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RStar99

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yam puri ki ab kahani sunne ko milega or mamta bhi usko pati manne lgi hai behad sandar mindblowing superbbb speechless update...........
agle update ka beshabri se intejar hai bhai...........
keep posting bhai..........
waiting for next update...........
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ppa331

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Update no. 16(B)

Kahani aab tak:-.

Chaliye thik hai……...aur ha dhanyawad aapane jo hamari jaan bachaya……..sweety ne kaha……
Mai:- are usame thanks ki koi jarurat nahi maine aapki sahayata ki aur aapane hamari hisab barabar……….chalte hai …………..yah kahar mai vaha se dur hat gaya aur sweety gadi aage badha deti hai………………….. .................................................... ........................................................................................................................................................... Ek mahila:- padhariye rani sahiba aapka savagat hai…

Abb age:-

Are shobha abb aane bh do hamari bachi ko aaj lagata hai ki kushiya par khushiya aane wali hai hamare ghar bas ek aur mehaman aa jaye to ye ghar pura ho jayega………………

(Ye mahila thi shobha ji yani shiva ke badi chachi aur unke pati Mahesh ji yani Suresh ke bade bhai)

Sweety andar aati hai to mamata dikhai deti hai dono daud kar ek dusre ke gale lag jati hai

I miss you didi…...I really mis you……………sweety ne gale lagte huye kaha……….I also miss you my sweet si sweety…………….

Sobha:- aise to mere gale nahi lagi keval mere pair chhui jaise mai koi 70 saal ki budhiya hu……………

Sweety apani chachi ke gale lagte huye kahti hai aree chachi aap budhiya kaha hui hai aap to ham se bhi jawan hai……..

Chal chal jayada maska mat maar tu janti hai mai to majak kar rahi thi…………….

Lekin mai to majak nahi kar rahi thi……..

Koi ham logo se bhi milega bhai ham bhi hai sudha ne utarte huye kaha sath me Suresh bhi the…………..

Sweety daud kar jakar lag gayi apane ma ke gale aur rone lagi………………..

Are are meri rajkumari ko kya ho gaya aise ro rahi hai na ro beta chup ho ja……...sudha ne kaha……

Sweety rote huye nahi ma mai bahut buri hu mai in 12 salo me aapse milane tak nahi aayi phone tak nahi kiya………..mai yaha tak bhi nahi soch pai ki jo huaa usame kisi ki kya galti hai sab bhagya ka khel hai I am sorry mom mujhe maf kar do………..

Sudha ke bhi aakhe nam ho gayi……..kaun kahata hai ki tu dur thi thi ha tu to is dil ke bahut pass thi aur khabardar jo meri beti ko bura kaha to muh tod dungi tumahara samjhi………..

Sweety rote huye muh banakar kahti hai ha samjh gayi………….aur apne papa ke gale jakar lagati hai…...kaisa hai mera bachha ………….thik hu papa……………

Shuda:- sweety tu to ek dam badi ho gayi hai aur waha khati nahi thi kya jo itani patali ho gayi hai…………

Sonal…..mom kaha didi patali hui hai ek dam perfect to hai…….

Ha….ha…..samjhti hu kitana perfect hai……………

Vaise mai bhi hu yaha par……. mujhase bhi to koi milo………………..

Sweety dekhati ki kitchen a se ek behad hi khubsurat ladaki nikalti hai to sweety use dekhakar shock ho jati hai ki ye to Rudra ki patani yani meri sautan hai to kya isaka bhi janm ho chuka hai………

. Tabhi vah sweety ke pass aati hai aur hilate huye kahti hai kaha kho gayi meri bahan……….wapas nikal apani soch se mai yaha sach me hu Kanika teri menaka bua ki badi beti…………..(yaha batana chahunga ki Kanika ko bhi kuchh ya sab sachai pata hai pahale se hi ab kaise ye mujhe nahi pata lekin yah bhi shiva ko nahi pahchanti hai kyoki ise bhi chehara nahi yaad hai )

Kanika tu…….tu kab aayi……….sweety ne apane soch se bahar aate huye kaha …….

Abhi ye log bate hi kar rahe the ki darwaje ki bel bajti hai……….
Ab kaun aagaya aaj koi atithi day hai kiya……….minal ne kaha…

Tabhi uske sar par uski ma Sobha marti hai aur kahati hai chup besharam hardam ulta sulta bolati rahti hai ja Kanika darwaja khol to dekh kaun aaya hai………………………..

Tabhi bell jaldi bajane lagti hai………...ati hu ukhad doge kya aati hu itana……….kahate huye Kanika darwaja kholti hai aur dekhati hai ki ek 19-20 varsh ka ladka khada hai aur darwaje ke beel par usake hath the…….use dekhakar Kanika ne kaha……………….

Kanika- abb darwaje ke bell se hath hata lo aur bolo kisase kaam hai aur kya hai……………….

Vah kuchh nahi bolta hai ……….. kanika phir puchhati hai…………….phir vah koi jawab nahi deta hai

Kanika:- ai mistar jaban nahi hai kya mai puchh rahi hu kya kaam hai tumhe..thode gusse me bolati hai………..

Vah ladka andar jhakata hai to sudh aur Suresh samane hi sofe par baithe huye the aur sabhi vahi par the lekin kisika dhayan darwaje ki taraf nahi tha……. Abhi kanika kuchh bolane hi wali thi ki vah ladka bolata hai ……………. Ma……….

Kanika hairan ho jati hai lekin sudha ka dhyan darwaje par jati hai to vah ladaka apana haath hilata hai ki mai hu……………… Sudha dekhakar bol uthati hai ...............,.. shiva………..aur daud padati hai………………...ab sare logo ka dhayan darwaje ke tarf hoti hai…………...Suresh bhi shiva kahate huye aage badh jata hai…… Sweety mamata ki or dekhati hai to vah ha me sar hila deti hai………….dono ke aakho me aasu aa jate hai..

lekin baki log hairat se darwaje ki taraf dekhate hai…….. Kanika ka dhyan pichhe nahi tha…….vah gusse me bolati hai mai tumhe tumhari ma dikhati hu kya…………………. Tabhi Kanika ko said karte huye shiva ko jor se gale lagati huyi kahati hai ye tujhe nahi mujhe ma bol raha hai……...sudha ro rahi thi shiva bhi ro raha tha Suresh ke bhi aakho me aashu the kanika kabhi in ma beto ki or to kabhi sabhi ki or dekharahi thi tabhi Suresh bolata hai
aise kya dekha rahi hai ye shiva hai maine bataya tha na ki yah bhi aa raha hai………… Tab kanika ko yaad aata hai……….. (Yaha bata du ki sweety minal, aur sonal ka koi khas reaction nahi th kyoki vah pahle hi pahchan gayi thi)

Sudha:- kaha chala gaya tha hame us jangal me chodakar ha …… tujhe pata hai mai to jite ji mar jati agar tujhe kuchh ho jata to bol kaha chala gaya tha ha …………. Bolata kyo nahi………….are bol na…chup kyo khada hai……………

Kaise bolega vah jab tumhi bina sas liye sawal par sawal kiye ja rahi ho aur darwaje par khada karke hi sari bate puchh logi kya andar to aane do pata nahi kya huaa hoga isake sath…….. Suresh ne kaha….

Kya huaa tha Suresh tum logo ne koi baat hamse chhupai ho na ………..Mahesh ji ne puchh Suresh se……….

Nahi bhaiya kuchh nahi chhupaya hai maine……….Suresh me hakalate huye kaha……..vah to jab ham aa rahe the to yah pata nahi kaha chala gaya tha………

Sudha shiva ko andar leke aati hai aur sofe par baitha deti hai………..

Mahesh phir bolata hai ……….. mujhe pagal samjh rakha hai kya aagar ye baat hoti to tumlog ise liye bagair nahi aate aur sudha aise nahi karti ab sab kuchh sach sach batao tum logo ko meri kasam hai………….

Sudha aur Suresh kasam sunkar niruttar ho jate hai aur suru se aant tak sari ghatano ko batate hai jo bi aate vakt huaa tha……….jise sunakar sabhi ke aakhe nam ho jati hai aur sweety aur sari bahane aakar shiva ke hath pair sab chek karne lagati hai ki kahi chot vot to nahi aayi ise ………… lekin sonal nahi aati hai vah apane vicharo me hi kho jati hai abb kya soch rahi thi aage pata chalega…………

Shiva itana pyar dekhakar usake aakho se pani girane lagati hai sweety ki najar jab shiva ke chehare par padati hai to sabko hatane lagti hai aur puchati hai jyada dard ho raha hai bata kaha lagi hai…………………

Shiva sweety ke muh se jab ye sunta hai to usake sabr ka bandh toot jata hai aur sabko hatate huye sweety ke gale lag jata hai aur jor jor se dur fut kar bachho jase lipat kar rone lagata hai sweety bhi rone lagati hai………..

Kahani jari rahegi.......................................
next update 16(c)...................
Bahut hi emotional update hai aur bahut hi jabjast tarike se aapane family darama ko dikhaya hai sandar speechless update hai bhai
 

ppa331

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Update no.16(C)

Kahani aab tak.


itana pyar dekhakar usake aakho se pani girane lagati hai sweety ki najar jab shiva ke chehare par padati hai to sabko hatane lagti hai aur puchati hai jyada dard ho raha hai bata kaha lagi hai…………………

Shiva sweety ke muh se jab ye sunta hai to usake sabr ka bandh toot jata hai aur sabko hatate huye sweety ke gale lag jata hai aur jor jor se dur fut kar bachho jase lipat kar rone lagata hai sweety bhi rone lagati hai………..

Abb aage:-
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Vaha sabhi upasthit logo ke aakhe pahale se jo nam thi unake se pani girane lagata hai…………………..

Sweety shiva ke sar par pyar se hath fer rahi thi aur shiva ko chup kara rahi thi lekin khud hi roye ja rahi thi ……………….

Sudha aur Suresh ek dusare ko dekhate hai unke aakho me khushi ke aasu the…………….

Mahesh mahaul ko dekhate huye kahata hai beta tere bade papa bhi hai unke kaleje ko thandak nahi pahuchayega……………….. shiva apane aashu pochate huye bade papa kahate huye unke gale lag jata hai………..Mahesh ke mukh se santusthi ke aah nikalti hai jaise varsho ke pyase Ko Pani dene ke baad sukun ki anubhuti ho gayi ho………….. unke aakho se bhi do char moti tapak hi jate hai…………...ve shiva ko jor se gale lagate hai jaise varsho ki pyas bujha rahe ho………………….

Sobha bolati hai…..kya mere bete ko mujhase nahi milane dege ji………………….

Mahesh ji bolate hai ha…...ha…..ha….milo apane bete se mai kaha rok raha hu…..

Chhodenge tab to milungi usase………..

Ve shiva ko chhodate hai……….to shobha ne use apane gale lagate huye kaha hame maf karde beta tere dada ji ki maut ke karan tujhe manakar ham tujhe unka doshi manae lage leki ma ji jab antim samay me hame kuchh bate batayi tab jake hame apani bhul ka ahsas huaa…….hame maf karde beta maf kar de aur kas kar shiva ko gale laga leti hai aur rone lagati hai………………….

Nahi badi ma aap kyo ro rahi hai mai tha hi aisa ki koisi ko mujhapar hi sak hota aap mafi mat mangiye……………….kisi ki koi galti nahi hai yahi mere bhagya me tha …………….

Shobha pyar se shiva ke mathe ko chumati hai…….mera pyara beta kitana smajhdar ho gaya hai………ruk baith tere liye pani leke aati hu…………….siva jab baithane ko hota hai to minal aakar uasase lipat jati hai aur ek side se minal bhi aur rote huye kahati hai bhaiya sabse mil liya lekin hase nahi mile kya hame bhul gaye ho ham aapako yaad nahi ki aapki do chhoti bahane bhi hai………ha aur ek buaa ki ladaki jo tumahari didi lagati hai pichhe se kanika aakar lipatati hai aur aise kahati hai ki sabki rote huye hasi nikal jati hai……………

Shiva kahata hai aap sabko kaise bhi sakta hu me princesses aur meri pyari didi ko ha batao bhala ye bhi koi bhulane wali chij hai।

Matalb ham sab ko bhi gaya tha tu tujhe keval apani chhoti bahane hi yaad thi ……….sweety ne gussa dikhate huye kaha jisame ha me ha mamta ne mila diya …….abb to shiva ki hawa tight ho gayi va jaldi me hadbadate huye ka ……. N…..n….hi didi aisi koi baat nahi hai…..

Tab aap hamse jhuth bol rahe hai ha…….minal ne apane kamar par hath rakhate huye kaha……..

Maine aisa kab kaha meri pari ko ki mai use bhool gaya hu……….tab aap mujhe bhul gaye the ……...sonal ne bhi kaha……..


Nahi meri gudiya tu koi bhulane wali chij hai………..tab kanika abhi bhi pichhe se gale lagaye huye aur sat gayi aur usake kandhe par sar rakhate huye kahti hai aur mai………….


Tabhi Sobha ki aawaj sabko sunayi deti hai kisi ko nahi bhula hai mera beta samjhe tum sab abb chodo ise aaram karane do ise aate hi ise ek to rula diya upar se pareshan kar rahi hai…...le beta pani pi aur minal ja apna kamra dikha bhai ko aur tu sonal ke kamre me shift ho ja vase bhi tu sonal ke sath hi to rahti hai……………………
.mai nahi jane wali is gittar devi ke pass jab bhi nind aati hai to inka gotta nikal aata hai mai sweety didi ke pass rahungi. ……….(dosto aab aap log samjh gaye honge ki sonal kya soch rahi thi agar nahi samjhe to aage aur bhi clear hoga thoda wait karo)


Phir sabse bolati hai ki tum sab bhi jao aur aaram karo dinner par milte hai………...sabhi log apane kamre me chale jate hi…………….

Siva minal ke kamre me chala jata hai aur bet par let jata hai aur pichhali bato ko yad karne lagta hai ……………..

Sweety bhi apana room me sara saman jamm deti hai usake sath me mamta bhi thi…………

Mamta :- chal aab bata kyo tu delhi aayi…….

Didi abhi nahi raat ko abhi aap aaram karo mai shiva se milke aati hai …………….sweety ne baat talte huye kaha………………..

Ha ….bhai aab apne pati ke aage kisaki Suniti tum jao milkar pyar bhari baat kar lo leki ye mat bhulana ki aur bhi kai hai… ……..mamta ne maje lete huye sweety ko chidaya….


Ha mujhe pata hai……..agar aapka bhi. Man hai to aap bhi chal sakti hai aakhi aap bhi to unaki patni jo hai…...sweety ne jawab di ya aur bina jawab sune chal deti hai shiva ke kamre me ………………

Aab to milungi hi didi nahi patani banke kyoki mujhe pata chal gaya hai ki mujhe usase payar hai ye baat use khone ke baad pata chali hai…….abb usase dur bhi to nahi raha jayega…….mamata ne bed par letate huye takiya ko apane aagosh me lete huye kaha……….

Minal kanika dono sonal ke room me bed par lete huye the………..

Sweety shiva wale darwaze ko nok karti hai to darwaja shiva khilata hai to dekhata hai samne sweety didi khadi hai vah unhe rasta dete huye kahta hai aaiye didi…………

Sweety andar aati hai aur bed par baith jati hai…………….aur ek tak shiva ke chehare ko niharane lagati hai aur usame kho si jati hai……………...



Aise dekahte huye sweety ko shiva usase puchhata hai aise kya dekh rahi ho didi……….

Sweety ne apani soch se bahar nikalte huye kahti hai vaha kaha khada hai aa mere pass baith…………

Shiva sweety ke pas baith jata hai aur sweety ke god me apana sar rakhakar let jata hai………………….

Sweety uske sar par hath pyar se ferate huye kahti hai kya hua tha tere sath jangal me ……..

Kuch nahi di aap paresahn kyo ho rahi hai mai thik to huna ……..


Maine jo puchha hai usaka sahi sahi jawab de tujhe meri kasam hai agar jhuth bola to samjha aab to sach bolega…………

Abb to bhagwan bhi aajaye aur kahe ki mat bata lekin mai tab bhi aapko bataunga………...suniye………………………………….. … … … …
Wah aab maja aayega is kahani me kyoki mamta to apane aap ko bibi man hi chuki hai aur jaha tak mujhe lag raha hai to sweety bhi maan hi chuki hai .........

Vaise lagta hai jald yamlok me kya huaa shiva ke sath yah pata lagane wala hai


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RStar99

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Bahut hi emotional update hai aur bahut hi jabjast tarike se aapane family darama ko dikhaya hai sandar speechless update hai bhai
Wah aab maja aayega is kahani me kyoki mamta to apane aap ko bibi man hi chuki hai aur jaha tak mujhe lag raha hai to sweety bhi maan hi chuki hai .........

Vaise lagta hai jald yamlok me kya huaa shiva ke sath yah pata lagane wala hai


Lajwab ati sundar speech less update bro
Wah aab maja aayega is kahani me kyoki mamta to apane aap ko bibi man hi chuki hai aur jaha tak mujhe lag raha hai to sweety bhi maan hi chuki hai .........

Vaise lagta hai jald yamlok me kya huaa shiva ke sath yah pata lagane wala hai


Lajwab ati sundar speech less update bro
Thanks bro
 

Xabhi

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Update no. 16(B)

Kahani aab tak:-.

Chaliye thik hai……...aur ha dhanyawad aapane jo hamari jaan bachaya……..sweety ne kaha……
Mai:- are usame thanks ki koi jarurat nahi maine aapki sahayata ki aur aapane hamari hisab barabar……….chalte hai …………..yah kahar mai vaha se dur hat gaya aur sweety gadi aage badha deti hai………………….. .................................................... ........................................................................................................................................................... Ek mahila:- padhariye rani sahiba aapka savagat hai…

Abb age:-

Are shobha abb aane bh do hamari bachi ko aaj lagata hai ki kushiya par khushiya aane wali hai hamare ghar bas ek aur mehaman aa jaye to ye ghar pura ho jayega………………

(Ye mahila thi shobha ji yani shiva ke badi chachi aur unke pati Mahesh ji yani Suresh ke bade bhai)

Sweety andar aati hai to mamata dikhai deti hai dono daud kar ek dusre ke gale lag jati hai

I miss you didi…...I really mis you……………sweety ne gale lagte huye kaha……….I also miss you my sweet si sweety…………….

Sobha:- aise to mere gale nahi lagi keval mere pair chhui jaise mai koi 70 saal ki budhiya hu……………

Sweety apani chachi ke gale lagte huye kahti hai aree chachi aap budhiya kaha hui hai aap to ham se bhi jawan hai……..

Chal chal jayada maska mat maar tu janti hai mai to majak kar rahi thi…………….

Lekin mai to majak nahi kar rahi thi……..

Koi ham logo se bhi milega bhai ham bhi hai sudha ne utarte huye kaha sath me Suresh bhi the…………..

Sweety daud kar jakar lag gayi apane ma ke gale aur rone lagi………………..

Are are meri rajkumari ko kya ho gaya aise ro rahi hai na ro beta chup ho ja……...sudha ne kaha……

Sweety rote huye nahi ma mai bahut buri hu mai in 12 salo me aapse milane tak nahi aayi phone tak nahi kiya………..mai yaha tak bhi nahi soch pai ki jo huaa usame kisi ki kya galti hai sab bhagya ka khel hai I am sorry mom mujhe maf kar do………..

Sudha ke bhi aakhe nam ho gayi……..kaun kahata hai ki tu dur thi thi ha tu to is dil ke bahut pass thi aur khabardar jo meri beti ko bura kaha to muh tod dungi tumahara samjhi………..

Sweety rote huye muh banakar kahti hai ha samjh gayi………….aur apne papa ke gale jakar lagati hai…...kaisa hai mera bachha ………….thik hu papa……………

Shuda:- sweety tu to ek dam badi ho gayi hai aur waha khati nahi thi kya jo itani patali ho gayi hai…………

Sonal…..mom kaha didi patali hui hai ek dam perfect to hai…….

Ha….ha…..samjhti hu kitana perfect hai……………

Vaise mai bhi hu yaha par……. mujhase bhi to koi milo………………..

Sweety dekhati ki kitchen a se ek behad hi khubsurat ladaki nikalti hai to sweety use dekhakar shock ho jati hai ki ye to Rudra ki patani yani meri sautan hai to kya isaka bhi janm ho chuka hai………

. Tabhi vah sweety ke pass aati hai aur hilate huye kahti hai kaha kho gayi meri bahan……….wapas nikal apani soch se mai yaha sach me hu Kanika teri menaka bua ki badi beti…………..(yaha batana chahunga ki Kanika ko bhi kuchh ya sab sachai pata hai pahale se hi ab kaise ye mujhe nahi pata lekin yah bhi shiva ko nahi pahchanti hai kyoki ise bhi chehara nahi yaad hai )

Kanika tu…….tu kab aayi……….sweety ne apane soch se bahar aate huye kaha …….

Abhi ye log bate hi kar rahe the ki darwaje ki bel bajti hai……….
Ab kaun aagaya aaj koi atithi day hai kiya……….minal ne kaha…

Tabhi uske sar par uski ma Sobha marti hai aur kahati hai chup besharam hardam ulta sulta bolati rahti hai ja Kanika darwaja khol to dekh kaun aaya hai………………………..

Tabhi bell jaldi bajane lagti hai………...ati hu ukhad doge kya aati hu itana……….kahate huye Kanika darwaja kholti hai aur dekhati hai ki ek 19-20 varsh ka ladka khada hai aur darwaje ke beel par usake hath the…….use dekhakar Kanika ne kaha……………….

Kanika- abb darwaje ke bell se hath hata lo aur bolo kisase kaam hai aur kya hai……………….

Vah kuchh nahi bolta hai ……….. kanika phir puchhati hai…………….phir vah koi jawab nahi deta hai

Kanika:- ai mistar jaban nahi hai kya mai puchh rahi hu kya kaam hai tumhe..thode gusse me bolati hai………..

Vah ladka andar jhakata hai to sudh aur Suresh samane hi sofe par baithe huye the aur sabhi vahi par the lekin kisika dhayan darwaje ki taraf nahi tha……. Abhi kanika kuchh bolane hi wali thi ki vah ladka bolata hai ……………. Ma……….

Kanika hairan ho jati hai lekin sudha ka dhyan darwaje par jati hai to vah ladaka apana haath hilata hai ki mai hu……………… Sudha dekhakar bol uthati hai ...............,.. shiva………..aur daud padati hai………………...ab sare logo ka dhayan darwaje ke tarf hoti hai…………...Suresh bhi shiva kahate huye aage badh jata hai…… Sweety mamata ki or dekhati hai to vah ha me sar hila deti hai………….dono ke aakho me aasu aa jate hai..

lekin baki log hairat se darwaje ki taraf dekhate hai…….. Kanika ka dhyan pichhe nahi tha…….vah gusse me bolati hai mai tumhe tumhari ma dikhati hu kya…………………. Tabhi Kanika ko said karte huye shiva ko jor se gale lagati huyi kahati hai ye tujhe nahi mujhe ma bol raha hai……...sudha ro rahi thi shiva bhi ro raha tha Suresh ke bhi aakho me aashu the kanika kabhi in ma beto ki or to kabhi sabhi ki or dekharahi thi tabhi Suresh bolata hai
aise kya dekha rahi hai ye shiva hai maine bataya tha na ki yah bhi aa raha hai………… Tab kanika ko yaad aata hai……….. (Yaha bata du ki sweety minal, aur sonal ka koi khas reaction nahi th kyoki vah pahle hi pahchan gayi thi)

Sudha:- kaha chala gaya tha hame us jangal me chodakar ha …… tujhe pata hai mai to jite ji mar jati agar tujhe kuchh ho jata to bol kaha chala gaya tha ha …………. Bolata kyo nahi………….are bol na…chup kyo khada hai……………

Kaise bolega vah jab tumhi bina sas liye sawal par sawal kiye ja rahi ho aur darwaje par khada karke hi sari bate puchh logi kya andar to aane do pata nahi kya huaa hoga isake sath…….. Suresh ne kaha….

Kya huaa tha Suresh tum logo ne koi baat hamse chhupai ho na ………..Mahesh ji ne puchh Suresh se……….

Nahi bhaiya kuchh nahi chhupaya hai maine……….Suresh me hakalate huye kaha……..vah to jab ham aa rahe the to yah pata nahi kaha chala gaya tha………

Sudha shiva ko andar leke aati hai aur sofe par baitha deti hai………..

Mahesh phir bolata hai ……….. mujhe pagal samjh rakha hai kya aagar ye baat hoti to tumlog ise liye bagair nahi aate aur sudha aise nahi karti ab sab kuchh sach sach batao tum logo ko meri kasam hai………….

Sudha aur Suresh kasam sunkar niruttar ho jate hai aur suru se aant tak sari ghatano ko batate hai jo bi aate vakt huaa tha……….jise sunakar sabhi ke aakhe nam ho jati hai aur sweety aur sari bahane aakar shiva ke hath pair sab chek karne lagati hai ki kahi chot vot to nahi aayi ise ………… lekin sonal nahi aati hai vah apane vicharo me hi kho jati hai abb kya soch rahi thi aage pata chalega…………

Shiva itana pyar dekhakar usake aakho se pani girane lagati hai sweety ki najar jab shiva ke chehare par padati hai to sabko hatane lagti hai aur puchati hai jyada dard ho raha hai bata kaha lagi hai…………………

Shiva sweety ke muh se jab ye sunta hai to usake sabr ka bandh toot jata hai aur sabko hatate huye sweety ke gale lag jata hai aur jor jor se dur fut kar bachho jase lipat kar rone lagata hai sweety bhi rone lagati hai………..

Kahani jari rahegi.......................................
next update 16(c)...................
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Kahani aab tak.


itana pyar dekhakar usake aakho se pani girane lagati hai sweety ki najar jab shiva ke chehare par padati hai to sabko hatane lagti hai aur puchati hai jyada dard ho raha hai bata kaha lagi hai…………………

Shiva sweety ke muh se jab ye sunta hai to usake sabr ka bandh toot jata hai aur sabko hatate huye sweety ke gale lag jata hai aur jor jor se dur fut kar bachho jase lipat kar rone lagata hai sweety bhi rone lagati hai………..

Abb aage:-
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Vaha sabhi upasthit logo ke aakhe pahale se jo nam thi unake se pani girane lagata hai…………………..

Sweety shiva ke sar par pyar se hath fer rahi thi aur shiva ko chup kara rahi thi lekin khud hi roye ja rahi thi ……………….

Sudha aur Suresh ek dusare ko dekhate hai unke aakho me khushi ke aasu the…………….

Mahesh mahaul ko dekhate huye kahata hai beta tere bade papa bhi hai unke kaleje ko thandak nahi pahuchayega……………….. shiva apane aashu pochate huye bade papa kahate huye unke gale lag jata hai………..Mahesh ke mukh se santusthi ke aah nikalti hai jaise varsho ke pyase Ko Pani dene ke baad sukun ki anubhuti ho gayi ho………….. unke aakho se bhi do char moti tapak hi jate hai…………...ve shiva ko jor se gale lagate hai jaise varsho ki pyas bujha rahe ho………………….

Sobha bolati hai…..kya mere bete ko mujhase nahi milane dege ji………………….

Mahesh ji bolate hai ha…...ha…..ha….milo apane bete se mai kaha rok raha hu…..

Chhodenge tab to milungi usase………..

Ve shiva ko chhodate hai……….to shobha ne use apane gale lagate huye kaha hame maf karde beta tere dada ji ki maut ke karan tujhe manakar ham tujhe unka doshi manae lage leki ma ji jab antim samay me hame kuchh bate batayi tab jake hame apani bhul ka ahsas huaa…….hame maf karde beta maf kar de aur kas kar shiva ko gale laga leti hai aur rone lagati hai………………….

Nahi badi ma aap kyo ro rahi hai mai tha hi aisa ki koisi ko mujhapar hi sak hota aap mafi mat mangiye……………….kisi ki koi galti nahi hai yahi mere bhagya me tha …………….

Shobha pyar se shiva ke mathe ko chumati hai…….mera pyara beta kitana smajhdar ho gaya hai………ruk baith tere liye pani leke aati hu…………….siva jab baithane ko hota hai to minal aakar uasase lipat jati hai aur ek side se minal bhi aur rote huye kahati hai bhaiya sabse mil liya lekin hase nahi mile kya hame bhul gaye ho ham aapako yaad nahi ki aapki do chhoti bahane bhi hai………ha aur ek buaa ki ladaki jo tumahari didi lagati hai pichhe se kanika aakar lipatati hai aur aise kahati hai ki sabki rote huye hasi nikal jati hai……………

Shiva kahata hai aap sabko kaise bhi sakta hu me princesses aur meri pyari didi ko ha batao bhala ye bhi koi bhulane wali chij hai।

Matalb ham sab ko bhi gaya tha tu tujhe keval apani chhoti bahane hi yaad thi ……….sweety ne gussa dikhate huye kaha jisame ha me ha mamta ne mila diya …….abb to shiva ki hawa tight ho gayi va jaldi me hadbadate huye ka ……. N…..n….hi didi aisi koi baat nahi hai…..

Tab aap hamse jhuth bol rahe hai ha…….minal ne apane kamar par hath rakhate huye kaha……..

Maine aisa kab kaha meri pari ko ki mai use bhool gaya hu……….tab aap mujhe bhul gaye the ……...sonal ne bhi kaha……..


Nahi meri gudiya tu koi bhulane wali chij hai………..tab kanika abhi bhi pichhe se gale lagaye huye aur sat gayi aur usake kandhe par sar rakhate huye kahti hai aur mai………….


Tabhi Sobha ki aawaj sabko sunayi deti hai kisi ko nahi bhula hai mera beta samjhe tum sab abb chodo ise aaram karane do ise aate hi ise ek to rula diya upar se pareshan kar rahi hai…...le beta pani pi aur minal ja apna kamra dikha bhai ko aur tu sonal ke kamre me shift ho ja vase bhi tu sonal ke sath hi to rahti hai……………………
.mai nahi jane wali is gittar devi ke pass jab bhi nind aati hai to inka gotta nikal aata hai mai sweety didi ke pass rahungi. ……….(dosto aab aap log samjh gaye honge ki sonal kya soch rahi thi agar nahi samjhe to aage aur bhi clear hoga thoda wait karo)


Phir sabse bolati hai ki tum sab bhi jao aur aaram karo dinner par milte hai………...sabhi log apane kamre me chale jate hi…………….

Siva minal ke kamre me chala jata hai aur bet par let jata hai aur pichhali bato ko yad karne lagta hai ……………..

Sweety bhi apana room me sara saman jamm deti hai usake sath me mamta bhi thi…………

Mamta :- chal aab bata kyo tu delhi aayi…….

Didi abhi nahi raat ko abhi aap aaram karo mai shiva se milke aati hai …………….sweety ne baat talte huye kaha………………..

Ha ….bhai aab apne pati ke aage kisaki Suniti tum jao milkar pyar bhari baat kar lo leki ye mat bhulana ki aur bhi kai hai… ……..mamta ne maje lete huye sweety ko chidaya….


Ha mujhe pata hai……..agar aapka bhi. Man hai to aap bhi chal sakti hai aakhi aap bhi to unaki patni jo hai…...sweety ne jawab di ya aur bina jawab sune chal deti hai shiva ke kamre me ………………

Aab to milungi hi didi nahi patani banke kyoki mujhe pata chal gaya hai ki mujhe usase payar hai ye baat use khone ke baad pata chali hai…….abb usase dur bhi to nahi raha jayega…….mamata ne bed par letate huye takiya ko apane aagosh me lete huye kaha……….

Minal kanika dono sonal ke room me bed par lete huye the………..

Sweety shiva wale darwaze ko nok karti hai to darwaja shiva khilata hai to dekhata hai samne sweety didi khadi hai vah unhe rasta dete huye kahta hai aaiye didi…………

Sweety andar aati hai aur bed par baith jati hai…………….aur ek tak shiva ke chehare ko niharane lagati hai aur usame kho si jati hai……………...



Aise dekahte huye sweety ko shiva usase puchhata hai aise kya dekh rahi ho didi……….

Sweety ne apani soch se bahar nikalte huye kahti hai vaha kaha khada hai aa mere pass baith…………

Shiva sweety ke pas baith jata hai aur sweety ke god me apana sar rakhakar let jata hai………………….

Sweety uske sar par hath pyar se ferate huye kahti hai kya hua tha tere sath jangal me ……..

Kuch nahi di aap paresahn kyo ho rahi hai mai thik to huna ……..


Maine jo puchha hai usaka sahi sahi jawab de tujhe meri kasam hai agar jhuth bola to samjha aab to sach bolega…………

Abb to bhagwan bhi aajaye aur kahe ki mat bata lekin mai tab bhi aapko bataunga………...suniye………………………………….. … … … …
Ye to un sadhu baba ki bato se pta Chal hi gya tha ki sabhi ladkiyo ki mang Apne hero ke hatho bharva diya tha bachpan me hi to sb Apne Apne room me aram karne chali gyi hai Sweety Shiva se milne aayi hai or usse Apni kasam dekr sari sacchai btane ko kaha hai dekhte hai kya btata hai apna Shiva Sweety ko...
Superb update bhai jabarjast sandar
 
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Sweety delhi ke airport par pahuch chuki thi vaha use lene minal aur sona1l aayi thi…………………


Welcome my sweet si sweety didi…………….sonal ne kaha…………... welcome to our house didi…………..minal ne kaha…………………………


Thank you my sweet angel's………………….bhai nahi aaye ya phir mamta didi papa chacha……………sweety ne jawab dete huye puchh ……


Minal ne kaha…………...nahi didi bhaya 5 dino se out 9f country hai aur papa chacha ke aane ki khusi me nahi aaye intane din baad jo mile hai dono bhai………………………………..


Chalo koi baat nahi……..sweety ne kaha………………….


. sara samaan gadi me rakhakar chal dete


Gadi chalne se kuchh der baad sweety ne side mirror me dekha to ek kali car unke pichhe pichhe aa rahi hai unki gadi jis jis tarf ja rahi thi us us tarf ja rahi thi ye dekhakar Sweety ne puchh………….


Achha minal...bade chacha ne tum logo ke liye bodyguard rakhe hai kya…………….


Minal ne jawab diya…...nahi didi…..


To fir ye gadi jisaki hai jo hamare pichhe pichhe aa rahi hai……………….sweety ne usare se dikhate hauye kaha…………..


Minal aur sonal ne jab mirror me gadi ko dekha to be thoda dar gayi kyoki be is gadi ko bahut achhi tarah se pahchanti thi………………………..


Sonal……….ye hamara pichha kyo kar raha hai………….


Pichha…….ye kaun hai sonal………….


Sonal……….didi ye yaha ke mla ke beta hai school me hame pareshan karata rahata hai…..jab ham school jate hai to agar ham salwar suit me jate hai to ye chhote chhote kapade pahan ke aane ko bolata hai………….agar nahi jaye to ye kisi na kisi bahane use kharab kar deta hai………………


To tum logo ne bhaiya ya phir chacha se kyo nahi kaha ve log in kaise ladako ko achhi tarah se sidha kar dete……..sweety ne kaha………


Didi hamne papa se kaha to ve kahate hai ki mai principal se baat kar lenge aur bhaiya se kahte hai to kahate hai ki ve aisa react karte hai ki jase unhe hamse koi lena dena hi nahi hai……………..minal ne kaha….


Sweety gadi se nikalti hai aur us hadi ke pass jakar kahahti hai bhaiya jara gadi side kar lenge……………….driver sweety ki baat ko sunkar bhi ansuna kar deta hai …………. Sweety phir se request kaerti hai…………..lekin is baar bhi koi jawab nahi milta hai………..



Abhi ye log bate hi kar rahe the ki inke aage ek gadi aakar ruk jati hai jisase inhe bhi apani gadi ka brek marana padata hai………………………….pichhe wali gadi bhi rook jati hai aur uska get khulata hai aur usame se nikalta hai mla ka beta aur aage wali gadi se niklata hai mla…………...aur sweety aur sonal minal bhi nikalete hai……………..sweety ne dono se kaha ki tum log chup rahana mai baat karti hoon………..


sweety :- kaun ho tum log aur kya chahte ho aur is tarah hamara rasta rokane ka kya matalab hai...................


Mla ka beta jisaka naam mantu tha aur usake pita ka naam Deshraj hai………………


Mai hu is areya aur tumahare Shahr revatiganj ke mla ka beta mantu aur ye hai jo mere jayaj najayaj mang ko pura karane waale mla sahab desharaj ji hai jo ki mere pita sree hai…………………….mantu ne jawab diya…………..aur kuchh janana hai………


Desharaj ne bola…….dekho tum jo bhi ho hame tumse nahi tumhare pichhe jo ye ladaki tumne kya naam bataya beta…..mmmmmmmmmm…….ha sonal se apane bete se sadi karne ke liye baat karani hai…………….


Sadi ………… to jakar hamare gharwalo se baat kijiye is tarah se rasta rokakar baat karane ka kya matalb hai ………..sweety ne kaha……..


Desharaj dekho mera manana hai ki is aaj ke jamane me jab tak ladaka ladaki taiyar nahi honge to unke gharwalo se baat karane se kya fayad…………………..


Abhi sweety kuchh bolane wali thi ki sonal ne kaha………..aap se kisane kaha ki mai ise yani aapke bete se pyar karti hu…………


Desharaj……...beta aaj nahi karti ho to sadi ke bad ho jayega mai to yaha sirf ye kahne aaya tha ki mai tumhare ghar kal aane wala hu aur tumse Jo bhi kahu tum hame ha hi kahana nahi to mantu isake bahan ko utha le kagar ye na kahe to isake ghar me ho ne wali beijjati ki kimat isaki bahan chukayegi………………………..



Papa aab ye nahi mujhe ye chahiye kyoki isake aage to ye bhi fell hai sweety ki or sldekhate huye kaha…………….


Desharaj……..to abb ghar jaana kya hai le chal teeno ko tujhe jisase sadi karni hai kar lena bachi do ko ham apani parashanal banayenge………..



Aur mujhe mla sahab mujhe bhi to kuchh banaiye………...............ek anjan aawaj aati hai……….


Sare log jis taraf se aawaj aaya tha us or dekhate hai……………...to vaha ek ladaka khada tha blach t shirt aur upar ek shart pahana huaa tha jisake batan khula tha niche maching jemas bhi tha…..vah apaneuh par ek kaale rang ka scarf banadha huaa tha………..bole to ek dam pura hero jaisa dikha raha tha dekhane me to aisa lag raha tha ki pura…...abb kya batau bas ye janlo ki ladakiyo ko jaisa rajkumaar chahiye vah aisa hi kuchh dikh Raha tha…………………………….


Mantu…...aree bhai abb tum kaun ho aur yaha herogiri dikhane aaya ho chale jaooo nahi to phir tumhare ma ki ek beta aur tumhare hot bahan jo tumhari tarah hi hogi vah binaa bhai ke ho jayegi……….


Mask man:- beta tumne mujhe hero kahakar mera beijjati kar rahe ho kyoki mai sirf hero hi nahi villan bhiai hi hu…………………………….Aur ha…


beta galtikar rahe ho ladki ko chhed kar bhari .......

Aur tum chudwaoge aur chodenge ham ma tumhari...............


Desharaj;- bahut bol rahe ho beta lagata hai ki tumhe jinda hi nahi rahana hai maroo sale ko dekha kya raho ye baat sunate hi saree gunde mask man ki or badhane lagte hai …….


Mask man :- mai kahta hu ki abhi bhi samay hai rook jaao nahi to mai jo bhi kahata hu vahi karta hu maine kaha hai ki tumahari ma chodenge to chodenge abb tumhe visavas nahi hai to mai kya kar sakta hu aab. Tumhe visavas dilane ke liye in sabko bhi pelana padega…


. Akhir hai kaun tu aur inko kyo bacha raha hai kya risata hai inke sath ……….Deshraj ne puchha


Mask man :- nice question ……...mera jawab hai .pata nahi lekin kuchh to hai mai tumhe itana bata deta hu ki jaha bhi galat kaam honge vaha mai hounga .............samjhe ki nahi samjhe…………..


Mantu :- ham to samjh gaye lekin tum nahi samjhe dekh kya rahe ho maro sale ko aur le chalo inko

Abhi gunde aage badhane wale the ki mask man pahuch jata hai unke pas aur lagata hai dhone sare gunde jamin par pade huye hote hai aur bachate hai bap bete ….. vah kahata hai ………...bete. Ye meri pahali fight thi to dicount de raha hu lekin agali bar chodunga nahi …………….samjhe ki nahi samjhe

Deshraj darte huye puchata hai kaun ho tum tumhara asali naam kya hai ……………..


Kyo naam pata jankar apani beti se meri sadi karayega ………...mask man bola ....... Naam janana hai to tumhare ghar me jo tv lagi hai usame dekhate rahana kahi na kahi mera naam pata chal hi jayega ........ Abb nikalo yaha se nahi to phir......


Ye sunte hi dono baap bete ye kahate huye nikal jate hai ki dekha lenge tumhe aur inko ………….


Mask man sweety and bahano ke paas aata hai jo ek tak use hi Nihar rahi thi………..pass aakar unhe hosh me pata hai uthe mallikao free ka show khatm ho gya hai.............


Ye sunakar teeno bahane hanada jati hai phir sweety apane aap ko sambhalte huye kahati hai.... Abb to apna mask hata lijiye ........


Mask man ......... Agar hata liya to aap behosh na ho jaye mujhe dekhkar…………...itana handsome jo hu


O ho apani tarif apane muh se achha hai……..vai aapka naaam kya hai ……..aisa lag raha hai ki mai aapko janti hu ………. Minal ne pucha.


Ye janane wali baat sunakr mask man ghabara jaata hai lekin apane aap ko sambhalte huye ha janti hongi kahi mai aapke sapno me to nahi aata hu roj aapka rajkumaar banke …………


Nice joks ......... Sonal ne kaha…….vaise aapne bataya nahi ki aapka naam kya hai aur ye mask kyo nahi hata rahe hai …………

Aur ye itani achhi righat karna kaha se sikha ........


Ek aas me iatane sawal jarur aap inme se sabase chhoti hongi to mera jabab hai mera naam hai............ Vaise mera naam jankar kya karana hai aapko..... Chehara hi dikha deta hu ............... Ye kahakr usane apna mask hata deta hai........


Use dekhkar sonal to dekhate hi rah jati hai.........


Sweety puchati hai abb chehara to dikha diya naam bhi bata do .............


Apane naam puchh to bata deta hu mera naam shiva hai aur mai yaha naya hu delhi me aur mai revatiganj me mera ghar hai vaise aap sabka naam kya hai .............


Naam sunakr teeno kuchh sochane lagti hai phir minal puchati hai aap kaha se aaye hai ……….


Ji mai himanchal Pradesh ke simala jile ke rampur gav se aaya hu…(ji ha yah mai tha aap sochenge ki mai to mar gya aur kya huaa yam lok me to mai yahi kahunga ki rooko jara sab pata chalega )..............


Ye sunte hi teeno aachary aur hairani se dekhati hai abhi minal kuchh bolane wali hoti hai ki ....... Sweety use rokate huye kahati hai........ham log bhi vahi ja rahe hai chaliye chhod dete hai…………..


Ji koi baat nahi aap logo ko koi taklif nahi dena chahta hu mai puchhte puchhate chala jaunga……………….


Sweety ne aakha dikhate huye bola……..maine kaha na chaliye ham chhod dete hai……


Mai socha sala ye to puri sweety jasi tevar dikha rahi hai chalte hai……chaliye chalte hai……..ham charo gadi me baith gaye sweety gadi chala rahi thi. Minal aage baithi huyi thi aur pichhe mai aur sonal baithe huye the…………….


Sonal apane hi socha me gum thi…….vah soch rahi thi …..ki ……….kya yah shiva bhai hai nahi gav me rahakar drees scence itaana achha …….lekin mamata didi ke anusar to ve kafi handsome hai aur ye bhi kam nahi hai ho na ho yahi shiva bhai hai……


Is tarah se ham pahuch gaye revatiganj


Abb kaha jana hai aapko….matalab kisake ghar jaana hai…………...sonal ne puchha…………..


Ji aab mai chala jaunga……...aap chita na kare……..


Chaliye thik hai……...aur ha dhanyawad aapane jo hamari jaan bachao……..sweety ne kaha……


Mai:- are usame thanks ki koi jarurat nahi maine aapki sahayata ki aur aapane hamari hisab barabar……….chalte hai …………..yah kahar mai vaha se dur hat gaya aur sweety gadi aage badha deti hai…………………..

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Ek mahila:- padhariye rani sahiba aapka savagat hai...
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Kahani aab tak:-.

Chaliye thik hai……...aur ha dhanyawad aapane jo hamari jaan bachaya……..sweety ne kaha……
Mai:- are usame thanks ki koi jarurat nahi maine aapki sahayata ki aur aapane hamari hisab barabar……….chalte hai …………..yah kahar mai vaha se dur hat gaya aur sweety gadi aage badha deti hai………………….. .................................................... ........................................................................................................................................................... Ek mahila:- padhariye rani sahiba aapka savagat hai…

Abb age:-

Are shobha abb aane bh do hamari bachi ko aaj lagata hai ki kushiya par khushiya aane wali hai hamare ghar bas ek aur mehaman aa jaye to ye ghar pura ho jayega………………

(Ye mahila thi shobha ji yani shiva ke badi chachi aur unke pati Mahesh ji yani Suresh ke bade bhai)

Sweety andar aati hai to mamata dikhai deti hai dono daud kar ek dusre ke gale lag jati hai

I miss you didi…...I really mis you……………sweety ne gale lagte huye kaha……….I also miss you my sweet si sweety…………….

Sobha:- aise to mere gale nahi lagi keval mere pair chhui jaise mai koi 70 saal ki budhiya hu……………

Sweety apani chachi ke gale lagte huye kahti hai aree chachi aap budhiya kaha hui hai aap to ham se bhi jawan hai……..

Chal chal jayada maska mat maar tu janti hai mai to majak kar rahi thi…………….

Lekin mai to majak nahi kar rahi thi……..

Koi ham logo se bhi milega bhai ham bhi hai sudha ne utarte huye kaha sath me Suresh bhi the…………..

Sweety daud kar jakar lag gayi apane ma ke gale aur rone lagi………………..

Are are meri rajkumari ko kya ho gaya aise ro rahi hai na ro beta chup ho ja……...sudha ne kaha……

Sweety rote huye nahi ma mai bahut buri hu mai in 12 salo me aapse milane tak nahi aayi phone tak nahi kiya………..mai yaha tak bhi nahi soch pai ki jo huaa usame kisi ki kya galti hai sab bhagya ka khel hai I am sorry mom mujhe maf kar do………..

Sudha ke bhi aakhe nam ho gayi……..kaun kahata hai ki tu dur thi thi ha tu to is dil ke bahut pass thi aur khabardar jo meri beti ko bura kaha to muh tod dungi tumahara samjhi………..

Sweety rote huye muh banakar kahti hai ha samjh gayi………….aur apne papa ke gale jakar lagati hai…...kaisa hai mera bachha ………….thik hu papa……………

Shuda:- sweety tu to ek dam badi ho gayi hai aur waha khati nahi thi kya jo itani patali ho gayi hai…………

Sonal…..mom kaha didi patali hui hai ek dam perfect to hai…….

Ha….ha…..samjhti hu kitana perfect hai……………

Vaise mai bhi hu yaha par……. mujhase bhi to koi milo………………..

Sweety dekhati ki kitchen a se ek behad hi khubsurat ladaki nikalti hai to sweety use dekhakar shock ho jati hai ki ye to Rudra ki patani yani meri sautan hai to kya isaka bhi janm ho chuka hai………

. Tabhi vah sweety ke pass aati hai aur hilate huye kahti hai kaha kho gayi meri bahan……….wapas nikal apani soch se mai yaha sach me hu Kanika teri menaka bua ki badi beti…………..(yaha batana chahunga ki Kanika ko bhi kuchh ya sab sachai pata hai pahale se hi ab kaise ye mujhe nahi pata lekin yah bhi shiva ko nahi pahchanti hai kyoki ise bhi chehara nahi yaad hai )

Kanika tu…….tu kab aayi……….sweety ne apane soch se bahar aate huye kaha …….

Abhi ye log bate hi kar rahe the ki darwaje ki bel bajti hai……….
Ab kaun aagaya aaj koi atithi day hai kiya……….minal ne kaha…

Tabhi uske sar par uski ma Sobha marti hai aur kahati hai chup besharam hardam ulta sulta bolati rahti hai ja Kanika darwaja khol to dekh kaun aaya hai………………………..

Tabhi bell jaldi bajane lagti hai………...ati hu ukhad doge kya aati hu itana……….kahate huye Kanika darwaja kholti hai aur dekhati hai ki ek 19-20 varsh ka ladka khada hai aur darwaje ke beel par usake hath the…….use dekhakar Kanika ne kaha……………….

Kanika- abb darwaje ke bell se hath hata lo aur bolo kisase kaam hai aur kya hai……………….

Vah kuchh nahi bolta hai ……….. kanika phir puchhati hai…………….phir vah koi jawab nahi deta hai

Kanika:- ai mistar jaban nahi hai kya mai puchh rahi hu kya kaam hai tumhe..thode gusse me bolati hai………..

Vah ladka andar jhakata hai to sudh aur Suresh samane hi sofe par baithe huye the aur sabhi vahi par the lekin kisika dhayan darwaje ki taraf nahi tha……. Abhi kanika kuchh bolane hi wali thi ki vah ladka bolata hai ……………. Ma……….

Kanika hairan ho jati hai lekin sudha ka dhyan darwaje par jati hai to vah ladaka apana haath hilata hai ki mai hu……………… Sudha dekhakar bol uthati hai ...............,.. shiva………..aur daud padati hai………………...ab sare logo ka dhayan darwaje ke tarf hoti hai…………...Suresh bhi shiva kahate huye aage badh jata hai…… Sweety mamata ki or dekhati hai to vah ha me sar hila deti hai………….dono ke aakho me aasu aa jate hai..

lekin baki log hairat se darwaje ki taraf dekhate hai…….. Kanika ka dhyan pichhe nahi tha…….vah gusse me bolati hai mai tumhe tumhari ma dikhati hu kya…………………. Tabhi Kanika ko said karte huye shiva ko jor se gale lagati huyi kahati hai ye tujhe nahi mujhe ma bol raha hai……...sudha ro rahi thi shiva bhi ro raha tha Suresh ke bhi aakho me aashu the kanika kabhi in ma beto ki or to kabhi sabhi ki or dekharahi thi tabhi Suresh bolata hai
aise kya dekha rahi hai ye shiva hai maine bataya tha na ki yah bhi aa raha hai………… Tab kanika ko yaad aata hai……….. (Yaha bata du ki sweety minal, aur sonal ka koi khas reaction nahi th kyoki vah pahle hi pahchan gayi thi)

Sudha:- kaha chala gaya tha hame us jangal me chodakar ha …… tujhe pata hai mai to jite ji mar jati agar tujhe kuchh ho jata to bol kaha chala gaya tha ha …………. Bolata kyo nahi………….are bol na…chup kyo khada hai……………

Kaise bolega vah jab tumhi bina sas liye sawal par sawal kiye ja rahi ho aur darwaje par khada karke hi sari bate puchh logi kya andar to aane do pata nahi kya huaa hoga isake sath…….. Suresh ne kaha….

Kya huaa tha Suresh tum logo ne koi baat hamse chhupai ho na ………..Mahesh ji ne puchh Suresh se……….

Nahi bhaiya kuchh nahi chhupaya hai maine……….Suresh me hakalate huye kaha……..vah to jab ham aa rahe the to yah pata nahi kaha chala gaya tha………

Sudha shiva ko andar leke aati hai aur sofe par baitha deti hai………..

Mahesh phir bolata hai ……….. mujhe pagal samjh rakha hai kya aagar ye baat hoti to tumlog ise liye bagair nahi aate aur sudha aise nahi karti ab sab kuchh sach sach batao tum logo ko meri kasam hai………….

Sudha aur Suresh kasam sunkar niruttar ho jate hai aur suru se aant tak sari ghatano ko batate hai jo bi aate vakt huaa tha……….jise sunakar sabhi ke aakhe nam ho jati hai aur sweety aur sari bahane aakar shiva ke hath pair sab chek karne lagati hai ki kahi chot vot to nahi aayi ise ………… lekin sonal nahi aati hai vah apane vicharo me hi kho jati hai abb kya soch rahi thi aage pata chalega…………

Shiva itana pyar dekhakar usake aakho se pani girane lagati hai sweety ki najar jab shiva ke chehare par padati hai to sabko hatane lagti hai aur puchati hai jyada dard ho raha hai bata kaha lagi hai…………………

Shiva sweety ke muh se jab ye sunta hai to usake sabr ka bandh toot jata hai aur sabko hatate huye sweety ke gale lag jata hai aur jor jor se dur fut kar bachho jase lipat kar rone lagata hai sweety bhi rone lagati hai………..

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Kahani aab tak:-.

Chaliye thik hai……...aur ha dhanyawad aapane jo hamari jaan bachaya……..sweety ne kaha……
Mai:- are usame thanks ki koi jarurat nahi maine aapki sahayata ki aur aapane hamari hisab barabar……….chalte hai …………..yah kahar mai vaha se dur hat gaya aur sweety gadi aage badha deti hai………………….. .................................................... ........................................................................................................................................................... Ek mahila:- padhariye rani sahiba aapka savagat hai…

Abb age:-

Are shobha abb aane bh do hamari bachi ko aaj lagata hai ki kushiya par khushiya aane wali hai hamare ghar bas ek aur mehaman aa jaye to ye ghar pura ho jayega………………

(Ye mahila thi shobha ji yani shiva ke badi chachi aur unke pati Mahesh ji yani Suresh ke bade bhai)

Sweety andar aati hai to mamata dikhai deti hai dono daud kar ek dusre ke gale lag jati hai

I miss you didi…...I really mis you……………sweety ne gale lagte huye kaha……….I also miss you my sweet si sweety…………….

Sobha:- aise to mere gale nahi lagi keval mere pair chhui jaise mai koi 70 saal ki budhiya hu……………

Sweety apani chachi ke gale lagte huye kahti hai aree chachi aap budhiya kaha hui hai aap to ham se bhi jawan hai……..

Chal chal jayada maska mat maar tu janti hai mai to majak kar rahi thi…………….

Lekin mai to majak nahi kar rahi thi……..

Koi ham logo se bhi milega bhai ham bhi hai sudha ne utarte huye kaha sath me Suresh bhi the…………..

Sweety daud kar jakar lag gayi apane ma ke gale aur rone lagi………………..

Are are meri rajkumari ko kya ho gaya aise ro rahi hai na ro beta chup ho ja……...sudha ne kaha……

Sweety rote huye nahi ma mai bahut buri hu mai in 12 salo me aapse milane tak nahi aayi phone tak nahi kiya………..mai yaha tak bhi nahi soch pai ki jo huaa usame kisi ki kya galti hai sab bhagya ka khel hai I am sorry mom mujhe maf kar do………..

Sudha ke bhi aakhe nam ho gayi……..kaun kahata hai ki tu dur thi thi ha tu to is dil ke bahut pass thi aur khabardar jo meri beti ko bura kaha to muh tod dungi tumahara samjhi………..

Sweety rote huye muh banakar kahti hai ha samjh gayi………….aur apne papa ke gale jakar lagati hai…...kaisa hai mera bachha ………….thik hu papa……………

Shuda:- sweety tu to ek dam badi ho gayi hai aur waha khati nahi thi kya jo itani patali ho gayi hai…………

Sonal…..mom kaha didi patali hui hai ek dam perfect to hai…….

Ha….ha…..samjhti hu kitana perfect hai……………

Vaise mai bhi hu yaha par……. mujhase bhi to koi milo………………..

Sweety dekhati ki kitchen a se ek behad hi khubsurat ladaki nikalti hai to sweety use dekhakar shock ho jati hai ki ye to Rudra ki patani yani meri sautan hai to kya isaka bhi janm ho chuka hai………

. Tabhi vah sweety ke pass aati hai aur hilate huye kahti hai kaha kho gayi meri bahan……….wapas nikal apani soch se mai yaha sach me hu Kanika teri menaka bua ki badi beti…………..(yaha batana chahunga ki Kanika ko bhi kuchh ya sab sachai pata hai pahale se hi ab kaise ye mujhe nahi pata lekin yah bhi shiva ko nahi pahchanti hai kyoki ise bhi chehara nahi yaad hai )

Kanika tu…….tu kab aayi……….sweety ne apane soch se bahar aate huye kaha …….

Abhi ye log bate hi kar rahe the ki darwaje ki bel bajti hai……….
Ab kaun aagaya aaj koi atithi day hai kiya……….minal ne kaha…

Tabhi uske sar par uski ma Sobha marti hai aur kahati hai chup besharam hardam ulta sulta bolati rahti hai ja Kanika darwaja khol to dekh kaun aaya hai………………………..

Tabhi bell jaldi bajane lagti hai………...ati hu ukhad doge kya aati hu itana……….kahate huye Kanika darwaja kholti hai aur dekhati hai ki ek 19-20 varsh ka ladka khada hai aur darwaje ke beel par usake hath the…….use dekhakar Kanika ne kaha……………….

Kanika- abb darwaje ke bell se hath hata lo aur bolo kisase kaam hai aur kya hai……………….

Vah kuchh nahi bolta hai ……….. kanika phir puchhati hai…………….phir vah koi jawab nahi deta hai

Kanika:- ai mistar jaban nahi hai kya mai puchh rahi hu kya kaam hai tumhe..thode gusse me bolati hai………..

Vah ladka andar jhakata hai to sudh aur Suresh samane hi sofe par baithe huye the aur sabhi vahi par the lekin kisika dhayan darwaje ki taraf nahi tha……. Abhi kanika kuchh bolane hi wali thi ki vah ladka bolata hai ……………. Ma……….

Kanika hairan ho jati hai lekin sudha ka dhyan darwaje par jati hai to vah ladaka apana haath hilata hai ki mai hu……………… Sudha dekhakar bol uthati hai ...............,.. shiva………..aur daud padati hai………………...ab sare logo ka dhayan darwaje ke tarf hoti hai…………...Suresh bhi shiva kahate huye aage badh jata hai…… Sweety mamata ki or dekhati hai to vah ha me sar hila deti hai………….dono ke aakho me aasu aa jate hai..

lekin baki log hairat se darwaje ki taraf dekhate hai…….. Kanika ka dhyan pichhe nahi tha…….vah gusse me bolati hai mai tumhe tumhari ma dikhati hu kya…………………. Tabhi Kanika ko said karte huye shiva ko jor se gale lagati huyi kahati hai ye tujhe nahi mujhe ma bol raha hai……...sudha ro rahi thi shiva bhi ro raha tha Suresh ke bhi aakho me aashu the kanika kabhi in ma beto ki or to kabhi sabhi ki or dekharahi thi tabhi Suresh bolata hai
aise kya dekha rahi hai ye shiva hai maine bataya tha na ki yah bhi aa raha hai………… Tab kanika ko yaad aata hai……….. (Yaha bata du ki sweety minal, aur sonal ka koi khas reaction nahi th kyoki vah pahle hi pahchan gayi thi)

Sudha:- kaha chala gaya tha hame us jangal me chodakar ha …… tujhe pata hai mai to jite ji mar jati agar tujhe kuchh ho jata to bol kaha chala gaya tha ha …………. Bolata kyo nahi………….are bol na…chup kyo khada hai……………

Kaise bolega vah jab tumhi bina sas liye sawal par sawal kiye ja rahi ho aur darwaje par khada karke hi sari bate puchh logi kya andar to aane do pata nahi kya huaa hoga isake sath…….. Suresh ne kaha….

Kya huaa tha Suresh tum logo ne koi baat hamse chhupai ho na ………..Mahesh ji ne puchh Suresh se……….

Nahi bhaiya kuchh nahi chhupaya hai maine……….Suresh me hakalate huye kaha……..vah to jab ham aa rahe the to yah pata nahi kaha chala gaya tha………

Sudha shiva ko andar leke aati hai aur sofe par baitha deti hai………..

Mahesh phir bolata hai ……….. mujhe pagal samjh rakha hai kya aagar ye baat hoti to tumlog ise liye bagair nahi aate aur sudha aise nahi karti ab sab kuchh sach sach batao tum logo ko meri kasam hai………….

Sudha aur Suresh kasam sunkar niruttar ho jate hai aur suru se aant tak sari ghatano ko batate hai jo bi aate vakt huaa tha……….jise sunakar sabhi ke aakhe nam ho jati hai aur sweety aur sari bahane aakar shiva ke hath pair sab chek karne lagati hai ki kahi chot vot to nahi aayi ise ………… lekin sonal nahi aati hai vah apane vicharo me hi kho jati hai abb kya soch rahi thi aage pata chalega…………

Shiva itana pyar dekhakar usake aakho se pani girane lagati hai sweety ki najar jab shiva ke chehare par padati hai to sabko hatane lagti hai aur puchati hai jyada dard ho raha hai bata kaha lagi hai…………………

Shiva sweety ke muh se jab ye sunta hai to usake sabr ka bandh toot jata hai aur sabko hatate huye sweety ke gale lag jata hai aur jor jor se dur fut kar bachho jase lipat kar rone lagata hai sweety bhi rone lagati hai………..

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Kahani aab tak.


itana pyar dekhakar usake aakho se pani girane lagati hai sweety ki najar jab shiva ke chehare par padati hai to sabko hatane lagti hai aur puchati hai jyada dard ho raha hai bata kaha lagi hai…………………

Shiva sweety ke muh se jab ye sunta hai to usake sabr ka bandh toot jata hai aur sabko hatate huye sweety ke gale lag jata hai aur jor jor se dur fut kar bachho jase lipat kar rone lagata hai sweety bhi rone lagati hai………..

Abb aage:-
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Vaha sabhi upasthit logo ke aakhe pahale se jo nam thi unake se pani girane lagata hai…………………..

Sweety shiva ke sar par pyar se hath fer rahi thi aur shiva ko chup kara rahi thi lekin khud hi roye ja rahi thi ……………….

Sudha aur Suresh ek dusare ko dekhate hai unke aakho me khushi ke aasu the…………….

Mahesh mahaul ko dekhate huye kahata hai beta tere bade papa bhi hai unke kaleje ko thandak nahi pahuchayega……………….. shiva apane aashu pochate huye bade papa kahate huye unke gale lag jata hai………..Mahesh ke mukh se santusthi ke aah nikalti hai jaise varsho ke pyase Ko Pani dene ke baad sukun ki anubhuti ho gayi ho………….. unke aakho se bhi do char moti tapak hi jate hai…………...ve shiva ko jor se gale lagate hai jaise varsho ki pyas bujha rahe ho………………….

Sobha bolati hai…..kya mere bete ko mujhase nahi milane dege ji………………….

Mahesh ji bolate hai ha…...ha…..ha….milo apane bete se mai kaha rok raha hu…..

Chhodenge tab to milungi usase………..

Ve shiva ko chhodate hai……….to shobha ne use apane gale lagate huye kaha hame maf karde beta tere dada ji ki maut ke karan tujhe manakar ham tujhe unka doshi manae lage leki ma ji jab antim samay me hame kuchh bate batayi tab jake hame apani bhul ka ahsas huaa…….hame maf karde beta maf kar de aur kas kar shiva ko gale laga leti hai aur rone lagati hai………………….

Nahi badi ma aap kyo ro rahi hai mai tha hi aisa ki koisi ko mujhapar hi sak hota aap mafi mat mangiye……………….kisi ki koi galti nahi hai yahi mere bhagya me tha …………….

Shobha pyar se shiva ke mathe ko chumati hai…….mera pyara beta kitana smajhdar ho gaya hai………ruk baith tere liye pani leke aati hu…………….siva jab baithane ko hota hai to minal aakar uasase lipat jati hai aur ek side se minal bhi aur rote huye kahati hai bhaiya sabse mil liya lekin hase nahi mile kya hame bhul gaye ho ham aapako yaad nahi ki aapki do chhoti bahane bhi hai………ha aur ek buaa ki ladaki jo tumahari didi lagati hai pichhe se kanika aakar lipatati hai aur aise kahati hai ki sabki rote huye hasi nikal jati hai……………

Shiva kahata hai aap sabko kaise bhi sakta hu me princesses aur meri pyari didi ko ha batao bhala ye bhi koi bhulane wali chij hai।

Matalb ham sab ko bhi gaya tha tu tujhe keval apani chhoti bahane hi yaad thi ……….sweety ne gussa dikhate huye kaha jisame ha me ha mamta ne mila diya …….abb to shiva ki hawa tight ho gayi va jaldi me hadbadate huye ka ……. N…..n….hi didi aisi koi baat nahi hai…..

Tab aap hamse jhuth bol rahe hai ha…….minal ne apane kamar par hath rakhate huye kaha……..

Maine aisa kab kaha meri pari ko ki mai use bhool gaya hu……….tab aap mujhe bhul gaye the ……...sonal ne bhi kaha……..


Nahi meri gudiya tu koi bhulane wali chij hai………..tab kanika abhi bhi pichhe se gale lagaye huye aur sat gayi aur usake kandhe par sar rakhate huye kahti hai aur mai………….


Tabhi Sobha ki aawaj sabko sunayi deti hai kisi ko nahi bhula hai mera beta samjhe tum sab abb chodo ise aaram karane do ise aate hi ise ek to rula diya upar se pareshan kar rahi hai…...le beta pani pi aur minal ja apna kamra dikha bhai ko aur tu sonal ke kamre me shift ho ja vase bhi tu sonal ke sath hi to rahti hai……………………
.mai nahi jane wali is gittar devi ke pass jab bhi nind aati hai to inka gotta nikal aata hai mai sweety didi ke pass rahungi. ……….(dosto aab aap log samjh gaye honge ki sonal kya soch rahi thi agar nahi samjhe to aage aur bhi clear hoga thoda wait karo)


Phir sabse bolati hai ki tum sab bhi jao aur aaram karo dinner par milte hai………...sabhi log apane kamre me chale jate hi…………….

Siva minal ke kamre me chala jata hai aur bet par let jata hai aur pichhali bato ko yad karne lagta hai ……………..

Sweety bhi apana room me sara saman jamm deti hai usake sath me mamta bhi thi…………

Mamta :- chal aab bata kyo tu delhi aayi…….

Didi abhi nahi raat ko abhi aap aaram karo mai shiva se milke aati hai …………….sweety ne baat talte huye kaha………………..

Ha ….bhai aab apne pati ke aage kisaki Suniti tum jao milkar pyar bhari baat kar lo leki ye mat bhulana ki aur bhi kai hai… ……..mamta ne maje lete huye sweety ko chidaya….


Ha mujhe pata hai……..agar aapka bhi. Man hai to aap bhi chal sakti hai aakhi aap bhi to unaki patni jo hai…...sweety ne jawab di ya aur bina jawab sune chal deti hai shiva ke kamre me ………………

Aab to milungi hi didi nahi patani banke kyoki mujhe pata chal gaya hai ki mujhe usase payar hai ye baat use khone ke baad pata chali hai…….abb usase dur bhi to nahi raha jayega…….mamata ne bed par letate huye takiya ko apane aagosh me lete huye kaha……….

Minal kanika dono sonal ke room me bed par lete huye the………..

Sweety shiva wale darwaze ko nok karti hai to darwaja shiva khilata hai to dekhata hai samne sweety didi khadi hai vah unhe rasta dete huye kahta hai aaiye didi…………

Sweety andar aati hai aur bed par baith jati hai…………….aur ek tak shiva ke chehare ko niharane lagati hai aur usame kho si jati hai……………...



Aise dekahte huye sweety ko shiva usase puchhata hai aise kya dekh rahi ho didi……….

Sweety ne apani soch se bahar nikalte huye kahti hai vaha kaha khada hai aa mere pass baith…………

Shiva sweety ke pas baith jata hai aur sweety ke god me apana sar rakhakar let jata hai………………….

Sweety uske sar par hath pyar se ferate huye kahti hai kya hua tha tere sath jangal me ……..

Kuch nahi di aap paresahn kyo ho rahi hai mai thik to huna ……..


Maine jo puchha hai usaka sahi sahi jawab de tujhe meri kasam hai agar jhuth bola to samjha aab to sach bolega…………

Abb to bhagwan bhi aajaye aur kahe ki mat bata lekin mai tab bhi aapko bataunga………...suniye………………………………….. … … … …
Zabardast shandar dhanso amazing update
 
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