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Erotica The Girl Next Door (Completed)

cnuhyd

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Without a doubt would surely love to read ur future story (if gets time)..
From now onwards would try to read more English story to improve my vocabulary. :reading1:

I think liter####a is d website from you read english story. Let me know if u know some other gud english story site. :cowboy2:
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lone_hunterr

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A big thank you to all my readers for this story who supported me with such personalized and encouraging comments.

It is because of your love and support that I could write a poem after several years.

I am sharing it here.

This is a heartfelt poem from Pankhudi written in her captivity, to her love, Armaan.

I’m lost in the dark,
In oblivion,
Can't leave, can't get away,
But I had a dream of you,
My heart just knew,
That you will find me one day.


I’m alone, I’m scared,
I’m so afraid,
They hurt me night and day,
But I’ll hold on,
For you to come,
And take me far away.


Each breath I take,
Away from you,
Burns deep inside of me,
I know you feel,
just as much pain,
After what happened to me.


This darkness gnaws,
Away at me,
I fight to keep my sanity,
I’m afraid I would,
No longer be,
The sweet loving girl I used to be.


I’m not as pure,
As I once was,
All I feel is hurt and shame,
But you are always,
In my heart,
And I still love you, all the same.


I’ll hold on, my love,
Forever, and more,
For the day, once more, you’ll be holding me,
Won’t give up on you,
Because I know,
You’ll never give up on me.

Reading this.... Now I want a sequel more badly.....
I have hardly forgotten the dark part of story and you painted a more darker coat on my memory :girlcry:
Redeem yourself by writing a sequel :what2:
A heartfelt poem rather a heartbreaking one :verysad:
 
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Indian Princess

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Reading this.... Now I want a sequel more badly.....
I have hardly forgotten the dark part of story and you painted a more darker coat on my memory :girlcry:
Redeem yourself by writing a sequel :what2:
A heartfelt poem rather a heartbreaking one :verysad:

Thanks for your comment.

I realize this story is screaming for a sequel, and that is going to be far more dark and thrilling than this story. I have started writing it. It is named "A game of chess" and will be started in a few days. :D
 

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Thanks for your comment.

I realize this story is screaming for a sequel, and that is going to be far more dark and thrilling than this story. I have started writing it. It is named "A game of chess" and will be started in a few days. :D
sequel, sequel, sequel, we all want it's sequel............
 
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Indian Princess

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You are marvelous writer and poet, please start that pure romance story first, I want to read your romantic story, I know it will be the best one.

My life has been rather rough, so I connect with dark stories better, because only pain and fear feels real to me, and it is really hard for me to imagine love.

My husband brought love to my life in spite of all darkness, so I guess I can write my love story. It will be in the form of a short story though. :poet:
 
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Cute Gunjan

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I'm fan of ur writing aftr reading Dark seduction ..but reading this one don't know ,what to say ....worst story i ever read till date.
Thriller n suspense is not ur genre, story is plot is weak in many areas, introduced more character but not use them....
I'm expecting to much from you Ma'm after reading ur 1st story not this kind shit.

:(
 

Indian Princess

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I'm fan of ur writing aftr reading Dark seduction ..but reading this one don't know ,what to say ....worst story i ever read till date.
Thriller n suspense is not ur genre, story is plot is weak in many areas, introduced more character but not use them....
I'm expecting to much from you Ma'm after reading ur 1st story not this kind shit.

:(

Thanks for reading the story. Sorry for disappointment. :(
 
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