Incest The Devil 😈 King

[Naik]

update no. 11
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Kahani ab tak:-

kamera ke samne ek badi si kanchh ke khidaki lagi hui thi, jisse koi bhi us kamre se bahari sunadrta ko dekhakar mantr mugdh ho jata………….us ladki ke chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi jaise uaski koi mangi hui wish puri hone wali ho…………….lekin tabhi uske hriday me atyadhik dard hone laga aur vah jor se chikh uthi n…...hi rudraravi…… aur vah vah neeche dhadam se gir ke behosh ho gai…………
(jab vah ladki ke sine me dard utha usi samay shiva ka takkar us aurat ke bheje hue kaali dhuaa aur us haveli ke dhue se huaa tha)

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Abb age:-

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Location:- himachal pradesh ke jilla shimala ke ratanganj gav ke ek purani kothi keshari bhavan me jo aaj bhi bade -2 mahlo ko apne aage maat deta hai:-

Ek kamre me ek mahila sayad bahut dino se koma me thi jor se chikhate hue uthati hai…..

Ru……Ru….draravi………………..

Phir achanak behosh ho jati hai……….

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Location:- jaha mai (shiva) tha

jab vah dhue ka gola mujhase takraya to mujhe ek tej jhataka laga aur mai ma……….chilate hue dur ja gira jaha mai ek ped se takra gya aur jab mai khada hone ki koshis ki to khada ho kar kuchh hi dur gya tha ki mai dhadam se jameen par gir gya aur meri aakhe dhire dhire band hoti chali gayi…...

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Location:-jaha ma baba aur mamta didi the:-

jangal me ma papa mamata didi mujhe dundhane lage………… ma to mujhe naa pakar rone lagi aur saara dos papa par dalne lagi ki unke hi kahne par jangal ke raste se aaye the….

ma rote hue:- suresh mai kuchh nahi janti kahi se bhi mera beta lakar dijiye…………………

mamata didi- shant ho jaiye chachi use kuchh nahi hoga shayad vah jo roshani faili thi to use me4bhatkakar jangal me kahi chala gaya hoga………..

halanki mamata didi bhi ghabra rahi thi vah man hi man bhagwan se prarthana kar rahi thi ki mai jaha bhi rahu surakshit raahu jabki mamata didi ne mujh se kabhi pyar se baat nahi ki kyoki bachapan me mujhase ek galati anjane me ho gayi tab se lekin vah mujhse sabse adhik pyar karti thi…………….

aaj unka bhi dill bahut joro se dhadak raha tha ki kahin mujhe kuchh na ho jaye…….

yaha par sabb log pareshan the vahi jangal me usi mandir me mahadev aur martand rishi aapas me baate kar rahe the………

martand rishi:- mahadev ye to anarth ho gaya………

mahadev- ha rishi var jo hona nahi chahiye vahi ho gaya mujhe iska pata pehle se hi pata tha lekin mai prakritik ke karyo me hastakshep nahi karunga aur na hi aap karne ko cheshtha kare………………

hoga vahi jo aadi shiv chahenge………

rishi - parantu mahadev shiva ki atma to subah hote hi uski sharir chod degi aur vah shaitani aatma uske sharir par kabja kar kar legi jo atadhik vinashkari sidh ho sakta hai ………

mahadev- chintit na hoiye rishivar jo hota hai vah lok kalyan ke liye hi hota hai ………. burai chahe jitna bhi apna bistar kar le par ant me jeet sachchai ki hi hoti hai aab aap jaiye aur shiva ke parivar walo ko sambhaliye aur ha jitani jaldi ho sake aap devil ki badi rani vidhi ko unka karm ka samran dilaiye……
dusari baat yah hai ki aab se ham aur aap is jangal me nahi milenge……..

rishi - mahadev mujhe aapaki margdarshan ki ati avsyakta padegi …..

mahadev - aapke mardarshan ke liye aapke guru vishwamitra ji hai jo aap ko aage ki raah dikhayenge……...philhal viswamitra himalaya par kathor tapasya kar rahe hai uchit samay aane par vah aap se milne swayam aayenge……….l.

jo aagya mahadev………

kalyan ho……….

aur mahadev antardhyan ho gaye.

Martand rishi chal diye jidhar meri ma baba the………

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Location :- jha mai tha:-
Time:- savera abhi abhi apana pankh faila rahi thi………

jab meri aakh khuli to subahj ho gayi thi……..mere akho ke samane neela aasaman tha, muhe aisa lag raha tha jaise mai kuchh ghanto se yaha behosh pada hua tha……

jab mai utha to dekha mere samane nadi bas rahi thi aur mere charo or keval hare bhare ped paudhe hi dikhay de rahe the……...tabhi mujhe ki mai to ma baba aur did ke sath delhi ja raha tha …….aur jangal wala raste ke aadhe me se hi gayab ho gaya tha aur kuchh der baad vah tej roshni……….uske aage mujhe kuchh yaad nahi aaraha tha……….tabhi meri najar niche ki or gayi mai ek dam se uchhal pada kyoki jaha mai pahle behosh pada tha vaha mere jaise hi ek aadami leta huaa hai ………..tab mujhe reyakais huaa ki mera mritu ho chuki hai mai mar chuka hu…………...mai apana deh tyag chuka hu mere sharir se meri aatma bahar nikal chuki hai………..mera to diumag hi ghum gya ki ye sab kya huaa……..kaise huaa...mere man me savalo ka jvala uathane laga ………...mai jab jamin par lete hue sharir ke pass jakar use chhune ki koshis ki to mai chhu hi nmahi pa raha tha..mera haath sharir ke aar paar ho ja raha tha…….
mai kisi bhi vastu ko touch hi nahi kar pa raha tha …..aur mai yahi soch raha tha ki mai na jaane kis musibat me fas gya hu……….aur kaise fasa ye to mujhe bilkul nahi p[ata ………..

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dusari taraf…….

ma- na jane mera bacha kaha gayab ho gaya kis haal me hoga…….
mamata didi- use kuchh nahi hoga chchi………..aap shant ho jaiye dekhna vah aata hi hoga mai janti hu vo ham sab se dur nahi rah sakta hai………….

sahi kaha putri vah tum sab se dur nahi rah sakta hai…………..

sabhi9 log pichhe mud kar dekhate hai to ek sadhu piche khada hai jisame atadhik tej hai chehre par chamak aisa lag raha tha ki vah koi mahan punyatma hai………

papa- hath jodte hue……...aap kaun hai…….

mai mahadev ka ek chhota sa tuchh bhakt hu aur unhi ke aadesh par yaha aaya hu…….ye batane ke liye ki aap sabhi chinta na kare aapke bete ko kuch nahi hoga …….. aap nishchint hokar apne ghar jaye…………...rishi ne bola

kaise chale jaye ghar bina apane bachhe ko liye mai ghar kya ann ka ek dana bhi muh me nahi lungi………… suresh chahe jo bhi karo mujhe mera beta chha hiye…...ma ne kaha

papa- sudha ha rishivar ham aapne bachhe ke bina yaha se nahi jayenge………..

rishi- kya aap bhul gaye jabb aaplog shiva ko mile the to un tapasvi ne kya kaha tha……….tumhe to sab yaad hi hoga……

Mamata didi… sochane lagi ki baat kya hai jo hamme nahi pata…...chacha chachi ne humse kya chhupaya hai……...

ma baba- ko yaad aane lagta hai ki………….

flashback first ( 1):-
aaj se 15 saal pahle:-

shudha aur suresh aur sath me Sweety aur shiva ham dono bhi the ( Sweety us samay 6 varh ki thi aur mai 4 varsh ka tha ) himachal pradesh ke mandiro par ja ja kar darshan kar rahe the bas ek hi mandir rah gaya tha vah tha himachal pradesh ke jangal ke beech ek mandir tha jisaka naam hidimba devi mandir tha

( hidimba mandir ke bare me thoda sa jaan lete hai:-
hidimba devi mandir uttar bharat me himachal pradesh ke manaali me sthit eh prachin mandir gufs madir ha, jo bharatiy mahakavy mahabharat ke bhim ki patni hidibi devi ko samarpit hai yah manali me sabse lokpriy mandiro me se ek mandir hai . is mandir ko dhungari mandir ke naam se bhi jana jata hai. manali ghumane aane waale sailani is mandir ko jarur ek bar dekhne aate hai ….. yah mandir ek chhar manjile hai, jo jangal ke beech me sthit hai. sathaniy log ne mandir ka naam aas paas ke vano ke aadhar par rakha hai
hill station me sthit hone ke karan barf bari ke dauran is mandi ko dekhane ke liye is mandir me bhari sailaniyuo ki sankhya badi bhari matra me bhid yah iakktha hoti hai aap ko jankar hairani hogi ki is mandir me devi ki koi murti sthapit nahi hai , balki hidimbi devi mandir me hidimba devi ke padchinho ki puja ki jaati hai . )

jab sudha( maa), suresh (pap), aur Sweety didi aur shiva saath me hidimba mandir chal dete hai……...shiva ko papa ne god me utha rakha tha………

Sweety-papa betu ko mujhako do na mai bete ko apni god me lekar chalti hu………..vo mera betu hai…………

Ma- ha….ha...ham jante hai vo tera hi betu hai hamara to vah beta hai ye baat ham jante hai…...aur rahi baat shiva ko tere god me lene ki to tu aabhi chhoti hai apane betu ko giraana chahti ho kya……..

Sweety-jaldi se…..nahi….nahi mai betu ko kaise neeche giraungi…………

Maa- to use god me kyo lena chahti hai tu jannati hai ki tu abhi betu ko god me lekar nahi chal sakti…….uske liye bada hona padega………

Masumiyat se……..kitana mammi…….

Tere papa jitane….ma ne kaha

Papa jitane ……. Phir kuch sochte hue……...matlab aap abhi choti ho…...mujhase badi ho to……...Sweety ne bholepan se puchh

Maa- haste hue………. chal hame jaldi mandir pahuchana hai aaj koi auto wale bhi nahi dikhai de rahe hai raat hone wali hai……..aur mandir bhi abhi dur hai…..ham hotel bhi nahi ja sakte hai kyon ki mandir yahan se bahut pass padega……...suresh mere to jee bahut ghabara raha hai……….

Papa-sudha aur kuchh dur chal lete hai abb ham pahuchane wale hai is jangal me rukana bhi to khatarnak hai…….

Sweety- papa mere betu so gaya kya..

Papa- ha beta tera betu aur hamara beta so gaya hai……….chalo jaldi jaldi chalo………

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Flashback me hi dusri taraf……….

Ek car teji se usi jangal ki taraf aa rahi thi us gadi me ek mahila aur ek aadmi the. Ko karib 30-32 saal ke honge……..usi car me ek bachh th jo behosh tha ki soya huaa tha ye mujhe nahi pata…………..

Aadmi- tumhe kya lagta hai ham jo kar rahe hai vah sahi hai……..

Aurat- kyo nahi sahi hai…..ha……..agar ye sahi nahi hai to kya vah sahi tha jo isane aur isaki ma ************* ne kya……….

Aadami- ********** tum samjh nahi rahi ho bhabhi ne jo bhi kya vah janbujhkar nahi kya vah to use hi bachane ke liye jaa rahi thi……

Aurat- dekho ji mai kuchh bhi nahi janti usake karan mera beta hame chod gaya abb uska beta nahi rahega ………..

Aadmi--dekho ********** ham phir se koshish karenge to hame phir se bachha ho sakte hai……….aur……...bhabhi ne apana operation kara liya hai hai unke vansh vridhi ke liye bas yahi ek hai aur ham aaj isako bhi unase chhin lege………..

Aurat-chin lege……..ha….to usane jo hamare bachhe ko chhin liya usaka kya ha………

Aadmi-unhone jaan bujh kar nahi kya hai *******.......tum samjh nahi rahi ho jis din tumhe sachai pata chalegi tum bahut pachhatane waali hi…………

Aurat--dekho ji…...mai kuchh nahi janti mai sirf itana jaanti hu ki usane mera beta mujhe chhina hai……..(aur aapke bhai ke karan meri bahan ki jindagi jo barbad ho gayi hai uska bhi badala hai ye chhodungi nahi tujhe ******* Thakur abhi to ye suruaat hai)
……...…..dant pisate hue……….. mai uska beta usage chhin lungi…..bas…...mujhe khun ke badale khun aur bete ke badale beta chahiye….aur kuchh nahi……..aur rahi beta paida karne ka to is saari sampati jo hai use sambhalne ke liye koi to chahiye……..aur dono jeth me se to ek aaj nirvansh ho jayega to unki bhi dhan daulat ko sambhalne ke kiye koi to chahiye……
Vah aadami kuchh nahi bolta hai….

Aurat- aur aap ne hse vada kiya tha ki mai jo bhi karungi aap bina koi saval puchhe karenge…….

Aadmi--rukhepan se halanki vah bhi apane bete ke liye dukhi tha par vah yah nahi karna chahta lekin vah apne patni se bahut pyar karta tha isliye vah uska sath de raha tha…….

Dono hidimba van pahuch gaye the…..aur car ko jangal ke anadar leliya the…………………

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[RStar99]

Update no 12
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the story So Far:-


Aurat--dekho ji…...mai kuchh nahi janti mai sirf itana jaanti hu ki usane mera beta mujhse china………..dant pisate hue……….. mai uska beta usage chhin lungi…..bas…...mujhe khun ke badale khun aur bete ke badale beta chahiye….aur kuchh nahi……..aur rahi beta paida karne ka to is saari sampati jo hai use sambhalne ke liye koi to chahiye……..aur dono jeth me se to ek aaj nirvansh ho jayega to unki bhi dhan daulat ko sambhalne ke kiye koi to chahiye……..


Vah aadami kuchh nahi bolta hai….


Aurat- aur aap ne hse vada kiya tha ki mai jo bhi karungi aap bina koi saval puchhe karenge…….


Aadmi--rukhepan se halanki vah bhi apane bete ke liye dukhi tha par vah yah nahi karna chahta lekin vah apne patni se bahut pyar karta tha isliye vah uska sath de raha tha…….


Dono hidimba van pahuch gaye the…..aur car ko jangal ke anadar leliy the…………………


Abb aage:-


flashback jari rahega :-



Car ek bade se ped ke pass le jakar rok deta hai……..aur kisi ka intejar karne lagte hai…….

Tabhi bachhe ko hosh aa jata hai aur dekhata hai ki vo to gadi me hai phir bahar ki taraf dekhata hai to uske chacha chachi bahar hi hai unhe vah ladka aavaj hi dene wala hota hai ki use kuchh ghante pahle ki hui ghatanaye yaad aajati hai ki kaise uske chacha ne use mara gadi ke andar baithNe ke liye aur chachai baat kar rahi thi use marane ke liye vah ladka dar gaya aur sochne laga halanki vah sochane layak tha to nahi parantu har kisi ke sochane ki kshamta to hoti hi hai vah ladka bhi apne jitana dimag tha utna sochne laga ki….. abb kya kiya jaye usane dekha ki vo log gadi ke dusari side the aur dusri saide koi nahi tha…….us ne check kiya to get lock nahi tha vah chupake se get kholkar dhire se bahar nikal gya aur dusari side ki or bhagane laga…….vah jitana tej Daud sakta tha utana tej Daud raha tha tabhi chach ki najar mere taraf chali gayi……..


Chachi- ************ pakdo use vah kamina bhag raha hai…….hamne socha tha ki yah behosh hai lekin yah to badi chalak nikala………...jaldi se pakdo bhagane na paye……………


Dono log ladake ko pakadane ke liye us or bhagane lage aur ladka bhi jangal ki or teji se bhagane laga……………



Vah bhagate bhagate ualnhe chakama dete dete vah pahuch gya jaha suresh and family ja rahi thi mandir ki taraf……

Sudha - suresh yahi kuchh der aaram bhi kar lete hai aur khana bh kha lete hai ……


Suresh- kuch nahi bolata hai vahi sadak ke kinare ve log apna sara saman rakha kar shiva ko vahi litakar kuchh duri par jakar aapna tent lagane lagte hai ………....

VaH ladaka vaha pahuch jata hai aur jakar Sweety ke pass chala jata hai jo pass hi me baithi hui khel rahi th aur kuchh hi duri par thi didi mujhe bacha lo vo log mujhe maar denge Sweety abhi kuchh bolane hi vali hoti hai ki tabhi use apaniammi ki chikh sunai deta hai………….





Sudha- nahi ………..shiva……

Aur teji se Us or bhagati hai jis or ek mota gande se dikhane vala aadami shiva ko god me liiye hue teji se Daud raha tha halanki suresh aur Sweety ko us ladke ka chehara dikhayi nahi de raha tha….


Vah Gunda teji se us Shiva ko lekar bhagata hai………

Yaha suresh aur Sweety nasamajh ho kar dekhe ja rahe the………..ki sudha ma ko kya ho gaya vah itani teji se vs aadami ke pichhe kyo bhag rahi hai………………..


Suresh- sudha are kya hua tum us aadami ke pichhe kyo ja rahi ho……….


Sudha- suresh jaldi pakdiye is aadami ko ye shiva ko lekar bhag raha hai…………


Suresh- lekin shiva to yaha hai Sweety ke paas ……….

Sudha Sweety ki or dekhati hai to uska demag hi hill jata hai……..


Sudha- suresh hamara shiva yaha hai to us aadmi ne kisi ko pakad kar le gaya…………


Suresh- tum kahi pagal to nahi ho gayi ho jab shiva hamare pass hai to vah kaise shiva ko le ha sakta hai…………..


(Huaa ye tha ki jab vah ladka Sweety ke pass gaya tabhi vaha us ladke ko dundhate hue vah aadami vaha aa gya aur uski najar shiva par padi to usne use vaha se utha liya kyoki shiva aur us ladke ka chehara ek jaisa tha)


Sudh-nahi suresh aap ne dekha ki nahi dekha lekin maine dekha vah ladka hu b hu shiva ki tarah hi tha………….


Sweety- kya baat karti ho mammi vah mera betu jaisa tha leki aisa kaise ho sakta hai…...mera betu to yaha hai mere pass…………….


Ladka kuchh nahi bolata hai darr ke mare vah chupchap se sabko dekhata hai...


Sudh- hame chalkar dekhana chahiye suresh baat kya hai………….


Tino log usi disha me chal dete hai jis disha me vah aadami ladke ko le gaya tha……...jald hi be log vah pahuch jaye hai aur ek ped se chhipakar dekhane lage yaha un sabki bate sunai de rahi thi…………….



Gounda- malik le aaya yah mandir ki tarf bhag raha tha………


Aadami- vaah kallu vah ye tumane bahut achha kiya vaise yah bhagata to bhi marta bhukhe lekin ham koi risk nahi lena chahte the……..


Aurat- kallu tumane jo kaam kiya hai uska inaam tumhe mil jayega……..aab iska sar dhad se alag kar do aur iske sar ko ek gift me pack karke mere jeth Thakur ************* singh ko bhet savrup de do…………………


Aadmi nahi ----------- tum ye kya karna chahti ho bhaisahab ko pata chala ki unke bete ka katl huaa hai to vah iska pata lagwaywnge aur usme kahi pata chal gya to…………


Aurat- ha ye maine socha hi nahi……….. kallu ise tum kato aur iske deh ke har ang ko dur dur tak le jakar gad do…………


Kallu- ji malkin…….jaisa aap kahe………


Aur jaise hi kallu bachhe ke gardan par talwar chalane ko hota hai ki ladaka boll padata hai chachi ma aap aisa kyo kar rahi ho maine aapka kya bigada hai aapko to mai apana ma hi manta hu…………


Aurat ye sun kar uske aakho me aashu aa jate hai lekin vah kuchh kar nahi pa rahi thi aisa lag raha tha ki koi usase yah sab karwa raha hai……..


Aurat- chilla kar kallu jaldi kar……..


Yaha ped ke piche (Sare log dhire dhire baat karte hai)


sweety- papa hame kuchh karna chahiye betu jaisa dikhane wala ladake ko ve log maar denge………..


Sudha-ha suresh jaldi se police ko phone kariye……………..


Suresh apna mobile nikalta hai……..


Suresh- oh….no….


Sudha- kya huaa…….


Suresh- phone me network hi nahi hai dekho tumhare me hai kaya ……………


Sudha apani mobile chek karti hai….nahi mere me bhi nahi hai……….


Suresh- abb kya kare ye log to nirdayi ulta se is bachhe maar denge……….abb to lagta hai ki hame hi aage aana padega…….tum log yahi chhipe rahna………lo shiva ko tum pakado


Abhi suresh yah baat kahakar aage bhadhane hi wala hota hai ki tabhi koi usaka haath pakad leta hai…………….

 

[RStar99]

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Nice

 

[RStar99]

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[Lib am]

Update no 12
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the story So Far:-


Aurat--dekho ji…...mai kuchh nahi janti mai sirf itana jaanti hu ki usane mera beta mujhse china………..dant pisate hue……….. mai uska beta usage chhin lungi…..bas…...mujhe khun ke badale khun aur bete ke badale beta chahiye….aur kuchh nahi……..aur rahi beta paida karne ka to is saari sampati jo hai use sambhalne ke liye koi to chahiye……..aur dono jeth me se to ek aaj nirvansh ho jayega to unki bhi dhan daulat ko sambhalne ke kiye koi to chahiye……..


Vah aadami kuchh nahi bolta hai….


Aurat- aur aap ne hse vada kiya tha ki mai jo bhi karungi aap bina koi saval puchhe karenge…….


Aadmi--rukhepan se halanki vah bhi apane bete ke liye dukhi tha par vah yah nahi karna chahta lekin vah apne patni se bahut pyar karta tha isliye vah uska sath de raha tha…….


Dono hidimba van pahuch gaye the…..aur car ko jangal ke anadar leliy the…………………


Abb aage:-


flashback jari rahega :-



Car ek bade se ped ke pass le jakar rok deta hai……..aur kisi ka intejar karne lagte hai…….

Tabhi bachhe ko hosh aa jata hai aur dekhata hai ki vo to gadi me hai phir bahar ki taraf dekhata hai to uske chacha chachi bahar hi hai unhe vah ladka aavaj hi dene wala hota hai ki use kuchh ghante pahle ki hui ghatanaye yaad aajati hai ki kaise uske chacha ne use mara gadi ke andar baithNe ke liye aur chachai baat kar rahi thi use marane ke liye vah ladka dar gaya aur sochne laga halanki vah sochane layak tha to nahi parantu har kisi ke sochane ki kshamta to hoti hi hai vah ladka bhi apne jitana dimag tha utna sochne laga ki….. abb kya kiya jaye usane dekha ki vo log gadi ke dusari side the aur dusri saide koi nahi tha…….us ne check kiya to get lock nahi tha vah chupake se get kholkar dhire se bahar nikal gya aur dusari side ki or bhagane laga…….vah jitana tej Daud sakta tha utana tej Daud raha tha tabhi chach ki najar mere taraf chali gayi……..


Chachi- ************ pakdo use vah kamina bhag raha hai…….hamne socha tha ki yah behosh hai lekin yah to badi chalak nikala………...jaldi se pakdo bhagane na paye……………


Dono log ladake ko pakadane ke liye us or bhagane lage aur ladka bhi jangal ki or teji se bhagane laga……………



Vah bhagate bhagate ualnhe chakama dete dete vah pahuch gya jaha suresh and family ja rahi thi mandir ki taraf……

Sudha - suresh yahi kuchh der aaram bhi kar lete hai aur khana bh kha lete hai ……


Suresh- kuch nahi bolata hai vahi sadak ke kinare ve log apna sara saman rakha kar shiva ko vahi litakar kuchh duri par jakar aapna tent lagane lagte hai ………....

VaH ladaka vaha pahuch jata hai aur jakar Sweety ke pass chala jata hai jo pass hi me baithi hui khel rahi th aur kuchh hi duri par thi didi mujhe bacha lo vo log mujhe maar denge Sweety abhi kuchh bolane hi vali hoti hai ki tabhi use apaniammi ki chikh sunai deta hai………….





Sudha- nahi ………..shiva……

Aur teji se Us or bhagati hai jis or ek mota gande se dikhane vala aadami shiva ko god me liiye hue teji se Daud raha tha halanki suresh aur Sweety ko us ladke ka chehara dikhayi nahi de raha tha….


Vah Gunda teji se us Shiva ko lekar bhagata hai………

Yaha suresh aur Sweety nasamajh ho kar dekhe ja rahe the………..ki sudha ma ko kya ho gaya vah itani teji se vs aadami ke pichhe kyo bhag rahi hai………………..


Suresh- sudha are kya hua tum us aadami ke pichhe kyo ja rahi ho……….


Sudha- suresh jaldi pakdiye is aadami ko ye shiva ko lekar bhag raha hai…………


Suresh- lekin shiva to yaha hai Sweety ke paas ……….

Sudha Sweety ki or dekhati hai to uska demag hi hill jata hai……..


Sudha- suresh hamara shiva yaha hai to us aadmi ne kisi ko pakad kar le gaya…………


Suresh- tum kahi pagal to nahi ho gayi ho jab shiva hamare pass hai to vah kaise shiva ko le ha sakta hai…………..


(Huaa ye tha ki jab vah ladka Sweety ke pass gaya tabhi vaha us ladke ko dundhate hue vah aadami vaha aa gya aur uski najar shiva par padi to usne use vaha se utha liya kyoki shiva aur us ladke ka chehara ek jaisa tha)


Sudh-nahi suresh aap ne dekha ki nahi dekha lekin maine dekha vah ladka hu b hu shiva ki tarah hi tha………….


Sweety- kya baat karti ho mammi vah mera betu jaisa tha leki aisa kaise ho sakta hai…...mera betu to yaha hai mere pass…………….


Ladka kuchh nahi bolata hai darr ke mare vah chupchap se sabko dekhata hai...


Sudh- hame chalkar dekhana chahiye suresh baat kya hai………….


Tino log usi disha me chal dete hai jis disha me vah aadami ladke ko le gaya tha……...jald hi be log vah pahuch jaye hai aur ek ped se chhipakar dekhane lage yaha un sabki bate sunai de rahi thi…………….



Gounda- malik le aaya yah mandir ki tarf bhag raha tha………


Aadami- vaah kallu vah ye tumane bahut achha kiya vaise yah bhagata to bhi marta bhukhe lekin ham koi risk nahi lena chahte the……..


Aurat- kallu tumane jo kaam kiya hai uska inaam tumhe mil jayega……..aab iska sar dhad se alag kar do aur iske sar ko ek gift me pack karke mere jeth Thakur ************* singh ko bhet savrup de do…………………


Aadmi nahi ----------- tum ye kya karna chahti ho bhaisahab ko pata chala ki unke bete ka katl huaa hai to vah iska pata lagwaywnge aur usme kahi pata chal gya to…………


Aurat- ha ye maine socha hi nahi……….. kallu ise tum kato aur iske deh ke har ang ko dur dur tak le jakar gad do…………


Kallu- ji malkin…….jaisa aap kahe………


Aur jaise hi kallu bachhe ke gardan par talwar chalane ko hota hai ki ladaka boll padata hai chachi ma aap aisa kyo kar rahi ho maine aapka kya bigada hai aapko to mai apana ma hi manta hu…………


Aurat ye sun kar uske aakho me aashu aa jate hai lekin vah kuchh kar nahi pa rahi thi aisa lag raha tha ki koi usase yah sab karwa raha hai……..


Aurat- chilla kar kallu jaldi kar……..


Yaha ped ke piche (Sare log dhire dhire baat karte hai)


sweety- papa hame kuchh karna chahiye betu jaisa dikhane wala ladake ko ve log maar denge………..


Sudha-ha suresh jaldi se police ko phone kariye……………..


Suresh apna mobile nikalta hai……..


Suresh- oh….no….


Sudha- kya huaa…….


Suresh- phone me network hi nahi hai dekho tumhare me hai kaya ……………


Sudha apani mobile chek karti hai….nahi mere me bhi nahi hai……….


Suresh- abb kya kare ye log to nirdayi ulta se is bachhe maar denge……….abb to lagta hai ki hame hi aage aana padega…….tum log yahi chhipe rahna………lo shiva ko tum pakado


Abhi suresh yah baat kahakar aage bhadhane hi wala hota hai ki tabhi koi usaka haath pakad leta hai…………….

Ye to naya kaand ho gaya do do shiva, ab ye kya chakkar hai? Flashback jayada hi interesting hota jaa raha hai. Superb update.

 

[RStar99]

agla update kal sham ko ya usase pahle aayega

 

[RStar99]

Ye to naya kaand ho gaya do do shiva, ab ye kya chakkar hai? Flashback jayada hi interesting hota jaa raha hai. Superb update.

Bhai kand nahi maha kand hone wala hai aage

 

[Naik]

Update no 12
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the story So Far:-


Aurat--dekho ji…...mai kuchh nahi janti mai sirf itana jaanti hu ki usane mera beta mujhse china………..dant pisate hue……….. mai uska beta usage chhin lungi…..bas…...mujhe khun ke badale khun aur bete ke badale beta chahiye….aur kuchh nahi……..aur rahi beta paida karne ka to is saari sampati jo hai use sambhalne ke liye koi to chahiye……..aur dono jeth me se to ek aaj nirvansh ho jayega to unki bhi dhan daulat ko sambhalne ke kiye koi to chahiye……..


Vah aadami kuchh nahi bolta hai….


Aurat- aur aap ne hse vada kiya tha ki mai jo bhi karungi aap bina koi saval puchhe karenge…….


Aadmi--rukhepan se halanki vah bhi apane bete ke liye dukhi tha par vah yah nahi karna chahta lekin vah apne patni se bahut pyar karta tha isliye vah uska sath de raha tha…….


Dono hidimba van pahuch gaye the…..aur car ko jangal ke anadar leliy the…………………


Abb aage:-


flashback jari rahega :-



Car ek bade se ped ke pass le jakar rok deta hai……..aur kisi ka intejar karne lagte hai…….

Tabhi bachhe ko hosh aa jata hai aur dekhata hai ki vo to gadi me hai phir bahar ki taraf dekhata hai to uske chacha chachi bahar hi hai unhe vah ladka aavaj hi dene wala hota hai ki use kuchh ghante pahle ki hui ghatanaye yaad aajati hai ki kaise uske chacha ne use mara gadi ke andar baithNe ke liye aur chachai baat kar rahi thi use marane ke liye vah ladka dar gaya aur sochne laga halanki vah sochane layak tha to nahi parantu har kisi ke sochane ki kshamta to hoti hi hai vah ladka bhi apne jitana dimag tha utna sochne laga ki….. abb kya kiya jaye usane dekha ki vo log gadi ke dusari side the aur dusri saide koi nahi tha…….us ne check kiya to get lock nahi tha vah chupake se get kholkar dhire se bahar nikal gya aur dusari side ki or bhagane laga…….vah jitana tej Daud sakta tha utana tej Daud raha tha tabhi chach ki najar mere taraf chali gayi……..


Chachi- ************ pakdo use vah kamina bhag raha hai…….hamne socha tha ki yah behosh hai lekin yah to badi chalak nikala………...jaldi se pakdo bhagane na paye……………


Dono log ladake ko pakadane ke liye us or bhagane lage aur ladka bhi jangal ki or teji se bhagane laga……………



Vah bhagate bhagate ualnhe chakama dete dete vah pahuch gya jaha suresh and family ja rahi thi mandir ki taraf……

Sudha - suresh yahi kuchh der aaram bhi kar lete hai aur khana bh kha lete hai ……


Suresh- kuch nahi bolata hai vahi sadak ke kinare ve log apna sara saman rakha kar shiva ko vahi litakar kuchh duri par jakar aapna tent lagane lagte hai ………....

VaH ladaka vaha pahuch jata hai aur jakar Sweety ke pass chala jata hai jo pass hi me baithi hui khel rahi th aur kuchh hi duri par thi didi mujhe bacha lo vo log mujhe maar denge Sweety abhi kuchh bolane hi vali hoti hai ki tabhi use apaniammi ki chikh sunai deta hai………….





Sudha- nahi ………..shiva……

Aur teji se Us or bhagati hai jis or ek mota gande se dikhane vala aadami shiva ko god me liiye hue teji se Daud raha tha halanki suresh aur Sweety ko us ladke ka chehara dikhayi nahi de raha tha….


Vah Gunda teji se us Shiva ko lekar bhagata hai………

Yaha suresh aur Sweety nasamajh ho kar dekhe ja rahe the………..ki sudha ma ko kya ho gaya vah itani teji se vs aadami ke pichhe kyo bhag rahi hai………………..


Suresh- sudha are kya hua tum us aadami ke pichhe kyo ja rahi ho……….


Sudha- suresh jaldi pakdiye is aadami ko ye shiva ko lekar bhag raha hai…………


Suresh- lekin shiva to yaha hai Sweety ke paas ……….

Sudha Sweety ki or dekhati hai to uska demag hi hill jata hai……..


Sudha- suresh hamara shiva yaha hai to us aadmi ne kisi ko pakad kar le gaya…………


Suresh- tum kahi pagal to nahi ho gayi ho jab shiva hamare pass hai to vah kaise shiva ko le ha sakta hai…………..


(Huaa ye tha ki jab vah ladka Sweety ke pass gaya tabhi vaha us ladke ko dundhate hue vah aadami vaha aa gya aur uski najar shiva par padi to usne use vaha se utha liya kyoki shiva aur us ladke ka chehara ek jaisa tha)


Sudh-nahi suresh aap ne dekha ki nahi dekha lekin maine dekha vah ladka hu b hu shiva ki tarah hi tha………….


Sweety- kya baat karti ho mammi vah mera betu jaisa tha leki aisa kaise ho sakta hai…...mera betu to yaha hai mere pass…………….


Ladka kuchh nahi bolata hai darr ke mare vah chupchap se sabko dekhata hai...


Sudh- hame chalkar dekhana chahiye suresh baat kya hai………….


Tino log usi disha me chal dete hai jis disha me vah aadami ladke ko le gaya tha……...jald hi be log vah pahuch jaye hai aur ek ped se chhipakar dekhane lage yaha un sabki bate sunai de rahi thi…………….



Gounda- malik le aaya yah mandir ki tarf bhag raha tha………


Aadami- vaah kallu vah ye tumane bahut achha kiya vaise yah bhagata to bhi marta bhukhe lekin ham koi risk nahi lena chahte the……..


Aurat- kallu tumane jo kaam kiya hai uska inaam tumhe mil jayega……..aab iska sar dhad se alag kar do aur iske sar ko ek gift me pack karke mere jeth Thakur ************* singh ko bhet savrup de do…………………


Aadmi nahi ----------- tum ye kya karna chahti ho bhaisahab ko pata chala ki unke bete ka katl huaa hai to vah iska pata lagwaywnge aur usme kahi pata chal gya to…………


Aurat- ha ye maine socha hi nahi……….. kallu ise tum kato aur iske deh ke har ang ko dur dur tak le jakar gad do…………


Kallu- ji malkin…….jaisa aap kahe………


Aur jaise hi kallu bachhe ke gardan par talwar chalane ko hota hai ki ladaka boll padata hai chachi ma aap aisa kyo kar rahi ho maine aapka kya bigada hai aapko to mai apana ma hi manta hu…………


Aurat ye sun kar uske aakho me aashu aa jate hai lekin vah kuchh kar nahi pa rahi thi aisa lag raha tha ki koi usase yah sab karwa raha hai……..


Aurat- chilla kar kallu jaldi kar……..


Yaha ped ke piche (Sare log dhire dhire baat karte hai)


sweety- papa hame kuchh karna chahiye betu jaisa dikhane wala ladake ko ve log maar denge………..


Sudha-ha suresh jaldi se police ko phone kariye……………..


Suresh apna mobile nikalta hai……..


Suresh- oh….no….


Sudha- kya huaa…….


Suresh- phone me network hi nahi hai dekho tumhare me hai kaya ……………


Sudha apani mobile chek karti hai….nahi mere me bhi nahi hai……….


Suresh- abb kya kare ye log to nirdayi ulta se is bachhe maar denge……….abb to lagta hai ki hame hi aage aana padega…….tum log yahi chhipe rahna………lo shiva ko tum pakado


Abhi suresh yah baat kahakar aage bhadhane hi wala hota hai ki tabhi koi usaka haath pakad leta hai…………….

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