Erotica The Girl Next Door (Completed)

[Indian Princess]

Woah! What did i just read. I felt that this was more of Meena's story than anyone. Redemption quest i can say. First few chapters were light and slow but story took pace in last couple of chapters. its dark, i am glad i found this here. There is very few writers i admire. Being a writer my self got a lot of insight in character building and story progression.​

There is no mercy indeed. I would love to read your writing further in next part of the story. your reflection on characters and point of views with which you wrote was excellent. I would love to read some fantasy fiction of you, if you try in future. I would to totally recommend writing it.​

Your writing style is good and likable. Not a fan of stretching stories either.​

It was very well written and There was no happy ending in this which i liked. Seeing few comments I smell sequel is already written and completed that might answer few questions. thoroughly enjoyed it well not enjoyed some part was painful but pleasurable as fiction.​

Thank you for your detailed review. The sequel of this story is named 'A Game of Chess' and is very close to my heart. Here's the link https://xforum.live/threads/a-game-of-chess-completed.18330/

Cheers!

 

[friend_just_buddy]

You surely have a talent when it comes to narrate anything in classy English

A good start is always necessary for a justified ending and you have successfully maintained the quality from the prologue to epilogue though I have some issues with few things here and there but again, thats something I can easily ignore btw, its impossible to hide your eternal love for BDSM theme You somehow manage to insert this in any romance or thrill story quite easily.
Please carry on dearest

 

[Sauravb]

Wonderful story.meera took her revenge from naina's culprits as the same way they treated meera in the past.but onething that made me bit unhappy what is aditi's fault why she was made scapegoat.meera's revenge also proved revenge has always a darker side.

 

[Indian Princess]

Wonderful story.meera took her revenge from naina's culprits as the same way they treated meera in the past.but onething that made me bit unhappy what is aditi's fault why she was made scapegoat.meera's revenge also proved revenge has always a darker side.

Thanks for reading and commenting

You could also read the prequel - The Story of Meera

The sequel is - A game of chess

Final chapter is - The Search for Amairah

 

[Sauravb]

Thanks for reading and commenting

You could also read the prequel - The Story of Meera

The sequel is - A game of chess

Final chapter is - The Search for Amairah

Yes i will read tomorrow the story of meera then the next 2 stories.