Fantasy The great warrior

[Shahrukh]

Fantastic Story keep posting

 

[Asif khan]

Location India City Delhi.

Hero name _ Raj
Raj dekhne mein theek thaak hai. Raj ki umra 19 sal hi college mein BSc first year me admission liya hai scholarship se Raj anath aashram mein rahata tha 18 sal Tak ab ek kirae ke kamre mein rahata hai Raj ki jindagi bahut kthinayi se biti school mein sab use loser loser kahate the kyunki Raj koi bhi game mein participate nahin Karta tha aur Na koi activity mein sirf padhai Karta tha aur dekhne mein bhi vo dubla patla sa ladka dekhta tha Raj ke kuch dost vi bne Keval Raj se apna Kam pura kar wate the sab matlab ke dost the fir bhi Raj kisi Ko kuch nahin khta tha sabki madad Karta tha jindagi bahut dukh Bhari hui thi.

Location. R . V College Delhi
Raj ka aaj college mein first day tha sabse pahle college ke liye ready hua Raj ke Ghar se college 3 kilometre duri per tha.

Ab Se Raj Ko me likhunga
Jab main college pahuncha GATE se entre Kiya kuch ladke junior student ko pareshan kar rahe the Jaise hi main gate ke andar hua ladke ne mujhe awaaz dekar Apne paas Bulaya
Ladka first. Idhar aa kya Naam hai Tera
Me. Ji Raj
Ladka 2. senior se baat karne ki tamiz nahin hai sir karkar bat kia kr
Me. Sir Raj naam hai mera
Ladka 3rd. Chal turant murga ban ja
Me ( man me socha ki) iske alwa mere pass koi rasta nahin hai yah log mujhse jyada hai aur takatwar bhi FIR kya tha main murga ban gaya.
Kuch der pareshan karne ke bad unhone mujhe Jane Diya Jaise hi main class mein pahuncha ek ladke ne mujhe dekh kar kaha
Ladka.. vah dekho Jo bahar murga banaa tha vah a Gaya
Aur sab hasne Lage
Main Bus dekh sakta tha kuchh kr sakta nahin tha isliye jakar piche Beth Gaya
15 minut bad
Class start ho gai class teacher eye sab ka introduction lene lge

Class teacher. Hello student myself Rajit main hun aapka class teacher Aaj sab apna apna introduction denge padhaai kl se hogi isi ke bad sab apna apna introduction dene lge

Jab meri Bari aayi

Hello myself Raj and my 12 percent is 97 %
Sb mujhe dekhne lage

Class teacher. Very good Raj good performance.
Main. Thanks sir.

Aise hi sari class over ho gai class ke bad mein apni bag lekar Ghar ki taraf chal Diya Achanak mujhe ek baccha sadak par dikha jo ki sadak par kar raha tha Maine dekha ki ek taraf ek car a rahi thi main dor ke use bachane gaya bacche ko leker baga pr tabhi car mugh se tkra gai mere hath se baccha udhar gira baccha Gaya .

JB main utha to dekha sab log meri body ko dekh rahe hain tabhi kisi ne kaha iske deth ho gai hai mujhe kuchh samajh mein nahin a raha tha main bahut din tak aise hi Raha. Meri body ko police ne hospital lekar gaye aur doctor ne mera postmortem Kiya meri body ko jala Diya Gaya meri bahut din tak vaha Raha

Very nice start and congrats for new story

 

[Devil hunter123]

Nice story bhai
Waiting for next update

 

[Xabhi]

Update number _ 2 Kuch din bad meri atma ek gole me bn kr khi chli gai jb me vha phucga to dekha ki vha bhut prakash hi tvi ek golden colour ki akirti ubhrti hi meri ankhe band ho gai kyoki vha bhut prakash tha

Me. App kon hi

G shadow. God of death

Me . Apko Raj ka pranam

G. Shadow. Tumhara klyan ho Raj tum ne apna krme bhut ache se nibhaya hi me tumse bhut khush hu tum mugh se kuch bhi mang skte ho agar mere bus me hua to me tumhe grur dunga


Ma. Isi jindgi ka kya arth na mughe mere ma mile na pita aj tk me dutkara gya mene abki madad ki log bs mughse apne kam ke liye dosti kerte he God mughe apne pass apna seek bna kr rakh ligye

G . D . Putra Raj tum shi kh rhe ho prntu sukh dukh manushya ke krm pr nirbhr karta hi log apne krme se apna bhagy chunte hi

Me . Gi God mughe kya agya hi jesa app adesh krenge me wesa hi krunga

G. D. Putra Raj me tumhare krm anusar tumhe ye vardan deta hu ki agr tum mere putr ho tumne mera anse bnoge tumhe burai ka nas kr ke drme ki asthapna kroge duniya tumhe mere putra ke nam se ganegi Tha son of God of death Tha great warrior Raj

me . He God app mughe itna mhatopurnya kary de rhe hi kya me is ke kabil hu me ik anath hu prabhu

G. D . Dubara kabhi ese sabd ka prayog nhi karna putra me tumhare pita hu aur tum is krya ke liye Uttam ho tumhe is universe pr achai sthapit krni hi

Me . Ap e mughe apnputra bnaya me sada achai ka sthapna aur buryai ka na s krunga Pita shree

G. D. Kush rho putra

AUr fir mere shrir ik rosni ke gole me tbdil hoke ek village type area me a gya ye world magical world tha

Some important information of new magical world

Element yha8 element hote hi

1. Water
2. Earth
3. Air
4. Fir
5. Sky

6. Lightning power bhut hi rare power hi

7. Thunder power bhut rare power hi

8. Dark power

Magical lavel

1. Lower magician (. Ye 5 type ki hoti hi )

2.. Medium lavel magician (Ye 5 type ki hoti hi)

3. Highr lavel magician ( ye 10 lavel hoti hi )

4. Ultra highr lavel magician ye 5 type ki hoti hi

5. Emparor lavel magician ye 20. Type ki hoti hi

6. Ultra emparor lavel magician ye 10 type ki hoti hi

7.legend lavel magician ye 10 lavel ki hoti hi


8.legend Lower lavel magician ye 5 lavel ki hoti hi

9. Legend Medium lavel magician ye 5 lavel ki hoti hi

10. Legend highr lavel magician ye 5 lavel ki hoti hai

11. Legend ultra lavel magician ye 10 lavel ki hoti hai

Aapne isme kafi kuchh nya add kiya hai Mai uski prasansha karta hu abhi Aapki suruvat hai Kosis kariyega Ise or behtar bnane ki aapne is update me 11 level ke bare me btaya hai dekhte hai apna hero Raj kaise or kab apni uniqueness pradarshit karta hai... Sarahniya update mitra...

 

[Xabhi]

3. Update . 12. Junior warrior lavel . Ye 5 lavel ka hota hi

13. Secondary warrior lavel. ye 10 type ka hota hi
14. Great warrior lavel . Ye 20 lavel ka hota hi

location. Present
Jb meri ankh khuli to mene dekha ki me ek village type area me PdA hu bhut der me whi rha tvi 8_ 10 log usi raste se ga rhe the unh me se ek ki nagr mugh pr padi
1 aadami . ne kahan dekhen mukhiya ji vahan koi baccha pada hai.

2 Aadami . pata nahin Kaun Aisa hai ki jo Apne is nnhe se bacche ko yahan chhod gaya hai

Important character

Mukhiya ji. Veer
Mukhiya ji ki patni. Tara

Tara jakar use bacche ko apni God mein liya aur mukhiya ji se kahati hai dekhiae is bacche ke chehre per Kitna tej hai hamara koi bhi beta nahin hai kya ham is apna beta banaa le mukhiya ji bhi bacche ko dekh kar usi mein kho jaate Hain Tara ke pukarne per mukhya ji hosh mein aate Hain

Veer . Kyon nahin ham is bacche ka palan poshan karenge

Yah baat sunkar mukhiya ji ki patni Dhara bahut khush ho jaati hai aur bacche ko lekar Apne Ghar ki taraf Chali jaati hai kuchh der bad Veer bhi ghar aata hai hai aur bacche ko dekhne lagta hai
Veer . Tara dekho bacche ke a gale mein koi locket hai
Tara. Han bahut chamak raha hai
Veer. Kl main jakar Baba Ji ko bula ke le kar aaunga Apne bacche ka naam rakhenge
Tara. Thik hi
Aise hi Raat beet jaati hai agale din beete jakar babaji ko bulakar lekar aata hai baba ji Higher 3 lavel magician the aur bahut Gyani the
Jab vah aate Hain aur bacchon Ko dekhte hain to kuchh pal ke liye usi mein kho jaate Hain
Babaji. Baccha bahut bhagyashali hai
Baba ji. Is bacche ka naam ajj se Raj hi

Bacche ka nam sunker Tara or veer bhut kush ho jate Hain
Samay bitta rahata hai ab Raj panch sal ka ho gaya Veer aur Tara use bahut pyar karte hain
Ek din babaji hai ye aur unhone veer se kha kl Raj ko mer ghar lana ab ye 5 year ka ho gya hi hm es ke element kaun kaun sa element hai eske pas

Veer . Baba mein kl ese lekar aaunga aapke pass

Baba ji thik hi aur chele gye

Dusre din Veer Raj Ko Apne sath Baba Ji ke ghar lekar gata hi jb babaji Raj ka element check karte hain to ashcharyachakit rah jaate Hain Veer Jab Baba Ji ko aise dekhta hai
Veer. Kya hua Baba ji aap vaise kya dekh rahe hain kya koi samasya hai

Babaji. Aaj Maine pahli bar Aisa balak dekha hai iske paas sere element kisi Ko batana nahin agar kisi ko pata chal gaya to is balak ko King ko de denge

Jab Veer Ko pata chala ki uske bete ke pass sare element Hain vah bahut khush ho gaya aur Baba Ji ko kahan theek hai Baba Ji main kisi Ko nahin bataunga aur ghar chala aya

Tara . Kya hua hamare bacche ke pass kaunsa element hai
Veer Tara Ko sab bataya Jo Baba ji ne bataya tha Tara bahut khush ho gai aur usne kaha ki hamara beta lakhon mein ek hai

Aise hi ek saal beet Gaya

Ab se Raj Ko me likhunga

Ab me 6 yaer ho gaya tha aur Dhyan lagana vyayam karna yahi meri dincharya Ho gai thi main Apne fire element aur water element ko jagrit kar liya lower label ke a third level Tak

Sandar update bhai jabarjast tarike se prastut kiya hai aapne ab Aapki kalam me kafi sudhar dikh rha hai ise yu hi barkrar rakhiye to mukhiya ji (veer) or Tara naamak ek dampatti ko ek balak unke raste ke jungle me milta hai vo use apne balak man kr palan poshan karte hai ek baba ji jo 3rd level ke magician hai or gyani bhi Unhone uska naam Raj rakha 5 varsh ki aayu hone pr Raj ke element ki janch karte hai to pta chalta hai ki uske pass sare element hai baba yah baat kisi ko na btane ko kahte hai 6 varsh ke hone pr Raj apne tatvo ki practice karne lagta hai or dhyan bhi lgane Lagta hai... Superb bhai...

 

[Xabhi]

Update 3. 2. Ese hi ek din me dyan laga rha tha ki mere samne Pita God of death a gye mene.
Mene unki prnam Kiya .
G.D . Kese ho Putra Raj
Me . ME thik hu pita jee apne Air element ko jagrit kar raha tha aur bar bar asafal ho ga rha tha .

G. D. Putra tum bahut mehnat kar rahe ho ese hi pryas kro tum garur safl hoge

Me. Jee pita shree me pura pryas kr rha hu safal hone ka

G. D. Putra me tumhe kuch dene aur batane aya hu

Me. Jee pita shree

G. D . Me tumhe t . f dene aya hu gisse tum is t f ke ander gake apna abhyas kr sko aur tumhe ye powr dene aya hu ki tum agr apne element ko chupana chaho to chupa skte ho

Ma kush hokr
Me . Jee pita shree

G. D . Aur ha tumhe do year ache se abyas karna hi do sall bad tumhe ek bhut sktisali Tlwar hasil karna hi

Me . Jee pita shree
Uske bed pita shree chale gye aur me apna abhyas karne laga kush der abyas karke me ghar aya to dekha Baba khi ga rhe the

Me . Baba app khi ga rhe hi

Baba . ha Raj beta me city ga rha hu wha tumhara admission bhi karana hi ab tum 6 year ke ho gaye ho

Me . Jee baba
Baba ke gane ke bad mene ma s khana manga khana khake Sone chla gya
evening ko jb me so kr utha to todhi der ma se bate ki aur fir mene ma se kha

Me. Ma me thoda der gumhne ja rha hu

Ma . Thik hi beta lakin door nhi jana
Uske bad me humne chla gya todi der Gumhne ke bad ghar aya aur khana khake so gya

Agle din jb baba aye to unhone mughe bataya ki unhone mara admission city ke ek bhut ache school me likha dia hi 15 din bad mughe school jana hi me bhut khush ho gya

ese hi 14 din bit gye in 14 dno me mene apne 4 element air, water, earth. Akash . ko lower lavel ke 4 lavel tk use karna sikh gya apne T . F ki madad se jo mughe pita God of deth ne dia tha pr or age mugh se nhi ho parha tha to mene aur smaya byam kia

Rat ko jb me ma babake sath khanakha rha tha to Baba ne mughe school ke bere me bataya

Ab hm thoda apne Rajya ke bere me bat kerte hi gha me rhta hu
his school me padhne ja rha tha uska name M. S magical school Rajya ka sbse acha school hi
Ma baba ne mughe us school me padhane ke liye apni jiwan bhr ki sari smptti laga di thi me ne ye prtigya ki ma aur baba ko bhut achi jindgi dunga unhe mughpr gerve hoga

Aur uske bad me so gya

Aapne kafi kusalta se likha hai aapki mehnat jhalakti hai sandar update bhai kuchh jagah pr trutiya hai pr aap unhe bhi dheere dheere sahi kr lenge aisi ahsa hai mujhe to raj ne 4 tatvo ko jagrat kar liya hai or aage ki taiyari me hai uske baba ne uska admission unke rajya ke sabse bade school me kra diya hai Jisme unki sari jma punji lag gyi hai raj bhi unhe ek accha bhavisya dene ka pratigya karta hai God of Death raj se milne aate hai or vo Raj ka margdarsan karke chale jate hai... Superb update bhai sandar

 

[Xabhi]

Ab nind aa rhi hai to so rha hu subah milte hai...

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

UPdate . 4


Morning me jb me utha to sbse phle dyan me betha aur apne Air element ko lower lavel 5 pr le jane lga pr bar bar mera dyan tut ja rha tha

Aur jb me dyan se utha to dekha ki Subha ho gayi thi aaj mughe magic school me padhne city jana tha to me bhut khush tha

Me dyan se uthne ke bad nadi pr gya ya hamare kabile ke sare log wahi nhate the mene bhi nhaya aur kuch loge ne mere magic school jane ke bare me pucha mene sb se btaya ki ajj me jane wala hu aur uske bad me Ghar a gya
Maa
Beta nha aye nadi me ajj tumko city ke magic school vi jana hi

ME . Ji maa me nha aya aur apni tyari bhi kr li hi school jane ke liye

Ase kuch der bad mene aur Maa Banane khana khya

Baba. Raj beta ache se sb sekhna aur Aur kisi se ladayi mt kerna .

Me. ji baba me dyan se sb ci khunga aur ladayi nhi krunga kisi se apto jante hi me bhut sedha hu

Ma aur Baba ek sath . Haha haha Hme pta hi ki tum kitne sedhe ho he mhine kisi na kisi se ladte rhte ho abhi phechle mhine ek ladke ka hath tod diya tha

Me . Hu Maa baba ap log bhi be wagh ilzam lagate rhte ho

Maa. Acha ab jldi tyar ho jao nhi to der ho jayega

Uske bad me tyar hua aur bhar aya
Maa bhut royi mene maa se wafa kia ki uhe school me chutti hogi to melne aunga

Aur uske bad ma aur Maa se mil kr me baba ke sath magic school jane ke liye city ki trafh chl dia aj me phli bar city aya tha mughe sb kuch bhut acha lg rha tha
Kuch der clne ke bad me magic school phuch gya dikne pr bhut acha lg rha tha akhir ho vi khona hmare Rajya ka sbse acha magic school jo tha

Me baba ander gye baba ne mughe lakr had master ke paas gye

Baba . Sir ye hi mera beta Raj aur ye rha iska admission form .

H. M . Ok ap ja skte hi aur h . M ne ek ladke ko awaj di aur kha ki jo aur ise student room me chod ayo

Baba todi der mughse mile fir chle gye me us ladke ke sath room chla aya room bhut acha tha us ladke ke mughe btaya ki meri class kl se hi aur chla gya

USke bad me so gya fir rat ko utha kuch der betha rha aur age ke bare me sochne lga ab kya karna hi tvi ek aurat mer pass ayi aur mugh se kha ki chlo khane ka time ho gya hi me vi usi ke sath chla gya

jb me wha phucga to dekha ki wha buth se student vi bethe the mene khana kya uske bad hm sb ko btaya gya ki kl se hme apne time se ana hi

Uske bad sb chle gye mebhi ja kr apne room me so gya

Morning me utha aur apne sare magic jo mene Control Kiya jitne lavel tk use ache se pratice kiya

Aur uske bad me sara km kr ke ek ladki se puch kr apne class chla gya

ye school hmare Rajya ka sbse acha school tha to yha as pas ke Rajyo ke Rajkumar aur Rajkumari vi padhte hi

Location. class room

Me class me gya aur first row me beth gaya kuch der bad sb log

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Sandar update bhai jabarjast tarike se prastut kiya hai aapne ab Aapki kalam me kafi sudhar dikh rha hai ise yu hi barkrar rakhiye to mukhiya ji (veer) or Tara naamak ek dampatti ko ek balak unke raste ke jungle me milta hai vo use apne balak man kr palan poshan karte hai ek baba ji jo 3rd level ke magician hai or gyani bhi Unhone uska naam Raj rakha 5 varsh ki aayu hone pr Raj ke element ki janch karte hai to pta chalta hai ki uske pass sare element hai baba yah baat kisi ko na btane ko kahte hai 6 varsh ke hone pr Raj apne tatvo ki practice karne lagta hai or dhyan bhi lgane Lagta hai... Superb bhai...

Thank you bhai

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Ab nind aa rhi hai to so rha hu subah milte hai...

Bhi kl night ko kuch problem thi to update nhi de paya abhi likh kr post liya bhai