Fantasy The great warrior

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Aapne kafi kusalta se likha hai aapki mehnat jhalakti hai sandar update bhai kuchh jagah pr trutiya hai pr aap unhe bhi dheere dheere sahi kr lenge aisi ahsa hai mujhe to raj ne 4 tatvo ko jagrat kar liya hai or aage ki taiyari me hai uske baba ne uska admission unke rajya ke sabse bade school me kra diya hai Jisme unki sari jma punji lag gyi hai raj bhi unhe ek accha bhavisya dene ka pratigya karta hai God of Death raj se milne aate hai or vo Raj ka margdarsan karke chale jate hai... Superb update bhai sandar

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[Raj Singh Thakur]

Very nice start and congrats for new story

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[Raj Singh Thakur]

Fantastic Story keep posting

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[Raj Singh Thakur]

Nice Update bro

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[Shahrukh]

Awesome Update Keep Posting

 

[Xabhi]

UPdate . 4


Morning me jb me utha to sbse phle dyan me betha aur apne Air element ko lower lavel 5 pr le jane lga pr bar bar mera dyan tut ja rha tha

Aur jb me dyan se utha to dekha ki Subha ho gayi thi aaj mughe magic school me padhne city jana tha to me bhut khush tha

Me dyan se uthne ke bad nadi pr gya ya hamare kabile ke sare log wahi nhate the mene bhi nhaya aur kuch loge ne mere magic school jane ke bare me pucha mene sb se btaya ki ajj me jane wala hu aur uske bad me Ghar a gya
Maa
Beta nha aye nadi me ajj tumko city ke magic school vi jana hi

ME . Ji maa me nha aya aur apni tyari bhi kr li hi school jane ke liye

Ase kuch der bad mene aur Maa Banane khana khya

Baba. Raj beta ache se sb sekhna aur Aur kisi se ladayi mt kerna .

Me. ji baba me dyan se sb ci khunga aur ladayi nhi krunga kisi se apto jante hi me bhut sedha hu

Ma aur Baba ek sath . Haha haha Hme pta hi ki tum kitne sedhe ho he mhine kisi na kisi se ladte rhte ho abhi phechle mhine ek ladke ka hath tod diya tha

Me . Hu Maa baba ap log bhi be wagh ilzam lagate rhte ho

Maa. Acha ab jldi tyar ho jao nhi to der ho jayega

Uske bad me tyar hua aur bhar aya
Maa bhut royi mene maa se wafa kia ki uhe school me chutti hogi to melne aunga

Aur uske bad ma aur Maa se mil kr me baba ke sath magic school jane ke liye city ki trafh chl dia aj me phli bar city aya tha mughe sb kuch bhut acha lg rha tha
Kuch der clne ke bad me magic school phuch gya dikne pr bhut acha lg rha tha akhir ho vi khona hmare Rajya ka sbse acha magic school jo tha

Me baba ander gye baba ne mughe lakr had master ke paas gye

Baba . Sir ye hi mera beta Raj aur ye rha iska admission form .

H. M . Ok ap ja skte hi aur h . M ne ek ladke ko awaj di aur kha ki jo aur ise student room me chod ayo

Baba todi der mughse mile fir chle gye me us ladke ke sath room chla aya room bhut acha tha us ladke ke mughe btaya ki meri class kl se hi aur chla gya

USke bad me so gya fir rat ko utha kuch der betha rha aur age ke bare me sochne lga ab kya karna hi tvi ek aurat mer pass ayi aur mugh se kha ki chlo khane ka time ho gya hi me vi usi ke sath chla gya

jb me wha phucga to dekha ki wha buth se student vi bethe the mene khana kya uske bad hm sb ko btaya gya ki kl se hme apne time se ana hi

Uske bad sb chle gye mebhi ja kr apne room me so gya

Morning me utha aur apne sare magic jo mene Control Kiya jitne lavel tk use ache se pratice kiya

Aur uske bad me sara km kr ke ek ladki se puch kr apne class chla gya

ye school hmare Rajya ka sbse acha school tha to yha as pas ke Rajyo ke Rajkumar aur Rajkumari vi padhte hi

Location. class room

Me class me gya aur first row me beth gaya kuch der bad sb log

Sandar update bhai jabarjast to Raj school pahuch gya or Uski class agle din se suru ho rhi hai... Thoda truriyo pr or dhyan de bhai baki sb Badhiya hai...

 

[Naina]

UPdate . 4


Morning me jb me utha to sbse phle dyan me betha aur apne Air element ko lower lavel 5 pr le jane lga pr bar bar mera dyan tut ja rha tha

Aur jb me dyan se utha to dekha ki Subha ho gayi thi aaj mughe magic school me padhne city jana tha to me bhut khush tha

Me dyan se uthne ke bad nadi pr gya ya hamare kabile ke sare log wahi nhate the mene bhi nhaya aur kuch loge ne mere magic school jane ke bare me pucha mene sb se btaya ki ajj me jane wala hu aur uske bad me Ghar a gya
Maa
Beta nha aye nadi me ajj tumko city ke magic school vi jana hi

ME . Ji maa me nha aya aur apni tyari bhi kr li hi school jane ke liye

Ase kuch der bad mene aur Maa Banane khana khya

Baba. Raj beta ache se sb sekhna aur Aur kisi se ladayi mt kerna .

Me. ji baba me dyan se sb ci khunga aur ladayi nhi krunga kisi se apto jante hi me bhut sedha hu

Ma aur Baba ek sath . Haha haha Hme pta hi ki tum kitne sedhe ho he mhine kisi na kisi se ladte rhte ho abhi phechle mhine ek ladke ka hath tod diya tha

Me . Hu Maa baba ap log bhi be wagh ilzam lagate rhte ho

Maa. Acha ab jldi tyar ho jao nhi to der ho jayega

Uske bad me tyar hua aur bhar aya
Maa bhut royi mene maa se wafa kia ki uhe school me chutti hogi to melne aunga

Aur uske bad ma aur Maa se mil kr me baba ke sath magic school jane ke liye city ki trafh chl dia aj me phli bar city aya tha mughe sb kuch bhut acha lg rha tha
Kuch der clne ke bad me magic school phuch gya dikne pr bhut acha lg rha tha akhir ho vi khona hmare Rajya ka sbse acha magic school jo tha

Me baba ander gye baba ne mughe lakr had master ke paas gye

Baba . Sir ye hi mera beta Raj aur ye rha iska admission form .

H. M . Ok ap ja skte hi aur h . M ne ek ladke ko awaj di aur kha ki jo aur ise student room me chod ayo

Baba todi der mughse mile fir chle gye me us ladke ke sath room chla aya room bhut acha tha us ladke ke mughe btaya ki meri class kl se hi aur chla gya

USke bad me so gya fir rat ko utha kuch der betha rha aur age ke bare me sochne lga ab kya karna hi tvi ek aurat mer pass ayi aur mugh se kha ki chlo khane ka time ho gya hi me vi usi ke sath chla gya

jb me wha phucga to dekha ki wha buth se student vi bethe the mene khana kya uske bad hm sb ko btaya gya ki kl se hme apne time se ana hi

Uske bad sb chle gye mebhi ja kr apne room me so gya

Morning me utha aur apne sare magic jo mene Control Kiya jitne lavel tk use ache se pratice kiya

Aur uske bad me sara km kr ke ek ladki se puch kr apne class chla gya

ye school hmare Rajya ka sbse acha school tha to yha as pas ke Rajyo ke Rajkumar aur Rajkumari vi padhte hi

Location. class room

Me class me gya aur first row me beth gaya kuch der bad sb log

is update ke sath hi Raj ki jindagi ka ek naya adhyay suru... school life wo bhi with magic.. wah kya baat hai... yahan wo apni powers ko aur nikhar payega...
Waise ek kahani mein kayi kirdaar hote hai, kabhi kabhi bahot saare kirdaar hote hai... lekin ek update mein itne kirdaaro ki bhaavnaye, unki gatividhiya ek lay vadh tarike se dikhana... ye bahot Kam writes hi sathik roop se kar paate hai...jisme mein se ek aap bhi hai.. .Waise aapki ye story pe ye magic school ke bare mein padh kar harry potter movie ki yaad aaye...

well. jo parithitiya ban rahi hai kahani ke har ek point pe wo sach mein adbhut aur kabile tarif hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai.
aise hi likhti rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye
Update bahot hi dilchasp aur dilkash the...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

is update ke sath hi Raj ki jindagi ka ek naya adhyay suru... school life wo bhi with magic.. wah kya baat hai... yahan wo apni powers ko aur nikhar payega...
Waise ek kahani mein kayi kirdaar hote hai, kabhi kabhi bahot saare kirdaar hote hai... lekin ek update mein itne kirdaaro ki bhaavnaye, unki gatividhiya ek lay vadh tarike se dikhana... ye bahot Kam writes hi sathik roop se kar paate hai...jisme mein se ek aap bhi hai.. .Waise aapki ye story pe ye magic school ke bare mein padh kar harry potter movie ki yaad aaye...

well. jo parithitiya ban rahi hai kahani ke har ek point pe wo sach mein adbhut aur kabile tarif hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai.
aise hi likhti rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye
Update bahot hi dilchasp aur dilkash the...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Thank you

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Sandar update bhai jabarjast to Raj school pahuch gya or Uski class agle din se suru ho rhi hai... Thoda truriyo pr or dhyan de bhai baki sb Badhiya hai...

Thank you bhai

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Awesome Update Keep Posting

Thank you bhai