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Fantasy THE INHERITOR(A PATH TO DESTINY)

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restaurent me lunch ke time freya itna sara khana dekh ke khush ho gayi thi. aur usko khush dekh ke sophia aur amy bhi behad khush the.

kahir isi tarah lunch bhi ho gaya aur ye log sophia ke ghar ki taraf nikal gaye. ghar pahuchte hi gift bhi deliver ho gaye jo armaan ne freya ke liye khareede the. freya itne sare gifts dekh ke fuli nahi sama rahi thi.

wo kudte hue bolti hai hai ki amy ye gift mere hai

amy - yes bilkul tumhare hi hai. delivery boy se bol kar armaan ne gifts andar rakhwa diye. aur william ko unke sath bhej diya andar freya bhi sath hi chali gayi.

ab yanha bahar armaan aur sophia ke alawa koi nahi tha.
mauka dekh ke jaise hi sophia kuch kahne chali waise hi armaan ne unhe rok diya aur kaha ki aunty aapko thankyou bolne ki jarurat nahi hai.

armaan - manta hoon ki maine bhaut kuch kiya aapje hisab se but mujhe ek baat bataiye ki agar meri jagah aap hoti aur to kya aap nahi karti ye sab. aur fir maine ye sab apni friend ke liye kiya hai atleast mujhe bhi to itni acchi friend mili.

tabhi freya ki aawaj aayi ki andar aao bahar kya kar rahe ho uski aawaj sunte hi dono hanste hue ghar ke andar chale gaye.

uske baad kuch det normally bate hui. fir armaan ne hi kaha ki ab time ho gaya hai mujhe jana chahiye.

ispar freya udas hote hue boli ki tum jaa rahe ho amy ab fir kab miloge.

amy - are isme sad hone wali kya baat hai main to yahi hoon aur main jaldi hi apni friend se milne aaunga.

freya - pakka

amy - pakka

itna bol kar armaan bhi bahar aa gaya.

gahr ka arrangement week ke andar hi kar dena. aur kuch guards inki security ke liye jo bina najar me aaye inki safty kare. aur sabse badi baat sophia aunty ke liye kuch kaam bhi dekh lena.

william - ghar ka arrangement 2 ya teen dion me ho jayega and freya ka school bhi dekh liya hai baat bhi ho gayi hai aur rahi inke work ki baat to ek kaam kar sakte hai yanha pass me ek mall ban raha hai....

william ki baat kaat kar armaan bola ki unke naam par kar do.

itna sunte hi william shocked ho gaya.

aur bola are you sure about this..kyonki wo mall kafi costly hai.

armaan - haa maine bhi suna hai...but mere friend se badhkar to nahi hai hai.

william - tumhe dekh kar kabhi - kabhi to main shocked ho jata hoon ki itni age me itni maturity means how..

uski baat par muskurate hue armaan kahta hai ki martial arts sne mujhe bahut kuch sikhaya hai..

william - matlab

armaan - main jab 4 saal ka tha tab maine ek movie dekhi thi 36 chamber of shoulin usme jis level ka martial arts dikhaya gaya tha aur jo patience usne mujhe kafi inspire kiya..bas tabhi se maine man bana liya ki mujhe sikhna hai..

william ko dubara shocked laga ye sun ke ki armaan itne time se martial arts ki practice kar raha hai.

kuch time baad armaan apne hostel me aur william apne kaam par.

hostel me aate hi armaan aaj ke baare me sochta hua neend me chala gaya.

aur yanha ghar me sab hall me baith ke aaj sham ki planning kar rahe the.

rudra - to sab ne gift le liye

niti - bilkul bhai

kayra - but ek baat to clear hai ki armaan ko mera gift jyada pasand aayega.

samara - aur ye tum kaise kah sakti ho ki tumhara hi gift pasand aayega.

kayra - dekh lena

is baat par yo main shart laga sakta hoon ki fir mera hi gift pasand aayega.

rudra - meri aulado bahas nahi karo to jyada accha hai gift to mera diya hua hi pasand aayega.

niti - ok dekh lenge.

sab - ok

aisr hi inki baate chalti rahti hai. aur yaha rudra kisi soch me duba tha aur baki sab bato me khoye the. tab niti ki najar rudra par padi aur wo boli

niti - dad aap kaha khoye hue hai.
ispar rudra bolta hai ki

rudra - main armaan ke bare me soch raha hoon.

rudra ne jaise hi ye bola waise hi hall me ek lin drop silence.

ssab ke chehre rudra ke taraf the. jaise intejar kar rahe ho ki rudra kya bolna chahta hai.

tab rudra ne bola ki humne armaan ke liye birthday plann kiya hum yaha aaye. but agar armaan ne aane se mana kar diya to kyoni london aane ke baad se hi usne hum me se kisi se bhi baat nahi ki.

humne kitna try kiya but har baar no response. aur yaha sab ye baat sun kar pareshan ho gaye kyonki kisi ne bhi is baare me socha nahi tha.

ab sawal ye uthta hai ki armaan ko bulaya kaise jaaye kyonki party ka agar kahenge to armaan aane ke liye mana kar dega ye to sure hai. ye niti ne kaha tha.

tab kayra boli ki agar hum party ka bolenge to mana kar dega isse accha hai. use call kar ke bolo ki kuch baat karni hai. urgent hai aur hum se aakar mile.

rubal - par call karega kaun.

niti - main karti hoon.

itna bol kar niti ne call kiya aur call uthate hi niti ne kaha ki...

niti - amy call mat cut karna urgent hai. hume tumse kuch urgent baat karni hai aur hum sab is time yahi london me hai. tum ghar par aakar mik lo please. aur jaldi aana.

itna bol kar niti to chup ho gayi. aur wahi armaan ki taraf se sirf silence.

idhar niti hello hello kar rahi thi. tab kafi der baad armaan ne bola ki ok aa raha hoon.

aur thodi hi der baad armaan bhi aa gaya. is time uske face par koi expressions nahi the.

khair wo ghar ke andar aaya pura ghar is time andhere me dooba tha.

armaan jaise hi andar aaya waise hi sare ghar ki lights jal uthi aur sab ne chilla kar kaha HAPPY BIRTHDAY ARMAAN....armaan pahle to shocked hua. par wo kuch kahta usse pahle hi niti ne bola

niti - tum kuch kaho usse pahle i am sorry ki tumhe jhooth bol ke bulana pada par koi aur rasta nahi tha..amy

idhar niti ki baat khatm hui aur kayra boli ki pahle cake cut karo tum fir aaram se baat karte hai.

aur tumhare dress upar padi hai jaldi jaake ready ho jaao.

rubal - ready ho jaao kya main karta hoon apne bhai ko ready.

yaha armaan ko shock par shock mil rahe the. aur rubal usne armaan ko apne kandhe par uthaya aur room ki taraf daud pada usko aise bhagte dekh sab hanse jaa rahe the. aur wahi armaan to shock me hi tha.

wahi room me rubal ne armaan se bola ki tumhe sharm to nahi aayegi mere saamne kapde badalne me.

i think nahi aayegi. tum ek kaam karo jaldi jaa ka naha kar aao.
Itna bolte he rubal ne armaan ko bathroom me dhakka de diya aur bahar se chillane laga ki amy jaldi karna.


armaan ne kuch bolne se behtar jaldi nahana hi theek samjha. kuch time baad wo towel lapet kar bahar aaya jaha rubal use ready kar raha tha. rubal ne use tuxedo pahnaya jisme armaan wakai me dashing lag raha tha. aaj kafi time baad uske face par pahle ki tarah innocence aur cuteness dekhne ko mili.


rubal usse bole jaa raha tha. ye evening tumhare liye bhaut hi special hone wali hai mere bhai.


itna bol ke usne armaan ka hath pakda aur use leke apne sath neeche aa gaya. ghar walo ki najre uske upar se hat nahi rahi thi.


tab cake laaya gaya jo ki armaan ki pasand ka tha. armaan ne ek baar cake ko dekha aur fir baki sab ko sabki aankho me is time cake cut karne ki request thi.


khair armaan ne sab ki request ka sammam kiya aur cake cut kiya sab ye dekh ke itne khush hue ki amy ne unki wish ka maan rakkha.


cake khilane ke baad rudra ne bola


rudra - amy tumhare man me kai sawal honge aur tum ye bhi soch rahe hoge ki achanak se ye sab kyon...to abhi dinner kar le uske baad aaram se baat karenge.


armaan ne rudra ki baat par sirf haa me gardan hilai.


dinner ke dauran normal conversation chal rage the sirf do ko chodh kar ek armaan aur dusri amayra. armaan ka dhyan jaha khane par tha. wahi amu ka armaan pe. isi bich bato ke dauran niti ne kaha ki aaj jab main parlour me thi. tab waha ek lady aayi.


kayra - to isme kaun si badi baat hai parlour me sirf ladies hi aati hai.


niti - mujhe bolne to do..us lady je hatho me gardan aur kamar me chilne ne nishan the.


armaan ne jaise hi ye suna uska dhyan khane par se hat kar niti ki bato me aa gaya. aur apna khana rok kar bola


to tumne kya kiya niti us lady ke sath. sabne jaise hi ye suna pahle to sab shocked hue ki aaj itne time baad armaan ne unki baato me apna interest liya hai. sab ko chup dekh kar armaan bola ki aap sab mujhe aise kyon dekh rahe hai..


ispar samara boli ki aaj tumne kaafi time baad humse baat ki hai.


aur niti ki khushi uske face par acchi tarah dekhi jaa sakti thi.


tab niti ne fir bola ki maine pahke uska treatment kiya wo kafi dari hui thi. shayad pahli baar parlour me aayi ho.


naam kya tha us lady ka ye fir armaan bola..armaan ne andaja to laga liya tha but wo confirm karna chahta tha.


niti - i think sophia tha.


bas ye naam sunte hi armaan ke face par rek smile aa gayi jise usne jaldi chupa liya taki koi dekhe na.


dinner bhi khatm ho gaya aur sab wapas hall me.


aur armaan kuch puchta usse pahle hi rubal ne kaha ki tum kuch bolo ya pucho usse pahle mera gift. ayr khol ke dekho kaisa hai.


armaan ne jab rubal ka gift khola tab usme ek psp tha. aur uske andar armaan ki sari favourite games.


armaan ne jab gift dekha to ek pyari si smile aa gayi aur rubal ye dekh ke khush wahi kayra ne iPad, niti ne usko ek puppy aur fish di, amayra ne kaha ki manti hoon maine bhaut galat kiya mafi mangne ke layak bhi nahi hoon. fir bhi ho sake to maaf kar do itna bol kar amayra armaan ke gale lag kar jor se rone lagi..aur kush time baad rona siskiyo me badal gaya aur idhar armaan bhi rone laga halanki wo maaf nahi karna chahta tha. par aaj halat bhi uske bas me nahi the.


armaan rote rote bola ki kyon amu tumne mera trust nahi kiya kyon. kyon tumne aisa kiya mere sath wo amu se akag hua aur bola kya sunu main bataiye aap log..ek baar bhi nahi socha ki kya beetegi mere upar sabki aankho me aansu the sabke sar niche jhuke hue the.


amu - maaf kar de betu...please nahi to mar jaungi main ab sahan nahi hota.


armaan ne jaise hi ye suna waise hi bola chup karo dubara marne ki baat kari to main maaf nahi karunga.


tab rudra ghutne ke bal rote hue bola ki maaf kar de baccha ek mauka to de ki hum apne gunah kam kar sake.


armaan ne kaha ki chup ho jaaiye. maaf karne ki baat par main ye kahunga ki mujhe thoda time chahiye par main koshish kaurnga ki pahle ki tarah rah saku.


samara - humare liye ye bhi chalega...isi tarah se baate bhi khatam ho gayi ab sone ke time par amu ne kaha ki main aur armaan sath me soyenge aaj ispar rubal bola ki kyon hum sab sath me soyenge.


par samara ne hi kuch sochte hue kaha ki aaj amu ko sone do kal hum sab sath me soyenge.


room me jab armaan aur amu aaye tab armasn ne dekha ki pure kamre me gulab ke phool aur sorry cards rakkhe the. ispar armaan ne amu ko fir gale lagaya but kaha kuch nahi shayad jarurat na ho..khair isi tarah raat bhi beet gayi aur tute rishto ki shuruaat bhi dubara se ho gayi..dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai.


dusre din breakfast me armaan ne rudra se bola


armaan - dad mujhe aap se kuch baat karni thi.


rudra - haa bolo armaan.


armaan - aapko pata hai ki central london me jo mall ban raha hai uske bare me.


rudra - haa pata hai.


armaan - mujhe wo chahiye apne liye nahi apni friend ke liye.


uske baad armaan ne sab ko sophia freya ke baarw me bataya ki kaise wo unse mila and usne kya kiya.


jab sab ne ye suna ki armaan ne apna friend banaya hai is baat par sab khush hue. aur rudra ne bola ki bilkul aisa hoga. tum tension mat lo mall aur ghar ka arrangement ho jayega aur kaise dena hai wo bhi..uske baad rudra ne william ko phone kiya aur sab samjha diya aur wo kya ye aage pata chalega.tab kayra boli ki dad aapne aur mom ne gift nahi diya.


ispar rudra bola ki main deta par kal jo hia to socha ki aaj doon.


rudra - maine hum sab keiye trip plan ki hai wo bhi 15 days ki jaha bhi tum chaho.


ispar samara boli ki copy cat tumne mera idea kyon chori kiya.


rudra - no way ki tumne bhi yahi gift socha hai.


samara - hmm yahi idea hai mera... to basically hum dono ka ye gift hai tum sab ke liye.


gift ka naam sunte hi sab khush ho gaye.
wonderful update bhai
 

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rudra ne fir pucha ki to decide kar lo tum sab ki kaha pe chalna hai.

sab ne ek sath bola aur kaha ki switzerland.

samara - ok packing kar lo tum sab

armaan - meri packing amu kar degi. aur main aaya abhi mike freya se

itna bol ke wo freya se milne chala gaya.

waha freya ke ghar me wo apne gifts khol ke dekh rahi thi..

tabhi armaan bola

armaan - ye kya tumne abhi tak gifts nahi khole.

freya - nahi itne saare jo hai time to lagega hi.

armaan - ok ok..

waise aunty kaha hai dikh nahi rahi.

freya - mom bahar gayi hai.

armaan - accha waise tum school nahi gayi.

school ki baat sunte hi freya ki aankho me nami aa gayi. jis chehre par abhi muskurahat thi. ab usi jagah pas ek udasi ne ghar kar liya...

jab dad the tab jati thi. aur pata hai amy tab hum is ghar me bhi nahi rahte the. dad mujhe aur mom ko roj ghumane le ke jate the. tab main bhi aur baccho ki tarah school jati thi. meri bhi bhait si friends thi. par dad ko jab gog ne apne paas bulaya tab se maine school jana bhi band kar diya kyonki mom ke paas paise nahi hote itne. aur wo ghar bhi humne chodh diya.

itna bol ke freya rone lagi...

tab armaan uske paas gaya aur bola ki sshhhh nahi freya bas maine to aise hi pucha tha. mera maksad tumhe rulana nahi tha. chup ho jaao nahi to main bhi ro dunga.

jab freya ne ye suna tab usne apne aansu poche aur boli ki tum mat rona dekho main bhi nahi ro rahi ab

thodi hi der baad sophia bhi aa gayi aur jab unhone armaan ko dekha to wo bhi khush ho gayi. un dono ke beech me normally bate chal rahi thi. tab armaan ne bataya ki wo 15 days ke holiday pe apni family ke sath bahar jaa raha hai. ye sunte hi freya ek baar fir udas ho gayi.

tab armaan ne bola ki tum sad mat ho main tumse jaldi hi milunga aur tumhare liye gifts bhi launga and waha se aane ke baad hum bahar bhi jayenge.

tabhi achanak se ghar ke bahar 4 se 5 gadiya aakar ruki aur unme se yahi koi 8 - 10 log utre aur seedhe ghar ke andar chale gaye unke sath kuch police officers bhi the.

yaha sophia to dekh ke shocked ho gayi itne logo ek sath dekhkar aur jab sath me police ko dekha to shock ke dar bhi gayi. eka ek uske man me khayal aaya ki kai kisi ne use school me jump marte hue to nahi dekh liya aur uski complain kar di.

is khayal se uska chehra paseene se bheeg gaya tha. is time agar koi use gaur se dekhta to samajh jata ki ye bhaut dari hui hai. armaan bhi un sab ko gaur se dekh raha tha. aur situation samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha ki ye log hai kaun.

tabhi unme se ek aadmi aage aaya aur bola ki sophia brown kaun hai. tabhi sophia ne darte darte kaha ki ji main hoon sophia brown.

tab wo aadmi bola ki mrs. brown hum log stallions industries ye hai..asal me aapje husband mr. charlie brown ne humari company me invest kiya tha.

but us time company ki economical condition acchi nahi thi.

us time me mostly shareholders ne apne apne share bech diye the. jis wajah se company ko kafi loss hua aur share bikne se goodwill bhi down ho gayi.

but aapke husband aur unke sath ke logo ne na sirf apne share hold par rakkhe balki company par apna trust bhi banay rakkha.

isliye unke profit ke taur pe company ne aapko ek ghar mall aur sath hi stallions ke 25 % ka shareholder bhi banaya hai.

ye rahe uske paper...aap chahe to check kar sakti hai.

sophia to ye sun ke shocked ho gayi ki..achanak se kya ho gaya. jab kafi der tak usne response nahi diya us aadmi ke baar baar naam bulay jane par tab armaan ne hilakar hosh me laya.

jispar sophia sense me aayi aur usne paper check kiye jo bata rahe the. ki charlie brown ne company me invest kiya tha.

par sophia ne bola ki but charlie ne to kabhi is baat ka zikra nahi kiya mujhse aur aap kah rahe hai ki usne aapki.company me invest kiya tha.

tab wo aadmi bola ki ye hume nahi pata hume jitna kaha gaya tha humne utna kiya. aap chal ke apna ghar aur mall dekh lijiye baki ki formalities advocate aapke naye ghar me kar dega.

yaha sophia is baare me soch rahi thi. soch kya use samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki achanak se ho kya raha hai.

tabhi armaan ke cell me ek message aata hai...jisme likha tha..ki


work done. maine apna part complete kiya ab tum sambhalo aage.

ye message rudra ne bheja tha.



armaan samajh gaya ki use kya karna hai.

tab armaan ne sophia se bola ki aunty aap soch kya rahi hai. aap chaliye jaldi.

itna bol ke armaan unko sath le ke gadi me chal diya. aur wahi freya aone chote se dimag se samajhne ki koshish kar rahi thi. ki ye ho kya raha hai. but usne jab dekha ki uski mom pareshan hai to usne kuch nahi pucha.

kuch time baad wo log ek ghar ke saamne the. ghar kya use bangla kahna jyada theek rahega.

sophia ghar ko dekh kar shocked ho gayi kyonki kaha uska tuta ghar aur kaha ye mahal jaisa ghar.

ghar me aane ke baad wakil ne share ke paper aur mall ke paper bhi de diye. aur ye kaha ki aap jab chahe tab dekh sakti hai. aur company se har month profit ke taur pe aapke hisse ka aapke account me aa jayega.

aur sath hi aapki beti yani freya brown ka admission bhi school me karwa diya gaya hai.

school ka naam sunte hi freya to kudne lagi.

itna sab bol ke wo log wapas chale gaye.

tab armaan ne sophia se kaha ki wow aunty ab aapki sb problem bhi khatam ho gayi aur aapko ab freya ko akele chodh ke kaam par bhi nahi jana padega.

sophia - wo to theek hai armaan but main akele kaise ye sab manage karungi..

aunty aap akele kaha hai. aapki help ke liye william hai aur mere dad aur brother bhi hai.

aapko jis bhi cheej me problem aaye aap william ko call kar lena. ek kaam karta hoon main william ko abhi yahi bula leta hoon. hum uske sath jaake aapka mall bhi dekh lete hai.

thodi der baad william bhi aa gaya armaan ne usko bataya aajnke bare me aur sophia ki problem ke bare me bhi.

tab william ne kaha ki business me kisi bhi tarah ki help chahiye hogi wo main kar dunga. aur ye jis mall ki baat kar rahe hai usme construction chal raha hai. kyonki maine dekha hai. aap wo share ke papers dikhaiye.

tabhi sophia ne william ko ek folder diya jisme share ke paper sath me profit ka agreement chequebook credit and debit card the.

paper dekhne ke baad william ne bataya ki aap ke account me har month takreeban millions of dollars credit hoenge. kyonki stallions london ki nahi balki world ki jani mani company hai.

iske baad sophia ne mall dekha aur freya ka school bhi jisme wo next monday se jane wali thi.

aise hi ye din bhi nikal gaya. aur armaan bhi sophia ko bol kar apne ghar chala gaya. aur yaha sophia apni nayi life ko manage karne me lag gayi.

wahi armaan ghar me sidha jaake rudra ke upar kood gaya..aur kahne laga ki ThankYou ThankYou ThankYou dad..jo aapne meri baat rakkhi.

armaan ye sab chilla chilla kar kah raha tha. air uski aawaj sun kar baki ke log bhi hall me aa gaye.

tab rudra bola ki are kaise nahi karta mere bete ne pahli baar kuch kaha tha.

inki baate aise hi chalti rahi. next day armaan bhi apne vacation par switzerland nikal gaya.

aur yaha london me mall ka kaam bhi pura ho gaya tha. inauguration ke time par sophia ne armaan ko call kiya aur bataya ki mall ka kaam pura ho chuka hai..khair armaan ko ye pahle se pata tha. tab armaan ne bola ki hum log parso pahuch jayenge. opening me.

armaan ko khushi hui ki sophia paise aane ke baad badli nahi.

aur finally opening ka time bhi aa gaya. aaj sophia pure malik family de mili jaha par wo niti ko dekhkar pahle to shocked hui. kyonki parlour me niti ne help ki thi sophia ki.

aur sophia ko bhi sab logo ka nature accha laga.(faltu ke conversation ya melodrama nahi likh raha samajh jana)

inke din yuhi bitne lage. armaan ne bhi sab ko puri tarah se maaf kar diya tha.

idhar armaan aur freya ki friendship bhi gahri ho gayi thi. dono ki dosti ko 5 saal ho chuke the. dono hi free time me ek sath hi hote the. haa indo kuch hua ho ya nahi but ek cheej hui thi. aur wo thi armaan ki power jo in salo me kabhi najar nahi aayi. halaki armaan ki physical aur mental strength. uski umra se kayi guna aage ke the. log usko dekh ke shocked hi hote. ki aakhir ye hai kaun.

par shayad kuch hona tha. aur wo kya
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