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That was amazing update so finally Arjun ne apne pariwar ko dhund liya aur ab woh saath hai lekin raghu ka kya woh zombies ki wajah se nikal gya aage kya uska role hoga ?
Dhund liya par apko lgta hai ki woh saath rahenge Raghu aur uske log chup baithenge ?
 

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**** update -15***

Karan ( rote huye ) :& mujhe lga tha hum sab Marne Wale hai, Mtlb tum logo kabhi nahi milunga..

Karan :- humare paas bas kuch hi bullets thi.

Mein :- mere hote huye Aisa nahi ho skta mein aise nahi hone dunga.

karan :- Haan par tum yaha nahi the.. phir Zombies ki herd aati hai Priya humse alag ho jati hai aur hum bas wait kar rhe the sirf intezaar par intezaar.

karan :- me... Mein Darr gya tha..

mein apna haath karan ke kandhe par rakhta hu :- hey mein aa gya hoon Naa ab tumhein darne ki jaroorat nahi
.

Karan jab apne aanshu haath se pahuch rha tha toh mujhe uske haath par chot dikhi..

mein :- hey lgta hai tumne aapne aapko hi chot pahucha li.

Karan :- shayad Truck jaate waqt shayad lg gya hoga mujhe pta bhi nahi chala.

mein :- chalo kamse kam zombies ki bite toh nahi..

mein Natasha ko Karan ki chot dekhne ke liye bolta hu.

NAtasha apni badi gun ko peeche latka leti hai.

Natasha:- hi mein doctor hu mein isse clean karke lga deti wapis Ghar mein isse patch kar dungi

[Natasha rumaal se karan ke ghav par lga deti hai saaf karke.

Natasha:- dekha ye abhi se hi theek ho gya.

shanaya :- Mein jald se jald wapis lautna chahiye ye jagah khatre se Khali nahi aur mein humara luck ke bharose nahi..

sandhya Shanaya ko dekhti hai aur phir mujhse puchti hai :- ye choti bacchi kon hai gun ke saath ? Iska koi naam hai jo tum btaoge?

mein :- Shanaya meri dost

shanaya ( aankhe roll karke ) :- hi there accha lga help karke..

sandhya :- sach mein hum tumhare bohut abhari hai.

mein Sandhya ki taraf mudta hu.

MEin :- yahi paas mein ek town hai woh safe hai.

Sandhya:- mujhe ye pasand aaya finally uss van se chhutkara mil gya.

Hum sab chalne lgte hai aage Shanaya shotgun lekar chal rhi thi peeche Natasha apni badi gun liya..

Priya Khushi se meri taraf mud kar bolti hai :- Arjun kya waha garam paani hai? Thoda gunguna bhi chalega.

mein :- shayad Haan kyun natasha?

Natasha ( haste huye ) :- offcourse humare paas hot water hai hum cave mein nahi rehte.

sandhya :- mujhe lgta tha tum iss jagah par gye honge?

mein:- mei Jaa chuka hu par mere paas samay nahi tha inn sab ka time hi nahi tha waha aaram karne ka aur dekhne ka..

Natasha ( pas aa kar dheere se ):- tum khush dikh rhe ho?

mein ( muskrate) :- mein hoon..

Natasha:- ye search aur rescue Wale mission end mein acche nahi jate pta hai naa Zinda rehna aur healthy.

mein:- chalo phir wait karte hai town mein pahuchne ka phir celebrate karenge okay? Ab koi Nazar Naa lagao..

NAtasha :- mein ba-- mein khush hu tumhare liye sirf itna hi.

Hum log chalte chalte uss van ke paas pahuchte Jo bekar thi ab dhundha nikal rha tha Shanaya usse dekhti hai.

Shanaya:- jab hum wapis town pahuchenge toh yaad rakhna tum par Mera ek gaadi ka karz hai.

Shanaya:- mein humari deal nahi bhooli, shayad tumhe pta naa ho tumhari van ke saath kya hua phir bhi mujhe iss jagah se nikalna hai.

mein :- mene socha ki shayad tum ruko? Janti ho na consider yaa kuch...

Shanaya :- consider kya ?

mein:- tum itni durr se mere saath yaha aayi.

Shanaya:- van ke liye nahi kisi- choro.

shanaya aur humara dhyaan priya ki taraf jata hai jo dusri taraf thodi dur jakar jhuk kar uska padha Headphone uthati hai.

woh meri taraf mudti hai mein apni peeche jeb se music player nikalkar usse dikhata hu.

priya ( khush hote huye ) :- shukriya..

tabhi ek goli chalti hai aur Priya ke sar ko cheerte huye jati hai..

mein sunn ho jata hoon Mera dimag kaam karna band ho gya tha mere haath per kaam karna band kar diye the aisa lg rha tha jaise girne wala hu.

priya neeche jameen par girti hai..

MEin ( chillate huye ) :- Pri-ya....

hum side mein durr dekhte hai Raghu aur uske admi car se utar kar goli baari karte hai hum bagal mein gir jate bachne ke liye..

mein Sandhya ki taraf dekhta hu Jo dusri side chuppi thi woh ro rhi thi mu par haath rakhe..

raghu ( chilla kar goli chalate huye) :- m****c**d Choro tumhe lga tha tum yaha se nikal jaoge jaise khuch hua hi nahi ho.

Raghu ke saath aur bhi naye log the Jo badi bandook liye fire kar rhe the.

humare ghode goliyon ki awaaz se chilla rhe the.

Hum sab priya ki padhi body ki taraf dekhte hai jiske maathe se khoon nikal rha tha.

Sandhya:- Arjun hum usse yaha nahi chor skte.

sandhya uthkar priya ki body ki taraf bhagti hai lekin ek goli uske pet par lgti hai woh neeche ghutne ke bal gir jati hai.

Sandhya ( dard mein ) :- aahh shit..

mein (chilla kar ) :- Sandhyaaaa..

Sandhya humari taraf dekhti hai karan gusse mein uski taraf bhagta mein usse rokne ki koshish karta hu goliyan chal rhi thi..

Karan jaldi se bachte huye Sandhya ko dhakka dekar ek chhote drum ke peeche chupa leta hai.

mein khada hota hu.

karan :- Arjun help Karo.

mein diwar se lg jata hu aur revolver jhuk kar ek par fire karta Jo uske sar par lgti hai aur woh zameen par gir jata hai.

mein ( karan aur Sandhya se ) :- go jaldi..

sandhya aur karan Priya ko uthate aur bagal mein jaldi se diwar par lg jate hai Sandhya neeche gir jati hai uske pet se khoon nikal rha tha.

mein jaldi se unki taraf aata hu aur Priya ko check karta hu Jo ki ab Jaa chuki thi.

mein uski aankhein band kardeta hu..

Natasha paas aati hai aur Priya ko uthane lgti hai:- ohh God yakin nahi hota..

mein ( rote huye ) :- woh woh sirf..

Natasha :- mujhe pta hai Arjun par iske liye time milega par abhi nahi hume yaha se nikalna hoga.

natasha ( Sandhya ko dekhte huye ) :- Mujhe Sandhya ko jaldi se town le Jana hoga jisse uski help ho jiska Mtlb hume nikalna hoga jaldi..

mein Sandhya ki taraf dekhta hu Jo apne per ko pakad kar ek gaadi se lgi thi..

Natasha:- humein Jana hoga Arjun yaha abhi rasta hai isse pehle ki woh phirse firing shuru karein.

mein ( gusse mein ) :- mein unhe mar dunga sabko ek sath...

natasha :- isse woh wapis nahi aa jayengi Arjun...

Mein :- toh kya mein unhe chor du Zinda rehne du jinhone...

natasha :- agar apne pariwar ki help karna chahte ho toh mere saath aana hoga, hum aur intezar nahi kar skte.

Shanaya apni gun liye mere paas akar bolti hai..

Shanaya :- hum yahi rukenge aur isse khatam karenge.

natasha ( Shanaya se ):- kya tum pagal ho gyi ho Hume Jana hoga abhi.

Shanaya:- unhone pehle hi tum me se ek ko maar diya hai agar inhe nahi roka toh ye phir tumhare family ke peeche aayenge.

Shanaya :- natasha ko inki help karne do tum yahi ruko mere saath.

karan ( chonk kar ) :- kya ? Nahi Arjun tumhe humara se saath aana hoga.

mein karan ki taraf dekhta hu..

karan :- Arjun please....

Shanaya :- yakin karo Arjun hume isse end karna hoga abhi.

mein soch kar :- tum log town pahucho hum cover karenge...

karan ( chintit) :- karan?

mein :- inke saath jao mein sahi salamat rahunga.

karan :- mein bhi rukta hu.

natasha :- mujhe tumhari jaroorat hai karan.

Shanaya ( mujh se ) :- fire karte rehna jab tak woh aankho se ojhal naa ho jaye okay?.

mein ( gun pakadte huye ):- I'm ready.

Natasha aur karan Sandhya ko pakad kar le Jaa rhe the.

mein aur Shanaya cover lekar lg jate hai.

Shanaya aage ki taraf cover lekar fire kar rhi thi usne ek bande ko gira Diya tha.


Ek Raghu ka admi ek tear gas canister phakta hai humari taraf Jo ki humse thode aage girta hai.

mein dekh leta hu aur uski taraf bhagta hu..

Shanaya ( chilla kar ):- Arjun naahi.

MEin usse pakad kar unki taraf hi phek deta hu aur woh beech mein hi blast ho jata hai ...

-
--- ab aage kya hoga ye aage hi pta chalega kya Arjun badla le payega kya apne family ko nikal payega aur kya tear gas se bacha?
 
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**** update -15***

Karan ( rote huye ) :& mujhe lga tha hum sab Marne Wale hai, Mtlb tum logo kabhi nahi milunga..

Karan :- humare paas bas kuch hi bullets thi.

Mein :- mere hote huye Aisa nahi ho skta mein aise nahi hone dunga.

karan :- Haan par tum yaha nahi the.. phir Zombies ki herd aati hai Priya humse alag ho jati hai aur hum bas wait kar rhe the sirf intezaar par intezaar.

karan :- me... Mein Darr gya tha..

mein apna haath karan ke kandhe par rakhta hu :- hey mein aa gya hoon Naa ab tumhein darne ki jaroorat nahi
.

Karan jab apne aanshu haath se pahuch rha tha toh mujhe uske haath par chot dikhi..

mein :- hey lgta hai tumne aapne aapko hi chot pahucha li.

Karan :- shayad Truck jaate waqt shayad lg gya hoga mujhe pta bhi nahi chala.

mein :- chalo kamse kam zombies ki bite toh nahi..

mein Natasha ko Karan ki chot dekhne ke liye bolta hu.

NAtasha apni badi gun ko peeche latka leti hai.

Natasha:- hi mein doctor hu mein isse clean karke lga deti wapis Ghar mein isse patch kar dungi

[Natasha rumaal se karan ke ghav par lga deti hai saaf karke.

Natasha:- dekha ye abhi se hi theek ho gya.

shanaya :- Mein jald se jald wapis lautna chahiye ye jagah khatre se Khali nahi aur mein humara luck ke bharose nahi..

sandhya Shanaya ko dekhti hai aur phir mujhse puchti hai :- ye choti bacchi kon hai gun ke saath ? Iska koi naam hai jo tum btaoge?

mein :- Shanaya meri dost

shanaya ( aankhe roll karke ) :- hi there accha lga help karke..

sandhya :- sach mein hum tumhare bohut abhari hai.

mein Sandhya ki taraf mudta hu.

MEin :- yahi paas mein ek town hai woh safe hai.

Sandhya:- mujhe ye pasand aaya finally uss van se chhutkara mil gya.

Hum sab chalne lgte hai aage Shanaya shotgun lekar chal rhi thi peeche Natasha apni badi gun liya..

Priya Khushi se meri taraf mud kar bolti hai :- Arjun kya waha garam paani hai? Thoda gunguna bhi chalega.

mein :- shayad Haan kyun natasha?

Natasha ( haste huye ) :- offcourse humare paas hot water hai hum cave mein nahi rehte.

sandhya :- mujhe lgta tha tum iss jagah par gye honge?

mein:- mei Jaa chuka hu par mere paas samay nahi tha inn sab ka time hi nahi tha waha aaram karne ka aur dekhne ka..

Natasha ( pas aa kar dheere se ):- tum khush dikh rhe ho?

mein ( muskrate) :- mein hoon..

Natasha:- ye search aur rescue Wale mission end mein acche nahi jate pta hai naa Zinda rehna aur healthy.

mein:- chalo phir wait karte hai town mein pahuchne ka phir celebrate karenge okay? Ab koi Nazar Naa lagao..

NAtasha :- mein ba-- mein khush hu tumhare liye sirf itna hi.

Hum log chalte chalte uss van ke paas pahuchte Jo bekar thi ab dhundha nikal rha tha Shanaya usse dekhti hai.

Shanaya:- jab hum wapis town pahuchenge toh yaad rakhna tum par Mera ek gaadi ka karz hai.

Shanaya:- mein humari deal nahi bhooli, shayad tumhe pta naa ho tumhari van ke saath kya hua phir bhi mujhe iss jagah se nikalna hai.

mein :- mene socha ki shayad tum ruko? Janti ho na consider yaa kuch...

Shanaya :- consider kya ?

mein:- tum itni durr se mere saath yaha aayi.

Shanaya:- van ke liye nahi kisi- choro.

shanaya aur humara dhyaan priya ki taraf jata hai jo dusri taraf thodi dur jakar jhuk kar uska padha Headphone uthati hai.

woh meri taraf mudti hai mein apni peeche jeb se music player nikalkar usse dikhata hu.

priya ( khush hote huye ) :- shukriya..

tabhi ek goli chalti hai aur Priya ke sar ko cheerte huye jati hai..

mein sunn ho jata hoon Mera dimag kaam karna band ho gya tha mere haath per kaam karna band kar diye the aisa lg rha tha jaise girne wala hu.

priya neeche jameen par girti hai..

MEin ( chillate huye ) :- Pri-ya....

hum side mein durr dekhte hai Raghu aur uske admi car se utar kar goli baari karte hai hum bagal mein gir jate bachne ke liye..

mein Sandhya ki taraf dekhta hu Jo dusri side chuppi thi woh ro rhi thi mu par haath rakhe..

raghu ( chilla kar goli chalate huye) :- m****c**d Choro tumhe lga tha tum yaha se nikal jaoge jaise khuch hua hi nahi ho.

Raghu ke saath aur bhi naye log the Jo badi bandook liye fire kar rhe the.

humare ghode goliyon ki awaaz se chilla rhe the.

Hum sab priya ki padhi body ki taraf dekhte hai jiske maathe se khoon nikal rha tha.

Sandhya:- Arjun hum usse yaha nahi chor skte.

sandhya uthkar priya ki body ki taraf bhagti hai lekin ek goli uske pet par lgti hai woh neeche ghutne ke bal gir jati hai.

Sandhya ( dard mein ) :- aahh shit..

mein (chilla kar ) :- Sandhyaaaa..

Sandhya humari taraf dekhti hai karan gusse mein uski taraf bhagta mein usse rokne ki koshish karta hu goliyan chal rhi thi..

Karan jaldi se bachte huye Sandhya ko dhakka dekar ek chhote drum ke peeche chupa leta hai.

mein khada hota hu.

karan :- Arjun help Karo.

mein diwar se lg jata hu aur revolver jhuk kar ek par fire karta Jo uske sar par lgti hai aur woh zameen par gir jata hai.

mein ( karan aur Sandhya se ) :- go jaldi..

sandhya aur karan Priya ko uthate aur bagal mein jaldi se diwar par lg jate hai Sandhya neeche gir jati hai uske pet se khoon nikal rha tha.

mein jaldi se unki taraf aata hu aur Priya ko check karta hu Jo ki ab Jaa chuki thi.

mein uski aankhein band kardeta hu..

Natasha paas aati hai aur Priya ko uthane lgti hai:- ohh God yakin nahi hota..

mein ( rote huye ) :- woh woh sirf..

Natasha :- mujhe pta hai Arjun par iske liye time milega par abhi nahi hume yaha se nikalna hoga.

natasha ( Sandhya ko dekhte huye ) :- Mujhe Sandhya ko jaldi se town le Jana hoga jisse uski help ho jiska Mtlb hume nikalna hoga jaldi..

mein Sandhya ki taraf dekhta hu Jo apne per ko pakad kar ek gaadi se lgi thi..

Natasha:- humein Jana hoga Arjun yaha abhi rasta hai isse pehle ki woh phirse firing shuru karein.

mein ( gusse mein ) :- mein unhe mar dunga sabko ek sath...

natasha :- isse woh wapis nahi aa jayengi Arjun...

Mein :- toh kya mein unhe chor du Zinda rehne du jinhone...

natasha :- agar apne pariwar ki help karna chahte ho toh mere saath aana hoga, hum aur intezar nahi kar skte.

Shanaya apni gun liye mere paas akar bolti hai..

Shanaya :- hum yahi rukenge aur isse khatam karenge.

natasha ( Shanaya se ):- kya tum pagal ho gyi ho Hume Jana hoga abhi.

Shanaya:- unhone pehle hi tum me se ek ko maar diya hai agar inhe nahi roka toh ye phir tumhare family ke peeche aayenge.

Shanaya :- natasha ko inki help karne do tum yahi ruko mere saath.

karan ( chonk kar ) :- kya ? Nahi Arjun tumhe humara se saath aana hoga.

mein karan ki taraf dekhta hu..

karan :- Arjun please....

Shanaya :- yakin karo Arjun hume isse end karna hoga abhi.

mein soch kar :- tum log town pahucho hum cover karenge...

karan ( chintit) :- karan?

mein :- inke saath jao mein sahi salamat rahunga.

karan :- mein bhi rukta hu.

natasha :- mujhe tumhari jaroorat hai karan.

Shanaya ( mujh se ) :- fire karte rehna jab tak woh aankho se ojhal naa ho jaye okay?.

mein ( gun pakadte huye ):- I'm ready.

Natasha aur karan Sandhya ko pakad kar le Jaa rhe the.

mein aur Shanaya cover lekar lg jate hai.

Shanaya aage ki taraf cover lekar fire kar rhi thi usne ek bande ko gira Diya tha.


Ek Raghu ka admi ek tear gas canister phakta hai humari taraf Jo ki humse thode aage girta hai.

mein dekh leta hu aur uski taraf bhagta hu..

Shanaya ( chilla kar ):- Arjun naahi.

MEin usse pakad kar unki taraf hi phek deta hu aur woh beech mein hi blast ho jata hai ...

-
--- ab aage kya hoga ye aage hi pta chalega kya Arjun badla le payega kya apne family ko nikal payega aur kya tear gas se bacha?
jinx lg gya aur yaha pehla member bhi nipat gya sad for priya usse kuch pta bhi nahi chala full action Dhamaka update dekhte ab Arjun bacha hai yaa nahi aur Sandhya bachegi yaa but mujhe lgta hai Arjun ko Sandhya aur Natasha ke saath Jana tha..🫠🫠
 
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Bilkul sahi kaha! Horror likhna ek alag hi challenge hai, aur usme maza tab aata hai jab apne unique concepts par kaam karo. Aur haan bilkul, movie aur story padhne mein farq hota hai, har medium ka apna ek andaaz hota hai. Main bhi horror mein kaafi interested hoon, so yeh journey interesting hogi. Thanks for the encouragement, and best of luck to you too!
Agar aap vakei horror lovers ho to ab tak meri story par kyo nahi ho??

Kyo ki yaha paheli bar koi horror reality likh raha hai. Aur vo ek matra me hu. To please ek najar jarur dale. 2 nd update se to level up hota hi chale jaega.

 
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Agar aap vakei horror lovers ho to ab tak meri story par kyo nahi ho??

Kyo ki yaha paheli bar koi horror reality likh raha hai. Aur vo ek matra me hu. To please ek najar jarur dale. 2 nd update se to level up hota hi chale jaega.

Abhi thoda busy hu isliye mushkil se update hi de paa rha hu
 
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shayad ye story yaha ke liye nahi mushkil se 1 ka hi review aata hai shayad ye website 18+ hai iske liye jisme Mera koi interest nahi kyunki mujhe sirf story likhne mein interested hu mene ye zombie aur iske saath 2 -3 aur fix ki hai par shayad yaha ke liye nahi ek app par likhta tha jo ki clean app tha but woh ab premium mangta hai so par yaha shayad sabko wahi sab pasand hai 18+ thing koi nahi ab yaha nahi aaunga so good bye Thankyou for support 🙏🏻
 
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shayad ye story yaha ke liye nahi mushkil se 1 ka hi review aata hai shayad ye website 18+ hai iske liye jisme Mera koi interest nahi kyunki mujhe sirf story likhne mein interested hu mene ye zombie aur iske saath 2 -3 aur fix ki hai par shayad yaha ke liye nahi ek app par likhta tha jo ki clean app tha but woh ab premium mangta hai so par yaha shayad sabko wahi sab pasand hai 18+ thing koi nahi ab yaha nahi aaunga so good bye Thankyou for support 🙏🏻
Same Bhai mein bhi waisi stories mein interested nahi ye sab bekaar sirf story ke liye padh rha tha but koi naa jaha likho waha ka link de dena
 
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