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story bhaut interesting chal rahi hai.... Please story ko aise hee continue chalne deBhai app sb sach - sach batana story kisi lag rhi hi
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जबरदस्त भाईUpdate ............. 20
Back to ............. Hero
( Phle Update me apne padha ki hmare hero so rhe the kisi padh ki chaya me ab age ............)
Jb meri nend khuli to mene socha ab mughe jaldi se jaldi koi acha sthan dundh lena chahiye mata Nikumbla devi ki Tapasya karne ke liye
Me dire - dire jungle ke bich me jane laga kuch dur chalne ke bad mugjhe ek gupha mili
Mene socha ye sthan thik rhega aur uske bad mene apna ik clone bnaya Raj 9 jo ki meri 10 % power se bna hua hi
Ab mere ander 60 % power hi bachi thi
Raj 9 ........ Kya agya hi mere liye malik
Me ...... Raj 9 me ja rha hu is gupha me tapasya karne tumhe iski Raksha karni hi chaye jo bhi ho ander nhi ane dena hi jb tk me bahr na ajaue thik hi
Raj 9 ....... Jo agya mere malik me kisi ko bhi ander nhi ane dunga app jaye aur apni Tapasya puri kijie
Uske bad me ander gya aur Mata Nikumbla devi ka us mantra ka jap karne laga jo mughe Pita God of death ne btaya tha ye mantra is pure Universe me kisi ko bhi nhi pta tha
Aur is mantra ko keval wahi padh sakta tha jiski kabhi mout na ho jo amar ho bs use kaid kia ja sakta ho
Meri mout phle hi ho gyi thi ye meri atma thi jisme God of death ka Ansh tha isliye me Prince of deth hu
Meri mout meri pichli jindgi me ho gyi thi ab meri atma thi aur God ke ansh ka ansh tha mere ander mughe mara nhi ja sakta tha ha kaid jarur kia ja sakta tha
Abi mere pas itni power nhi thi ki me universe ke koi top 10000000 ko bhi hara saku wo sb mugje kaid kr sakte the
Isi liye mughe meri power bhadani thi to me dyan me beth gya aur us matra ka jap karta rha
( Ab hero ko bhut year tk yhi mata ka dyan karna hi hm ab hero ke colone ke bare me Jan lete hi ki wo sb abi kya kr rhe ho
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hamare Raj 4 ji ja rhe hi jin ko kabje me karne wo bhi koi aam jin nhi jine e Badshah ko kabje me karne
Raj 4 jine e Badshah ko kabje me karne ke liye chal diye esi jagah jha koi na rhta hi aur wo jagah thi Tha mountain of Andes
Wha pahuch kr Raj 4 jine e Badshah ka mantra padhne lage kuch der bad pure Andes me bhut tej - tej hwaye chlne lgi aur wha pragat hua ek bishal kala Saya
jise dekh kr bhi dar lag jaye Aur wha gunjati hi ek esi hasi jese sunker pura Andes kap uthta hi
jin ...... Hahahaha hahahaha kon pagal hi jise jine ki Esha khatm ho gyi hi jisne mujhe yad kia hi kuch der bad jb jin Raj 4 ko dekhta hi to air jor s hasta hi
jin ........ Ajj sekado salo bad kisi ne mugje yad kia hi wo bhi ek bache ne jiski umra 8 - 9 year ke bache ne chalo ajj tumhe hi mar ke kha jata hu na puri bhukh shi kuch hi sahi
Raj 4 ...... Me tumhe kya koi kahana dikhta hu jo kha loge tumhe banna hi mera gulam
jin ....... Bache tum pagal ho gye ho jo bheki - behki bate kr rhe ho dimag thik hi na tumhara bache
RAj 4 ..... Mera dimag shi hi tum apna batao jine a badsah tumhe gulam bnane ke liye mughe kya karna padega
jin .... Bache tum mughe kabhi hara nhi paoge aur muth tumhari pakki hi chalo dekh hi lete hi tumhe kya ata hi bache hahahahahah
uske bad jin me ak aag ka gola bna kr Raj 4 ke uppar feka Raj 4 ne bhi ek pani ka gola bna kr Jin ke gole pr war kia
jin ..... Bhut acha batlab tum fier element ko use kr sakte ho acha hi Tumhari umara me to ye bhut bada kam hi pr tum mughe eske dam pr nhi hara sakte
Raj 4 ..... Wo bhi dekhenge tumhe banna hi mera gulam hi to bolo mt aur war karo me bhi dekhu jine e Badshah me kitna dam hi
Uske bad Raj 4 ne ek fier magic aur earth magic ko mila kr ek lower lavel 4 ka goal bnaya aur jin pr chod dia
JIn ne jb wo gola dekha to bhut Acharya chakit ho gya kyoki koi bcha lower lavel 4 pr earth magic aur fier magic ka use kese kr sakta hi
jin ne bhi ek Akash magic ka bada sa gila bnaya aur dekh dia
isse ek bada bospot hua
jin ....... But ache hi tumhara magic bhut khub me bhut kush hu ajj tumse lad kr me tumhe jinda jane dunga yha se jao chle jao
jin ki baat sun kr to Raj 4 ko bhut gussa aya aur usne apne 5 element air water , earth , Akash, fier ki ek me mila kr ek bhut jada powerfull gola bnaya aur jin pr chod dia
Jin me jb ye dekha to use to apni ankho pr Vishwas nhi ho rha tha ki koi kese 5 element ko use kr sakta hi wo bhi ek bacha
jin ne apne Three element jinme wo expert lavel 6 ka power use kia aur dekh dia dono gole jab apas me takraye to pura Andes hil gya jin 8 meter dur ja gira aur Raj 4 do kadam piche chla gya
a dekh kr to jin sann pad gya ki ye kese koi bacha itna taktwar ho sakta hi
jin ....... Kya batau me ajj koi takkar me mila hi wo bhi ek 7 - 8 year ka balak
Kush khne ke liye mere pass sabad nhi hi
Pr jin pratha ke anushar tumhe mughe hrana hoga tbi me apka gulam hunga
Jb Raj ne jin ki baat suni to usne apni 90 % energy ke sath 8 level beast ki power aur apne 7 elements power air, water, earth, Akash, fier , lightning element aur thunder element use kr ke ek esa gola
bnaya jiski urja ko dekh jin to itna gabra gya ki wo apne guthno ke bal beth gya
jin .. Mafhi malik chama kare me jine e Badshah ajj se apka gulam hu Andes parbat me itna prakash ho gya ki pura Andes mountains hil rha tha dire - dire Raj 4 ne apni energy apne me sama li
JIn ..... Malik app kon koi Dev atama hi kya mughe kripa btayie
RAj ....... Tumhe ye puchne ka koi hak nhi hi ajj se tum mere gulam ho
uske bad jine e Badshah ne apni mani Raj 4 ko dia
Ab Raj 4 jin lok ka Raja bn gya tha
Bahut khubsurat hey bhaiBhai app sb sach - sach batana story kisi lag rhi hi
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OK bhaiHallo friends ajj mughe city jana hi collage ke kuch kam se ajj updete late ayega
Lajwab Awesome Superbbbb Speechless update..........Update number _ 2 Kuch din bad meri atma ek gole me bn kr khi chli gai jb me vha phucga to dekha ki vha bhut prakash hi tvi ek golden colour ki akirti ubhrti hi meri ankhe band ho gai kyoki vha bhut prakash tha
Me. App kon hi
G shadow. God of death
Me . Apko Raj ka pranam
G. Shadow. Tumhara klyan ho Raj tum ne apna krme bhut ache se nibhaya hi me tumse bhut khush hu tum mugh se kuch bhi mang skte ho agar mere bus me hua to me tumhe grur dunga
Ma. Isi jindgi ka kya arth na mughe mere ma mile na pita aj tk me dutkara gya mene abki madad ki log bs mughse apne kam ke liye dosti kerte he God mughe apne pass apna seek bna kr rakh ligye
G . D . Putra Raj tum shi kh rhe ho prntu sukh dukh manushya ke krm pr nirbhr karta hi log apne krme se apna bhagy chunte hi
Me . Gi God mughe kya agya hi jesa app adesh krenge me wesa hi krunga
G. D. Putra Raj me tumhare krm anusar tumhe ye vardan deta hu ki agr tum mere putr ho tumne mera anse bnoge tumhe burai ka nas kr ke drme ki asthapna kroge duniya tumhe mere putra ke nam se ganegi Tha son of God of death Tha great warrior Raj
me . He God app mughe itna mhatopurnya kary de rhe hi kya me is ke kabil hu me ik anath hu prabhu
G. D . Dubara kabhi ese sabd ka prayog nhi karna putra me tumhare pita hu aur tum is krya ke liye Uttam ho tumhe is universe pr achai sthapit krni hi
Me . Ap e mughe apnputra bnaya me sada achai ka sthapna aur buryai ka na s krunga Pita shree
G. D. Kush rho putra
AUr fir mere shrir ik rosni ke gole me tbdil hoke ek village type area me a gya ye world magical world tha
Some important information of new magical world
Element yha8 element hote hi
1. Water
2. Earth
3. Air
4. Fir
5. Sky
6. Lightning power bhut hi rare power hi
7. Thunder power bhut rare power hi
8. Dark power
Magical lavel
1. Lower magician (. Ye 5 type ki hoti hi )
2.. Medium lavel magician (Ye 5 type ki hoti hi)
3. Highr lavel magician ( ye 10 lavel hoti hi )
4. Ultra highr lavel magician ye 5 type ki hoti hi
5. Emparor lavel magician ye 20. Type ki hoti hi
6. Ultra emparor lavel magician ye 10 type ki hoti hi
7.legend lavel magician ye 10 lavel ki hoti hi
8.legend Lower lavel magician ye 5 lavel ki hoti hi
9. Legend Medium lavel magician ye 5 lavel ki hoti hi
10. Legend highr lavel magician ye 5 lavel ki hoti hai
11. Legend ultra lavel magician ye 10 lavel ki hoti hai
Lajwab Awesome Superbbbb Speechless update..........3. Update . 12. Junior warrior lavel . Ye 5 lavel ka hota hi
13. Secondary warrior lavel. ye 10 type ka hota hi
14. Great warrior lavel . Ye 20 lavel ka hota hi
location. Present
Jb meri ankh khuli to mene dekha ki me ek village type area me PdA hu bhut der me whi rha tvi 8_ 10 log usi raste se ga rhe the unh me se ek ki nagr mugh pr padi
1 aadami . ne kahan dekhen mukhiya ji vahan koi baccha pada hai.
2 Aadami . pata nahin Kaun Aisa hai ki jo Apne is nnhe se bacche ko yahan chhod gaya hai
Important character
Mukhiya ji. Veer
Mukhiya ji ki patni. Tara
Tara jakar use bacche ko apni God mein liya aur mukhiya ji se kahati hai dekhiae is bacche ke chehre per Kitna tej hai hamara koi bhi beta nahin hai kya ham is apna beta banaa le mukhiya ji bhi bacche ko dekh kar usi mein kho jaate Hain Tara ke pukarne per mukhya ji hosh mein aate Hain
Veer . Kyon nahin ham is bacche ka palan poshan karenge
Yah baat sunkar mukhiya ji ki patni Dhara bahut khush ho jaati hai aur bacche ko lekar Apne Ghar ki taraf Chali jaati hai kuchh der bad Veer bhi ghar aata hai hai aur bacche ko dekhne lagta hai
Veer . Tara dekho bacche ke a gale mein koi locket hai
Tara. Han bahut chamak raha hai
Veer. Kl main jakar Baba Ji ko bula ke le kar aaunga Apne bacche ka naam rakhenge
Tara. Thik hi
Aise hi Raat beet jaati hai agale din beete jakar babaji ko bulakar lekar aata hai baba ji Higher 3 lavel magician the aur bahut Gyani the
Jab vah aate Hain aur bacchon Ko dekhte hain to kuchh pal ke liye usi mein kho jaate Hain
Babaji. Baccha bahut bhagyashali hai
Baba ji. Is bacche ka naam ajj se Raj hi
Bacche ka nam sunker Tara or veer bhut kush ho jate Hain
Samay bitta rahata hai ab Raj panch sal ka ho gaya Veer aur Tara use bahut pyar karte hain
Ek din babaji hai ye aur unhone veer se kha kl Raj ko mer ghar lana ab ye 5 year ka ho gya hi hm es ke element kaun kaun sa element hai eske pas
Veer . Baba mein kl ese lekar aaunga aapke pass
Baba ji thik hi aur chele gye
Dusre din Veer Raj Ko Apne sath Baba Ji ke ghar lekar gata hi jb babaji Raj ka element check karte hain to ashcharyachakit rah jaate Hain Veer Jab Baba Ji ko aise dekhta hai
Veer. Kya hua Baba ji aap vaise kya dekh rahe hain kya koi samasya hai
Babaji. Aaj Maine pahli bar Aisa balak dekha hai iske paas sere element kisi Ko batana nahin agar kisi ko pata chal gaya to is balak ko King ko de denge
Jab Veer Ko pata chala ki uske bete ke pass sare element Hain vah bahut khush ho gaya aur Baba Ji ko kahan theek hai Baba Ji main kisi Ko nahin bataunga aur ghar chala aya
Tara . Kya hua hamare bacche ke pass kaunsa element hai
Veer Tara Ko sab bataya Jo Baba ji ne bataya tha Tara bahut khush ho gai aur usne kaha ki hamara beta lakhon mein ek hai
Aise hi ek saal beet Gaya
Ab se Raj Ko me likhunga
Ab me 6 yaer ho gaya tha aur Dhyan lagana vyayam karna yahi meri dincharya Ho gai thi main Apne fire element aur water element ko jagrit kar liya lower label ke a third level Tak