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Fantasy THE INHERITOR(A PATH TO DESTINY)

What do you think about the story?

  • Story needs a change

    Votes: 2 5.0%
  • I should stop writing

    Votes: 2 5.0%
  • Story is good. Should be written like this

    Votes: 37 92.5%

  • Total voters
    40
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Pradeep singh

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Fantastic update Bhai.
Sofiya k illaz krne wali sayad niti hogi.

Dekhte h armaan and Freya k bond kitna aage jata h.
Aur Freya k sath kya hoga jiske karan armaan itna badal jayega.
Waiting for next update Bhai
 

Kratos

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Nice update brother.:good:
Sofiya ka treatment karne waali zahir si baat hai ke armaan ki sister hi thi..
Dekhte hein aage kya hota hai.
Keep Rocking.:yo:
bhai pata hua kare to raj mat khola karo yaar...waise sahi andaja lagaya
 

Kratos

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Bhai apni marzi se likho. But ho sake tou kuch extra scenes ko short kar dena. Jaisa k ghoomna firna ya school waghaira ke scenes short rakhna agar wo important na hon tou.
Nahi brother jo scene important nahi hoga wo main short me bata dunga ya skip kar dunga.
 

Kratos

Anger can be a weapon if you can control it use it
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Fantastic update Bhai.
Sofiya k illaz krne wali sayad niti hogi.

Dekhte h armaan and Freya k bond kitna aage jata h.
Aur Freya k sath kya hoga jiske karan armaan itna badal jayega.
Waiting for next update Bhai
Jo ho shayad wo pasand naa aaye.
 

Beast

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bhai past acha chl rha ha pr ya thora short ho gata to zyda acha hota baki ap ki marzi
 
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