me nikalna hai…..do ghante me train hai beta aur tu bahar ghumane ja raha hai….

Mai_ ma mai abhi ek ghante me ghar aa jaunga meri paking ho gayi hai….mai toda apne dosto se mil lu….aur unhe bata du……..

Ma_thik hai par jaldi aana ….. tere papa ke aate hi hame yaha se nikalna hoga….

Mai_ samjh gya ma …… mai jaldi hi laut aaunga……

Mai jadi se us haveli ke pass pahuch gya…..aur uske aas pass najar daudai aur raste par bhi najar maar li koi nahi tha…...to mai jaldi se us haveli ke pass gya aur dajvaje ke pass jakar bola……..

Mai_suno ye haveli tumhare pahli kahani ke saval ka javab hoga ki -----
" Vah ladka isliye hasa ki jab koi ladaka dar jata hai to Apane maa baap ko pukarta hai apni raksha ke liye aur mata pita nahi ho to raja madad karte hai…...…..par yaha to koi bhi us balak ke saath nahi tha. To vah kisko madad ke liye pukare...jabki uske mata pita khud apane bete ke hath pair pakde huye hai bali ke liye halanki unhone ladke ke hath ke karan kar rahe the parantu kaun maa baap aisa jidd pura karta hai ….aur raja khada hai apne haath me nagi talvar liye…….aur to aur vah apne devato kya yaad kare jab uske samne danv hi khada ho uske bali ke baad khane ke liye…….vah ladaka sochta hai ki vah propakar kar raha hai.lekin nahi nahi yaha to sab lalach me aagye hai uske ma baap aur apane praja se bachhon ki tarah pyar karne wala raja bhi ek stree ke pyar me andha huaa pada hai……..isi liye vah khushi tha ki is lalachi duniya se ja raha hai aur ashcharya se ki is duniya me apane sawarth sidhi ke liye koi bhi kuchh bhi kar sakta hai……………. Yahi karan tha ki vah brahman balak hasa ..

Itana kahkar mai chup ho jata hu haveli aisi lagne lagti hai ki jaise hil rahi ho mai dar se pichhe hat gya…..tabhi haveli se ek aavaj aayi……
He shiva tumne is kahani ke sawalo ka javab. Bilakul sahi diya isliye tumhe puraskar savrup mai apna darvaja tumhare liye kholara hu………

Tabhi haveli ke andar se. Charrrrrrr.rrrrr ki aavaja aayi jaise koi bahut purana darvaja khola jata hiai takataki lagaye haveli ke darvaje ko hi dekha raha tha par darvaja khulane ki aavaj to aayi lekin darvaja khula hi nahi……..

Phir haveli se aawaz aati hai___jayada socho mat shiva maine davavaja khola hai parantu bahar vala nahi mere andar saat darwaze hai…….to mane andar wala darwaja khula hai….jaidlse jaise tumm savlo ke javab doge to tumhare liye vase vaise darwaza khulta jayega…….ab tum jaoo aur agli kahani ka jawab do………


Mai ghar jane ke liye mudahi tha ki phir ss aavaj aai…..
Sabass.mere bache tune pahli kahani ka uttar dekar pahli jeet hasi ki hai aur tumhe darvaja khulane ke baad tumhe ek bahut bada inaam bhi mila hai……
Maine piche mud kar dekha to baba khade the….maine unhe pranam kiya aur puchh kaisa inam baba…….keval darwaja khula ke alava …

Baba_beta tumhe ye baat abhi nahi pata chalegi tum jaao or dilli se laut aao tab tumhe dusari kahani ka javab dena hoga aur dhyan rahe tumhare pas keval saat din ka samy hai……..saat din ke andar tum yaha aakar dusari kahani ke uttar nahi diye to saja bhi tumhe milegi….aur tum jante ho ki saja kya hai…….

Mai_ ha baba mai janta hu ki mera purus shakti aur mera parivaar mujhase chhin jayega……

Baba_ ab tum jaoo aur jo chij tumhe mili hai vh buri aur achhi dodno hai abb tumhe pata tab chalega jab samay aayega tab aur samay jald hi aane wala hai…….

Mai_ baba ko pranam karkr apne ghar ko chhal diya abhi chala hi tha ki maine socha ki apane dosto se jakar mil lu lekin mobile nikal kar dekha to jaane ka time ho gya tha to maine unse baad me milne ka soch kar ghar ki or chal chall diya…….

Aur baba baha se gayab gaye….

Udhar mai ghar ki orr gya idhar haveli me halchal suru ho gayi……
Yah halchal kya hai janne ke liye bane rahe kahani ke sath………….
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update no. 09
Kahani aab tak:-
Mai_ ha baba mai janta hu ki mera purus shakti aur mera parivaar mujhase chhin jayega……

Baba_ ab tum jaoo aur jo chij tumhe mili hai vh buri aur achhi dodno hai abb tumhe pata tab chalega jab samay aayega tab aur samay jald hi aane wala hai…….

Mai_ baba ko pranam karkr apne ghar ko chhal diya abhi chala hi tha ki maine socha ki apane dosto se jakar mil lu lekin mobile nikal kar dekha to jaane ka time ho gya tha to maine unse baad me milne ka soch kar ghar ki or chal chall diya…….

Aur baba baha se gayab gaye….

Udhar mai ghar ki orr gya idhar haveli me halchal suru ho gayi………..


Aab aage:-

jab mai haveli se ghar aaya to sare log mera hi intejar kar rahe the mujhe dekhate hi mamata didi ne bola……
dekho to ham yaha intejar kar rahe hai aur ye mahashay hai ki inhe to bas apne se matlab hai……..
abhi mamata didi kuchh aur boili usae pahle ma ne bat ko sambhalate he boli…
aa gaya beta chal jaldi se 5 min. me taiyar ho ja 4.30 baje ki train hai aur hame station jane me bhi aadha ghanta lag hi jayega aur abhi 3.50 ho gaya hai to jaldi se ja aur apana saman aur taiyar hokar niche aa……

mai mamta didi ko najarandaj kiya aur jaldi se upar jakar taiyar hokar niche aaya aur ham sab chal diye……………


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location :- mumabai switi aur mamta didi ki college me

switi didi apne dosto ke sath canteen me baithi hui thi….



switi didi aur mamata didi ke friends :-


  1. meena srivastav-
  2. sveta khanna
  3. anjali tiwari-
  4. vikrant malhotra-
  5. sandy ( asali naaam:- vikash dube)-
  6. mohit singhaniya-
  7. anjali singhaniya-
  8. ekata kapoor -
  9. vikas kanaujia-

ye sabhi canten me baithe hue the ek sath ( ladakiya ek tarf aur sare ladke ek traf matalab table chaukor tha)

abb ate hai nke dosto ke bare me jo is kahani me aham bhumika nibhayenge-

anjali tivari- bahut hi sundar hai ab inka figar kya batau. ye ek modern khyalat ke ladki hai inhe didi ke ladako me se jo vikash kanaujiya hai inhe bahut pasand bhi karta hai lekin ye maharani use bhav hi nahi deti hai-

  • rajkishor tivari- anjali ke papa
  • chandani tivai- anjali ke mammi
  • payal tiwari- anjali ki chhoti bahan…...anjali in se bahut pyra karti hai
  • abhinav tivari- anjali ke bade bhaiya abhi sadi nahi hui hai
anjali delhi ke hi rahne vali hai.

ekata kjapoor - ye hai suresh ji yani mere papa ke best friend ki beti yebhi delhi se hi hai

  • chandan kapoor- ekata ke papa
  • laxmi kapoor- ekata kei mammi
  • rajat kapoor- bade bhaiya
  • sahil kapoor-chote bhaiya
  • chandani kapoor- chhoti bahan


dosto ye hai jo is kahani ke regular corrector hai baki ke dost bhi kahani me present rahenge lekin unaka rol mahatvapurn nahi hai baki agar hoga to unka intro kahani me hi mil jayegi.aur inke pariwar walo ke bhi


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ham log satation jane ke liye ghar se nikal rahe the……

Ma- papa se……..suresh kya time ho raha hai abhi….

papa- kalai ghadi me dekhate hue sudha abhi 4:05 ho gya hai…….phir teji se….oh no….

mai- kya huaa papa aap aise aaschry sa muh kyo bana rahe hai kya ho gya….

papa- beta hame yahi 4:05 ho gya hai lekin train 4:30 par station par aa jayegi aur hame yaha se janeme time lagega agar ham haveli vale raste se jayenge toh kam se kam 35 minat ka time lagega hi…… aur jangal se jayenge to 20 minat me pahuch jayenge jo ki philahal sambhav nahi hai jangal ke raste se jana.aur hame aaj kisi trah se yah train pakadani hogi.

mai- to papa abhi to suryast hone me abhi to lagbhag 2 ghante lagega to ham jangal ke raste se nikal jayenge.

ma- nahi shiva tum us jangal ke bare me sab kuchh nahi jante ho phir bhi aisi bate kar rahe ho.

mamta didi- lekin chachi abhi to suryst hone me time hai aur jangal me to keval raat me hi jane me khatra hai.

maa- nahi mamata ham aisa nahi kar sakte ek to saam ka vakt hai aur us jangal me din me bhi andhera jaisa mahaul rahata hai aur uspar se maine apane baba se suna hai us jangal se hote hue ek gupt rasta sundarvan jo ki pa. Bangal me hai vaha par ek tantrik kaid hai…jisake karan hamare gav ke jangal shapit ho gaya hai…….aur saam ke 4 baj rahe hai..to lagbhag raat hone hi wala hai …...to jana thik nahi hoga….

papa- sudha mamta sahi kah rahi hai aabhi to saam ka samy hai rat to nhai hui hai to aabhi jangal ke raste se jana safe rahega………..

lekin maa kisi ki baat nahi sun rahi thi lekin sab ko ek hi baat bar bar kahne se maa ne gusse me akar ha kah diya aur ham chal diye jangal ke raste se station……...
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idhar shiva ke jane ke baad haveli me halchal paida ho gayi thi aisa lg raha tha ki bukamp aa gaya hai lekin yeh sab haveli me ho raha tha bahar sab kuchh normal tha…………

us haveli ke bicho bich matalab angan ki jamin me darar padane laga tha aur usame se khun aise nikal raha tha jaise pahadon par se nadiya.



vah khoon do bhago me bat gaya aur ek bhag safed aur dusara bhag kalle dhue me badal gaya aur upar ki or jane laga aur us darrar me se ek aur jyoti bahar nikali jo ek bahut hi kalli thi. phir vah darar band ho gya jaise vaha kuch huaa hi nahi ho

dono dhua upar ki or janne lagte hai aur thik haveli ke uapar jakar dono dhuaa aapas me jud jate hai jaise koi gend ho aur uske aadha bhag kala aur adha bhag safed rang ka tha………… dhuaa ke gola ek disha me udta chala jata hai…...aur vah kali jyoti kuch dur us dhue ke sath aage jakar ek dusari disa me chali jati hai….

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mumbai me -

switi didi aur unke saare friends canteen me baithe nasta kar rahe the ki tabhi us canteen me ek ladka aur usaki paltan andar aati hai…..jo katai achhi paltan nahi thi…….

us gang ke lidar hath me sigaret liye hue switi and friends ke pass ata hai usake aate hi vikarant malhotra jo ki ek phattu kism ka banda tha aur vh didi ke samane wale chair par baitha huaa tha…….vha khada hokar us ladke ko baithane ka jagah deta hai../…..

us gang ke lidar ka naam dharmesh bhatt tha jo ek nihayati badmas ladka tha…par switi ke samane kuchh nahi karta hai…..
Lekin aaj kuchh soch kar aaya tha…..dekha te hai aaj kya karta hai…....


dharmesh---- jakar vikrant davara diye gaye sit par baitha howe bolta hai…….aur kya haal hai meri jaan switi ka……..aap to yaar din pratidin aur bhi hot hoti jaa rahi hai…………..

switi didi kuchh nahi bol rahi thi vah baat ko badhana nahi chahti thi to usane kuchh nahi bola bas gusse wala look deti hai………

dharmesh ---- aise look na de zalim …...kya nazron se ghayal kar ke marne ka irada hai kya……

did----dekho dharmesh……..

Dharmesh---- dikhao meri jaan kya dikhana chahti ho…mai sab dekhane ko taiyar hu bas tum dikhao…..

Didi----uski bato ko ignore karte hue……. maine bar bar mana kiya hai ki mujhe paresan na karo lekin tumm manane ko taiyar hi nahi ho aakhir tum chahte kya ho……….

(Didi ke saare dosto ko dharmesh ke aage lakha maar jaata tha isliye ve kuchh nahi bole)

dharmesh ----- tumhe keval tumko mai chahta hu switi…….mai chata hu ki tumm meri ho jao………..

aabhi dharmesh ne itan hi kaha tha ki didi usage bolati hai ki………..

switi-- dharmesh tum bhi jante ho ki ye passibal nahi hai……..

dhaRMESH tapak se bolta hai-- kya possible nahi hai switi dekho mai kiitana handsome hu. paisa wala hu. Aur to aur jo tum kahogi mai vo sab karne ko taiyar hu….kaho to mai saab kuchh chhodne ke liye taiyar hu. Ya phir tum..kaho to tumhari family se bhi tumko mang lunga……..kya kami hai mujhme…..

didi---- mannar nam ki chj nahi hai tumhare paas mere paas aane aur keh dene se yah nahi ho jata ki tumm achchhe ho ……

dharmesh ko gussa aata hai lekin vah shanti se bolta hai---tum kitana pagal ladki ho switi tum kis jamane me jee rahi ho kya tumhe nahi pata hai ki aaj kal paisa hi sab kuch hai na ki tumhara mannar………...mai chahu to mere pass ladkiyo ki kami nahi hai lekin nahi mujhe keval tum chahiye…. aur… tum ye bhi janti ho ki mai tumhe kitana pyar karta hu ki mai tumhe pane ke liye kuchchh bhi karne ko taiayr hu agar tum kahogi to mai sab chhod dunga ye tum ek baar to keh ke dekho………

Didi----dekho tum mai ye nahi kahti ki tum ache insan ho ya bure lekin mai tumhe to kya yaha kisi se bhi pyar nahi karti hu………

Yah kahakar didi apane dosto ke sath baha se uth jati hai aur chal deti hai apne dosto ke saath kyoki class ki bell baj gayi thi……..

.dharmesh----- gusse me tebal ko hath marte hue…...salli rand jayada ghamand hai na…….to aab mujhe lagta hai tujhe pane ke liye mujhe ungali tedhi karni padegi…….bahut badal liya apane aap ko abb nahi…….tujhe aab mere niche aana hi hoga…..uske liye mujhe chahe jo karna pade karunga ……..kyoki tu sirf meri hai….sirf meri…..

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Location:- delahi ka ek jangal jo ek bhayanak mayavi jangal tha ….

delhi ke ek bhayanak jangal me ek budhi aurat raat ke andhere me haath me torch liye hue chali ja rahi hai ………..

chaaro or andhera aur sirf dhundh hi dhundh dikh rahi thi…..bujurg aurat apane aap ko ek laal shal se dhaki hui thi………..

jangal me me usake siva koi bhi nahi dikhai de raha tha……….na jane vah kaha vah akeli ja rahi thi…… vah aurat apane madhyam gati se us ghane jangalo me badhati ja rahi thi…...usaki aakho ke nichhe jhurriya aagyi thi jisase yah pata chal raha tha ki vah aurat sach me ek budhi aurat thi isaki umr lagbhag 70-75 saal to hoga hi…………

tabhi vah aage chalte chalte use kuchh log dikhayi dete hai ve log bhi apane hatho me torch pakade hue the……

sare log ek ghera banakar vaha par baithe hue the…….aur…..unake beech me aag lagi hui thi………

vaha upasthit saree log muskurate hue us aurat ki oor dekhane lage……… vah budhi aurat bhi haste hue un sabhi logo dekha rahi th……….

vah bujurg aurat un logo ke pass aati hai aur apani torch ko jamin par rakh kar baithate hoe kahti hai…………..
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