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Fantasy THE INHERITOR(A PATH TO DESTINY)

What do you think about the story?

  • Story needs a change

    Votes: 2 5.0%

  • I should stop writing

    Votes: 2 5.0%

  • Story is good. Should be written like this

    Votes: 37 92.5%
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gagan243001

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bhai bahut hi badhiya update tha aur jaise ki aapane Kaha Tha ki aap agale mahine ki 4 ya 5 tarikh se update Doge lekin Fir Bhi aapane update Diya isase aapki is Kahani Ko pura hone ki koshish dikhti hai jo ki ek bahut hi acchi baat hai acchi kahaniyon ka pura Hona Ek bahut hi sukhd ghatna hai jo Har acchi Kahani ke sath Nahin Ho paati Jaise Ki Waqt shap ya Vardan aur Aisi hi milati jhuthi bahut sari kahaniyan hi Jo thi to bahut acchi lekin khatm Nahin Ho Pai


Mere point off view se vah America wala Ladka Rubel tha Rubel ki shaadi ho gai hai aur uska baccha bhi hai beach per baithane Wali Ladki Shayad Niti hai aur jo ladki Pennsylvania ke andar Bharti Hai patient vah Ladki amu Hai





next update Ke Intezar Mein
 
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Bro her bar aap wo lady wo ladki likh rahe ho ab kya story ke sabhi character suspens rakhne hai aur ye kya rudra ke ghar me bacha kaha se aaya uska naam armaan hai kya kyoki aapne uska intro nahi diya nahi ye bataya ke kitna time ke baad ye scene aaya hai means armaan London gaya uske bad aapne ek do scene likhe aur direct bachha aa gaya please clear all confusions bro
Wese story achhi ja rahi hai but confusion jyada kar diya khas kar ye last wala update please clear all sought.
 
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Nice story.
But ek do update me kuchh samajh nhi aaya. Story kab and kis time ke bad ki hai. Aur character bhi samajh nhi aaya.
Dekhte h aane wale update me suspence clear hoha ya nhi.
Waiting for next update Bhai
 
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gagan243001 said:
bhai bahut hi badhiya update tha aur jaise ki aapane Kaha Tha ki aap agale mahine ki 4 ya 5 tarikh se update Doge lekin Fir Bhi aapane update Diya isase aapki is Kahani Ko pura hone ki koshish dikhti hai jo ki ek bahut hi acchi baat hai acchi kahaniyon ka pura Hona Ek bahut hi sukhd ghatna hai jo Har acchi Kahani ke sath Nahin Ho paati Jaise Ki Waqt shap ya Vardan aur Aisi hi milati jhuthi bahut sari kahaniyan hi Jo thi to bahut acchi lekin khatm Nahin Ho Pai


Mere point off view se vah America wala Ladka Rubel tha Rubel ki shaadi ho gai hai aur uska baccha bhi hai beach per baithane Wali Ladki Shayad Niti hai aur jo ladki Pennsylvania ke andar Bharti Hai patient vah Ladki amu Hai





next update Ke Intezar Mein
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Aage pata chalega...
 
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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai...
Itna to smjh aagya...
Kl Jo American boy tha wo rubal tha..
Rubal ki Sadi ho gaihai but iski wife ka intro nhi aaya..
Armaan ke sis ka point of view hide that..
Beach Bali girls Kon hai.
Doctor or patient Kon hai..
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Rahul said:
badhiya update bhai ji
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Rohit1988 said:
Nice update bhai ji

Ese hi likhte raho
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DarkKnightKing said:
Nice update.
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Arjun Singh 72 said:
Nice update
Ye update main sab kuch hide the ab to ye aane wale update see pata chalega Kon Kon hi aur kaha h
Keep posting
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ABHISHEK TRIPATHI said:
Nice update
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Black water said:
Nice update
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Dewanjot said:
Nice update and waiting next
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SD... said:
Bro her bar aap wo lady wo ladki likh rahe ho ab kya story ke sabhi character suspens rakhne hai aur ye kya rudra ke ghar me bacha kaha se aaya uska naam armaan hai kya kyoki aapne uska intro nahi diya nahi ye bataya ke kitna time ke baad ye scene aaya hai means armaan London gaya uske bad aapne ek do scene likhe aur direct bachha aa gaya please clear all confusions bro
Wese story achhi ja rahi hai but confusion jyada kar diya khas kar ye last wala update please clear all sought.
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Pradeep singh said:
Nice story.
But ek do update me kuchh samajh nhi aaya. Story kab and kis time ke bad ki hai. Aur character bhi samajh nhi aaya.
Dekhte h aane wale update me suspence clear hoha ya nhi.
Waiting for next update Bhai
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Story ke suspense jaldi hi clear ho jaayenge. aur khushi hui ye jaanakar ki aa sab ko story pasand aa rahi hai...
 
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gagan243001 said:
bhai bahut hi badhiya update tha aur jaise ki aapane Kaha Tha ki aap agale mahine ki 4 ya 5 tarikh se update Doge lekin Fir Bhi aapane update Diya isase aapki is Kahani Ko pura hone ki koshish dikhti hai jo ki ek bahut hi acchi baat hai acchi kahaniyon ka pura Hona Ek bahut hi sukhd ghatna hai jo Har acchi Kahani ke sath Nahin Ho paati Jaise Ki Waqt shap ya Vardan aur Aisi hi milati jhuthi bahut sari kahaniyan hi Jo thi to bahut acchi lekin khatm Nahin Ho Pai


Mere point off view se vah America wala Ladka Rubel tha Rubel ki shaadi ho gai hai aur uska baccha bhi hai beach per baithane Wali Ladki Shayad Niti hai aur jo ladki Pennsylvania ke andar Bharti Hai patient vah Ladki amu Hai





next update Ke Intezar Mein
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Gaur karo shayad niti na ho
 
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