Fantasy The great warrior

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[ANUJ KUMAR]

Location India City Delhi.

Hero name _ Raj
Raj dekhne mein theek thaak hai. Raj ki umra 19 sal hi college mein BSc first year me admission liya hai scholarship se Raj anath aashram mein rahata tha 18 sal Tak ab ek kirae ke kamre mein rahata hai Raj ki jindagi bahut kthinayi se biti school mein sab use loser loser kahate the kyunki Raj koi bhi game mein participate nahin Karta tha aur Na koi activity mein sirf padhai Karta tha aur dekhne mein bhi vo dubla patla sa ladka dekhta tha Raj ke kuch dost vi bne Keval Raj se apna Kam pura kar wate the sab matlab ke dost the fir bhi Raj kisi Ko kuch nahin khta tha sabki madad Karta tha jindagi bahut dukh Bhari hui thi.

Location. R . V College Delhi
Raj ka aaj college mein first day tha sabse pahle college ke liye ready hua Raj ke Ghar se college 3 kilometre duri per tha.

Ab Se Raj Ko me likhunga
Jab main college pahuncha GATE se entre Kiya kuch ladke junior student ko pareshan kar rahe the Jaise hi main gate ke andar hua ladke ne mujhe awaaz dekar Apne paas Bulaya
Ladka first. Idhar aa kya Naam hai Tera
Me. Ji Raj
Ladka 2. senior se baat karne ki tamiz nahin hai sir karkar bat kia kr
Me. Sir Raj naam hai mera
Ladka 3rd. Chal turant murga ban ja
Me ( man me socha ki) iske alwa mere pass koi rasta nahin hai yah log mujhse jyada hai aur takatwar bhi FIR kya tha main murga ban gaya.
Kuch der pareshan karne ke bad unhone mujhe Jane Diya Jaise hi main class mein pahuncha ek ladke ne mujhe dekh kar kaha
Ladka.. vah dekho Jo bahar murga banaa tha vah a Gaya
Aur sab hasne Lage
Main Bus dekh sakta tha kuchh kr sakta nahin tha isliye jakar piche Beth Gaya
15 minut bad
Class start ho gai class teacher eye sab ka introduction lene lge

Class teacher. Hello student myself Rajit main hun aapka class teacher Aaj sab apna apna introduction denge padhaai kl se hogi isi ke bad sab apna apna introduction dene lge

Jab meri Bari aayi

Hello myself Raj and my 12 percent is 97 %
Sb mujhe dekhne lage

Class teacher. Very good Raj good performance.
Main. Thanks sir.

Aise hi sari class over ho gai class ke bad mein apni bag lekar Ghar ki taraf chal Diya Achanak mujhe ek baccha sadak par dikha jo ki sadak par kar raha tha Maine dekha ki ek taraf ek car a rahi thi main dor ke use bachane gaya bacche ko leker baga pr tabhi car mugh se tkra gai mere hath se baccha udhar gira baccha Gaya .

JB main utha to dekha sab log meri body ko dekh rahe hain tabhi kisi ne kaha iske deth ho gai hai mujhe kuchh samajh mein nahin a raha tha main bahut din tak aise hi Raha. Meri body ko police ne hospital lekar gaye aur doctor ne mera postmortem Kiya meri body ko jala Diya Gaya meri bahut din tak vaha Raha

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[ANUJ KUMAR]

Update number _ 2 Kuch din bad meri atma ek gole me bn kr khi chli gai jb me vha phucga to dekha ki vha bhut prakash hi tvi ek golden colour ki akirti ubhrti hi meri ankhe band ho gai kyoki vha bhut prakash tha

Me. App kon hi

G shadow. God of death

Me . Apko Raj ka pranam

G. Shadow. Tumhara klyan ho Raj tum ne apna krme bhut ache se nibhaya hi me tumse bhut khush hu tum mugh se kuch bhi mang skte ho agar mere bus me hua to me tumhe grur dunga


Ma. Isi jindgi ka kya arth na mughe mere ma mile na pita aj tk me dutkara gya mene abki madad ki log bs mughse apne kam ke liye dosti kerte he God mughe apne pass apna seek bna kr rakh ligye

G . D . Putra Raj tum shi kh rhe ho prntu sukh dukh manushya ke krm pr nirbhr karta hi log apne krme se apna bhagy chunte hi

Me . Gi God mughe kya agya hi jesa app adesh krenge me wesa hi krunga

G. D. Putra Raj me tumhare krm anusar tumhe ye vardan deta hu ki agr tum mere putr ho tumne mera anse bnoge tumhe burai ka nas kr ke drme ki asthapna kroge duniya tumhe mere putra ke nam se ganegi Tha son of God of death Tha great warrior Raj

me . He God app mughe itna mhatopurnya kary de rhe hi kya me is ke kabil hu me ik anath hu prabhu

G. D . Dubara kabhi ese sabd ka prayog nhi karna putra me tumhare pita hu aur tum is krya ke liye Uttam ho tumhe is universe pr achai sthapit krni hi

Me . Ap e mughe apnputra bnaya me sada achai ka sthapna aur buryai ka na s krunga Pita shree

G. D. Kush rho putra

AUr fir mere shrir ik rosni ke gole me tbdil hoke ek village type area me a gya ye world magical world tha

Some important information of new magical world

Element yha8 element hote hi

1. Water
2. Earth
3. Air
4. Fir
5. Sky

6. Lightning power bhut hi rare power hi

7. Thunder power bhut rare power hi

8. Dark power

Magical lavel

1. Lower magician (. Ye 5 type ki hoti hi )

2.. Medium lavel magician (Ye 5 type ki hoti hi)

3. Highr lavel magician ( ye 10 lavel hoti hi )

4. Ultra highr lavel magician ye 5 type ki hoti hi

5. Emparor lavel magician ye 20. Type ki hoti hi

6. Ultra emparor lavel magician ye 10 type ki hoti hi

7.legend lavel magician ye 10 lavel ki hoti hi


8.legend Lower lavel magician ye 5 lavel ki hoti hi

9. Legend Medium lavel magician ye 5 lavel ki hoti hi

10. Legend highr lavel magician ye 5 lavel ki hoti hai

11. Legend ultra lavel magician ye 10 lavel ki hoti hai

Ye story ka base kiya aisi story padi hui h
Dekhte h aage kis mod ka rakh leti hai

 

[ANUJ KUMAR]

3. Update . 12. Junior warrior lavel . Ye 5 lavel ka hota hi

13. Secondary warrior lavel. ye 10 type ka hota hi
14. Great warrior lavel . Ye 20 lavel ka hota hi

location. Present
Jb meri ankh khuli to mene dekha ki me ek village type area me PdA hu bhut der me whi rha tvi 8_ 10 log usi raste se ga rhe the unh me se ek ki nagr mugh pr padi
1 aadami . ne kahan dekhen mukhiya ji vahan koi baccha pada hai.

2 Aadami . pata nahin Kaun Aisa hai ki jo Apne is nnhe se bacche ko yahan chhod gaya hai

Important character

Mukhiya ji. Veer
Mukhiya ji ki patni. Tara

Tara jakar use bacche ko apni God mein liya aur mukhiya ji se kahati hai dekhiae is bacche ke chehre per Kitna tej hai hamara koi bhi beta nahin hai kya ham is apna beta banaa le mukhiya ji bhi bacche ko dekh kar usi mein kho jaate Hain Tara ke pukarne per mukhya ji hosh mein aate Hain

Veer . Kyon nahin ham is bacche ka palan poshan karenge

Yah baat sunkar mukhiya ji ki patni Dhara bahut khush ho jaati hai aur bacche ko lekar Apne Ghar ki taraf Chali jaati hai kuchh der bad Veer bhi ghar aata hai hai aur bacche ko dekhne lagta hai
Veer . Tara dekho bacche ke a gale mein koi locket hai
Tara. Han bahut chamak raha hai
Veer. Kl main jakar Baba Ji ko bula ke le kar aaunga Apne bacche ka naam rakhenge
Tara. Thik hi
Aise hi Raat beet jaati hai agale din beete jakar babaji ko bulakar lekar aata hai baba ji Higher 3 lavel magician the aur bahut Gyani the
Jab vah aate Hain aur bacchon Ko dekhte hain to kuchh pal ke liye usi mein kho jaate Hain
Babaji. Baccha bahut bhagyashali hai
Baba ji. Is bacche ka naam ajj se Raj hi

Bacche ka nam sunker Tara or veer bhut kush ho jate Hain
Samay bitta rahata hai ab Raj panch sal ka ho gaya Veer aur Tara use bahut pyar karte hain
Ek din babaji hai ye aur unhone veer se kha kl Raj ko mer ghar lana ab ye 5 year ka ho gya hi hm es ke element kaun kaun sa element hai eske pas

Veer . Baba mein kl ese lekar aaunga aapke pass

Baba ji thik hi aur chele gye

Dusre din Veer Raj Ko Apne sath Baba Ji ke ghar lekar gata hi jb babaji Raj ka element check karte hain to ashcharyachakit rah jaate Hain Veer Jab Baba Ji ko aise dekhta hai
Veer. Kya hua Baba ji aap vaise kya dekh rahe hain kya koi samasya hai

Babaji. Aaj Maine pahli bar Aisa balak dekha hai iske paas sere element kisi Ko batana nahin agar kisi ko pata chal gaya to is balak ko King ko de denge

Jab Veer Ko pata chala ki uske bete ke pass sare element Hain vah bahut khush ho gaya aur Baba Ji ko kahan theek hai Baba Ji main kisi Ko nahin bataunga aur ghar chala aya

Tara . Kya hua hamare bacche ke pass kaunsa element hai
Veer Tara Ko sab bataya Jo Baba ji ne bataya tha Tara bahut khush ho gai aur usne kaha ki hamara beta lakhon mein ek hai

Aise hi ek saal beet Gaya

Ab se Raj Ko me likhunga

Ab me 6 yaer ho gaya tha aur Dhyan lagana vyayam karna yahi meri dincharya Ho gai thi main Apne fire element aur water element ko jagrit kar liya lower label ke a third level Tak

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[ANUJ KUMAR]

Update 3. 2. Ese hi ek din me dyan laga rha tha ki mere samne Pita God of death a gye mene.
Mene unki prnam Kiya .
G.D . Kese ho Putra Raj
Me . ME thik hu pita jee apne Air element ko jagrit kar raha tha aur bar bar asafal ho ga rha tha .

G. D. Putra tum bahut mehnat kar rahe ho ese hi pryas kro tum garur safl hoge

Me. Jee pita shree me pura pryas kr rha hu safal hone ka

G. D. Putra me tumhe kuch dene aur batane aya hu

Me. Jee pita shree

G. D . Me tumhe t . f dene aya hu gisse tum is t f ke ander gake apna abhyas kr sko aur tumhe ye powr dene aya hu ki tum agr apne element ko chupana chaho to chupa skte ho

Ma kush hokr
Me . Jee pita shree

G. D . Aur ha tumhe do year ache se abyas karna hi do sall bad tumhe ek bhut sktisali Tlwar hasil karna hi

Me . Jee pita shree
Uske bed pita shree chale gye aur me apna abhyas karne laga kush der abyas karke me ghar aya to dekha Baba khi ga rhe the

Me . Baba app khi ga rhe hi

Baba . ha Raj beta me city ga rha hu wha tumhara admission bhi karana hi ab tum 6 year ke ho gaye ho

Me . Jee baba
Baba ke gane ke bad mene ma s khana manga khana khake Sone chla gya
evening ko jb me so kr utha to todhi der ma se bate ki aur fir mene ma se kha

Me. Ma me thoda der gumhne ja rha hu

Ma . Thik hi beta lakin door nhi jana
Uske bad me humne chla gya todi der Gumhne ke bad ghar aya aur khana khake so gya

Agle din jb baba aye to unhone mughe bataya ki unhone mara admission city ke ek bhut ache school me likha dia hi 15 din bad mughe school jana hi me bhut khush ho gya

ese hi 14 din bit gye in 14 dno me mene apne 4 element air, water, earth. Akash . ko lower lavel ke 4 lavel tk use karna sikh gya apne T . F ki madad se jo mughe pita God of deth ne dia tha pr or age mugh se nhi ho parha tha to mene aur smaya byam kia

Rat ko jb me ma babake sath khanakha rha tha to Baba ne mughe school ke bere me bataya

Ab hm thoda apne Rajya ke bere me bat kerte hi gha me rhta hu
his school me padhne ja rha tha uska name M. S magical school Rajya ka sbse acha school hi
Ma baba ne mughe us school me padhane ke liye apni jiwan bhr ki sari smptti laga di thi me ne ye prtigya ki ma aur baba ko bhut achi jindgi dunga unhe mughpr gerve hoga

Aur uske bad me so gya

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UPdate . 4


Morning me jb me utha to sbse phle dyan me betha aur apne Air element ko lower lavel 5 pr le jane lga pr bar bar mera dyan tut ja rha tha

Aur jb me dyan se utha to dekha ki Subha ho gayi thi aaj mughe magic school me padhne city jana tha to me bhut khush tha

Me dyan se uthne ke bad nadi pr gya ya hamare kabile ke sare log wahi nhate the mene bhi nhaya aur kuch loge ne mere magic school jane ke bare me pucha mene sb se btaya ki ajj me jane wala hu aur uske bad me Ghar a gya
Maa
Beta nha aye nadi me ajj tumko city ke magic school vi jana hi

ME . Ji maa me nha aya aur apni tyari bhi kr li hi school jane ke liye

Ase kuch der bad mene aur Maa Banane khana khya

Baba. Raj beta ache se sb sekhna aur Aur kisi se ladayi mt kerna .

Me. ji baba me dyan se sb ci khunga aur ladayi nhi krunga kisi se apto jante hi me bhut sedha hu

Ma aur Baba ek sath . Haha haha Hme pta hi ki tum kitne sedhe ho he mhine kisi na kisi se ladte rhte ho abhi phechle mhine ek ladke ka hath tod diya tha

Me . Hu Maa baba ap log bhi be wagh ilzam lagate rhte ho

Maa. Acha ab jldi tyar ho jao nhi to der ho jayega

Uske bad me tyar hua aur bhar aya
Maa bhut royi mene maa se wafa kia ki uhe school me chutti hogi to melne aunga

Aur uske bad ma aur Maa se mil kr me baba ke sath magic school jane ke liye city ki trafh chl dia aj me phli bar city aya tha mughe sb kuch bhut acha lg rha tha
Kuch der clne ke bad me magic school phuch gya dikne pr bhut acha lg rha tha akhir ho vi khona hmare Rajya ka sbse acha magic school jo tha

Me baba ander gye baba ne mughe lakr had master ke paas gye

Baba . Sir ye hi mera beta Raj aur ye rha iska admission form .

H. M . Ok ap ja skte hi aur h . M ne ek ladke ko awaj di aur kha ki jo aur ise student room me chod ayo

Baba todi der mughse mile fir chle gye me us ladke ke sath room chla aya room bhut acha tha us ladke ke mughe btaya ki meri class kl se hi aur chla gya

USke bad me so gya fir rat ko utha kuch der betha rha aur age ke bare me sochne lga ab kya karna hi tvi ek aurat mer pass ayi aur mugh se kha ki chlo khane ka time ho gya hi me vi usi ke sath chla gya

jb me wha phucga to dekha ki wha buth se student vi bethe the mene khana kya uske bad hm sb ko btaya gya ki kl se hme apne time se ana hi

Uske bad sb chle gye mebhi ja kr apne room me so gya

Morning me utha aur apne sare magic jo mene Control Kiya jitne lavel tk use ache se pratice kiya

Aur uske bad me sara km kr ke ek ladki se puch kr apne class chla gya

ye school hmare Rajya ka sbse acha school tha to yha as pas ke Rajyo ke Rajkumar aur Rajkumari vi padhte hi

Location. class room

Me class me gya aur first row me beth gaya kuch der bad sb log

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[ANUJ KUMAR]

a gye .



Update no. 5
Abhi main class mein baitha tha tabhi ek ladka aaya aur uska pair ek ladke se takra gaya jis ladke se uska ped takraya tha vo Isla ka rajya ka Rajkumar tha jo ki bhut ghamandi tha Naam Tha karna

Isla country bahut powerful country hai

Karna. Ladki tumhari himmat kaise Hui mujhse takrane ki tumhen pata hai main Kaun hun

Ladka . Maaf kar do bhai Bhai galti se a pakda Gaya dobara galti nahin hogi

karna . Kaun Bhai apni aukat dekhi hai Kahan tum aur kahan hai main Prince hu Isla ka karne ja ke ladke ko 2 thappad mara.

Tabhi ek ladki gai aur Karana ko use ladke se dur Kiya

Ladki. Tum Prince ho to kisi Ko maroge

karna. Rajkumari Aarti aap mujhse Dushmani kar rahi hai vah bhi is ladke ke khatir. Dekh lunga main aapko

Aarti. Jo karna hai kar lena abhi yahan se jao

Karan gusse mein vahan se chala Gaya

( Rajkumari Aarti eAnant Nagar ki Rajkumari hai Anand Nagar bhi kafi powerful country hai Rajkumari Aarti sab Ko ek saman najar se dekhti Hain chahe Garib Ho ya Amir )

ladka. Dhanyvad Rajkumari Aarti.

Aarti. Koi Baat nahin
Uske bad vah ladka chala Gaya



Kuchh der bad class teacher class mein aur unhone sabko apni apni jagah per baitha

C.T . Hello student Mera Naam Shalini hai me medium 5 level magician ab aap log magic ground me chaliye vahan mein aap logon ka element check karungi

Sab student line banakar magic ground ki taraf chlne lge

Magic ground class teacher ne sab Ko line mein khada Kiya

C. L . Sare bacche bari bari se aaenge apna hath is pathar per rakhenge Aisa karne se unke element pata chal jayege ki pass kaun kaun sa hai

Main Apne sare element lock kar diye Keval lightening element aur Thunder element ko chhodkar bki sb lock kr dia

Bari bari sere bacche gaye aur apna apna hath us pathar per Rakha

Important character of class

1.Shalini . class teacher . Air, Earth

2.karna . Prince. Air, fire

3. Aarti . Princess, fire , thunder

4. Priya . Princess , Water , Air

5. Raja . Prince , Akash

6. Swati. Daughter of prime minister of Isla . Fire

7. Kirti. Normal citizan . Air , Akash

Karna bda kush ho gya jb pta chla uska element air fire hi

AB jiske pass do element hi uski class alag lagegi ya FIR Aakash element ho Aakash element powerful element hota hai

Thunder element aur lightning element bahut km logo ke pass hota hai jb C.t. Ko pata chla ki Aarti ke pass thunder aur fire element hi to Shalini madam ne bahut bahut badhai di aur kisi ko bula ke kha jao head master sir ko bula lao

Sab Aarti ko badhai de rahe the ki uske pass thunder element aur fire hi Karen bhut gussa a rha tha

Aarti bhut kush thi aakhir Ho bhi kyon Na uske pass uske pass thunder element aur fire element jo the

Sabse akhiri me mein Gaya Jaise hi main apna hath pathar pr rakha lightening element aur thunder element aye sari class mughe hi dekh rahe thi

Tvi head master a gye

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Lekin bahut small update h

 

[ANUJ KUMAR]

Updat..... 6


head master... Bahut achcha Raj tumhare pass thunder element aur lightning limit hai world ke sabse powerful element. Aur Aarti tumne bhi tumhare pass lightning element hi agar Tum donon mehnat Karo to W . M . T. I main ja skoge yah hamare school ke liye bahut gerve ki baat hai

Aarti..... Thank you sir ham aapko niraash nahin karenge

H. M ... Hame aapse yahi asha thi Rajkumari Aarti.

H . M ..... Tum dono ki extra class chalegi Aarti aapki lightning element ki class chalegi ki aur Raj ki lightening element aur thunder element ki class chalegi aapka Sari madad school ki taraf se hogi

Aarti.... Ok sir and again thank you

H. M.... Koi baat nahin aap logon ko karni hai 6 mahine bad school mein competition hoga usmein aap donon ko bhag lena hai iske liye aap log tayari kre

Itna khekr master chale Gaye

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Shalini madam bahut khush thi kyunki Aaj unke pass do student aise the jinke paas duniya ki Sabse powerful element the

Kisi ke sath aaj first day tha to class over ho gayi

Uske bad mein Apne room mein a Gaya aur apna kapda change karke school ground mein jakar baith Gaya mujhe kuchh hi der huye the ki Aarti aapane kuchh doston ke sath meri taraf ayi

Aarti..... hi I am Princess Aarti

Me.... Raj

Aarti.... Ab se ham logon Ko sath mein study karni hai to kya ham dost ban sakte hain

Me.... Main koi kamjor nahin Jo doston bnata firu dost kamjor log bnate hi me Raj hu aur Raj Ko kisi ki madad ki jarurat nahin hai isliye aap ja sakti ho

Meri baat sunkar sab shant Ho gayi per usmein ek Aarti ki saheli thi usse rha nahin Gaya usne bola

p.. Priya ... Jante ho tum kis baat kar rahe ho yah Rajkumari Aarti Hain yah tum se dosti kar rahi hai se apna Naseeb samjho

Me.... Raj naam hai mera main khud ki takdeer khud likhta hun chahe Tum Rajkumari ho ya maharani Ho 2 minut mein apni aukat per a gai na aur yah apna grur kisi Aur Ko dikhana samjhi mere liye Tum Keval mere school mein padhne wali a classmate Ho aur jo karna hoga kar lena
Yah tumhara Raj Mahal nahin Raj hu me

ME... Ab app ja sakti hai

Priya.... Tumhe Baat karne ki tamiz nahin hai khud Ko Jaise lagta hai kahin ka mharaja samajhta hun.

Me.. maharaja bn kr me Chandra logon per jarur Raj kar sakta hun mera naam Raj hai aur yah Raj duniya pr Raj Karega aur ek baat mujhe tumse tamiz sikhne ki jrurat ki road nahin hai

Aarti... Koi baat nahin aapko nahin banna hai to koi baat nahin hamari dost se galti Ho gai

ME... Meethi meethi baaton se kisi Aur Ko sunana mujhe nahin kyunki mujhe usse koi fark nahin padta aap ja skti hi Rajkumari Aarti

Aur iske bad Aarti Aur uski dost chli gyi

Jitne student ground mein the sab mujhe dekh rahe the Aarti ke jaane ke bad Raja mere pass aaya aur kaha

Raja.... Bahut achcha Mitra tumne Sahi kaha yah log isi kabil Hain ab se tum mere Mitra Ho

Me... Tum bhi bahut dudh ke dhule nhai ho aur ye Mitra kai aur ko bnana tum logo ke bhasa me Mitra matlab hota hi gulam

Me ..... Is se phle me kuch kru tum l bhag jao yha se

Aur fir Raja Chala Gaya uske bad kuchh nahin hua main Apne room mein aaya aur kuchh din aaram karne ke bad main apna khana khaya aur uske bad main road mein aate T.. fnmein jakar apni practice karne Laga aur apne fier element ko medium lavel tk phucne ke liye practice karne ke bad so gya.

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