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Fantasy The King Of Darkness

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veer ne bahut hi himat juta kar sirf do sabd hi bol oaya

Veer- pitaji main


Thakur - achha to tu hai ajj kese yaad aa gai aur teri himat kese hui us haveli main phone karne ki, jab tune bina hamari ijajat ke shadi ki tab to tujko koi hish nahi tha ajj kese yaad aa gai tujko tere baap ki bol veer bol

To veer turant unke bolne tak room ke ander gaya aur vina ko mobile de diya to vina ne jo uska beta dudh pi raha tha usko dudh chuda diya
(ab bacche ko dudh chuda doge to wo royega hi tik wese hi baccha rone laga aur)

jab baccha rone laga tab vina ne mobile apne bacche ke pass le gai aur jab us bacche ki awwaj mobile se hote hue Thakur sahab ke kano tak gai to jo gussa 😡 jo ghaman abhi tak unke dimag main tha wo sab kahi gayab ho gaya, wo awwan sidhe thakur sahab ke kaano se hote hue usnke dil tak ja pahuchi aur


to chaliye suru karte hai aj ka update


To jab thakur sury pratap sing us bacche ka rona 😭 sunte hai to uski awwaj se jo thakur abhi tak gusse 😡 aur ghamand 😏 se baat kar raha tha wo sab kahi gayab ho gaya aur wo todi jaldi se bola


Thakur - veer ye veer ye bachha kon ro raha kon hai ye bacche kiska baccha hai ye, veer tera bapp tujse kuch puch raha hai jawab de mujko


veer (rote hue) - pita ji.. pita ji badai (congratulations) ho app dada ban gaye. apki bahu ne pote ko janam diya hai. main baap ban gaya pita ji baap


veer ke mhu se ye baat sun kar thakur sahab samjh nahi paa rahe the ki wo khush howe ya roye 😭

kyuki jab ek admi pahli baar banta hai tab usko jitni khushi milti hai usse jada khushi usko taab milti hai jab wo apne aulad ki aulad dekh le (matlab dada-dadi, nana-nani)

Yahi halat thakur sahab ki bhi ho gai thi aur jo gussa unke dil mai tha wo sab khush ek hi pal mae khatm ho gaya aur wo bole


Thakur - veer tu kahi hanse jhut to nahi bol raha hai taki ham tujko maff karde


Veer- pita ji kya apko yesa lagta hai ki, main itna bada jhut bol sakta hoon, fir bhi agar app chaye to app bhaiya ko phone dijiye


Thakur - vikram, vikrant,(thakur ke do aur bete) thakuraine sab ke sab yaha aawo abhi ke abhi


Thakur sahab ki awajh sun kar sabhi log aa gaye

Vikram - kya hua pita ji is time app, koi badi baat hai kya, pita ji


Thakur - baat badi hai isliye to bukaya hai, tumko ye le (phone age karte hue) veer se baat kar

veer ka nam sun kar sabhi log ek baar ke liye chok gaye par koi kuch nahi bola kyuki sabhi log thakur sahab se darte the, to vikram ne phone pakda aur udhar se


Veer- bhaiya main veer, app sabhi kese hi bahiya maa kasi hai


Vikram apni chote bhai ki awwaj salo ke baad sun kar bahut khush hua, par usko pata chal gaya ki uska bhai ro 😭 raha hai to usko tension hone lagi


Vikram - chote tu kesa hai mere bhai, aur kaha hai tu, tu ro kyu raha chote kya hua mere bhai


Veer- bhaiya main apko sab kuch baad main bata dunga abhi main is phone main video call kar raha hoon app usko laptop main contact kar dijiye apko apke sare sawalo ka jawab mil jayega

aur call cut ho gaya


Vikram - vikrant ja jaldi se apna laptop le kar aa jaldi se


Thakuraine - koi mujko batayega ki kya ho raha hai, salo baad mere bete ka call aaya hai aur app


Thakur - thakuraine todi der sabar kar, tujhko bahut badi khabar milne wali gai (thakur sahab ne apni khushi chupa li)


Todi der baad Vikram ne mobile se laptop ka contact kiya aur veer ke video call ko receive kiya to sabse pahle sabhi ko hospital ka kamra hi dikha jissse thakuraine dar gai aur wo thakur sahab ke pass jakar boli


Thakuraine - ye 😱 kya hai ji ye hospital kyu dikh raha hai hai kahi hamara beta

tabhi veer ne back camere se palne mae khel rahe appne bacche par focus kiya aur bola ki


Veer- pita ji dekhiye apka pota, maa, bhaiya, bhabhi main.. main papa ban gaya 😭


sabhi log bahut khush ho gaye par koi kuch nahi bol raha tha kyuki sabhi thakur sahab ke bolne ka itnjar kar rahe the


Thakur - (jor se) - are thakuraine, are yaha khadi kyu hai ri ja mitai baat, are tu dadi ban gai main dada,

jiske baad sabhi log bhi apni khushi ka ijhar karne lage


Thakur - veer tu is samay kaha par hai aur meri bahu, aur pota kesa hai


Veer - pita ji main is samay **** hospital main hu aur apki bahu, pota dono tik hai abhi dono ko yahi rokne ke liye bola hai


Takur - Kya kaha re veer Thakur sury pratap sing ka varush hospital main rahega nahi bilkul nahi Vikram



Vikram- ji pita ji kahiye


Thakur - abhi ghadi le kar ja is hopeful main aur mere beta, bahu aur pote ko le kar ja jaldi


Vikrant- pita ji kya main bhi chala jahu bhaiya ke saath


Thakur - hmm tik hai ja aur ha bahu ke saath jana tik hai


Vikrant - ji pita ji hum abhi niklte hai


Thakur - badi bahu (Vikram ki biwi)


Badi bahu- ji babuji


Thakur - are dar kyu rahi hai ja abhi baccho ko sula de subha bahut kaam karne thakuraine tu bhi apni kamar tik kar le kal bahut se kaam hai


aur badi bahu baccho ko lekar chali gai Thakur Thakuraine bhi apne room mae jakar bath gaye aur thakuraine ne baat suruwat ki


Thakuraine - kyu ji app to bol rahe the ki app veer ko kabhi maff nahi karoge to ajj kese usko yaha lana ke liye beto ko bhej diya


Thakur - tu nahi samjhegi thakuraine, tujko pata hai jab main pahli baar bap bana tha to, jitni khushi mujko us din hui thi, usse kahi jada khushi tab hui jab mene apne bete ke bete ko dekha (dada ban gaya) aur tu to janti hai thakuraine ki hum dono ne apne sabhi baccho mae se sabse jada payar aur dular veer ko diya hai


Thakuraine - ha janti hoon kyuki veer hamare sabhi baccho main sabse chota hai


Thakur - bilkul thakuraine bilkul par hame gussa 😡 tab aaya jab veer ne hamse bina puche hi vivah kar liya, jis bete ko hamne itne najo se pala wo jab esa karta hai to bahut taklif hoti hai thakuraine, mujhe kya har maa baap ko taklif hoti hai


Thakuraine - to kya app bahu se gussa ho ji


Thakur - nahi thakuraine nahi bhaka main kyu bahu se gussa 😡 hone laga, are thakuraine jara soch vivah ke pahle us ladki ko kya pata tha ki jis ghar ki wo bahu banane ja rahi hai, wo ghar kesa hai, uske riti riwaj kese hai.
par hamare bete ko to ye sab pata tha thakuraine fir bhi usne yesa kiya
par kya karu thakuraine baap hu akhir kab tak apni aukad se gussa 😡 rahta aur tu janti hai thakuraine jab mene apne pote ko dekha na to yesa laga ki mere samne mera veer hai.


Thakuraine - ha ji ye to app bilkul tik kah rahe ho ajj bahrso baad mere dil ko thandak mili hai, ki mere beta bahu aur mera pota tik hai


Thakur - ab vhal so ja thakuraine veer ne jis hospital ka naam bataya tha na wo yaha se 3-4 ghante ki duri par hai wo sabhi ko aane main subha ho jayegi wese bhi kal barsho baad ye haveli fir se khil uthegi


aur sabhi haveli ke log so gaye aur idhar hospital mae jab veer ko ye baat pata chali tab


Veer- vina ek bahut badhi khus khabri hai


Vina- kya bast hai veer, app bahut khush lag rahe ho


Veer - khushi ki baat hai vina pita ji ne mujko maff kar diya aur bhaiya ko bhej diya hai yaha ke liye, hum sab kal tak haveli pauch chuke honge


Vina- huu ye bahut khushi ki baat hai, aur ye khushi sirf mere bacche ki wajha se hamari zindagi main aai hai


Veer- ha ye tum bilkuk sahi bol rahi ho vina hamara baccha, hamare liye bahu lucky hai


par kya jis bacche ko wo lucky man rahe hai wo sabhi ke liye wesa hi hoga, ya kuch aur iske liye

😎 To Be continued 😎

(Andhera Kayam Rahe)
 

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Boht hi umda start tha bro i hope yeh story zaroor complete ho gi baki boht hi acha lika hai best of luck
thanks bro update posted
 

king of darkness0411

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Nice but too short...
I am a regular reader of you fantasy stroy..you had started few of them ..all of them were very good but you didn't complete a single one ....I hope this time you can be regular...
thanks bro update posted
abhi kuch update cjote honge hi jab sabhi ka intro ho jaye aur story toda flow main rahe to update ke size badha dunga
 

king of darkness0411

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Short update

Bohat he shandaar update
Amazing Bro
keep it up
and
waiting for next update
thanks bro update posted abhi update chote hi honge jab sabhi ka intro ho jaye tab update badhe honge
 
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